专题08 书面表达热点话题10篇-2023年中考英语逆袭冲刺名校模拟真题特快专递（云南专用）.docx

1、2023中考英语逆袭冲刺名校模拟真题特快专递（云南专用）第二期专题08 书面表达热点话题10篇一、话题作文1（2023云南昆明昆明市第三中学校考二模）The Person Who Helps Me Grow up提示：茫茫人海中，总有一些或熟悉或陌生的身影出现在你成长的时光故事里，为你指点迷津，助你健康成长。请以“The Person Who Helps Me Grow up”为题，用英语写一篇短文，记叙一位帮助你成长的人的故事，并谈谈你的感受。要求：1.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；2.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；3.书面表达必须写在答题卡上，如在本卷上作答，

2、一律不得分。_【答案】例文：The Person Who Helps Me Grow upDuring the past three years, when I got into trouble, many people would like to gave me a hand. Linda is one of them. Let me tell you something about her.When I almost wanted to give up learning English, I met Linda, a girl from my study group. She told m

3、e that everyone meets troubles, but we should never give up easily. Instead, we should find out a suitable way and then work hard. With her help, I adjusted my attitude and worded harder than before. Finally, I made great progress in English. Now, I am an English lover and I wont give up anything ea

4、sily.I am thankful to have a friend like Linda.【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇话题作文，围绕“帮助自己成长的人”展开；时态：一般过去时为主；提示：本文写作要点已经给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，并适当补充发挥，注意语句的通顺，使用正确的词汇和句型，使得行文连贯有逻辑。写作步骤第一步，表明写作意图，介绍背景，以“让我告诉你一些关于她的事情”引出下文；第二步，介绍发生的故事，注意时态应以过去时为主，突出对自己的帮助和自己的成长；第三步，结尾总结，表达自己的感受。亮点词汇get into trouble陷入困境give sb a hand帮助某人give u

5、p放弃with ones help在某人的帮助下高分句型During the past three years, when I got into trouble, many people would like to gave me a hand.（when引导的时间状语从句） She told me that everyone meets troubles, but we should never give up easily.（宾语从句）2（2023云南昆明统考二模）在三年的初中生活中，一定有那么一个人或一件事，就像一缕阳光，照进你的心灵，照亮你的前路。请以“Sunshine in My L

6、ife”为题，用英语写一篇短文，叙述给你带来温暖或希望的一件事或一个人。要求：1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；2. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；3. 请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。Sunshine in My Life_【答案】例文：Sunshine in My LifeDuring the past three years, I met so many warm-hearted people. They gave me a hand when I got into trouble, especially my good friend Linda

7、. Let me tell you something about her.Because of my poor English, Linda became my partner in our study group. Everyday after school, she would stay with me to help me practice English. If I have some questions, she would lend me her notebook and explain patiently. Little by little, I made progress i

8、n English. Now I am confident in learning English.I am happy to have a friend like her.【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇话题作文，围绕“生活中的阳光”来展开，介绍温暖自己的人或事情；时态：一般过去时；提示，要点提示已经给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，并适当补充发挥，注意语句的通顺，使用正确的词汇和句型，使得行文连贯有逻辑。写作步骤第一步，表明写作意图，介绍背景，以“让我告诉你一些关于她的事情”引出下文；第二步，具体阐述所发生的事情，注意时态应以过去时为主，且注意与主题相关；第三步，结尾总结，表明自己的感受。亮点词汇

9、warm-hearted热心肠的because of 由于little by little逐渐地make progress取得进步高分句型Because of my poor English, Linda became my partner in our study group.（短语because of做原因状语） If I have some questions, she would lend me her notebook and explain patiently.（if引导的条件状语从句）3（2023云南模拟预测）Make a Change提示：世界是美好的，但很多时候总有些事情不如

10、人意。如果你想改变世界，就先改变自己。请以“Make a Change”为题写一篇英语短文，叙述你做出的一次改变以及你的感悟。要求：1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；2. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；3. 请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。_ 【答案】例文Make a ChangeIt is important for us to make a change when things dont fit us, so that we can get better and better. I still remembered what had happene

11、d on the day of an English speech contest. Before getting on the stage, everyone was so nervous that they kept mumbling their speeches to get themselves well-prepared. But I felt very confident since I had won many awards in such contests before. I didnt do anything and just waited on my seat. Howev

12、er, when it was my turn to give the speech, my mind suddenly went blank and I totally forgot what I was going to say. The terrible experience made me realize something. From that day on, I made a change. I know under no circumstances should I be overconfident. Practice makes perfect and being humble

13、 and hungry is always the best policy.【详解】总体分析 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文； 时态：叙事部分时态为“一般过去时”；感悟部分时态为“一般现在时”； 提示：写作要点给出了两个，叙述经历以及谈谈感悟，注意叙事部分是写作重心，且要突出变化。写作步骤第一步，引出“变化”这个主题；第二步，描写自己的经历，突出前后的变化；第三步，文章结尾，谈谈自己做出变化的感悟。亮点词汇 get oneself well-prepared 让自己做好充分准备 go blank 变得空白 from that day on 从那天起高分句型 However, when it

14、 was my turn to give the speech, my mind suddenly went blank and I totally forgot what I was going to say. （when引导的时间状语从句及what引导的宾语从句） I know under no circumstances should I be overconfident. （部分倒装句型） Practice makes perfect and being humble and hungry is always the best policy.（运用了谚语“熟能生巧”）4（2023云南模

15、拟预测）Happiness from_提示：幸福源于什么？是老师的教诲、父母的关爱、朋友的关心、自我的突破不同的人会有不同的感受。请以“Happiness from _”为题，用英语写一篇短文，叙述在你生活或学习中，给予过你幸福的人或你经历过的一件令你感到幸福快乐的事。要求：1.请先将题目补全后，再作答；2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；4.请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。_【答案】例文Happiness From Hard WorkOur life is full of happiness. My happiness

16、comes from hard work. I can get happiness every time I work hard.Last term, I was chosen to take part in the English Speech Contest. I was nervous when I heard the news, because I was always afraid of speaking in public.I wondered if I could succeed and I wanted to give up. My English teacher notice

17、d that. She had a long talk with me and encouraged me to challenge myself. After that I kept practicing every day. When I got the first prize in the contest, I felt happy from my deep heart.My happiness is from the success through my hard work. The harder I work, the more happiness I get.【详解】总体分析题材：

18、本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。写作步骤第一步，介绍自己的快乐来自努力学习；第二步，分享自己的经历；第三步，表达感悟。亮点词汇full of充满take part in参加give up放弃高分句型I was nervous when I heard the news, because I was always afraid of speaking in public.（when引导时间状语从句；because引导原因状语从句）I wondered if I could succeed a

19、nd I wanted to give up.（if引导宾语从句）5（2023云南昆明统考二模）A Walk with _提示：生活中，总有人与你结伴而行，给予你关心、勇气谁曾与你同行？在同行路上发生了什么？请以“A Walk with _”为题，用英语写一篇短文，分享你的同行经历并谈谈你对这段经历的感受。要求：1.请先将题目补全后，再作答；2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；4.书面表达必须写在答题卡上，如在本卷上作答，一律不得分。_【答案】例文A Walk with my friendI have a friend called

20、 Sam whom I walk with on the road of growth. We have been friends for two years.After school, we always talk about things that we are both interested in. Looking back, I was never bored on the way home after school since we shared many interests.We reached an agreement to go for a run in the park ev

21、ery weekend. By running, we got relaxed. Sometimes, we spent a whole day reading in the library. After that, we talked about what we read. We learned a lot from each other.The time that we spent together has lit up my middle life. Im so happy to have such a good friend.【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇话题作文；时态：时态主要为“

22、一般过去时”；提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示中的问题：谁曾与你同行？同行路上发生了什么？适当添加细节，并且突出写作要点。写作步骤第一步，表明写作意图。直接提出与我同行的人是谁；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。主要介绍了同行的经历以及感受；第三步，书写结语。表达我对朋友的感谢。亮点词汇talk about谈论be interested in sth.对感兴趣reach an agreement达成一致go for a run跑步learnfrom从学习高分句型The time that we spent together has lit up my middle life.（“tha

23、t”引导的定语从句）6（2023云南曲靖统考二模）_Makes Me Happy提示：在你的学习生活中，一定做过很多让自己感到幸福快乐的事，如帮助别人、读书、志愿服务等。请以“_Makes Me Happy”为题，用英语写一篇短文，讲述你做某件事的经历和感受。要求：1. 补全题目，用英语写一篇不少于60词的短文：2. 语言流畅，内容连贯，书写规范，卷面整洁：3. 文中不能使用你的真实姓名和校名，否则以零分计：4. 短文必须写在答题卡上，如在试题卷上作答，一律不得分。_【答案】例文Helping Others Makes Me HappyHelping others makes me happy

24、. I enjoy it.I went to the old peoples home with my classmates last month. We cleaned their rooms and read them the newspaper. We called them grandpa or grandma. Some of my classmates talked with them and asked them to tell us their stories. Their stories were very interesting. Seeing their smiling

25、faces, I felt happy and proud. I think helping others is a great thing. It makes me a happy person and it makes the world a better place.【详解】总体分析 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文； 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，可适当发挥。写作步骤第一步，补全题目；第二步，具体阐述你做某件事的经历；第三步，最后表达自己的感受。亮点词汇read sb sth给某人读某事talk with sb和某人交谈ask

26、 sb to do sth让某人做某事高分句型Seeing their smiling faces, I felt happy and proud.（现在分词作状语）I think helping others is a great thing.（省略that的宾语从句）7（2023云南统考三模）提示：在你的生活中，能教你知识的不仅仅是你的父母或老师，身边的朋友、丰富的阅历、有趣的旅行等都可以教会你新的东西。请以“_ is like a teacher”为题，写一篇英语短文，谈谈你生活中像老师一样的人或经历。要求：1.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；2.文中不得使用真实姓名、校

27、名，否则以零分计；3.请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。_【答案】范例：Life is like a teacherLife is like a teacher. It can give me more than knowledge. Let me share a lesson Ive learned in life with you.That was a sunny day. My friend Jack and I went to the nearby park to fly a kite. We ran together when the wind started to blow

28、. But to our surprise, the kite didnt fly as high as we thought. It kept falling down to the ground again and again. I was upset and wanted to give up. Jack, on the other hand, thought for a while and discussed with me, then we tried again. This time, I ran as fast as I could in the front. Jack foll

29、owed my lead in the back, sending the kite higher. Because of our efforts, the kite finally soared high in the sky! We were so happy and proud of ourselves.This is the lesson I have learned from lifemaking mistakes is OK. What matters most is to think and act after mistakes. Only then can you learn

30、and make progress.【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇记叙文；时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”，叙述经历时使用过去时；提示：本文是话题作文，考生应把题目补充完整，以话题为中心，发挥想象，添加细节，并突出写作重点。写作步骤第一步，总写。直接叙述生活就像一位老师。它能给你知识。和大家分享你的经历；第二步，具体阐述你的经历；第三步，书写感悟，结束全文。你从经历中获得的启发，犯错误是可以的，最重要的是在错误之后思考和行动。只有这样，你才能学习并取得进步。亮点词汇share sth. with sb.和某人分享某事to our surprise令我们惊讶的是not asas不像kee

31、p falling down to the ground一直摔倒在地because of因为，由于(be) proud of 为感到骄傲make progress取得进步 高分句型Let me share a lesson Ive learned in life with you.（省略引导词的定语从句）We ran together when the wind started to blow.（when引导时间状语从句）What matters most is to think and act after mistakes. （what引导主语从句）Only then can you lea

32、rn and make progress.（倒装句）8（2023云南红河统考一模）I Will Remember _在我们成长的过程中，总会有让我们难以忘怀的人。请以“I Will Remember _”为题，用英语写一篇短文，介绍一位你难以忘怀的人，说说你和他（她）之间发生的事，并且谈谈你的感受。要求: 1. 将所给题目补充完整，并写一篇短文，词数不少于60个； 2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计； 3. 书面表达必须写在答题卡上，如在本卷上作答，一律不得分。_【答案】例文:I Will Remember My English TeacherMy

33、 English teacher Mr. Green is like my hero. He not only teaches me English, but also cares for me all the time. He is the person I will remember forever. I still remember it was a rainy day. I found I didnt take an umbrella after school. I stood in front of the school gate and thought I would be all

34、 wet when I got home. Suddenly, I saw a familiar figure coming towards me. It was Mr. Green. He saw me and he gave me a lift although he was busy and he lived far away from my home. How kind and warm he is! I love Mr. Green and I hope to be the person that he is proud of. Although I will graduate so

35、on, he will always be in my heart.【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇话题作文，围绕“会记得某人”来展开，介绍自己难忘的人；时态：一般过去时；提示：要点提示已经给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，并适当补充发挥，注意先把题目补充完整，交代人物，注意写作中语句的通顺，使用正确的词汇和句型，使得行文连贯有逻辑。写作步骤第一步，补充完整题目，表明自己会记得的人是谁，从而引出下文；第二步，简要介绍人物身份，然后介绍发生的事情，注意时态应以过去式为主，注意语法的正确，突出其为何难忘，可从对自己的影响等角度出发；第三步，结尾总结，强调对人物的难忘，以及自己会积极向上的态度。亮点词汇no

36、t only.but also不仅而且in front of 在前面a familiar figure一个熟悉的身影far away from远离高分句型Although I will graduate soon, he will always be in my heart.（although引导的让步状语从句）He not only teaches me English, but also cares for me all the time.（并列短语not only.but also连接的并列谓语）9（2023云南昆明统考一模）My _ Trip提示：读万卷书，行万里路。旅途中，我们经历难

37、忘的事，遇见可爱的人，感受醉人的景.请以“My _ Trip”为题，用英语写一篇短文，叙述一次你出游的经历，并谈谈你的感受。要求：1. 请先将题目补全后，再作答；2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；4.请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。_【答案】例文My Unforgettable TripI have travelled a lot and I have many travel experiences. Let me tell you one of the most unforgettable experiences. L

38、ast summer vacation, I went to Qingdao by train. The weather was fine. It was always sunny. I enjoyed the fresh air there. First, I went to the seaside. The sea was as blue as the sky. It was really an enjoyable thing to take a bath in the sunshine on the beach. Then I also picked up a lot of colorf

39、ul shells. After that I tasted the local famous food. I ate many things there, such as fish and prawns. What delicious food they are! Travelling is like a poem. We use our footprints to fill in every word and every sentence.【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇话题作文；时态：时态为“一般过去时”；提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意在写作时注意时态的使用。介绍自己的经历时要用一般过

40、去时。写作步骤第一步，表明写作意图，引出要重点介绍的内容；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。介绍自己的一次旅行经历，可以从时间、交通方式、旅途风景等方面描述；第三步，书写结语。表达此次旅行的收获。亮点词汇most unforgettable experiences最难忘的经历as blue as the sky和天空一样蓝pick up捡起高分句型What delicious food they are!（感叹句）10（2023云南昆明统考一模）学校英语专栏正在以“A Joy from _”为主题征稿，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，叙述一次让你收获到快乐的经历。要求：1.请先将题目补全后，再作答；2.语言

41、流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；4.请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。A Joy from _【答案】A Joy from Laboring Do you do chores around the house or school very often? As for me, laboring work is more than that. I am always willing to do it, which brings me joy and helps me grow. Last July I took part in a

42、farm-work programme in the suburbs. Upon arriving at the farm, I quickly threw myself into hands-on work in the fields, picking up watermelons and moving them to a warehouse all the morning. While working, I realized how hard it was to work in the fields under the hot sun and what “every grain on th

43、e plate comes from hard work” really meant. Tiring and laborious as the work is, I find the value of labor and the joy of working.【详解】总体分析 题材：本文是一篇话题作文； 时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”； 提示：写作要点已给出，学生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中一次让自己收获到快乐的经历的介绍。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 写作步骤第一步，开门见山直接引出劳动这个话题，并介绍劳动带给自己快乐等。第二步，具体阐述劳动体验的过程。第三步，写劳动的感受。亮点词

44、汇 as for me就我而言；对我而言 am always willing to总是愿意 took part in参加 picking up watermelons摘西瓜高分句型 I am always willing to do it, which brings me joy and helps me grow.（使用which引导非限制性定语从句）Upon arriving at the farm, I quickly threw myself into hands-on work in the fields, picking up watermelons and moving them to a warehouse all the morning.（现在分词作伴随状语）