Unit 4 Why don’t you talk to your parents-2021-2022学年八年级英语下学期单元话题满分写作(人教版）.docx

1、2021-2022 八年级英语下学期单元话题满分写作 Unit 4：Why dont you talk to your parents？单元话题：talk about problems “烦恼与建议”范文11（2021全国八年级单元测试）某中学生英文报社开展了主题为“如何与父母和谐相处”的征文大赛。作为一名初中生，你一定有自己的思想与辨别是非的能力，但你是否曾想过应该怎样和自己的父母相处呢？请以“How to Get on Well with Our Parents?”为题写一篇短文参加此次征文大赛。要点提示：1. 与父母和谐相处很重要；2. 与父母和谐相处的做法或建议；(1)理解与尊重父母；

2、(2)多与父母交流。 (3)与父母和谐相处的感受。要求：1. 短文应紧扣要点，但不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥，以使短文衔接、连贯；2. 词数80-100。How to Get on Well with Our Parents?_【答案】参考范文How to Get on Well with Our Parents?Its very important for us to get on well with our parents. But how can we get along well with our parents? Here is some of my advice.We should u

3、nderstand and respect our parents. Parents talk much because they care about us. We are supposed to listen to them. When we want to tell them our opinions, wed better be in a polite way. We should also talk with them about our happiness and tell them about our problems. When we are free, wed better

4、help them do some things.I get on well with my parents. I enjoy sharing everything with my parents. My parents are like my best friends. They are proud when I do something well and they try their best to help me when I have trouble. We love each other.Lets get on well with our parents because they a

5、re our parents.【详解】1. 题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。谈谈如何和自己的父母相处，根据所给提示信息，写一篇短文，要求紧扣要点，可适当发挥。2. 写作指导：本文要求围绕如何与父母和睦相处为题写一篇文章参加征文大赛，所以人称以第一人称为主。时态以一般现在时为主。写作时可以分三个方面来写：文章开头先点明主题；然后介绍与父母和谐相处的具体建议；接着介绍自己与父母和谐相处的感受；最后总结全文，前后呼应。范文22（2021广东阳西县教育局教学研究室八年级单元测试）假如你是Han Mei，下面是一封你的笔友Alice给你发来的e-mail的内容，给她写一封回信，与她交流看法，并帮她排忧解难

6、。词数在80左右。提示词：listen to, mothers love, care about, communicate with, get along with, smileDear Han Mei,Im afraid Ive got a big problem recently. My mother talks too much to me. She always tells me, “Be careful while crossing the street.” “Put on more clothes.” “Did you do a good job at school?” and s

7、o on. Im annoyed(烦恼). What shall I do?Yours,AliceDear Alice,As a teenager, I had the same problem as you. But now _I hope what I say here can help you a lot.Yours,Han Mei【答案】例文Dear Alice,As a teenager, I had the same problem as you. But now I can get along better with my mother. Here are some ideas

8、for you.Your mother talks too much, because she cares about you. Maybe its not a good way. But it shows your mothers love.So I think you should listen to her. If your opinions are different from your mothers, you can communicate with her. And tell her what you are thinking about. If your mother does

9、nt take your advice, just keep silent and give her a smile.I hope what I say here can help you a lot.Yours,Han Mei【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇该材料作文，所给材料是一封来信。故动笔前首先要认真阅读来信，争取在回信中对来信内容都要有所回应。在写作时应承接短文开头，在回信中与她交流看法，并帮她排忧解难。2.写作指导：本文应该用第二人称来叙述书信内容；时态采用一般过去时为主；首先要仔细阅读提示词和来信的内容，做到有针对性；其次给出具体的解决办法；最后是希望。范文33（2020吉林长春市

10、宽城区教师进修学校八年级单元测试）每个人都不可能没有烦恼，当你有烦恼时，试着控制你的情绪，因为情绪可以影响你的生活中的很多方面。所以生活中应当多相信自己，笑对人生，多与父母、朋友沟通。请你展开想象，写一篇文章。要求：1、条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范。2、提示词：feel happy, mirror, the best, talk with, help others in need, believe, have a nice day, express feelings3、不少于80个单词。_【答案】Possible version:Nobody can be happy all the

11、 time. When you become unhappy, you should try to control your feelings. Because bad feelings can make you lose your friends and give you other bad effects.Here are some ways to make you feel better.1. Look in the mirror and speak to yourself, “Im the best in the world. I can do anything.”2. Do some

12、thing for others. You will feel happy if you always help others in need.【详解】1、题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作，写作时首先介绍每个人都有不好的情绪，然后介绍不好的情绪带来的影响，最后提出能让你感觉好点的方法，可适当发挥。2、写作指导：本文应该以第一人称和第二人称来叙述内容，时态采用一般现在时为主；介绍情绪以及让你感觉好点的方法时，应详细具体，语句通顺，逻辑性强，保证条理清晰。范文44（2021全国八年级课时练习）假如你是Gina，你的好友Susan上个月刚转入一所新学校，昨天她给你发了一封邮件，提到她在新学校里遇到的问

13、题。请你根据下面的提示内容，给Susan写一封80词左右的电子邮件，给她提出一些合理的建议。提示：Susan遇到的问题：学英语有困难；结交不到新朋友。_【答案】例文：Dear Susan,Im sorry to hear that you meet some problems. Im writing this e-mail to give you some advice.In order to improve your English, you should listen carefully first in class. When you have problems, dont be afr

14、aid to ask your teacher or your classmates for help. Whats more, youd better listen to English news, read English newspapers and watch movies in English. About your second problem, you should be friendlier. You could join in some after-school activities. I know youre good at football. Why not join i

15、n the football club?If you do these things, I think youll improve your English and make many friends. I hope you can enjoy your school life there.Yours,Gina【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于电子邮件写作。在写作时应根据题目要求回邮件，对好友在新学校遇到的学习英语的问题和结交朋友的问题给出自己的建议。2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时为主，对好友在新学校遇到的学习英语的问题和结交朋友的问题分别给出自己的建议，要叙述完整，条理清晰。范文55（20

16、20广东阳西八年级单元测试）假设你是张伟，你的英国笔友弗兰克(Frank)来信告诉你，他因长时间打游戏与父母发生了争吵，他现在很难过。请你根据以下要点及要求，给他写一封英文回信。要点：1.长时间打游戏是错的，父母是对的；2打游戏浪费时间，伤害眼睛，不利于学习；3理解尊重父母，与他们好好相处；4向父母道歉，与他们沟通；5不打游戏，努力学习，帮父母做家务。要求：1.必须包括以上所有要点，并可适当发挥；2词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。Dear Frank,Ive received your letter and I know you argued with your parents

17、. _Please be happy and everything will be better.Yours,Zhang Wei【答案】例文Dear Frank,Ive received your letter and I know you argued with your parents. I really worry about you.I think its wrong for you to play games for a long time.Your parents are right because playing games wastes a lot of time and it

18、s bad for your eyes and study.You should understand and respect your parents and get on well with them. In this way, you can be happy and improve yourself quickly. I also think that you should make an apology to your parents, for you have made them very sad and angry. When you meet some trouble, you

19、d better communicate with them. Dont play games any more, study hard and never give up. If youre free, you can help them with housework.Please be happy and everything will be better.Yours,Zhang Wei【详解】1、题干解读：题目要求给你的笔友写一封英文回信，要求根据所给要点解决你的英国笔友弗兰克(Frank)遇到的一些问题。2、例文点评：例文采用三段式；时态主要以一般现在时为主；例文详细介绍了处理问题的一

20、些建议；结构清晰；逻辑性强。3、高分亮点：短语：worry about；for a long time；be bad for；get on well with；had better do sth；communicate with。句型：I think its wrong for you to play games for a long time；When you meet some trouble, youd better communicate with them。【点睛】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如worry abo

21、ut；for a long time；be bad for；get on well with；had better do sth；communicate with等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。范文66（2022全国九年级专题练习）你校的朋辈社团旨在为学生的健康、快乐成长提供帮助。最近朋辈社团开展了一个Tell Us活动，倾听同学们学习与生

22、活中的烦恼并给予帮助。假定你是社团成员Jerry，你收到了Emily的一封倾诉信，请根据来信要点写一封回信并给出建议。问题建议家庭方面父母经常出差，感到孤独和父母多分享你的感受学习方面英语学习困难，不敢在同学们面前发言1.多向老师求助 2.人际方面与好朋友吵架了.参考词汇:quarrel 争吵要求:(1)词数 80 左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。(2)涵盖所有要点，并适当发挥，语意连贯，书写规范。(3)文中请勿出现真实的校名、班级和姓名等个人信息。Dear Emily,I feel sorry to hear of your problems. In your letter, you

23、said that _ Yours,Jerry【答案】例文：Dear Emily,I feel sorry to hear about your problems. In your letter, you said you were lonely and your parents were always on business. I suggest that you find some time to sit down and have a heart-to-heart talk with them, and tell them your feelings and thoughts, whic

24、h will help you to study in peace of mind. To solve the problems of your English learning, you should ask your teachers for help if you cant understand in class, and practice your oral English with your classmates if you cant speak in front of your classmates. You can also take part in some English

25、corner activities after class. Im sorry to hear that you quarreled with your friend. But dont worry, please remember communication is the most important. Find out the key to the problem and apologize to him. Im sure hell forgive you soon.Hope the above suggestions can help you, waiting for your good news.Yours,Jerry【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，写出朋友遇到的问题以及对应给出自己的一些意见和具体的做法，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。2.写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来，本文应该用第一人称、第二人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时相结合，提出建议可以多用情态动词；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。