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    1、专题09 读后续写材料分析-2023年新高考英语基础知识过关+题型集训【江苏专用】类型一:人与人之间善良有爱篇阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。There was a rich couple who was throwing a big New Year party at their house. So they went shopping at the market where everything was of high cost and fixed price. They wanted to maintain their

    2、level of standard so they didnt mind paying for it. After purchasing all they needed, they called a porter to carry everything and drop it at their home. The porter who came was of an old age, and looked very unhealthy, and his clothes were torn, and he looked as if he wasnt even able to meet his da

    3、ily needs.They asked the porter about the charges for delivering their goods to their home. The old porter quoted just $20, well below the market price. Yet, the couple argued and bargained with the porter and finally settled for $15. The porter was struggling to make even one times meal so he neede

    4、d anything he could earn.The couple was very happy thinking how well they bargained with the poor porter and paid him $15 in advance and left after giving the porter their address for delivery. They reached their home and one hour passed, and two hours passed, but the porter still didnt deliver thei

    5、r stuff.The wife started to get angry at her husband, “I always tell you not to trust such person, but you never listen to me. I am sure instead of delivering the goods to our home, he must have disappeared with everything. We must immediately go back to the market to inquire and then to the police

    6、station to file the complaint against him.”They both left towards the market. On their way near the market, they saw another porter. They stopped him to inquire about the old porter and noticed that he was carrying their goods in his cart! The angry wife asked him, “Where is that old thief? This is

    7、our goods and he was supposed to deliver them. It seems you poor thieves are stealing our goods and going to sell them.”Paragraph 1:When the porter heard the angry wife asking._Paragraph 2:Upon hearing this, the husband had tears in his eyes, _【范文】Paragraph 1:When the porter heard the angry wife ask

    8、ing, he turned back. The porter replied, “Madam, please calm down. Im not a thief. That poor old man was sick since last month. He couldnt earn enough to even have a single meal of the day. Therefore, he fell down and handed me $15, saying, I have taken an advance for this delivery, and you deliver

    9、the goods to the couples home. Madam, he was poor and hungry, but he was an honest man. I was just on the way to completing the old mans last delivery to your home.”Paragraph 2:Upon hearing this, the husband had tears in his eyes, and the wife felt so ashamed that she had no courage to look her husb

    10、and in the eyes. Suddenly she rushed to the market. Half an hour later, the wife came back with some food in her hand. She passed the food on to the porter, and said sorry to the porter, saying that she shouldnt suspect them, and took them as thieves. At last, the porter took the goods to their hous

    11、e, and the rich couple changed their attitude to the man like the porter.【解析】通过阅读所给文章可知,一对富人夫妇为了准备新年聚会去市场不惜高价买了许多物品,然后雇佣了一个搬运工把这些物品运回家。搬运工是一个年老体弱生活拮据的人,他要价$20低于市场价,而富人夫妇讨价还价后只给$15。富人夫妇高兴地回家等着老人把物品送来,却迟迟不见老人的身影。妻子认为上了老人的当,一定老人把他们的物品卖掉了。回去找老人时却发现他们的物品在另外一个搬运工的车上。续写部分分为两段,第一段开头是:当搬运工听到生气的妻子问题时,所以应该写他讲述

    12、的实情,老人病了又吃不上饭,这次摔倒了,他把$15给了这个搬运工,请求他把物品送到富人家。第二段开头是:丈夫听了,眼里含着泪水,。下文应该写富人夫妇被老人感动,行动和态度都发生了改变。阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 A boy named Ali had a large and harmonious family, happily living with his sisters,parents and grandmother. His grandmother loved everyone a lot and was respected by ll f

    13、amily members. She was very old,yet sometimes she would recall things from her past and share with them Sometimes they would believe her but at other times hey would think that Granny might be mixing up the facts due to her old age.One day, when Ali was in school, suddenly while knitting(编织),Granny

    14、remembered something and she couldnt contain her emotions so she got up to tell her sonAlis father. She walked as fast as she could to his room and said,You always asked about my birth date but do you know today is the day when I was born.She looked at her son with an excited expression, expecting a

    15、n immediate response.However, her son wondered how she could remember her date of birth in this old age when she forgot so many other things, so he didnt pay much attention to this. Disappointed at her sons reaction, Granny then went to Alis mother and Alis sister, but like Alis father,nobody believ

    16、ed her.Disheartened,she went and sat in the terrace(庭院).When Ali returned from his school, he found his grandmother sitting alone with a sad expression. Ali asked his granny about the matter, but she said there was nothing to worry about. After a lot of persuasion she revealed what was troubling her

    17、nobody seemed to care that it was her birthday today!After hearing what Granny said,Ali thought of a plan.Purely by chance,some of Alis friends were playing nearby so he shared his plan with them.注意1.续写词数应为 150 左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。His friends were all willing to help Ali achieve what he planned.A

    18、li was so happy to see his granny with tears of joy shining in her eyes.【答案】His friends were all willing to help Ali achieve what he planned.With Ali acting as the director, stage designer and host, preparation for a performance stage was soon finished. Afterwards, a series of eye-catching performan

    19、ces, ranging from dancing, crosstalk, acrobatics and magic tricks were given by Alis friends. By this time, the audience had expanded from granny to Alis whole family, all of whom gave thunderous applause to the carefully staged shows. Towards the end, a huge banner saying Happy Birthday, granny! wa

    20、s put up on the central stage, which pushed the warm and loving atmosphere to its peak.Ali was so happy to see his granny with tears of joy shining in her eyes.“For all my life, I have never spent my birthday with so many relatives and lovely kids. Thank you, Ali and all of you kids.” Granny stammer

    21、ed, choking up with gratitude and bliss. “Never mind, granny!” Ali grinned, knowing deep down that the real reason for grannys tears was not the party itself, but love, care and trust from her family members, which she believed were gone when they reacted indifferently to her made-up birthday.【解析】读后

    22、续写类型中的善良有爱和冲突模式的结合体。关键是Ali想到用什么方法去让granny觉得自己被人在乎,被人相信,被人爱。大家可以写Ali和他的朋友们为granny准备了一场精湛的演出,或者一个美味可口的蛋糕,或者一桌丰盛的晚宴,同时也让Ali一家人都参与进来,同庆奶奶的生日,让奶奶觉得原来自己是多么受大家的爱戴和信任。第一段1、Ali和朋友们忙着准备舞台和各种道具。2、Ali和朋友们给出了精湛的演出,Ali做主持人,朋友们有的表演了唱歌,跳舞,杂技,魔术,相声,引得了奶奶和家人们的阵阵掌声。3、在节目的最后,Ali和朋友们精心准备了一个大大的横幅,上面写着“祝福奶奶生日快乐”第二段1、奶奶深受感

    23、动的原因是,这么多年来,她从来没有过过一个生日,而且是这么丰富有趣的生日,有这么多人陪伴的生日。2、奶奶感动的另一个深层次原因在于原来她一直被她的家人相信,在乎和爱。3、一群人在欢乐的晚宴中围绕着寿星奶奶说说笑笑,结束了奶奶毕生难忘的一天。阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。On May 22, 2011, Joplin Missouri was struck by one of the deadliest tornadoes in recorded history. At first, many residents, including me, felt

    24、 hopeless. It seemed like the end of the world. Faced with confusion, uncertainly, loss and homelessness, we looked for any light to lead us out of the darkness.The home of my parents, who were in their eighties, was severely damaged. Their roof was blown away, and the roof from a nearby school cras

    25、hed into the front of their house. In seconds, the house they had lived in for years became impossible to live in.As soon as my parents safely moved, I tried to determine if any of their remaining possessions could be saved. Regrettably, I discovered their roof, before departing for parts unknown, h

    26、ad dropped massive amounts of fiberglass insulation. This pink material made everything appear to be coated in cotton candy, but the glass fibers within it had ruined most of their furniture and clothing.My parents had hoped, however, that I might be able to save some of their books and pictures. Un

    27、fortunately, every time I tried to remove a photo album from a drawer of a book from a shelf, the non - stop rain wet what I was hying to protect. Between the rain and the glass fibers, it all seemed hopeless.Trying to fight off hopelessness, I took a minute to stand in what was left of my parents b

    28、edroom. When I looked up through their non-existent proof, I saw gray clouds floating above me, and suddenly everything seemed so strange. Rain coated my upturned face, flooded my eyes, and flowed into my mouth. Overwhelmed, I felt like I was drowning, I needed fresh air, so I ran outside.Standing o

    29、n my parents front yard in the rain, I could breathe better but I still had an overwhelming sense of hopelessness.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Suddenly, from out of nowhere, a thin, elderly man appeared at myside._I watched him through the rain until I remembered I was supposed to be saving

    30、my parents prized possessions._【答案】Para 1:Suddenly, from out of nowhere, a thin, elderly man appeared at my side. Shocked, I took a step back, but he said in a comforting voice, “Everything is going to be alright.” He told me he heard about the disaster and came to help. Seeing everything inside was

    31、 going to be ruined, he went through the rain toward the house, trying to get a cover over the house. He climbed up to the roof, pulled out a cutting tool to cut off pieces of rubbery-looking material. Working swiftly, he fastened these pieces to the remaining roof.Para 2:I watched him through the r

    32、ain until I remembered I was supposed to be saving my parents prized possessions. I went back inside and found some towels and plastic bags in a cupboard. Using the towels to dry off several photo albums and books, I placed these treasured items into the plastic bags for protection from the rain. Su

    33、ddenly, I realized it was no longer raining in the house. Looking up, I saw rubbery-looking material covering the roof. Hed done it. I was so grateful for his help because now I could save more of my parents cherished possessions. My parents were so grateful to have those precious memorials. The man

    34、 was a light in the darkness.【解析】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者所在地方遭遇了严重的龙卷风,造成大量房屋被毁,很多人员受伤,作者感到很绝望。作者年迈的父母的房屋也被严重的破坏,不能居住。在父母安全转移后,作者回到父母房子处想找回一些有意义的东西。但是房子里的很多东西被破坏了。作者想拿回一些书和照片,但是雨水淋湿了他想要拿走的东西,作者感到了深深地绝望,然后他跑到了院子里开始保护父母留下的财产。1.段落续写:由第一段首句内容“突然,不知从哪里冒出一个瘦弱的老人出现在我身边。”可知,第一段可描写这位老人安慰并且帮助了作者。由第二段首句内容“我在雨中看着他,直到我想

    35、起我应该去保存我父母珍贵的财产。”可知,第二段可描写作者在老人帮助下想办法拿回并保护父母的东西,作者很感激这位老人给自己的帮助和希望。2.续写线索:老人冒雨帮忙作者回到房里作者保护书和相册老人盖住了屋顶保护了更多东西我们很感激阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。The 26-year-old mother stared down at her son who was dying of terminal leukemia(白血病). Although her heart was filled with sadness, she also had a stro

    36、ng feeling of determination. Like any parent, she wanted her son to grow up and fulfill all his dreams. Now that was no longer possible. The leukemia would see to that.But she still wanted her sons dreams to come true. She took her sons hand and asked, “Bopsy, did you ever think about what you wante

    37、d to be once you grew up? Did you ever dream and wish what you would do youre your life?”“Mommy, I always wanted to be a fireman when I grew up.” Mom smiled back and said. “Lets see if we can make your wish come true.”Later that day she went to her local fire department in Phoenix, Arizona, where sh

    38、e met Fireman Bob, who had a heart as big as Phoenix. She explained her sons final wish and asked if it might be possible to give her six-year-old son a ride around the block on a fire engine.Fireman Bob said, “Look, we can do better than that. If youll have your son ready at seven oclock Wednesday

    39、morning, well make him an honorary fireman for the whole day. He can come down to the fire station, eat with us, go out on all the fire calls, the whole nine yards! “And if youll give us his sizes, well get a real fire uniform for him, with a real fire hat-not a toy one -with the emblem(徽章) of the P

    40、hoenix Fire Department on it, a yellow slicker(防水衣) like we wear and rubber boots. Theyre all produced right here in Phoenix, so we can get them fast”Three days later Fireman Bob picked up Bopsy, dressed him in his fire uniform and escorted(护送) him from his hospital bed to the waiting hook and ladde

    41、r truck. Bopsy got to sit on the back of the truck and help steer it back to the fire station. He was in heaven.注意:1, 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2, 续写部分分为两段, 每段的开头语已经为你写好。Paragraph 1:Yet finally, one night his condition began getting worse dramatically. _Paragraph 2:The chief replied, “We can do better than th

    42、at. _【答案】Yet finally, one night his condition began getting worse dramatically. The head nurse, who believed in the hospice concept that no one should die alone, began to call the family members to the hospital. Then she remembered the day Bopsy had spent as a fireman, so she called the Fire Chief a

    43、nd asked if it would be possible to send a fireman in uniform to the hospital to be with Bopsy as he made his transition.The chief replied, “We can do better than that. Well be there in five minutes.” About five minutes later a hook and ladder truck arrived at the hospital, extended its ladder up to

    44、 Bopsys third floor open window and five firefighters climbed up the ladder to Bopsys room. In one touching moment, Bopsy looked up at the fire chief and said. “Chief, am I really a fireman now?” “Yes, Bopsy, you are a fireman now.” the chief said. With those words, Bopsy smiled and closed his eyes

    45、one last time. He passed away the next morning.【解析】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了一个身患白血病的男孩,他的母亲想让自己的孩子完成他的梦想,她恳求消防员鲍勃帮助自己的儿子,鲍勃同意了,后来,男孩病发,孩子母亲邀请了鲍勃,鲍勃安排消防队圆了男孩的梦想的故事。1.段落续写:由第一段首句内容“然而,有一天晚上,他的病情急剧恶化。”可知,第一段可描写护士的安排。由第二段首句内容“首长回答说:“我们可以做得更好。”可知,第二段可描写消防员送他离开的场景。2.续写线索:病情恶化护士安排请求帮助满足来到医院男孩离开阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两

    46、段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。“Once there was a ship travelling on the tough sea and on the ship there was a pair of couple. All of a sudden, the ship met with an accident and the couple had no choice but to run to the life boat without delay. After reaching there, they realized that there was space only for one pe

    47、rson. At that very moment, the husband pushed his wife behind him and jumped onto the lifeboat himself, leaving his wife standing on the sinking ship, shouting something desperately to her husband eyes filled with tears.”The teacher stopped her story-telling and asked her students, “Guys, guess what

    48、 it was that she shouted.”Most students answered. “I hate you!”After listening to all this reply, the teacher glanced through the whole class again and noticed that there was a boy sitting silently throughout. Then she asked him the same question.The boy answered, “I believe she would have shouted-T

    49、ake care of our child.”Listening to his remarks, the teacher was surprised and asked the boy doubtfully. “Have you heard of this story before?”Shaking his head, the boy said softly and sadly, “No, I havent. But thats what my mother said to my father before she died of a deadly disease.”Moved and fee

    50、ling sad, the teacher replied. “Your answer is absolutely right!”Then she continued, “Lets take up the story. The ship sank eventually and the husband went home and brought up their daughter alone. Many years later after the death of the man, their daughter was tidying up all his belongings when she

    51、 found his diary. In his diary she found that when her parents were on the ship, her mother had already been diagnosed (诊断) with advanced illness and at the critical moment, the father rushed to the only chance of survival.”注意:1. 续写词数应为150左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。In his diary, the man mentioned he wi

    52、shed to sink to the ocean with his wife but for their daughter he had to live. _The story was finished and the class was silent._【答案】In his diary, the man mentioned he wished to sink to the ocean with his wife but for their daughter he had to live. Without him, their baby daughter would become an or

    53、phan. After drowning himself in sorrow for a short time, he uplifted himself and learned how to raise baby. Whenever faced with hardships, he would inspire himself with his wife words“Take care of our child.” Seeing the little girl grow into a sunny, pretty girl with double love from both parents, t

    54、he man knew he made it to keep his promise.The story was finished and the class was silent. Nobody talked or laughed as usual. Instead, it seemed that every student was lost in deep thought, tasting the moving life story. The teacher was sure that the students were reflecting on their replies and th

    55、at they had understood the moral of the story. Of the Good and Evil in this world, there are hidden secrets behind them. So we should not really focus on the surface and judge anyone without understanding them first. Put yourself in others shoes and then you can really understand their behavior.【解析】

    56、续写部分分为两段:第一段开头是:在他的日记中,他提到他希望和妻子一起沉入大海,但为了他们的女儿,他必须活下去。接下来可以写没有他,他们的宝贝女儿会变成孤儿。在短暂的悲伤之后,他提升了自己,学会了如何抚养孩子。每当遇到困难时,他都会用妻子的话激励自己“照顾好我们的孩子。”看着小女孩成长为一个阳光明媚、漂亮可爱、受到父母双爱的女孩,这个男人知道他这样做是为了履行自己的诺言。第二段的开头是:故事讲完了,全班安静下来。接下来可以写没有人像往常一样说话或大笑。相反,每个学生似乎都陷入了沉思,品味着动人的人生故事。老师确信学生们正在反思他们的回答,并且他们已经理解了这个故事的寓意。这个世界上的善与恶,背后

    57、都隐藏着秘密。所以我们不应该只关注表面,在不了解任何人之前就对他们进行评判。设身处地为别人着想,你就能真正理解他们的行为。阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Just after New Years,before school vacation ended.I went out for a walk.It was a walk Id been meaning to take ever since we moved to the house.I took my camera-the first time Id taken my camera out since

    58、 we came to the country-and went, dressed in my down jacket and wearing heavy boots.I walked toward the seemingly abandoned house that I could see across the fields from the upstairs window.A truck was parked at the end of the road,beside a tiny.weather-beaten house.There was smoke coming out of the

    59、 chimney,and curtains in the two little windows on either side of the door.A dog was in the yard,who barked when he saw me coming.And beside the truck-no,actually in the truck,or at least with his head inside it,was a man.“Hi,I called.It would have been silly to turn around and start walking home wi

    60、thout saying anything,even though Ive promised my parents all my life that I would never talk to strange men.He lifted out his head,a gray head,smiled-a nice smile-and said,Miss Chalmers.Im glad youve come to visit.“Meg,I said.I was puzzled.How did he know who I was?For Margaret?he asked,coming over

    61、 and shaking my hand.Forgive me.My hands are very dirty.My battery dies in this cold weather.How did you know my name was Chalmers?He wiped his hands on a towel that was hanging from the door handle of the truck.My dear,I apologize.I have not even introduced myself.My name is Will Banks.And its much

    62、 too cold to stand out here.Your feet must be frozen,even in those boots.Come inside,and Ill make us each a cup of tea. And Ill tell you how I know your name.”I stood unmoved.He saw me hesitate,and smiled.Meg,he said,“Im seventy years old. Completely harmless,even to a beautiful young girl like you.

    63、Come on in and keep me company for a bit,and get warm. I laughed,because he knew what I was thinking,and very few people ever know what Im thinking. Then I went in his house.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。He took my jacket and hung it up with his,and poured tea into two thick pottery mugs._Its

    64、 nice to have a new friend,like Will._【答案】He took my jacket and hung it up with his.and poured tea into two thick pottery mugs.After we sat at the table,Will told me the whole story.The house my family was living in was actually built by his grandfather.He was born,raised and married in that house.A

    65、lter his Margaret died,he moved to this small house.When he heard my parents were looking for a place,he offered the house to them.He thought it was a perfect place for a writer like my father-the peace there stimulated imagination.He said again that he was glad Id come to visit.Its nice to have a n

    66、ew friend,like Will. I suggested taking pictures of him.My dear,he said, straightening his shoulders and buttoning the top button of his shirt.I would be honored.The soft light was coming in through the kitchen window onto his face.He sat right there,smiling and talking.I just shot quickly.Years lat

    67、er,those pictures still brought back the warm memories of that day.【解析】本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知,作者搬家后第一次出去散步,在一个小木屋遇见了70多岁的Will Banks,Will Banks在打招呼时喊出了作者的名字,但是作者却不认识他,Will Banks邀请作者进屋喝杯茶,顺便讲述他为什么知道作者的名字。续写部分分为两段,第一段开头是:他拿着我的夹克衫和他的挂在一起,向两个厚陶杯里倒茶,所以应该写进屋后的情况,即Will Banks向作者讲述是如何得知作者的名字的;第二段开头是:有一个像Will这

    68、样的朋友还不错,本段应该作者听了Will讲述的故事后,把Will当成在这个陌生国家的朋友,提议给他拍些照片,多年后,这些照片仍能让作者想起那些温暖的回忆。阅读下面材料。根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Joel stared at the ground. Rather, he stared at what was lying on the ground:a robotic glove. It was made of metal, with black and yellow paint. Joel looked around his backyard. How did

    69、a robotic glove end up next to his dads vegetable garden?In any case, Joel had found it. And no one else was around.That meant only one thing: finders keepers. Wasnt that how finders keepers worked? If you found something and couldnt find the owner, it was yours.The robotic glove was now Joels. Pick

    70、ing up the glove. Joel realized it wasnt as heavy as he expected it would be. Even though it was much bigger than his own hand, he decided to try it on.He slipped his hand inside and felt the machine come to life. It beeped(发哔哔声)three times. Joel moved his fingers, and the robot fingers moved too. J

    71、oel walked over to a large tree branch that had fallen in his yard and wrapped the robotic fingers around it. He lifted the branch. It should have been heavy, but with the glove it was no heavier than a small branch.He couldnt believe it. Maybe it was a kind of antigravity machine reported in the ne

    72、wspaper.Now, what was he going to do with it?Joels mom was inside rearranging the furniture. He could walk in and say “Do you need a hand with that?” before easily picking up the couch and setting it somewhere else.At the library, he could say “Let me help” and carry in a tall stack of boxes filled

    73、with books. At the park, he could say “How about we eat lunch over there?” and carry the picnic table to a shady spot.Everything would feel as light as a pencil. Hed feel like a superhero.But first, he wanted to show his dad what hed found. He started running toward the front yard. Thats when he hea

    74、rd someone call, “Has anyone seen my robotic glove?” Joel stopped short.Near the garage, his dad was talking to their new next-door neighbor, Mr. Shore.“I havent seen a robotic glove,” Joels dad said.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右:2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Joels eyes widened when he realized the glove belonged to Mr. S

    75、hore._Just then, Joels mom called out, “Help me move the couch!”_【答案】Joels eyes widened when he realized the glove belonged to Mr. Shore. Staring at it, he felt caught in a dilemma, though he knew finders keepers didnt work if you found the owner. However, seeing the disappointment on Mr. Shores fac

    76、e, he took a deep breath and called out, “I found it!” Mr. Shores face lit up with relief. Joel ran over, took off the glove, and gave it to his neighbor. “I found it in the backyard,” Joel said. “I tried it on and I could lift a huge branch. Its amazing.” (81 words)Just then, Joels mom called out,

    77、“Help me move the couch!” He hesitated because without the glove, his dreams of being a superhero faded away. He felt so upset. Everyone looked at each otherand then everyone looked at the glove. Mr. Shore held it out to Joel with a giant smile. “Would you like to use it?” “Yes, please.” Joels smile

    78、 was as big as Mr. Shores. He slipped on the glove and the couch was as light as a pencil. Joel felt like a superhero again! (77 words)【解析】本文以人物线索展开,讲述了Joel在爸爸的蔬菜园中发现了一个机器手套,在找不到失主后,他认为可以将其据为己有,在尝试戴上手套后,繁重的活变得十分轻松,他认为他可以做很多事情。在得知新邻居Shore先生正在寻找自己丢失的手套时,Joel虽然十分不舍将手套还回去,但是最终还是物归原主,并且借助Shore先生借给他的手套,帮助

    79、妈妈移动沙发的故事。1.段落续写:由第一段首句内容“当乔尔意识到手套是肖尔先生的时候,他的眼睛睁得大大的。”可知,第一段可描写Joel虽然不舍手套,但仍然将手套还了回去。由第二段首句内容“就在这时,乔尔的妈妈喊道:帮我搬一下沙发!”可知,第二段可描写Shore先生将手套借给Joel,Joel帮忙移动了沙发。2.续写线索:陷入两难还手套妈妈要求帮忙Shore先生借手套成功帮忙移动沙发阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。There Are No VansTo me, what Thanksgiving really means is giving good thanks,

    80、not eating turkey.By the time I was 18 I had created my Thanksgiving ritual (惯例).I would go out shopping and buy enough food for one or two families.Then I would dress like a delivery boy, go to the poorest neighborhood and just knock on a door, and would always include a note saying “All that I ask

    81、 in return is that you take good enough care of yourself so that someday you can do the same thing for someone else.” I have received more from this annual ritual than I have from any amount of money Ive ever earned, especially one such experience in New York City.Several years ago I was in New York

    82、 City with my newly married wife during Thanksgiving.She was sad because we were not with our family.Normally she would be home decorating the house for Christmas, but we were stuck here in a hotel room.I said, “Honey, look, why dont we decorate some lives today instead of some trees?” When I told h

    83、er what I always do on Thanksgiving, she got excited.I said, “Lets go someplace where we can really appreciate who we are, what we are able to do and what we can really give.Lets go to the poor neighborhood Harlem and feed some people there in need.Well go buy enough food for six or seven families f

    84、or 30 days.Weve got enough.Lets go do it!”We started by getting a van (货车), but there seemed no vans in all of New York City.The rent-a-car places were all out of vans.My wife was disappointed, and I said, “Look, the bottom line is that if we want something, we can make it happen! All we have to do

    85、is take action.There are plenty of vans here in New York City.Look down at the street.Do you see all those vans? Lets go get one!” My wife agreed and we took action.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:We tried stopping vans as they we

    86、re driving down the street._Paragraph 2:Eventually a van drove up and the driver said yes._【答案】We tried stopping vans as they were driving down the street. I learned something about New York drivers that day: They dont stop; they speed up. Wed go over, knock on the window and the driver would roll i

    87、t down, looking at us in alarm, and Id ask if he would drive us to Harlem so we could help some people. Every time the driver would look away quickly, furiously roll up the window and pull away without saying anything. My wife was ready to give up, but I said, “Its the law of averages:somebody is go

    88、ing to say yes.”Eventually a van drove up and the driver said yes.We were wild with joy and climbed onto the van. Upon arrival, he led us to a store where we bought lots of food and some baskets. Together we packed them up, carried them onto the van and went to buildings where there were even people

    89、 living without electricity.It was a truly fulfilling experience to make even a small difference. Miracles like this happen every dayeven in a city where “there are no vans.”【解析】通过阅读所给文章可知,上文提到了作者每当感恩节时,就会出去购物,为一两个家庭买足够的食物,然后穿得像一个送报员,去最贫穷的社区敲门,还总是附上一张纸条。然而几年前,作者和新婚的妻子在纽约过感恩节时,被困在了酒店,妻子提议去贫穷的哈莱姆区,给那里

    90、一些需要帮助的人提供食物。但是他们发现似乎整个纽约都弄不到一辆货车,妻子很失望,但是提议去下面的接到拦一辆货车。续写部分分为两段。第一段开头是:我们试着拦住沿街行驶的货车。所以后文应该是讲述作者和妻子在路边拦货车的经过,他们被许多司机拒绝了;第二段开头是:最后一辆货车开了过来,司机答应了。本段应该写作者和妻子如何拦到了车,去买了许多东西送给穷人,作者认为这是一个真正令人满意的经历,即使是一个小的改变。这样的奇迹每天都在发生即使是在一个“没有货车”的城市。阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Some of my earliest memories invol

    91、ve silting with my dad in his study every night when he came home from the office. Id watch as he put his personal items away: his watch, wallet, comb and car keys would always occupy the same spot on the table every time. It was as if he could see invisible lines drawn specifically for these things

    92、, not a centimetre more or less.Dads comb was jade green. I heard he bought it when he married Mum, which made the comb two years older than I was. Every night, he would smile, hand me the comb and say: “Be a good girl and help Daddy clean it, OK?”I was more than happy to do it. At age five this ord

    93、inary task brought me such joy. I would excitedly tum the tap on, then brush the comb with a used toothbrush as hard as I could. Satisfied that Id done a good job, I would proudly return die comb to Dad. He would smile at me, and place the comb on top of his wallet.About two years later, Dad left hi

    94、s sales job and started his own wholesale business. I started primary school. That was when things started to change. Dads business wasnt doing so well, and our stable life started getting shaky. He didnt come home as much as he used to - just a couple of times a week. And when he did come home, it

    95、was always late and Id already be in bed. I started to get mad. Why didnt he listen to Mum and just stick to his old job? Why take the risk and place the whole family in trouble? Over the years, I stopped waiting for him to come home, and stopped going downstairs to check on him.Today, Im no longer

    96、a kid. Now 28, I ve graduated from college and got a job. Dads business has also started to get back on track. Things are better now. Yet the uncomfortable silence between Dad and me continued.注意:1. 续写词数应为150左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Two days before my birthday last year, Dad came home early._When I p

    97、assed the clean comb back to Dad, I noticed the wrinkles next to his eyes._【答案】Two days before my birthday last year, Dad came home early. As usual, I helped him carry his bags into his study. When I turned to leave, he said: “Hey, would you like to help me clean my comb? Its been a while since I la

    98、st cleaned.” It hit me then why, as a child, helping my dad clean his comb was such a joy. That routine meant that my dad was home early to spend the evening with Mum and I. It meant he would watch TV with us or play a few video games with me. It meant a happy and loving family.When I passed the cle

    99、an comb back to Dad, I noticed the wrinkles next to his eyes. They are more noticeable when he smiles, but his smile is still as heartwarming as before. The smile of a father who just wants a good life for his family. Dad carefully places his comb on top of his wallet. After so many years, he still

    100、organizes his personal items in the same care fill way. I guess some things never change. And for that. Im glad.【解析】本文以时间为线索,讲述了作者小时候很喜欢等父亲下班,帮父亲清理他的梳子。但是后来父亲自己创业,初期艰难,便再也没有经常很早回家,和作者之间的亲子互动也少了很多。作者对此心怀怨念。在作者28岁时,父亲和作者之间解开了心结。由第一段首句内容“去年我生日的前两天,爸爸提早回家了。”可知,第一段可描写作者父亲很早回到家,久违地让作者为他清理梳子,作者有很大的触动。由第二段首

    101、句内容“当我把干净的梳子递给爸爸时,我注意到他眼睛旁边的皱纹。”可知,第二段可描写作者看到父亲的皱纹,理解了他的辛苦和对家的责任,并且发现一切都没有变。续写线索:要求清理梳子引起触动理解父亲归置东西感悟阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使其构成一篇完整的短文。“I hate them! I really hate them! shouted Tom angrily.Tara and Mike looked at their friend.They couldnt believe it.He was really furious!“Andy is OK now, said Tar

    102、a, trying to calm Tom down.The three friends were in the park after school.They were talking about their friend Andy.Andy was the youngest in the class and today two bullies (欺凌者) pushed him against a locker and hurt him.Andy fell and cut his head.Now he has five stitches (缝针) in his forehead.Their

    103、school was a nice, peaceful place until Brian and Mark arrived a few months ago.Brian and Mark were bullies and their favorite trouble spot was the locker room.That morning their victim was Andy, maybe because he was smaller and younger than everyone else in the class.The teachers knew that there we

    104、re some bullying incidents at school.But most kids didnt want to report the incidents.So bullying at their school wasnt an“official problem.During the incident Andy cut his head.As soon as the bullies saw the blood, they disappeared.Andy called for help and a teacher came and took him straight to th

    105、e hospital.But Andy didnt tell the teacher about the bullies.When the head teacher asked him, he simply said,“I fell and cut my head “Brian and Mark must pay! repeated Tom.He was walking around in circles and hitting the palm of his left hand with his right fist.“Cant you see? You are behaving like

    106、the bullies, Tara said sadly.Mike looked at Tom, too, and he knew Tom very well, Tom hated violence.“bullying is not cool,”said Mike, waving his arms like he was dancing.“We have to tell someone about this, said Tara.“Andy was hurt.But right now, Tom had other things on his mind.He not only hated th

    107、e bullies but also hated violence.He was in a dilemma一he wanted to fight Brian and Mark but he didnt want to fight with the bullies by violence.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150 左右:2.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好。Paragraph1:“What can we do? Tom and his friends decided to find a way out.Paragraph2:The three friends started

    108、to put their anti-bully plan into practice.【答案】“What can we do?” Tom and his friends decided to find a way out.It seemed that they had to solve the problem in a sensible and civilized way.“Listen guys,” said Tom.“Ive got a plan.” “What is it?” asked both Tara and Mike with interest.“We can send mess

    109、ages to our friends and ask them to re-send the text to someone else.In this way, we can create a network.” said Tom.The three friends talked about this idea for the whole afternoon and their idea gradually turned into a solid plan.The three friends started to put their anti-bully plan into practice

    110、.Tom wrote a new message on his Facebook, which is a great way of communicating with different people.All the people were impressed with their plan and wanted to stop the bullies for good.One day when Brian and Mark made their way out of school, two police officers went over to them and took them in

    111、to the police car.Tom and his friends learned something importantyou are never too young to make a difference. (156words)【解析】本文以故事的发展为线索展开,讲述了在布莱恩和马克没来之前,学校一直是一个安静的友好的地方,但是他们带来了校园欺凌,汤姆和他的朋友们决定想办法以明智和文明的方式来解决这个问题。1.段落续写:由第一段首句内容“ 我们能做什么?汤姆和他的朋友们决定想出办法。”可知,第一段可描写汤姆和他的朋友们想出的具体办法。由第二段首句内容“这三个朋友开始实施他们的反欺

    112、凌计划。”可知,第二段可描写这三个朋友实施计划的过程和结果。2.续写线索:制定计划实施计划计划的结果感悟阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一片完整的短文。Jack couldnt believe it when he saw them. The trainers (运动鞋) were on top of a cardboard box, next to a pile of rubbish bins. And they look really good and brand new. He peered inside the trainers and found they

    113、were just his size. Jack cried out, “Why would anyone throw them away?” Anna shrugged. Anna was his best friend, but Jack didnt expect her to understand. She knew that he liked running and she even helped by timing him when he ran around the park. But Jack didnt just like running-he was crazy about

    114、it.He unzipped his school bag and put the trainers into his bag. “Its the Area Cross-Country Championships in two weeks,” he said. “Ill never do well in my worn old trainers. These will give me a chance.”Anna nodded. She knew how important the Championships were to Jack. Five runners were selected f

    115、rom each school in the area. Jack hadnt been chosen, but then one of the runners had gone to hospital. So they picked Jack to be his replacement in the race. Jack knew he had no chance of beating Beadle, the best runner in the school. However, he would be happy if he just did okay in the race-he did

    116、nt want to let himself down.Much to their surprise, something unusual happened when Jack put on the trainers. Usually Jack set out at a light jog at first when he practised running. But this time he reached top speed straight away. He didnt plan it-it just happened. It felt as if he was running on a

    117、ir. He zoomed round the park and kept picking up sped. In fact he just had to relax and the trainers did the running. However, Anna felt really upset. She knew no pair of normal trainers could make such a difference. Anna shook her head, “You shouldnt wear them in the race. It wont be YOU who wins,

    118、will it? Anyone could win if they wore those trainers.” But Jack wouldnt listen. “I wont give them up. These trainers are my only chance to win that Championship. I dont need your help!” he shouted. With that he turned and ran off like a speeding train.注意:1、读写词数应为150左右;2、请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。He was eve

    119、n faster with each practice, but he didnt feel happy._I was time for the big race and the organizer called the runners to the starting line._【答案】He was even faster with each practice, but he didnt feel happy. Annas words echoed in his mind: “It wont be YOU who wins It wont prove anything.” Jake trud

    120、ged back to school. He thought she had been right - it wouldnt mean anything to win by using the trainers. He would run the race in his battered old trainers.I was time for the big race and the organizer called the runners to the starting line. The whistle blew and the race began! lt was tough -Jack

    121、 had spent so long running in the amazing trainers that real running was hard work. After the first lap he was near the back, and his legs ached. He forced himself to go faster. After the third lap, Jack was around the middle of the pack. The fourth lap was the hardest yet. He overtook a few runners

    122、. Jacks whole body ached, not just his legs. However, at last Jack crossed the line. He was exhausted, but he felt please with himself as well.【解析】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了Jack非常喜欢跑步,偶然地他获得一双运动鞋,穿上可以毫不费力地跑得很快,但是朋友安娜却认为,任何人穿上这双鞋都会跑得很快,不是Jack自己的能力,但是Jack不愿意听安娜的,转身穿着跑鞋跑走了。1.段落续写:由第一段首句内容“随着每一次的训练,他跑得更快了,但是他不快乐。”可

    123、知,第一段可描写Jack穿着这双跑鞋跑步,感到不是自己的能力,决定放弃它,穿自己的跑鞋参加比赛。由第二段首句内容“到了大型比赛的时候了,组织者把跑步者叫到起跑线上。”可知,第二段可描写Jack穿着旧的跑鞋参加比赛的经历。2.续写线索:放弃跑鞋穿旧鞋参加比赛比赛过程艰难完成比赛疲惫但高兴。类型二:野外遇险获救篇One fall, my wifeElliand I had a single goal: tophotographpolar bears. We were staying at a research camp outside the polar bear capital of the w

    124、orldthe town of Churchill in Manitoba, Canada.Takingpicturesof polar bears is amazing but also dangerous. Polar bearslike all wild animalsshould be photographed from asafedistance. When Im face to face with a polar bear, I like it to be through acamerawith a telephoto lens. But sometimes, that is ea

    125、sier said than done. This was one of those times.As Elli and I cooked dinner, a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled our garlicbread.The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp, which was surrounded by a high wirefence. He pulled and bit the wire. He stood on

    126、 his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts.Terrified, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. We yelled at the bear, hit pots hard, and fired blank shotgun shells into the air. Sometimes loudnoiseslike these will scare bears off. Not this polar bear thoughhe just kept trying

    127、to tear down the fence with his massive paws(爪子).I radioed the camp manager for help. He told me a helicopter was on its way, but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived. Making the best of this close encounter(相遇), I took some pictures of the bear.Elli and I feared the fence wouldnt last through 3

    128、0 more minutes of the bears punishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepperspray. The spray burns the bears eyes, but doesnt hurt them. So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and, through the fence, sprayed him in the face. With an angry roar(吼叫), the bearranto the lake to wash his eyes.注意:1

    129、. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp._Paragraph 2:At that very moment, the helicopter arrived._【答案】Paragraph 1A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. Mounting anger m

    130、ingled with hunger overwhelming him, he smashed his paws frantically against the wire fence, thrusting his sharp claws at us. Panicked as we were, Elli and I squealed at the top of our lungs, wave our fists at him and stamped heavily on the ground in an attempt to intimidate and scare him away. To o

    131、ur dismay, all these efforts were in vain. This sturdy bear relentlessly banged and shoved the wooden posts which were evidently on the verge of collapsing! This bulky and furious beast within a stones throw, I flinched back and huddled with Elli tightly. Chilly winds whipping our faces, I could hea

    132、r nothing but the sound of our hearts throbbing violently in our chests.Paragraph 2:At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. The gusting wind from the hovering vehicles wept away our choking fear immediately. Out of the helicopter descended a rope to haul us up. Thrilled yet relieved, we clutche

    133、d the rope and eventually landed on the helicopter safe and sound. While overlooking the chunky bear from high above, I was amazed to spot this stubborn guy had crushed the fence and headed toward our camp for the inviting garlic bread. At this once-in-a-lifetime moment, I reached into my backpack a

    134、nd pulled out the camera, photographing that impressive scene. Gazing at his broad back in the melting ice field, I wondered if it was the warmer planet that had forced the bear to hunt for food from the human regions.【答案】A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. Roars and screams pierc

    135、ed the silence with needle-like shrillness. The noises turned Elli and I pale with horror. I feared that the giant would destroy our whole fence. He roared repeatedly, shattering what was left of the silence. Elli seized this opportunity to take somepictures of the bear. The animals noises echoed al

    136、l around us. We betrayed our feelings by huddling together, shivering with fear. After thoroughly scrutinizing the area, he trotted forward a few steps.At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. My heart leaped with joy as I knew we were likely to be saved. Elli used pepper spray again to buy us e

    137、nough time. But this time the bear became more alert. He regarded us with the merciless necessity of hunger, so we throw all the food we have. He then turned away and started devouring. As we were climbing the rope ladder, Elli prayed like thousand times to show thankfulness of being safe and sound.

    138、【解析】主要讲述了作者和妻子前往被称为 北极熊之都 的加拿大丘吉尔镇拍摄北极熊。夫妻二人做饭之时,一头饥饿的雄性幼熊循着面包的蒜香味,靠近了营地,猛烈撞击营地边上的铁丝围栏,试图击溃它。作者和妻子使出浑身解数,想吓退这头熊,不料他 不破篱笆誓不归 。无奈之下,作者求助营地管理员,被告知救援直升机要30分钟后才能赶到,只得先尝试用胡椒喷雾喷洒北极熊的眼睛,希望他知难而退。果然,眼睛被辣椒水刺激后,他愤怒跑开,到河边去清洗眼睛。第一段:几分钟之后,这头北极熊又回到了营地边由故事发展可推知,该段重点描写夫妻二人如何再次对付熊及两人在过程中的紧张害怕。第二段:在这千钧一发之际,直升机赶到了该段出现直升机,可知二人获救。重点描述获救后的心情。

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