2023届高三一轮复习短文改错一诊专项训练-2023届高中英语一轮复习专项突破.docx

1、高三一轮复习 短文改错一诊专项训练1. 真题多维细目表2. 命题规律与备考策略：.命题规律：1. 文章体裁以记叙文为主；2. 试题设错比例通常为：加词1个，删词1个，改正8个；3. 考频由高到低为：v., n./conj., adj., adv., prep., art.;.备考策略：1. 掌握命题规律，熟悉短文改错解题步骤、解题原则及解题思路；1) 解题步骤: 通读全文,掌握大意; 上贯下联,逐句改错; 对照考点,推敲难点; 代人答案,复读全文。 2)解题原则:规范性原则:按照规定的符号改错。 四不改原则:词序不改;大小写不改;标点符号不改;单词拼写不改。五改动原则:忠实原文;一对一原则;改

2、动最少原则;实词以改变形式为主;虚词以添加或删除为主。2) 解题思路: 词法测试；句法测试；篇章测试。2. 日常学习中要：多归纳、多总结，且规范答题格式； 熟记“十字口诀”；动名形副冠代介连+逻辑和数。3.一诊短文改错再现：（成都七中高2023届高三一模）During a show at my Junior high school, many other student chose to play a musical instrument or tell a joke, but I decided sing my favorite song. I had practiced the song

3、many times and could sing it perfectly. However, this day doesnt go as I had planned. When my name was called, I walked on the stage. Suddenly, 300 people were watching us. I was very nervous that my hands were shaking. Then the music came on. I couldnt remember of the first part of the song and did

4、nt sing it at all. To my surprising, instead of laugh at me, people tried to cheer me on. I became relaxing and sang the rest perfectly. It was really a unforgettable experience.Keys；1. studentstudents 2. sing前加to 3. doesntdidnt 4. us me 5. very so6. 去掉of 7. surprisingsurprise 8. laughlaughing 9. re

5、laxingrelaxed 10. aan【解析】【分析】本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述作者初中时一次难忘的演出。【详解】第一处：考查名词的数。句意：在我初中的一次演出中，许多同学选择演奏乐器或讲笑话，但我决定唱我最喜欢的歌曲。student为可数名词，根据前面的many other修饰可知用复数形式。故将student改为students。第二处：考查短语。句意：在我初中的一次演出中，许多同学选择演奏乐器或讲笑话，但我决定唱我最喜欢的歌曲。decide to do sth.决定做某事。故在sing前加to。第三处：考查时态。句意：然而，这一天并没有像我计划的那样进行。根据全文时态可知，陈述过

6、去事情，用一般过去时态。故将doesnt改为didnt。第四处：考查代词。句意：当叫到我的名字时，我走上了舞台。突然，300个人都在看着我。根据前后逻辑和句意可知，这里指下面的观众看着“我”。故将us 改为 me。第五处：考查固定句式。句意：我紧张得双手发抖。so that 如此以至于。故将very改为so。第六处：考查动词。句意：我不记得这首歌的第一部分，所以根本就没唱。动词remember为及物动词，后面直接接宾语。故去掉of。第七处：考查固定短语。句意：使我吃惊的是，人们不但没有嘲笑我，反而设法鼓励我。to ones + 抽象名词形式。to ones surprise令某人吃惊的是。故将

7、surprising改为surprise。第八处：考查非谓语动词。句意：使我吃惊的是，人们不但没有嘲笑我，反而设法鼓励我。instead of而不是，介词of接动名词形式。故将laugh改为laughing。第九处：考查形容词。句意：我放松下来，把剩下的部分唱得很完美。主语是人，此处表示人的感受，需用-ed结尾的形容词。故将relaxing改为relaxed。第十处：考查冠词。句意：那真是一次难忘的经历。形容词unforgettable发音为元音音素开头，所以用不定冠词an。故将a改为an。（成都七中高2022届高三一诊）How are you doing, my friends? The t

8、wo weeks exchange activity has come to an end. However, look back on the past days, we have gained a lot indeed. In the past two weeks we had communicated with each other face to face in English. In this way, we have not only improved our oral English, and you have also known more about our culture

9、and tradition. Whats more, a bridge of friendship has established between us. Besides, no one will forget the farewell party that we enjoyed the delicious traditional food of our country and your amazing songs and dances. For many of us. the time we spent together is very unforgettable that I think

10、I will value them forever. I hope we can all keep making a progress in studies. In the meanwhile, I do hope to see you again at the near future.短文改错：1. weeksweeks2.look -looking3, had-have4. and-but 5.在 established前加 been6. that-where7. very so8. themit9.删去 progress前的 a 10.at-in（成都七中高2021届高三一诊）Welco

11、me to my school! When you arrive, there will be a party for you holding by my classmates. You may attend to English classes to feel a differently learning style. After that, you can go to your host family that you can experience the Chinese way of life. You can have meals together chatting anything

12、that interests us.The host family will also show you around some famous scenic spot. You can see pictures and statues of pandas everywhere because our city was home to pandas. There are many kinds of souvenirs to choose from.So isnt it the good idea to buy some for your friends? Write to me unless y

13、ou have any questions about the schedule.短文改错：1.holding held2.去掉 to3. differently different4. that where5. 在 chatting 后加about6. us you7. spot spots 8. was is9. the a 10. unless if（成都石室中学高2022届高三一诊）It is the common phenomenon nowadays there are some persons disobeying traffic rules on the road. Whats

14、 worse, many a person always litter here and there in the streets, that is of our great concern. I have some specific ideas to share when it comes to handle these problems. I will observe traffic rules whenever Im on my way to school. First and foremost, never will I cross a road until the traffic l

15、ight turned green. Secondly, I will always use the zebra crossing. Thirdly, I will never throw rubbish and spit on the road. Equally important, its necessary to everyone to increase awareness of safe travel. As the saying goes, “Many hands make light work.” Therefore, lets join hand to obey traffic

16、rules, which will matter a lot. 短文改错:It is the common phenomenon nowadays there are some persons disobeying traffic rules on a thatthe road. Whats worse, many a person always litter here and there in the streets, that is of litters whichour great concern. I have some specific ideas to share when it

17、comes to handle these handling problems. I will observe traffic rules whenever Im on my way to school. First and foremost, never will I cross a road until the traffic light turned green. Secondly, I will always turnsuse the zebra crossing. Thirdly, I will never throw rubbish and spit on the road. Eq

18、ually orimportant, its necessary of everyone to increase awareness of safe travel. As the saying goes, “Many Importantly forhands make light work.” Therefore, lets join hand to obey traffic rules, which will matter a lot. hands71. the 改成 a。 “a common phenomenon” 表示一种普遍的现象。72. nowadays后加that。此处考查主语从句

19、的引导词that。73. litter改成litters。many a 接名词单数谓语动词用三人称单数。74. that 改成which, 此处是非限定性定语从句。75. handle改成handling，前面to是介词。76. turned改成turns, 此处应该用一般现在时态。77. and 改成 or, 否定句中用or。78. important改成importantly, 副词做状语。79. of改成for, 固定搭配： its necessary for sb. to do sth.。80. hand 改成hands，此处指我们携手。（绵阳中学高2020届高三一诊）It was f

20、ine and the sky was clear blue. I wanted to go somewhere excited with my roommates. Finally we decided to climb to the Great Wall. It took us one and a half hour to get there by bus. Upon arriving, we begin to climb happily, sharing stories about the Wall. After two hours of climbing, we reached the

21、 top, where we enjoyed the breathtaking scenery or took quite a few photos. See the Great wall wind its way over the mountains, both of us felt really amazed. How a wonder! As the famous saying goes, “He who has never been to the Great Wall not a true man.” I felt like I was the true man.【答案】【解析】本文为

22、记叙文。文章讲述了我和我的室友们一起去爬上长城的事情。【详解】1考查形容词。excited（兴奋的）主要表达人对事物的感受，此处作后置定语修饰somewhere，表示事物本身所具有的性质或特征，应该用形容词exciting。故将excited改为exciting。2考查介词。climb是及物动词，后面直接带宾语，介词to是多余的。故去掉to。3考查名词的数。one and a half 修饰复数名词，故将hour改为hours。4考查动词的时态。本文整体时态为过去式，讲述过去发生的事，此处英语整体时态一致。故将begin改为began。5我们欣赏了令人叹为观止的景色与拍了不少照片之间为并列关系

23、而不是选择关系故将or改为and。6考查非谓语动词。See the Great wall wind its way over the mountains这一部分在句子中作状语，且动词see与主语之间为主动关系，应该用现在分词故将See改为Seeing。7考查代词。both是两者都，从前面看I和my roommates应该指三人以上，用代词all。故将both改为all8考查感叹句。how通常修饰形容词或副词，a wonder是名词，修饰名词应该用what故将How改为What。9考查句子结构。本句中he作主语，who has never been to the Great Wall 作定语修饰代词he，缺少谓语动词，故在not前加is。10考查冠词。定冠词the表特指，此处true man是泛指概念，应用不定冠词a。故将the改为a。