Unit 4单元话题写作“疾病与建议” 五年级下册译林版三起.docx

1、Unit 4单元话题写作“疾病与建议”第一篇同学们，本单元我们学习了看病时常用的一些句型、询问自己或他人生病时应该做什么的句型及其答语和表达不应该做什么的句子句型。请用本单元所学内容写一篇短文，描述自己的一次生病经历。【思路点拨】作文结构展示可能用到的词汇和句子开头：简单说明“我”的病症。句子：I have a cold/fever/headache/toothache/.中间：介绍“我”生病后需要做什么以及学校里的学习安排。词汇：have a rest, medicine, lesson, classmate句子：I should, take some medicine and have a

2、 rest.There are four lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon.结尾：描述“我”生病稍作休整后的感觉，并介绍好朋友在“我”生病时为“我”做的事情。词汇：l2oclock, leave a shoe behind, try on句子：I feel.He/She will come to see me.【范文欣赏】It is Monday today. Im not at school, because Im ill. I have a fever and a bad cough. I go to see the docto

3、r, and he says I should take some medicine and have a rest at home. We have four lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. After school,my good friend David calls me. I tell him I feel better now. I want to know the homework. So David will come to see me and buy some fruit for me.【翻译】今天是星期一。我

4、不在学校，因为我生病了。我发烧了并且咳嗽得厉害。我去看医生，他说我应该吃一些药，在家休息。我们上午有四节课，下午有两节课。放学后，我的好朋友戴维给我打电话。我告诉他我现在感觉好多了。我想知道家庭作业。所以戴维将要来看我，并且给我买一些水果。【小试身手】 第二篇下面是戴维(David)的病历，假如你是医生，请根据病历上的信息描述一下戴维的症状，并给他提出一些合理的建议。不少于5句话。Medical record(病历)NameDavidAge10Temperature39.5Symptom(症状)have a fever, have a bad cough【思路点拨】作文结构展示可能用到的词汇和

5、句子开头：介绍David句子：David is a 10 years old boy.中间：介绍David的病情以及生病带来的影响，如：去不了学校等。词汇：have a fever, have a bad cough句子：He has a fever and. His temperature is. He cant go to school.结尾：对戴维的建议。词汇：have a rest, drink some warm water句子：He should.【小试身手】 【参考范文】David is a 10 years old boy. He is ill. He has a fever

6、and a bad cough. His temperature is 39.5. He should take some cough medicine. Hed better not go to school these days. He should have a rest at home. He should drink some warm water too. 第三篇假如你今天无法去学校，因为你感冒发高烧，并感到头痛，妈妈带你去看医生，医生嘱咐你吃药并好好休息。请你用英语写一封邮件，向老师说明请假原因。要求：条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺。不少于5句话。【思路点拨】作文结构展示可能用到的

7、词汇和句子开头：直述自己不能去学校的原因词汇：have a high fever, have a headache句子：Because I.中间：妈妈带我去看医生，医生的嘱咐词汇：see the doctor, take some medicine, have a rest结尾：自己好转后，就会很快去学校词汇：go back to school, soon(很快)【小试身手】Dear . Im sorry I cant go to school today. Yours, 【参考范文】Im sorry I cant go to school today. Because I have a cold and a high fever. I have a headache too. My mother takes me to see the doctor. The doctor asks me to take some medicine and have a good rest. I hope Ill be all right and go back to school soon.