Unit 2 This is my sister.-【同步写作课】2023-2024学年七年级上册英语单元写作深度指导（人教版）.docx

1、Unit 2 This is my sister.单元写作指导与演练近三年考情分析话题考查热度介绍信人物介绍（自己的家庭成员）本单元写作要求同学们能用所学的词语和句型简单地对自己的家人做一个介绍。在介绍的过程中我们需要介绍照片中人物跟自己的关系，同时也可以介绍他们的姓名、年龄、职业、外貌、爱好等。在具体的写作中，学生应做到以下几点：1. 能用be动词的三种形式（am/is/are）介绍自己或家人；2. 能正确使用标点符号；3. 能正确书写英语句子；4. 能正确书写中英文姓名。（以思维导图的形式呈现）【词汇积累】1. photo照片2. family 家庭3. my/his/her我的/他的/她

2、的 4. teacher老师5. parents父母，双亲 6. daughter女儿/ son儿子 7. student学生8. those那些/ these这些9.beautiful漂亮的10.【句式积累】 开头句1. This is a photo of my family. 这是我的全家福。2. Hello. My dear friend. 你好，我亲爱的朋友。3. Here is the photo of my family. 这是我的全家福。4.Look, a beautiful picture. 看，一张漂亮的照片。 中间句1. My names Lily. 我的名字是莉莉。2.

3、 Im 12 years old. 我12岁了。3. There are four people in my family. 我家有四口人。4. These are my parents. My parents are nice. 这是我的父母，我的父母非常友好。5. My father is a Chinese teacher.我的爸爸是一名中文老师。6. My mother is an English teacher. 我的妈妈是一名英语老师。7. They work in No. 1 Middle School. 他们在第一中学工作。8. My sister is a student.

4、我的妹妹是一名学生。9. Shes a student of No. 1 Middle School 她是第一中学的学生。10. I study at No. 1 Middle School，too. 我也在第一中学学习。11. Im in Class 3 Grade 7. 我在七年级三班。12. I like to cook. 我喜欢做饭。13. She likes to cycle. 她喜欢骑行. 结尾句1. I love my family. 我爱我的家人。2. We are a happy family. 我们是快乐的一家人。3. We love each other. 我们互相爱着大

5、家。【谚语积累】1. Home is where the heart is. 家是心灵所在。2. Home is the chief school of human virtues. 家是人类美德的起点。3. Home is the only place in the world also contains sweet love. 家是世界上唯一包含甜蜜的爱的地方。4. Family harmony is the happiest thing in life. 家庭和睦是人生最快乐的事。【万能写作模板】模板介绍有几位家庭成员Here is the photo of my family. The

6、re are （引出人物信息）people in my family. and me.（介绍家庭成员）. 感情升华，表达对家的喜爱介绍家庭成员信息；工作、爱好等There are my （父母）. They are （性格特征）. My mother is （职业）and my father is （职业）.They work in _.(工作地点) This is my_.(介绍其他家庭成员). He /She is_(职业). He /She likes_(爱好).I like_(爱好). We are a family（什么类型的家庭）. I love my family.模板人物介绍T

7、here are. people in my family.and me.年龄、职业、性格、喜好等喜爱、夸赞等情感.is a .years old boy. He/She is . He/She works in. And he/ she likes.I love my family.假如你是梅花中学的一名学生Cindy,你准备给你的英国笔友Frank寄一封信和一幅全家福照片，发挥自己的想象力，在信中介绍一下你的家人。要求：1. 词数60左右。2. 介绍中包括家庭成员的职业、工作地点等。3. 可适当发挥。4. 思路清晰，书写规范。_【审题思路】1.根据提示，确定人称用第一人称。2.文章需要介绍

8、家庭成员的信息，职业、工作地点、喜好等，用一般现在时，句子之间要恰当的使用连词，使上下文连贯通畅，第三人称时使用第三人称单数。3.文章的词数60左右。【写作步骤】1.明确题目要求2.先简单介绍照片内容3.根据照片详细介绍（人物姓名、职业、工作地点、爱好等）4.总结，升华感情【佳作欣赏1】Dear Frank,Nice to see you my friend. My name is Cindy. There is a photo of my family. There are five people in my family. My parents, my sister, my puppy a

9、nd me. There are my parents. My father is a Chinese teacher. He likes to read books. My mother is an English teacher. She likes dancing. They work in Meihua Middle school. The beautiful girl is my sister. She is a student. She likes to cycle. She is in primary school. I am in Meihua Middle school. I

10、 like to sing songs. In my hand you can see a cute puppy. This is my good family. It can play with me. It likes bones.We are a happy family. I love my family. What about your family, Frank?Yours,Frank【佳作欣赏2】Dear Frank,Nice to see you my friend. My name is Cindy. Look. Here are five people in the pic

11、ture. They are my family members.In the middle you will look two old people. They look kind. There are my grandparents. They often run in the morning. You can see a tall man. He is my father. He is very strong. He is a doctor. The woman wearing a yellow dress and a sunglasses is my mother. She is ve

12、ry beautiful. She likes play sports. Next to my grandmother, you can see me. I am a student. I like dancing. We are a happy family. I love my family. What about your family, Frank?Yours,Frank1. 画出自己的家庭树。Write about the picture about your family. （注意句子首字母大写和句号的使用以及人称的变化。）Family Tree Namegrandfather:

13、_ grandmother: _father:_mother:_me:_【答案】略二、分别写出图中人物的工作和喜好JobHobby(爱好)My grandfatherDoctorCookMy grandmotherMaths teacherReadMy fatherFiremanCycleMy motherPolicemanSingMeStudentDance【答案】略三、 用英语写出下列职业。 四、连一连1. Hello, Im Cindy. A. My names Frank. 2. Whats your name?B. Yes, she is my mother.3. Nice to m

14、eet you, Grace.C. She is my sister.4. Who is she?D. Nice to meet you,too. Bill.5. Is she your mother? E. Hi, Grace. Im Alice.【答案】1. E 2. A 3. D 4. C 5. B五、连词成句，注意标点和大写字母。1. is, who, he (?)_2. are, parents, are, my, nice, very (.)_3. my, is, sister, this, Lily, (.)_4. is, your, he, brother (?)_5. lov

15、e, i, family, my(.)_6. likes, and, dancing, singing, and (.)_【答案】1. Who is he?2. My parents are very nice.3. This is my sister Lily.4. Is he your brother?5.I love my family.6. She likes singing and dancing.六、按要求完成下列句子。1. My brothers name is Alan. (对画线部分提问)_2. My name is Tony. (改为同义句)_ _ Tony. 3. He

16、is my grandfather. (对画线部分提问)_4. I like to read books. (改为同义句)I like_ _ .【答案】1. Whats your brothers name?2. I am3. Who is he?4. reading books七、根据短文内容，从方框中选择恰当的单词填空，每词限用一次。me photo love she student cook in are myImCindy. Im 14. Im 1 No. 2 Middle School. There is a 2 of my family. This is 3 father Alan

17、 and 4 is my mother Green. They 5 teachers. They work in school. The little boy is 6 . I am a 7 . I like to _8_. I _9_milymy fa.【答案】1. in 2. photo 3. my 4. she 5. are 6. me 7.student 8.cook 9.love假如你是李娜，你的英语老师让你在下周的英语课上介绍你的全家福照片，请根据你的家庭信息写一篇短文，为发言做准备，要求不少于80字。你家一共有四口人，你的爸爸李正是一名警察，你的妈妈张珂是一名护士，你的哥哥李东是

18、一名中学生。_【思路解读】题材：本文是对照片进行描述；时态：时态为“一般现在时”；提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意在按照一定的顺序描述照片中的人物及信息。【写作步骤】第一步，明确题目要求第二步，先简单介绍照片上的内容；第三步，根据照片详细介绍，如姓名、职业、工作地点、爱好等；第四步，总结，升华感情。【满分作文】Look at the picture. There are for people in my family. My father, my mother, my brother and me . I will introduce my family to you.My fathers n

19、ame is Li Zheng. He is a policeman. In my heart he is a hero. My mothers name is Zhang Ke. She is a nurse. She works in hospital. She is very hard working . My brother is Li Dong. He is a student in middle school. He likes reading books very much. Im a student too. I like to dancing.This picture is

20、very nice. We also like it. I love my family.（2020上海期中测试）作文题目：Introduction of family photo。家里有五口人，最中间的是作者本人，手里拿了一束漂亮的花，旁边的是作者的父亲，母亲在孩子在孩子身后，同样还有祖父祖母在作者身后。以下是关于全家福介绍的初一英语范文，作文均为真题范文。注意事项：1. 利用所给信息，适当发挥；2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。_【思路解读】内容：介绍照片中人物信息；时态：时态为“一般现在时”；提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意在按照一

21、定的顺序描述照片中的人物及信息。【写作步骤】第一步，明确题目要求第二步，先简单介绍照片上的内容；第三步，根据照片详细介绍，如姓名、职业、工作地点、爱好等；第四步，总结，升华感情。Look at this picture. This is a very good family photo. There are five people in the middle.Im laughing. It looks like Im happy that I have some beautiful flowers next to me. A man is my father. Hes also happy that my mother is behind me. Shes a good mother. I think shes my friend. I love her. My grandparents are behind me. They love me.I love this picture My family.【亮点词汇】next to 在旁边behind在后面beautiful漂亮的【高分句型】There be句型