Unit 4 Finding your way-2021-2022学年七年级英语下学期单元话题满分写作(牛津译林版）.docx

1、2021-2022七年级英语下学期单元话题满分写作 Unit 4：Finding your way单元话题：an invitation letter “邀请信/描述路线”范文1本周日是你的15岁生日，你想邀请你的同学们来参加你的生日聚会。请你写一封80个词左右的邀请信，信中必须说明到达你家的路线。要点如下：1.时间：本周日中午12：00开始。地点：你家。内容：聚餐、唱歌、跳舞等各类活动。2.路线：走出校门，向右拐，一直往前走，在第三个路口向左转。经过中国银行并穿过人民路，在路的左边有一幢高楼，你家就在504室。Dear friends, _Yours, Jim【答案】Dear friends，

2、This Sunday is my 15th birthday. Could you come to my party? I plan to have the party at home. It will begin at 12 oclock this Sunday noon. We can have dinner, sing and dance. Of course, you can do many other things.Now, let me tell you the way to my home.First, go out of the school. Then turn right

3、 and go along the street all the time. When you see the third turning, turn left. Walk past Bank of China, and go along Renming Street. There is a high building on the left side of the street. My home is Room 504.YoursJim【解析】这是一篇书信作文，根据材料中的相关信息写一封邀请信。所提供的材料中列举了到达你家的路线。主要从1. 时间：本周日中午12：00开始。地点：你家。内容：

4、聚餐、唱歌、跳舞等各类活动。 2. 路线：走出校门，向右拐，一直往前走，在第三个路口向左转。经过中国银行并穿过人民路，在路的左边有一幢高楼，你家就在504室。这几个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。【高分句型一】When you see the third turning, turn left. 当你看到第三个转弯处时，向左转。句子Wh

5、en you see the third turning是由when引导的时间状语从句。【高分句型二】There is a high building on the left side of the street. 这条街左边有一座高楼。该句话用there be结构来写的。范文2假如你是Millie，你打算在家举办一个生日聚会，请你根据以下提示，给Simon写一封邀请信，请他来参加聚会。80词左右，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。提示：1.时间：4月21日，本周六，下午两点。2父母会准备大量的食物和饮料。3路线：乘地铁，从A出口出来，向右转，沿着淮海路走，然后在交通灯处左转，直走，就会在左

6、边看见一家邮局，我家就在邮局的后面。Dear Simon，I am going to have a birthday party at home this Saturday. _I am looking forward to seeing you at the party.Yours,Millie【答案】Dear Simon，I am going to have a birthday party at home this Saturday. I would like to invite you to my party. The party will start at 2 pm. on 21 A

7、pril. My parents will prepare plenty of food and drinks for us. We will also sing together and play games.You can come to my home by underground.You can get out at Exit A. Turn right and walk along Huaihai Road. Then turn left at the traffic lights and walk straight on. You will see a post office on

8、 your left. My home is behind it.I am looking forward to seeing you at the party.Yours，Millie【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，给Simon写一封邀请信，请他来参加我的生日聚会。【详解】结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I am going to，I would like to，We will等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。【点睛】

9、本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我要邀请你参加我的生日聚会，接下来介绍生日聚会的情况以及来我家的路线，最后我期望在聚会上看见你。此处would like to, invite sb to, by underground, get out, turn left, look forward to 等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。范文3Andy想在周末举办一个聚会，他想请外教Mr. Green也参加。请你替他写一封邀请信，60词左右(开头和结尾不计入总词数)。要点：1. 时间：周六晚6点8点；2. 地点：Andy家；3. 被邀请者：Andy的老师和同学；4. 路线：从学校门口坐3路公交车到Bei

10、jing Road下车，然后向前走大约1分钟，右拐进迎春街；5. Andy将于周六晚5点40分在迎春街的第一幢大楼前等Mr. Green。Dear Mr. GreenI will have a party this Saturday evening. I hope you will come to my party if you have time._All my family look forward to seeing you at the party.Lots of loveAndy【答案】Dear Mr. GreenI will have a party this Saturday e

11、vening. I hope you will come to my party if you have time. It will last from six oclock to eight oclock in my house. The people who are invited are my teachers and classmates. Im sure you know all of them, so dont worry you will be alone. Anyway, if you come here, you can take the No.3 bus in front

12、of our school gate, get off on Beijing Road, walk straight on for about one minute, then turn right into Yingchun Street. I will wait for you in front of the first building in Yingchun Street at twenty to six.All my family look forward to seeing you at the party.Lots of loveAndy【解析】这是一篇邀请函，动笔前先要认真阅读

13、要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用第一人称，一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。范文4Simon邀请Neil到他家参加他的生日聚会。请根据提示写一篇70词左右的短文。提示：从学校大门出来，乘地铁，从B出口出来，然后向右转，一直走并经过天桥。然后沿着第五大街直走，经过红楼，当你来到红绿灯处时，过马路。继续一直走到路的尽头，你会看到一棵树，Simon家就在它的后面。 【答案】One passible version: Here is

14、 the route to Simons home. Walk out of the school gate. Take the underground, get out at Exit B and turn right. Walk straight on and youll see a bridge. Then cross the bridge. Walk along Fifth Street. Youll pass the Red Building. Cross the road when you are at the traffic lights. Walk on until you g

15、et to the end of the road. You will see a tree. Simons home is behind it.【解析】这是一篇材料作文。【详解】英语作文一般分为三个部分第一部分：开篇点题交代写作目的：介绍怎么去Simon家的路线。第二部分：具体内容描述具体路线：从学校大门出来，乘地铁，从B出口出来，然后向右转，一直走并经过天桥。然后沿着第五大街直走，经过红楼，当你来到红绿灯处时，过马路。继续一直走到路的尽头，你会看到一棵树，Simon家就在它的后面。第三部分：提醒对方不要错过自己的房子。范文55假设你是Jacky，明天是你的生日，你想请你的同学参加你的生日派

16、对。请根据下面的提示，写一封70词左右的email给Wilson，告诉他有关派对的事宜及去你家的路线。Time: From 5:00 to 7:30 in the afternoonPlace: HomeLocation: Rongchang GardenRoute: Walk along Qinhuai Road from the school, turn left into Xinglong Street at the second turning, see the gate on your rightActivities: Make dumplings, play gamesDear W

17、ilson,Tomorrow is my birthday and I am going to have a party for it. _ Best wishes,Jacky【答案】Dear Wilson,Tomorrow is my birthday and I am going to have a party for it. It will be from 5:00 p.m. to 7:30 p.m. I hope you can come. It is easy to go from the school to my home. My home is in Rongchang Gard

18、en. You can walk along Qinhuai Road from the school and turn left into Xinglong Street at the second turning. Rongchang Garden is just on your right. I will wait for you at the gate. Please call me before you get here. We will make dumplings together and after dinner we will play some games. I am su

19、re you will enjoy them.Best wishes,Jacky【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如be going to，have a party，from to，walk along，turn left，at the second turning，on your right，wait for，at the gate，play some games等。而Tomorrow is my birthday and I am going to have a party for it. / I will wait for you at

20、the gate./Please call me before you get here./I am sure you will enjoy them.等多种时态和从句结构的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，是本文的最大亮点。点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。范文66假如你是Millie, 想邀请好友Sandy来你家。请根据下面要点，写一篇至少70词的邀请 信。要求包含所有要点

21、，适当发挥，语句通顺，书写整洁。要点如下：1. 很高兴邀请你来我的新家；2. 我家离市中心很远，乘地铁要20分钟；3. 你从新路站（New Road Station）下车，从2号出口出来，沿着新路一直走，接着在红绿 灯处左转进入公园街（Park Street），一直走直到你看到一个公园，我家就在它旁边。【答案】Sample writing Dear Sandy,I am very happy to invite you to my new home. It is far from the city centre and you can take the underground. It will

22、 take about twenty minutes. You need to get off the underground at New Road Station and get out of the station from Exit 2. Walk along New Road and turn left at the traffic lights into Park Street. Go straight on until you see a park. My home is right beside it. Its a yellow house with a red door. I

23、ts easy to find it.I am looking forward to seeing you.Yours, Millie【解析】这是一篇提纲作文。要求以Millie的身份给Sandy写一封邀请信，邀请她去家里做客。在信中向Sandy介绍你家里的一些情况，我们可以根据题目中给出的提纲，用正确的英语将这些内容表达出来。写作时，我们要注意短文中要包括题目给出的所有内容，不要遗漏要点。通过分析可知，这篇短文主要使用一般现在时态，第一人称。写作时可以尽量使用我们平时学过的好的句型和短语，使短文的意思更加连贯，表达更加流畅。点睛：这是一篇优秀的范文，短文中作者按照题目的要求给Sandy写了一

24、封邀请信，邀请Sandy来家里，并且对自己的家进行了简单的介绍。作者写作的时候是严格按照题目给出的提纲进行写作的，未遗漏要点。同时作者写作时注意使用了一些连词，如and, until, when等；短文层次清楚，行为连贯。同时还使用了较好的句式和短语，如be different from, be far from, It takes sb. sometime to do sth.等。另外这篇作文中还使用了祈使句。短文中较好的句式有I am very happy to invite you to my new home、It takes twenty minutes to get there by underground、and walk along New Road until you see the park.等。这些都使得短文生动具体，为本文增色不少。