专题13 应用文写作（13）-研读近十年高考英语满分书面表达聚焦2023高考.docx

1、研读近十年高考英语满分书面表达聚焦2023高考Part1 应用文写作文（十三）1（2013陕西卷）假定你是李华。请根据写作要点用英语写一篇周记，记述你周末帮助家人做家务的一次经历。写作要点：1.做家务的理由；2.做家务的过程；3.你的感受。注意：1.短文词数不少于100；2.开头部分已写好，不计入总词数；3.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。I am an 18-year-old middle school student,_【答案】I am an 18-year old middle school student. I have been busy with my study and seldom

2、 helped my parents with the housework. Feeling quite sorry for that, I begin to think about what to do to help.Last Sunday, when my parents went out shopping, I suddenly got an idea: why not give the rooms a thorough cleaning? Firstly I collected all the books, newspapers and other things scattered

3、in the rooms and put them in place. Then I wiped the dust off all the furniture. After that, I swept and mopped the floors.At this very moment, my parents came back and were quite surprised to see all the rooms tidy and floors shining. My mother gave me a hug and I could see satisfaction in her eyes

4、. Tired as I was, I never felt so happy.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生根据写作要点用英语写一篇周记，记述你周末帮助家人做家务的一次经历。【详解】1.词汇积累很少：seldom rarely开始：begin start彻底的：thorough complete惊讶的：surprised astonished2.句式拓展句式转换原句：Tired as I was, I never felt so happy.拓展句：Though I was tired, I never felt so happy.【点睛】高分句型1Feeling quite so

5、rry for that, I begin to think about what to do to help.（运用了现在分词作状语）高分句型2Tired as I was, I never felt so happy.（运用了部分倒装结构）2（2013江西卷）星光中学（Xingguang High School）近期举行了一次登山活动。假定你是学校英语报记者，请写一篇短文，报道此次活动。内容包括：1时间与地点：4月10日，大青山（Daqing Mountain）；2活动的过程；3你对于这次活动的评论。注意：1词数100左右。2 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【答案】In order to

6、 encourage the students to take outdoor exercise, our school organized a mountain-climbing on April 10. Hundreds of us took part in it.It was a nice day. At 8:00 am, we gathered at the foot of Daqing Mountain and set out for the top in high spirits. All the way we were chatting, singing and laughing

7、, enjoying the fresh air and the beautiful scenery. When some fell behind, others would come and offer help. About 2 hours later, we all reached the top. Bathed in sunshine, we jumped and cheered with joy.The activity benefited us a lot. Not only did it get us close to nature and give us relaxation

8、from heavy school work, it also promoted the friendship among us. What a wonderful time!【详解】试题分析：本文要求写一篇报道。报道一次登山活动。故时态使用一般过去时，人称用第一人称。首先写清写作目的，然后是时间，地点，人物，过程，包括如出发，途中，到达目的地等情况的介绍。最后写活动的意义，即对于这次活动的评论(感受)。文章比较容易入题。可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【点睛】高级句型结构的运用，如感叹句What a wonderful time及倒装结构not only.but also的运用。好的短语：se

9、t out for出发,动身，着手做某事 in high spirits 情绪高昂fall behind落后非谓语动词的运用句式赋予变化，如：Bathed in sunshine, we jumped and cheered with joy.考点：考查应用文的写作。3（2013江苏卷）请根据你对以下两幅图的理解，以“Actions Speak Louder than Words”为题，用英语写一篇作文。参考词：banner (横幅)stump (树桩)你的作文应包括以下内容:1. 简要描述两幅图的内容；2. 概述你对两幅图中不同做法的理解；3. 举例说明两幅图对你的启示。注意：1. 可参照图

10、片适当发挥；2. 作文词数150左右；3. 作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。Actions Speak Louder than Words_【答案】Actions Speak Louder than WordsPeople celebrate Earth Day differently. In Picture 1, a man is trying to put up a banner on a lonely tree surrounded by stumps, but in vain, while Picture 2 shows a couple happily pl

11、anting trees.The message conveyed here is clear: “Actions speak louder than words.” Our earth is suffering severe damage. Should we just pay lip service or take practical measures to protect it? The answer is definitely the latter. Immediate actions should be taken, like stopping cutting down trees,

12、 to better the environment.Actions are important in other fields, too. Instead of shouting empty slogans, it is more meaningful to donate books and sports goods to children in need. We should strictly and voluntarily follow traffic rules, stopping at the red light rather than complaining about traff

13、ic jams. Only when we match our words with actions can we make a difference in whatever we hope to accomplish.【导语】本篇书面表达属于图画类作文。要求考生以“Actions Speak Louder than Words”为题，简要描述两幅图，概述对两幅图中不同做法的理解，并举例说明图片给予自己的启示。【详解】1.词汇积累传达：conveytransmit肯定地：definitelycertainly改善：betterimprove遵守：followobserve2.句式拓展简单句变复

14、合句原句：Instead of shouting empty slogans, it is more meaningful to donate books and sports goods to children in need.拓展句：Instead of shouting empty slogans, it is more meaningful to donate books and sports goods to children who are in need.【点睛】【高分句型1】In Picture 1, a man is trying to put up a banner on

15、a lonely tree surrounded by stumps, but in vain, while Picture 2 shows a couple happily planting trees.（运用了while连接并列句，表示对比）【高分句型2】Only when we match our words with actions can we make a difference in whatever we hope to accomplish.（运用了“only+状语从句”置于句首的部分倒装结构，whatever引导宾语从句）4（2013福建卷）孩子的成长和教育是社会热议的话题，

16、现今父母包揽一切、孩子过度依赖等现象十分严重。请阅读下面的漫画，按要求用英文写一篇短文。内容要求： 1.描述漫画内容；2. 分析漫画所揭示的问题； 3. 提出你的看法。 注意：1.短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；2.考生可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、连贯；3.词数120左右;4. 文中不能出现考生的具体信息。参考词汇:pave the wayFrom the picture, we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet. _【答案】From the picture we can see a family of three wa

17、lking on a long red carpet. The son, well dressed, waves proudly in the middle while the father behind bends forward to hold the jacket and the mother in front rolls out the carpet, sweating.It shows a common phenomenon nowadays that children are the focus of families, shouldering the hope of their

18、parents. Parents arrange everything for their children and spare no effort to pave the way for their success. As a consequence, children become so reliant on their parents that they have no independent thought or creative ideas.Such a situation is of great concern. In my opinion, overprotection and

19、too much care are extremely bad for childrens development. Instead of doing everything for them, parents should encourage their children to overcome difficulties and inspire them to develop by themselves. Only in this way can they grow up to be independent and become truly successful.【导语】这是一篇图画作文。【详

20、解】这篇书面表达以漫画的形式讲述以孩子为中心的三口之家，孩子是小皇帝，父母是臣仆这一社会现象，发人深省。漫画式作文就是通过漫画提供的图像信息写一篇短文，漫画作文就内容而言，可以写观察到的内容，也可以根据合理想象适当进行发挥来补充一些内容；就表达方式而言，可以单纯地理解、说明，也可以在说明中加以描写、叙述。写好漫画作文的要求是：认真审图，确立主题，提炼要点，展开联想或发表感想，变点为句，连句成篇。要达到这些要求，我们就必须认真审图，善于利用图中人物间的关系、人物的对话、人物的活动及所处场所，以及图（表）中的文字说明和标识来提炼要点；要围绕主题展开合理的想象，切忌游离于主题展开不着边际的联想或感想

21、。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。【点睛】文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式:The son, well dressed, waves proudly in the middle while the father behind bends forward to hold the jacket and the mother in front rolls out the carpet, sweating.这句话里面是whil

22、e引导的并列句。还有It shows a common phenomenon nowadays that children are the focus of families, shouldering the hope of their parents.这句话里面用了非谓语动词，还有最后一句话Only in this way can they grow up to be independent and become truly successful.这句话用了倒装句。高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。5（2013重庆卷）A mother said, “M

23、y son is always on the phone, sleeping, out with his friends, or in his room. He never has time to talk to me.”要求：1) 就此材料发表你的看法；2) 紧扣材料，有明确的观点；3) 词数不少于60；4）在答题卡上作答。_【答案】Nowadays, more and more young people are always on the phone, sleeping, out with their friends, or in their rooms closing the doors

24、. What they do make their parents feel deep sad and lonely.In my opinion, no matter how busy we may be, we should try our best to spend more time talking with them and accompanying them. It is not just because they once gave us so much selfless love, but its our duty to look after them well.【导语】本篇书面

25、表达属于开放性作文。要求考生对于一段母亲说的话“My son is always on the phone, sleeping, out with his friends, or in his room. He never has time to talk to me.”就此材料发表你的看法，写一篇作文。【详解】1.词汇积累在我看来：In my opinion as far as I am concerned照顾：look after take care of尽力做：try our best to do manage to do职责：duty responsibility 2.句式拓展简单句变

26、复合句原句：Nowadays, more and more young people are always on the phone, sleeping, out with their friends, or in their rooms closing the doors.拓展句：Nowadays, more and more young people are always on the phone, sleeping, out with their friends, or in their rooms closing the doors, which is become a serious

27、 problem.【点睛】【高分句型1】What they do make their parents feel deep sad and lonely.（运用了连接词what引导的主语从句。）【高分句型2】In my opinion, no matter how busy we may be, we should try our best to spend more time talking with them and accompanying them.（运用了no matter how引导的让步状语从句。）6（2013安徽卷）假设你校英语社团举办以“讲求文明，从我做起”为主题的征文活动，

28、请你以“On the Way to School”为题，写一篇英语短文。内容主要包括：1. 遵守交通法规；2. 注意举止文明。注意：1. 词数120左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息；4. 短文的题目已为你拟好，不计入总词数_【答案】 These days, breaking traffic rules and littering are not uncommon, causing serious harm to life and the environment. Changing this situation requires considera

29、ble effort on the part of everyone. As for me, it should start on the way to school.I will keep traffic rules in mind all the way. If I ride a bicycle, Ill always keep to the right and never cross a road until the traffic light turns green. If I walk, Ill never forget to use the pedestrian crossing.

30、 Meanwhile, Ill regard it as my duty to help keep our environment clean and healthy. Not only will I keep from littering and spitting anywhere, I will also help clean up the roadside litter whenever possible. I hope my behavior will make a difference.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“On the Way to School”为题，写一篇

31、英语短文参加以“讲求文明，从我做起”为主题的征文活动。【详解】1. 词汇积累环境：environmentsurroundings开始：startbegin责任：dutyresponsibility同时：meanwhileat the same time2. 句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：These days, breaking traffic rules and littering are not uncommon, causing serious harm to life and the environment.拓展句：These days, breaking traffic rules an

32、d littering are not uncommon, which cause serious harm to life and theenvironment.【点睛】【高分句型1】 If I ride a bicycle, Ill always keep to the right and never cross a road until the traffic light turns green. （运用了if引导的条件状语从句）【高分句型2】 Not only will I keep from littering and spitting anywhere, I will also h

33、elp clean up the roadside litter whenever possible. （运用了部分倒装结构）7（2013浙江卷）请以“one thing Im proud of”为题，用英语写一篇100120个词的短文，记述一件你自己认为得意的事情。要求如下：1.记述这件事2.简要说明你感到得意的原因或从中得到的启示注意：文章的标题已给出（不计词数）.One Thing Im Proud of_【答案】I still remember how I became a good table tennis player.The first day I went to high sc

34、hool, I saw some of my classmates playing table tennis. Amazed by how skillful they were, I was determined to be just as good. Later on, I watched them carefully to learn their techniques. Then I kept practicing until I became confident enough to challenge the good players. At the end of the term I

35、became one of the best players in my class.I am really proud of this experience, because it helps me realize that we all can fulfill our potential and achieve our goals through hard work. It also helps me better understand the proverb “Practice makes perfect.”【导语】本篇书面表达属于记叙文，要求考生以“one thing Im proud

36、 of”为题记述一件自己认为得意的事情。【详解】词汇积累惊奇：amazedsurprised实现：realizeachieve训练：practicetrain决心做：be determined to do = make up ones mind to do2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Amazed by how skillful they were, I was determined to be just as good.拓展句：I was so amazed by how skillful they were that I was determined to be just as good

37、.【点睛】高分句型1 I still remember how I became a good table tennis player. (运用了how引导的宾语从句)高分句型2 I am really proud of this experience, because it helps me realize that we all can fulfill our potential and achieve our goals through hard work. (运用了because引导的原因状语从句以及that引导的宾语从句)8（2013湖北卷）请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短

38、文。We all know that “sticks and stones may break our bones”, but we should also be aware that words can hurt people, too.注意：无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；除诗歌外，文体不限；文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；词数为120左右。_【答案】My desk-mate admires my fluent English very much and I usually feel encouraged by his compliments. One day, when we learn

39、ed the new word “eccentric” in class, we were asked to make a sentence with it. I volunteered to do it by saying “my desk-mate is an eccentric boy whose clothes never fit him”. Hearing this, the whole class burst into laughter and my desk-mates face turned red. After class, I learned from the teache

40、r that my desk-mate would have dropped out of school if he hadnt been helped by others. My mindless words must have hurt him deeply.Not until then did I realize words could be powerful in both positive and negative ways. We should avoid hurting others if we cant always be encouraging when we speak.【

41、导语】本篇书面表达属于夹叙夹议文。要求考生结合自己的事例，阐明“语言也能伤害人”这个道理。【详解】1.词汇积累赞美：complimentpraise学习：learnstudy意识到：realizebe aware that突然笑起来：burst into laughterburst out laughing2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Hearing this, the whole class burst into laughter and my desk-mates face turned red.拓展句：When the whole class heard this, they burst into laughter and my desk-mates face turned red.【点睛】【高分句型1】I volunteered to do it by saying “my desk-mate is an eccentric boy whose clothes never fit him”. (运用了whose引导的限制性定语从句)【高分句型2】Not until then did I realize words could be powerful in both positive and negative ways. (运用了部分倒装句)