专题11 应用文写作（11）-研读近十年高考英语满分书面表达聚焦2023高考.docx

1、研读近十年高考英语满分书面表达聚焦2023高考Part1 应用文写作文（十一）1（2014湖南卷）学校正在组织科技创新大赛，你想为日常生活中某件物品（如钢笔、书包、鞋子)设计添加新功能来参赛。请以“My Magic_”为题写一篇英语短文，介绍你的创意。内容：1.说明设计理由2.介绍新功能。注意;:1.词数不少于120个字2.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。_【答案】My magic penIt is a magic pen that I intend to design for the competition organized by the school.To make it easier an

2、d more convenient for students to take notes during every class, I want the pen to be equipped with a special function, which can help me record what the teacher say in class automatically. More importantly, what has been recorded can be easily transformed into text in a short time and the text will

3、 be shown within a minute. In this way, the time that we spend in taking notes will be saved. We will be able to have more time to go over our lessons or engage in something else that we are interested in.It sounds so great, right?【导语】本书面表达是一篇说明文。所给出的题材十分贴近学生生活，学生能够从日常生活中的熟悉的物品适当发挥想象。【详解】要求写一篇说明文，所给

4、的要点也很清楚：说明学生所选物品设计理由；介绍此物品新功能。写作的时候注意以下几点：1、切合题意。仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2、简明扼要。此题材学生都有话可说，但要注意说明清楚：为什么要设计此物品？此物品有哪些新功能？要点要全面。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。【点睛】范文简明扼要的介绍了自己创新作品。使用了些高级句型，使得文章的水平更加高级。例如： It is a magic pen that I intend to design for the competition organized by the school.使用了t

5、hat引导的定语从句；To make it easier and more convenient for students to take notes during every class, I want the pen to be equipped with a special function, which can help me record what the teacher say in class automatically.使用了不定式短语做目的状语，我which引导的非限制性定语从句，what引导的宾语从句，是典型的高分句型。More importantly, what has

6、been recorded can be easily transformed into text in a short time and the text will be shown within a minute. 使用了主语从句。To make it easier and more convenient for students to take notes during every class；More importantly；In this way使得文章表达更加准确和到位，也为文章增添了活泼气氛。2.（2014四川卷）假设你是李夏，你的美国笔友Sam来信关心你参加高考的情况，请根据以

7、下要点回信告知。1. 考试日期与科目；2. 考试准备情况；3. 考试时的状态；4. 对试题的感受；5. 可能的考试结果。注意：1. 词数120左右；2. 开头语和结尾语已为你写好；3. 可以适当增加细节.以使行文连贯；4. 文中不能出现考生真实姓名和学校名称。参考词汇：college entrance examinationDear Sam,Thank you for your concern._【答案】Dear Sam ,Thank you for your concern. I am glad to tell you something about what you asked about

8、 our college entrance examination. The college entrance examination falls on June 7and June 8 every year, and the subjects that we should prepare for are different depending on each province. Generally speaking, we are busy reviewing and preparing for it the moment we enter senior three, which is co

9、nsidered a vital period. With the exam approaching, most students will feel nervous and upset. But by now when I am sitting the exam, I feel calm, because I think the exam is neither too easy nor too difficult. I am sure I will get a good result. But whatever the result is, I will face it calmly. Af

10、ter all, I have made every effort, and I wont regret. Best wishes ! Yours,Li Xia 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是李夏，你的美国笔友Sam来信关心你参加高考的情况，请根据要点回信告知。【详解】关心：concerncare高兴的：glad delighted 取决于：depend on contingent on忙于做某事：be busy doing sth.be occupied in doing sth.2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：With the exam approaching, most stu

11、dents will feel nervous and upset. 拓展句：As the exam is approaching, most students will feel nervous and upset.【点睛】【高分句型1】The college entrance examination falls on June 7and June 8 every year, and the subjects that we should prepare for are different depending on each province.（that引导定语从句）【高分句型2】Gener

12、ally speaking, we are busy reviewing and preparing for it the moment we enter senior three, which is considered a vital period.（运用了动名词作宾语，the moment引导时间状语从句，which引导非限制性定语从句）3（2014陕西卷）假定你是中学生李华。美国一个中学校长代表团即将访问你校并出席英语周的一项活动。请根据写作要点和写作要求写一篇欢迎词。 写作要点：1.表示对客人的欢迎；2.介绍此项活动（如活动目的、内容等）；3.表达对客人的祝愿。写作要求： 1.词数不

13、少于100；2.称呼已经给出，请写欢迎词正文；3.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。Dear American guests,_【答案】Dear American Guest,On behalf of our school, I would like to express our warm welcome to you. We are lucky to have you here in the middle of our English Week Activities.As scheduled, we have English Talent Show today. The purpose of th

14、is program is to develop our interest in English learning and practical abilities in listening and speaking. The programme consists of the following activities: recitation, singing, word spelling, story telling and so on. The Show will begin at two oclock this afternoon at the Student Centre. Dear g

15、uests, you are welcome to take part in some activities. I hope we students will benefit from your presence.I sincerely wish you a pleasant time with us. Thank you.【导语】本书面表达是一篇提纲类作文。【详解】本文是篇材料作文，材料非常简单，学生很容易把握写作要求和写作目的。考生在写作之前必修认真审题，首先要注意文章的时态，要求是对美国代表团的欢迎词，所以要用一般现在时。考生成文时应注意：1. 结构上：采用三段成文，第一段欢迎美国朋友的

16、到来；第二段介绍英语周的活动；第三段表达愿望：希望获准。2. 时态：以一般现在时为主；3. 人称：第一人称；4. 注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅。5. 适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文档次。【点睛】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如on behalf of，As scheduled， consist of， benefit from等等；还运用了不定式to have作状语，to develop作表语等，动名词listening等作宾语，hope后宾语从句等等。4（2014江西卷）假定你是星光中学的高中毕业生李华，母校将为高一新生举办主题为“What to learn

17、in senior high school?”的英语沙龙活动，特邀请你结合自身经历谈谈自己的体会。请根据以下提示准备一份英语发言稿。 1.学会学习：方法，习惯等； 2.学会做人：真诚，友善； 3.学会其他：考生自拟。注意：1.词数120左右； 2.发言稿开头和结尾已给出，不须抄在答题卡上，不计入总次数。Good morning, everyone! It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school._Thank you!【答案】Good morning,

18、everyone! It is my honour to be here to share with my opinions on what to learn in senior high school. In the coming three years, our school life will be challenging. First, we should learn to learn efficiently. Personally, I used to try effective method to achieve my academic goals. Developing a go

19、od habit is also of importance. It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons, get actively involved in class, and review what had been taught after class.In addition, we should learn how to get along well with others. In school, I respected teachers and was friendly with classmates. It was with s

20、incerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere.Finally, we should take part in sports and outdoors activities frequently. They were really helpful to build up my body and enrich my school life.No pains no gains. I am sure that with great efforts, you will enjoy a colorful and frui

21、tful life here.Thank you!【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是星光中学的高中毕业生李华，母校将为高一新生举办主题为“What to learn in senior high school?”的英语沙龙活动，特邀请你结合自身经历谈谈自己的体会。【详解】1.词汇积累在个人来看： PersonallyIn my opinion此外：In addition whats more和相处好：get along well with get on well with参加：participate in take part in2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：Finally, we sho

22、uld take part in sports and outdoors activities frequently. They were really helpful to build up my body and enrich my school life.拓展句：Finally, we should take part in sports and outdoors activities frequently, which were really helpful to build up my body and enrich my school life.【点睛】【高分句型1】 It rea

23、lly benefited me a lot to preview lessons, get actively involved in class, and review what had been taught after class.（运用了what引导的宾语从句）【高分句型2】 I am sure that with great efforts, you will enjoy a colorful and fruitful life here.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）5（2014湖北卷）请根据以下提示，并结合具体事例，用英语写一篇短文。Small things make a bi

24、g difference. The small things we do can make us a responsible member of the society.注意：无须写标题； 除诗歌外，文体不限；内容必须结合你生活中的具体事例；文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；词数不少于120，如引用提示语则不计入总词数。_【答案】It isnt hard to grow up into a responsible member of society.I can well remember an incident that happened on a rainy Sunday afternoon.

25、 I was on my way to the bookstore and was waiting for the green light at a crossing when a girl of about ten was knocked down by a passing car, which drove off quickly. A man immediately rushed to the girl to give her first aid and I joined in without hesitation. Luckily she was not badly injured an

26、d we sent her to the nearest hospital. Compared with the escaped driver, I am proud of what I did.As a member of the society, I am aware that being responsible is what it takes to make a better society.【详解】本文是篇英语材料作文，材料非常简单，学生很容易把握写作要求和写作目的。考生在写作之前必需认真审题，首先要注意文章是要求结合具体的事例，所以一般都是发生过的，故描述是要用一般过去时。既然是具

27、体事例来理解，因此最好用第一人称。再有就是写的事例内容一定要符合所给的主题，并形成文章主题的首尾呼应从而提高作文的档次。【点睛】文章第一句It isnt hard to grow up into a responsible member of society就鲜明概括并亮出了作者的观点。文中使用了定语从句I can well remember an incident that happened on a rainy Sunday afternoon以及非限制性定语从句which drove off quickly都为文章增色不少，一些短语和短句的使用也恰到好处比如knock down，driv

28、e off，be proud of, rush to sb to do sth，compare with等并注意了句子的衔接如： when， luckily 等等。6（2014北京卷图画作文）假设你是红星中学高三（1）班的学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，用校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文，记述你和同学们向学校提建议，解决自行车存放问题的过程。注意： 1. 词数不少于 60。 2. 短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school. _【答案】There was a proble

29、m with the parking place for bikes in our school. I noticed the entrance was small and almost blocked. So my classmates and I had a discussion and wrote a report. Then we went to meet the schoolmaster in his office and gave the report to him. He accepted our suggestions. Soon afterwards, a second en

30、trance was opened to the parking place. Now it is easy to park our bikes there.【导语】本篇书面表达属于图画作文。要求考生根据四幅图的先后顺序，用校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文，记述你和同学们向学校提建议，解决自行车存放问题的过程。【详解】1.词汇积累注意：notice take note of堵塞的：blocked congested讨论：have a discussion discuss建议：suggestions advice2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：Then we went to meet the school

31、master in his office and gave the report to him. He accepted our suggestions.拓展句：Then we went to meet the schoolmaster in his office and gave the report to him, who accepted our suggestions.【点睛】【高分句型1】I noticed the entrance was small and almost blocked.（运用了宾语从句）【高分句型2】Now it is easy to park our bike

32、s there.（运用了it作形式主语，不定式为真正的主语）7（2014辽宁卷）假定你是学生会主席李华。学校将举办一次以“校园生活创意无限”(Innovations on Campus)为主题的创意作品展评活动。请你根据以下图示，以短文形式用英语写一份书面通知。注意:1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当发挥，以使行文连贯; 3.开头及结尾已为你写好，不计人总词数。参考词汇: 校园campus创意作品innovation颁奖prize-giving_【答案】NoticeAn exciting event “Innovations on Campus” is around the corner. E

33、very one of you is expected to be part of the event which encourages creative minds and gives full play to your DIY skills.Note that your innovations must be school things. Along with your wonderful innovation, you need to hand in a report, explaining how the idea occurs to you and what materials yo

34、u use.All the collections will be on show from June 16 to 18 in the gym. Looking forward to the prize-giving ceremony? Sure! Itll be held from 15:00 to 17:00 on June 18. So dont miss the chance of being the winner. Your contribution will certainly make the event a huge success. For any questions. Ca

35、ll Li Hua at 44876655.Come on, everybody! Its your show time.Student Union【导语】这是一篇应用文，要求写一份书面通知。【详解】短文要求作为学生会主席李华，就学校举行的“校园生活，创意无限”的活动，给学生出一个书面通知，要点不是通过文字，而是通过图画表示出来，所以考生在写作的时候，要认真看图，通过图画找出所给的重要信息。有活动内容，活动时间地点，和联系人和电话等信息，弄清要点后，关键的是在写作的过程中，也要注意人称，时态语态和常见的语法问题，文章尽量简洁，但是要想得高分，要特别注意使用一些高级词汇和高级句型，如定语从句，强

36、调句，倒装句等，让文章更上档次。【点睛】所给范文语言简洁，运用了一些词组和高级句式：around the corner.即将到来，Along with连同，hand in上交，occur to使想起，on show展览，Look forward to盼望，句式上体现出多变的特点，如：Every one of you is expected to be part of the event which encourages creative minds and gives full play to your DIY skills.这句话用了定语从句，Note that your innovations must be school things. 这句话用了宾语从句，Along with your wonderful innovation, you need to hand in a report, explaining how the idea occurs to you and what materials you use.这句话使用现在分词做状语和宾语从句。