专题08 书面表达（第二期）-2022中考英语逆袭冲刺 好题特快专递（浙江专用）.docx

1、2022中考英语逆袭冲刺 好题特快专递（浙江专用）第二期专题08 书面表达一、话题作文1（2022二模）初中三年给我们留下了很多美好的回忆，三载的花落花开，喜怒哀乐，校园的哪个地方承载了你最多的回忆，何处是你的乐园？又是何处见证了我们的成长？教室、操场、图书馆，又或者是其他地方？请你就“My Paradise（乐园）”结合自身的成长经历写一篇文章，谈谈你最喜欢的那个地方及理由。注意：1. 文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；2. 文本长度 110 词左右。_2（2022浙江绍兴一模）你校英语社团正在开展主题为 “Enjoy Reading”的征文比赛。下表是征文的部分信息，请用英语写一篇短

2、文进行投稿。The importance of readingopen up ones mindReading habithow to readwhat to readFavorite book(s)Reading plan注意：(1)短文必须包括上表所有信息，可适当增加细节；(2)短文不能涉及真实姓名、校名等信息；(3)词数：80-100；(4)短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。短文首句：It s necessary and helpful for everyone to read._二、材料作文3（2022浙江舟山一模）“生命在于运动。”学校英文网站正在开展以“Sports”为主题的征文

3、活动。请你结合自身的情况，用英文写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你经常做的两项运动以及你的收获。内容要点提示如下：What sports you often haveWhat you can get from sportsrunningball gamescyclingmountain climbingswimmingbuild a strong bodyrelax your mindmake new friends注意：（1）表格中的内容要点供选择使用，并适当发挥。（2）文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。（3）词数：80100。短文首句仅供参考，不计入总词数。短文首句：As we know, doing

4、sports is very common in daily life._三、电子邮件4（2022浙江杭州二模）假定你是李平，最近收到来自意大利的交换生Tony的电子邮件。请你阅读后回复。注意：1.词数80左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数：2.回复须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使全文连贯、通顺：3.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。Dear Li Ping,How are you these days? Im so excited to go to Hangzhou as an exchange student soon and we can meet again! And I wa

5、nt to know more about the city. Could you please tell me something about Hangzhou? What do you think of Hangzhou? Is there anywhere interesting or anything delicious? By the way, what can I bring back as gifts when Im leaving?Looking forward to your reply.Yours,TonyDear Tony,_Yours,Li Ping5（2022浙江金华

6、一模）Parkland国际学校将组织同学们参加志愿者社会实践活动(Volunteer Social Practical Program)。假如你是该校学生李华，请在下表中选择一项喜欢的志愿活动，井用英语给负责老师(Mr. Green)写一封邮件。说说你的选择理由或意图以及行动，以供学校统计筛选。要求：1)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。2)字数110左右。ProjectA service-volunteer for farmersA service-volunteer for the elderlyReasons/Purposes*know about the plants and a

7、nimals*learn the farm skills.*know stories about the old*help the older less lonely.Activities*feed animals*water vegetables.*chat with the old*do housework.Dear Mr. Green,Im Li Hua, a 16-year-old girl from Grade 9. Im writing to _Yours sincerely,Li Hua四、书信作文6（2022浙江温州绣山中学二模）假如你是玲玲，远在美国的笔友Kevin对中国传统

8、文化十分感兴趣。恰逢第十九届亚运会纪念币（Asian Games Coins）发布，颇具中国特色。你打算挑选其中一枚作为礼物赠予Kevin，并写一封110词的信介绍礼物及你的选择理由。注意：文中不能出现真实的个人身份信息。开头已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Kevin, Ive known that youre always interested in Chinese traditional culture._Yours, Lingling7（2022浙江温州二模）回首初中生活，总能想起陪伴我们走过这三年的家人或老师。假如你是李华，请你写一封约110词的信向学校英语报投稿，表达自己对家人或老师

9、的感恩。提示要点：warm momentshelp, take care ofmy changesgrow up, make progress注意：文中不能出现真实的个人信息。Dear _,_Love fromLi Hua8（2022浙江温州二模）端午节是我国重要的传统节日之一。21st Century 英文报社现征集端午节这一天（6月3日）的活动方案。假如你是林涛，请给报社编辑Mr. Smith写一封信，介绍这一天的活动方案。活动方案必须包括以下内容。TimeActivitiesReasonsDragon boat raceremember Qu Yuan, Make Zongzitradi

10、tional food, 要求：(1)方案中不得出现真实姓名和校名等相关信息。(2)词数约110词。开头和结尾己给出。不计入总词数。Dear Mr. Smith,I am writing to share my plan of the Dragon Boat Festival._Yours,Lin Tao9（2022浙江台州一模）假如你是李华，美好的初中生活即将结束，在这三年里，你的家人、老师、朋友都陪伴你一起度过了很多难忘的日子。在毕业之际，请你写一封英文感谢信给你的家人、老师或者朋友，感谢他们对你的照顾、帮助、鼓励或者支持。内容包括：1. 表达真诚的谢意；2. 说明感谢的理由；3. 回顾一

11、件具体的令你难忘且感激的事。注意：1. 感谢信内容必须包括以上所有信息，可适当发挥；2. 感谢信中不得出现真实姓名和校名等相关信息；3. 词数：80-100。Dear _,_Yours,Li Hua10（2022浙江湖州二模）假定你是李雷，想要举办户外烧烤 (barbecue) 聚会。请根据请帖中的信息写一封邀请函，邀请你的好朋友Paul。注意：(1)邀请函必须包括请帖已有内容，可适当发挥；(2)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息：(3)词数：80100。BBQ at Sunset ParkCome to Li Leis barbecue party!Date: 7th NovemberMeet

12、 at: Sunset BeachParty starts at: 3:00 p.m.Party ends at: 7:00 p.m.We will. the grass and.We will have a barbecue at 5:30 p.m.Note: If it rains, we will cancel the party.Please reply by 6th November!My telephone number is 586-3279.Dear Paul,_Yours,Li lei参考答案：1例文: My ParadiseDuring the past three yea

13、rs, the laughter of me and my classmates can be heard in every corner of the school, especially in my classroom. So my classroom is truly a paradise in my heart.I can still remember when I first got into the classroom and I first met my classmates. It was just like yesterday. During the three years,

14、 we have become a family. The classmates always bring me a lot of joy and support. In the classroom, we cried sadly together when we lost in the basketball match, and we cheered excitedly when we won the first prize. No matter what happened, we have the same object here: to make our class better. Wi

15、th this goal, we were particularly active in every class, and we were able to learn a lot of knowledge in the classroom. In my mind, the classroom is a paradise full of happiness I will never forget.【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：本题要求我们以“My Paradise”为题，根据自己的经历写一篇文章，介绍承载三年来自己的校园回忆最多的地方，学生们在此基础上，联系实际生活再进行拓展，把文章写得更具体、

16、更充实。2.写作指导：写作时主要采用一般过去时和第一人称来叙述。正文可分为三段式：第一段介绍承载三年来自己的校园回忆最多的地方是哪里；第二段介绍过去的三年在这个地方发生了什么来见证了自己的成长，同时注意选用合适的连词、短语和句型来将内容进行串联和拓展；第三段讲述自己的感受并总结全文。文章做到思路清晰，层次分明，要点齐全；行文要语句通顺，符合逻辑关系；无语法、单词拼写和标点错误。2例文Its necessary and helpful for everyone to read. Reading can not only open up our minds but also helps us ge

17、t more knowledge.In my free time, I often buy books from the bookstore and read books in the library. Before going to bed, I always spend some time reading, which really makes me feel relaxed. Among all kinds of books, I enjoy reading novels best. Journey to the West is my favorite and I want to be

18、a hero like Monkey King. I plan to read more books and Alice in Wonderland will be the next one. I hope everyone can read as much as possible.【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：该题目是命题作文。在写作时应符合文章主题；第一段总领全文，简写阅读的作用；第二段写自己的阅读习惯，阅读爱好等；第三段进行简单总结。2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述；时态采用一般现在时为主；描述细节时，细节应符合文章要求，不可随意减少，可以有适当的补充；描述时应注意逻辑，保证思路清

19、晰。3参考范文：As we know, doing sports is very common in daily life. We can always find some sports that we are interested in or good at.As for me, mountain climbing is my first choice when Im free. One of the main reasons is that I can get close to nature and enjoy the beautiful mountain scenery. Besides

20、, I can fully relax my mind along the way. Another sport I often play is basketball. It helps me to build a strong body. And basketball games always arouse us the competitive spirit as well as a good sense of teamwork. Meanwhile, I can make some new friends when playing basketball.Life lies in movem

21、ent! I believe the more we take part in sports, the more we will benefit from them.【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于材料作文。以“Sports”为题，并结合自身的情况，用英文写一篇短文来谈谈你经常做的两项运动以及你的收获。2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述故事内容；时态采用一般现在时为主；文章开头已给出，写作时，注意承接上文。可以分成三段式写作：第一段点明主题，第二段详细介绍你经常做的两项运动以及你的收获，最后进行总结。写作中注意表达观点时的常用句式，内容上应注意描述的全面性，语言的表述应该符合语法的

22、结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。4例文Dear Tony,Thanks for your mail. How are you? Im glad to hear that you will come to my hometown. Id like to introduce my hometown to you. My hometown is in Hangzhou, Zhejiang Province. It is located in the southeast of China. Youd better take a camera so that you can take some pho

23、tos. Hangzhou is very beautiful. West Lake is the most famous place. It attracts many visitors every year. When you come, Ill show you around it. And I will take you to taste the specials in Hangzhou, such as West Lake Fish, Dongpo Pork and so on. Hangzhou is famous for silk. You can buy it for your

24、 parents when you go back home. I think you will have a good time here. Im looking forward to your coming.Yours,Li Ping【解析】【详解】1. 题干解读：本文要求以李平的名义写一封邮件，针对Tony提出的几个问题需要一一回答，不要遗漏要点，可适当拓展细节。2. 写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称叙述；时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主；文章主要介绍杭州的位置、风景、美食以及特产。在写作时要保持主谓一致性，做到无标点符号和语法错误。5例文Dear Mr. Green,Im Li Hua,

25、 a 16-year-old girl from Grade 9. Im writing to join in Volunteer Social Practical Program in our school.I have a strong interest in working as a service-volunteer for farmers because my grandma has a small garden and I have helped her growing vegetables since I was little. Therefore, I am familiar

26、with some farm skills. Practicing on the farm can help improve my skills and learn more about the plants and animals as well.As a volunteer, I will look after the animals on the farm patiently and feed them with my loving heart. Furthermore, watering vegetables is what I am skilled at.I am looking f

27、orward to volunteering on the farm. And I will spare no effort to offer the best service that is required on the farm.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【解析】【详解】1.题干解析：本文是一篇邮件写作，要求写一封110词左右的英语邮件，说明自己打算选择的志愿活动以及选择的原因和参加之后准备付出的行动。文章开头已给出，要注意上下文衔接。2.写作指导：本文使用第一人称。时态使用一般现在时和一般将来时。文章可以分为四段写作。第一段介绍自己的情况；第二段介绍自己打算参加了活动

28、和原因；第三段，讲述自己参加活动之后的行动。最后一段总结。注意邮件写作的格式，不要出现单词和语法错误。6例文Dear Kevin, Ive known that youre always interested in Chinese traditional culture. As you know, the 19th Asian Games will take place in Hangzhou in 2022, so the government published some Asian Games Coins, which are full of Chinese culture. I wil

29、l choose one for you.I will send you one with a man doing Chinese Kungfu. This coin is made of silver and it looks shiny. I think this coin is best for you to have a better understanding of Chinese culture. First of all, Chinese Kungfu has a long history in China and most of Chinese people can do it

30、. Second, it can remind you to do exercise regularly to keep healthy. Last but not the least, I think Kungfu is loved by the people around the world, so I think it builds a bridge between China and other countries.Hope you can like this coin. Looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Lingling【解析】【详解

31、】1.题干解读：本文主要是从题干中给出的纪念币里挑一个送给朋友，并介绍这个纪念币以及挑选理由，可适当增加细节。2.写作指导：本文以一般现在时为主。第一段说明自己要送给他一个纪念币；第二段介绍自己挑选的是哪个纪念币以及挑选这个纪念币的理由；第三段表达希望。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。7例文Dear Miss Li,Looking back on the past three years, Id like to say thanks to you for helping me with my English. When I was in Grade

32、 7, I was not good at English. I just hid behind my textbook and never said anything in class. Once I did very badly in an English test, and I lost heart. However, you had a patient talk with me and encouraged me to be more active in class. You helped me a lot.Since then, I have worked harder and ma

33、de great progress. I took part in the oral English competition in Grade 9 and won the second place. I was very happy. I feel lucky to be your student. Thank you again. Wish you good luck.Love fromLi Hua【解析】【详解】1. 题干解读：本文要求以“李华”的名义写一封信给老师或家人表达自己的感恩，根据题目讲述自己的经历，表达自己的感恩之情。2. 写作指导：本文以第一人称为主进行叙述；时态采用一般过去

34、时和一般现在时；文章可分为三段式：第一段讲述老师对自己的帮助，用一般过去时。第二段讲述自己在老师的帮助下得到的成长。第三段表示祝福。在写作时要做到无标点符号和语法错误。8参考范文Dear Mr. Smith,I am writing to share my plan of the Dragon Boat Festival.Dragon Boat Festival is the traditional day in China, it is on the 5th day of the 5th lunar month. This year its on 3rd June. On that day

35、21 Century will hold some activities to memorialize Qu Yuan.In the morning, there will be a dragon boat race on Wenruitang River. We hold the race to remember QuYuan. Lots of teams will take part in the race. There will be audiences standing on the river side, watching and yelling for the teams. It

36、is the most exciting matches because all the teams have team work spirit. Its not easy to win the match. Whats more, making zongzi is also thetradition. In the afternoon, people can make zongzi on Shiji Square. People who are good at making zongzi or interested in it will join it. The zongzi they ma

37、de will be given away to the old people in the old peoples house. I think it will be a meaningful day. I hope you will like my plan. Yours,Lin Tao【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求关于端午节活动的写一封信，结合提示内容进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态以一般现在时为主。作文可以分为四段，第一段已经给出；第二段可以从活动内容以及活动由来等方面进行写作；第三段可以从包粽子角度进行写作；第四段收尾。要保证语

38、言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。9One possible version:Dear Mom, Thank you for being with me and helping me all the way through. Whenever I need help, you are always there, supporting me and encouraging me. I still remember those days when I was under too much pressure. At that time, I could hardly eat or sleep well. Y

39、ou took me on trips to get me relaxed, cheered me up with lovely gifts and even helped me with the schoolwork I had left behind. Thanks to you, I recovered quickly and got back to school. I feel so lucky to have you in my life! Thank you again, mom! Yours,Li Hua【解析】【详解】1. 题干解读：本文属于书信写作。根据所给要点写一份感谢信，

40、注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。2. 写作指导：本文采用书信格式进行写作，人称使用第一、第二人称，时态使用一般过去时和一般现在时相结合。首先表达谢意并说明理由，然后描述具体的一件令你难忘且感激的事，最后再次表达真诚的谢意。写作中注意多种句式交替使用。同时注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。10例文Dear Paul,I would like to invite you to the barbecue party at Sunset Beach on November 7th. The party starts at 3 oclock in the afternoon, and we wont go home

41、 until 7:00 p.m. So we have plenty of time playing and chatting together. To have fun, we will fly kites and play games such as chess, word puzzles and cards. Most importantly, barbecue will be at 5:30. Theres no need for you to bring anything, because Im going to prepare all the food and drinks. Please call me by November 6th at 586-3279. By the way, the party will be canceled only if it rains.Yours,Li Lei【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：本文要按邀请函的格式写。内容是根据请帖中的信息写一封邀请函，邀请你的好朋友Paul来参加你的户外烧烤聚会。2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述邀请函的内容；时态采用一般将来时为主，首先介绍这次户外烧烤聚会的开始时间和结束时间及活动地点；其次介绍聚会的活动内容；紧接着介绍聚会的准备工作和联系方式；最后是提醒一下，如果下雨聚会就取消。