Unit 2 Healthy Lifestyle-【同步写作课】2023-2024学年高二英语单元写作深度指导（人教版2019选择性必修第三册）.docx

1、选择性必修第三册Unit 2单元写作指导与演练A letter to the editor单元写作早知道写作任务本单元的写作任务是写一篇建议信。建议信应用非常广泛，也是英语高考作文常考的体裁。话题一般要求给对方的各种烦恼以建议，如压力、失败、人际关系紧张等。或给项目策划如栏目优化等提出内容建议。亦或给对方的计划或兴趣提出方法建议，等等。常用表达1. Its helpful/ important / necessary to2. It would be a good idea to3. I would like to suggest that4. I think it would be more

2、 beneficial if you could 5. If I were you, I would6. First of all. I think it would be better if.7. It will certainly help a lot to do sth / It also helps to do sth单元话题真题展示高考链接建议信2023年新高考1卷建议信的写作目的是提出建议或忠告，不是投诉信。观点要合情合理，注意礼貌当先。Use what you have learned to write a letter of advice. 假定你是李华，你校外教要举办口语培训

3、班，让练习口语的所有的学生两人一组练习，随机挑选两个人分成一组练习，你对此有意见，说说原因和提建议。注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。建议信是就某事向收信人提出自己的建议或给出忠告，以帮助对方解决相关问题的信件。建议信是对收信人就某一问题提出看法、建议或忠告。建议信不同于投诉信，所以写信人一定要注意礼貌当先。建议信一般包括以下内容:首先说明写信的目的，其次，在肯定优点的基础上提出自己的建议或看法(否则别人以为你在投诉，而不是在提建议)，最后表达希望采纳建议。写作“三步走”:1.自我介绍、说明目的2.委婉地提出建议及改进措施，或提出忠告3.礼貌地总结或期

4、盼回复【文章结构】第一段：问题陈述：根据信息点确定举行表达。第二段：提出建议：使用多种句型，避免单一句型表达。第三段：愿望或期望：写信的结尾套句。说明写信的目的Im sorry you have trouble in. I am writing to share some advice with you.我很遗憾你在（方面）遇到了困难，我正在写信是想和你分享一些建议。You have asked me for my advice about/on and I will try to give you my suggestions.你向我征求关于的意见，我将试着给你提供建议。I am writi

5、ng to express my views on. 我正在写信是想表达我对的看法。提出建议和改进措施并给予忠告I suggest/recommend/think that you should 我建议/推荐/认为你应该You may/might/can consider doing. 你可以考虑做I think it would be a good idea to 我认为将是个好主意。In my opinion, it would be wise to. 在我看来，.将是明智的选择。As far as I am concerned, youd better . 就我而言，你最好.Why no

6、t.?/Why dont you.? 为什么不.？/你为什么不.？希望建议被采纳并期待回复I hope you will find these proposals (suggestions/ tips) practical/ useful/helpful.我希望你会发现这些提议（建议/提示）实用/有用/有帮助。I would be ready to discuss this matter with you in more detail.我愿意与你更详细地讨论这个问题。I would appreciate it very much if you could consider my suggest

7、ions.如果您能考虑我的建议，我将不胜感激。I will be glad if you will consider my advice. 如果你能考虑我的建议，我会很高兴的。I hope you will take my advice into account. 我希望你能考虑我的建议。【小试牛刀】Dear Friends,On behalf of the Students Union, I am writing to take this opportunity to extend my heartfelt welcome to all the overseas students to st

8、udy at our university.It is my great pleasure to make several practical suggestions to you. To begin with, life at our university may not be relaxing. You should attend the class every day and do your after-school assignments accordingly. Each of you should still help one Chinese student with his or

9、 her English study. In spite of all these challenges, you can still enjoy your life here. Various activities like social gatherings and dances provide ample opportunities to make friends.I really hope you will enjoy your study and life here. Should you have any further questions, please let me know.

10、Yours sincerely,Li MingBad habits(不良习惯)1.Become involved in tobacco抽烟上瘾2.Alcohol abuse酗酒3.Physical and mental health problems身心健康问题4. Rely on unhealthy snacks依赖不健康的零食5. Skip breakfast不吃早餐6. Sleep too much睡得过多 7. Game addict 游戏成瘾8.TV addict 电视成瘾9. Internet addict 网瘾10. Stay up too late 熬夜11. Use a ph

11、one too much沉迷手机12. Feel sleepy and dizzy昏昏欲睡头晕脑胀13.Get the flu easily易患感冒14. Experience many toothaches经常牙疼15. Feel stressed out紧张焦虑16.Relax by playing computer games靠玩电脑游戏放松17. Cigarette smoking抽烟18.Feel worn out精疲力竭19. Lung surgery肺部手术20. Form bad habits养成坏习惯Good habits (良好习惯)1. Stop buying sugar

12、y drinks不买含糖饮料2.Nutrition specialist营养专家3. Fitness consultant健康顾问4. A balanced diet menu一份平衡膳食菜谱5. Eat nothing with sugar不吃含糖食物6. Stimulate motivation激发动力7. Jump on the skateboard玩滑板8. Feel more dynamic感到更精力充沛9.Get refreshed精神焕发 10.Blood vessels血管Ways to break bad habits(改变坏习惯的方法)1.Grow up 长大2. Beco

13、me independent独立3. Make own decisions自己作决定4.Recognize ad habits认识坏习惯5.Make appropriate changes作适当改变6.Make a choice作选择7. According to modern psychology根据现代心理8. Facilitate a positive change促进积极的改变9. Examine our bad habit cycles检视我们的坏习惯10.Replace a negative routine with something more positive用更积极的路径代替

14、不积极的11. Feel relaxed感到放松12.Become pessimistic变得悲观13.Give up 放弃14. Over a period of time 过了一段时间15.To reach the goal of change为了达成改变这一目标16. Show some discipline展现一些原则17. Take many small steps采取许多小步骤18. Find the right balance找到恰当的平衡Impacts (习惯的影响)1. Lead to serious addictions导致严重上瘾2.Feel a sense of rew

15、ard奖励感3. It is easy to make excuses and give up容易找借口并放弃4. Ensure we have a happy and healthy life确保我们拥有快乐而健康的生活5.Enjoy exercising享受锻炼6. Feel much more energetic感觉精力充沛得多Positive aspects(积极的方面)1. In both body and mind身心2. Sleep soundly酣眠3. Enhance the quality of my life提高我的生活质量4. Manage stress success

16、fully成功地管理压力5. Take up a new hobby培养一个新的爱好6.Absorb stress effectively有效地吸收压力7. Take your mind off everything摒弃一切杂念8. Increase efficiency of heart and lungs增加心肺工作效率假如你是李华,你的英国网友Alice的生活方式不太健康。你想给她提些建议。请你用英语给写封电子邮件，内容包括：用水果代替零食；用水代替可乐；减少使用电子产品的时间；多运动。注意：1. 词数120左右，短文的开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数；2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文

17、连贯；3. 短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息。Dear Alice,Hope everything goes well with you._Yours Sincerely,Li HuaDear Alice,Hope everything goes well with you. Do you still stay up very late every night? Im writing to share my ideas on how you can live a healthy life.First of all, I think its a good idea to eat more frui

18、ts instead of snakes. Also, you need to get ride of the habit of drinking cola only. Why not drink more water? If you spend less time on your smart phone, you can have more time to get together with friends. Whats more, dont you think doing sports often make you look well-built and feel energetic at

19、 the same time?All in all, a healthy life style makes us healthy, wealthy and wise in the future. Hopefully you can follow my advice and make a change from now on.Yours sincerely,Li Huaregular exercise1.科学研究表明欢笑所产生的化学物质可以让人感觉更好。scientific studies show that laughter produces chemicals make people fee

20、l better.2. Most people assume that regular exercise does wonders for the body and mind.大部分人认为有规律地锻炼身体对身心健康有奇迹般的效果。3.锻炼能帮助你减少压力以及克服消极情绪。Working out can help you reduce stress and get over negative feelings.healthy benefits1.它带来的健康方面的好处到底是什么呢? What exactly are its healthy benefits?2. To begin with, p

21、hysical activities increases the efficiency of your heart and lungs.首先，身体锻炼会增加心肺的工作效率。3. Some studies even show that exercise improves certain brain functions, meaning you could actually exercise your way to better performance at school.一些研究甚至表明锻炼可以可以提高一定的大脑功能，意味着你真的可以锻炼从而改善学业。being happier1.观看她的谈话可

22、以发现更多的令人惊讶的变化，都是我们锻炼时大脑里产生的。Watch her talk and find out more about the amazing changes that occur in our brain when we exercise.2.为了在锻炼后帮助你的肌肉放松并修复，你需要吃富含蛋白质的食物，比如:鱼、蛋和奶制品。To help your muscles recover and repair themselves after exercise, you need eat food rich in protein, such as fish, eggs and mil

23、k products.3.我晚上睡眠更好了，而且白天也更精力充沛。我更快乐也更自信了。I sleep better at night, and Im more energetic during the day. I feel happier and more confident.假定你是李华，你所喜爱的Global Mirror周报创刊五周年之际征集读者意见请你依据以下内容给主编写封信，内容主要包括：1说明你是该报的忠实读者2说明该报优点：1)兼顾国内外新闻2)介绍名人成功故事 3提出建议：刊登指导英语学习的文章注意：1词数100左右，开头语己为你写好；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【

24、佳作欣赏】Dear Editor-in-Chief,Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Global Mirror!Im a regular reader of your newspaper. I like it so much that I hardly miss any copy.There are many advantages of Global Mirror. Firstly, Global Mirrorcovers both national and international news. By simply turning the

25、pages, I can know all important things that have happened both home and abroad. Besides, the success stories of world-famous people are also attractive to me, which help me learn a lot from them. In a word, thanks to Global Mirror, we are well-informed and keep up with the changing world.As a young

26、student, I wish that I can be a master of English language. Therefore, I suggest that Global Mirror provide articles about English learning for us.Finally, I hope that Global Mirrorwill become more and more popular. Thank you for your time!Sincerely yours,Li Hua【链接高考经典诵读】（2023年新高考1卷）假定你是李华，你校外教要举办口语

27、培训班，让练习口语的所有的学生两人一组练习，随机挑选两个人分成一组练习，你对此有意见，说说原因和提建议。注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。_【佳作欣赏1】Dear foreign teacher,I am Li Hua, one of your students. Regarding the grouping method for the oral training course, I would like to raise some concerns and suggestions. While it is true that randomly mi

28、xing up students can encourage more communication and interaction, there may also be some potential issues to consider.Firstly, random grouping can result in students with vastly different speaking abilities being paired together. This may make some students with stronger communication skills feel i

29、nhibited, while those with weaker speaking skills may feel overwhelmed. Additionally, some students may feel uneasy and uncomfortable having to work with unfamiliar classmates.Therefore, I suggest that a more thoughtful grouping method be adopted, such as grouping students according to their exam gr

30、ades, verbal performance, or interests. This would allow each student to practice their spoken English with peers who are of a similar proficiency level, and ones with similar interests, which would serve to enhance student motivation and confidence. This approach also ensures that students with var

31、ying abilities have opportunities to develop their language skills.I hope that my suggestions will be considered. Thank you for your attention.Sincerely,Li Hua【佳作欣赏2】Dear esteemed foreign instructor,My name is Li Hua, one of your esteemed students. I write to express my opinion concerning the groupi

32、ng strategy proposed by you for the oral training course. While it may be true that random pairing of students can foster greater interaction and communication, there are potential drawbacks to consider.Caution must be exercised in randomly grouping students, particularly in a scenario where their c

33、ommunication abilities vastly differ. It may lead to a situation where high-level communicators feel violated and inhibited, while those lacking are bogged down by the overwhelming challenges of the class. In addition, some students may feel uneasy working with unfamiliar classmates.With this in min

34、d, I propose that a thoughtful grouping strategy be adopted, albeit grouping students according to their exam scores, verbal proficiency or individual interests. This, in turn, ensures that every student can practice speaking English with like-minded peers, thereby boosting their motivation and conf

35、idence. More importantly, it guarantees that students with varying communication abilities have equal opportunities to develop their language skills.It is my fervent hope that my suggestions would gain approval, and taken into account. I thank you for your unwavering attention.Yours sincerely,Li Hua

36、【佳作欣赏3】Dear teacher,I think its not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training class. I have a few reasons for my opinion.Firstly, randomly pairing up students may lead to imbalanced language abilities within the groups. Some students might have advanced speaking skills

37、 while others may struggle with basic conversation. This can hinder the progress of both students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other student to improve.Secondly, students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if they are paired with someone t

38、hey dont get along with or have difficulty communicating with. Building a positive and comfortable learning environment is crucial for effective language practice, and randomly assigning pairs might undermine this.Instead, I suggest implementing a system where students can choose their own partners based on their language abilities and personal preferences. This allows students to collaborate with someone they are comfortable with, ensuring a supportive and productive learning environment.Yours,Li hua