Unit 1 Teenage life-【同步写作课】2023-2024学年高一英语单元写作深度指导（人教版2019必修第一册）.docx

1、必修第一册 Unit 1单元写作指导与演练Write a Letter for Advice单元写作早知道写作任务本单元的写作任务是写一封建议信。建议信是应用文的常用体裁。建议信是写信者向收信人就某事提出自己的建议或忠告。建议信可以写给个人，也可以写给某个组织或者机构，就某个问题提出自己的看法或建议。建议信的正文一般可以分为三部分：第一部分：说明目的；第二部分：提出建议；第三部分：表达祝愿。常用表达1. You said in your last letter that .2. Knowing from your letter that.3. You have asked for my adv

2、ice with regard to.4. I am writing to try to make some suggestions on.5. I am writing to express my views concerning.7. I would like to suggest that.8. There are several things we could do.9. Maybe it would be better to.10. Why dont you .?11. Have you considered doing.?12. I hope you will find these

3、 suggestions practical/useful/helpful.单元话题真题展示高考链接建议信2023年全国新高考I卷建议信是高考应用文的热点话题。可以是对某个人的问题的建议，也可以对学校，政府及特定团体和组织的建议。Use what you have learnt to write a letter of advice to one of the teenagers below.假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括；1. 说明问题；2. 提出建议。本单元写作要求是对几个青少年的求助信做出回

4、复，给出相应的建议。首先要对他们的问题进行归纳，并提出相应的建议，然后说明相应的建议的内容。nameProblemsSuggestionsReasonsEric, 15, ChicagoMy parents wont listen when I tell them things. I guess its because theyre adults and cant understand me.Try listening to your parents. Invite them out to eat something. Maybe they arent listening to you bec

5、ause you dont listen to them. This will give you a chance to speak to them without distractions.Xu Jing, 14, HangzhouI always feel lonely after school because my parents work in another city.Join a volunteer group. Connect with your parents online. This will give you a change to be around other peop

6、le, and help you realise that other people have problems, too. Just because they are far away, it doesnt mean that you cant talk to them. Min Ho, 15, SeoulThere is a girl I like in my class, but Im too shy to talk to her.Ask a mutual friend to introduce you to her. Find chances to get together in gr

7、oups where she is a group member.Your friend will be able to help you break the ice with her and provide encouragement to you. If you are in a group, it takes all the pressure off, and you can interact with her in a relaxing setting.段落内容句子设计第一段明确问题和写信的目的You wrote in your letter that . I understand h

8、ow you feel. I am writing to offer my suggestions. 第二段提出建议I think you can try .This will give you a chance . It will also help you . You can also . because . Im sure that .第三段祝愿和问候I hope my suggestions of help to you.【小试牛刀】参考范文1: 10 September, 2023Dear Eric,From your letter, I know that your parents

9、 wont listen to you when you tell them things. You guess its because theyre adults and cant understand you. It is pity to hear that. But I think we have a lot to do to change that. Maybe they arent listening to you because you dont listen to them.Why not try listening to your parents first. I believ

10、e by listening to their words, you can know the reason. Another suggestion is inviting them out to eat something, which I am sure will give you a chance to speak to them without distractions.Try to do something first. Only in this way, can you change your parents. I hope my advice of some help. Best

11、 wishes. Yours, Li Hua 参考范文2: 10 September, 2023Dear Xu Ting,You wrote in your letter that you always feel lonely after school because your parents work in another city. I understand how you feel. I am writing to offer my suggestions. It is common for teenagers to feel lonely when they live away fro

12、m their parents. I think you can try joining a volunteer group that helps other people. This will give you a chance to meet and be around others. It will also help you realise that you are not alone in having problems and that many other people have problems, too. Helping other people also makes us

13、feel better. You can also connect with your parents online. Just because your parents are far away, it doesnt mean you cant talk to them. Im sure that youll get a chance to speak to your parents more often. This will help drive away your loneliness.I hope my suggestions of help to you. Best wishes,Y

14、ours Susan Luo.参考范文3: 10 September, 2023Dear Min Ho, Im very glad to hear that you like a girl in your class, but it is a pity that you are too shy to talk to her. Here my advice. Why dont you ask a mutual friend to introduce you to her. With the help of others, your communication will become more n

15、atural. Your friend will be able to help you break the ice with her and provide encouragement to you. I also suggest that you find chances to get together in groups where she is a group member, in which all the pressure will be taken off, and you can interact with her in a relaxing setting.Hope my a

16、dvice will be helpful. Best wishes. Yours, Li Hua开始部分You write in your last letter that.Knowing from your last letter that.It is a pity to know that.It is quite understandable that.I quite understand that.I have heard that you are asking for advice on.Knowing that you are collecting suggestions on.I

17、 am writing to offer my suggestions/advice/ on. I am writing to express my views concerning.建议部分There are many things we could do.Maybe it would be useful to.I would like to suggest that.Have you considered doing.?You could consider .Have you thought about .I recommend .I would like to seggest that.

18、Considering ., I would suggest that .If possible, could you please?I feel that it is beneficial if/is of great benefit to .In order to., it couldnt be better if you can (Maybe it would be better to .)Its highly recommended to.The most important thing you should bear in mind is thatI recommend that y

19、ou .There are several things we could do. What needs to be improved is that Why not .How about .Why dont you .?结尾部分I hope you will find these suggestions practical/useful/helpful.Wish my suggestions can help you. I hope that you take my suggestions into serious consideration.I hope my advice can hel

20、p you make a wise decision.If you have any question, please dont hesitate to let me know.假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Peter来信说，他即将参加汉语水平考试( Chinese Proficiency Test)，对此他感到非常紧张。请你给他回一封电子件，内容包括:1.表达关切；2.备考建议；3.你的祝愿。注意:1. 词数80字左右；2. 可适当加细节以使行文连贯。注意：1词数80左右；2开头已给出，不计入总词数；3可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Peter,_Yours， Li Hua.审题1文体

21、：应用文。2时态：一般现在时和一般将来时为主。3人称：第一人称（表达你的建议），第二人称（陈述确认对方的问题）。谋篇第一段：明确问题和写信的目的。第二段：提出建议。第三段：祝愿和问候。遣词造句【核心词汇】1. nervous2. taking the Chinese Proficiency Test3. express4. concern5. share my advice6. reciting7. fantastic compositions8. be of great benefit 9.improve10. beneficial【连词成句】1. I am writing to expre

22、ss my concern and share my advice on preparing the test efficiently.2. In my opinion, reading loudly even reciting some fantastic compositions is of great benefit to you.3. You can have better understanding of Chinese language by it. 4. In order to improve your listening skills, you must be brave to

23、 speak to Chinese natives around you as much as possible. 5. On the eve of the test, youd better to have a good sleep.6. You will have enough energy for the test.【句式升级】1. 将2、3句合成一个句子：In my opinion, reading loudly even reciting some fantastic compositions is of great benefit to you, by which you can

24、have better understanding of Chinese language. 2. 将5、6句合成一个句子： On the eve of the test, youd better to have a good sleep, so that you will have enough energy for the test.组句成篇用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。Dear Peter, Im so sorry to know that you are nervous about taking the Chinese Profici

25、ency Test soon. I am writing to express my concern and share my advice on preparing the test efficiently. In my opinion, reading loudly even reciting some fantastic compositions is of great benefit to you, by which you can have better understanding of Chinese language. Besides, in order to improve y

26、our listening skills, you must be brave to speak to Chinese natives around you as much as possible. On the eve of the test, youd better to have a good sleep, so that you will have enough energy for the test.I do expect the above tips are beneficial to your test. Wish you good luck! Kindest regards,Y

27、ours， Li Hua.1. 假如你是李华，最近收到了你的美国朋友Jenny的来信。她在信中说，由于刚进入高中，不知道如何去结交新朋友，因而情绪低落。请根据以下内容给她回信。1表示问候和慰问。2提出以下建议：(1)放学后邀请同学一起参加活动；(2)你的同学遇到麻烦时，去帮助他们；(3)你遇到困难时向同学求助。_【佳作欣赏】Dear Jenny， Im really sorry to hear that you have trouble making friends with others after entering senior high school. Id like to offer

28、some personal advice to you. In fact，there is something you can do to improve this situation.In my opinion，it is a good solution for you to invite your classmates to take part in some activities after school.Then, try to help your classmates when they are faced with trouble in their lessons, which w

29、ill help you make more friends. And you are also suggested to turn to your classmates bravely when you are struggling in your lessons.I believe you will make many new friends and have a happy school life there.Best wishes!Yours，Li Hua2. 你的美国好友Tom即将升入大学，他想选择学习历史，但是又对计算机很感兴趣。请你给他写一份邮件，对他提出建议。注意：1. 字数8

30、0字左右。2. 可以增加细节，使行文流畅。_【佳作欣赏】Dear Tom, Having known that you have some trouble with the course election, I am more than glad to offer you some personal suggestions according to my own experience. Personally, I feel that it would be wise if you consider your hobbies and strengths , which may play a vi

31、tal role in your future study. Besides, the most important thing you should bear in mind is that your university training is a preparation for your future career. There is no doubt that the field of computer science offers far wider job opportunities than history. Im firmly convinced that in the for

32、eseeable future, it will be essential for everyone to be equipped with computer skills to earn a living. I would recommend that you keep up your reading of history in your spare time.Thanks for trusting me. I hope my advice can help you make a wise decision. Yours Li Hua3. 假如你是李华，你对朋友王琳即将面临高考选科，请你帮忙

33、给她建议。请你根据你对理解对她提出建议。注意：1. 字数80字左右。2. 可以增加细节，使行文流畅。_【佳作欣赏】Dear Wang Lin, Knowing that you are confused about selecting courses for College Entrance Exam, I am writing to give you some personal suggestions. First and foremost, you are supposed to pay enough attention to the universities requirements a

34、nd your future development. Moreover, its of equal importance to choose what you are interested in and excel at. If I were you, I would choose science, because I think it is more useful and helpful in finding jobs in the future. Hope my suggestions are helpful to you. Should you have any problems, d

35、o remember that you are welcomed to share them with me. Best wishes!YoursLi Hua【链接高考经典诵读】（2023高考全国新高考I卷）假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括；1. 说明问题；2. 提出建议。_【佳作欣赏1】Dear Ryan, Im Li Hua from Class 3. I have been told that you will randomly pair up students for the spoken

36、English training after class, but I have different opinions about it. The reasons are as follows.To begin with, randomly pairing up students may lead to unbalanced language abilities within the groups. This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, l

37、eaving little room for the other student to improve. Besides, students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they dont get along with or have difficulty communicating with.My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose the

38、ir own partners. This way, everyone can feel more comfortable practicing and improving their spoken English together. Thank you for considering my suggestion.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【佳作欣赏2】Dear Ryan,I hope this email finds you well. I am writing to share a concern I have regarding the recent decision

39、to randomly pair students for the post-class oral practice sessions.While I appreciate the intention to encourage speaking practice, I believe random grouping might have certain issues. Firstly, some students might feel uncomfortable or anxious speaking with someone they arent familiar with, affecti

40、ng their confidence. Additionally, varying proficiency levels could lead to imbalanced interactions, hindering effective language practice.To address this, I suggest considering grouping based on students proficiency levels. This would ensure more balanced conversations and a supportive environment

41、for everyone to engage actively. Moreover, alternating partner assignments periodically could expose students to diverse speaking styles and enhance their adaptability.Thank you for considering my perspective. I believe such adjustments could lead to more productive language practice sessions.Best r

42、egards,Li Hua【佳作欣赏2】Hello Ryan,I trust youre doing well. As for your recent decision to randomly pair students for the post-class oral practice sessions, I want to share my own thoughts. While I understand the goal of promoting speaking skills, I see a potential issue with the random grouping.Random

43、 pairings might inadvertently lead to uneven skill distribution within each group. Some students might struggle to engage in meaningful conversations, while others might not be sufficiently challenged. This could hinder the overall effectiveness of the practice sessions.Considering this, I suggest a

44、 mixed proficiency grouping approach. Pairing students of different language levels can foster a mutually beneficial learning environment, where stronger speakers can mentor others, and learners can support each others growth.I appreciate your efforts to enhance our language learning experience and hope youll find this suggestion beneficial.Best regards,Li Hua