专题八　短文改错（专题资料包）.docx

1、专题八短文改错 专题检测 Proofreading 1Does the university you attend or the major you choose determine your success in the future? According up to a recent survey done by China Youth Daily, 48.6 percent of participants believe that the university one goes to plays a important role in shaping their future. On t

2、he other hand, 33.8 percent of people held the view that its what you do in the university which matters. For some students, they think that a prestigious university does bring many benefit. Without access to academic training in college, she wouldnt have successfully got their invaluable experience

3、. However, others believe that choose the right major has much weight than choosing a good university. Both the university and ones major are important, and they dont necessary determine your life. Its what one has learned that matters.答案Does the university you attend or the major you choose determi

4、ne your success in the future? According up to a recent survey done by China Youth Daily, 48.6 percent of participants believe that the university one goes to plays aan important role in shaping their future. On the other hand, 33.8 percent of people heldhold the view that its what you do in the uni

5、versity whichthat matters. For some students, they think that a prestigious university does bring many benefitbenefits. Without access to academic training in college, shethey wouldnt have successfully got their invaluable experience. However, others believe that choosechoosing the right major has m

6、uchmore/muchmore weight than choosing a good university. Both the university and ones major are important, andbut they dont necessarynecessarily determine your life. Its what one has learned that matters.解析考查介词。句意:根据中国青年报最近的一项调查,48.6%的参加者认为一个人所上的大学对塑造他们的未来起着重要的作用。according to为介词,意为“根据”,故将up删除。考查冠词。错

7、误处后的important以元音音素开头,故将a改为an。考查时态。句意:另一方面,33.8%的人认为在大学里做的事情才是重要的。根据上句中的“believe”可推知错误处也需要用一般现在时,故将held改为hold。考查强调句式。原文中“its what you do in the university which matters”应为强调句,被强调部分为what you do in the university。强调句型结构为“It is/was+被强调部分+that/who+其他成分”,本句中被强调部分不指“人”,故将which改为that。考查名词的“数”。句意:对于一些学生来说,他们

8、认为名牌大学确实能带来很多好处。错误处前有“many”,错误处需用名词复数形式,故将benefit改为benefits。考查代词。句意:在大学里,如果没有接受过学术培训,他们就不会成功地获得宝贵的经验。错误处指代上句中的“some students”,需用they而非she,故将she改为they。考查非谓语动词作主语。句意:然而,其他人认为选择正确的专业比选择一所好大学更重要。错误处作宾语从句的主语,需用动名词形式,故将choose改为choosing。考查形容词比较等级。根据错误处后的“than”可知错误处需用比较级形式,故将much改为more或在much后加more。考查并列连词。句意

9、:大学和专业都很重要,但它们不一定决定你的人生。错误处前后两分句为转折关系,故将and改为but。考查副词。错误处作状语,修饰动词determine,需用副词而非形容词,故将necessary改为 necessarily。Proofreading 2In your e-mail, you ask me for some suggestions about how to have a healthy family. Here is my advice. Generally spoken, a healthy family needs efforts of every family member.

10、 First, it is obviously that parents should treat their children equally, that is important for the family. Whats more, children or parents both benefit from having some day-to-day routines. In the addition, every member should give other member right expectations. Finally, you should love my own fa

11、mily life. In a word, if you want to own a healthy family, it is the positive attitude that are of great importance. I would appreciate very much if you could write back and give me your own opinion.答案In your e-mail, you askasked me for some suggestions about how to have a healthy family. Here is my

12、 advice. Generally spokenspeaking, a healthy family needs efforts of every family member. First, it is obviouslyobvious that parents should treat their children equally, thatwhich is important for the family. Whats more, children orand parents both benefit from having some day-to-day routines. In th

13、e addition, every member should give other membermembers right expectations. Finally, you should love myyour own family life. In a word, if you want to own a healthy family, it is the positive attitude that areisof great importance. I would appreciate it very much if you could write back and give me

14、 your own opinion.解析考查时态。句意:在你的邮件中,你让我对于如何拥有一个健康的家庭提出一些建议。根据语境及“In your e-mail”可知错误处应该用一般过去时,故将ask改为asked。考查非谓语动词作状语。句意:一般来说,一个健康的家庭需要每个家庭成员的努力。generally speaking为独立成分,用来作状语,故将spoken改为speaking。考查形容词。句意:首先,很明显,父母应该平等地对待他们的孩子,这对家庭来说很重要。设空处作表语,说明主语的特征,需用形容词形式,故将obviously改为obvious。考查非限制性定语从句。先行词为前面一句话,关

15、系词在定语从句中作主语,故用which而非that引导非限制性定语从句。考查并列连词。句意:此外,孩子和父母都得益于一些日常惯例。错误处前后为并列关系而非选择关系,故将or改为and。考查介词短语。句意:此外,每个成员应该给予其他成员正确的期望。in addition为固定短语,意为:此外。故将addition前的the删除。考查名词的“数”。other后需加名词复数形式,故将member改为members。考查代词。句意:最后,你应该热爱你自己的家庭生活。根据上下文可知错误处应为your,故将my改为your。考查主谓一致。句意:总之,如果你想拥有一个健康的家庭,积极的态度是非常重要的。“i

16、t is the positive attitude that are of great importance”为强调句型,本句中that后的谓语动词应该与被强调部分the positive attitude相一致,故将are改为is。考查代词。句意:如果您能回信并给出您的意见,我将不胜感激。“I would appreciate it if.”为固定句型,故在appreciate后加it。Proofreading 3As it we all know, do exercise is good for our health. I join in a school sports meeting

17、at the beginning of this term. There were many activity that we could do, such as running, the relay race or so on. All the students and teachers took part all kinds of sports competitions. I joined in the boys 100-meter relay race of Senior 3 with three another boys from our class. We won the first

18、 prize with your efforts. I felt very happily not only because we won but also because we enjoyed doing sports, where helped us to be stronger and healthier.答案As it we all know, dodoing exercise is good for our health. I joinjoined in a school sports meeting at the beginning of this term. There were

19、 many activityactivities that we could do, such as running, the relay race orand so on. All the students and teachers took part in all kinds of sports competitions. I joined in the boys 100-meter relay race of Senior 3 with three anotherother boys from our class. We won the first prize with yourour

20、efforts. I felt very happilyhappy not only because we won but also because we enjoyed doing sports, wherewhich helped us to be stronger and healthier.解析考查固定句式。句意:众所周知,做运动对我们的健康有好处。as we all know是一个固定句式,意为“众所周知”,it多余。故去掉we前的it。考查动名词作主语。分析句子结构可知is之前是句子的主语,故此处应用动名词充当。故将do改为doing。考查时态。句意:我在这学期初参加了学校运动会。

21、根据下文“There were.”的时态可知此处也要用一般过去时,描述过去的事情。故将join改为joined。考查名词单复数。句意:有很多我们能做的运动,例如跑步、接力赛等。由句中的many可知,此处要用名词的复数形式,故将activity改为activities。考查固定短语。and so on是一个固定短语,意为“等等;诸如此类”。故将or改为and。考查固定短语。句意:所有的学生和老师都参加了各种体育比赛。take part in是一个固定短语,意为“参加”。故在all前加in。考查固定短语。句意:我和我们班的其他三个男孩参加了高三的男子100米接力赛。three other boys

22、意为“其他三个男孩”,故将another改为other。考查人称代词。句意:我们通过努力获得了一等奖。根据句子的主语We可知此处是“通过努力我们获得了一等奖”,人称指代要一致。故将your改为our。考查形容词。句意:我感到非常高兴,不仅因为我们赢了,而且因为我们喜欢做运动,它帮助我们变得更强壮、更健康。句中的感官动词felt后要加形容词作表语。故将happily改为happy。考查非限制性定语从句。分析句子结构可知逗号后是一个非限制性定语从句,先行词指物,从句缺少主语,应用关系代词which引导非限制性定语从句。故将where改为which。Proofreading 4Tens of mil

23、lion of people carry their smartphones with them everywhere they go, included the bathroom. Our phones are always within their grasp, which means they are also constantly being exposed to however bacteria we may have accumulated on our hands. Unfortunately, a new survey of 1,200 Americans and their

24、cleaning habits find that 25 percent of them have never cleaned their phones. Researchers estimate that a regularly use smartphone that has never been cleaned may hold up more bacteria than an entire household bathroom. According to survey conducted by the company VitalVio, that is common for smartp

25、hone users to come into contact with various forms of bacteria. Suddenly, eating a sandwich in your bathroom doesnt sound so badly.答案Tens of millionmillions of people carry their smartphones with them everywhere they go, includedincluding the bathroom. Our phones are always within theirour grasp, wh

26、ich means they are also constantly being exposed to howeverwhatever bacteria we may have accumulated on our hands. Unfortunately, a new survey of 1,200 Americans and their cleaning habits findfinds that 25 percent of them have never cleaned their phones. Researchers estimate that a regularly useused

27、 smartphone that has never been cleaned may hold up more bacteria than an entire household bathroom. According to the survey conducted by the company VitalVio, thatit is common for smartphone users to come into contact with various forms of bacteria. Suddenly, eating a sandwich in your bathroom does

28、nt sound so badlybad.解析考查固定短语。句意:数以千万计的人去哪里都带着他们的智能手机,包括去卫生间。表示“数以千万的”短语为tens of millions of。故将million改为millions。考查介词。错误处后的名词作宾语,错误处表示“包括”,应用介词including。故将included改为including。including the bathroom=the bathroom included。考查代词。句意:我们的手机总是在我们的手中,这意味着它们也在不断地暴露在我们手上可能积聚的细菌之中。根据上文Our phones可知此处应用代词our,指“在我

29、们的手中”。故将their改为our。考查限定词。错误处后的bacteria为名词,需用whatever修饰,表示“无论什么,任何事物”。故将however改为whatever。考查主谓一致。本句陈述客观事实,其时态用一般现在时;主语为a new survey,为单数名词,其谓语动词应为finds。故将find改为finds。考查非谓语动词作定语。句意:研究人员估计,一部经常被使用但从未清洗过的智能手机可能比整个家庭浴室所携带的细菌都要多。分析句子结构可知use在句中应用非谓语动词形式,与smartphone之间是被动关系,需用过去分词作定语,故将use改为used。考查动词用法。此处表示“携

30、带”,应用动词hold;hold up表示“举起”,不符合语境。故去掉up。考查定冠词。survey在此处特指VitalVio进行的调查,前面应用定冠词the。故在survey前添加the。考查形式主语。句意:根据VitalVio公司的调查,智能手机用户接触到各种类型的细菌是很常见的。此处为句型“it is common for sb. to do sth.”,it作形式主语,不定式为真正主语。故将that改为it。考查形容词。sound为系动词,后跟形容词bad作表语。故将badly改为bad。Proofreading 5My soccer coach retired in last wee

31、k. I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party. My mum makes the better biscuits in the world,so I decide to ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic step of baking.I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really well. My only mistake was that

32、I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked,“I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuit

33、s with happy laughter!答案My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anythingsomething special for him at his retirement party.My mum makes the betterbest biscuits in the world,so I decidedecided to ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic stepsteps of baking.I insisted on doing most of th

34、e baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really wellgood. My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor afterwhen/while I was packing them up.At athe party, my coach, with a biscuit in his, asked surprisingly who made them and joked,“I might have to retire again next year just to get some

35、 more of these biscuits.”My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoyenjoying the biscuits with happy laughter! 解析考查介词。句意:我的足球教练上个星期退休了。由“this/that/these/those/last/next/every/each+名词”构成的时间状语,前面不需要加介词,故将in删除。考查不定代词。句意:我想在他的退休聚会上为他做些特别的事情。在肯定句中常用something表示“某事”;anything常用于否定句和疑问句中。本句为

36、肯定句,故将anything改为something。考查形容词最高级。句意:我妈妈做的饼干是世界上最好的,所以我决定向她求助。错误处需用最高级,故将better改成best。考查动词时态。本文主体时态为一般过去时,故将decide改成decided。考查名词复数。句意:妈妈教了我一些烘焙的基本步骤。step是可数名词,前面有some(一些)修饰,需用复数形式steps。故将step改成steps。考查形容词。句意:我觉得饼干真的很好。good作表语时意为“好的”; well为形容词作表语时,意为“健康的”。错误处不表示“健康的”,故将well改成good。考查连词。句意:我唯一的错误是在打包的

37、时候把一些饼干掉在了地上。错误处意为“当时候”,故将after改成when/while。考查冠词。错误处后的party表示特指,指第一段提到的退休聚会,错误处需用定冠词the。故将a改为the。考查动词不定式。句意:我可能明年要再退休一次,只是想得到更多这样的饼干。错误处与后面的get构成不定式形式作目的状语,故在just后加to。考查非谓语动词。句意:我最喜欢的照片是我和我的教练在聚会上开心地享用饼干的那张!介词(of)后需加动名词形式,本句中错误处应为动名词(enjoying)与前面的逻辑主语my coach and me构成动名词的复合结构,作of的宾语,故将 enjoy改为enjoyi

38、ng。Proofreading 6Last week we had a school sports meeting on the playground of our school. All the students in our class took an actively part in it. John took part in the 1,500-meter race. He was the fastest runner in the race, win a gold medal. Lisa was a short girl,who didnt do good in the high j

39、ump, so we said “Dont blame yourself” to comfort him. I took part in the 200-meter running race. As soon as I hear the sound of the starting gun, I tried my better to run faster than others. As I was running, I could hear“Come on! Come on!” from my classmate. That gave me great strength. Finally I w

40、as first person to cross the finishing line. As a result of, my class was No.1 in the sports meeting. What proud we were! It was really an exciting day!答案Last week we had a school sports meeting on the playground of our school. All the students in our class took an activelyactive part in it. John to

41、ok part in the 1,500-meter race. He was the fastest runner in the race, winwinning a gold medal. Lisa was a short girl,who didnt do goodwell in the high jump, so we said “Dont blame yourself” to comfort himher. I took part in the 200-meter running race. As soon as I hearheard the sound of the starti

42、ng gun, I tried my betterbest to run faster than others. As I was running, I could hear “Come on! Come on!” from my classmateclassmates. That gave me great strength. Finally I was the first person to cross the finishing line. As a result of, my class was No.1 in the sports meeting. WhatHow proud we

43、were! It was really an exciting day!解析考查形容词。句意:我们班所有的学生都积极参加了。错误处修饰后面的名词part,需用形容词而非副词,故将actively改为active。考查非谓语动词作状语。句意:他在赛跑中跑得最快,赢得了一块金牌。逗号前后没有并列连词,故错误处应该用非谓语动词作状语。win与主语he为逻辑上的主动关系,需用现在分词形式winning作结果状语。考查副词。句意:莉萨这个女孩个子比较矮,她在跳高比赛中没有取得好成绩。所以为了安慰她,我们说“不要自责”。错误处作do的状语,需用副词而非形容词。故将good改为well。考查代词。根据上下文

44、可知错误处指代Lisa,Lisa是女孩,故将him改为her。考查时态。句意:一听到发令枪的声音,我就尽全力比别人跑得更快。本句介绍的是运动会的情况,需用一般过去时,故将hear改为heard。考查动词短语。try ones best to do sth.为固定短语,意为:尽最大努力做某事。故将better改为best。考查名词的“数”。句意:当我在跑的时候,我能听到我的同学喊道:“加油!加油!”根据常识可知错误处需用名词复数形式,故将classmate改为classmates。考查冠词。句意:最后,我第一个冲过了终点线。错误处后的序数词first在本句中表示“次序”,故在序数词first前加

45、the。考查介词短语。句意:结果,我班在运动会中得了第一名。as a result of后没有名词或代词,因此应删除of。as a result是介词短语,意为:结果。as a result of.意为:因为。考查感叹句。句意:我们是多么自豪啊! 错误处后的proud为形容词,故将What改为How,构成“How+形容词+主语+谓语!”句型。Proofreading 7During the holiday, I tried a new way to explore the Forbidden City, where left me with deep impression. To avoid

46、waste time buying a ticket on the spot, I made a reservation online. I got my ticket from a machine without difficulty and start the exploration. I was deep attracted by the grand architecture. To my excited, I could scan the QR codes to get detailed informations. With the VR glasses on, I even foun

47、d me back to the time when the palace was under construction. How impressive! I found the Forbidden City both traditional or modern because of our history was made alive here.答案During the holiday, I tried a new way to explore the Forbidden City, wherewhich left me with a deep impression. To avoid wa

48、stewasting time buying a ticket on the spot, I made a reservation online. I got my ticket from a machine without difficulty and startstarted the exploration. I was deepdeeply attracted by the grand architecture. To my excitedexcitement, I could scan the QR codes to get detailed informationsinformati

49、on. With the VR glasses on, I even found memyself back to the time when the palace was under construction. How impressive! I found the Forbidden City both traditional orand modern because of our history was made alive here.解析考查非限制性定语从句。句意:在假期里,我尝试了一种新方式游览故宫,它给我留下了深刻的印象。先行词为前面一句话,将先行词代入定语从句后可知关系词在定语从

50、句中作主语,先行词指“事物”,故用which引导非限制性定语从句。考查冠词。错误处后的impression为可数名词,在本句表示泛指,需与不定冠词连用,故在deep前加a。考查非谓语动词作宾语。句意:为了避免现场买票浪费时间,我在网上订了票。avoid后需用动名词作宾语,故将waste改为wasting。考查时态。句意:我毫不费力地从机器上拿到了票,开始了游览。错误处与got并列,都表示过去的行为,所以都需用一般过去时,故将start改为started。考查副词。句意:宏伟的建筑深深地吸引了我。错误处作“was attracted”的状语,表示程度,需用副词deeply。考查名词。句意:令我兴

51、奋的是,我可以扫描二维码得到详细的信息。错误处作介词to的宾语,需用名词而非形容词,故将excited改为excitement。to ones excitement意为:令某人兴奋的是。考查名词。information为不可数名词,没有复数形式,故将informations改为information。考查代词。句意:戴上VR眼镜,我甚至感觉自己回到了宫殿建造的年代。错误处与主语“I”指同一人,需用反身代词作宾语,故将me改为myself。考查并列连词。句意:我发现故宫既传统又现代,因为我们的历史在这里被展示得活灵活现。错误处前后为并列关系而非选择关系,故将or改为and。考查连词。becaus

52、e of后加名词、代词或动名词;because为连词,后面加句子,构成原因状语从句。错误处后为句子,需用because而非because of引导状语从句,故将because后的of删除。Proofreading 8With the development of the Internet, shopping online is more and more popular. People spend lots of money online, especially on Singles Day when the sales volume reaches an unexpected level,

53、that astonishes everyone. Some people are in favor of it. Shopping online never failed to fascinate people because its great convenience. However, it offers the wide range of goods to people and they can get almost whatever they want online. On the contrary, some think it makes people to waste more

54、money with the increasingly eagerness to buy more. They often find what theyve bought can rarely be used in his daily life. As far as Im concerned, its amazed to shop on the Internet. After all, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. What really counts for people is to buy better goods with low

55、prices.答案With the development of the Internet, shopping online is more and more popular. People spend lots of money online, especially on Singles Day when the sales volume reaches an unexpected level, thatwhich astonishes everyone. Some people are in favor of it. Shopping online never failedfails to

56、 fascinate people because of its great convenience. HoweverBesides/Furthermore/Moreover, it offers thea wide range of goods to people and they can get almost whatever they want online. On the contrary, some think it makes people to waste more money with the increasinglyincreasing eagerness to buy mo

57、re. They often find what theyve bought can rarely be used in histheir daily life. As far as Im concerned, its amazedamazing to shop on the Internet. After all, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. What really counts for people is to buy better goods with lowlower prices.解析考查定语从句。句意:人们花了很多钱在网上购

58、物,尤其是在光棍节那天,销售量达到了出人意料的水平,这让每个人都大吃一惊。错误处前没有并列连词,由此可判断本题考查非限制性定语从句。错误处前的句子为先行词,指“事物”,关系词在定语从句中作主语,需用which引导,故将that改为which。考查时态。句意:由于其便捷性,网上购物总会让人们着迷。本句介绍的是网上购物的优势,应该用一般现在时,故将failed改为fails。考查介词。because为连词,后面加句子,构成原因状语从句;because of为介词短语,后加名词、代词或动名词。本句错误处后为名词而非句子,故在because后加of。考查副词。句意:此外,网上购物可给人们提供各种商品,

59、他们几乎可以得到他们想要的任何东西。上句介绍网上购物的优点,本句也在介绍网上购物的优点,由此可知这两句为递进关系并非转折关系,故将However改为Besides/Furthermore/Moreover。考查冠词。a wide range of为固定短语,意为:各种各样的,故将the改为a。考查make的用法。与之相反,一些人认为由于人们购买欲的增加,这会使他们浪费更多的钱。使役动词make后需用不带“to”的不定式作宾补,故删除不定式符号“to”。考查形容词。错误处修饰名词eagerness,需用形容词形式,故将increasingly改为increasing。考查代词。句意:他们经常发现

60、他们买的东西很少能在他们的日常生活中使用。根据逻辑可知错误处应与本句中的“they”一致,故将his改为their。考查形容词。句意:就我而言,网上购物令人惊喜。毕竟,利大于弊。amazed感到惊喜的;amazing令人惊喜的。错误处表示“令人惊喜的”,故将amazed改为amazing。考查形容词比较等级。句意:对人们来说,真正重要的是以更低的价格买到更好的商品。根据本句中的better可知错误处也需用比较级形式,故将low改为lower。Proofreading 9It was the Mid-Autumn Day yesterday, and I invite my foreign fr

61、iend Harry to spend the traditionally festival with my family.At dinner table, my father was warmly welcomed Harry. He said, “This is a family reunion dinner for a Chinese family on the Mid-Autumn Day, so today you are certainly one of our family.” Harry was so happy but, of course, enjoyed the deli

62、cious Chinese dishes preparing by my mother.In the evening, we sat in the yard, listening to some beautiful story about the moon and sharing moon cakes while admire the moon. “How an amazing day Ive had today! I will never forget them,” Harry said.答案It was the Mid-Autumn Day yesterday, and I invitei

63、nvited my foreign friend Harry to spend the traditionallytraditional festival with my family.At the dinner table, my father was warmly welcomed Harry. He said, “This is a family reunion dinner for a Chinese family on the Mid-Autumn Day, so today you are certainly one of our family.” Harry was so hap

64、py butand, of course, enjoyed the delicious Chinese dishes preparingprepared by my mother.In the evening, we sat in the yard, listening to some beautiful storystories about the moon and sharing moon cakes while admireadmiring the moon. “HowWhat an amazing day Ive had today! I will never forget themi

65、t,” Harry said.解析考查时态。句意:昨天是中秋节,我邀请了我的外国朋友哈里和我的家人一起过这个传统节日。根据and前面的句子可知错误处应该用一般过去时,故将 invite改为invited。考查形容词。错误处作festival的定语,需用形容词形式,故将traditionally改为traditional。考查冠词。句意:在餐桌上,我父亲对哈里表示热烈欢迎。错误处后的table在本句中表示特指,需与定冠词连用,故在dinner table前加the。考查语态。主语my father与welcome为主动关系,不用被动语态,故将was删除。考查并列连词。句意:哈里高兴极了,当然也喜

66、欢妈妈准备的美味的中国菜。错误处前后的was so happy和enjoyed the delicious Chinese dishes并非转折关系,而是并列关系,故将but改为and。考查非谓语动词作定语。根据错误处后的“by my mother”可知错误处需用过去分词而非现在分词作定语,修饰名词dishes,故将preparing改为prepared。考查名词的“数”。句意:晚上,我们坐在院子里,一边听一些关于月亮的美丽故事并分享月饼,一边赏月。根据错误处前的some(一些)可知错误处需用名词复数形式,故将story改为stories。考查非谓语动词作状语。while后没有主语,由此可判断

67、错误处应为非谓语动词作状语。主语we和admire为逻辑上的主动关系,需用现在分词形式作状语,故将admire改为admiring。考查感叹句。句意:“我今天过得太棒了!我永远不会忘记它。”哈里说。根据错误处后的an amazing day可知将How改为What,构成“What+a/an+形容词+名词+主语+谓语!”句型。考查代词。错误处指代前面的an amazing day,为单数概念,需用it而非them替代,故将them改为it。Proofreading 10Its been two years when I joined the campus radio station. Durin

68、g this time, I had done several interviews. Every time I finish to writing an article, I am proud of myself for able to introduce my schoolmates to the things Ive seen. It was difficult at times, but when I saw my stories publish in our school newspaper, you knew that it was something worth doing. M

69、y parents, teachers and schoolmates congratulated me on that I did. I felt happily when I shared a new story with them. The greatest thing about being the reporter is exchanging idea with others.答案Its been two years whensince I joined the campus radio station. During this time, I hadhave done severa

70、l interviews. Every time I finish to writing an article, I am proud of myself for being able to introduce my schoolmates to the things Ive seen. It was difficult at times, but when I saw my stories publishpublished in our school newspaper, youI knew that it was something worth doing. My parents, tea

71、chers and schoolmates congratulated me on thatwhat I did. I felt happilyhappy when I shared a new story with them. The greatest thing about being thea reporter is exchanging ideaideas with others.解析考查连词。句意:自从我加入校园广播站以来已经两年了。 考查句式:It has been/is + 一段时间 + since +主语+谓语(谓语动词用一般过去时态)。考查时态。句意:在这期间,我做了若干采访

72、。During this time作时间状语时,谓语动词多使用现在完成时态,也可使用延续性动词的一般过去时态,但是此处只能把had改成have。考查非谓语动词。句意:每次我写完一篇文章。finish doing sth.完成做某事,finish 后用动名词作宾语。考查非谓语动词。句意:我为自己自豪,因为我能将我的所见都介绍给同学。此处介词for 后应该用动名词作介词的宾语。be able to是一个固定搭配,表能力,故添加being。考查非谓语动词。句意:但是当我看到我的故事在校报上被发表时。see sth. done看到某事被做, 此处过去分词表示被动和完成。考查代词。句意:但是当我看到我的

73、故事在校报上被发表时,我知道这是一件值得做的事。从行文逻辑判断,应该是我知道而非你知道。考查连接词。句意:我的父母、老师和同学们对我所做的事表示祝贺。 介词on 后面接的是介词的宾语从句,从句中谓语动词did缺少宾语,故用what引导宾语从句,说明做的具体内容。that在宾语从句中不能充当成分,只能起连接作用。考查形容词。句意:当我将新故事与他们分享时,我感觉开心。此处felt是系动词,后面接形容词作表语。考查冠词。句意:做记者最棒的事就是和别人交流思想。reporter是可数名词,此处表示泛指,又因为reporter以辅音音素开头,故将the改成a。考查名词。句意:做记者最棒的事就是和别人交

74、流思想。idea 是可数名词,表示“意见,看法,信念”。exchange ideas 交流思想。Proofreading 11I have been decided to become a pilot since I am a little kid. Each time I see a plane flying across sky, I feel extremely excited but want to fly it. That is why I believe it can make me happily and free. To make my dream come true, I h

75、ave to be physically fit by keeping a healthy diet and work out regularly. Besides, I must work hard to make great progresses with my studies. Although it is not that easy to being a pilot, Ill never give up my dream and spare no effort to realize them.答案I have been decided to become a pilot since I

76、 amwas a little kid. Each time I see a plane flying across the sky, I feel extremely excited butand want to fly it. That is whybecause I believe it can make me happilyhappy and free. To make my dream come true, I have to be physically fit by keeping a healthy diet and workworking out regularly. Besi

77、des, I must work hard to make great progressesprogress with my studies. Although it is not that easy to beingbe a pilot, Ill never give up my dream and spare no effort to realize themit.解析考查语态。主语I与decide为主动关系,由此可知本句用主动语态,不必用被动语态,故将been删除。考查时态。主句是现在完成时,since引导的从句一般用一般过去时,故将am改为was。考查冠词。sky(单数形式)作“天空”

78、讲,往往与定冠词the连用。故在sky前加定冠词the。考查并列连词。本句中feel extremely excited 和want to fly it为递进关系而非转折关系,故将but改为and。考查表语从句。句意:每次看到飞机掠过天空时,我会感到非常兴奋,并且想驾驶它。那是因为我相信它可以让我快乐和自由。That is because.用来说明上句的原因,意为:那是因为。考查形容词。错误处与形容词free并列作宾补,故将happily改为形容词happy。考查非谓语动词作宾语。错误处与动名词keeping并列作by的宾语,故将work改为working。考查名词的“数”。progress为

79、不可数名词,故将progresses改为progress。考查非谓语动词作主语。本句中it为形式主语,再根据错误处前的不定式符号to可知需将being改为be,构成不定式短语作真正主语。考查代词。错误处用来代替my dream(单数概念),需用it而非them,故将them改为it。Proofreading 12Today my parents and I decided to go to the field to pick some wild vegetable. We started out early in the morning. Followed my parents, I walk

80、ed behind happily. Soon we arrived at a small river. Though it was not wide, we had no way of to cross it. Dad watched for a while or then he had an idea. Soon they three set up a simple bridge with some stones together. And then we crossed a river easily. Finally, we reached the top of the hill, wh

81、en there were many wild plants fit eat. At dusk, we were so exhausted to walk further. Luckily, our neighbor drive by and picked us up.答案Today my parents and I decided to go to the field to pick some wild vegetablevegetables. We started out early in the morning. FollowedFollowing my parents, I walke

82、d behind happily. Soon we arrived at a small river. Though it was not wide, we had no way of to cross it. Dad watched for a while orand then he had an idea. Soon theywe three set up a simple bridge with some stones together. And then we crossed athe river easily. Finally, we reached the top of the h

83、ill, whenwhere there were many wild plants fit toeat. At dusk, we were sotoo exhausted to walk further. Luckily, our neighbor drivedrove by and picked us up.解析考查名词的“数”。句意:今天我和我的父母决定去野外摘一些野菜。vegetable为可数名词,在本句中表泛指,需用复数形式,故将vegetable改为vegetables。考查非谓语动词作状语。句意:我跟在父母后面,高兴地走着。主语I与follow为逻辑上的主动关系,需用现在分词而非

84、过去分词作状语,故将Followed改为Following。考查介词。句意:虽然它并不宽,但是我们没有办法穿过它。本句中to cross it作way的定语,不必再加介词of,故删除of。考查并列连词。句意:爸爸看了一会儿,然后他有了一个主意。错误处前后两个分句不是选择关系而是递进关系,故将or改为and。考查代词。句意:不久,我们三个人用一些石头一起搭起了一座简易的桥。根据上下文可知错误处表示“我们”,在句中作主语,故将they改为we。考查冠词。错误处后的river特指上文提到的那条小河,需与定冠词连用,故将a改为the。考查定语从句。句意:最后,我们到达了山顶,那里有许多野生植物可以吃。

85、先行词为the top of the hill,将先行词代入定语从句后为:There were many wild plants on the top of the hill.由此可知先行词在定语从句中作地点状语,需用where而非when引导,故将when改为where。考查非谓语动词作状语。错误处需用不定式符号与eat构成不定式形式作状语,故在eat前加不定式符号to。考查副词。句意:黄昏时,我们太累了,再也走不动了。too.to.表示:太以至于不能。考查时态。错误处表示过去的行为,需用一般过去时,故将drive改为drove。Proofreading 13Yesterday was Mo

86、nday. My friend Li Hua went to school without his homework finishing. He played online games all over the weekend. It was too late when he founded he had homework to do. To avoid punished, he told his teacher that a dog eats his homework. Obviously, it was just an excuse he made to cover the fact wh

87、ich he hadnt done his homework. The teacher certainly knew about that and made them stay after school. Sometimes we think we can avoid trouble by making excuse when we do something wrongly. However, we are really making problems worse instead of.答案Yesterday was Monday. My friend Li Hua went to schoo

88、l without his homework finishingfinished. He played online games all overthrough the weekend. It was too late when he foundedfound he had homework to do. To avoid being punished, he told his teacher that a dog eatsate his homework. Obviously, it was just an excuse he made to cover the fact whichthat

89、 he hadnt done his homework. The teacher certainly knew about that and made themhim stay after school. Sometimes we think we can avoid trouble by making excuseexcuses when we do something wronglywrong. However, we are really making problems worse instead of .解析考查非谓语动词作宾补。句意:我的朋友李华没有完成作业就去上学了。宾语homew

90、ork与finish之间为逻辑上的被动关系且错误处表示“完成”,需用过去分词而非现在分词作宾补,故将finishing改为finished。考查介词。句意:他整个周末都在玩网络游戏。all through the weekend=throughout the weekend,意为:整个周末。考查谓语动词。句意:当他发现有作业要做时已经太晚了。find(找到,发现)的过去式为found,found(建立)的过去式是founded。错误处表示“发现”而非“建立”,故将founded改为found。考查非谓语动词作宾语。句意:为了避免被惩罚,他告诉老师他的作业被狗吃掉了。avoid后需接动名词作宾语

91、,且he与punish为逻辑上的被动关系,故avoid后需用动名词的被动形式(being+过去分词)。由此可知需在punished前加being。考查时态。根据上下文可知错误处应该用一般过去时,故将eats改为ate。考查同位语从句。句意:显然,这只是他为了掩盖没做作业的事实而找的借口。“he hadnt done his homework”为同位语从句,解释fact的内容,该从句中不缺任何成分,需用that而非which引导。故将which改为that。考查代词。句意:老师当然知道是怎么回事,让他放学后留下来。错误处代替上文中的Li Hua(单数第三人称概念),故将them改为him。考查名

92、词。句意:有时当我们做错事的时候,我们总认为我们可以通过找借口来避免麻烦。本句中名词excuse表示泛指,需用复数形式,故将excuse改为excuses。考查形容词。错误处作不定代词something的定语,意为“错误的”,需用形容词而非副词,故将wrongly改为wrong。考查副词。句意:但是我们反而使问题变得更糟。副词instead放在句尾,意为:代替,反而。instead of后需加名词、代词或动名词,意为:作为的替换。本句中instead of后没有名词、代词或动名词,故将of删除。Proofreading 14Our class joined in a meaningful ac

93、tivity during the winter vacation. First, we went to visit the old lady who lived all alone. Some chatted with her but others helped do a thorough cleaning for us. When the work was done, the house looked real neat and tidy. Then we went to the sport center, where all equipment needed polished. We s

94、et out to work at once. Everything was dust-free at no time. Having done all this, we saw a pleasant community than before. Tiring as we were, we felt happy as all of our work was paid off.答案Our class joined in a meaningful activity during the winter vacation. First, we went to visit thean old lady

95、who lived all alone. Some chatted with her butand/while others helped do a thorough cleaning for usher. When the work was done, the house looked realreally neat and tidy. Then we went to the sportsports center, where all equipment needed polishedpolishing. We set out to work at once. Everything was

96、dust-free atin no time. Having done all this, we saw a more pleasant community than before. TiringTired as we were, we felt happy as all of our work was paid off.解析考查冠词。句意:首先,我们去看望了一位独自生活的老太太。由于文章第一次提及这位老人,lady为可数名词,故用不定冠词表示泛指,old以元音音素开头,故把the改为an。考查连词。分析句子可知,大家都在忙,一些人在和老太太聊天,另外一些人做清洁,故把but改为and或者wh

97、ile。考查代词。根据文章可知,同学们去帮助老太太,为老太太打扫房间,故把us改为her。考查副词。句意:打扫完了之后,房子看起来确实干净、整洁。此处修饰形容词,用副词,故把real改为really。考查名词。句意:之后我们去了体育中心,那里的设备都需要擦拭了。sport为名词“运动”,修饰另一个名词时,常用复数形式。考查非谓语动词。need需要,某物作主语时,后面接doing或to be done,意为“某物需要”,故改过去分词polished为polishing。考查介词。句意:顷刻间,所有的东西都变得一尘不染。at no time 从不;in no time立刻;马上。考查形容词比较级。

98、句意:做完这一切之后,我们看到了一个比以前更舒适的社区。根据than before可知,本句用比较级形式,pleasant为多音节词,故在pleasant前加more。考查形容词。句意:尽管我们很累,但是我们都很高兴,因为我们做的事情都取得了回报。第一个as引导让步状语从句,前面描述我们的感受,故把Tiring改为Tired。考查动词语态。pay off 取得成功,为不及物动词短语,没有被动语态。Proofreading 15Early rising has many advantage. First, it helps us to keep health. We all need fresh

99、 air, and the air is freshest in the morning. Beside, we can improve our health by exercise regularly in the morning. Second, it can also benefits our study because in the morning we can learn more quickly. Third, it can make us to plan our work for the day. Only without a proper plan can we work we

100、ll. Early rising can allow us enough time to get ready for your work. So we say that those who always gets up late should make an effort to get up early.答案Early rising has many advantageadvantages. First, it helps us to keep healthhealthy. We all need fresh air, and the air is the freshest in the mo

101、rning. BesideBesides, we can improve our health by exerciseexercising regularly in the morning. Second, it can also benefitsbenefit our study because in the morning we can learn more quickly. Third, it can make us to plan our work for the day. Only withoutwith a proper plan can we work well. Early r

102、ising can allow us enough time to get ready for yourour work. So we say that those who always getsget up late should make an effort to get up early.解析考查名词。根据many可知后面用名词复数,表示“许多优势”,故把advantage改成advantages。考查形容词。keep healthy保持健康,keep为系动词,用形容词作表语,故把health改成healthy。考查冠词。形容词最高级前面加定冠词the,故在freshest前面加the。

103、考查副词。句意:此外,我们可以通过经常在早上锻炼来改善我们的健康。beside 在旁边,为介词;besides此外,为副词。考查非谓语动词。介词by后用动名词作宾语,表示方式,故把exercise改成exercising。考查情态动词。情态动词后面跟动词原形,can为情态动词,故把benefits改成benefit。考查非谓语动词。make sb. do sth.使某人做某事,故把plan前的to去掉。考查介词。句意:只有有了适当的计划,我们才能把工作做好。根据句意可知此处表示肯定的意思,故把without改成with。考查形容词性物主代词。句意:早起可以让我们有足够的时间为工作做好准备。根据

104、us可知,用形容词性物主代词our与其保持一致。考查主谓一致。句意:所以我们说,那些总是起床晚的人应该努力早起。此处those作先行词,为复数形式,关系代词指代those,在后面的定语从句中作主语,故从句的谓语动词用原形。Proofreading 16With time go by, Chris is now a senior three student that devotes himself in his lessons every day. Last Saturday, as a usual, he attended several classes. In the evening, he

105、 studied at home until deep into the night. He was too sleepy and tired on Sunday that he couldnt work effective. His father came up and advises him to have a break. Soon they came up with a good ideas. They bought a kite which they liked very much and then the family went to the suburbs Chris enjoy

106、ed himself fly the kite. The family had a picnic together but felt very relaxed in the open air. On Monday, Chris was energetic and active in class.答案With time gogoing by, Chris is now a senior three student that devotes himself into his lessons every day. Last Saturday, as a usual, he attended seve

107、ral classes. In the evening, he studied at home until deep into the night. He was tooso sleepy and tired on Sunday that he couldnt work effectiveeffectively. His father came up and advisesadvised him to have a break. Soon they came up with a good ideasidea. They bought a kite which they liked very m

108、uch and then the family went to the suburbs where Chris enjoyed himself flyflying the kite. The family had a picnic together butand felt very relaxed in the open air. On Monday, Chris was energetic and active in class. 解析在with的复合结构中,宾语time与go by “(时间等)流逝”为逻辑上的主动关系,故将go改为going。devote oneself to为固定结构,

109、意为“致力于”,故将in改为to。as usual为固定短语,意为“像往常一样”,故删除a。根据that从句可知此句使用so.that.句型,意为“星期天他太困太累,不能有效地学习”,故将too改为so。修饰动词work用副词,故将effective改为effectively。and连接了两个并列的谓语动词,根据上文及本句中的came可知此处需用一般过去时态,故将advises改为advised。句意:很快他们就想出了一个好主意。根据冠词a并结合语境可知idea用单数形式。suburbs后为定语从句,先行词为the suburbs(郊区),关系词在定语从句中作地点状语,故用关系副词where引导从句。在定语从句中,谓语动词为enjoyed。主语Chris与fly为主动关系,故用现在分词作伴随状语。句意:全家在一起野餐,在户外都感到非常放松。根据语境可知此处不存在转折关系,而为顺承关系,故用连词and。