Unit 1 易错综合练习-2022-2023学年八年级英语上册单元重难点易错题精练（人教版）.docx

1、班级 姓名 学号 分数 Unit 1 Where did you go on vacation?（时间：100分钟，满分：100分）第一部分 选择题一、单项选择(本大题共15小题，每小题1分，共15分)1Wehadgreatfunonthebeach.AtoplayBplayingCplayDplayed2Where _ he go on vacation?He went to the mountainsAisBdoesChasDdid3 When will our uncle come to see us? Hell come this weekend. He _ me that by e-

2、mail.AtoldBtellsCwill tellDis telling4Icalledyouanhourago,butyouwerenotinthehotel.Wereyouout?.ANo,IwasinthebathroomBIwasreadingabookCIwasinameetingroomDIwasntinthehotel5The air in Dongying is much worse than that in many other cities. We must do to protect our environment.AnothingBanythingCsomething

3、Deverything6MoYansbookshavebeensoldoutinmanybookstores hiswinningoftheNobelLiteraturePrize.AbecauseBsinceCasDbecauseof7Haveyoureadtodaysnewspaper?Yes.Itsreallyboring.Thereis init.AsomethingnewBnothingnewCanythingnewDnewnothing8Alotofpeoplearehere vacationeveryyear.AinBatConDwith9Pleasetrytohomeontim

4、e.Dontkeepus.Agetto;towaitBarrivein;waitingCget;waitingDreach;towait10childrenwanttogetupearlyinthemorning.Theyalllikesleeping.AAfewBAlittleCLittleDFew11niceweatheritis!Letsplayfootball.AWhatBHowCWhataDWhatan12Ifeel_ whenIwatchthat_ match.Aexcited;excitedBexcited;excitingCexciting;excitedDexciting;e

5、xciting13Ifeltlike intheskylikeabird.AflyBflewCamflyingDflying14Ihadumbrellawhenitrained.AaBanC/Dtwo15ManyofthevisitorsBeijingtwodaysago.AreachedinBgettoCarrivedatDarrivedin二、完型填空(本大题共10小题，每小题1分，共10分)Our school has a party day every June. It is on the first Friday of the month. Everyone has to _16_.

6、Gary, Emma and I are good _17_. We are all 14 years old. Our job for this years party day was to make our classroom look _18_ and special. Gary _19_ a great idea. He wanted to make our classroom _20_ an underwater（海底）world. He got two big old fishing nets（网）from _21_ father. We put up the nets first

7、. Then we cut out fishes from paper and put them in the nets.The big day _22_. Everyone was very happy to see the special classroom. _23_ we were talking happily, the fishing nets fell down. We were all caught _24_the fishing nets.It was so funny.We truly felt “under the _25_”!What an exciting party

8、 we had!16AhelpBleaveCstudyDsing17AteachersBworkersCdoctorsDfriends18AdirtyBbeautifulCfarDslow19Athought ofBput upCthought overDput on20Alook forBlook likeClook atDlook after21AherBhisCtheirDits22AcameBleftCspokeDwent23AAfterBBeforeCBecauseDWhen24AinBonCtoDfor25AwaterBdeskCbedDbag三、阅读单选(本大题共10小题，每小题

9、2分，共20分)AWhat about my plans for the winter holiday? First, I will go to Shanghai with my sister Kate. Shanghai is my favorite city. There are many interesting places and we can also taste something delicious there. After coming back from Shanghai, I will spend some time reading books. I will visit

10、my grandparents on the farm, too. PeterI made some plans for my winter holiday. First, I will help more at home. My parents are always busy, so Ill help them with the housework and let them have more time to relax. Second, I will practice the violin every day. Third, I think the holiday is a good ti

11、me for me to do some sports, such as running and playing soccer. I am sure my winter holiday will be wonderful.TomAfter about four months study, the winter holiday is coming. Here are my plans. First, I will leave enough time for my new lessons. I will also read some great books. Second, I will go t

12、o Xian and stay there for two weeks. I think the trip will be wonderful. Then, I will come back and enjoy myself with my friends. We will play soccer or go shopping together.Amy26What will Peter do in Shanghai?APlay tennis.BGo shopping.CRead books.DTaste something delicious.27How many plans did Tom

13、make for his winter holidays?ATwo.BThree.CFour.DFive28Where do Peters grandparents live?AIn Shanghai.BIn Xian.COn the farm.DIn Peters house.29How long will Amy stay in Xian?AFor one week.BFor two weeks.CFor one month.DFor two months.30Who will play soccer in the coming winter holiday?APeter and Tom.

14、BKate and Peter.CKate and Amy.DTom and Amy.BI hid the long black bag in the garage（车库）two days ago. Tonight, in the dark, I would finally take it away. If everything went OK, it would be done by morning. But I had to be sure no one, not even my wife, saw me. It was more difficult to get away from th

15、e party than I expected. I said that the children were tired and needed to go to bed. It was partly true. But I wanted to leave early because I would finish my plan. First I had to get the kids to sleep. That was not easy at any time and tonight it was even more difficult. The eldest one wanted to k

16、now why we left the party early. I told him 10: 30 p. m. was not early. As usual, I read them a bedtime story, but I read very slowly so that they would not know my secret. I went out of the house and into the garage quietly. Taking one end, I pulled the bag out from its hiding place and took it int

17、o the garden. I was worried that my neighbours might see me and call the police. It was already eleven oclock. I started working, trying to make as little noise as possible. And that was not easy with a saw（锯子）and a hammer（锤子）. After much hard work, I finally finished my work. I looked down at my wa

18、tch. It was 4: 00 a. m. Then I went inside to have a shower and get a few hours of sleep. I was sure the kids would rush into my room and wake me up to tell me about the new tree house Father Christmas brought them this year.31Why did the man feel nervous?ABecause he left the party too late.BBecause

19、 he worried that others would know his secret.CBecause he was afraid of the darkness.DBecause he didnt know where the black bag was.32The underlined word “they” in Paragraph 3 refers to .Athe classmatesBthe parentsCthe childrenDthe neighbours33How long did it take the man to finish the hard work?A2

20、hours.B3 hours.C4 hours.D5 hours.34In what order did the man do the following? Read the kids a story. Had a shower. Worked in the moonlight. Pulled the bag from the garage. Went to a party.ABCD35How would the children feel when they saw the mans work?AInterested.BExcited.CTired.DAngry.第二部分 课本知识应用四根据

21、句意及汉语或首字母提示写单词(本大题共10小题，每小题1分，共10分)36This is a _（精彩的）movie. Would you like to see it？37I cant find my pen _（任何地方）. Do you know where it is？38Is there _（任何人）who can tell a story？3980%of the students passed the English test. Wow！ _（大多数）of us passed the English test！40Im new here. I have _（很少）friends.4

22、1I like staying at home, and I d _ going out.42I w_ how he got there43I dont have e_ money. Can you lend me some?44I am too tired. So I dont think I can climb up to the t_ of the mountain.45Yesterday I got w_ because it rained heavily.五用所给单词的正确形式填空(本大题共10小题，每小题1分，共10分)46What about _ (go) to the moun

23、tains?47Bob _ (visit) his aunt last Sunday.48They took many _ (photo) in Beijing.49Hainan Island is a _ ( wonder ) place to visit.50They _ (see) many interesting animals in the zoo last weekend.51I think this is an _ (enjoy) trip.52_ he _ (visit) New York yesterday?53Did Tom enjoy _ (visit) the Grea

24、t Wall?Yes, he did.54I fell ill and didnt feel like _ (eat) anything.55Linda decides _ (tell) the story to her teacher.六、完成句子(本大题共5小题，每小题2分，共10分)56午饭我们吃了特别的东西。For lunch we had _ _ .57相当多的人们对旅游感兴趣。 _ _ _ people are interested in travel.58你觉得上次的旅行怎么样？ How did you _ _your last trip?59我昨天什么也没买。 I_ _ yes

25、terday.60他似乎知道事实的真相。He _ _ know the truth.七、语法填空(本大题共10小题，每小题1分，共10分)根据短文内容及所给提示，在文中的空白处填写一个正确的单词。I organized a picnic last Sunday. I got up _61_ and called some of my closest friends. First, we _62_ (decide) on a good place to go, and then we talked _63_ what food to bring. Everyone cooked the dish

26、es that could be carried _64_ (easy). Everything was put into a backpack and we _65_ (take) it across fields. When we _66_ (final)got there, we sat down eating, and _67_ (enjoy) a nice day together._68_ I was quite sure that food tasted much better on a picnic than _69_ else! We really _70_ (have) a

27、 good time.八、材料作文(本大题共15分)71假如你是汤姆，刚刚度过愉快的暑假。请根据以下提示写一篇80词左右的短文，讲述一下你的假期经历。要点提示：1. 去海南旅游，在沙滩上玩；2. 做自己喜欢的事情，如去书店买书；3. 和朋友踢足球，参加体育锻炼；4. 每天早上读英语，写作业。_参考答案：1B【解析】句意：我们在沙滩上玩得很开心。考查固定搭配。have fun 意为“玩得开心”, 其后面的动词应用-ing形式，构成固定短语have fun doing sth.。故选B。2D【解析】句意：他去哪里度假了？他去了山里。考查助动词的用法。根据回答的时态是过去时态，可知问句是过去时态，所

28、以借助助动词did，故选D。3A【解析】句意：我们叔叔什么时候来看我们？他这个周末就会来。他通过e-mail告诉我了。考查动词时态辨析。A. told告诉，动词过去式；B. tells告诉，动词一般现在式；C. will tell告诉，动词一般将来式；D. is telling告诉，动词现在进行式。根据“Hell come this weekend.”可知他在过去已经告诉我，他会来的这件事。所以用一般过去时态。故选A。4A【解析】句意：一个小时前我给你打电话了，但是你不在宾馆。你出去了吗？没有，我在洗手间。考查一般疑问句。上句为一般疑问句，一般疑问句应用Yes或No来回答。故选A。5C【解析】

29、句意：东营的空气比许多其他城市更糟糕。我们必须做点什么来保护我们的环境。考查复合不定代词。nothing没有事；anything一些事，一般用于否定句，疑问句或条件状语从句中。something一些事，用于肯定句；everything每件事。根据“We must do.to protect ourenvironment”可知此处指“一些事”，且在肯定句中，用something。故选C。6D【解析】句意：由于莫言获得了诺贝尔文学奖，他的书在许多书店都卖光了。考查because of的用法。“because of”为介词短语，意为“由于”，后接名词、代词或动名词；because，since，as皆

30、为连词，表“因为”时后面跟句子；分析句子可知，“.his winning of the Nobel Literature Prize.”为名词短语，所以此空应填“because of”。故选D。7B【解析】句意：你读今天的报纸了吗？是的。它确实很无聊。里面没有新内容。考查不定代词的用法。something new一些新事；nothing new没有什么新事；anything new任何 新事；new nothing表述错误。根据“Yes. Its really boring.”可知，报纸上没有什么新的内容，应用nothing，并且不定代词被形容词修饰，形容词通常要后置，故选B。8C【解析】句意

31、：每年许多人在这儿度假。考查介词辨析。in里面；at在几点；on上面；with和。on vacation固定短语，意为“在度假”，故选C。9C【解析】句意：争取准时到家，别让我们一直等。本题考查动词短语辨析和非谓语动词。get to到达；arrive in到达；get获得，到达（get home回家）；reach到达；wait等待。home为地点副词，前面不用介词；此外keep sb. doing sth.“使某人一直做某事”，固定搭配。故选C。10D【解析】句意：几乎没有孩子喜欢在早上早起，他们都喜欢睡觉。考查形容词辨析。little和a little修饰不可数名词；a few修饰可数名词复

32、数，表示“一些”；few修饰可数名词复数，表示“几乎没有”。children是可数名词复数；根据题意及常识，孩子们早上都想睡懒觉。故选D。11A【解析】句意：多好的天气啊！我们去踢足球吧。考查感叹句。感叹句的中心词是名词，所以用what修饰，而且weather是不可数名词，所以不用不定冠词。故选A。12B【解析】句意：当我看令人激动的比赛的时候我感到很激动。考查形容词辨析。excited感到激动的，修饰人；exciting令人激动的，修饰物。第一空根据I可知，是说我很激动，因此是excited，在句中作表语；第二空表达“令人激动的”比赛，因此是exciting，在句中作定语。故选B。13D【解

33、析】句意：我想像一只鸟一样在天空飞翔。考查非谓语动词。fly飞；feel like doing sth.想要做某事，固定用法。故选D。14B【解析】句意：下雨时我有一把雨伞。考查冠词。根据“I hadumbrella when it rained”可知，此处泛指一把伞，用不定冠词；umbrella是以元音音素开头的单词，用不定冠词an修饰 ，故选B。15D【解析】句意：两天前许多游客到达北京了。考查动词短语辨析。reach为及物动词，后面不接介词；get to到达；arrive at到达(小地方)；arrive in到达(大地方)。由“two days ago”可知用一般过去时，排除B项；再由

34、“Beijing”是一个大地方，要用arrived in。故选D。16A17D18B19A20B21B22A23D24A25A【解析】【导语】本文通过描述一次特殊的班级聚会，反映了作者和同学们快乐的学校生活，同时，作者让我们明白了一个道理：齐心协力才能营造和谐的生活。16句意：每个人都得帮忙。help帮助；leave离开；study学习；sing唱歌。根据第二段中“Our job for this years party day was to make our classroom look 3 and special.”可知，每个人都要为这个聚会伸出援助之手。故选A。17句意：加里、艾玛和我是

35、好朋友。teachers老师；workers工人；doctors医生；friends朋友。根据“our classroom”和“14 years old”可知，此处表示“朋友或同学”。故选D。18句意：我们在今年的晚会上的工作就是让我们的教室看起来漂亮而特别。dirty脏的；beautiful漂亮的；far远的；slow慢的。根据上文中的“this years party day”可知，要举办聚会，所以应该把教室装饰得漂漂亮亮的。故选B。19句意：加里想出了一个好主意。thought of想出；put up张贴；thought over深思熟虑；put on穿上。根据“a great idea

36、”可知，应该是想出一个好主意。故选A。20句意：他想让我们的教室看起来像一个海底世界。look for寻找；look like看起来像；look at看；look after照顾。根据“our classroom”和“an underwater（海底）world”可知，应该是让教室看起来像海底世界。故选B。21句意：他从他父亲那里拿两张旧的大渔网。her她的；his他的；their他们的；its它的。根据主语“He”可知，是从他的爸爸那拿了渔网。故选B。22句意：重要的日子来了。came来；left离开；spoke说；went去。根据下文的情境可知，盛大的节日终于到了。故选A。23句意：当我们

37、高兴地谈话时，渔网掉了下来。After在之后；Before在之前；Because因为；When当时候。根据“the fishing nets fell down”可知，当我们谈话时，渔网掉下来了。故选D。24句意：我们都被渔网困住了。in在里面；on在上面；to朝向；for为了。根据短语“be caught in”“被困在里面”可知，应该使用“in”。故选A。25句意：我们真地感到“在水下”！water水；desk桌子；bed床；bag包。根据第二段中的“an underwater（海底）world”可知，此时他们都在“水下”。故选A。26D27B28C29B30D【解析】【导语】本文主要讲述

38、了三个人对于暑假的计划，分别要去哪里要做什么等。26细节理解题。根据文中“First, I will go to Shanghai with my sister Kate. Shanghai is my favorite city. There are many interesting places and we can also taste something delicious there.”可知，彼得将在上海尝尝美味的东西。故选D。27细节理解题。根据文中“First, I will help more at home. My parents are always busy, so Il

39、l help them with the housework and let them have more time to relax. Second, I will practice the violin every day. Third, I think the holiday is a good time for me to do some sports, such as running and playing soccer. I am sure my winter holiday will be wonderful.”可知，汤姆的寒假制定了三个计划：在家里帮父母做家务；练习小提琴；做一

40、些运动，故选B。28细节理解题。根据文中“I will visit my grandparents on the farm, too.”可知，彼得的祖父母住在农场，故选C。29细节理解题。根据文中“Second, I will go to Xian and stay there for two weeks.”可知，艾米将在西安呆两周，故选B。30细节理解题。根据文中“Then, I will come back and enjoy myself with my friends. We will play soccer or go shopping together.”及“Third, I th

41、ink the holiday is a good time for me to do some sports, such as running and playing soccer. I am sure my winter holiday will be wonderful.”可知，汤姆和艾米将会在到来的寒假踢足球，故选D。31B32C33D34B35B【解析】【导语】本文主要介绍了作者为了给孩子们在圣诞节时创造圣诞老人送礼物的奇迹，在夜里秘密地工作的故事。31推理判断题。根据“but I read very slowly so that they would not know my sec

42、ret”以及文章内容可知作者感到很紧张，因为他担心有人会发现他的秘密。故选B。32推理判断题。根据“First I had to get the kids to sleep. but I read very slowly so that they would not know my secret”可知作者想方设法让孩子们睡觉，所以作者给他们读故事很慢，这样孩子们就不会知道作者的秘密，故此处they指代“孩子们”。故选C。33细节理解题。根据“It was already eleven oclock”以及“It was 4: 00 a. m”可知作者11点开始准备，4点准备好，一共5个小时。故选

43、D。34细节理解题。根据“The eldest one wanted to know why we left the party early.As usual, I read them a bed time story.I pulled the bag out from its hiding place and took it into the garden.It was already eleven oclock. I started working.After much hard work, I finally finished my work.Then I went inside to

44、have a shower and get a few hours of sleep.” 可知作者先去了聚会，回来后给孩子们读故事，把袋子从车库拿出来，然后在月光下工作，工作后洗澡，正确顺序是。故选B。35推理判断题。根据“I was sure the kids would rush into my room and wake me up to tell me about the new tree house Father Christmas brought them this year.”可知作者确信孩子们会冲进房间，把作者叫醒，告诉作者圣诞老人今年给他们带来的新树屋，由此可知孩子们会非常兴

45、奋。故选B。36wonderful37anywhere38anyone39Most40few【解析】36句意：这是一部精彩的影片，你想看到它吗?精彩的，英文表达是wonderful，形容词，修饰后面的名词movie，a wonderful movie一部精彩的影片，故答案填wonderful。37句意：我到处都找不到我的钢笔。你知道它在哪儿吗?任何地方，英文表达是anywhere，副词，故答案填anywhere。38句意：有谁能讲故事吗？任何人，英文表达是anyone，不定代词，在句中作主语，谓语动词用单数，故答案填anyone。39句意：80% 的学生通过了英语考试。哇！我们大多数人都通过了

46、英语考试！大多数，英文表达是most，mostof+名词复数形式表示大多数，因其位于句首，所以首字母要大写，故答案填Most。40句意：我是新来的。我几乎没有朋友。根据Im new here.我是新来的，可知我几乎没有朋友，friends可数名词复数，所以用few来修饰表示否定的意思，故答案填few。41dislike42wonder(ed)43enough44top45wet【解析】41句意：我喜欢呆在家里，不喜欢出去。根据前文I like staying at home（我喜欢呆在家里）可知“不喜欢出去”。结合句意和语境及首字母提示可知填dislike。42句意：我想知道他是怎么到那儿的。

47、主句是一般现在时，从句可用任何时态，主句是过去式，从句用过去的某一种时态。结合句意和语境及首字母提示可知填wonder(ed)。43句意：我没有足够的钱。你能借给我一些吗？根据下文Can you lend me some?（你能借给我一些吗？）可知“我没有足够的钱。” 结合句意和语境及首字母提示可知填enough。44句意：所以我认为我不能爬到山顶。根据上文I am too tired.（我太累了。）结合句意和语境及首字母提示可知填top。45句意：昨天我淋湿了，因为雨下得很大。根据下文because it rained heavily.（因为雨下得很大。）结合句意和语境及首字母提示可知填we

48、t。46going47visited48photos49wonderful 50saw【解析】46About是介词，后跟名词或动名词作宾语。故答案为going。47根据last Sunday可知，本题是一般过去时。故答案为visited。48前有many修饰，名词用复数。故答案为photos。49此题用wonder的形容词wonderful修饰名词place。故答案为wonderful。50根据last weekend可知，本题是一般过去时。故答案为saw。点睛：此类题要多从语法角度考虑，如第5题根据时间状语可知，考查see的一般过去式。51enjoyable52 Did, visit53vi

49、siting54eating55to tell【解析】51句意：我认为这是一次令人愉快的旅行。由空前的冠词an及空后的名词trip可知，此处应填enjoy的形容词形式enjoyable“有乐趣的，令人愉快的”。故填enjoyable。52句意：昨天他去参观纽约了吗？由yesterday可判断本句用一般过去时，句中含有实义动词visit，故一般疑问句应借助助动词did，句中的动词visit用原形。故填(1). Did,(2). Visit。53句意：汤姆喜欢游览长城吗？是的，他有。enjoy doing sth.是固定搭配，意为“喜欢做某事”。根据题意，故填visiting。54句意：我生病了，

50、不想吃东西。feel like doing sth.是固定搭配，意为“想做某事”，根据句意，故填eating。故填eating。55句意：琳达决定把这个故事告诉她的老师。decide to do sth.是固定搭配，意为“决定做某事”，故填to tell。故填to tell。【点睛】在空后给出提示词，这时我们要注意使用单词的正确形式。常考查实词的用法，如名词的单复数、动词的时态、语态、形容词和副词的词性转化以及比较级和最高级的用法等。如第5小题考查固定搭配。句意：琳达决定把这个故事告诉她的老师。decide to do sth.是固定搭配，意为“决定做某事”，故填to tell。故填to te

51、ll。56 something special57 Quite a few58 feel about59 bought nothing60 seemed to【解析】56something某事，一些事，是一个不定代词；special特别的，是一个形容词。修饰不定代词的形容词应放在其后。故答案为something special。57根据句意可知，这里考查短语quite a few意为“相当多的”，修饰可数名词复数。位于句首，第一个字母应大写。故答案为Quite a few。58feel感觉，是一个动词；about关于，是一个介词。句中有助动词did，动词用原形。故答案为feel about。5

52、9buy买，是一个动词。根据句中的时间状语yesterday可知，这句话应用一般过去时，动词变为过去式bought；nothing“什么都没有”，是否定意思的不定代词。故答案为bought nothing。60seem似乎，好像，是一个动词，其后可以跟动词不定式，构成句型seem to do sth.“似乎做某事”。根据句意可知，这里说的是过去的事情，应用一般过去时态，动词变为过去式seemed。故答案为seemed to。61early62decided63about64easily65took66finally67enjoyed68And69anywhere70had【解析】本文记叙了“我

53、”和朋友一起去野餐的经过，表现了高兴的心情。61句意：我起得很早，给我最亲密的朋友打了电话。get up起床，动词短语需用副词修饰；根据句意结构和上下文提示，可知填early。62句意：我们决定去一个好地方。last Sunday上个星期天，可知本文是一般过去时态；根据句意时态和英文提示，可知填decided。63句意：然后我们讨论了要带什么食物。talk about sth.讨论某事；根据句意结构和上下文提示，可知填about。64句意：每个人都做容易携带的菜。carry携带，动词需用副词修饰；根据句意语境和英文提示，可知填easily。65句意：所有东西都装进了一个背包，我们把它带过田野。

54、本句缺谓语动词，根据句意时态和英文提示，可知用过去式，故填took。66句意：当我们终于到达那里时，我们坐下来吃东西。本句缺副词状语，根据句意语境和英文提示，可知填finally。67句意：我们坐下来吃东西，一起享受美好的一天。and连接并列结构，前后时态需一致；根据句意时态和英文提示，可知填enjoyed。68句意：我敢肯定，野餐时吃的东西比其他任何地方都好吃!本句和前一句是并列关系，需用and连接，句首单词需大写首字母；根据句意结构和上下文提示，可知填And。69句意：我敢肯定，野餐时吃的东西比其他任何地方都好吃!than比，用于比较；else别的，根据句意结构和上下文提示，可知是和别的任

55、何地方的东西作比较，故填anywhere。70句意：我们真的玩得很开心。根据句意时态和英文提示，可知用过去式，故填had。【点睛】短文填空题，要求根据句意语境和英文提示用单词的正确形式填空，使句意通顺，文意连贯。主要考查单词形式，包括名词的单复数和所有格、动词的三单形式、非谓语动词、基数词或序数词，主格代词/宾格代词和物主代词（形容词性物主代词/名词性物主代词）等。这类题目难度不大，重点是掌握句意，在理解的基础上把握句子时态，从而判断所给单词的正确形式。71例文I am Tom. I had a good time this summer vacation. I went to Hainan

56、with my family and had fun on the beach. During the vacation, I often went to my favorite bookstore and bought many books there. In the afternoon I usually played soccer with my friends. I think doing sports can keep us healthy. I also spent time studying. I read English every morning from 9:00 a.m.

57、 to 11:00 a.m. And I did all my homework. All in all, I had a good time during ray vacation.【解析】本篇为材料作文，要求按照提示完成一篇你如何度过一个愉快的暑假的短文，讲述自己的假期经历。1. 题干解读：本篇材料作文要求以Tom的身份，用第一人称的方式讲述如何度过一个愉快的暑假；讲述过去的事情，用一般过去时；书写时要注意用全所给材料，文句通顺，内容完整。2.例文点评：本例文结构严谨，层次分明。开篇紧扣主题，做自我介绍；正文部分详细地描写自己假期的活动，买书、踢足球、读书、做作业等；结尾以All in all, I had a good time during my vacation.总结全文。文章布局合理，内容完整连贯。3.高分亮点：本篇例文短语丰富、句式多样。With伴随状语；and并列结构；I think 宾语从句；spend doing sth；have fun on the beach ；play soccer with my friends ；do sports ；keep；healthy ；read English do ones homework等详细地描述了假期的活动；用have a good time 总结全文，文句精彩，行文通畅。