专题04 应用文写作（4）-研读近十年高考英语满分书面表达聚焦2023高考.docx

1、研读近十年高考英语满分书面表达聚焦2023高考Part1 应用文写作文（四）1.（2019天津卷第二次高考）假设你是晨光中学的李津，英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间，英方教师Chris 将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座、现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件: 你喜欢的讲座话题（从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一）；选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容；希望从中有何收获。注意：词数不少于100；可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；开头和结尾已给出、不计入总词数。Dear Chris,Im Li Jim, a student at Che

2、nguang High School. _Thank you for your time. Yours,Li Jin【答案】Dear Chris, Im Li Jim, a student at Chenguang High School.Its our great pleasure to have you visit our school and give a lecture on western art during the coming summer vacation.When it comes to my suggestions, I am quite interested in we

3、stern music, and expect that you could deliver the lecture on this topic. Served as a bridge, western music provides us teenagers with the opportunity to broaden our horizons and have a better understanding on culture diversities. It also gives us strength and hope when we are overcoming difficultie

4、s. I would appreciate it if you could take my advice, and I hope that I can gain more knowledge through the lecture. Looking forward to your early reply.Thank you for your time.Yours,Li Jin【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英方教师Chris写信，就一个有关西方艺术的讲座内容给出意见。【详解】1.词汇积累做演讲：give a lecturemake a speech提供：provide sb. wit

5、h sth.refer sb. sth.机会：opportunitychance采纳建议：take ones advicefollow ones advice2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Served as a bridge, western music provides us teenagers with the opportunity to broaden our horizons and have a better understanding on culture diversities.拓展句：Western music，which is served as a bridge ，pr

6、ovides us teenagers with the opportunity to broaden our horizons and have a better understanding on culture diversities.【点睛】【高分句型1】When it comes to my suggestions, I am quite interested in western music, and expect that you could deliver the lecture on this topic.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）【高分句型2】It also gives

7、 us strength and hope when we are overcoming difficulties.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句）2.（2019全国新课标I卷）假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括：1. 写信目的；2. 个人优势；3. 能做的事情。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 结束语已为你写好。_【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,Im writing to apply to be a volunteer for the Chinese Painting Exhib

8、ition which will be held in your art gallery. I think I am qualified for this job, because I have learned Chinese painting since childhood. Besides, I am fluent in both Chinese and English, which is beneficial for introducing Chinese paintings. If I am lucky enough to be chosen as a volunteer, I can

9、 show visitors around the gallery and get them to know more about Chinese painting.I would be very grateful if you could offer me the opportunity. Im looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达要求写一封申请信，属于书信应用文。【详解】1.审题立意本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写申请信，人称使用第一人称和第二人称，时态用一般现在时。2.谋篇布局书信格式，称呼和落款文中已经给出。首段，写

10、信的目的，中间段写个人优势和能做的事，最后一段总结。3. 关键词和句子根据写作要点及构思好的提纲我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和句子有：volunteer，a Chinese Painting Exhibition，advantages，I am good at，I can help with./Ill devote myself to。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误，并增加一些细节和过渡性的词汇，如First of all，Besides，to begin with，moreover，as for me，Last but not lea

11、st等，使全文衔接自然，语义流畅。【点睛】本文开门见山，表达了写信的目的；之后详细介绍了个人的优势和能做的事情，详略得当，内容完整，同时使用了高级词汇和高级句子。高级词汇：be qualified for，be fluent in，be beneficial for等；高级句式：because I have learned Chinese painting since childhood此处使用了原因状语从句。which is beneficial for introducing Chinese paintings.使用了非限制性定语从句。If I am lucky enough to be

12、chosen as a volunteer, I can show visitors around the gallery and get them to know more about Chinese painting.使用了条件状语从句。3.（2019全国新课标III卷）假定你是李华，你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加，内容包括：1. 时间；2. 活动安排；3. 欢迎他表演节目。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【答案】Dear Allen,How is everything going? Our school will hold

13、a music festival next Sunday morning in the school hall. And Im writing to invite you to join us.The opening ceremony will start at 9:00 am, and the schoolmaster will deliver a speech. Then there will be various fantastic performances played by talented students. You are definitely welcome to show u

14、p on stage, which will add color and fun to our festival.Looking forward to your early reply.Best wishes,Li Hua【导语】今年的书面表达要求考生写邮件，告知英国朋友音乐节的情况。【详解】首先确定提纲。先介绍写作目的，之后介绍音乐节的时间、活动安排等具体信息，最后欢迎他表演节目。第二，根据提纲，确定关键词语，如：How is everything going? a music festival，in the school hall，The opening ceremony等。第三，注意选用

15、合适的连接词将各要点串联起来。【点睛】本文内容完整，详略得当。并使用了高级句式。如：You are definitely welcome to show up on stage, which will add color and fun to our festival.定语从句。提升了文章档次。4.（2019浙江卷第二次高考）假定你是李华，经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：1. 表示感谢；2. 回顾Alex对你的帮助；3. 临别祝愿。注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【答案】Dear Alex,Learning tha

16、t youre leaving for the United States soon, Im eagerly writing to express my heartfelt gratitude to you for your help.Honestly speaking, its so nice of you to offer me a class of practical learning skills. Under your professional guidance, I have made such unbelievable progress in English. Its indee

17、d a pleasant surprise for me to even rank first in a recent English speech contest. Whenever I encounter difficulties, you always cheer me up and help me out, which fuels my enthusiasm for English and promotes me to regain tremendous confidence. No words are strong enough to convey how grateful I am

18、.Thanks again and wish you a pleasant journey home.Yours,Li Hua【导语】本文是应用文写作任务，要求写一封感谢信。【详解】1. 审题立意本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写感谢信，人称使用第一人称和第二人称，时态用一般现在时。2.谋篇布局书信格式，称呼和落款文中已经给出。首段，写信的目的，中间段回顾Alex对你的帮助；最后一段表达祝愿。3. 关键词和句子根据写作要点及构思好的提纲我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和句子有：leaving for the United States soon，express my heartfelt g

19、ratitude，unbelievable progress，cheer me up。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误。【点睛】本文开门见山，表达了写信的目的；之后详细介绍了Alex对自己的帮助，详略得当，内容完整，同时使用了高级词汇和高级句子。高级词汇：eagerly，heartfelt gratitude，Honestly speaking，professional guidance等；高级句式：Whenever I encounter difficulties, you always cheer me up and help me out,

20、 which fuels my enthusiasm for English and promotes me to regain tremendous confidence.使用了让步状语从句和定语从句。这些都提升了文章的档次5.（2019天津卷第一次高考）假设你是晨光中学的李津。为配合学校的“读书月”活动，你校英语社团的微信 公众号开展以“Lets Read”为题的征文活动。要求同学们根据个人的阅读体会，从 所读过的书籍中选定一种类型，推荐给其他同学。现请你投稿，文章内容应包括：（1）推荐书籍的类型及特点；（2）推荐的理由。 参考词汇：科幻小说 science fiction 侦探小说 de

21、tective novel 魔幻小说 fantasy传记文学 biography 科普读物 popular science注意：（1）词数不少于 100；（2）所选书籍类型不限于参考词汇给出的范围；（3）内容充实、行文连贯；（4）题目已给出，不计入总词数。March 22, 2019_By Li Jin【答案】March 22, 2019Today Id like to introduce a book to you which I like muchThe Five Thousand Years History, which belongs to history books. The aut

22、hor selects important and famous figures and events in the history of China, which he organizes and cuts them according to historical materials, and writes in modern language to make them easy to understand.This book opens a history gate to me and I feel more confident about my own country. I am pro

23、ud that I am a Chinese and I will make more effort to build a more powerful country and let Chinese history more brilliant.I think everyone should read it and get this wonderful experience. I do hope youll like it ! Enjoy reading !By Li Jin【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一篇英语征文。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一篇英语征文；假设你是晨光中学的

24、李津。为配合学校的“读书月”活动，你校英语社团的微信公众号开展以“Lets Read”为题的征文活动。要求同学们根据个人的阅读体会，从 所读过的书籍中选定一种类型，推荐给其他同学。现请你投稿，文章内容应包括：（1）推荐书籍的类型及特点；（2）推荐的理由。人称应使用第一、三人称，时态应为一般现在时。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：introduce a book to you（给你推荐一本书），belong to（属于），author（作者）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要

25、规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如定语从句Today Id like to introduce a book to you which I like muchThe Five Thousand Years History, which belongs to history booksin the history of China, which he organizes and cuts them

26、 according to historical materials；不定式I will make more effort to build a more powerful country and let Chinese history more brilliant.；宾语从句I think everyone should read it and get this wonderful experience.；强调句I do hope youll like it!全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。6.（2019全

27、国新课标II卷）假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛，内容包括:1. 比赛信息；2. 赛前准备；3. 表达期待。注意:1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【答案】Dear Chris,Im writing to let you know that we will have a volleyball match next month. The match will take place in our school gym on the afternoon of July 4th. We will play against the

28、team from HongXing High School. In order to win the match, we should get fully prepared and practice hard. So from tomorrow, we need to train for two hours after school every day. Please come to the school gym at 6:30 pm from Monday to Friday.Youre an excellent player. With you on the team, we are c

29、onfident that we can win the game. Lets try hard together!Yours,Li Hua【导语】今年的书面表达沿袭近几年的体裁，仍旧是应用文。本次书面表达要求考生写一封邮件告知队友有关比赛的信息。【详解】本篇书面表达是一封告知信。首先要告知写信目的；然后简明扼要地告知排球比赛的时间、地点以及赛前的准备事项，注意事件信息的三要素：时间、地点、人物，要交代清楚；第三则要表达对队友的期待和鼓励。【点睛】本文内容完整，详略得当，并运用了高级句式。Im writing to let you know that we will have a volley

30、ball match next month.宾语从句；In order to win the match不定式作目的状语。文章语言流畅，上下文转换自然。7.（2019北京卷）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim打算暑假期间来北京、天津和上海旅游，发来邮件询问相关信息。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：1. 交通出行；2. 必备衣物。注意：1. 词数不少于50；2. 开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jim,_Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jim,Im pleased that youre coming to tour in China.I suggest that

31、you begin from Beijing, and Ill show you around. Tianjin will be your next stop. After that, you can go to Shanghai, where you can stay for a week. You can take high-speed trains to both cities.Summer in these cities is hot and rainy, so take summer wear plus an umbrella with you.Looking forward to

32、your arrival.Yours,Li Hua【导语】本文是一篇应用文，要求给朋友写回信。【详解】红星中学高三学生李华的英国好友Jim打算暑假期间来北京、天津和上海旅游，发来邮件询问相关信息。要求给他回复邮件，内容包括: 1.交通出行；2.必备衣物。本文时态应采用一般现在时和一般将来时，用第一人称和第二人称来写。文章可以分为三部分来写：首先表达欢迎Jim来中国；然后交代交通出行和必备衣物；最后盼望朋友的到来。注意使用高级词汇和句式，为文章增添色彩；注意使用连接词、衔接词，使文章自然、流畅。【点睛】本文内容完整，语言表述流畅。文章使用了几个高分句型。that youre coming to

33、tour in China.和that you begin from Beijing, and Ill show you around.是宾语从句。where you can stay for a week.是非限制性定语从句。8.（2019浙江卷第一次高考）假定你是李华，乘坐FL753航班抵达伦教后发现钱包遗失。请给航空公司写一封邮件说明情况并寻求帮助。内容包括：1. 行程信息；2. 钱包特征；3. 联系方式。注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【答案】Dear Sir/ Madam,I am writing to report the loss of my w

34、allet. On 1st November, 2018 I flew business class on your flight 753 from China to London.I clearly remember it was with me immediately I boarded the plane. However, on arrival in London Heathrow Airport, I found it gone. I guess it must have slipped out of my pocket during the flight. It is a blac

35、k leather one with around 200 dollars, my ID card, and 2 credit cards in it. Along with the items mentioned above, the wallet contains a family photo, my precious memory. As you can imagine, these matter a lot to me.Has anybody happened to find it? Please email me at xxxThank you for your time and s

36、upport.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【导语】本篇考查的写作类型是求助信【详解】第一步：根据提示可知，本文是一封求助信。李华乘坐FL753航班抵达伦教后发现钱包遗失，要求给航空公司写一封邮件说明情况并寻求帮助。内容包括：1.行程信息；2. 钱包特征；3. 联系方式。第二步：根据写作要求确定关键词（组），如：I am writing to report the loss of my wallet. boarded the plane, on arrival, I found it gone. it must haveHas anybody happened to find i

37、t? Thank you for your time and support.第三步：根据提示和关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。时态以一般现在时为主，一般过去时为辅。第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】【高分句型1】Whats worse, my cash, ID card, and 2 credit cards were in it. 更糟的是，里面有我的现金，身份证和两张信用卡。Whats worse意为“更糟糕的是”，连接并列两个坏的东西，且后面一个更严重。【高分句型2】Id appr

38、eciate it if you could help me to get it back. 如果你能帮我把它拿回来，我会很感激的。Id appreciate it if如果我会很感激的。9.（2019北京卷图画作文）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们班上周组织了一次以“劳动最光荣”为主题的社会实践活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记述整个过程。注意：词数不少于60。提示词：西瓜watermelon _【答案】Last week I took part in a farmwork programme in the suburbs.At the class meeting, ou

39、r teacher told us about the programme with the theme “Working is most beautiful”. And he stressed the importance of working with our own hands.When I got home, I packed up my luggage for the trip.On the farm, we helped pick watermelons. While working, I realised how hard it was to work in the fields

40、 under a hot sun.When I came back home, I shared my experiences with my parents. And they were very proud of me.【导语】本文属于图画作文，要求根据图画内容写一篇英文周记。【详解】假如你是红星中学高三学生李华，你们班上周组织了一次以“劳动最光荣”为主题的社会实践活动。要求根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记述整个过程。分析四幅图可知，图画作文内容要点比较清晰，其中包括：老师宣布活动内容和意义，我为活动准备，在农场的劳动过程，介绍活动感受。这样有利于学生写作时发挥与扩展。全文可分成三部分，开头段概括活动，中间段描述图画，结尾段总结收获和意义。文章用第一人称来写，使用一般过去时。【点睛】本文内容完整，语言表述通顺。使用了连接词、衔接词，使文章自然、流畅。文章使用了宾语从句how hard it was to work in the fields under a hot sun.，还使用了At the class meeting, When I got home, On the farm, While working, When I came back home等过渡词，使文章上下文衔接流畅。