专题06 书面表达(中考真题 名校模拟)-2024年中考英语逆袭冲刺名校模拟真题速递(上海专用).docx

1、2024年中考英语逆袭冲刺名校模拟真题速递(上海专用)第一期专题06 书面表达(中考真题+名校模拟)一、话题作文1（2020上海统考中考真题）Write at least 60 words on the given situation（根据以下情况填写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）雕刻家Willard的成长经历告诉我们：人无完人，但每个人都有自己的独特之处，在Willard的主页上有一个留言区，每位浏览者都可以写下自己的故事和感想请以Everyone can be special （天生我才）为题，在留言区分享你的经历或见闻（注意： 1短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不

2、予评分2照抄阅读语篇不得分）_【答案】例文Everyone can be specialNo one is perfect，but everyone is unique in their own wayI saw a film yesterdayThe main character of the film is an unusual boyWhen he was born，he grew four times as fast as a normal person，which means that when he is 10，he looks 40The other children alway

3、s laughs at him，so he is very sad and feels lonelyOne day，his mother said gently to him that no one was perfect，but everyone was unique in their own wayFrom then on，he and his classmates became good friends Everyone can be special as long as you dont give up yourself【详解】1.题干解读：该题属于话题写作。写作时要注意文章的要求分享

4、经历或见闻。2.例文点评：例文采用三段式，第一大段人无完人，但是又是特别的；第二大段陈述自己的经历；第三大段呼吁大家不要放弃成为特别的人，结构清晰，段落分明。用第三人称来进行写作分析；时态采用一般过去时为主。3.高分亮点：短语：laugh at, as long as, be born, give up.句型：when引导的时间状语从句，that引导的宾语从句，定语从句。【点睛】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务2（2018上海中考真题）Writing(作文. )94. Write at least 60 w

5、ords on the topic My progress(以“进步了”为题,写一信不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格)你在生活或学习中一定取得过不少进步,比如生活技能的获得、学习方法的掌握、良好习惯的养成。请选取其中一个方面,结合自身经历,谈一谈你是如何取得这一进步的。（注意:短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息,否则不予评分。）The following is for reference only(以下表达仅供参考)used to do/betry my best to domake progress in( doing._【答案】I used to write badly, es

6、pecially in English. It affected my performance every composition. I felt annoyed because I didnt know how to do it.Several months ago, our English teacher reminded us to pay attention to our English Writing. He prepared a copybook for each student. We were asked to practice every day. I tried my be

7、st to copy well. The teacher encouraged me and kept on telling me what to do next. With the help of my English teacher, I made progress in writing.No pains no gains. I will study hard to achieve greater progress and I believe I will do better and better.【详解】作文要求以“My progress”为题，叙述自己一次进步的过程。故取得怎样进步是描

8、述的重点，以前怎样，以后怎样也需要简单叙述。时态以一般过去时为主，人称为第一人陈。可以借鉴所提供的词组，另外，写作时还需注意语句间的衔接，语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。高分句型：1. We were asked to practice every day. 我们被要求每天练习。此句用的是一般过去时的被动语态。2. The teacher encouraged me and kept on telling me what to do next. 老师鼓励我并不断告诉我下一步该怎么做。keep on doing sth.不断地做某事。3. No pa

9、ins no gains. 没有付出就没有收获。谚语的使用，为作文增添了亮点。3（2015上海中考真题）Writing (作文) Write at least 60 words on the topic “ I want to invent _ ”(以“我想要发明_”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)（注意：1、在答题纸上将题目补充完整。2、短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）The following is for reference only. (以下表达仅供参考)It can be used toIt will be exciting/necess

10、ary/helpful to【答案】I Want To Invent A Family Doctor RobotI want to invent a family doctor robot,which can be used to cure the illness without going out of their home.As far as Im concerned, it will beextremelyhelpful and useful because of the following reasons:First, you can see the doctor immediatel

11、y at home when you feel sick or get hurt. It can save us a lot of time, especially in emergency situations.Furthermore,hospitals today are always filled with patients, not everyone can be taken good care of. However, with the help of our robot doctors,you can talk to your personal doctor one to one

12、whenever you want.In short, family doctor robots canmake great contribution toour society.【详解】这是一个开放性的话题作文，学生要自己组织语言围绕着自己想发明什么，为什么有这种想法，以及发明将给人们带来什么变化等组织语言。主要用到一般现在时及将来时态。写作亮点：亮点一：全文巧用“first, furthermore, in short” 等连接词，把家庭机器人医生的好处写的非常清晰，让阅卷老师一目了然。亮点二：全文采用了定语从句、状语从句、并列句等多种长难句，为文采分增色不少。亮点三：文中出现了“extr

13、emely, make contribution to” 这些超纲单词及词组，恰到好处地强调了家庭机器人医生的重要性，且为文采再次进行润色。4（2014上海中考真题）Writing (作文) Write at least 60 words about the topic “This time next year“ (以“明年此时”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)你是否想象过，明年此时，你的生活会发生怎样的变化？你对自己或他人有怎样的期待？你能为此做些什么？）（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）The following sentence pat

14、terns are for reference only. ( 以下句型仅供参考)I hope to /I hope that.Perhaps I will.It will be exciting / necessary / terrible to ._【答案】This Time Next YearIts exciting to imagine what the happy life will be like. At this time next year, I will be a senior high student, and I will make a lot of new friend

15、s. I hope to be more independent so that perhaps I will be taking part in a summer camp abroad to improve my spoken English. Also,I will help my parents do housework in order to know how to take care of myself when I am alone. Life will be totally different，but Im really looking forward to it.(90 wo

16、rds)【分析】Its exciting to imagine what the happy life will be like. At this time next year, I will be a senior high student, and I will make a lot of new friends. I hope to be more independent so that perhaps I will be taking part in a summer camp abroad to improve my spoken English. Also,I will help

17、my parents do housework in order to know how to take care of myself when I am alone. Life will be totally different，but Im really looking forward to it.(90 words)【详解】试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第一人称，一般将来时态进行叙述。例文分析：这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章

18、增色不少。连词also but等的使用是本文看起来更加条理清楚，符合逻辑关系。本文主要是第一人称，一般将来时态进行叙述。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。高分亮点：短语：so that一遍，所以；take part in参加；in order to为了，目的是；take care of照顾；look forward to盼望等。句型：（1）Its exciting to imagine what the happy life will be like.句型It is adj for sb to do sth，做某事对某人来

19、说怎么样；(2) I hope to be more independent so that perhaps I will be taking part in a summer camp abroad to improve my spoken English.so that引导结果状语从句。5（2013上海中考真题）Write at least 60 words about the topic “How to protect myself”(以“如何保护自己”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)提示： 自我保护是青少年需要掌握的重要技能。请谈谈你在生活中怎样进行自我保护(可结合

20、生活中的某一个情景或具体事例，如：面对灾难如何自救，如何预防受骗或侵害，如何避免生活中的意外，等等)。Phrases for reference(以下短语仅供参考)：askfor help calm downin danger preventfrom(注意：文中不得出现具体人名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。)_【答案】例文Self-protection is very important（开门见山，写出主旨自我保护是非常重要的）Here are ten tips for youTry to stay with friends on the way to school or homeIf yo

21、u are alone，try not to talk with strangersIf someone follows you all the time，you must keep calm and ask your friends or parents for help on the phoneCall 120 for help in time（遇到有人跟踪自己向朋友或者打120求助） If you have a car accident or someone is hurt，you should call 120 quicklyIt can mean the difference bet

22、ween life and death（遇到交通事故打120）Be careful when using the InternetYou may use the Internet to get useful information in your free timeBut dont believe anything you read on the InternetIf an online friend asks you to go out and meet him or her，you should let your parents know first and listen to their

23、 advice（预防网络骗局）【详解】本题是围绕保护自己展开叙述，首先应该说明保护自己的重要性，然后，结合具体场景或者事例说明如何保护自己。在写作时，本文的主语可以用第二人称，时态一般应该用一般现在时。应该尽量包括文中提示的内容，不能遗漏要点提示的内容，可稍加拓展。作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系,适当使用连接词。二、材料作文6（2019上海中考真题）Write at least 60 words according to the given information（根据以下材料，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）以下是几位同学在以貌取人、盲从朋友、看待谎言、抉择人生等方面的感悟。请从

24、中选择你比较有感触的一条，可结合自己的经历，谈谈你的体会。Dont judge people by their looks. Someone could be bad-looking and still be nice. KatieWhen your friends do something stupid，you dont have to follow.JackieDont tell a teacher your dog ate your homework，especially if you dont have a dog.AlexLife is like a“choose your own

25、ending” book-you can take whatever adventures you want.Sally _(注意: 1. 先将你选择的一条感悟抄写在答题纸带有引号的横线上。)【答案】例文Dont Judge a Book by Its Cover by Michelle As an old saying goes, dont judge a book by its cover. I didnt recognize the true meaning of it until last year. In my neighborhood came a man with a scary

26、 face. The first several times I came across him, I always ran away quickly, with hands covering my eyes. Later, I knew from my parents that he made a lot of effort to keep our neighborhood clean as a volunteer, which provides a better living environment for us. Realizing the mistake I made, I went

27、to say sorry to him. And I really appreciated him for helping me learn that a persons internal beauty is always the most valuable part instead of his appearance.【详解】以下是几位同学在以貌取人、盲从朋友、看待谎言、抉择人生等方面的感悟。请从中选择你比较有感触的一条，可结合自己的经历，谈谈你的体会。动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥，确定时态主要词汇等问题。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；语言的表述应该符合

28、语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。另外，在描述时，应该注意人称的变化。【点睛】这是一篇比较不错的作文。这篇短文层次非常的清晰，文中用到了一些好的句型：As we all know, we cant judge people by their clothing . Because the clothes do not reflect what is inside the human.；I think if you juge a person by his clothes you only can get his taste of clothes, but taste of clothes

29、not equal to the taste of life这些给文中增色不少。7（2017上海中考真题）Write at least 60 words on the topic “Theres always hope”（以“常怀希望”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）面临困惑的时候、经历变化的时候、感觉挫败的时候、遭遇逆境的时候来自内心的坚持、他人的帮助、社会的关爱和科技的发展等，总能让人常怀希望。请选取一个方面谈谈你的理解（可结合自身或他人的经历）。The following is for reference only （以下表达仅供参考）l get out of diff

30、icultyl give a handl never lose hope_【答案】（One possible version）Theres always hopeIn the growth, we will inevitably encounter some setbacks.When adversity comes, the help of others and the insistence from the heart, always brings us hope.Because hope is like a dose of a stimulant; it gives us courage

31、 when we are tired.Facing challenges from adversity, we must be hopeful and recognize our brief defeat, then keep moving forward toward hope.No matter where you are, how embarrassed you are, please believe that everything will be over.We can not give up hope for life, and believe that a good day wil

32、l come.Everything will be over, as long as people live, there is no step but to become.Keep hoping! It can help us out of difficulties and succeed.【详解】本文要求考生围绕“希望”这个话题，以常怀希望为题目写一篇考场作文，所以一定要认真审题，确定短文的体裁和表达的中心。在作文时，要注意上下文的衔接过渡，适当地使用些高级词汇及句式，给文章增添些许亮色。写作亮点：短文用了一些短语和句式，如：In the growth,在成长的过程中；the insist

33、ence from the heart源于内心的坚持；keep doing,坚持做；give up.放弃；as long as.只要。巧妙地运用连词and把两个短句结构成长句，如We can not give up hope for life, and believe that a good day will come.增加了文章的亮点色。8（2012上海中考真题）根据所给情景写一封不少于60词的信 Suppose you are Joe. Your friend Betty is upset about a coming exam for she cares too much about t

34、he result. What do you think? Try to offer her some advice. （假如你是Joe, 你的好朋友Betty 因为过于在意考试结果而感到焦虑。请给她写一封信，谈谈你的看法，并给她一些建议。）（注意：文中不得出现任何姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）_【答案】More and more people like shopping（like doing sth） in supermarkets, which（定语从句） have developed rapidly in recent years. This, of course, has

35、something to do with the convenience they offer to customers.Firstly, prices in supermarkets are much lower, for they are run in the self-service style, therefore, fewer shop assistants are needed. Secondly, a wide variety of goods are displayed to satisfy the needs of different people. Thirdly, sup

36、ermarkets usually have longer opening hours than other shops and stores.Shopping in supermarkets can make customers feel confident, comfortable and relaxed. Moreover, it saves them both time and money.Thats why supermarkets are getting more and more crowded nowadays.【详解】这类作文属于开放型作文，学生可以充分发挥自己的想象力，自由

37、表达自己的想法，考生可以发挥自己的英语水平，区分度明显，成绩好的学生可以写出高级句型，显示自己的英语水平，如果成绩不好的学生，过多使用普通句式，文章就显得dry。作文点评：文章的层次分明，逻辑感强，Firstly，Secondly, Thirdly，等使人觉得文章很通畅，这是现在非常欠缺的。此外，短语，例如has something to do with，offer to，bothand等都用得非常好，还有定语从句，名词性从句，是一遍值得学习的范文，考生应该在平时多积累这些文章。三、电子邮件9（2022上海统考中考真题）Write at least 60 words according to

38、the given situation（根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）你校将增设一间学生活动室（student activity room），现有以下六种关于活动室用途的设想：读者之家（Reading corner）劳技工坊（Mini workshop）艺体天地（Arts and sports centre）义卖集市（Charity market）科创小屋（High-tech lab）心灵驿站（Heart-to-heart room）学校正通过校报了解学生的意向。假设你是李华，请给校报张老师写封邮件，表明你最喜欢的一种设想，并说明理由。（注意：1. 邮件中不得出现姓名

39、、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。）_【答案】Dear Mr Zhang,I am writing to you to share my ideas about the use of the student activity room. I prefer to make it a heart-to-heart room.For some students, they may feel helpless and depressed when they meet troubles in life, especially those who are shy. They can

40、 turn to this place for help if there is one. Besides, students are likely to suffer from mental problems. If these problems arent solved well, they may bring bad results. The heart-to-heart room can offer help to these students in time. Thank you for reading my e-mail.Yours,Li Hua【详解】总体分析 题材：本文是一篇应

41、用文，为电子邮件。 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； 提示：首先选择其中你最喜欢的一种设想，发邮件给校报张老师，并说明理由。写作步骤第一步，点明主题，介绍自己喜欢的设想；第二步，介绍喜欢的理由；第三步，表示感谢。亮点词汇prefer to do更喜欢做某事turn to求助于suffer from遭受高分句型 they may feel helpless and depressed when they meet troubles in life, especially those who are shy.（含有when引导的时间状语和who引导的定语从句）They can turn to this

42、 place for help if there is one.（if引导的条件状语从句）四、看图作文10（2011上海中考真题）Write at least 60 words about the topic “Im a member of_”.（以“我是.的一员”为题，写一篇不少于60字的短文，标点符号不占格。）提示：你可以作为任意兴趣小组或社团的一员，或者作为家庭、班级、社区的一员，写出你的经历、感受等。Use the following points as reference:Are you glad to be a member of?What do you do in it?How

43、do you feel as such a member?【答案】Im a Member of the Singing and Dancing ClubHello, everyone! Im very glad to be a member of the Singing and Dancing Club. I have been in this club for 2 years. Im an actor in the club. I like singing and dancing very much. I sing and dance with my classmates on weeken

44、ds. Though I am very tired, I like to sing and dance every day. It makes me feel very happy.【详解】作文标题为“Im a member of”，这样的考题让每个考生都有话可说。题目包含5张图片提示，分别代表家庭、歌舞俱乐部、爱护动物者社团、自然科学竞赛社团题目中蕴含“责任意识和公民意识”的两纲内容，与“往年的考题以强调自我感受居多”不同，今年考题引导学生思考我可以为他人、为集体付出些什么。在写作过程中一定要注意提示“一定要表达具体是什么的成员”，根据几个guided questions,最好能在开头表达

45、是否开心加入此团体，后面紧接着描述原因即在作为一员主要工作是什么，最后再来一个作为成员的感受作为总结，这样整个作文的结构就清楚了。但想获得很高分，还要尽量避免语法拼写等错误，写出一些比较出彩的复合句，这就需要同学平时勤练基本功了。五、书信作文11（2021上海统考中考真题）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)你的学校正在为以下活动课招募教学小助手(teaching assistant)：球类(Ball Games)演讲(Speech)器乐(Instrument

46、al Music)戏剧(Drama)手工(Handicrafts)摄影(Photography)假设你是李华，请给教导处张老师写封信，结合你的兴趣和特长，说明你想担任哪一门活动课的小助手及理由。注意：1.信中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。_【答案】例文：Dear Mr. Zhang,I am writing to you to apply for the teaching assistant for our instrumental music lesson. The reason why I am interested in this job is th

47、at I love music and I have got the level-10 certificates of both piano and guitar. Besides, music is a way to deepen our understanding of the world as well as a way to relax ourselves. I hope more students will find its beauty through this course, which is certainly my goal. Being the teaching assis

48、tant is exactly what I am good at and what I desire. I really hope you can give me this opportunity. Sincerely,Li Hua【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求根据所给情境，给教导处张老师写封信，结合自己的兴趣和特长，说明自己想担任哪一门活动课的小助手及理由。2.写作指导：本文主要以第一人称写作，时态为一般现在时。结合自己的兴趣和特长，选择一门活动课，表明选择担任这一门课的小助手的理由；可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等；语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。