[33741644]专题11 单元话题满分写作精练精析20篇-2021-2022学年八年级英语下学期期末考点大串讲（人教版）.docx

1、2021-2022学年八年级英语下学期期末考点大串讲（人教版）专题11 单元话题满分写作精练精析20篇书面表达是中考英语必考题型，也是考生最容易失分的题型，其主要考查学生的语言运用能力、思维能力和书写能力，在中考中占有重要的地位。 写作步骤和技巧：一、认真审题抓要点在写作之前认真审题，确定好文章体裁，抓住要点。常见的文体有记叙文、说明文、议论文和应用文等。1. 记叙文写作要点：(1)时间、地点、人物、事件经过和结局。(2)选用正确的人称。(3)线索一般为时间，即按照事件的发展顺序来写。(4)重点突出，层次分明，详略得当。(5)注意文章的完整性。(6)通常用一般过去时。2. 议论文写作要点：(1

2、)观点鲜明，要有一个明确的中心论点。(2)层次分明，中心论点和分论点要层次分明，过渡要清晰自然。(3)结尾要得出一个符合逻辑的结论，突出中心思想。(4)通常用一般现在时。(5)语言简洁有力，一般不用口语。3. 说明文写作要点：(1)抓住事物的特征，以简明的文字介绍事物的形状、性质、构造、变化、功用和特性等。(2)说明事物要有一定的条理性和逻辑性。(3)说明文常见的顺序有时间顺序、空间顺序、逻辑顺序等。4. 应用文写作要点：应用文包括书信、通知、请假条、邀请函、感谢信和便条等。(1)写清楚称呼语。(2)具体时间、地点、概括性内容、涉及对象及有关注意事项。(3)语言要自然、平实、简洁。(4)结束语

3、要向对方表示友善或亲切的问候。二、巧用过渡词文章都有一个先后顺序，一个逻辑结构，如何使文章结构清晰，要点明确，中心突出，这时巧妙运用过渡词，可以规范自己的逻辑思路，在有压力的写作之下能够做到临危不乱，有条不紊，层次清晰。三、句式多变在写句子的时候，不要只用那些清一色的简单句，要尽可能的变换句式和结构，让文章富于变化，错落有致。可以尝试使用更多的复合句，以及尝试变化语态。这样一定会使文章增加获胜的筹码。四、书写规范工整 书写是态度的体现，书写的规范和工整，直接影响到阅卷者的第一印象，从而决定一篇文章的得分高低，所以必须注意大小写、标点等的运用正确和规范。书面表达精练精析（期末真题+名校模拟）：1

4、（2021全国八年级单元测试）由于新型冠状病毒肺炎(COVID-19)的爆发，几个月来我们不得不待在家里。正因如此，这次疫情教会了我们重新审视自己的习惯，更好地生活。请根据下列提示写一篇80词左右的英语短文，谈谈保持健康的秘诀。短文的开头已给出，但不计入总词数。提示：1. 多锻炼，多喝水，均衡膳食(have a balanced diet)；2. 早睡早起，保持充足的睡眠；3. 多吃蔬菜和水果，健康饮食；4. Because of the COVID-19, we had to stay at home for months. It taught us to take a second loo

5、k at our habits and to live better. _2健康是高质量生活的根本，是人类一个永恒的话题。如何在高度紧张的学习生活中保持健康的体魄尤其重要。请根据内容提示以“Healthy Lifestyle”为题，用英语写一篇80词左右的作文。短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。1. 拥有良好的健康可以更好地工作和学习，迎接更多挑战（challenge）；2. 保持健康有很多种方式，如健康均衡的饮食习惯，多吃蔬菜水果；多锻炼，摆脱不良生活习惯；保持快乐积极的心情，缓解来自学习和工作的压力等。Healthy LifestyleLiving a healthy lifestyle c

6、an have an effect on both our work and life. We can have more energy to face challenges. _3由于受新型冠状病毒肺炎（COVID-19）疫情（epidemic）的影响，我们度过了一个漫长的假期。假如你是第一中学的一位学生，在开学之后的一次班会上，老师让你们讲述一下在这个特殊假期做过的最有意义的一件事。请根据下面的提示，写一篇80词左右的英语短文。（短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）提示：1. 在社区（community）做志愿者；2. 帮助残疾人、老人外出购物；3. 尽管很累，但有一种满足和快乐感。Durin

7、g the special and long holiday, I did many things. The most meaningful thing was _4假设你是Mary，请根据以下提示内容写一篇80词左右的英语短文，向大家介绍你和你的家人是如何分担家务的。可适当增加细节，以使行文流畅、通顺。提示：1. What housework do your family do?2. What do you think of doing housework?_5（2022福建漳州八年级期中）假定你是李华，校园广播站“English Time”栏目请你针对八年级部分学生面临生地中考学业繁重出现

8、的问题写一篇广播稿，帮助他们调整情绪和状态。词数80左右。问题建议作业太多、睡眠不够担心考试不及格与父母沟通困难心情不好至少3点注意事项：1）包含所提示的信息，可适当发挥；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2）意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；3）请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。Hello everyone! These days we are busy preparing for the coming biology and geography exams and some of us have problems with studies and lives. For exampl

9、e, _Thats all. Thank you!6（2021广东广州广雅实验学校八年级期中）假设你们班上周一开展了题为“周末活动分享”的主题班会，每个组进行了展示，请你根据以下表格内容向全班同学总结汇报你组同学的周末活动。组员地点具体活动和意义Janet儿童医院教生病的孩子唱歌、画画，鼓励他们Mark广州图书馆看了关于演讲中的肢体语言的书为演讲比赛做准备Tim荔湾湖公园Liwan Lake Park观看粤剧 (Cantonese Opera)，了解广州传统文化David and I在家网上为卡通Baby Dinosaur配音，训练英语口语你对周末活动小结与评价：（请你补充12点）注意：1.词

10、数80词左右（作文开头已经给出，不计入总词数）；2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。Last Monday, we had a class meeting about our weekend activities. Each group showed their experiences. Here is the report from our group. _7（2022河南罗山县教学研究室八年级期末）上个周日你是怎样度过的？请根据以下内容提示，写一篇100个单词左右的短文，向同学们介绍你的周末生活。内容提示: 1. How did you spend your last Su

11、nday?2. What were you doing at different times last Sunday? 3. Did you have a good time?_8（2022山东乳山市教学研究中心八年级期中）在世界历史文化长河中流传着许多家喻户晓的故事，有奇妙的中国传说，有美好的西方童话，从愚公移山到白雪公主，从美猴王到灰姑娘，从后羿射日到皇帝的新装。人们每每诵读讲述都会倍感鼓舞，深受启迪。作为本届英语故事大赛的参赛选手，你想和大家分享谁的故事呢？现在就动动小手写下来吧！要求：1.可以从以上提示中选取故事，也可以选自己喜欢的其他故事。2.内容包括：故事及故事给我们的启迪。 3.

12、不能出现真实的学校名称、人名及其他真实信息。4.100词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Hello, everyone! I feel honored to share the story of with you._Thats the story of Hope you enjoy it!9（2021广东广州市第四十一中学八年级期中）假设你是一只华南虎(South China tiger)，请根据以下档案，写一篇约80词的英语自我介绍。开头句已给出，不计在字数内。姓名：华南虎特征：橙黑相间皮毛体重：150千克身长：2米食物：猪、鹿、羊等习惯：独居强项：游泳弱项：爬树寿命：约20年住址：中

13、国东南部森林现状：濒危野外多年无踪迹困难：人类毁坏我们的家园；为虎骨和虎皮杀害我们求援：提出2条以上建议可能用到的词: bone n. 骨头destroy v. 毁坏Hi, Im a South China tiger. _10（2022全国八年级课时练习）中央电视台经典咏流传节目的播出，再次激发了人们对经典文学作品的阅读热情。读书可以成就更美好的自己，让读书伴随我们成长。请根据下面表格中的提示信息，以“Growing Up with Reading”为题写一篇英语短文，介绍你曾经读过的一本书或一首诗，并建议大家多读书，读好书。提示：读书的重要性1. 获取知识，开阔眼界；2. 提升自我，增强自

14、信读过的一本书或一首诗1. 作品内容简介；2. 读书感悟及对自己的影响。多读书、读好书1. 利用闲暇时间多读书，养成读书的好习惯；2. 多读经典文学作品要求：1. 短文应包含以上提示信息，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；2. 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名、学校及地名；3. 词数80100（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。参考词汇：classics 经典作品；open up ones eyes开阔某人的眼界；improve oneself提升自我；be more confident更自信；responsibility责任；cooperation合作Growing Up with ReadingHave

15、you watched the program Everlasting Classics on CCTV? This program makes us more interested in reading books, especially classics. _11（2022江苏苏州市相城区教育局八年级期中）假如你是苏州某中学的一名学生李明，请你根据以下表格内的提示要点，以“美丽的苏州”为话题，用英语写一篇90词左右的短文，介绍一下美丽城市苏州。地理位置江苏的南面历史文化历史悠久自20世纪早期以来以现代工厂而闻名自然环境旅游最佳是春季（推荐一处旅游地并说明推荐理由）苏州人正努力地保护环境，如

16、（请举出12个具体事例）Suzhou is a beautiful garden city by Taihu Lake. _12（2021全国八年级课时练习）假设你是Mike，你有一件很喜欢的物品，而且保存了很久。请根据下列提示，写一篇80词左右的英语短文，介绍这件物品的来历以及你喜欢的原因。提示：1. What is the thing that you like best and how long have you kept it? 2. Who gave it to you? 3. Does it have special meaning to you? Why?_13（2021上海浦东

17、新八年级期中）Write at least 60 words on the topic: _ changed me! 以“ _ 改变了我”为题, 写一篇不少于60个单词的短文， 要求内容适切，意思连贯，标点符号不占格。（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名，学校及其相关信息，否则不予评分）Suggested topic： Reading/Doing sports/ Helping fight against pollution/Doing housework/My teacher/My mother changed me!_14（2022全国八年级单元测试）你去海南旅游过吗？假设上周末你和你的父母乘飞

18、机去海南度假了。请以“A Wonderful Trip to Hainan”为题，写一篇80词左右的短文，介绍一下你的旅游经历。A Wonderful Trip to Hainan_15（2022山东枣庄市山亭区教育和体育局教研室八年级期中）假如你是Helen，你在某个图书馆的网站上看到了招收志愿者的公告，想申请成为其中一员。请你根据下面的要点提示并结合自己的实际情况，写一封申请邮件。提示：1. What kind of volunteer work do you want to do?2. Can you do the work well?3. Why do you want to do t

19、he volunteer work?4. When are you free to do the work?要求：1. 短文应包括以上要点，可适当发挥，以使行文通顺、连贯；2. 词数：80左右（邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。Dear Sir or Madam,_Im looking forward to your reply.Yours,Helen16（2021山东菏泽市定陶区教育局教研室八年级期末）寓言故事深受孩子们的喜爱，你一定读过乌鸦喝水这个寓言故事。请你根据右图提示，以“The Crow and the Pitcher”为题，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文，在学校广播站“英语之

20、声”栏目播出。要求：1语句通顺，没有语法错误；2包含图片全部要点；3从中你得到哪些启发，可适当发挥；480词左右。参考词汇： 乌鸦 crow；口渴的 thirsty；鹅卵石pebble；罐子 pitcher_17（2022福建省福州第十六中学八年级期中）请阅读下面这封电子邮件，根据邮件内容回复Li Hua。From: Li HuaTo: LilyDear Lily,Hows it going?Because of Novel coronavirus（新型冠状病毒）, I can only stay at home and study online. I feel upset and Im re

21、ally worried about my grades. Sometimes I am in a bad mood. What should I do to make myself relaxed? Can you give me some advice?Looking forward to your reply （回复）.Yours,Li Hua请根据以上内容写一封回信，字数不少于80词。_18（2021浙江杭州市公益中学八年级阶段练习）假如你是Simon，一位动物保护志愿者。为了保护白鳍豚(white-flag-dolphin)，你准备给当地政府写一封信。白鳍豚是世界上最珍惜的动物之一。

22、但是由于人们的过度捕捞和环境污染，白鳍豚已濒临灭绝。请根据以下提示，介绍白鳍豚的基本信息并提出合理的保护措施。要求：80词左右，可适当发挥。Dear sir or madam,_Yours,Simon19（2021全国八年级课时练习）假如你是张强，你的英国笔友John听说你把最喜欢的一本书捐给了儿童之家，特地给你发来电子邮件询问相关信息。请你根据下列提示，用英语给他回一封80词左右的电子邮件。提示：1. Whats the book about?2. How did you get the book?3. How long have you had the book?4. Why did yo

23、u give the book away?_20（2021全国八年级课时练习）假设你是李华，近期你们班里将举行一次英文班会，主题为“Do you do the housework?”。请你根据下列提示，写一篇80词左右的发言稿。提示：1. Do you do the housework?2. What housework do you like and dislike doing? Why?3. What do you think of doing the housework? _参考答案：1参考范文Because of the COVID-19, we had to stay at home

24、 for months. It taught us to take a second look at our habits and to live better. Here are some tips to keep healthy.First, we should do more exercise and have a balanced diet. Drink more water every day. Second, wed better go to bed early and get up early to keep enough sleep. Third, why not eat mo

25、re vegetables and fruit every day? As we know, they are good for our health. Whats more, to be healthy, we cant play too much computer games. We can read more books about health.In a word, there are many ways to make us healthy. You can find some and try them.【解析】【详解】题干解读：题目要求写一篇关于保持健康的秘诀的英语短文；要求包含所

26、有提示内容。写作指导：时态以一般现在时为主；采用第一人称。文章可使用3段落格式，第一段：开门见山，引出下文；第二段：描述保持健康的秘诀；第三段：总结全文，保持健康的秘诀很多。2参考范文Healthy LifestyleLiving a healthy lifestyle can have an effect on both our work and life. We can have more energy to face challenges.Although everyone hopes to have a strong body, some people dont know how to

27、 stay healthy. Here are some tips to keep healthy.Good eating habits play an important part in staying healthy. Fruit and vegetables are necessary, because they are good for your health. At the same time, keeping a balanced and regular diet is also important. Besides, exercising is also a useful way

28、 to keep healthy. Last but not least, being in a good mood is a good way to deal with the pressure from study and work.【解析】【详解】1. 题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。需要根据所给要点谈论健康的重要性以及如何保持健康。2. 写作指导：人称使用第三人称；时态使用一般现在时。写作内容要包含所有的提示要点，在提出建议时，多使用情态动词should。写作目的明确，注意语句之间的衔接。3例文During the special and long holiday, I did many

29、 things. The most meaningful thing was to do volunteer work in our community.Because of the epidemic, people couldnt go out to play or shop as usual. Our community asked people to do volunteer work. I joined in the activity. I helped some disabled and old people to do some shopping. I helped them bu

30、y something in need online. Sometimes, I also did some cleaning for them.Although I was very tired, I felt happy and had a strong feeling of satisfaction and joy.【解析】【详解】1、题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作，在写作时应承接短文开头，然后叙述在这个特殊假期做过的最有意义的一件事，最后描述感受，可适当发挥。2、写作指导：本文应该以第一人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般过去时为主；介绍假期做过的最有意义的事时，应详细具体，语句通顺，逻辑性强

31、，保证条理清晰。4One possible version:Im Mary. In my family, everyone does housework. Although my father is busy with his work in the daytime, he cleans up the room after work. My mother sweeps the floor and does the dishes every day. She also does some washing on the weekend. My grandparents water the flow

32、ers every day and do some shopping. As for me, I make the bed, fold clothes and take out the rubbish.I think its necessary for us to help our parents with housework. Doing housework not only teaches me how to take care of myself but develops my independence.【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。围绕家人是如何分担家务来写一篇短文

33、。2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时。分为两段式：第一段介绍家人是如何分担家务的；第二段发表自己对此的观点。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。5例文：Hello everyone! These days we are busy preparing for the coming biology and geography exams and some of us have problems with study and lives. For example, some students think they have too much homework and cant have eno

34、ugh sleep, while others worry that they may fail in the exams. Also, some people find it difficult to talk with their parents. Therefore, they feel upset and are always in a bad mood.Here are my suggestions. First, they should be more efficient when they do their homework. Second, theyd better ask t

35、heir teachers for help if they have trouble in study. Finally, its helpful to share ideas with their parents often. Thats all. Thank you!【解析】【详解】1. 题干解读：本题要求以李华的身份针对面临学习和生活问题的部分八年级学生写一篇80词左右的广播稿，内容包括学生们面临的问题以及你给出的建议。2. 写作指导：本文时态主要采用一般现在时；写作时应承接开头，紧扣提示内容进行发挥；建议方面的写作可以使用连接词，还要注意建议的数量要求；写作完成后应确保文章内容齐全，

36、行文流畅，语言符合规范和英文表达习惯。6例文：Last Monday, we had a class meeting about our weekend activities. Each group showed their experiences. Here is the report from our group.There are five people in our group. Janet went to the Childrens Hospital. She taught them to sing songs, draw pictures and encouraged them.

37、Mark went to Guangzhou library. He read the book about body languages to prepare for the speech contest. Tim went to Liwan Lake Park with his grandmother. They watched Cantonese Opera there. He learned about the traditional culture of Guangzhou. I stayed at home with David. We dubbed the cartoon Bab

38、y Dinosaur. David has a nice voice. Although we were busy at the weekend, we were all very happy and had a great time.【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。题目要求根据提示要点，介绍周末的活动情况以及评价等，可以适当发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。2.写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来，本文应该用第一人称、第三人称来介绍内容，时态采用一般过去时。在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。7例文I had a bus

39、y day last Sunday. From 6:30 a.m. to 7:00 a.m., I was running along the river. At 8:00 a.m., I was doing cleaning at home, because my parents were out. At 9:50 a.m., I was watching a movie with my friend. The movie was very interesting, and it made us excited. From 2:20 p.m. to 4:30 p.m., I was play

40、ing basketball with my classmates. At 6:00 p.m. my parents and I were having a big dinner in a restaurant. We all felt happy and enjoyed it. I was watching TV from 7:30 p.m. to 9:30 p.m. Then I went to bed.It was really a full and happy Sunday.【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，结合所给问题提示，介绍自己的周末生活。2.写作指导：本文时态采

41、用过去进行时和一般过去时；人称用第一人称。根据提示，首先简单介绍周末是如何度过的；然后具体介绍各个时间点都做了什么；最后表达自己的感受。行文时注意语意连贯、句与句的衔接、无拼写和语法使用错误。8参考例文：Hello, everyone! I feel honored to share the story of Yu Gong with you. Once upon a time, there lived an old man called Yu Gong. There were two mountains near his house. They were so big that it too

42、k a long time to walk to the other side. To solve this problem, Yu Gong told his family that he wanted to move the mountains and he needed their help. All his family members agreed so they started digging the next day. They worked day after day, night after night. One day, when a man saw Yu Gong and

43、 his family working, he said it was impossible for Yu Gong to move the mountains because he was old and weak. But Yu Gong said his family could continue doing it after he died. Yu Gongs spirit moved the God so he sent two gods to take the mountains away. Seeing this, all the family members jumped wi

44、th joy.This story tells us we never know what is possible unless we try to make it happen. Besides, if we have a big dream, we should try our best to make it come true. Thats the story of Yu Gong. Hope you enjoy it!【解析】【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求和大家分享故事；要求包含所有提示内容。2. 写作指导：此作文时态主要以一般过去时为主；可采用三段落格式，第一段：引出主题；第二段：

45、详细阐述故事内容；第三段：阐述故事给我们的启迪。可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等；语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。9例文：Hi, Im a South China tiger. I have orange and black fur. I usually weigh 150 kilograms and 2 meters long. I like eating meat, such as pigs, deer, sheep and so on. Im good at swimming, but Im not good at cli

46、mbing trees. I often swim in the water. I like living alone, but I dont feel lonely. I usually live for 20 years. The forests in Southeast China are my home. I can hardly see my companions there. Because human beings destroy our homes. They often cut down trees, and some people even kill us for our

47、bones and skin. So I hope people will protect us because we are also part of the earth. First, I hope the country can establish more nature reserves to provide us with more places to live. Second, I hope the government can make some lawsto protect us and let people stop killing us.【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：题目要

48、求根据提示要点，以主人公的口吻介绍老虎的情况，包括个人信息、生活习性以及所处的危险等，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。2.写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来，本文应该用第一人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。10参考范文Growing Up with ReadingHave you watched the program Everlasting Classics on CCTV? This program makes us more interested in reading books,

49、especially classics. Reading can not only help us get a lot of knowledge, but also help us open up our eyes. At the same time, it can make ourselves feel more confident and improve ourselves.I have already read Journey to the West. The Monkey King uses a magic stick to fight against the bad people.

50、Im interested in reading this book because the Monkey King keeps fighting to help the weak and never gives up. It is so good that I cant put it down. After reading it, I know the importance of cooperation and responsibilities.So I suggest that everyone should read more books, especially classics, in

51、 their spare time. And I hope that everyone can get into the habit of reading, which can bring us a lot of pleasure.【解析】题干解读：题目要求以“Growing Up with Reading”为题写一篇英语短文；要求包含所有提示内容。写作指导：此作文时态以一般现在时为主，采用第一人称。此作文可采用3段落格式，第一段：介绍读书的重要性；第二段：介绍读过的一本书；第三段：建议人们多读书，读好书。11例文：Suzhou is a beautiful garden city by Ta

52、ihu Lake. Located in the south of Jiangsu, it has a long history and has been famous for its modern factories since the early 20th century. The best time to visit Suzhou is spring. Visitors can pay a visit to the Humble Administrators Garden, which is one of the most beautiful places in Suzhou in sp

53、ring. In order to make Suzhou a better city, we, Suzhou people, are working hard to protect the environment. Not only do we plant as many trees as we can, but we also stop factories from throwing waste into the rivers.【解析】【详解】1. 题干解读：本题要求以苏州学生李明的身份，根据表格中的信息写一篇90词左右的短文介绍美丽城市苏州。2. 写作指导：本文时态主要采用一般现在时；写

54、作时应承接开头，紧扣提示内容进行发挥，注意表格中括号内的要求；本文还可在提示内容的基础上进行自我发挥，以丰富文章内容和达成字数要求；写作完成后应确保文章内容齐全，行文流畅，语言符合规范和英文表达习惯。12高分范文I have had a toy car for about ten years. And I still like it a lot although it looks old. When I was a little child, my parents were so poor that they couldnt buy any gifts for me. I had no toy

55、s to play with. One day, when I was alone at home, my aunt sent a toy car to me. I was very happy to get it and loved it very much. And it has brought me much happiness since then. It has become my best friend. I love the toy car.【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于材料作文。要求根据所给的问题提示介绍一件你最喜欢的物品，包括该物品的来历以及你喜欢它的理由。注意要点

56、齐全。2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称和一般过去时为主来介绍。介绍该物品的来历和喜欢它的理由时，可以用故事来完美呈现；写作时注意保持主谓一致性，除所给信息外可适当展开，注意语言的准确性，不要有语法和拼写错误。13例文：Music changed me!Everyone has his own hobby, and it may give him lots of happiness. My hobby is listening to music. When I was a child, I enjoyed listening to music, especially the cartoon mu

57、sic, though I wasnt good at it. I often lost myself in it. When I am in trouble, music can make me calm down. When I am very tired, it can make me comfortable. When I am angry with something, it also can make me happy again. Listening to music keeps me in a good mood and its good for my health. Do y

58、ou like listening to music? If not, hope you can have a try, you will find it beneficial.【解析】1.题干解读：本文是一篇命题作文，介绍什么改变了我，可以从文中提示的话题中选择一个，要求要点覆盖全面，可适当扩充；注意写作时要点齐全，同时也要紧扣主题。2.写作指导：本文使用一般现在时态和，人称用第一人称，写作时，注意表达观点时的常用句式和when引导的时间状语从句，内容上应注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。14例文：A Wonderful Trip to Hainan

59、Have you ever been to Hainan? Well, I have been there. Last weekend I had a wonderful trip to Hainan with my parents. We went there by plane. The weather was warm. We visited many places of interest, such as Tianya Haijiao, which means “the edge of the sky and the rim of the sea”, and Wanquan River.

60、 We went swimming, fishing and diving there. We also enjoyed the delicious food there. The long white beaches there were very beautiful. I lay on the beach to relax myself quietly. We had a great time. Though we were tired, we all felt very happy. If you go to Hainan, Im sure you will enjoy yourself

61、.【解析】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时应根据题目要求讲述去海南度假的经历，讲述交通方式，天气情况，在海南看到的事物和做的事情，并讲述自己的感受。2.写作指导：本文时态以一般过去时为主，人称以第一人称为主，讲述去海南度假的经历，要叙述完整，条理清晰。15参考范文Dear Sir or Madam,Id like to volunteer as a student helper in the library. In my free time, I love reading all kinds of books. Im also good at Chinese and English

62、. I think I can do the work well. I want to help students learn about the importance of reading because it makes people smart. I can also do what I love to do and help others at the same time. Im always free on weekends, so Ill be able to volunteer there on time.Im looking forward to your reply.Your

63、s,Helen【解析】【详解】1. 题干解读：这是一篇电子邮件写作。主要是表达自己想要参加志愿者项目的愿望，题干中给出了写作要点，写作时不要遗漏，可适当增加细节。2. 写作指导：要求是一封申请邮件，应用书信格式。时态：一般现在时；人称：第一人称。首先描述自己想要做的志愿者工作以及自己做这份工作的优势；然后描述自己对于志愿者工作的理解；最后告知可以做志愿者工作的时间。写作时要围绕主题灵活运用不同的短语和句式使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚。16例文：The Crow and the PitcherIt was a hot day. A crow felt so thirsty that he looke

64、d for water everywhere. Finally, he found a pitcher. But there wasnt much water in it. His beak couldnt reach it. He was very distressed.When he wanted to give up, he came up with an idea. He picked up a small stone and dropped it into the pitcher. Then he took another and dropped it in. Gradually,

65、the water rose and he was able to drink the water.How clever the crow was!【解析】1.题干解读：该题目属于看图作文。要为我们根据右图提示，以“The Crow and the Pitcher”为题，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般过去时为主。写作要包括故事的时间、人物、背景、经过及结果；写作时，首先简单介绍天气条件，提出乌鸦口渴想找水喝；其次描述乌鸦找到水后遇到的困难；最后说明乌鸦用怎样的方法喝到了水。在写故事时，可适当发挥。17例文：Dear Li Hua,Im g

66、lad to hear from you. I understand your problem. Here is my advice.First, you are always doing well in your study, so you dont have to worry about your grades. I think you will get good grades if you work hard. Second, you said you always have a bad mood, so I advise you to play sports for at least

67、half an hour every day. It can help you release stress. Third, you can relax by listening to your favorite music.I hope my advice can help you. Good luck!Yours, Lily【解析】1.题干解读：这是一封给Li Hua提出解决问题的建议的书信。2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述故事内容；时态采用一般现在时为主，本文采用经典的三段式。第一段点明主旨，表明我有一些建议；第二段介绍我的建议；第三段是信件结尾，希望建议可以起到作用。18例文：D

68、ear sir or madam,White-flag dolphins are freshwater whale endemic to China. They are about 2 meters long, and weigh from 135 kilograms to 230 kilograms. They have many teeth. They can sing and jump high out of the water. They now live in the Yangtze River and feed on fish. They are critically endang

69、ered because of water pollution and peoples overfishing. Its time to protect white-flag dolphins. Then laws should be made to ban the killing of white-flag dolphins. Besides, the government had better establish a nature reserve on the Yangtze River.Yours,Simon【解析】1. 题干解读：题目要求写一封信，呼吁保护白鳍豚；要求包含所有提示内容。

70、2. 写作指导：此作文时态用一般现在时；采用第三人称口吻。可采用2段落格式，第一段：描述白鳍豚的基本信息；第二段：阐述保护白鳍豚的措施。19One possible version:Dear John, How is everything going? Now let me tell you something about my favorite book. Its a storybook. My mother bought it for me when I was ten. I like it so much that I have read it many times. The stori

71、es in it are very interesting and they have brought me lots of fun. I have had the storybook for three years. I was happy to give it to the childrens house because I wanted to make the children happy. When I saw the look of joy on the childrens faces, I had a feeling of satisfaction. Yours, Zhang Qi

72、ang【解析】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。作为张强，要求你根据要点提示内容，给的英国笔友John写一封信，告诉他关于你把最喜欢的一本书捐给儿童之家的事情；注意要点要齐全，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称来展开写作，时态主要用一般现在时，辅以一般过去时和现在完成时。写作时要认真审题，根据提示的内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作；可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等；语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。20One possible version:Hello, everyone! Im

73、 Li Hua. As a member of the family, I think its my job to do the housework. I often help my parents with the housework in my free time.I like sweeping the floor and I help sweep the floor every Saturday. When I see the clean floor, I always feel happy. Whats more, I take out the rubbish every day be

74、cause its easy. However, I dont like doing the dishes. Its so boring.In a word, I think we students should help do chores. Its a good way for us to exercise and we can learn many things from it.【解析】1. 题干解读：这篇作文要求考生根据提示的问题要点，写一篇发言稿介绍自己对做家务的看法，属于讲稿作文。2. 写作指导：审题可知，这篇短文应以第一人称和一般现在时为主，以第三人称为辅进行叙述。写作中紧扣所给的问题提示，先明确自己对做家务的态度，再介绍自己喜欢做的家务，最后谈一谈对做家务的看法。行文注意主谓一致和上下文的过渡，符合逻辑关系，保证无语法和单词拼写错误。