专题23读后续写（新高考）-学易金卷：五年（2019-2023）高考英语真题分项汇编（解析版）.docx

1、五年（2019-2023）年高考英语真题分项汇编专题23 读后续写（新高考）（解析版）2023年高考真题题组【2023新高考I&II卷】阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。When I was in middle school, my social studies teacher asked me to enter a writing contest. I said no without thinking. I did not love writing. My family came from Brazil, so English was only m

2、y second language. Writing was so difficult and painful for me that my teacher had allowed me to present my paper on the sinking of the Titanic by acting out a play, where I played all the parts. No one laughed harder than he did. So, why did he suddenly force me to do something at which I was sure

3、to fail? His reply: “Because I love your stories. If youre willing to apply yourself, I think you have a good shot at this.” Encouraged by his words, I agreed to give it a try. I chose Paul Reveres horse as my subject. Paul Revere was a silversmith (银匠) in Boston who rode a horse at night on April 1

4、8, 1775 to Lexington to warn people that British soldiers were coming. My story would come straight from the horses mouth. Not a brilliant idea, but funny; and unlikely to be anyone elses choice. What did the horse think, as he sped through the night? Did he get tired? Have doubts? Did he want to qu

5、it? I sympathized immediately. I got tired. I had doubts. I wanted to quit. But, like Reveres horse, I kept going. I worked hard. I checked my spelling. I asked my older sister to correct my grammar. I checked out a half dozen books on Paul Revere from the library. I even read a few of them. When I

6、handed in the essay to my teacher, he read it, laughed out loud, and said, “Great. Now, write it again.” I wrote it again, and again and again. When I finally finished it, the thought of winning had given way to the enjoyment of writing. If I didnt win, I wouldnt care. 注意: 1. 续写词数应为150个左右；2. 请按如下格式在

7、答题卡的相应位置作答。A few weeks later, when I almost forgot the contest, there came the news. _I went to my teachers office after the award presentation. _【答案】 A few weeks later, when I almost forgot the contest, there came the news. I was informed that I won the first prize in the writing contest and that t

8、here would be an award presentation in two days. I was so happy to hear the news that I immediately shared it with my teacher. “I knew youd win! I am proud of you. You made it!” he said excitedly. Then came the big day. When I was invited to the stage to receive the award, I expressed my thanks to m

9、y teacher. I said, “Its you who make me fall in love with writing, my social studies teacher. Without your recognition and guidance, I couldnt have written this article. Again thank you very much!” I went to my teachers office after the award presentation. My teacher was waiting for me. Holding my h

10、ands, he said “Congratulations! You are a good writer, so keep writing.” “You know I didnt like writing before, but now I am crazy about it! I will try my best to create good works.” I said seriously. Since then, I have written many good works and now I am a famous writer. I owe my success to my soc

11、ial teacher who is a beacon in my life on the road to writing.【解析】【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者上中学的时候，社会学老师邀请作者参加一个写作比赛。作者不喜欢写作，于是想都没想就拒绝了。但是在老师的鼓励下，作者同意试一试。作者在写作过程中虽然很累，但是没有放弃，坚持下来了。在作者最终完成写作时，作者感到写作让他很快乐，他已经不在乎输赢了。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“几个星期后，当我几乎忘记比赛的时候，传来了消息。”和第二段首句“颁奖后我去了老师的办公室。”可知，第一段可描写作者获得比赛一等奖，在颁奖典礼上作者

12、表达了对社会老师的感激。由第二段首句内容“颁奖后我去了老师的办公室。”可知，第二段可描写老师鼓励作者继续写作，自此作者坚持写作取得了成功，作者将这一切归功于自己的老师。2.续写线索：比赛消息传来作者获奖高兴颁奖典礼感谢老师颁奖后来到老师办公室老师告诉作者坚持写作作者表达了对写作的喜爱作者写作取得了成功感激老师3.词汇激活行为类告知：inform/tell成功做到：make it/succeed表达：express/convey情绪类高兴的：happy/glad激动地：excitedly/with excitement【点睛】高分句型1 I was informed that I won the

13、 first prize in the writing contest and that there would be an award presentation in two days. （运用了由连接词that引导的宾语从句）高分句型2 Its you who make me fall in love with writing, my social studies teacher.（运用了强调句）高分句型3 I owe my success to my social teacher who is a beacon in my life on the road to writing.（运用了

14、who引导的限制性定语从句）【2023浙江1月卷】阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。I was invited to a cookout on an old friends farm in western Washington. I parked my car outside the farm and walked past a milking house which had apparently not been used in many years. A noise at a window caught my attention, so I ente

15、red it. It was a hummingbird (蜂鸟), desperately trying to escape. She was covered in spider-webs (蛛网) and was barely able to move her wings. She ceased her struggle the instant I picked her up. With the bird in my cupped hand, I looked around to see how she had gotten in. The broken window glass was

16、the likely answer. I stuffed a piece of cloth into the hole and took her outside, closing the door securely behind me. When I opened my hand, the bird did not fly away; she sat looking at me with her bright eyes. I removed the sticky spider-webs that covered her head and wings. Still, she made no at

17、tempt to fly. Perhaps she had been struggling against the window too long and was too tired? Or too thirsty? As I carried her up the blackberry-lined path toward my car where I kept a water bottle, she began to move. I stopped, and she soon took wing but did not immediately fly away. Hovering (悬停),

18、she approached within six inches of my face. For a very long moment, this tiny creature looked into my eyes, turning her head from side to side. Then she flew quickly out of sight. During the cookout I told my hosts about the hummingbird incident. They promised to fix the window. As I was departing,

19、 my friends walked me to my car. I was standing by the car when a hummingbird flew to the center of our group and began hovering. She turned from person to person until she came to me. She again looked directly into my eyes, then let out a squeaking call and was gone. For a moment, all were speechle

20、ss. Then someone said, “She must have come to say goodbye.”注意：1. 续写词数应为 150 左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。A few weeks later, I went to the farm again. _I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared. _【答案】A few weeks later, I went to the farm again. As my car neared it my thoughts drifted back to

21、 the moment when I rescued the hummingbird from the spiders web. I rushed back to the deserted house. It was a great comfort that the original hole in the window was nowhere to be found. Leaving the house, I couldnt help wondering how it was getting on now. Had it managed to find its way back home,

22、or was it still out there somewhere struggling to survive? I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared. A flash of movement caught my attention. I turned around to see the same hummingbird hovering in the air. It seemed that the bird was waiting for me, its beady eyes locked on mine as i

23、f trying to convey some deep, unspoken gratitude. I felt a surge of relief and awe at the sight of this sound and grateful creature, and I knew that I would always cherish the memories we shared as I climbed into my car and drove away.【解析】【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者被邀请去一个农场野餐，发现一个房子里有只蜂鸟被蜘蛛网困住了，作者把蜂鸟救了，把蜂鸟

24、带出去的时候它迟迟不肯走，当作者走到一条布满黑莓的小路时，它开始动了，但是却不肯飞走，徘徊着，后来终于飞走了，当作者准备离开时，蜂鸟又飞到作者面前，好像是在和作者告别。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“几个星期后，我又去了农场。”可知，第一段可描写作者回到农场时所看到的和所想到的。由第二段首句内容“我正要离开，这时蜂鸟出现了。”可知，第二段可描写蜂鸟是如何对作者的以及作者的感想。2.续写线索：想起救蜂鸟的时候回到那个房子想到那只蜂鸟看见蜂鸟蜂鸟的表现作者的感想3.词汇激活行为类思绪回到：thoughts drift back to/thoughts return to匆匆回到：rush

25、back to/hurry back to盯着：eyes locked on/eyes staring at情绪类宽慰：feel a surge of relief/feel relieved感激：grateful/thankful【点睛】高分句型1 As my car neared it my thoughts drifted back to the moment when I rescued the hummingbird from the spiders web. (由as引导的时间状语从句和when引导的限制性定语从句)高分句型2 It was a great comfort that

26、 the original hole in the window was nowhere to be found. (由that引导的主语从句)【2023安徽省、云南省、吉林省、黑龙江省四省联考卷】阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。My husband and I enjoy seeing life through the eyes of our children. Its amazing to watch as they discover their world.While we were outdoors last summer enjoying t

27、he sunshine, our oldest daughter, Kaytlin, called me to the doorway. Beneath the steps was a baby red squirrel.We watched it from a distance, not wanting to disturb it or scare off its mother. But after a long waitand looking all around our house for signs of a nest or a motherwe realized the tiny s

28、quirrel was lost.Shaking terribly, he was weak, thin, and hungry. We tried to find an expert to help, but the Inland Fisheries and Wildlife website showed that there were no wildlife experts in our area. After some quick research, we concluded that the best way to give the squirrel a fighting chance

29、 was to care for him ourselves. So a trip to the local store for milk and supplies was in order. More research taught us how much to feed him, how to estimate his age, how and when to wean (断奶) him, and that we should let him go as soon as he could survive on his own.Our daughters and I took turns i

30、n feeding “Squirt.” Kaytlin took on the most responsibility. She taught him to eat from a bottle, and she woke in the night for his feeds.To our relief, Squirt soon became healthy and strong. Within a few weeks he became more active. He would chatter (吱吱叫) for his next meal, playfully go around the

31、girls, and lie down on them for sleep. It wasnt long before he was weaned onto solid food and reintroduced to the wild.His first few visits to the great outdoors were funny. Just like a child, he would play in the grass some and then run back to Kaytlin for safety. Soon she had him climbing trees an

32、d finding nest material.注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。One day in the trees, Squirt met up with a family of gray squirrels._One night, Squirt didnt come back to our house and it rained hard. _【答案】 One day in the trees, Squirt met up with a family of gray squirrels. But the family was none to

33、o happy about his visit. They scolded and swatted at him. At first Squirt was so unhappy that he avoided them. And then he quickly learned some social skills. He would take some snacks to meet them. For several days he played all day in the trees surrounding our house but came down at bedtime. One n

34、ight, Squirt didnt come back to our house and it rained hard. Our girls fretted. They wanted to seek Squirt. We prevented them because it was too dangerous. But when the sun rose the next day, there was Squirt, begging for food. And that remained the pattern for weeks. The experience was entertainin

35、g and heartwarming for our family. In the wild and somewhat silly moments of raising an orphaned baby squirrel, our children learned to value and appreciate life.【解析】【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者一家一天看到一只幼小的迷路的松鼠，他们决定收养它，看着这只小松鼠从瘦弱幼小，慢慢变的健康活泼，让作者一家感觉既有趣又温暖。【详解】1. 段落续写：由第一段首句内容“一天，在树林里，Squirt遇到了一个灰色松鼠家庭。”可知，第一

36、段可描写Squirt遇到这一家灰松鼠的情况，Squirt如何与灰松鼠一家交往。由第二段首句内容“一天晚上，Squirt没有回到我们家，下起了大雨。”可知，第二段可描写作者一家的担心，和最后的结果，以及作者的感悟。2. 续写线索：遇到灰松鼠与灰松鼠一家交往没有回家，担心它感悟3. 词汇激活行为类责骂：scold/blame/rebuke拍打：swat/slap/hit寻找：seek/find/look for/search for阻止：prevent/put a stop to/head off情绪类高兴的：happy/delighted有趣的：entertaining/delightful/e

37、ngrossing【点睛】高分句型1At first Squirt was so unhappy that he avoided them.(so.that引导的结果状语从句)高分句型2But when the sun rose the next day, there was Squirt, begging for food.(when引导的时间状语从句和现在分词作状语)【2023浙江1月卷】阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。I was invited to a cookout on an old friends farm in western Wash

38、ington. I parked my car outside the farm and walked past a milking house which had apparently not been used in many years. A noise at a window caught my attention, so I entered it. It was a hummingbird (蜂鸟), desperately trying to escape. She was covered in spider-webs (蛛网) and was barely able to mov

39、e her wings. She ceased her struggle the instant I picked her up. With the bird in my cupped hand, I looked around to see how she had gotten in. The broken window glass was the likely answer. I stuffed a piece of cloth into the hole and took her outside, closing the door securely behind me. When I o

40、pened my hand, the bird did not fly away; she sat looking at me with her bright eyes. I removed the sticky spider-webs that covered her head and wings. Still, she made no attempt to fly. Perhaps she had been struggling against the window too long and was too tired? Or too thirsty? As I carried her u

41、p the blackberry-lined path toward my car where I kept a water bottle, she began to move. I stopped, and she soon took wing but did not immediately fly away. Hovering (悬停), she approached within six inches of my face. For a very long moment, this tiny creature looked into my eyes, turning her head f

42、rom side to side. Then she flew quickly out of sight. During the cookout I told my hosts about the hummingbird incident. They promised to fix the window. As I was departing, my friends walked me to my car. I was standing by the car when a hummingbird flew to the center of our group and began hoverin

43、g. She turned from person to person until she came to me. She again looked directly into my eyes, then let out a squeaking call and was gone. For a moment, all were speechless. Then someone said, “She must have come to say goodbye.”注意：1. 续写词数应为 150 左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。A few weeks later, I went t

44、o the farm again. _I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared. _【答案】A few weeks later, I went to the farm again. As my car neared it my thoughts drifted back to the moment when I rescued the hummingbird from the spiders web. I rushed back to the deserted house. It was a great comfort th

45、at the original hole in the window was nowhere to be found. Leaving the house, I couldnt help wondering how it was getting on now. Had it managed to find its way back home, or was it still out there somewhere struggling to survive? I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared. A flash of

46、movement caught my attention. I turned around to see the same hummingbird hovering in the air. It seemed that the bird was waiting for me, its beady eyes locked on mine as if trying to convey some deep, unspoken gratitude. I felt a surge of relief and awe at the sight of this sound and grateful crea

47、ture, and I knew that I would always cherish the memories we shared as I climbed into my car and drove away.【解析】【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者被邀请去一个农场野餐，发现一个房子里有只蜂鸟被蜘蛛网困住了，作者把蜂鸟救了，把蜂鸟带出去的时候它迟迟不肯走，当作者走到一条布满黑莓的小路时，它开始动了，但是却不肯飞走，徘徊着，后来终于飞走了，当作者准备离开时，蜂鸟又飞到作者面前，好像是在和作者告别。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“几个星期后，我又去了农场。”可知，第一段可描写

48、作者回到农场时所看到的和所想到的。由第二段首句内容“我正要离开，这时蜂鸟出现了。”可知，第二段可描写蜂鸟是如何对作者的以及作者的感想。2.续写线索：想起救蜂鸟的时候回到那个房子想到那只蜂鸟看见蜂鸟蜂鸟的表现作者的感想3.词汇激活行为类思绪回到：thoughts drift back to/thoughts return to匆匆回到：rush back to/hurry back to盯着：eyes locked on/eyes staring at情绪类宽慰：feel a surge of relief/feel relieved感激：grateful/thankful【点睛】高分句型1 A

49、s my car neared it my thoughts drifted back to the moment when I rescued the hummingbird from the spiders web. (由as引导的时间状语从句和when引导的限制性定语从句)高分句型2 It was a great comfort that the original hole in the window was nowhere to be found. (由that引导的主语从句)2022年高考真题题组【2022新高考I&II卷】阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一

50、篇完整的短文。It was the day of the big cross-country run. Students from seven different primary schools in and around the small town were warming up and walking the route(路线)through thick evergreen forest. I looked around and finally spotted David, who was standing by himself off to the side by a fence. H

51、e was small for ten years old. His usual big toothy smile was absent today. I walked over and asked him why he wasnt with the other children. He hesitated and then said he had decided not to run. What was wrong? He had worked so hard for this event! I quickly searched the crowd for the schools coach

52、 and asked him what had happened. “I was afraid that kids from other schools would laugh at him,” he explained uncomfortably. “I gave him the choice to run or not, and let him decide.”I bit back my frustration(懊恼). I knew the coach meant wellhe thought he was doing the right thing. After making sure

53、 that David could run if he wanted, I turned to find him coming towards me, his small body rocking from side to side as he swung his feet forward. David had a brain disease which prevented him from walking or running like other children, but at school his classmates thought of him as a regular kid.

54、He always participated to the best of his ability in whatever they were doing. That was why none of the children thought it unusual that David had decided to join the cross-country team. It just took him longerthats all. David had not missed a single practice, and although he always finished his run

55、 long after the other children, he did always finish. As a special education teacher at the school, I was familiar with the challenges David faced and was proud of his strong determination. 注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答. We sat down next to each other, but David wouldnt look at me. _I watc

56、hed as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners. _ We sat down next to each other, but David wouldnt look at me. I said gently and quietly, “No one can change your mind, except yourself. If you desire to challenge yourself, there is nothing to do with others thoughts.” He sat still

57、 with a deep breath. “You have a full preparation before this event, which is the most important reason why you show up here”, I added with a sincere tone. Hearing my words, David turned to me tremblingly with tears spilling out of his eyes and expressed he had made a firm determination to finish th

58、e cross-country run. His coach heard what David said and gave me a lookthe kind that was more determined than anyone elses.I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners. The race started. It seemed that the runway was extremely long for young children, not to mention a chil

59、d with a heart disease. David insisted on running as if he had forgotten all his weaknesses, though he was tripped over within the a few kilometers. It didnt take long before he picked himself up again and continued his mission. Classmates all appeared on the racing track, cheering for him. “Come on

60、! You can make it! We are proud of you!” they shouted enthusiastically. To everyones joy, he reached the final line and ranked the 20th. It was no more important whether he won the first place or not. It was his brave heart and strong faith that could make something unusual happen finally.【导语】本文以赛跑为

61、线索展开。作者是一名特殊教育教师，在大型越野赛跑那天，发现患有大脑疾病的大卫独自站在一旁。作者问其原因，他说准备放弃比赛。从教练口中得知，因为担心同学们会嘲笑大卫，所以教练想让大卫自己去决定是否参加赛跑。作者让大卫追寻自己的内心，不理会别人的看法，大卫最终参赛，尽管遇到困难，他战胜了自己，这已经无关名次，而是他的勇敢和坚定让这一切成为可能。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“我们挨着坐着，但大卫不愿看我一眼。”和第二段首句内容”我看着大卫和其他选手一起走到起跑线上。”可知，第一段可描写作者鼓励大卫继续完成比赛，大卫经过强烈的心理斗争，最终决定参加比赛。由第二段首句内容“我看着大卫和其他选手

62、一起走到起跑线上。”可知，第二段可描写大卫开始参赛，虽然中途遇到困难，仍然坚持到最后，完成比赛。2.续写线索：鼓励大卫心理变化决定参赛克服困难加油助威完成比赛3.词汇激活：行动类：深呼吸：with a deep breath/breathe deeply坚持做：insisted on doing/be stick to doing情绪类：热情：enthusiastically /with great passion骄傲：be proud of/take pride in【点睛】高分句型1. You have a full preparation before this event, which

63、 is the most important reason why you show up here. (由which引导的非限制性定语从句和 why引导的限制性定语从句)高分句型2. Hearing my words, David turned to me tremblingly with tears spilling out of his eyes and expressed he had made a firm determination to finish the cross-country run. (现在分词作状语和省略that的宾语从句)高分句型3. It was his bra

64、ve heart and strong faith that could make something unusual happen finally. (含有It wasthat结构的强调句型)2021年高考真题题组【2022新高考I&II卷】阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。A MOTHERS DAY SURPRISEThe twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mothers Day. How pleased a

65、nd proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen.There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down

66、the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff

67、turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the

68、 fire so it cooked nicely.Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean

69、 it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeffs hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右。2. 请按如下格

70、式在答题卡的相应位置作答。As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.第二节 本文是一篇记叙文。讲述的是Jenna和Jeff这对双胞胎兄妹为了在母亲节早上给母亲惊喜而精心策划并制作早餐的故事；他们克服困难，永不放弃，折射的是他们对母亲的拳拳之爱。Paragraph 1:As the twins looked around them in disappointmen

71、t, their father appeared. Knowing what they were preparing for, he was greatly surprised. So immediately, he offered to get involved in the kids job. Firstly, he put the pot of porridge on a gentle heat, asking Jeff to watch out for it going for fifteen minutes. And then, he asked Jenna to break ano

72、ther two eggs and mix them with milk. With all preparations done, they started to fry bread together. In a flash, sweet smell filled the air in the kitchen. To their delight, the breakfast was a success in the end.Paragraph 1:The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. Eyes op

73、ened, the woman heard a harmonious “Happy Mothers Day” from her twin kids with hot, sweet breakfast before her. Behind the children stood their father. To shed light on the game of the gift, he told the mother the whole story. After learning about what happened, she rose quickly to gaze at the boys

74、hand with moved tears rolling down her cheeks. “Thank you, my honey!” said the mother.【导语】本文以母亲节为线索展开，讲述了双胞胎Jenna和Jeff为了献给母亲一份美味的早餐，自己动手，做起饭餐来，但是不幸的是，他们连连失败的故事。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“当双胞胎失望地环顾四周时，他们的父亲出现了。”可知，第一段可描写他们的父亲指导帮助他们准备早餐。由第二段首句内容“这对双胞胎把早餐端到楼上，叫醒了他们的母亲。”可知，第二段可描写母亲收到孩子们的礼物早餐，非常感动。2.续写线索：指导积极献礼

75、感动3.词汇激活行为类帮助：help/assist完成：finish/complete拥抱：hug/embrace情绪类高兴：happy/delighted 感动：moved/touched【点睛】高分句型1. Father helped them adjust the fire, which was the key to success. (which引导的非限制性定语从句)高分句型2. It was not only the breakfast, but the love of the children for her that moved her very much. (固定短语not

76、onlybut (also)和强调句型)2020年高考真题题组【2020新高考卷】阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。The Meredith family lived in a small community. As the economy was in decline, some people in the town had lost their jobs. Many of their families were struggling to make ends meet. People were trying to help each other

77、meet the challenges.Mrs. Meredith was a most kind and thoughtful woman. She spent a great deal of time visiting the poor. She knew they had problems, and they needed all kinds of help. When she had time, she would bring food and medicine to them.One morning she told her children about a family she h

78、ad visited the day before. There was a man sick in bed, his wife, who took care of him and could not go out to work, and their little boy. The little boy -his name was Bernard-had interested her very much.“I wish you could see him,” she said to her own children, John, Harry, and Clara. “He is such a

79、 help to his mother. He wants very much to earn some money, but I dont see what he can do.”After their mother left the room, the children sat thinking about Bernard. “I wish we could help him to earn money,” said Clara. “His family is suffering so much.”“So do I,” said Harry. “We really should do so

80、mething to assist them.”For some moments, John said nothing, but, suddenly, he sprang to his feet and cried, “I have a great idea! I have a solution that we can all help accomplish(完成).”The other children also jumped up all attention. When John had an idea, it was sure to be a good one. “I tell you

81、what we can do,” said John. “You know that big box of corn Uncle John sent us? Well, we can make popcorn(爆米花), and put it into paper bags, and Bernard can take it around to the houses and sell it.”注意:1. 续写词数应为150左右:2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 When Mrs. Meredith heard of Johns idea, she thought it was a go

82、od one, too._ With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business._【答案】When Mrs. Meredith heard of Johns idea, she thought it was a good one, too. So, they went to the local supermarket together. They bought a bag of corn and some special bags for popcorn. When they got home, they made a

83、lot of popcorn and put it in the special bags. With the popcorn, they went to Bernards home. They told Bernard how to sell the popcorn. Bernard and his parents were very grateful. And the Meredith family also felt very happy to help this family.With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new b

84、usiness. He took the popcorn around to the houses and sold all his popcorn. He earned a lot of money. Then, he wanted to be self-dependent. Therefore, he asked Mrs. Meredith to teach him how to make popcorn. After that, not only did he sell popcorn, but he also added cream and salt to the popcorn to

85、 make it taste better. Bernard grew up to be a remarkable man. He did not forget the help of Merediths family, and he also did what he could to help those in need.【解析】【分析】本文是根据短文进行续写，使之成为一个完整的故事。【详解】1.认真读懂所给提供的材料:善良的Meredith一家住在一个小社区里，他们想帮助一个贫困的家庭。那家的男主人生病卧床，女主人要照顾丈夫、无法外出赚钱，家中的小男孩Bernard也做不了什么事情，生活十

86、分困难。后来，Meredith的孩子想出了一个主意-制作爆米花，让Bernard去卖爆米花。2.根据所给材料确定文章主题:Meredith如何通过制作和卖爆米花帮助Bernard一家摆脱困境的。3.续写部分和前面的文章衔接得上，并且与原文情节发展和人物性格相一致，故事情节的向后延续发展要合乎情理。4.根据第一段首句When Mrs. Meredith heard of Johns idea, she thought it was a good one, too.(当Meredith太太听到John的主意时，她也认为这是个好主意)可以针对如何实现制作爆米花这个提议展开构思；根据第二段首句With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business.(一切准备就绪后，Bernard开始了他的新生意)可以针对Bernard如何通过卖爆米花让家庭摆脱困境展开构思。5.续写的语言要尽可能与原文的语言保持风格上的一致。文章时态以一般过去时为主。应使用自己熟悉的句型和短语进行写作，考生要注意尽可能使句子的表达形式多样化，适当的使用一些高级句式和高级词汇，以提高书面表达的档次和可读性。作文要层次清晰，要点全面，表达流畅，切合题干要求，句子结构准确，适当补充信息，使篇章结构连贯。