Unit 2 Neighbours-2021-2022学年七年级英语下学期单元话题满分写作（牛津译林版）.docx

1、2021-2022七年级英语下学期单元话题满分写作 Unit 2: Neighbours单元话题：Helping each other “邻里互助”范文11俗话说“远亲不如近邻”, 邻居对我们的生活非常重要。请你根据下面的提示, 以“My Neighbour”为题，写一篇作文。要点如下：1. 我是Jim，我有一个新邻居叫Peter。我和他住同一栋楼，他住在五楼。2. 他是一名导游 (tour guide)，他喜欢带领游客游览不同的城市。在未来，他打算环游世界； 3. 他非常乐于助人，当人们遇到各种问题时，都向他求助；4. 我的感受(2-3句)_【答案】范文：My NeighbourAs the

2、 saying goes A neighbor is better than a distant relative. Neighbors are very important in our lives.I am Jim. I live in Sunshine Community. I have a new neighbour, Peter. We live in the same building. He lives on the fifth floor. He is a tour guide. He likes showing visitors around different cities

3、. He is going to travel around the world in the future. He works hard. He is kind-hearted and ready to help others. When people are in trouble, they usually ask him for help. Everyone in our neighbourhood likes him. So we are lucky to have a nice neighbour.I think we should help each other in our ne

4、ighbourhood. I like our neighbors.【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作，在写作时要根据汉语提示的内容来介绍自己的新邻居，包括名字、住所、职业、爱好、性格等方面，最后再写出自己的感受。2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称为主来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时。在介绍时，力求语言准确，内容完整，行文连贯，保证条理清晰。范文22请根据以下提示，以“My Neighborhood”为题，写一篇80词左右的短文，介绍你的社区情况。提示：1. 不大，但非常漂亮；2. 有个大型游泳池，我每周游泳两次；a big swimming pool twice a week3.

5、 有个篮球场，经常举办篮球比赛； have basketball matches4. 有个大型购物中心，可以买到各种各样的东西； many kinds of things5. 人们很友好，彼此相互帮助。be friendly to each otherMy Neighborhood_【答案】One possible version:My NeighbourhoodMy neighbourhood is not very big but beautiful. There is a swimming pool. I go swimming twice a week. There is a bask

6、etball court. We often have basketball matches there. There is also a large shopping mall. We can buy different kinds of things there. People here are very friendly. They often help each other. Welcome to my neighbourhood.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于材料文写作，根据题干所给的社区情况，结合提示词进行描述；保证内容完整，条理清晰。2.写作指导：本文应该用第一和第三人称为主；

7、时态采用一般现在时为主，在写作时可写成一个段落，但是要分清层次；第一个层次总述社区情况；第二层次描述社区的游泳池、篮球场和购物中心；第三个层次描述社区的邻居都很友好，欢迎大家来社区。范文33请根据所给中文提示，用英语写一篇短文，向大家介绍你们的社区中心。1. 在我们的居民区里有一个社区中心，它很有帮助；2. 周末有很多志愿者聚在这里，和大家分享各自的一技之长；3. 帮助我们解决各种问题4. 社区中心还帮助老人，有时社区的人为他们买东西；5. 我们很幸运有这样的社区中心。注意：1. 文章须包括所有的内容要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯；第三要点要至少发挥2句；2. 词数70左右。_【答案】There

8、 is a community center in our neighbourhood . It is helpful. At weekends, many volunteers meet here. They share their different skills. They help us with all kinds of problems. They help us check the computers. They also help us fix bikes. The center helps old people too. Sometimes some people from

9、the center do some shopping for them . We are very lucky to have a community center like this.【详解】请根据所给中文提示，用英语写一篇短文，向大家介绍你们的社区中心，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的文章。注意紧扣文章主题，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、词组及句型，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。【点睛】文中用到了一些好的句型

10、：They help us with all kinds of problems. They help us check the computers. They also help us fix bikes.这些给文章增色不少。范文44假设你是西蒙，你刚刚搬进了新的社区，请你根据以下提示，并适当发挥想象，向你的笔友莉莎介绍它。要求1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥； 3）词数：80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。内容：1. 我的新公寓在市中心，在第五层。2. 我不再和哥哥分享同一个房间，有了自己的房间。3

11、. 房间有一个阳台，是个种花的好地方。4. 我的学校离家只有2英里远，我可以步行去上学。5. 社区里的人友好而且乐于助人。社区里有一个社区服务中心，能帮助邻居解决各种问题。Dear Lisa， How are you? I live in a new neighbourhood now. Let me tell you something about it._Best wishes.Simon【答案】例文Dear Lisa，How are you? I live in a new neighbourhood now. Let me tell you something about it.My

12、new apartment is downtown, on the fifth floor. I dont share the same room with my brother anymore. I have my own room. The room has a balcony, which is a good place to grow flowers. My school is only two miles away from home. I can walk to school. People in the community are friendly and helpful. Th

13、ere is a community service center in the community, which can help the neighbors solve all kinds of problems.Best wishes.Simon【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于书信作文写作，要求按照所给的要点提示写一封信给我笔友莉莎，介绍我的新社区。注意写作时要点要齐全，同时也可进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥。2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时；文章开头已给出，写作时，注意承接上文，根据要点提示具体介绍我的新公寓的位置、我的房间、社区里的人；文中一定要包含题干中列出的所有要点；可以运用一些

14、短语和常用句型为文章增添色彩；注意单词书写的准确度，语法运用的准确度，上下文要衔接流畅。范文55假设你所生活的小区将在这周末举行一个互帮互助的活动，为社区居民提供一些便民服务。请你根据所学内容并适当发挥想象，帮助社区中心写一篇80词的英语书面通知。通知的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入要求词数。NoticeWe are going to have an activity called “Helping each other” at the community centre this Saturday afternoon. _Everyone is welcome!Community CentreJa

15、nuary 21, 2016【答案】One possible version:NoticeWe are going to have an activity called “Helping each other” at the community centre this Saturday afternoon.Some volunteers will come here and help us with some problems. Mr. Zhang and Mr. Wang are good engineers. If there is something wrong with your br

16、oken TV sets, computers or fridges, you can ask them for help. Miss Yang, a good English teacher, will give children a talk on how to study English well.There are also some doctors from the community hospital. They will help us with our health problems.It will begin at 9:00 a.m.Everyone is welcome!C

17、ommunity CentreJanuary 21, 2016【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一则通知。要求结合给出的开头和结尾，根据提示内容进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来行文，时态以一般将来时为主。作文要分别介绍活动的时间、内容和志愿者会分别来帮忙做什么。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。范文6这周末，一些志愿者将来你们社区开展一些活动。请你根据提示给居民们写一张告示，介绍活动的内容。词数60左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。要点：1他们会许多技能，将帮我们解决各种问题；2他们中的一些人是画家，将为我们画画；一些人擅长电脑，将告诉我们怎样处理一些

18、简单的电脑问题；一些人是医生，如果我们感觉不舒服，可以从他们那里得到帮助；3他们都很乐意给我们出主意。NoticeSome volunteers will come to our neighbourhood this weekend._Sunshine Community Centre【答案】NoticeSome volunteers will come to our neighbourhood this weekend. They have many skills. They will help us with all kinds of problems. Some of them are

19、artists. They will draw for us. Some are good at computers and they will tell us how to deal with some simple problems of computers. Some of them are doctors. If we dont feel well, we can get help from them. They are all happy to give us some good ideas.Sunshine Community Centre【详解】本文是一篇提纲作文，根据所提供的要点写一篇通知，写作文首先要明确人称和时态，由于文章主要通知的是志愿者的一些活动，以第三人称为主。志愿者周末进行志愿活动，时态注意要用一般将来时。范文中，首先开篇点题，说明通知的主要内容，符合通知类作文的写作要求。文章中运用了if引导条件状语从句，是文章的一个亮点，既可以良好的表达出医生的志愿活动，又能体现写作功力，值得同学们学习运用。【点睛】在提纲类作文中，观点一定要鲜明，文章应当有一个明确的中心论点主题。明确主题后，注意观点的论述层次是否分明，一个中心论点通常有几个分论点支持，层次要分明，过渡要自然。 最后一段一般要总结全文，得出一个符合逻辑的结论，突出中心思想。