【写作宝典】2023年小升初英语写作专项复习 话题十二 外研版三起.docx

1、【写作宝典】2023年小升初英语写作专项复习 话题十二外研版三起话题十二：如何描述正在做某事的场景写作素材今天天气不错,公园里有很多人。假如你和你的家人也去了公园，请根据下图内容，将你们在公园里的所见所闻用现在进行时写一篇英语短文。注意重点介绍人们在做某事。要求不少于 50 词。参考提纲：Whats the weather like? Whats the boy eating? What are the ducks doing? Whats the boys father doing? What are the birds doing? And his mother? What are the

2、 children playing? Whats the dog playing with?审题要点： 审人称：第一人称 审时态：现在进行时 审要点：天气情况，地点公园，内容所见所闻， 理思路：开头总起下文介绍天气情况、人物和地点等Its sunny/nice today.We are in the park. 正文主体部分 具体描述公园里典型的事物，人物或团体正在进行的活动 Look! An old man is. Some boys are. Some girls are.结尾总结全文 最后表达感受 All the people are happy! We are very happy.

3、_ _ _ _范文参考Its Sunday today.I have no classes. My parents and I are in the park.The sun is shining.The birds are flying in the sky.The ducks are swimming in the pond.My lovely dog is playing with the ball.Some children are playing football.What are we doing? Look!My father is sleeping under the tree

4、.My mother is reading a book.Im eating an ice cream.How happy we are!素材积累天气 sunny 晴朗的、 windy 有风的、 cloudy 多云的、 warm 暖和的、 cool 凉爽的、 rainy 多雨的、 rain 下雨、 hot 热的、 cool 凉爽的、 snow下雪、 snowy多雪的、 foggy多雾的.人物 man 男士、 woman 女士、 boy 男孩、 girl 女孩、 mother 母亲、 father 父亲、 sister姐妹 brother 兄弟、 teacher 教师、 friend 朋友. 活动 read a book 看书、 sing and dance 唱歌和跳舞、 draw pictures 画画、 fly kites 放风筝、 play football 踢足球、 play chess 下国际象棋、 talk 谈论、 run跑步、 jump 跳 .感受 happy 高兴的、 have a good time 玩得开心.