专题08 应用文写作（8）-研读近十年高考英语满分书面表达聚焦2023高考.docx

1、研读近十年高考英语满分书面表达聚焦2023高考Part1 应用文写作文（八）1.（2015全国I卷）假定你是李华，你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿，要点如下：1. 栏目介绍。2. 稿件内容；3. 稿件长度：约400词汇4. 交稿日期：6月28日前天注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯的；3. 开头语已为你写好。_【答案】Dear Peter,Id like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper.The “Foreign

2、Cultures” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students. It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries. Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States? And we would especially welcome articles about how Am

3、ericans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students. You can write anything relevant so long as its interesting and informative. 400 words would be fine. Could we have your article before June 28?Im looking forward to hearing from you.Yours,Li Hua【详解】试题分析：本篇书面表达

4、属于英文书信，根据提示信息要求给美国朋友彼得写信约稿，内容是美国节日风俗和中学生生活。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确三个要点：首先，简单介绍校英文报栏目的情况。2、建议Peter介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活。3、稿件的要求及时间。写作时根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。【点睛】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their

5、 home countries.运用了过去分词作后置定语， And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students.运用了宾语从句。此外，文章还使用了大量习语和短语，如be popular among, so long as,look forward to , hear from等。2.（2015四川卷）假如你是李夏。你看到美国留学生Sharon 在网上发贴，.希望有

6、人能帮助她提高普通话（Mandarin）水平，她可以教英语作为回报。请根据以下提示用英语给她写一封电子邮件。1. 表达给她提供帮助的意愿；2. 说明你能胜任辅导的理由；3. 给出讲好普通话的两点建议；4. 提出你学习英语的具体需求。注意：1. 词数120左右，开头语已为你写好；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称；Hi Sharon,This is Li Xia. I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarm_【答案】Hi Sharon,This is Li Xia. I le

7、arned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin. I am quite interested in it . I think Im fit for it. As a student, I have been learning Mandarin for many years. In addition ,I am Chinese, which means Mandarin is a must for me to communicate with others in my daily life. So Im quite conf

8、ident thatI can help you learn Mandarin.Learning Mandarin takes time, so if you want to learn it well ,you should spend much time practicing Mandarin everyday. As the saying goes, practice makes perfect. Besides, you can also read some books in Chinese、see some Chinese films and listen to some Chine

9、se radio programmes. Speaking and listening are very important for a language learning, by which you are sure to make great progress.In your post, you say you can teach English as a reward. It is just what I want. Im eager to improve my English. So, if you allow me to help you learn Mandarin, you ca

10、n also help me improve my English.We can contact each other by video chat every night for half an hour in English and half an hour in Chinese, so that we can improve our oral speaking.Hope for you early reply!Yours SincerelyLi Xia【详解】试题分析：考查提纲类作文。提纲作文在写作时需要注意以下几个方面：首先需要审题。即：审要求、审文体、审人称、审时态。其次，考生要能够抓

11、中心，列要点，列出写作提纲。 写作文时，一定要切题，抓住中心，紧扣要点。然后在体裁明确、中心突出、要点清晰的前提下，考生应该选择自己最熟悉、最有把握的词语、句型，将要点逐条表达出来。最后根据要点选词组句，然后按照篇章结构连句成篇。本篇文章的要点具体，可分成三段写，第一段写要点1、2；第二段写要点3；第三段写要点4，以及希望得到对方的回信。【点睛】本文要点齐全，结构完整。使用多种句式，如定语从句：I am Chinese, which means Mandarin is a must for me to communicate with others in my daily life.、表语从句

12、：It is just what I want.等。还使用了大量短语等。3.（2015重庆卷写作二）Bookcrossing. Com 是一个面向全球的图书分享网站。该网站组织的分享活动有两种参与方式：一是自由分享（wild release），即把书放在指定地点，由其他参与者自由获取；二是定向分享（controlled release），即直接传递给另一位参与者。假设你是李华，请用英文写信申请参加。内容应包括： 表明写信目的 选择一种分享方式 简述作出该选择的理由 希望了解更多信息注意：（1）词数不少于80；（2）在答题卡上做答（3）书信格式及开头已给出（不计入总词数）_【答案】Learnin

13、g that you are organizing this activity to share books worldwide, I am writing to apply for it for the simple reason that I love reading and I own a large number of books.Youve introduced two ways to share books: wild release and controlled release. Of the two, the latter wins my favor. By the means

14、 of controlled release, I only need to deliver books to other participants, not only are books shared but it can build up a bridge connecting readers from different parts of the world as well.If you could provide more specific information, I would be well grateful. Looking forward to your reply.【详解】

15、试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。【点睛】所给范文语言简洁，不拖拉，使用短语：apply for申请；Looking forward to盼望着；Learning that you are organizing this activity to share books wo

16、rldwide, I am writing to apply for it for the simple reason that I love reading and I own a large number of books.这句话运用learning做伴随状语，reason后面跟着一个同位语从句；not only are books shared but it can build up a bridge connecting readers from different parts of the world as well.这个句子not only but also连接两个句子，第一个句子

17、需要用部分倒装；4（2015全国II卷） 假如你是李华，计划和同学去敬老院（nursing home）陪老人们国重阳节（the Double Ninth Festival）。请给外教Lucy写封邮件，邀她一同前往，内容包括：1. 出发及返回时间；2. 活动：包饺子、表演节目等。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 结语已为你写好。_Looking forward to your reply.YoursLi Hua【答案】Dear Lucy, Id like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby n

18、ursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival. It is the day for the elderly in our culture. Well go and make dumplings and cakes with the elderly people there. Well also spend some fun time together singing, dancing and playing games, which we hope will make them happy. We should be back

19、around 4 oclock in the afternoon. If you are able to come with us, please let us know and well wait for you at the gate at 9 in the morning.Looking forward to your reply.YoursLi Hua【详解】试题分析：本篇书面表达属于英文书信，根据提示信息说明邀请Lucy去参加的活动和时间等。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确三个要点：邀请、时间、具体活动。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内

20、进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般将来时态。4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。【点睛】本文结构紧凑，层次分明。Well also spend some fun time together singing, dancing and playing games, which we hope will make them happy.中用了which引导的定语从句和句式spend time doing。此外，还有if从句以及一些短语如invite you to

21、 join us，for a visit to，make dumplings等。5（2015北京卷）假如你是红星中学高三李华，请给你的美国朋友Jim写一封信，告诉他你打算参加龙舟训练营，希望他一起参加，邮件的内容包括：1. 介绍训练营的相关内容（例如：时间，地点，参加者等）；2. 说明你打算参加的原因；3. 询问对方的意向。注意：1. 词数不少于50；2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。提示词：龙舟训练营 Dragon Boat Training CampDear Jim,_Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jim,Im writing to tell you my exciting

22、 plan for the summer holiday. I want to join a Dragon Boat Training Camp. I wonder if youd like to go with me.This camp will open on July 20th, It offers teenagers like you and me a chance to enjoy sports and learn about Chinese culture. If you are interested in it, let me know and Ill send you more

23、 information.Hope to meet you at the training camp this summer.【详解】试题分析：本篇文章重点是李华邀请英国朋友Jim参加龙舟训练营，属于典型的邀请信，只需按照邀请信的写作流程就可轻松写出。即发出邀请 介绍活动(时间，地点，内容，参加原因)期待和感谢。【点睛】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，运用了一些邀请信里常用的句型。如：Im writing to tell you my exciting plan for the summer holiday；I wonder if youd like to go with me.文中注意使用了一般将来

24、时、一般现在时等不同的时态来叙述不同的事情，对时态有较好的把握。6（2015北京卷图画作作文）假如你是红星中学学生李华。根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍在“传统文化进校园“活动中，面向人艺术家学习捏面人的过程。并以”A Day with a Craftsman”为题，给校刊”英语角“写一篇英文稿件。注意：词数不少于60.提示词：一个面团a piece of dough 面人dough figurine _【答案】Last Tuesday, our class invited an old craftsman to teach us how to make dough figurines.When

25、 the craftsman came into the classroom, we gave him a warm welcome and two boys helped him with the tool box. First, he showed us the basic steps and skills of making dough figurines. We stood around him and watched attentively. Then we started to have a try ourselves. The old man walked around and

26、helped us patiently.Finally, we put the figurines we made on the table and took pictures with the old craftsman. Looking at the figurines, we were all very excited.We hope we can have more activities of this kind!【分析】这是一篇图画作文。介绍在“传统文化进校园“活动中，面向人艺术家学习捏面人的过程。【详解】第一幅图细节是手工艺人教大家如何去做捏面人，学生认真聆听。第二幅图最重要的点就

27、是学生能不能找到学生认真聆听这个环节，因为老师教一定能看得出来，但是学生能不能写到学生在听，这应该是一个得分点。第三幅图是一个指导。所以，重点在于一对一这样对应的指导关系。最后一幅图是我们在上课的时候会重点讲的照相，大家很欢乐，做成一个作品。 所以，除了四幅图的要点之外，所以，重点在于一对一这样对应的指导关系。所以写好这样的作文一定要抓住细节，才能得分。还需要注意时态，词汇不要拼写错误，多用复合句式才能体现出亮点。考生切忌在文章开篇犯低级的语法错误，尤其注意时态、单复数及冠词的正确使用。相比于实用性强的应用文来说，情景作文可以在保证要点齐全的前提下适当增加长难句的使用，如对非谓语、三大从句及连

28、词进行灵活运用。关注句式的多样性及用词的准确性对取得该版块的高分会有更大的保障。【点睛】高分句型1 When the craftsman came into the classroom, we gave him a warm welcome and two boys helped him with the tool box.when引导的时间状语从句。高分句型2 Finally, we put the figurines we made on the table and took pictures with the old craftsman.省略that或者which引导的定语从句。7（20

29、15天津卷）假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李津，你校拟向美国友好交流学校的中文班捐赠一批图书。请根据以下提示，写一封邮件与中文班班长Chris联系，并告知将于今年七月赴对方学校参加夏令营时带去赠书。（1）自我介绍；（2）拟捐赠图书的类型、册数、用途等；（3）询问对方的其他需求。注意：（1）词数不少于100；（2）请适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。参考词汇：学生会 the Student UnionDear Chris,_Yours,Li Jin【答案】Dear Chris， I am Li Jin，chairman of the Student Union，from Chenguang Hig

30、h School，the sister school of your school in Tianjin It is my pleasure to tell you the news that our school is planning a book donation in order to help the students of the Chinese Class in your school get a better understanding of the Chinese language and our traditional culture. We will prepare bo

31、oks of many different kinds，such as poetry，fiction，and so onThe 300 books will be brought to your school when we arrive in America for the summer camp this July As monitor of the Chinese Class，what other sorts of books do you think will be needed？Im looking forward to your replyYours，Li Jin【分析】本文为提纲

32、类作文。【详解】本篇书面要求写一封电子邮件。写作的时候要注意以下几点：一、动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。内容要点包括：1.自我介绍及写信目的；2.拟捐赠图书的类型、册数、用途等；3. 询问对方的其他需求； 4告知将于今年七月赴对方学校参加夏令营时带去赠书。二、写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。【点睛】本文行文连贯，结构完整，使用了较多高级句型，如，1.It is my pleasure to tell you the news that our sc

33、hool is planning a book donation in order to help the students of the Chinese Class in your school get a better understanding of the Chinese language and our traditional culture句子里that 引导the news 的同位语从句，解释the news 的内容；is planning 是进行时态表示将来。又如，The 300 books will be brought to your school when we arrive in America for the summer camp this July句子里will be brought 是一般将来时态的被动语态。 等等。