专题06 书面表达10篇(中考真题 名校模拟)-2024年中考英语逆袭冲刺名校模拟真题速递(深圳专用).docx

1、2024年中考英语逆袭冲刺名校模拟真题速递(深圳专用)第一期专题08 书面表达10篇(中考真题+名校模拟)一、讲稿1（2022广东深圳统考中考真题）假定你是李华，你和同学们拍了一个毕业活动视频，打算做成视频日志（vlog），参加主题为“青春飞扬”的国际中学生vlog作品展。请给该视频写一段解说词。内容包括：1. 海边活动：下午：沙滩排球；晚上：搭帐篷；聚餐和清理垃圾；分享会。2. 活动感言。注意：1. 词数80左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；2. 要点齐全，可适当发挥；3. 不得出现真实姓名和校名；4. 条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。参考词汇：冲浪surf帐篷tentHi,

2、everyone! I am Li Hua. Its my great pleasure to present my vlog to you.Last Saturday, we went to the seaside to celebrate our graduation. In the afternoon, _So much for my video. I hope you have enjoyed it. Thank you.【答案】例文Hi, everyone! I am Li Hua. lts my great pleasure to present my vlog to you.La

3、st Saturday, we went to the seaside to celebrate our graduation. In the afternoon, we had a beach volleyball game. Then, we enjoyed the fun of surfing in the sea. Before dark, we picked up the litter on the beach. How meaningful it was! At night, we put up two tents and had a picnic. The food cooked

4、 by us was so delicious. Finally, all of us shared our feelings about this fantastic experience. Not only can it promote our friendship, but also it leaves us a valuable experience.So much for my video. I hope you have enjoyed it.Thank you.【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇解说词，属于演讲稿写作；时态：时态为“一般过去时”；提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，按照

5、提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。写作步骤第一步，承接短文开头，引出话题；第二步，根据提示的要点介绍在海边的活动，包括下午和晚上的具体活动，要列举具体的事例；第三步，抒发活动带来的感悟并书写结语。亮点词汇pick up the litter捡垃圾not onlybut also不仅而且高分句型How meaningful it was!（how引导的感叹句）The food cooked by us was so delicious.（过去分词作定语）Not only can it promote our friendship, but also it leaves us

6、a valuable experience.（部分倒装结构）二、材料作文2（2021广东深圳统考中考真题）深圳是一座科技之城、创新之城，为培养学生对科技的兴趣，你的学校上周举办了科技节。假定你是你校英语报的小记者，请你编写一篇新闻报道，介绍这次活动。要点：1. 活动目的2. 活动项目： 模型制作比赛3. 活动亮点：学生发明的服务于校园的机器人：外表、功能 4. 学生感受提示词： 1. 科技节 science festival2. 实验 experimentShenzhen is well-known as a city of technology and innovation. Last we

7、ek, _【答案】范文：Shenzhen is well-known as a city of technology and innovation. Last week, our school held a science festival, which aims to develop students interest in science and technology and broaden their horizons. At the festival, some students took an active part in the model-making competition.

8、Many of their robots, which were the highlight of the festival, drew peoples attention. These robots were in the shape of lovely animals, such as rabbits, monkeys and dogs. They were doing some simple tasks like sweeping the floor and throwing away rubbish. Besides, some other students carried out s

9、cience experiments. The students who were present at the festival were all surprised at the exhibits and gave them a big around of applause. Our school hopes that more and more students can learn science and technology better to serve our country.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于新闻报道的写作，在写作时要根据汉语提示的内容，介绍科技节的目的，活动项目以

10、及活动亮点和学生们的感受。2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般过去时为主；在介绍内容时，力求语句通顺，内容完整，保证条理清晰，行文连贯。3（2020广东深圳统考中考真题）深圳市正在争创全国文明城市、假定你是鹏城中学学生会主席，希望同学们为创文做出自己的贡献。请你按照所提示的要点，代表学生会写一篇倡议书。环境保护垃圾分类；绿色出行公益慈善志愿服务；人际交往诚信友善；要求：1、词数80左右(开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数)；2、要点齐全，可适当发挥；3、条理清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范；4、文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。参考词汇：分类 sort out志愿者volunte

11、er贡献 contributionDear friends,As we know, Shenzhen is working hard to win the title of Chinas National Civilized City._.All in all, Shenzhen is our home. Its time to take action.The Student UnionJuly 20, 2020【答案】Dear friends,As we know, Shenzhen is working hard to win the title of Chinas National Ci

12、vilized City.(引出话题)Its well known that Shenzhen is striving for one of the ten civilized cities in China, and now it is a good opportunity for us to make our own contributions.(倡议缘由)Firstly, more changes in our daily life, such as sorting out the rubbish and travelling in a greener way, can be made

13、to protect the city environment. Whats more, to make Shenzhen a loving city, we are also supposed to help those in need by doing some voluntary work or raising donations.【高分句型一】 Last but not least, get along with others in an honest and friendly way. Wed better avoid talking about others privacy if

14、we want to show our respect.(具体介绍如何做)I strongly believe that we will make Shenzhen a more civilized and beautiful city with our joint efforts.(展望)All in all, Shenzhen is our home. Its time to take action.【高分句型二】(号召)The Student UnionJuly 20, 2020【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于倡议书写作。在写作时应承接短文开头；第一段引出话题；第二段写倡议缘由；第三段具

15、体介绍如何做；第四段进行展望；第五段号召大家行动起来。2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来进行写作；时态采用一般现在时为主，写作时要注意语句通顺，语意连贯，紧扣要点，注意句子之间的连接与过渡，要注意涵盖所给提示。4（2018广东深圳统考中考真题）英国某中学邀请你校学生代表团于7月中旬去访问交流，假如你是成员之一，请在欢迎会上致答谢辞。要点：1.感谢邀请和接待；2.希望在文化习俗，创新与发明方面有交流；3.重点介绍一个中国传统节日；4.邀请他们来深圳。提示词：习俗custom；创新innovations；接待reception要求：1.80个词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内；2.必须包括以

16、上全部要点，可以适当发挥；3.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；4.条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。Ladies and Gentlemen:Good evening! Its really a great honor for me to speak here. _Thats all. Thank you.【答案】例文Ladies and Gentlemen:Good evening! Its really a great honor for me to speak here. Im grateful for your invitation and warm reception.To sta

17、rt with, I sincerely hope more chances will be given to exchange our culture, customs, innovations and inventions in the near future. Whats more, its known that China possesses a long historical culture standing. Therefore, a lot of festivals are celebrated, among which the Dragon Boat Festival is o

18、f great importance. It falls on May 5th of Chinese lunar calendar every year. People all across China eat zongzi and dragon boat races are held in many places to remember a great ancient person Qu Yuan.We had three days off for this festival this year. During this time, I went for a picnic in the co

19、untryside with my good friends, and of course, ate zongzi with my family. I also watched the dragon boat races on TV. Finally, I hope you can come to Shenzhen next year and spend the festival with me.Thats all. Thank you.【详解】题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。写一封表示感谢的答谢辞。写作指导：本文主要采用一般现在时。先对于邀请表示感谢；再重点介绍一个中国传统节日，最后邀请他们来

20、深圳。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，做到无语法和标点错误。5（2017广东深圳统考中考真题）假设你是李华，三年的初中生活即将过去，你的外籍同学Sam在英语学习上帮助了你，在即将毕业之际，请你在给Sam的毕业纪念册上用英语写一段留言，要求包括以下内容要点：1你在学习上曾遇到的困难；2Sam对你的帮助，建议及措施：（1）多听多读；（2）多看英语电影；多唱英文歌曲；（3）（自由发挥；不少于一项内容）3你的收获及对Sam的感谢和祝福Dear Sam，How time flies!Its time for us to say goodbye Yours sincerely，Li Hua【答案】Dea

21、r Sam，How time flies! Its time for us to say goodbye!You have offered me so much help in my English that I think words to show thanks are far from enoughI still remember three years ago，I had difficulties in learning EnglishIt was difficult for me to memorize so many words and understand what people

22、 were sayingMy spoken English and written English were poor too However，Im so lucky that I met you，a kindhearted，smart and patient boy Firstly，you taught me to listen more and read moreAnd it really helped me a lotBesides，you suggested that I should watch English movies and sing classic English song

23、s In addition，you told me to form the habit of reading aloud in the morning and reading novels before going to bedAs a result，I finally made great progressAnd I wish you happy and healthy Yours sincerely，Li Hua【详解】试题分析：确定文章的中心，注意文章文体、人称和时态，同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

24、写作亮点：短文用了一些短语和句式，如：Its time for sb to do sth到了做某事的时间了；have difficulties in doing sth做某事有困难；tell sb to do sth告诉某人做某事；teach sb to do sth教某人去做某事；用了that引导的宾语从句，用了Besides，Firstly，In addition，As a result连接词，使短文衔接自然。6（2023广东深圳深圳中学校联考一模）深圳是一座有温度的城市。3月是学雷锋月，假如你是学生李华，是深圳市某国际学校的一名学生。下周你所在的学校将举行一系列“学雷锋”活动，请根据以下

25、提示，写一个倡议书，介绍此次活动并号召学校的同学们积极参加，要点：1目的：培养社会责任感，提高交流技巧，帮助有需要的人2内容：看望敬老院老人 帮助照顾流浪动物 （补充一点）3你的号召与倡议要求：1.80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内；参考词汇：social 社会的Dear friends,Shenzhen is a city which can bring people love and warmth. In March, there will be a great event called “Learning from Leifeng”._Thats all. Thank you!

26、【答案】例文Dear friends,Shenzhen is a city which can bring people love and warmth. In March, there will be a great event called “Learning from Leifeng”. The following is some detailed information about it.This event will be held in order to develop students sense of social responsibility. At the same tim

27、e, students can improve their communication skills and help people in need.There are a series activities during the event. Firstly, we will go to old peoples homes and help them clean their rooms. Secondly, some of us will go to take care of homeless animals. We can feed them or play with them. Thir

28、dly, we will hold a book fair to raise money for the poor. Each student need to bring some books that they dont need any more.I think this event will be really educational and meaningful. With every effort we make, we can make a big difference! Hope everyone can take part in it!Thats all. Thank you!

29、【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇倡议书；时态：时态为“一般将来”；提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。写作步骤第一步，介绍活动的目的；第二步，介绍活动的内容。亮点词汇at the same time同时make a big difference有很大的影响take part in参加高分句型This event will be held in order to develop students sense of social responsibility.（动词不定式作目的状语）I think this event will be really educatio

30、nal and meaningfuls.（省略that的宾语从句）三、书信作文7（2019广东深圳统考中考真题）书面表达假设你是李华，你的英国朋友 Tony 对中国红一词很感兴趣，想了解中国红在中国人日常生活中的体现，请你根据以下表格信息写一封回信帮助他了解地位最受欢迎的颜色之一代表幸福，可以带来好运使用场所婚礼，春节等表达方式剪纸，中国结，红包，灯笼提示词：婚礼 wedding，中国结 Chinese Knot，红包 red packet， 代表 stand forDear Tony，Its great to receive your letter Im writing to tell yo

31、u something about Chinese red_ I truly hope my letter will help you understand better about Chinese redYours，Li Hua【答案】Dear Tony，Its great to receive your letter Im writing to tell you something about Chinese red Chinese red， considered as the symbolic color of China， is extremely popular with Chine

32、se people It usually represents happiness， and we believe that it can bring us good luck People in our country attach such great importance to Chinese red that they use many red objects in some important events For instance， in a wedding， you can see that the bride is in a red wedding dress and the

33、wedding room is decorated with red Whats more， the houses are also filled with red paper cuts， lanterns and Chinese Knots during the Spring FestivalChildren will get red packets for best wishes as well Obviously， Chinese red plays a significant role and enjoys the highest popularity in ChinaI truly

34、hope my letter will help you understand better about Chinese red Yours，Li Hua【详解】1.题干解读：本文属于书信作文，向你的英国朋友介绍“中国红”，包括地位、代表、使用场所以及表达方式。注意时态的准确运用，灵活运用所学的单词、短语以及句型。切记不要遗漏要点。2.例文点评：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。3.高分亮点：单词短语：for instance, be decorat

35、ed with, whats more, be filled with, as well以及play a significant role等。亮点句型：we believe that it can bring us good luck中，that引导的宾语从句。【点睛】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如for instance, be decorated with, be filled with, as well以及play a significant role等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间

36、的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅，如whats more；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。8（2022广东深圳校考三模）假如你是李华，你在劳动技能课上学会了制作贺卡，昨天是母亲节，你为妈妈亲手做了一张卡片作为礼物。请根据下面提示给你的外国好友Julie写一封信，介绍贺卡的制作过程及相关情况。要点：1. 贺卡的制作过程：1）准备卡片、彩色铅笔和剪刀；2）把纸剪成心形，画上漂亮的图画；3）写下了对妈妈的祝福并表达感谢；2. 妈妈收到卡片时的感

37、受和评价；3. 询问Julie是如何庆祝母亲节的。参考词汇：卡纸：cardboard u.彩色铅笔：colored pencils剪刀：scissors剪成心形：cut.into a heart shape要求：1. 词数80-100词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）2. 要点齐全，语句通顺连贯，书写规范。Dear Julie,Hows everything? Recently I have learnt how to make greeting cards in the labor class. Yesterday was Mothers Day. _Yours,Li Hua【答案】例

38、文：Dear Julie,Hows everything? Recently I have learnt how to make greeting cards in the labor class. Yesterday was Mothers Day. I made a card for my mother as a gift. Now I tell you how I made the greeting card.First, I prepared cardboard, colored pencils and scissors. Then I cut the cardboard into a

39、 heart shape. Next, I drew beautiful and meaningful pictures in it with colored pencils. Finally, I wrote my wishes and thanks to my mother. When I gave my gift to my mother, she was very happy and excited. She said I had grown up and learned to be grateful. She said she liked my gift very much and

40、she thought I was talented in art. How happy I am! How do you celebrate Mothers Day? Im looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【详解】总体分析 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； 时态：时态为“一般过去时”； 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中“询问Julie是如何庆祝母亲节的”一项，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。写作步骤第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山说明将要介绍自己如何制作卡片；第二步，具体介绍制作卡片的过程；第三步，具体描述妈妈收到卡片

41、的感受和评价，最后书写结语，表达自己的感受，并询问对方如何庆祝母亲节。亮点词汇 cut the cardboard into a heart shape把这个卡纸剪成心形 drew beautiful and meaningful pictures画美丽而有意义的画 with colored pencils用彩笔 be talented in在某方面有天赋高分句型 Now I tell you how I made the greeting card.（how引导的宾语从句） How happy I am!（how引导的感叹句）四、通知9（2016广东深圳中考真题）【2016广东深圳中考】书面

42、表达近年来，越来越多的外籍人士融入到深圳社区生活。假设你的小区也居住着这样一个群体，社区委员会为丰南他们的生活，计划在下周六专为外籍人士安排一次采摘荔枝活动，请你帮忙用英文写一份书面通知，传达给他们。要点：1) 下周六上午8:00在北门集合，乘大巴友“幸福农场”采摘荔枝，下午4:30返回；2) 享受乡村自然美镜，感受干农活的乐趣；3) 请在下周四下午6:00前去办公室报名；4) 你可以带上；另外.注意：1)字数：80字左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总字数）2)文章必须包含所有提示内容，并可作适当发挥；3)不得出现真实姓名和校名；4)条理清楚，语句迪顺，意思连贯，书写规范。参考词汇: 荔枝lyc

43、hee报名sign ones name幸福农场Happy FarmNOTICE June 25In order to enrich the life of the residents （居民）, the Community Union is going to organize a special activity for next Saturday._Wish you a wonderful time!The Community Union【答案】NOTICEJune 25In order to enrich the life of the residents (居民)，the Communi

44、ty Union is going to organize a special activity for next Saturday.We have organized a bus trip to Happy Farm for foreigners, where we plan to pick lychees. We will gather at the North Gate at 8 a.m. and return at 4:30 p.m. next Saturday. During the trip, we can appreciate natural scenery in the cou

45、ntryside and have fun in farming work. Of course, you can take an umbrella so as not to get sunburnt. Besides, your safety should be taken into consideration.Sign your name in our office before 6 p.m. next Thursday if you are interested.Wish you a wonderful time!The Community Union【详解】试题分析：这篇作文是要求我们

46、为自己小区里居住的外籍人士发布一个通知，内容是关于社区组织一次荔枝采摘活动。具体内容包括：这次活动的时间、地点；活动的内容；需要注意的事项等。其中的第四条内容需要我们直接发挥想象力来补充。要注意在这样的一个场景下，我们可以提出哪些建议，例如需要携带什么物品，注意安全等等。通过审题可知，这篇作文我们应使用第一人称We来叙述，主要使用一般现在时态。写作时，可能用到的词和短语如：organize组织；pick lychees采摘荔枝；gather 集合；enjoy scenery欣赏风景；sign ones name报名等等。写作时，我们要注意英语表达和汉语的不同，要符合英语的表达习惯。另外在短文里

47、还应使用一些平时积累的句型，将这些语言知识具体运用到实践中。使用一些连词和从句，使文章的内容更加连贯，表达更加流畅。写作亮点：这是一篇优秀的范文，这篇短文内容完整，包含了题目所给的所有信息，表达也很连贯、流畅。首先作者先点明了这次活动的内容，We have organized a bus trip to Happy Farm for foreigners, where we plan to pick lychees.在这里使用了一个定语从句，非常准确；接下来是这次活动的时间；然后是活动中我们可以做的事情，we can appreciate natural scenery in the coun

48、tryside and have fun in farming work.，使用了两个短语appreciate natural scenery 和have fun doing sth.；下一个是作者自己补充的两个内容，you can take an umbrella so as not to get sunburnt. Besides, your safety should be taken into consideration.，带着雨伞以免被晒，还有注意安全。这两个建议都非常符合这篇短文说设置的情景。最后是说明了去报名这个信息，Sign your name in our office be

49、fore 6 p.m. next Thursday if you are interested.，这句话中使用了一个if引导的条件状语从句。考点：提纲类作文。五、电子邮件10（2023广东深圳统考一模）深圳是一座创新型城市，12月是深圳的“创意十二月”。假如你是学生李华，上周你所在的学校举行了“校园创意节”（Creative Campus Festival），请根据以下提示，给你的外国朋友Mike写一封邮件，介绍此次活动。要点：1. 目的：丰富校园生活，发展创新能力；2. 内容：创意写作大赛 机器人展 3. 你的感受：要求：1. 80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内；2. 文中不得出现

50、真实姓名和校名：3. 可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；4. 标点正确，书面整洁。参考词汇：innovative 创新的 enrich使丰富Dear Mike, Shenzhen is an innovative city. A great event called “Creative December” is held here. _Yours,Li Hua【答案】参考例文Dear Mike, Shenzhen is an innovative city. A great event called “Creative December” is held here. In order t

51、o enrich campus life and develop innovation ability, my school held the “Creative Campus Festival” last week. The content of this activity mainly includes creative writing contest, robot exhibition and personal programming design. Through this activity, I learned a lot of knowledge, and I also learn

52、ed the wonderful ideas of my classmates. I also want to learn relevant knowledge and try to design my own home next time. I hope my dream can come true.Yours,Li Hua【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一封电子邮件；时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；提示：信件开头结尾以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，不要遗漏提示中的“你的感受”这一要点，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。写作步骤第一步，承接信件开头，介绍学校举办“校园创意节”的目的；第二步，根据提示要点介绍活动内容，可列举具体的事例；第三步，抒发自己在此次活动中的收获或感受并书写结语。亮点词汇enrich campus life丰富校园生活develop innovation ability发展创新能力高分句型I hope my dream can come true.（省略引导词that引导的宾语从句）