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1、专题13 单元话题书面表达精练精析16篇期末真题+名校模拟1Daniel是你的同学，你们班的尖子生之，有很多适合当学生会主席的突出品质。你想推荐他当学生会主席。请根据下列内容要点，用英语给Mr. Wu写封推荐信。1. 自信，工作力求高标准，常常能想出很多好点子；2. 有颗爱心(举例)；做事有条理(举例)；3. 他擅长打篮球，曾带领校队获得全市第一；4. 学习努力，上学期成功获得奖学金；能保持学习和爱好的平衡；5. 我相信注意: 1. 短文必须包括所有内容要点；要求语句通顺；意思连贯；2. 第2点和第5点用12句话展开合理想象，并作适当发挥。词数90左右(开头和格式已给出，不计入总词数)。Dea

2、r Mr Wu, Im writing to recommend Daniel as the chairperson of the Students Union. He is one of the top students in my class. He has many great qualities for this position. _Yours sincerely, Millie2在抗击新型冠状病毒期间中国涌现出了许多英雄的人物，如：医生、警察、清洁工、外卖小哥等。他们不畏疫情，不辞辛劳，用自己默默无闻的奉献与坚持温暖了整个社会。面对疫情你想成为什么样的人？为什么？要求:1. 文中不

3、得出现真实的人名和校名；2. 内容完整，意思清楚，表达通顺，书写规范；3. 可适当发挥，词数100左右；4. 参考词汇：2019新型冠状病毒 the 2019-nCOV外卖小哥 delivery man_3 请以Colours and Moods为题，选两种颜色，分别代表energetic colour和strong colour，适当介绍它们对情绪的影响，并谈谈你最喜欢的颜色。要点如下:1.绿色是活力之色，它能给你能量，因为它是自然之色，代表新生。所以当你疲惫或虚弱时，你应该穿绿色的衣服。2.红色是强烈的颜色，它会使你看起来更加强大、有力。在中国红色还代表幸运，在过去许多女性都喜欢在结婚之日

4、穿红色。3.我最喜欢的颜色是白色，因为(请用1-2、点理由阐述)注意:80词左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。Colours and MoodsDo you know anything about the relationship between colours and moods? _ 4请你用英文写一篇短文，介绍你的朋友约翰(John)。内容要点：1. 约翰是个生意人。他经常穿一身黑色西服( suit)，白衬衫，打着黄色或灰色领带；2. 黑色代表着权力和信任，黑色西服使他看上去很强大；3. 而白色使他感到平静和安宁，他认为灰色能使他看上去有思想(thoughtful)；4. 黄色是太阳的颜

5、色，能使他5. 他对工作充满信心。注意事项：1. 短文须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；2. 第4要点须用两句话展开合理想像，作适当发挥；3. 词数在80个左右。_5假如你叫张娜，在光明中学读书，在学习英语的过程中你遇到了一些问题，想得到王老师的帮助并想给英语老师提一些建议，以帮助自己学好英语。下面表格中只给了简单的提示，请你结合自己的实际情况给英语老师写一封求助信，内容如下：学习英语时遇到的问题向英语老师提出的建议1. 生词多，记忆有难度；2. 课文长，难弄懂；3. 1. 介绍一些学习英语的好方法；2. 教课文时读慢一些；3. 要求：1. 包含所有要点，可适当发挥；2. 词数：不少

6、于80词，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Mr. Wang,My name is Zhang Na. Im writing a letter to you to ask for some help. _ _Yours, Zhang Na6为了中学生的心理健康，学校英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假如你是李华，你因为最近心情不好，影响到了你的学习和生活，决定给专栏的主编Jane写一封e-mail倾述你的烦恼，并且向她寻求建议。心情不好的原因：1学习功课多，学习压力大；2考试不及格，父母责怪你；3好朋友因为你未能陪她看电影而生气。要求：1语句通顺，书写工整。2词数：

7、80词左右。Dear Jane,I have a hard time these days. _ Best wishes,Li Hua7在你的周围，有许多不同类型的人。有助人为乐的人，有意志坚强的人，有坚持到底终获成功的人请以 “The person who has influenced me most”为题，写一篇英语短文。内容包括：1. 此人基本信息和品质。 2. 列举他/她的1-2个典型事例。 3. 他/她对你的影响。字数不少于80字。The person who has influenced me most_8 当前，各校正开展“好书伴我成长”的活动。请你根据活动主题并结合表格中所给的

8、信息，以“Growing up with good books”为题，写一份倡议书。读书的益处获取知识，增长见识，使人快乐存在的现象听音乐，看电视，上网，占用了大部分业余时间发出倡议多读书，读经典好书，向世界传播中国的传统文化，让读书成为我们生活的一部分。注意事项：词数不少于90.短文开头已给出，不计入总次数。Growing up with good booksMy dear friends, Reading is very important _9研究表明音乐对人们的情绪有着重要的影响，因此人们用不同的音乐来调节心情。请根据下表提示内容，写一篇英语短文。听音乐前的情绪状态音乐类型听音乐后的心

9、境压力大，过分焦虑流行音乐放松沉迷电脑游戏，兴奋过度乡村音乐平静困倦，疲劳摇滚音乐振奋以自己为例：孤独，悲伤Research has shown that music has an important effect on ones moods. _10以The art form I like best为题写一篇关于你最喜欢的艺术形式的文章，艺术形式不限，如：画画，剪纸，乐器等，字数不少于90词可用下列表达：I have a real gift for ；I became interested inwhen I was；I once did not like because；I forgotun

10、til.；Since then，I have been crazy aboutI enjoy myselfevery time _11看电视是我们日常生活中不可缺少的部分，但是看太多的电视有时候也有不良的影响。相据以下信息，以Watching TV为题，写篇篇80词左右的短文。要点：1. 看电视是人们最喜欢的活动之一。电视节目种类繁多，如：(列举至少三种)所以各年龄层次的人都对看电视感兴趣。2. 看电视的好处：放松身心；了解时事新闻，3. 看电视的坏处：长时间观看会伤眼睛；不如看书能让人思考并变得聪明，4. 你对看电视的看法。_12请以 “My Favourite TV Programme”为

11、题, 写一篇80词左右的短文。要求表达准确并包括以下几点：1. 你喜欢的节目名称;2. 你喜欢这个节目的理由;3. 看这个节目对你有什么启发？_13假如你是李华，最近看了一场电影，请你用英语给好朋友写一封信，介绍一下这次观影感受。内容提示：What film did you see?What feeling do you have? Why?注意：1.词数80-100。开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；2.短文须包括所给内容信息。可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.不要写出真实姓名和校名。Dear _,I have seen a film recently. _Yours,Li Hua14假如你是

12、一个导演，要拍一部电影。你会拍关于什么的电影呢？请以“I want to make a movie about _”为题，并根据以下要点和要求用英语写一篇短文。要求：1请补全标题，如heroes，parents或toys 等；2文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名；3词数100左右。I want to make a movie about _15 假设你是张通，去年寒假去美国探亲。2018年2月18日，你目击了一起交通事故。警察局让你写一份材料，说明当时的情况。请根据下列叙述写出报告。1. 2018年2月18日早晨7：30左右发生了一起交通事故；2. 我在公园路上散步；3. 一位老人从公园里出

13、来，穿过公园路；4. 一辆黄颜色小汽车从第三街道开过来右转弯进入公园路；5. 小汽车撞倒了老人并向西开走；6. 我看见驾驶员是位年轻妇女，记住了车牌号（the plate number）是AC864，并送老人去了医院。注意：1. 词数：90左右；2. 结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。_About two minutes later, I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital. Zhang Tong16假设你叫李华，昨天晚上你看完电影在回家途中目击了一起抢劫案请就以下信息，以李华的名义写一份给警方的书面

14、材料，要求词数100左右材料的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数案发时间昨天晚上大约九点案发地点电影院附近的一条街道拐角处作案人情况两个男子，一个戴着墨镜的高个子，一个矮个子受害人情况一位年轻的女士，戴着一条金项链和一块金手表案发经过你正在街道上走着，突然听到身后有人呼救你看到两个男子正抢劫一名女子女子和他们进行了激烈的搏斗当你赶到时，两个劫匪已各自骑着自行车逃跑女子的金表被抢走了，但幸运的是女子没有受伤Dear Sir/MadamIm writing to report a robbery to you_I hope the information will help you catch the

15、 robbers Yours faithfully Li Hua参考答案：1One possible version:Dear Mr Wu. Im writing to recommend Daniel as the chairperson of the Students Union. He is one of the top students in my class. He has many great qualities for this position. Daniel is a confident boy. He works to high standards. He can ofte

16、n come up with many good ideas. He has a heart full of love. Whenever he is wanted, he will come to help us. Besides, he is organized enough to keep everything in good order. For example, he will make a list before he goes shopping. Moreover, he is good at playing basketball and he once led our scho

17、ol team to win first place in our city. He studies hard. Last term, he succeeded in getting a scholarship. Also, he can achieve a balance between his schoolwork and hobbies. I believe Daniel is the most suitable person to be the chairperson of the Students Union. Yours sincerely. Millie【详解】总体分析题材：本文

18、是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；时态：时态为“一般现在时”；提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中性格、外貌、能力、爱好等，可以适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。写作步骤第一步，题干开头已经给出写作意图，首先介绍他的聪明才智，举例说明有爱心，做事有条理。第二步，介绍其爱好及成就，以及学习上的优异表现。第三步，再次点明写作意图。亮点词汇 confident自信的 come up with想出 first place第一名 betweenand在之间高分句型 Whenever he is wanted, he will come to help us. (whenever引导的状语从句)he

19、 is organized enough to keep everything in good order. (动词不定式作原因状语)2例文：If Im asked what I want to be during the 2019-nCOV, my answer will be an engineer.In the fight against 2019-nCOV, Chinese engineers and workers built hospitals within several days. When I heard the news, I was so proud of them. T

20、hanks to their hard work and great skill, more patients got the chance to be treated in time. I look up to these people and want to be one of them because they have the power to build a new world for the people in need.In order to reach my goal, I have to study hard to enter the top university. In t

21、hat way Ill get a chance to learn more. I hope that one day I can build something great for our country.【详解】1.题干解读：本文属于话题作文写作，主要介绍自己面对疫情时想成为什么样的人（医生、警察、工人等各种职业），并阐述你为什么想要成为这样的人。故写作时第一段开篇点题，阐明自己的职业选择；第二段阐述缘由，抒发情感；第三段阐明努力方向，呼应主题。2.写作指导：本文的主题为“个人在疫情期间的职业选择”；文章以第一人称为主，时态为一般现在时；写作时要注意联系实际生活及自己在疫情期间的感受，描述

22、个人的职业选择，表达自己的见解。3Colours and MoodsDo you know anything about the relationship between colours and moods?Green is an energetic colour.It can give you energy, as it is the colour of nature and represents new life. So when you are tired or weak, you should wear green clothes.Red is a strong colour. It

23、can make you look more powerful. It also represents luck in China and many women preferred to wear red on their wedding day in the past.My favourite colour is white because it is the colour of purity and it can help me calm down when I feel nervous.All the colours make our world colourful and wonder

24、ful.【详解】这是一篇给材料作文，介绍颜色对情绪的影响以及自己最喜爱的颜色。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一和第三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意要表达出提纲所列内容，防止漏写。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；要灵活运用自己熟悉的高级词句，以提高文章的档次。最后必须认真检查是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。4John is a businessman. He always wears a black suit

25、, a white shirt and a yellow or grey tie. Black represents power and trust. Black suits make Mr Smith look powerful. White makes him feel calm and peaceful. He also thinks wearing grey can make him look thoughtful. Yellow is the colour of the sun. It can remind him of a warm, sunny day. It is also t

26、he colour of wisdom. It can bring him success.So Mr Smith is confident about his work.【详解】试题分析：这是一篇材料作文，属于人物介绍。人称为第三人称，时态为一般现在时，注意主谓一致关系。动笔前先要注意认真阅读材料，根据汉语提示，选择恰当的句型去完成写作，注意文章的层次脉络。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。5例文Dear Mr. Wang, My name is Zhang Na. Im writing a lette

27、r to you to ask for some help. I have met many difficulties in learning English. First, I find our texts full of new words that are very difficult for me to remember. Besides, the texts are too long for me to understand. Whats more, grammar is also very difficult to learn. Because of so many difficu

28、lties, I have to ask you for some help. Would like to give us some good advice to learn new words so that we can remember them more easily? And I hope you teach the text more slowly so that I can easily follow you. Also, I would like you to introduce some rules and good ways to learn grammar. Im sur

29、e that I can make great progress in my English study with your help.Yours,Zhang Na【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇应用文，为求助信；时态：时态为“一般现在时”；提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏“要点”的“学习英语时遇到的问题”和“向英语老师提出的建议”，注意要点要齐全。写作步骤第一步，由于短文开头已给出，故接下来具体介绍自己学习英语时遇到的问题，围绕“单词、课文和语法”等方面展开；第二步，向英语老师寻求帮助并提出建议；第三步，书写结语。表达“在老师帮助下能在英语学习上取得进步”的决心。亮点词汇(be) fu

30、ll of充满too.to太而不能Whats more除此之外还ask sb. for help向某人寻求帮助so that以便高分句型First, I find our texts full of new words that are very difficult for me to remember.（that引导的定语从句）Would like to give us some good advice to learn new words so that we can remember them more easily? （so that引导状语从句）Im sure that I can

31、make great progress in my English study with your help.（that引导宾语从句）6例文：Dear Jane,I have a hard time these days. As a student of Grade Nine, I must study many subjects at school and do a lot of homework every day. So I am under great pressure. Last week, I failed the exams though I studied very hard.

32、 However, my parents didnt understand me but blamed me. Whats worse, my best friend is angry with me because I cant go the see the movie with her this weekend for I have to stay at home to study. I feel so upset that I cant focus myself on study and cant control my temper. I really dont know what I

33、should do. I hope you can give me some advice.Thank you for reading my e-mail. I am looking forward to your reply.Best wishes,Li Hua【详解】总体分析 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； 时态：时态为“一般过去时”； 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。写作步骤第一步，介绍自己心情不好的原因；第二步，希望得到对方的建议并期待对方回复。亮点词汇 whats worse 并且 be angry with sb. 对某人生气 look f

34、orward to期待高分句型 I failed the exams though I studied very hard.（though引导让步状语从句） I feel so upset that I cant focus myself on study and cant control my temper.（sothat引导结果状语从句）7例文：The person who has influenced me mostThere are many important people around me in my life. There is only one person that inf

35、luences me the most and he is the most important person for me. He is my father.My father is a farmer, but he is different from other farmers because he reads more books than other farmers. When I was young, he told me that life is not easy. He says: “No matter what difficulties you face, you must b

36、e brave and keep on going.” From then on whenever I think the life is unfair or hard for me, I will never give up and try my best.My father not only gives me life but also gives me the confidence I should have. He is the most important person in my life.【详解】总体分析 题材：本文是一篇材料作文，写人类的记叙文； 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“

37、一般过去时”； 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，包括基本信息和品质、具体的事例和对自己的影响。写作步骤第一步，介绍这个人是谁我的父亲；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。先介绍父亲的基本信息和品质、再列举出具体的事例；第三步，最后是叙述对自己的影响。亮点词汇 is different from 不同于 No matter what difficulties 不管有什么困难 not onlybut also 不但而且高分句型 My father is a farmer, but he is different from other farmers because he reads more bo

38、oks than other farmers.（but连接的并列句和because引导原因状语从句） From then on whenever I think the life is unfair or hard for me, I will never give up and try my best.（whenever引导的让步状语从句）8Growing up with good booksMy dear friends，Reading is very importantWe can get knowledge through readingIt can not only open our

39、 minds，but also make us cleverer and happierOur study can be improved if we read more good booksThe more we read，the more we will learn，and the brighter our future will becomeHowever，some students spend much time in listening to music，watching TV or going online to play gamesIt takes much of their s

40、pare timeI would like to suggest that everyone should read more books，especially read classics so that we can spread our Chinese traditional culture to the worldLets start reading nowAnd let it become a part of our life!【详解】本文是一篇给材料作文。要求以“Growing up with good books”为题，结合表格中所给的信息，写一份倡议书。本文所给的材料比较详细具体

41、，考生需要准确表达。文章时态用一般现在时，人称主要用第一、第三人称。在写作的时候，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性。同时要注意准确运用时态，语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。9One possible version:Research has shown that music has an important effect on ones moods. So people u

42、se different kinds of music to change moods.If you feel stressed and worry a lot, you can listen to pop music and you will feel relaxed. Some students are crazy about computer games and feel overexcited, so they can listen to country music and they will feel calm and peaceful. Some people feel tired

43、 and sleepy, so they can listen to rock music. After listening, they will feel excited. Sometimes I feel lonely and sad. I often listen to light music. It makes me feel happy again.【详解】总体分析 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文。 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； 提示：根据提示材料分别写出听了不同音乐的情绪前后的对比。写作步骤第一步，开头已给出，引出音乐的重要性。第二步，具体阐述每一种音乐带来的不同感受。亮点词汇

44、 has an important effect on sth对某事有重要的影响 different kinds of各种各样的 be crazy about对痴迷高分句型 If you feel stressed and worry a lot, you can listen to pop music and you will feel relaxed（if引导了条件状语从句） It makes me feel happy again（make sb do sth结构中省略to的动词不定式作宾补）10Art is full of beautyArt has many kinds of for

45、msThe art form I like best is musicI have a real gift for musicBut I once did not like music because I couldnt find the beauty of musicI became interested in music when I was 6 years oldIll never forget my first music lessonMy music teacher，MrsGreen gave me a wonderful music lessonShe let me sing a

46、song before the class，and I did very wellSince then，I have been crazy about musicI enjoy myself every time I have a music lesson【详解】本文属于话题作文，描述最喜欢的艺术形式。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如like best，because，became interested in，wonde

47、rful，before 以及Since then等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。11 例文Watching TV is one of peoples favourite activities. There are all kinds of TV programmes, such as chat shows, drama series, cartoons and so on, so people of all ages are interested in watching TV.We can relax ourselves and learn about up

48、-to-date news by watching TV. TV programmes can improve our knowledge of the world. However, if you watch TV for too long, it will do harm to your eyes. You dont need to think when watching TV, while you need to think when reading books. So reading make you clever. Moreover, if you spend much time w

49、atching TV, you will have less time to do something more meaningful.I think we can spend some time watching TV when we are free and try to watch programmes which can give us knowledge.【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇议论文；时态：时态为“一般现在时”；提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点中的内容，并适当增添细节，使文章结构紧密、逻辑通顺。写作步骤第一步：陈述要点1中的所有内容，并列举至少三种电视节目。第二

50、步：先论述看电视的好处，再论述看电视的坏处，可以在要点提示的基础上，适当增添细节，使内容更丰富。第三步：结合看电视的好处和坏处，阐述自己对看电视的看法。亮点词汇be interested in 对感兴趣up-to-date news 时事新闻do harm to 对有害spend time doing sth. 花费时间做某事高分句型Watching TV is one of peoples favourite activities.（“one of+sbs+favourite+可数名词复数“句型）We can relax ourselves and learn about up-to-dat

51、e news by watching TV.（“by doing sth.”作方式状语）You dont need to think when watching TV, while you need to think when reading books.（“while”引导并列句，表转折，译为“而”）12例文：My Favourite TV ProgrammeI like watching TV in my spare time. The programmes about animals such as The Planet of the Animals on Discovery Chann

52、el and The World of the Animals on CCTV-10 are my favourites.By watching these programmes I can see a lot of lovely and beautiful sometimes strange animals. I have never seen them before. Also the beautiful scenes of the world before me are on the screen. But what shocks me is that it is said on TV

53、that thousands of kinds of living things disappear every year on the earth, and numbers of animals are among them. How terrible it is! Just imagine what the earth would be like if only human being lived alone on the earth some day.Animals are our friends. We must try our best to protect them. Protec

54、ting animals is just protecting ourselves.【详解】总体分析 题材：本文是一篇话题作文； 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意本文内容包含的三个方面：名称、理由和启发，不要遗漏要点。写作步骤第一步，说明最喜欢的电视节目是什么；第二步，阐述自己喜欢节目的理由（2点）；第三步，谈谈这个节目对自己的启发。亮点词汇 in ones spare time 在某人空闲时间 by doing sth. 通过做某事 thousands of 成千上万 try ones best to do sth. 尽力做某事高分句型 But what sho

55、cks me is that it is said on TV that thousands of kinds of living things disappear every year on the earth, and numbers of animals are among them. （What引导的主语从句作主语） How terrible it is! （How+形容词+主语+谓语!） Just imagine what the earth would be like if only human being lived alone on the earth some day.（if

56、 only引导的条件状语从句）13例文Dear Tom,I have seen a film recently. It is called Kung Fu Panda. This movie tells us how an ordinary panda became a real dragon warrior. At first, the Master Shifu didnt believe panda could become the brave dragon warrior. Through pandas persistent efforts, he has won Master Shif

57、us approval. Shifu follows tortoises instructions and tries to turn panda into a real warrior. Finally, the pandas successfully defeated their biggest enemy, the tiger. I like this movie very much, and it makes me feel very excited. Because this movie tells us such a truth: as long as we keep on wor

58、king hard, any difficulty can be overcome.Yours,Li Hua【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信文。根据内容提示写一封信给自己的好朋友，介绍最近看电影的感受。2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时为主；人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。写作时可适当发挥，围绕主题，注意单词语法的正确性，逻辑要清晰。14例文：I want to make a movie about parentsI want to make a movie about parents for the reason that they play an important role in ou

59、r lives.Parents love their kids and make their efforts to support them with heart and soul in study and life. But many kids think that parents are always talking about schoolwork, grades and so on. They sometimes even argue with their parents. However, parents are the people who care about them most

60、 in the world. So I want to make a movie about parents to show their selfless love to their kids as well as to build a good relationship between them.I will invite some parents to play roles in the movie and tell the true stories in daily life, which may help kids understand their parents and feel t

61、heir love better.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目是一篇话题作文，根据题目要求，假如你是一个导演，要拍一部电影。会拍什么题材的电影，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：本文以第一人称和第三人称为主；时态采用一般现在时为主，一般将来时为辅，在写作时，第一段应承接短文开头，引出标题；第二段介绍拍一部关于父母的电影的原因；第三段描述如何拍一部关于父母的电影。注意要保证内容完整、布局合理、思路清晰、语言丰富、表达准确、书写规范。15It was about 7:30 on the morning of February 18, 2018. I was taking a walk along Park

62、 Road. I saw an old man coming out of the park. Just then a yellow car drove down Third Street and made a right turn into Park Road. The next moment the car hit the old man while he was crossing the road. He fell down with a cry. The car didnt stop but drove off at a great speed heading west.I notic

63、ed the driver was a young woman and the plate number was AC864. About two minutes later，I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital. Zhang Tong【详解】题干解读：该题目属于材料作文，主要应该以记叙文为主，文章结尾已给出。要求描述你目击的一场交通事故，事故细节已给出中文信息。例文点评：例文用第一人称进行叙述，时态主要采用一般过去时。例文将背景、事件发生的时间、地点、现场细节等交代得非常清楚全面，材料给出的要

64、求都已涉及；文章叙述逻辑清晰，条例分明。高分亮点：短语：take a walk；just then；drive down；fall down；drive off。句型：see sb. doing sth.；while引导的时间状语从句。16Dear Sir/MadamIm writing to report a robbery to you At about nine last night，I was on the way back home from the cinema when suddenly I heard someone crying for help from behindI t

65、urned around and found a tall man with a pair of dark glasses and a short man robbing a young woman at the street corner near the cinemaThe woman wore a gold necklace and a gold watchShe put up a good fight with themI ran towards them but when I arrived，the two robbers had ridden their bikes awayThe

66、y robbed the woman of her gold watch，but luckily，the woman wasnt hurtI hope the information will help you catch the robbersYours faithfullyLi Hua【详解】本文属于材料作文，为警察提供一份目击证明。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如on the way，suddenly，cry for help，turned around，put up，ran towards以及luckily等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。