专题08 书面表达12篇(第三期)-备战2024年高考英语名校模拟真题速递(江苏专用).docx

1、备战2024年高考英语名校模拟真题速递(江苏专用)第三期专题08 书面表达12篇一、书信写作1（2023上江苏苏州高三苏州中学校考期中）假如你是校学生会主席李华，你发现很多同学一日三餐都在学校食堂吃，但是触目惊心的浪费现象几乎每天都在发生。请以“向食堂餐饮浪费说不”为主题写一封倡议书。内容包括：1. 倡议的背景；2. 倡议的具体内容；3. 提出倡议。注意：1. 写作词数应为80词左右；2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dear fellow students, _Li Hua President of the Student Union【答案】Dear fellow students, We a

2、ll feel concerned when seeing leftovers piled in the bins of the canteen. Being thrift on food is a Chinese traditional virtue. More importantly, in the time of pandemic and natural disasters, saving food is of vital significance for a country with 1.4 billion people. The school is to launch a campa

3、ign against food waste. Banners will be put up to advocate saving food. As for us students, please dont order food that we cant finish. Furthermore, lets remind each other to clear the plate all the time or pack leftovers home. Remember, every grain comes after hard toil. Lets save food and do it fr

4、om today!Li HuaPresident of the Student Union【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求学生针对学校浪费粮食的情况，以“向食堂餐饮浪费说不”为主题写一封倡议书。【详解】1. 词汇积累担心的：concerned worried重要的：vitalcrucial意义：significance consequence此外：furthermore moreover2. 句式拓展同义句转换原句： More importantly, in the time of pandemic and natural disasters, saving food is of vital si

5、gnificance for a country with 1.4 billion people.同义句： More importantly, in the time of pandemic and natural disasters, it is of vital significance for a country with 1.4 billion people to save food.【点睛】【高分句型1】 As for us students, please dont order food that we cant finish.（that引导的定语从句）【高分句型2】 We all

6、 feel concerned when seeing leftovers piled in the bins of the canteen.（when引导的时间状语从句）2（2023上江苏泰州高三姜堰中学校考期中）假设你是李华，你校交换生英国学生John将在一周后抵达泰州并入住你家，你们将在同一个班级学习一个月。请你写一封信，告知他你去车站接他的时间以及随后的安排。内容包括：1. 表示欢迎；2. 接他的时间和地点；3. 你的安排。注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dear John,_Yours,Li Hua【答案】One possible vers

7、ion:Dear John,Delightedly acquainted with the fact that youre coming to Taizhou and live with me, I cant contain my excitement. Im writing to extend my warmest welcome to you and confirm our schedule.Im going to pick you up at Taizhou station at 10:00 next Sunday morning, standing at the exit and we

8、aring a red jacket so you wont miss me. Afterwards, we are to head directly to my home where you are to settle down in a separate room. The next day, you will be introduced to our classmates and we will study together for the following month. We will also spare some time to experience the local cult

9、ures and have a bite of the authentic cuisine in my hometown.Wish you a happy journey and may our friendship be nurtured and fostered in the following month.Yours,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生给即将到来的交换生英国学生John写一份告知信，需表示欢迎，说明去车站接他的时间和地点，并介绍随后的安排。【详解】1. 词汇积累兴奋：excitementeagerness, exhilaration表示：extend

10、express, convey体验：experienceundergo, feel正宗的：authenticgenuine培养：nurturecultivate, develop2. 句式拓展转换原句：Im going to pick you up at Taizhou station at 10:00 next Sunday morning, standing at the exit and wearing a red jacket so you wont miss me.拓展句：Im going to pick you up at Taizhou station at 10:00 next

11、 Sunday morning, standing at the exit and wearing a red jacket in case you will miss me.【点睛】高分句型1 Delightedly acquainted with the fact that youre coming to Taizhou and live with me, I cant contain my excitement. (运用了that引导的同位语从句)高分句型2 Afterwards, we are to head directly to my home where you are to s

12、ettle down in a separate room. (运用了where引导的限制性定语从句)3（2023上江苏南通高三如皋市搬经中学校联考期中）假如你是学生会主席李华，最近青少年学生心理健康引起了公众关注，请围绕这一主题，写一份倡议书，内容包括：1. 简述现状；2. 表示理解；3. 发出倡议。注意：1. 词数80字左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。2. 开头已给出，不计入总字数。请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dear fellow students, Im Li Hua, president of the Students Union. _The Students Union

13、November 17th , 2023【答案】Dear fellow students,Im Li Hua, president of the Students Union. Im here to raise awareness about teen mental health. Pressure from school, family, and friends can be crushing. More and more often, we see a rise in the number of students facing emotional and psychological cha

14、llenges. We need to take action now. First, we must break the silence around this issue. Its time to remove prejudice against mental health and normalize its discussion. Second, lets create a positive environment that encourages openness, self-care, and healthy coping. No more bystanders, we must be

15、 agents of change. Our future depends on it. Thank you!The Students UnionNovember 17th , 2023【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一份倡议书，倡议人们关注青少年学生心理健康问题。【详解】1.词汇积累压力：pressure stress毁坏性的：crushing destructive增加：rise increase问题 ：issue problem/matter2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：More and more often, we see a rise in the number of s

16、tudents facing emotional and psychological challenges.拓展句：More and more often, we see a rise in the number of students who face emotional and psychological challenges.【点睛】高分句型1Im Li Hua, president of the Students Union. (运用了名词词组作同位语)高分句型2 Second, lets create a positive environment that encourages op

17、enness, self-care, and healthy coping.(运用了that引导限制性定语从句)4（2022上江苏南通高三统考期中）假定你是李华，上周四参加了学校举办的阅读经典名著红楼梦交流会，请你用英语写一篇报道，向校报英文栏目投稿。内容包括：1参加人员：2.交流内容； 3.你的感想。注意：1. 写作词数应为 80左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答；3.参考词汇：红楼梦-A Dream of Red MansionsAn exchange meeting on reading a Chinese classic_【答案】An exchange meeting on

18、 reading a Chinese classicLast Thursday, a group of students gathered to take part in the exchange meeting on the Chinese classic A Dream of Red Mansions organized by our school. The participants included not only Chinese literature enthusiasts but also students who are from various cultural backgro

19、unds. During the meeting, we discussed the relationships between the characters and the vivid descriptions of the ancient Chinese social structure.It was an important experience to engage in thoughtful discussions with my peers and to gain new insights into this classic work of literature. I believe

20、 that such exchanges are not only helpful in enriching our understanding of Chinese culture but also promote cross-cultural understanding and appreciation.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份，对上周四学校举办的阅读经典名著红楼梦交流会用英语写一篇报道，向校报英文栏目投稿。【详解】1.词汇积累参加：take part in participate in各种各样的：various diversified重要的：important

21、 significant有益的：be helpful be beneficial2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：I believe that such exchanges are not only helpful in enriching our understanding of Chinese culture but also promote cross-cultural understanding and appreciation.拓展句：It is our belief that such exchanges are not only helpful in enriching our u

22、nderstanding of Chinese culture but also promote cross-cultural understanding and appreciation.【点睛】【高分句型1】Last Thursday, a group of students gathered to take part in the exchange meeting on the Chinese classic A Dream of Red Mansions organized by our school.（使用了过去分词短语作后置定语）【高分句型2】The participants in

23、cluded not only Chinese literature enthusiasts but also students who are from various cultural backgrounds.（使用了以students为先行词、关系代词who为引导词的限制性定语从句）5（2023上江苏徐州高三统考期中）你校学生会号召全体学生为了身体健康，杜绝一切电子产品。请针对学生会这项行动给校英文报写一篇投稿，内容包括：1. 指出问题；2. 说明理由；3. 提出建议。注意：1. 写作词数应为 80 左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯Electronic products: fri

24、endly or frightening?_【答案】Electronic products: friendly or frightening?Aiming to protect our health, the Students Union calls on us to put all the electronic products away, on which Id like to make a comment. Theres no denying that if we depend on electronic products too much, they will do harm to u

25、s. But that doesnt mean we have to put all of them away, as some of them can really bring us much convenience. For instance, an e-book is able to store so many books that we can take them everywhere and read them any time we want.Therefore, it is advised that we use electronic products to our advant

26、age and avoid relying on them all the time.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给校英文报写一篇投稿，报道你校学生会号召全体学生为了身体健康，杜绝一切电子产品这项活动。【详解】1.词汇积累评论：comment remark依赖：depend on rely on对有害：do harm to be harmful to例如：For instance For example2.句式拓展句式转换原句：Theres no denying that if we depend on electronic products too much, they will

27、 do harm to us.拓展句：There is no denying that if we rely too much on electronic products, they will be harmful to us.【点睛】【高分句型1】Aiming to protect our health, the Students Union calls on us to put all the electronic products away, on which Id like to make a comment.（运用了介词on + which引导的非限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】Th

28、eres no denying that if we depend on electronic products too much, they will do harm to us.（运用了that引导的同位语从句和if引导的条件状语从句）6（2023上江苏镇江高三统考期中）假如你是学生会主席李华，学校英语网站邀请你写一篇博文，就国货兴起发表你的看法。请根据提示用英语写一篇短文。1.国货兴起的原因；2.国货面临的挑战；3.你的建议和期望。注意：1.词数80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Recent years have witnessed a remarkable boom i

29、n the popularity of Chinese products, which can be attributed to the following factors. _【答案】范文Recent years have witnessed a remarkable boom in the popularity of Chinese products, which can be attributed to the following factors. First, Chinese companies have been investing in innovation and quality

30、, making our products globally competitive. Second, supporting homegrown products is a way of expressing our love for the country, as we take pride in what the nation has achieved.However, challenges lie ahead. One major concern is the need for Chinese products to maintain their quality standards an

31、d innovate continually. Moreover, how Chinese brands survive in the fierce global market is another one.From my perspective, homegrown products are a reflection of our nation. If these companies continue to prioritize quality and ethics, I believe it will make us proud and confident about our cultur

32、e.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是学生会主席李华，学校英语网站邀请你写一篇博文，就国货兴起发表你的看法。请根据提示用英语写一篇短文。【详解】1.词汇积累繁荣：boomprosperity方式：waymethods表达：expressconvey不断地：continuallyin a row2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：First, Chinese companies have been investing in innovation and quality, making our products globally competitive.拓展句：First, Chinese co

33、mpanies have been investing in innovation and quality, which makes our products globally competitive.【点睛】高分句型1 If these companies continue to prioritize quality and ethics, I believe it will make us proud and confident about our culture. (运用了if引导条件状语从句)高分句型2 Second, supporting homegrown products is

34、a way of expressing our love for the country, as we take pride in what the nation has achieved. (运用了as引导原因状语从句)7（2023上江苏南京高三南京市中华中学校考阶段练习）假定你是李华。你的外国朋友 Mike即将到你的家乡旅游，请你给他写一封邮件，向他推荐家乡的民俗文化馆(Folk Culture Museum)。邮件内容包括：1. 阐明写信事由；2. 介绍文化馆特色；注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Mike,_Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dea

35、r Mike,Knowing that you are going to travel in my hometown, I am writing to recommend the local Folk Culture Museum.There is a lot to do in the museum. First, what will impress you most is that a variety of cultural handicrafts such as musical instruments, farming tools and so on are exhibited in di

36、fferent halls. Here, you can be involved in making crafts like paper umbrellas and Chinese knots. Whats more, with the help of the guides who is professional, you will have a better understanding of the history and development of our folk culture.Youre warmly welcome to visit the museum.Yours,Li Hua

37、【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外国朋友Mike写一封邮件，向他推荐家乡的民俗文化馆(Folk Culture Museum)。【详解】1.词汇积累各种各样的：a variety of all kinds of此外：Whats more Moreover展示：exhibit show涉及：be involved in relate to2.句式拓展同义句转换原句：Knowing that you are going to travel in my hometown, I am writing to recommend the local Folk Culture Museum.拓展句

38、：Because I know you are going to travel in my hometown, I am writing to recommend the local Folk Culture Museum.【点睛】【高分句型1】First, what will impress you most is that a variety of cultural handicrafts such as musical instruments, farming tools and so on are exhibited in different halls. (运用了what引导的主语从

39、句和that引导的表语从句)【高分句型2】Whats more, with the help of the guides who is professional , you will have a better understanding of the history and development of our folk culture.(运用了who引导的定语从句)8（2023江苏统考模拟预测）假定你是高三学生李华，在上周的年级读后续写竞赛中，你的续写得分为16分（满分25分），你觉得此分数偏低不太合理。请你给评委Mr. Davis用英语写一份邮件，内容包括：1. 说明问题；2. 给出理由

40、。参考词汇：读后续写 continuation writingDear Mr. Davis,_Yours sincerely,Li Hua【答案】Dear Mr. Davis,I am Lihua, a participant in you continuation writing competition. Having scored only 16 for my continuation writing, I felt it unfair, so I am writing to you to state my reasons.For my writing, I felt it totally

41、 meets the requirement put forward in the contest. To begin with, the structure of my composition is definitely clear and the plot develops reasonably, no prolixity at all. Additionally, the words and sentences used are colorful, without repeatedly using the same word again and again. I even wrote s

42、ome compound sentences to update my writing, such as attributive clause, the emphatic pattern, inverted sentence and so on. Finally, a well-known saying is used to end my article, which I think is a perfect highlight of the passage.In a word, with the merits mentioned above, I wonder why I got such

43、a low score. If it is convenient for you, please give me an explanation.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达为一篇应用文。要求学生代替李华给续写竞赛的评委老师写一封邮件，陈述自己续写得分为16分，觉得此分数偏低不太合理的理由。【详解】1.词汇积累：陈述：statemake a statement of而且：additionallywhats more/in addition/furthermore完美的：perfectexcellent/outstanding2.句式拓展：同义句转换原句：To

44、begin with, the structure of my composition is definitely clear and the plot develops reasonably, no prolixity at all.拓展句：To begin with, the structure of my composition is definitely clear, with the plot developing reasonably, no prolixity at all.【点睛】【高分句型1】Having scored only 16 for my continuation

45、writing, I felt it unfair, so I am writing to you to state my reasons.(运用了现在分词作状语)【高分句型2】Finally, a well-known saying was used to end my article, which I think is a perfect highlight of the passage.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)9（2023上江苏高三校联考阶段练习）学校英文报组织同学们分享自己在暑假中参加的一个有意义的活动，请你以此为主题写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：1.简要描述；2.体验和感

46、受。注意:1.词数80左右：2.题目已为你写好。A Meaningful Activity in the Summer Vacation_【答案】One possible versionA Meaningful Activity in the Summer VacationDuring the summer vacation, I volunteered in the counseling room in my community, providing counseling and childrens psychology for various households. I earned th

47、e certification after training and then participated in practice sessions. I taught parents and their children how to analyze their problems and find their own solutions, since each family has a different background.Im very glad that many parents have applauded the counseling project because they ge

48、t useful suggestions to resolve problems. I have also accumulated life experience through this activity.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以分享自己在暑假中参加的一个有意义的活动为主题，写一篇短文给学校英文报投稿。【详解】1.词汇积累参加：participate in take part in高兴：glad delighted建议：suggestion advice积累：accumulate gather2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：I have also accumulated l

49、ife experience through this activity.拓展句：I have also accumulated life experience through this activity, which I think is of great benefit to my future.【点睛】【高分句型1】During the summer vacation, I volunteered in the counseling room in my community, providing counseling and childrens psychology for variou

50、s households.（运用了现在分词短语作状语）【高分句型2】I taught parents and their children how to analyze their problems and find their own solutions, since each family has a different background.（运用了“疑问词+to do”结构作宾语以及since引导的原因状语从句）10（2023上江苏常州高三校联考阶段练习）假定你是李华，校学生会主席，你校校园广播电台计划招募一名英语广播员。请你写一张英文招聘海报，张贴在校园公告栏里。内容包括：1. 岗位

51、介绍；2. 招聘要求；3. 报名方式。注意：1写作词数应为80左右；2请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。An English Host Wanted_【答案】An English host wantedOur school radio started five years ago. Now we need an English programme host to make our English programmes cater to our exchange students.If you are interested in programme hosting and have fluen

52、cy in English, you should have greater chance of getting the job. Of course, youll be hardworking and be enthusiastic about work. Above all, you need to have team spirit.You can come to the office of the Students Union to sign up for it before this Friday afternoon.Hope you are accepted as an Englis

53、h host.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的招聘书。要求考生写一张英文招聘海报，为校园广播电台招募一名英语广播员。【详解】1.词汇积累对感兴趣：be interested in show interest in机会：chance opportunity热情的：be enthusiastic about be keen on希望：hope wish2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Now we need an English programme host to make our English programmes cater to our exchange students.拓展句：No

54、w we need an English programme host who can make our English programmes cater to our exchange students.【点睛】【高分句型1】If you are interested in programme hosting and have fluency in English, you should have greater chance of getting the job.（运用了if引导的状语从句）【高分句型2】Hope you are accepted as an English host.（运

55、用了省略引导词that的宾语从句）11（2023上江苏苏州高三统考阶段练习）假定你是李华，今年你校开设了劳动实践课(labour course)，你的英国朋友Paul来信询问该课的开展情况。请你给他回信，内容包括：1.课程目的；2. 课程内容(参加校内劳动、公益活动等)；3. 课后感悟。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Paul,_Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Paul,How is everything going? Learning that you show an interest in our schools labour course,

56、Im more than delighted to share with you something about it. In a gesture to form the students correct view of labour, colorful labour programmes are open every week in our school. We can either help plant vegetables or feed chickens on the school-run farm. Additionally, students are also encouraged

57、 to get involved in community service and voluntary work. Definitely, most of us are fascinated by the course because it indeed enriches our school life. Not only are we relaxed but we have gained a higher moral value on life. Yours,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国朋友Paul回信，给他介绍你校开设了劳动实践课。其内容包括：课程目的、课程内

58、容(参加校内劳动、公益活动等)以及课后感悟。【详解】1.词汇积累高兴：delightedpleased形成：form develop 帮助：help assist 此外：additionally in addition 2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：In a gesture to form the students correct view of labour, colorful labour programmes are open every week in our school. 拓展句：Colorful labour programmes, whose goal is to form

59、the students correct view of labour, are open every week in our school. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Learning that you show an interest in our schools labour course, Im more than delighted to share with you something about it.（运用了现在分词作状语和that引导的宾语从句） 【高分句型2】Not only are we relaxed but we have gained a higher moral va

60、lue on life.（运用not only放句首构成的部分倒装） 12（2023上江苏苏州高三苏州中学校考阶段练习）假设你是李华, 刚刚经历了一场大地震。正所谓“一方有难，八方支援”，作为幸存者的你见证了社会各界的全力援助。请在 China Daily 投稿，要点包括：1. 社会各界参与地震救灾2. 个人感受注意：1. 词数：80 左右;2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。A huge earthquake hit my town last week._【答案】A huge earthquake hit my town last week. The response from societ

61、y has been remarkable. Government agencies swiftly organized rescue efforts, providing essential supplies and medical aid. Volunteers rallied together, offering support and comfort to the affected residents. Charitable organizations and businesses generously donated funds and resources for the rebui

62、lding process. Im grateful for the solidarity and compassion shown during this difficult time. Lets continue working together to rebuild and create a brighter future.【导语】本篇是应用文写作。要求考生作为一名刚刚经历了一场大地震的幸存者，来介绍社会各界的全力援助，用英文写篇报道。给China Daily投稿【详解】1. 词汇积累反应：response reaction显著的：remarkableoutstanding提供：prov

63、ideoffer影响的：affectedinfluenced2. 句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Im grateful for the solidarity and compassion shown during this difficult time.拓展句：Im grateful for the solidarity and compassion which were shown during this difficult time.【点睛】高分句型1Government agencies swiftly organized rescue efforts, providing essential supplies and medical aid.(现在分词作状语)高分句型2Lets continue working together to rebuild and create a brighter future.(祈使句)