Unit 1 写作主题：介绍朋友-2022-2023学年八年级英语上册单元话题写作（牛津译林版）.docx

1、译林版八上Unit 1 Friends 写作主题：介绍朋友一、话题分析本单元的话题是“介绍朋友”，认识友情和谈论朋友具备的优秀品质，要求学生能简单介绍自己的朋友，本单元写作要求同学们能根据相关信息提示简单地介绍自己的朋友。内容包括姓名、年龄、性别、所在学校和班级、优秀品质、外貌特点和爱好等。在具体的写作中，学生应做到以下几点：1. 能选择使用比较级与最高级介绍自己的朋友；2. 能用适当的形容词描述外貌和性格特征；3. 能正确使用标点符号；4. 能正确书写英语句子。二、写作步骤步骤一：确定人物介绍的内容和顺序。步骤二：列举介绍人物的句型，多多益善。步骤三：成段成篇，修改完善。三、 词汇积累one

2、 of my best friends 我最好的朋友之一be willing to share things with her friends 愿意和她的朋友分享东西help me with my homework 帮助我做家庭作业give her seat on the bus to someone in need 在公共汽车上把她的座位让给有需要的人grow up 长大，成长make sb. look smart 是某人看上去聪明have a good sense of humour 有很强的幽默感tell funny jokes 讲有趣的笑话say a bad word about sb

3、. 讲某人的坏话keep a secret 保守秘密feel bored or unhappy 感到无聊或不快乐四、 句型积累1 He tells funny jokes and always makes me laugh. 他讲滑稽的笑话而且总是使我大笑。2 When something worries me, I can always go to her. 当某事使我担心时，我总是去找她。3 I can tell her anything because she can keep a secret. 我能告诉她任何事情，意为她能保守秘密。4 She always has a smile o

4、n her face and looks happy. 她脸上总是带有微笑而且看上午很高兴。五、写作训练1以“My best friend”为题, 写一篇80个词左右的英语短文, 要求语句通顺, 无语法错误。内容必须包括以下要点： 他/她的姓名、具体外貌 他/她的品质、能力、事迹 他/她的未来计划_2假如你是李华，请根据以下要求写一篇短文为大家介绍你的好朋友。要求：1）内容必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥。2）文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称。3）不少于80词。My Best FriendNameJackLookingtall, handsomestraight brown hairnot

5、 wear glassesWearingjeansa T-shirtsports shoesWhy I like himcoolfungood at soccer_73以“My best friend”为题写一篇介绍你朋友的作文。 要求：1.用完表格中所有信息，省略号部分自行发挥。2.词数不少于80词，注意书写。姓名Mike学校St. Pauls School年级8外貌方脸，由于太多的家庭作业而戴眼镜，高且强壮，总是面带微笑性格及具体事例乐于助人，经常；风趣，经常；诚实，能保守秘密学校生活男女合校，学校每天8点开始，3点结束最喜欢的学科：数学、物理各种各样的课外活动和俱乐部，可以未来计划My

6、best friend Mike is one of my best friends. _1 【参考范文】My best friend I have a lot of friends and my best friend is Tina. We are in the same class. Tina is a lovely girl. She always wears a pair of small and round glasses and she is often wearing black clothes. She is kind and generous. She is always

7、ready to help others, so she has lots of friends. She is good at English and she often helps our classmates with their English. Everyone in my class likes her. She wants to be a social worker when she grows up.【范文点评】这是一个命题作文，写作的话题为My best friend，在写作时应注意符合题意，根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。【写作步骤】一、阅读提

8、示，弄清所有信息，明确写作要点。 1.我有很多朋友，我最好的朋友是。 I have a lot of friends and my best friend is 2.他（她）是一个可爱的，经常穿着is a lovely；always wears a pair of；is often wearing 3.他（她）善良大方，乐于助人。kind and generous；is always ready to help others 4.他（她）擅长；经常帮助。大家都喜欢他（她）。is good at ；often helps our classmates with；Everyone in my cl

9、ass likes 5.他（她）长大想当。wants to be awhen he/she grows up二、根据要点，写出关键词、短语或句子。三、组词成句。连句成篇。注意使用一般现在时。【点评】本题考查对本单元所学知识的综合运用，熟练使用相关短语、单词和句型，注意词性的搭配，时态的把握，人称的使用等细节问题。2 【参考范文】My name is Li Hua. Jack is my best friend. Do you want to know what he looks like? He is very tall and he has straight brown hair. He l

10、ooks very handsome. Many classmates like him very much. His mouth is small. He has big bright eyes and he doesnt wear glasses. Jack is a very col boy. He often wears jeans, a T-shirt and a pair of sports shoes. I like Jack not only because he is cool and fun, but also because we have the same hobbyp

11、laying soccer. He is good at soccer. He often plays very well in many school football matches.I believe that our friendship will get better and better. Do you agree with me?【范文点评】考查提纲作文。要求根据以下要求写一篇短文为大家介绍好朋友杰克，要求包括提示中的所有内容，并可适当增加内容，合理使用连接词，使得语句通顺，语意连贯，注意上下文的连接要符合逻辑关系，符合英语表达习惯，本文主要使用第三人称单数，一般现在时。【点评】

12、考查提纲作文。内容切题，语法正确，时态运用灵活，准确，一些固定短语，如 very much 非常，wear glasses 戴眼镜，not onlybut also不但而且，agree with 同意某人的观点，等等，及句型结构，如，Do you want to know what he looks like? 宾语从句，I believe that our friendship will get better and better. 宾语从句，等等的运用较为得体，使得文章根据流畅，自然。3【参考范文】My best friendMike is one of my best friends.

13、He is at St. Pauls School. He is in Grade 8. He has a square face. He is tall and strong. There is always a smile on his face. He wears glasses because of a lot of homework. He is helpful and often helps his classmates with their lessons. He is humorous. He is honest and he can keep a secret. His sc

14、hool is a mixed school. Classes begin at 8 oclock a. m. and end at 3 oclock. His favorite subject is math and physics. He takes part in all kinds of activities and joins clubs. Now he is working hard and he is going to be a teacher in the future.【范文点评】这是一篇命题作文，时态是一般现在时、现在进行时和一般将来时。首先介绍Mike的学校、年级；然后介绍外貌、性格及具体事例和学校生活；最后介绍未来计划。注意运用好词好句及恰当使用连词。【点评】作文内容全面，涵盖表格信息。运用好词好句，如one of+可数名词复数；because of；help sb. with sth.；take part in等。现在进行时和一般将来时的运用为文章增色不少，如Now he is working hard and he is going to be a teacher in the future.。连词and的运用使文章上下文联系更为紧密。