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    1、专题18 应用文写作(解析版)全国各地历年高考真题全收录一、 2023年高考真题(一) 2023新高考全国卷46. 假定你是李华,外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组,让大家课后练习口语,你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括;1. 说明问题;2. 提出建议。注意: 1. 写作词数应为80个左右: 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dear Ryan Im Li Hua from Class 3. _Yours sincerely, Li Hua【答案】Dear Ryan, Im Li Hua from Class 3. I think its not a good

    2、idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training after class. The reasons are as follows.To begin with, randomly pairing up students may lead to unbalanced language abilities within the groups. This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conver

    3、sation, leaving little room for the other students to improve. Besides, students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they dont get along with or have difficulty communicating with.My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students

    4、choose their own partners. This way, everyone can feel more comfortable practicing and improving their spoken English together. Thank you for considering my suggestion. Yours sincerely, Li Hua【解析】【导语】本篇是应用文写作,要求考生给外教写一封邮件,告诉他将学生随机分为两人一组,让大家课后练习口语,你认为这样分组存在问题。【详解】1. 词汇积累首先:to begin with first of all提

    5、高:improve progress建议:suggestion advice选择:choose select2. 句式拓展简单句变复合句原句:My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners.拓展句:My suggestion is that we are supposed to group students based on their language abilities or to let students ch

    6、oose their own partners.【点睛】高分句型1This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve.(运用了现在分词作状语)高分句型2Besides, Students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they dont get

    7、 along with or have difficulty communicating with.(运用了省略句和who引导定语从句)(二) 2023新高考全国卷46. 假定你是李华,外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组,让大家课后练习口语,你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括;1. 说明问题;2. 提出建议。注意: 1. 写作词数应为80个左右: 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dear Ryan, Im Li Hua from Class 3. _Yours sincerely, Li Hua【答案】Dear Ryan, Im Li Hua from Cla

    8、ss 3. I think its not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training after class. The reasons are as follows.To begin with, randomly pairing up students may lead to unbalanced language abilities within the groups. This can hinder the progress of students as the more advance

    9、d one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve. Besides, students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they dont get along with or have difficulty communicating with.My suggestion is to group students based on their language

    10、abilities or to let students choose their own partners. This way, everyone can feel more comfortable practicing and improving their spoken English together. Thank you for considering my suggestion. Yours sincerely, Li Hua【解析】【导语】本篇是应用文写作,要求考生给外教写一封邮件,告诉他将学生随机分为两人一组,让大家课后练习口语,你认为这样分组存在问题。【详解】1. 词汇积累首

    11、先:to begin with first of all提高:improve progress建议:suggestion advice选择:choose select2. 句式拓展简单句变复合句原句:My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners.拓展句:My suggestion is that we are supposed to group students based on their language ab

    12、ilities or to let students choose their own partners.【点睛】高分句型1This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve.(运用了现在分词作状语)高分句型2Besides, Students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired w

    13、ith someone who they dont get along with or have difficulty communicating with.(运用了省略句和who引导定语从句)(三) 2023全国甲卷52. 你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:1.人物简介及事迹;2. 意义或启示。注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 题目已为你写好。_【答案】Confucius is a well-known figure in Chinese history. His teachings emphasized the impo

    14、rtance of moral values, respect for elders, and social harmony. Confucius traveled throughout the country, imparting his wisdom to countless disciples and leaving a profound impact on Chinese society.The significance of Confucius cannot be overstated. His teachings shaped the moral and ethical found

    15、ation of Chinese culture, fostering respect for authority, harmonious relationships, and the pursuit of knowledge. Even today, his ideas continue to guide individuals and communities in China and beyond.Confuciuss life offers valuable lessons. He stressed the self-cultivation, respect for elders, an

    16、d the pursuit of knowledge, which serves as a guiding light in our fast-paced and interconnected world. His teachings remind us of the importance of integrity, compassion, and social responsibility.【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为学校正举办的主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动写一篇短文投稿。【详解】1. 词汇积累著名的:well-known famous人物:figure per

    17、son强调:emphasize stress基础:foundation basis2. 句式拓展简单句变复合句原句:His teachings shaped the moral and ethical foundation of Chinese culture, fostering respect for authority, harmonious relationships, and the pursuit of knowledge. 拓展句:His teachings shaped the moral and ethical foundation of Chinese culture, w

    18、hich fostered respect for authority, harmonious relationships, and the pursuit of knowledge. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Confucius traveled throughout the country, imparting his wisdom to countless disciples and leaving a profound impact on Chinese society. (运用了现在分词作伴随状语)【高分句型2】 He stressed the self-cultivation, res

    19、pect for elders, and the pursuit of knowledge, which serves as a guiding light in our fast-paced and interconnected world. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) (四) 2023全国乙卷52. 请以向学校英文报投稿的方式,用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历,及从中获得的体验和感受。注意:1.词数100左右; 2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。_【答案】 When I was in my primary school, I had an opportunity to at

    20、tend a musical contest held in my school. That was the first time I watched a live musical performance. The fantastic players touched me deeply.I asked my parents allowing me to take up a piano lesson for beginner. In the beginning, it was quite difficult to read the notes on the stave. However, it

    21、did not demoralize me. I spent most of my leisure hours to practice piano. Although my fingers were painful after few hours practice, I felt satisfied if I could play a music piece completely.Even though I will not pursue as my life career, I will still continue learning and playing piano as my hobb

    22、y. It is simply because music is the best medication for my soul.【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于记叙文,请以向学校英文报投稿的方式,用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历,及从中获得的体验和感受。【详解】1. 词汇积累机会:opportunity chance使沮丧:demoralize discourage满意的:satisfied content空闲的:leisure spare2. 句式拓展合并简单句原句:The fantastic players touched me deeply. I asked my parents all

    23、owing me to take up a piano lesson for beginner.拓展句:The fantastic players touched me deeply, so I asked my parents allowing me to take up a piano lesson for beginner.点睛【高分句型1】When I was in my primary school, I had an opportunity to attend a musical contest held in my school. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句)【高分句型2

    24、】Although my fingers were painful after few hours practice, I felt satisfied if I could play a music piece completely. (运用了although引导的让步状语从句和if引导的条件状语从句)(五) 2023年2月四省联考46. 你刚观看了你校与英国一所友好学校联合在线上举办的音乐会。请在线上留言板上写一则评论,内容包括:1. 音乐会特点;2. 观看感受;3. 意见建议。注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。This online concer

    25、t is absolutely fantastic._ 【答案】This online concert is absolutely fantastic.The performers from the two schools have done their best in entertaining the audience with one song after another. Their performances are undoubtedly of high quality, which makes the concert almost no different from a live o

    26、ne. I enjoyed every second of the concert and was particularly attracted when the boys and girls from Britain started to sing the traditional Chinese song “Liang Zhu”. They performed the song in a way that touched my heart and gave me a feeling of connection. I hope there will be more opportunities

    27、in the future for us Chinese students and our international friends to learn about and from each other.【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放作文。要求考生就学校与英国一所友好学校联合在线上举办的音乐会,在线上留言板上写一则评论。【详解】1.词汇积累确定无疑地:undoubtedlywithout doubt尤其地:particularly especially感动:touch move希望:hope expect2.句式拓展同义句原句:Their performances are undoub

    28、tedly of high quality, which makes the concert almost no different from a live one.拓展句:There is no doubt that their performances are of high quality, which makes the concert almost no different from a live one.【点睛】【高分句型1】Their performances are undoubtedly of high quality, which makes the concert alm

    29、ost no different from a live one.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)【高分句型2】I enjoyed every second of the concert and was particularly attracted when the boys and girls from Britain started to sing the traditional Chinese song “Liang Zhu”. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句)(六) 2023年1月浙江卷66. 上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。请为校英文报写篇报道,

    30、内容包括:1. 活动的过程;2. 收获与感想。注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。Getting to Know the Plants Around Us_【答案】Getting to Know the Plants Around Us Last weekend, I participated in a “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by our Students Union. The activity began with a lecture by a local b

    31、otanist, who taught us about the different characteristics and uses of various plant species. We then went on a natural walk to observe and collect samples of different plants. Throughout the event, I was struck by the incredible variety of plants that exist in our world and learned about plants tha

    32、t are used for medical purposes, as well as those that provide food and shelter for animals. I also gained a greater appreciation for the role that plants play in maintaining the balance of our ecosystem. Overall, it was a valuable and enriching experience. 【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为校英文报写篇报道,介绍上周末校学生

    33、会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。【详解】1. 词汇积累参与:participate in attend开始:begin start观察,调查:observe survey震惊:strike astonish/surprise2. 句式拓展简单句变复合句原句: Last weekend, I participated in a “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by our Students Union.拓展句: Last weekend, I participated in a “Getting to Kno

    34、w the Plants Around Us” activity organised by our Students Union, which benefited me a lot.【点睛】【高分句型1】The activity began with a lecture by a local botanist, who taught us about the different characteristics and uses of various plant species.(运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句)【高分句型2】Throughout the event, I was struc

    35、k by the incredible variety of plants that exist in our world and learned about plants that are used for medical purposes, as well as those that provide food and shelter for animals.(运用了一般过去时的被动语态和定语从句)二、 2022年高考真题(七) 2022年新高考1卷假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华,请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括:1. 节目介绍;2

    36、. 访谈的时间和话题。注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dear Caroline,_ Yours sincerely,Li Hua【答案】Dear Caroline,This is my first time that I have invited you to attend our program Talk and Talk. It is ten years since Talk and Talk was established. This is an amazing program where you can share your ideas w

    37、ith students. Now, when having trouble in learning English well, plenty of students urge to know how to deal with it. As our distinguished foreign language teacher, your aid can help us a lot. If you are available on this Sunday, I together with the whole Talk and Talk staff am waiting for your comi

    38、ng. Id appreciate it if you take my invitation into consideration. Yours,Li Hua【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,假定你是校广播站“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华,请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。【详解】1.词汇积累建立:establishset up了不起的:amazingfabulous帮助:aidassistance许多:plenty ofa lot of2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句:As our distinguished foreign language teacher,

    39、your aid can help us a lot.拓展句:You are our distinguished foreign language teacher, whose aid can help us a lot.【点睛】高分句型1This is an amazing program where you can share your ideas with students.(运用了where引导的限制性定语从句)高分句型2Now, when having trouble in learning English well, plenty of students urge to know

    40、how to deal with it.(运用了状语从句的省略)(八) 2022年新高考II卷假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华,请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括:1. 节目介绍;2. 访谈的时间和话题。注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dear Caroline,_Yours sincerely,Li Hua【答案】Dear Caroline,This is my first time that I have invited you to attend our program Talk and

    41、Talk. It is ten years since Talk and Talk was established. This is an amazing program where you can share your ideas with students. Now, when having trouble in learning English well, plenty of students urge to know how to deal with it. As our distinguished foreign language teacher, your aid can help

    42、 us a lot. If you are available on this Sunday, I together with the whole Talk and Talk staff am waiting for your coming. Id appreciate it if you take my invitation into consideration. Yours,Li Hua【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,假定你是校广播站“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华,请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。【详解】1. 词汇积累建立:establishset up

    43、了不起的:amazingfabulous帮助:aidassistance许多:plenty ofa lot of2. 句式拓展简单句变复合句原句:As our distinguished foreign language teacher, your aid can help us a lot. 拓展句:You are our distinguished foreign language teacher, whose aid can help us a lot. 【点睛】高分句型1This is an amazing program where you can share your ideas

    44、with students. (运用了where引导的限制性定语从句)高分句型2Now, when having trouble in learning English well, plenty of students urge to know how to deal with it. (运用了状语从句的省略)(九) 2022年全国甲卷你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题,举办英语征文比赛,请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括:1. 海洋的重要性;2. 保护海洋的倡议。注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。_【答案】When it comes to ocean, its pollu

    45、tion is becoming more and more serious. World Ocean Day, falling on June 8th, is aimed at raising awareness of ocean conservation.Ocean plays a key role in our world. Not only does ocean offer us sufficient food, but also it maintains the balance of nature. Thus, it is imperative to protect ocean. F

    46、irst of all, what we can do is to place importance on our daily actions. For example, garbage cant be thrown into ocean. Whats more, we can also hand out leaflets to call on more people to protect the ocean. The more people are involved, the better the ocean environment is.All in all, it is high tim

    47、e that we devoted ourselves to protecting ocean. To protect ocean is to protect ourselves.【解析】【导语】本文是一篇应用文,就世界海洋日为主题向英文征文比赛投稿,阐述海洋的重要性并提出一些建议。【详解】1.词汇积累越来越:more and moreincreasingly重视:place importance onattach importance to重要的:keysignificant此外:whats morefurthermore2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句:World Ocean Day, fa

    48、lling on June 8th, is aimed at raising awareness of ocean conservation.拓展句:World Ocean Day, which falls on June 8th, is aimed at raising awareness of ocean conservation.【点睛】高分句型1Not only does ocean offer us sufficient food, but also it maintains the balance of nature.(运用了部分倒装结构)高分句型2When it comes to

    49、 ocean, its pollution becoming more and more serious.(使用了固定句型)高分句型3First of all, what we can do is to place importance on our daily actions.(使用了主语从句)(十) 2022年全国乙卷学校英文报正在开展以Learning English Beyond the Classroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:1. 学习活动状况描述:2. 简单评论;3. 你的建议。注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。_【

    50、答案】Learning English Beyond the Classroom Nowadays, with the growing popularity of smartphones and computers, an increasing number of students are choosing to learn English beyond the classroom in various ways. It can easily be seen that the percentage of students who choose listening to English song

    51、s and watching English movies is respectively 65% and 50%. However, those choosing reading English books and visiting English learning websites only account for 18% and 12%. As far as Im concerned, it is a disturbing trend. For students, what benefits most to their study is reading English books. Be

    52、cause of their lack of self-discipline, theyre more easily addicted to chatting online or playing games. Its urgent for students themselves to improve their self-discipline, and its also urgent for parents and teachers to strengthen the guidance.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于说明文。要求考生请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文给学校英文报投稿。【详解】1

    53、.词汇积累选择:choose select提高:improve strengthen各种各样的:various diverse就我而言:as far as Im concerned from my perspective2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句:Nowadays, with the growing popularity of smartphones and computers, an increasing number of students are choosing to learn English beyond the Classroom in various ways.拓展句:No

    54、wadays, because smartphones and computers are becoming more and more popular, an increasing number of students are choosing to learn English beyond the Classroom in various ways.【点睛】【高分句型1】It can easily be seen that the percentage of students who choose listening to English songs and watching Englis

    55、h movies is respectively 65% and 50%. (运用了it作形式主语,that引导主语从句以及who引导的定语从句)【高分句型2】Its urgent for students themselves to improve their self-discipline (运用了it作形式主语,to improve their self-discipline为真正的主语)(十一) 2022年6月北京卷第二节(20分)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你打算邀请英国好友Jim为你们班做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交流。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:1建议交流的具体内容

    56、及其原因;2交流时间和其他相关事项。注意:1词数100左右;2开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Jim,_【答案】Dear Jim.Hows everything?Im writing to invite you to give us an online talk on English writing. Our classmates seem to be weak in organisation. Would you please give us some suggestions on how to connect sentences logically,how to develop

    57、a paragraph,and how to structure an essay?The talk will be about an hour,and you can decide on a date at your convenience.Please let me know which platform youll be using It would be great if we could have a 10-minute question and answer session at the end of your talk.Looking forward to your reply.

    58、 Yours., Li Hua(十二) 2022年6月浙江卷46. 假定你是李华,你校图书馆新开设“小组学习室”,请你给你的留学生同学Michael写一封信,邀请他一同体验,内容包括:1.位置与开放时间; 2.室内设施和功能。注意:1. 词数80左右;2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。_【答案】Dear Michael,Good news ! Recently, a newly-furnished section, consisting of eight Group Learning Rooms, has been open to us students in our school libr

    59、ary.Located on the third floor beside the online reading rooms, it can be accessible from 8 am till 9 pm throughout the weekdays. Those rooms are equipped with modern electronic facilities, all of which are linked to the Internet. Its really convenient for us to do some group projects. Why not ask o

    60、ur group members to go and experience it?Early reply and we can reserve one room for our project.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,假定考生是李华,你校图书馆新开设“小组学习室”,请你给你的留学生同学Michael写一封信,邀请他一同体验。【详解】1. 词汇积累由组成:consist of be made up of位于:be located on be situated on与相连接: be linked to be connected to预定:reserveboo

    61、k2. 句式拓展合并简单句原句:Recently, a newly-furnished section, consisting of eight Group Learning Rooms, has been open to us students in our school library.拓展句:Recently, a newly-furnished section, which consists of eight Group Learning Rooms, has been open to us students in our school library.【点睛】高分句型1 Those

    62、rooms are equipped with modern electronic facilities, all of which are linked to the Internet.(of which引导的非限制性定语从句)高分句型2 Located on the third floor beside the online reading rooms, it can be accessible from 8 am till 9 pm throughout the weekdays.(过去分词作状语)(十三) 2022年1月浙江卷假定你是李华,在“中国一爱尔兰文化节”活动中结识了爱尔兰朋友

    63、Chris,现在他已回国,请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:1回忆活动经历;2分享个人收获;3希望保持联系。注意:1词数80左右;2可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。_【答案】Dear Chris,How is everything? I have missed you very much since you returned to Ireland.I still remember the moments we spent together at the China-Ireland Cultural Festival. We went to lectures on culture by leading

    64、 scholars from both our countries. We also enjoyed music, dance, dramas and films.I gained a better understanding of Irish culture during the festival, which has great significance for the cultural exchanges between China and Ireland. Whats more, a close friendship has been formed between us.Lets ke

    65、ep in touch. Hope to see you again.Yours,Li Hua三、 2021年高考真题(十四) 2021年6月新高考1卷你校英文报Youth正在庆祝创刊十周年, 请你写一篇短文投稿, 内容包括:1. 读报的经历;2. 喜爱的栏目;3. 期望和祝福。注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Youth and Me_【答案】1Youth and MeDear editor,As the 10thanniversary ceremony of YOUTH is drawing near, I am writing to take t

    66、his opportunity to extend my heartfelt congratulations.Ever since I was young, my parents exposed me to various magazines, but YOUTH was my favorite which has gained high praise from many students including me, a regular reader. Not only does it supply me with a platform to broaden my horizon, but i

    67、ts rich content can also spark my burning passion for English. I am fond of all its columns, but what I enjoy most about the paper is its language and writing style, which contributes greatly to my progress in writing.I have thousands of blessings and I keenly wish YOUTH could achieve greater succes

    68、s and gain more popularity.Yours,Li Hua【答案】2Youth and MeYouth- a poplar campus newspaper-is celebrating its tenth anniversary, on which special day, as a devoted reader, Id like to give it my sincere congratulations with great excitement. Three years ago, when I came across Youth, I was impressed by

    69、 its content and striking narration and recording events in and out campus, ranging from sports, science and new technology, self growth and study methods, among which, the philosophy column attracted me most. With its articles influence, I have helped myself overcome loneliness and would like embra

    70、ce all beauty of life. Last, thanks Youth for giving me a new perspective of life and I really hope that Youth will step further and bring more brightness to the youth like me! 【解析】本文是一篇应用文,向校刊Youth表达自己的经历,并送上自己的祝福。1词汇积累建立:foundestablish沮丧的:upsetdepressed得到:receiveobtain赏析:enjoyappreciate2句式拓展同义句改写原

    71、句:These stories can relieve my stress and broaden my horizon.拓展句:Not only can these stories relieve my stress, but also they can broaden my horizon.(十五) 2021年全国甲卷 假定你是李华,你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会,并在英语网站上展示,请你给外国朋友Chris写封信,向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国朋友,内容如下: 1. 阐明写信事由; 2. 征求建议; 3. 表达感谢。注意: 1. 词数 100 左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节,

    72、以使行文连贯。Dear Chris,_ Yours, Li Hua【答案】Dear Chris,Hope everything goes well with you! In a bit to foreign studentsricher insight into Chinese culture, a class meeting themed introducing Chinese traditional culture to foreign friends will be launched in our school. Im writing to ask for your suggestion

    73、s on the topic.Since every process and detail is to be posted on an English website that has numerous foreign visitors, I feel at a loss which aspects of our culture fascinates foreign readers. Currently, we have been considering a wide range of choices ranging from local cuisine and ancient costume

    74、s to festival traditions and folk music, but we havent reached any agreement yet. So, I am urgently in need of your suggestion. If you can furnish me with more information, just feel free to inform me.Your prompt response will be much appreciated. Hope to hear from you soon.Yours,Li Hua(十六) 2021年全国乙

    75、卷你校将举办英语演讲比赛,请你以 Be smart online learner 写一篇发言稿参赛,内容包括:1. 分析优势及不足;2. 提出学习建议。注意:1. 词数100词左右;2. 题目和首句以为你写好。_【答案】Be smart online learnersJust like the old saying goes, each coin has two sides. On the one hand, providing an easy access to plenty of excellent learning sources, online learning is really a

    76、 helping hand. On the other hand, what we learn online isnt necessarily what we need, not to mention its constant damage to our eyes.For me, online learning is, after all, just a tool. Its not the new method itself but the person who use it that really matters. To become a smart online learner, not

    77、only should we carefully choose from countless alternatives we may face, but extra attention needs to be attached when we take lessons online. Whats more, on condition that we could apply what we learn online to our daily life, online learning would be more meaningful.Thanks, everyone. Hope we all c

    78、ould be smart online learners.【解析】本篇书面表达是演讲稿,一种常见的应用文,与去年英语作文比赛稍有差别。英语书面表达近几年来稳中求变,在测试考生的英语表达能力,看其是否能够运用学过的英语知识和掌握的技能,进行思想交流的同时,注重文体变化,突出实用性,更考查学生能否利用所学语言知识、文化知识等,根据不同目的和受众,通过书面形式创新语篇。【点睛】范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯。复合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多的高端句式,如非谓语动词:providing an easy access to plenty of excellen

    79、t learning sources, online learning is really a helping hand.;名词性从句:what we learn online isnt necessarily what we need, not to mention its constant damage to our eyes. 倒装:To become a smart online learner, not only should we carefully choose from countless alternatives we may face, but extra attentio

    80、n needs to be attached when we take lessons online.;状语从句:on condition that we could apply what we learn online to our daily life, online learning would be more meaningful.等。文章思路清晰,层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色。(十七) 2021年6月北京卷假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出,你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:1.表达歉意并说明原因;2.提出建议并给出理由。

    81、注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Jim,_ Yours, Li Hua【参考范文】1Dear Jim, How are you these days? We have planned to hang around together this weekend, and how much I am expecting that! To my pity, I was informed to attend the nursery house with the Student Union this morning. Since this weekend is

    82、the Double Ninth Day, a traditional day celebrated for the senior in China, our school has launched this activity to show our concern and responsibility for the old, which is a meaningful and instructive activity for us teenagers. I am really sorry and how about going out together next weekend, and

    83、as a compensation, I would like to teat you a big meal and invite you to visit local museum. If the time is not convenient for you, you can set anytime next week. Please accept my sincere apology for that. Looking forward to seeing you soon!Yours,Li Hua【参考范文】2DearJim,Im sorrythatIwontbeable togohiki

    84、ngwithyouthisSaturday.Ibegantocoughyesterdaymorning,soIwenttoseeadoctor.Shetoldmeitwasabadcold,andIwouldhavetostayathomeforafewdays.Idreallyliketospendsometimewithyou.IsitOKwithyouifwetakeatripto ZhangjiakounextSaturday?Itsoneofthehostcitiesforthe2022WinterOlympics. Pleaseletmeknowwhatyouthink.Again

    85、,Imsorryabouttheinconvenience.Hopetohearfromyou soon.Yours,Li Hua(十八) 2021年6月浙江卷 昨天你去学校参观了中国画的展览,请你为学校英语报写一篇宣传稿: 1. 时间和地点; 2. 你的感受; 3. 强烈推荐。注意: 1. 词数100左右; 2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。_【估计是官方】要确认,教学平台上还没有Dear editor,活动的人物、时间、地点、目的In order to better experience traditional Chinese culture, the Students Union o

    86、f our school organized a meaningful activity to visit an Chinese painting exhibition in the school hall last weekend.活动详情In the activity, the guide enthusiastically explained each piece in detail and introduced to us the Chinese famous painters we admire most, such as Xu Beihong, Qi Baishi and so on

    87、. 活动感受 By participating in the well-organized activities, Ive benefited a great deal from them. Not only can I cultivate my patience and imagination, but also I can get easier access to our excellent history and culture, which can enrich my mind.表达推荐期望 To be honest, it will be a good chance for you

    88、to learn about traditional Chinese culture. I strongly appeal to all the students in our school to make use of their spare time to taste these wonderful works carefully!YoursLi Hua(参考译文:为了更好地体验中国传统文化,上周末我校学生会组织了一次有意义的活动,参观了在学校礼堂举行的国画展览。在活动中,导游热情给我们详细解释介绍给我们最敬佩的中国著名画家,如徐悲鸿、齐白石等。通过参与组织很好的活动,我获益匪浅。它不仅可

    89、以培养我的耐心和想象力,而且我可以更容易地接触到我们优秀的历史和文化,丰富我的思想。老实说,这将是一个好机会让你了解中国传统文化。我强烈呼吁我们学校的所有学生利用他们的业余时间仔细品尝这些美妙的作品! 【名师导学】高级语块:better experience;meaningful;enthusiastically;piece;in detail; participating in;benefited a great deal from; access to; enrich;To be honest;strongly appeal to;taste等。高级句型:In order to,such

    90、as;and so on;which;Not only but also 等。这篇参考范文结构严谨、层次清晰:首先告知活动的人物、时间、地点、目的,其次简要地回顺了自己昨天观看学生国画作品展的过程,最后写自己的感受和推荐观展;多用高级词汇、句型使得本范文结构严谨、行文流畅。【答案】As is known to all, Chinese painting is a crucial part of our traditional cultural; therefore, with great honor and curiosity, I paid a visit to the Chinese pa

    91、inting display exhibited in our school lecture hall at 9 a.m. yesterday. During my one hour and a halfs visit, I was fully exposed to a world of art. The visit includes three parts, first of which is a brief introduction of the history of Chinese painting, traced back to 7000 years ago. In this part

    92、, many works painted on pottery, ground and rock wall in pictures are shown. The second part is tool display. The basic tools used are brush and ink and mineral pigments. At first, Chinese painting was painted on pottery, ground and rock wall, and gradually developed into painting on wall, silk and

    93、paper. In the third part of this exhibition, many paintings by famous arts are appreciated and discussed by students and teachers., Through this visit, I fall in love with Chinese painting and I would like to recommend my fellow students to have an amazing experience to this art show as well. And yo

    94、u wont regret it.审题:时态:昨天人物:第一人称题材:宣传稿宣传稿的特点带有新闻稿的特点,都是要客观,公正,不要夸大其词,其次语言要诙谐,幽默,引起共鸣,第三,可以运用数据增加可信度,增加宣传力度。写作目的:为学校英语报写一篇宣传稿,宣传中国画的展览。考察点:1. 记叙文部分(记叙昨天参观中国画的展览,客观叙述时间,地点,用过去时态),2. 抒情议论部分(“我”的感受, 包括所见,所闻,所感,用过去时叙述参观的东西,一般现在时抒发情感),3. 终级目的:强烈推荐(推荐对象是谁?思维发散:对象就是中学生为主,因为是发表在校报的)难点:参观的内容需要展开合理想象。补充信息:中国的绘

    95、画史可以上溯到原始社会的新石器时代,距今至少有七千余年的历史。最初的中国绘画,是画在陶器、地面、和岩壁上的,渐而发展到画在墙壁、绢、和纸上。使用的基本工具是毛笔和墨,以及天然矿物质颜料。在无数画家不断探索、创新的努力之下,逐渐形成了.The history of Chinese painting can be traced back to the Neolithic Age of primitive society, with a history of at least 7000 years. At first, Chinese painting was painted on pottery,

    96、 ground and rock wall, and gradually developed into painting on wall, silk and paper. The basic tools used are brush and ink, as well as natural mineral pigments. Under the efforts of innumerable painters continuous exploration and innovation, it gradually formed(十九) 2021年6月天津卷提纲类作文假如你是晨光中学的李津。你在英国游

    97、学期间曾寄宿在英国学生Chris家,他母 亲Nancy通过电子邮件祝贺你顺利完成高中学业,并询问你将如何安排高中最后一 个假期。请你用英语回复,内容包括:(1) 表示感谢并问候;(2) 计划与家人一起做的事情;(3) 你决定选择哪个专业,为学好该专业做何准备。注意:(1) 词数不少于100;(2) 可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;(3) 开头和结尾巳给出,不计入总词数。Dear Nancy,_Yours,Li Jin【答案】Dear Nancy,I am very glad to receive your E-mail. I am very grateful to you and you

    98、r family for taking care of me during my study tour in the UK. And wish you all the best.Now that I have finished my high school studies, my parents and I are going to travel to Beijing. Im going toTian anmen to see the flag raising and climb the Great Wall. In addition, I want to go to Qinghua Gard

    99、en to enjoy the elegant demeanor of famous universities. I have decided to register for the computer major. With the rapid development of the Internet industry, the high-paying employment in IT industry attracts more and more people to join the Internet tide. Before choosing, consult people engaged

    100、in this major or go to training institutions for consultation. Only with a clear goal, we will have targeted learning in the future, which will be more efficient.Yours,Li Jin【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,假如你是晨光中学的李津。你在英国游学期间曾寄宿在英国学生Chris家,他母 亲Nancy通过电子邮件祝贺你顺利完成高中学业,并询问你将如何安排高中最后一 个假期。请你用英语回复,内容包括:表示感谢并问候;计划与家人一起做

    101、的事情;你决定选择哪个专业,为学好该专业做何准备。【详解】1.词汇积累照顾:take care oflook after另外,此外:in additionbesideswhats more雇佣:employhire既然:now thatsince2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句:With the rapid development of the Internet industry, the high-paying employment in IT industry attracts more and more people to join the Internet tide.拓展句:As the

    102、 Internet industry develops rapidly,the high-paying employment in IT industry attracts more and more people to join the Internet tide.【点睛】高分句型1 Only with a clear goal, we will have targeted learning in the future, which will be more efficient. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)高分句型2 Now that I have finished my h

    103、igh school studies, my parents and I are going to travel to Beijing. (运用了now that引导的原因状语从句)(二十) 2021年3月天津卷假设你是晨光中学的李津。我市为外国友人提供生活信息的某英文网站新增了最美中华栏目,请你给该栏目投稿,介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方。内容包括:(1)该地方的基本情况(如名称、地理位置等);(2)该地方的特色(如文化、景点等);(3)你对该地方的印象和感受。注意:(1)词数不少于100;(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。ABeautifulPlaceinChinaMarch19

    104、, 2021ByLi Jin_【答案】A Beautiful Place in ChinaMarch 19, 2021By Li JinSichuan Province is located in southwestern part of China. It enjoys many world-famous places of interest, such as Jiuzhaigou and Dujiangyan lrrigation project.Jiuzhaigou National Park is a nature reserve in the north of Sichuan Pro

    105、vince. What is the most impressive is its many multi-level waterfalls and colorful lakes. Whats more, walking in the nature reserve, you have a chance to see rare animals like giant pandas, golden monkeys. There are also many species of rare plants protected here. Another famous scenic spot is Dujan

    106、gyan lrrigation Project. It dates from over 2, 000 years ago. However, it is still playing an important part in irrigation today.Im sure the visitors will be amazed by the beautiful scenery in Jiazhaigou as well as the construction Dujiangyan lrigation Project.解析:(1)写作思路考查应用文写作。本次书面表达要求给英文网站最美中华栏目投稿

    107、,介绍介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方。写作时要包含题中已给内容,可适当发挥增加其他内容。注意在进行文章内容描写时一定要贴合实际,不能胡编乱造。根据题干可知,写作时主要采用一般现在时和第三人称,要求语言表达准确,描述内容贴合实际,不要出现语法和拼写错误。(2)重点词汇/句型a. places of interest名胜古迹;b. What is the most impressive is its many multi-level waterfalls and colorful lakes.what引导的主语从句 ;c. Whats more此外;d. have a chance to do s

    108、th.有机会做某事;e. There be句型;f. It dates from追溯到;g. play an important part in在中扮演重要角色;h. as well as以及;(3)其他高级句型a. It is adj. + for/of sb. to do sth. 某人做某事怎么样。(二十一) 2021.1八省联考假定你是李华,准备参加学校组织的英文诗朗诵比赛。请给外教George写封邮件求助,内容包括:1. 说明比赛要求; 2. 请他推荐英文诗; 3. 请教朗诵技巧。注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dear George,Im

    109、 writing to ask for your help._Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear George,Im writing to ask for your help. Im preparing for the English Poem Recitation Competition of our school. The competition requires every participantto recite an English poem of our own choice within five minutes and the poem should be easy to

    110、 understand. I wonderif you could recommend a few English poems to me. Besides, I wish you could teach me some techniques for reciting poems. I tried with some simple ones but found it hard to recite at an appropriate speed. The competition will be held in two weeks. Id be grateful if you could help

    111、 me.Im looking forward to your reply.(二十二) 2021年1月浙江卷假定你是李华,下周有新西兰学生访问你校,你将作为学生代表致欢迎辞。请为此写一篇发言稿,内容包括:1. 表示欢迎;2. 介绍活动安排;3. 表达祝愿。注意:1. 词数为80左右;2. 可适当添加细节,以使行文连贯。_【答案】Dear guests/friends from New Zealand,On behalf of our school, I feel greatly honored to express our warmest welcome to you. To help you

    112、better understand Chinese culture, weve arranged some activities for you.First comes the practice of Chinese calligraphy in the school hall between 9:00 and 10:00. You will learn to write your Chinese names with a brush. Then it is time for folk dance in the dancing room for about an hour. After the

    113、 lunch break, you will be guided to the playground, where you will practice Chinese martial arts, which are good for your health.I sincerely wish you a pleasant time with us and hope your trip in China will turn out a most unforgettable experience in life. Thank you!解析写作思路:文章是要你作为学生代表写一篇欢迎辞。首先需要表示欢迎

    114、,接下来介绍活动安排,最后表达祝愿。一般将来时为主,第一人称为主。【高分短语句型】Chinese calligraphy(中国书法);brush(毛笔);folk dance(民间舞蹈);Chinese martial arts(中国武术)。不定式作目的状语 To help you better understand Chinese culture, weve arranged some activities for you. 为了帮助您更好地了解中国文化,我们为您安排了一些活动。被动语态&定语从句:After the lunch break, you will be guided to th

    115、e playground, where you will practice Chinese martial arts, which are good for your health. 午休后,你们会被带去操场练习中国武术,这对你们的健康有好处。题型解读应用文写作主要考查学生英语语言的实际应用能力,该题型写作目的明确,测试学生在实际生活情景下运用英语传达信息,表达观点的能力,题目侧重英语语言的交际性和实用性。应用文写作文体以书信(邮件)类为主,这类应用文通常出现提纲式要点,话题常常与学生的校园实际生活相关。此次浙江新高考英语写作部分第一题应用文写作考查的方向是发言稿。这是浙江省新高考以来第一次出

    116、现书信以外的应用文格式,对学生作文训练的全面性和灵活性是一个新挑战。推荐词汇和句型此次考试的发言稿主要考查的是欢迎致辞,一般分为三个部分,即表示欢迎、致辞主体、表达祝愿。其中“表示欢迎”和“表达祝愿”可以使用如下的一些常用句式进行展开,以使行文更加符合写作目的:【表示欢迎】1. First of all, please allow me to express a warm welcome to you on behalf of our school.首先,请允许我代表我们学校对你们表示热烈的欢迎。2. Im honored to have this opportunity to welcome

    117、 all of you to visit our school.我很荣幸有这个机会欢迎大家来我们学校参观。3. We have been looking forward to seeing you for a long time. 我们一直期待着与你们相见。4. I feel greatly privileged to have a chance to stand here, on behalf of all the students, to give a warm welcome to you. 我很荣幸有机会代表所有的学生站在这里,向你们表示热烈的欢迎。【表达祝愿】1. Wish you

    118、a pleasant journey. 祝您这次路途愉快。2. I hope you can enjoy your stay in our school. 希望你在我们学校过得愉快。优秀范文1Hello to all of our precious guests from New Zealand. My name is Li Hua. On behalf of the school and the student body, I welcome you to our campus today.For your visit, we have planned an itinerary of exc

    119、iting events to introduce to you the culture that we as a school take pride in nurturing. Whether it be exploring the colourful history of our campus, or participating in some friendly competition, we hope you will have as wonderful a time learning about us as we certainly will about you.优秀范文2Welcom

    120、e.I am the student representative of our school and please allow me the honour of welcoming you to our school.To demonstrate ourcordial greetings, we will begin the tour by participating in different icebreaker activities designed by our senior students. Then, we invite you to partake in a cultural

    121、dance performance that we are preparing for the upcoming spring festivalcelebration. Finally,adelicious meal of traditional Chinese food will be the perfect way to end the day.I hope that you feel at home with our humble etiquette.优秀范文3Honorable guests, dear teachers and fellow students,First of all

    122、, please allow me to express a warm welcome to our distinguished guests on behalf of the school.As scheduled, during your stay at our school, we will first give you a tour of our school. Afterwards, you can visit the English corner to talk with our classmates and promote our friendship. Last but not

    123、 least, our Chinese host families will provide the opportunity to experience a different culture and try some delicious, traditional Chinese food.We wish you a pleasant time at our school.四、 2020年高考真题(二十三) 2020全国卷I你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题,写一篇短文参赛,内容包括:1. 人物简介;2. 尊敬和爱戴的原因。注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 短文题目和首句

    124、已为你写好。The person I respectThere are many respectable people around us._【答案】The person I respectWe have a lot of respectable people around us. They may be our teachers, parents or one of our elders. As for me, my father is the person I respect most. My father is a teacher who loves his work and his s

    125、tudents very much. He works very hard every day but he will also spare some time to accompany me and share many funny things with me about his work. When I come across the problems of learning in my study, my father will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely. H

    126、e achieved a lot in his work, respected by his students. So, in my mind my father is the person I respect most and I love him deeply.(1)写作思路:第一步:确定题目类型人物介绍类命题作文。第二步:确定写作要点:1. 话题引入;指明介绍的人物对象;介绍人物的身份、发生的故事等;2. 分条写明尊敬该人物的原因,建议描述原因不少于2条;3. 可适当补充细节,例如指明该人物对自己的影响,并进行升华。(2)参考词汇、短语:1. admire 敬佩;2. look up t

    127、o sb. 尊敬某人;3. be worthy of 值得;4. idol 偶像;5. role model 榜样;6. when it comes to 当提及。(3)参考句式:1. 名词性从句的使用:The reason whyis that 的理由是2. 定语从句的使用:The one that I regard as my role model is 我视作榜样的人是3. 非谓语动词的使用:Though suffering from so many difficulties, he was still 尽管经历着如此多的困难,他仍然4. 强调句的使用:It was from him t

    128、hat I learn that 正是从他身上我学到了标注(二十四) 2020全国卷II 上周末,你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文,介绍这次活动,内容包括:1. 农场情况;2. 采摘过程;3. 个人感受注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 题目已为你写好。题目:My Weekend_ 【答案】My WeekendOrganized by the student union, a group of volunteers went to Hope Farm to help the farmers pick peaches last weekend. The farm is sit

    129、uated at the foot of a mountain, the sky is blue and the air is fresh. We were attracted by the beautiful scenery. There are different kinds of fruit trees as well as a variety of animals.On arriving, we saw red ripe peaches hanging on the tree. Using baskets and ladders,We first picked the ones tha

    130、t were most beautiful in color, then those that were ripe and soft.I couldnt wait to take a bite, and the sweet juice went down my throat.I was grateful for this opportunity to get close to nature. Not only would I be able to experience fruit picking, but I could also feast on the sweetness!【解析】(1)写

    131、作思路本文是一篇提纲式的书面表达,要求介绍自己和同学上周末参加的一次采摘活动。在介绍农场情况时,可以谈论该农场的位置、农场的采摘品种、是否属于生态农场等内容;在描述采摘过程时,可以描述采摘的物品、和同学之间的合作、农民的指导等内容,时态应当以一般过去时为主;在表达个人感受时,可以从人与自然的角度或者劳动能力的培养方面入手,时态以一般过去时和一般现在时为主。在写作时,可以适当增加过渡词或句子,使文章更加的连贯流畅。(2)重点词汇/句型a. The ecological farm grows a wide variety of fruit and vegetables.(a wide variet

    132、y of 各种各样的)b. The guide showed us around the farm and explained to us how to pluck the fruit and vegetables.(show sb. around 带某人参观)c. The fruit and vegetables were good for us because they were planted with organic fertilizers.(be good for 对有好处)d. The clean air and the fresh fruit made me feel so re

    133、laxed that I wanted to pay a second visit.(sothat 如此以至于)标注【话题】生活与学习;写事【语篇】应用文(二十五) 2020全国卷III假定你是李华,你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件,请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括:1. 剧情简介;2. 指导内容;3. 商定时间地点。注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 结束语已为你写好。_Yours truly,Li Hua【答案】1Dear Miss Evans,How is everything going! I am writing in sincerity to ask

    134、you a favor regarding a play we adapted according to the textbook. Wed like to combine your culture with ours by adapting the classic novel The Steamboat for a short English play. The play is set on a big storm after midnight, on the raft down the river navigation, we see a steamboat that is going t

    135、o sink. We saved a scared boy. However, the adaption is quite a challenge. Having written the English script, we dont want anything inappropriate to spoil the play. So would you please spare some time to review the draft script attached to this email and make necessary changes? If it is convenient,

    136、may I pay you a visit at your office next Tuesday to give you more details?Given your busy schedule, Id be very appreciative if you offer to give some professional advice. Look forward to your early reply. Best regards!Yours truly,Li Hua【答案】2Dear Miss Evans,I was wondering if you could help me revis

    137、e a short play adapted from our English textbook.The plot of the tragic story is about Lady Meng jiang and her husband, who lived more than 2000 years ago in ancient China.At their wedding,her husband was taken away forcefully to bulid the Great wall.Meng jiang went to look for her husband, only to

    138、learn of his death. Then she cried at the Great Wall,causing it to fall apart.Could you kindly give me guidance on two aspects? First of all, could you check the language for us? Secondly, if you could please give us some direction on our acting and use of tone?If possible, could I meet you in your

    139、office at 10 am?We are looking forward to your reply.Yours,LiHua解析(1)写作思路:1. 体裁:应用文2. 时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时,一般过去时和一般将来时。3. 结构:总分总法4. 第一段说明写这封邮件的目的;第二段详细说明英语戏剧的剧情介绍和指导内容细节问题;第三段表达感谢,并期待早日得到回复。(2)必备词汇、短语:1. in sincerity 真诚地;2. according to 根据;3. combinewith 将与结合;4. adapt 改编;5. attachto 将附在上;6. it is conve

    140、nient for you 你时间方便的时候。(3)必备句式:1. 定语从句的使用:we see a steamboat that is going to sink;2. 非谓语动词作状语的使用:Having written the English script, we dont want anything;3. 非谓语动词作定语的使用:the draft script attached to this email;4. 状语从句的使用:Id be very appreciative if you offer to give some professional advice.标注【话题】求助【

    141、语篇】应用文(二十六) 2020年7月北京卷(1)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校英语戏剧俱乐部外籍指导教师Jim因疫情滞留英国。复学在即,作为俱乐部负责人,你给Jim写一封电子邮件,请他推荐一名外籍指导教师,内容包括:1. 条件及要求;2. 表示感谢并提醒注意防护。注意:1. 词数不少于50;2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Jim,_Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jim,How are you doing? I hope everything is OK with you.Our schools drama club plans to start pract

    142、icing. Since you are away in Britain, we need a drama teacher to be in your place. Would you please recommend one for us?He or she should be a native English speaker, currently in Beijing, and experienced in both directing and teaching.Thank you for your help. Please take care of yourself. Remember

    143、to wear a mask when necessary.Best wishes.Yours,Li Hua【解析】第一步:写作之前必修认真审题,首先要注意文章的时态,根据提纲内容可知使用一般现在时。第二步:根据关键要点,确定关键词,如:start doing sth(开始做某事),be away(离开),need a drama teacher(需要戏剧老师),be experienced in(在有经验)等。第三步:根据提示及关键词进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题以及句子结构完整。第四步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,使之自然流畅,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美

    144、观的卷面。高级句式:1. 原因状语从句的使用,如Since you are away in Britain, we need a drama teacher to be in your place.等;2. 状语从句的省略,如Remember to wear a mask when necessary.等。高级词汇:1. recommend 推荐;2. currently当前。(二十七) 2020年7月北京卷(2)假设你是红星中学高三(1)班班长李华。居家学习期间,你们班开展了一次以 自律 为主题的调研活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,写一篇英文稿件,给你们学校英文网站投稿,记述你在本次活动中

    145、发现问题并解决问题的过程。注意:词数不少于60。提示词:自律self-discipline_【答案】1This unusual term witnessed a swift heart-shaking growth in our self-discipline,which was, is and will always be leaving a significant influence on our development.With the unexpected COID19 threatening our health and safety continuously,staying ind

    146、oors and working online is a must-take defensive measure.We senior 3 students are just among those, who have no other choice but to manage ourselves at home by learning on the Internet.However, one day ,a survey came ,which showed an awful result that most of us had not made full use of this kind of

    147、 resources,wasting much time playing online games or paying no carefulness to the required lessons.Immediately,being the monitor of our class, I frowned with endless anxiety.At dinner,a talk took place in my family,where my considerate father and mother put forward practical suggestions.With the pur

    148、pose of strengthening self-discipline awareness together,I organized an online classmeeting ,stating a series of advice ,calling on everyone to improve our self-discipline and ending up with a regular rule.Finally came the time when three months flew away.A new survey showing our progress excited me

    149、 greatly,with the result that I called my headteacher,telling him our long-expected achievements.Meanwhile,delight mixed with bits of satisfaction surged into his heart and mine.It is owing to this special period that we have grown up rapidly.Nothing is impossible if we are determined enough to cont

    150、rol ourselves and build self-discipline in any situation.【答案】2While studying at home, I surveyed my class on self-discipline. The findings worried me a lot.To solve the problem, I asked my parents for help, and they offered some practical advice. Then I held an online discussion with my classmates o

    151、n how to well discipline ourselves. After that, we all knew better what to do.Three months later, I did a second survey, which showed great improvements in self-discipline. I phoned my teacher about it, and we both felt very pleased.【解析】第一步:读图,审题,初步确定时态为一般过去时。第二步:根据图片内容,确定表达需要的关键词或者词组,如study at home

    152、(在家学习),ask sb for help(向某人寻求帮助),offer practice advice(提供实际的建议),discipline ourselves(自律)等。第三步:根据提示及关键词进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题以及句子结构完整。第四步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,使之自然流畅,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面。高级句式:1.状语从句的省略,如While studying at home, I surveyed my class on self-discipline. 等;2.非限制性定语从句的使用,如Three months late

    153、r, I did a second survey, which showed great improvements in self-discipline.等。高级词汇:1.practical 实际的,切实可行的;2.show great improvement 表现出巨大的进步。(二十八) 2020.7浙江卷假定你是李华,你校来自爱尔兰的外教Peter因病回国休假。请给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:1. 询问近况;2. 分享班级最新消息;3. 表达祝愿。注意:1. 词数80左右;2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。_【答案】1Dear Peter,Hearing that you have go

    154、ne back to Ireland due to the illness, I m really sorry about it. Hows everything going now? I sincerely hope you will soon be restored to health. Now, Id like to share some news about our class with you.The first one that I can t wait to tell you is that David, who participated in the English speec

    155、h contest last month, won the first prize. Next is that we plan to have a three-day trip to Shanghai this summer holiday. How much we hope you could go with us! Last, we have made Hannah our new monitor next term.In the end, again I wish you a speedy recovery.Yours,Li Hua【答案】2Dear Peter,I am sorry t

    156、o hear that you have gone back home on sick leave. How are you feeling now?I hope my good news for you will sweep away the shadow of disease. Last month, an English festival was held in our school, and our class performed a song which you taught us at the festival. As soon as we finished the song, a

    157、ll the audience gave us warm applause. If only you had been there. We all miss you very much and wish you a quick and complete recovery.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【写作思路】1. 作文类型:写邮件询问近况,分享消息,表达祝福2. 时态确定:一般过去时、现在完成时用于询问近况和分享消息;一般将来时用于表达祝福3. 人称确定:第一人称、第二人称用于询问对方和表达自己的情况;第三人称用于陈述客观的事物【高分亮点】关键短语:1. restore to 使恢复2.

    158、 cant wait to do 迫不及待做某事3. participate in 参加高级句型:1. 现在分词作原因状语:Hearing that you have gone back to Ireland due to the illness, Im really sorry about it. 听说你因病回国,我感到很难过。2. 定语从句、宾语从句:The first one that I cant wait to tell you is that David, who participated in the English speech contest last month, won

    159、the first prize. 第一个我迫不及待想要告诉你的消息是,大卫上个月参加了英语演讲比赛获得了第一名。3. 表达祝福: I sincerely hope you will soon be restored to health. I wish you a speedy recovery. 祝你早日康复!(二十九) 2020.7山东卷假定你是李华,上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:1. 参加人员;2. 跑步路线:从校门口到南山脚下;3. 活动反响。注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。A Cross-Countr

    160、y Running Race_【答案】A Cross-Country Running RaceA 5, 000-metre cross-country running race took place in our school last Sunday. It was widely welcomed by all the classes from three grades. 100 students and teaching staff took part in the race. All the runners tried their best to win, with others chee

    161、ring them on. The racing route started at the school gate and ended at the foot of the South Hill. The race turned out to be a great success. Not only does it build up our body but it also enriches our school life.解析(1)写作思路本篇为提纲类的书面表达,以越野赛跑为话题进行描述。在写作时,应先介绍越野赛跑发生的时间和地点;接下来介绍参加人员,可以包括学生和教职工;然后,可以介绍参赛

    162、人员的精神面貌以及其他非参赛人员的加油助威;接下来,可以介绍越野赛跑的路线;最后,可以总结本次赛跑举办地很成功,大家的身心都得到了升华。由于是描述过去发生的事情,因此时态应当以一般过去时为主,人称应当以第一人称为主。(2)重点词汇/句型a. take place 举行;发生b. take part in 参加c. try ones best to do sth. 尽某人最大努力做某事d. cheer on 为加油;为喝彩e. turn out 结果是f. build up 增强的体质标注【语篇】记叙文【话题】生活与学习;写事(三十) 2020.7江苏卷请阅读下面有关中国题材纪录片(docume

    163、ntary)的对话,并按照要求用英语写一篇150个词左右的文章。Su Hua: Hi, Li Jiang! Did you see the BBC documentary on CCTV 9 last week?Li Jiang: You mean Du Fu: Chinas Greatest Poet? Yes, I did. Fantastic!Su Hua: Just think an English actor recites Chinese poems.Li Jiang: I dont really understand every line he recites, but I be

    164、lieve he truly loves the poems himself.Su Hua: Right. It is reported that the film is well received outside China.Li Jiang: Yeah, Its my first time to hear Chinese stories told by an English speaker.Su Hua: In fact, documentaries about our country are plentiful both at home and abroad. These films c

    165、an help foreign friends better understand this land-Chinese literature, geography history, food.Li Jiang: I couldnt agree more.【写作内容】1用约30个词概括上述对话的主要内容;2谈谈中国题材纪录片受到外国朋友欢迎的原因(至少两点)。【写作要求】1写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;2作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;【评分标准】内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当.。_【答案】CCTV 9 broadcast Du Fu: Chinas Greatest Poet, a

    166、 documentary produced by BBC. This well-made film provides foreign audiences with a fresh way of better knowing Chinas past and present.Documentaries about China, produced either in China or in other countries, are becoming increasingly popular among foreigners. For one thing, the overall developmen

    167、t over the past decades has been so striking that they feel eager to familiarize themselves with what is going on in China.For another, China enjoys a long history and rich culture. It has always been an attraction for those who are keen on anything that is Chinese. These documentaries present a spl

    168、endid picture of China in front of their audiences-it history, landscape, art, food, or even traditional Chinese medicine.Because of these films, some foreigners have begun to think of coming to China. In this way, they can form a true picture of China themselves.【解析】写作思路:要求你阅读下面有关中国题材纪录片(documentar

    169、y)的对话,并按照要求用英语写一篇150个词左右的文章。所写内容要包括题干要求。根据所给提纲灵活运用英语知识,采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用。时态主要为一般现在时态和现在完成时态。高分词汇:1. provide with 供给;2. a fresh way of 一种新的方法;3. eager to 渴望;4. familiarize with 使熟悉(或通晓);6. keen on 喜爱;热衷于:7. think of 想起;考虑;高分句型:1. the past decades has b

    170、een so striking that they feel eager to familiarize themselves with what is going on in China. has done现在完成时态的使用;sothat引导的从句的使用;what引导的宾语从句的使用,从句充当with的宾语。2. It has always been an attraction for those who are has done 现在完成时态的使用和who引导的限制性定语从句的使用。标注【语篇】议论文【话题】历史、社会与文化;社会现象(三十一) 2020.7天津卷2假设你是晨光中学高三学生李

    171、津。你校于6月8日举办了成人礼活动,你的英国朋友Chris很想了解该活动。你于当晚给Chris回一封电子邮件,介绍关情况,内容包括:(1)成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾、观看校友抗疫事边录像);(2)对活动的感受;(3)对自己未来的展望。注意:(1)词数不少于100;(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行方连贯;(3)开头已给出,不计入总词数。参考词汇:成人礼 the coming-of age ceremony新冠脑炎 COVID-F9Dear Chris,Im so glad to hear from you.Dear Chris,Im so glad to hear from you._Yo

    172、urs,Li Jin【答案】Dear Chris,I am so glad to hear from you. The coming-of-age ceremony was held in our school on June 8th this month. During the coming-of-age ceremony, the headmaster congratulated us on stepping into the adult, reviewing the growth period that we had experienced. After that, we all wat

    173、ched the video of alumnus fighting against the epidemic.Through the activity, what I felt is that I am able to shoulder the responsibility and make us stronger and more determined. When faced with the difficulties and failures, I must overcome them. In the future, I will be a good doctor to heal the

    174、 wounded and rescue the dying, devoting myself to my work.Best wishes!Yours,Li Jin成人礼“特定表达:1、成人礼:coming-of-age ceremony2、Our ceremonyfell onMay 16. fall on 在某一天举行3、 In Chinathe age of 18means we have grown up. 不能用18 years old 做主语4、During the ceremony, dressed in Hanfu, a traditional dress (costume)o

    175、f Han Chinese people, we performed/observed a series of rituals. 注意“穿着汉服”“行礼”的表达。5、We got down on our knees/knelt down on the ground to our parents to express our thanks to them for raising us and bringing us up. 注意“下跪 ”的表达。6、Weoweso many thankstoour parents. owe sth. to sb. “欠,欠恩、欠情”7、The ceremonyi

    176、s intended tomake us understand the meaning ofmaturity and responsibility. be intended to do 旨在素材成人礼coming-of-age ceremony是在少男少女年龄满18岁时举行的象征迈向成人阶段的仪式,它标志着告别孩童时代(childhood),进入成年期(adulthood)。在成人礼上,通常都要进行成年宣誓(take an oath to adulthood)。在中国一些地方,成人礼上还流行穿汉服(traditional Han costumes),祭拜孔子(consecrate Confuc

    177、ius)等习俗。coming-of-age ceremony就是成人礼,是在少男少女年纪满18岁时举办的象征迈向成人阶段的典礼。男孩要进行capping ceremony(冠礼),女孩要进行hair-pinning ceremony(加笄礼)。举办成人礼示意一个人已经come of age(成年),在阅历了puberty(青春期)之后,实现了从adolescent(青少年)向youth(青年)的改变。【解析】【分析】这是一篇应用文,要求写一封信。【详解】第一步:审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一,假如你是晨光中学的李津。你校于6月8号举办了成人礼活动,你的

    178、英国朋友Chris很想了解该活动。你于当晚给Chris回一封电子邮件,介绍相关情况,内容包括:(1)成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾,观看校友抗疫事迹录像等)2.对活动的感受。3.对自己未来的展望。第二,人称为第一人称。第三,时态为一般现在时,一般过去时和一般将来时。第二步:布局段落,确定主要段落,次要段落,段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段:成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾,观看校友抗疫事迹录像等)。第二段:对活动的感受;对自己未来的展望。第三段,表达期望。第三步:确定关键词汇和短语:congratulate sb on sth., be faced with, heal the wounde

    179、d and rescue the dying, devote oneself to doing sth.;第四步:确定较为高级的句子:that引导的定语从句和现在分词作状语During the coming-of-age ceremony, the headmaster congratulated us on stepping into the adult, reviewing the growth period that we had experienced. that引导的表语从句Through the activity, what I felt is that I am able to

    180、shoulder the responsibility and make us stronger and more determined.时间状语从句的省略句When faced with the difficulties and failures, I must overcome them.第五步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接:After that, besides, however.第六步:注意书写,保持卷面整洁,避免划线,乱擦。【点睛】文章思路清晰,语言规范,段落整齐,语篇连贯,层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式:that引导的定语从句和现在分词作状语During the co

    181、ming-of-age ceremony, the headmaster congratulated us on stepping into the adult, reviewing the growth period that we had experienced. that引导的表语从句Through the activity, what I felt is that I am able to shoulder the responsibility and make us stronger and more determined.时间状语从句的省略句When faced with the

    182、difficulties and failures, I must overcome them.等高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次,整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。高级句式:1. 过去分词短语用作状语的使用,如Inspired by the spirit of fearlessness, well take on the responsibility and continue to move forward. 等2. 定语从句的使用,如We showed our thanks to our parents who have brought us up and teachers who

    183、have been educating us patiently. 等3. 强调句型的使用,如It was then that I realized the importance of the responsibility. 等高级词汇:1. look back 回顾2. sacrifice oneself 自我牺牲3. determined and confident 坚定和自(三十二) 2020.5天津卷1假设你是晨光中学的李津。下周你校将与英国友好校举办一场在线会议, 探讨如何利用网络学习英语, 请你根据以下提示撰写一篇发言稿:(1)介绍你是如何利用网络学习英语的(至少写出两点)(2)简

    184、单谈谈你对利用网络学习英语的看法(3)请友好校的学生分享他们的经验。注意:(1)词数不少于100;(2)可适当加入细节, 使内容充实、行文连贯;(3)开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。Good morning, dear friends. My name is Li Jin. Id like to take this opportunity to talk about how I learn English on the Internet._Thank you.【答案】Good morning, dear friends. My name is Li Jin. Id like to take

    185、this opportunity to talk about how I learn English on the Internet.First, there are a lot of free resources related to English on the Internet, so I learn English by reading books or news, listening to postcodes and by watching streaming videos of TV and film. Besides, the Internet gives me the chan

    186、ce to communicate in real-time with native speakers using instant messaging, video calling and online forums, which improves my spoken and written English.Based on my own experience, learning English online is really a great way for English learners. But I have to remind that not everything on the I

    187、nternet is right and we should learn to identify the wrong information. In the end, I sincerely hope that you can share your experience of learning English on the Internet.解析本文是要你根据如何利用网络学习英语,写一篇文章,内容要包括题干要点,根据所给提纲、要点为基础充分发挥自己的想象力,灵活运用英语知识,采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。1. 本文人称为第一人称,时态为一般现在时态。2. 写作时注意时态、语态的合理

    188、运用,主次分明,详略得当,语言力求准确、简洁。3. 根据情景的发展,按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。高分词汇:be accessible to 容易接近的,容易进入的the development of 的发展share with 和分享as far as I am concerned 就我个人而言高分句型:1. With the development of Internet and education mode, online teaching has become increasingly common.with复合结构的使用和has don

    189、e现在完成时态的使用。2. It is widely acknowledged that online teaching has its apparent merits.it是形式主义,真正的主语是that引导的从句。3. Shared resources online are accessible to all people, which costs a little at the same time.非谓语动词shared的使用和which引导的非限制性定语从句的使用。(三十三) 2020年1月浙江卷假定你是李华,你校将举办外国学生中文演讲比赛,请给你的英国朋友George写封邮件邀请他参

    190、加。内容包括:1.比赛时间;2.演讲话题;3.报名方式。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。_【答案】Dear George, Knowing that you have a great passion for Chinese culture, Im writing to invite you to participate in the Chinese Speaking Competition organized by our school. Scheduled to be held on January 20 in the schools lecture hall, t

    191、he competition focuses on the theme of “first impression of China”. Undoubtedly, your fluent Chinese, excellent speaking skills, and especially profound knowledge of China will never fail to impress the audience. So, if youre interested, please sign up on the schools website before January 15. Looki

    192、ng forward to your wonderful presentation.Yours,Li Hua(三十四) 2020上海卷假如你是明启中学高三学生李华,前几日,你邀请你的好友王磊下周五去郊野公园一起欣赏露天音乐会。面对天气恶劣、交通不便等原因,王磊一直犹豫不决。假如你是李华,请写一封信说服王磊和你起参加。要求包括以下内容:1.解决王磊的困扰2.音乐会的重要性_范文1Dear Wang Lei,Its been a while since I heard from you. Last time, I invited you to attend the concert which wi

    193、ll be held next Friday in the century park. Though you did not reply to me, the hesitation wearing on your face offered me a glimpse of what was going on in your mind. Maybe it is the recent ghastly weather or the terrible traffic that hinder you from making up your mind. However, as far as I concer

    194、ned, its still worth our efforts.This concert is not a pop music concert but a classic music one where several prestigious symphony orchestras will perform many well-known compositions. It must be a feast for all the audience. Moreover, chances are that we may have an album with performers autograph

    195、s on it. You should never miss such a fabulous concert!In terms of difficulties you are worried about, I have already found some solutions. My father will be available on that day so that he can drive us to the scene. I have managed to persuade him to make his promise. In addition, in case of a rain

    196、y day, I have prepared two raincoats. I am confident that we will indulge ourselves into the elegant flow of notes.I am looking forward to hearing your reply.Yours,Li Hua范文2Dear Wang Lei,How are you doing these days? Youve been hesitated to go with me to the open-air concert in the country park on F

    197、riday. It seems to me whats holding you back is the terrible weather and the inconvenient transportation, neither of which, in my opinion, is obstacles.Firstly, there is no need to bother with things uncontrollable, such as the weather condition. We can make plans ahead according to the weather fore

    198、casting. If you are not confident with it, we can plan for both rainy day and sunny day.Secondly, mobile navigation apps can help us choose the best way, saving us from the trouble of worrying about the traffic conditions and the subways service time. Lastly, the most important thing is that this co

    199、ncert is such a major event that you would regret if you didnt come.Besides, your favorite band will be performing! Wouldnt it be amazing to see your idols face to face and even get a chance to talk to them!Hopefully you will take my suggestion into consideration. And Im looking forward to hearing f

    200、rom you.Best wishes,Li Hua五、 2019年高考真题(三十五) 2019.6全国卷I假定你是李华,暑假在伦敦学习,得知当地美术馆要剧版中国画展。请写一封信申请做志愿者,内容包括:1.写信目的;2.个人优势;3.能做的事情。注意::1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.结束语已为你写好。_Looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua.【答案】1Dear sir or madam,I am a Chinese student named Li Hua, who is studying in Lon

    201、don during the summer vacation. Knowing that the local art gallery will hold an exhibition of Chinese paintings, I am writing to apply for volunteering. As a student who has learned Chinese painting since 5 years old, I am very pleased to have an opportunity to introduce Chinese paintings to foreign

    202、ers. Besides, my fluent spoken English and rich knowledge about Chinese paintings will help visitors understand the meaning behind each painting deeply. I will appreciate it if I could be given the opportunity.Looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua.【答案】2Dear Sir/Madam,Im Li Hua, an excha

    203、nge student from China. Learning that volunteer students are wanted for a Chinese painting exhibition, Im writing to apply for the position.I think Im quite equal to the post. To begin with, being exposed to English since a young age enables me to communicate fluently with others. Besides, years of

    204、being monitor makes me a brilliant organizer, which will help a lot to keep the exhibition in order. Additionally, I can make full use of my related knowledge to help the visitors learn more about the unique Chinese art form.I would be grateful if you could take my application into consideration. Lo

    205、oking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。1.审题立意本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写申请信,人称使用第一人称和第二人称,时态用一般现在式。2.谋篇布局书信格式,称呼和落款文中已经给出。首段,写信的目的,中间段写个人优势和能做的事,最后一段总结。3.关键词根据写作要点及构思好的提纲我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇有:volunteer,a Chinese Painting Exhibition,local city,advantages,a good command of,beneficial for,

    206、familiarity with,appreciate ,take my application into consideration。通过词汇铺垫,我们就很容易地行文了,文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误,并增加一些细节和过渡性的词汇,如First of all, Besides, to begin with,moreover,as for me,Last but not least,等,使全文衔接自然,语义流畅。【点睛】本文首段开门见山,表达了写信的目的;第2段详细介绍了个人的优势和能做的事情,an outgoing boy, who is studying in London.

    207、此处使用了同位语和非限制性定语从句。having heard that a Chinese Painting Exhibition will be held in this local city.使用了分词做状语和宾语从句及被动语态。having lived in China for sixteen years and having learnt English since I was a child, I have a good command of English and Chinese, which is beneficial for introducing Chinese painti

    208、ngs.使用了分词和非限制性定语从句。另外First of all, Besides, Last but not least的使用使文章富有条理性。此外,还使用了高级句式结构,如I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration条件状语从句。(三十六) 2019全国卷II假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛,内容包括:1.比赛信息;2.赛前准备;3.表达期待。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。_【答案】Dear Chris,Im w

    209、riting to let you know that we will have a volleyball match next month. The match will take place in our school gym on the afternoon of July 4th. We will play against the team from HongXing High School. In order to win the match, we should get fully prepared and practice hard. So from tomorrow, we n

    210、eed to train for two hours after school every day. Please come to the school gym at 6:30 pm from Monday to Friday.Youre an excellent player. With you on the team, we are confident that we can win the game. Lets try hard together!Cheers,Li Hua【答案】 2Dear Chris,Are you excited about our coming volleyba

    211、ll game against Yucai Middle School next Friday? Here Id like to inform you of some detailed information so that you can make full preparations for it.First and foremost, the competition to be held in our school stadium will begin at 2 pm and last for roughly 3 hours. So significant is the game that

    212、 it is required that everyone should present themselves punctually. Further, it is necessary for you to take a good rest, which will provide enough energy for you. To sum up, I wish you could live up to the expectations of our school. And I firmly believe hard work will pay off!Looking forward to ou

    213、r victory!Yours truly,Li Hua【分析】今年的书面表达沿袭近几年的体裁,仍旧是应用文。本次书面表达要求考生写一封邮件告知队友有关比赛的信息。本篇书面表达是一封告知信。首先要告知写信目的;然后简明扼要地告知排球比赛的时间、地点以及赛前的准备事项,注意事件信息的三要素:时间、地点、人物,要交代清楚;第三则要表达对队友的期待和鼓励。【点睛】本文内容完整,详略得当,并运用了高级句式。Im writing to let you know that we will have a volleyball match next month.宾语从句;In order to win the

    214、 match不定式作目状语。文章语言流畅,上下文转换自然。(三十七) 2019全国卷III假定你是李华,你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加,内容包括:1.时间;2.活动安排;3.欢迎他表演节目。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。_【答案】1Dear Allen,How is everything going? Our school will hold a music festival next Sunday morning in the school hall. And Im writing to invite you to join us.

    215、The opening ceremony will start at 9:00 am, and the schoolmaster will deliver a speech. Then there will be various fantastic performances played by talented students. You are definitely welcome to show up on stage, which will add color and fun to our festival.Looking forward to your early reply.Best

    216、 wishes,Li Hua【答案】2Dear Allen,You must have heard of the upcoming Music Festival to be held in our school. Since you take much interest in music, I am writing to invite you to participate in the festival with me.As scheduled, it will be held on the playground from 5 p. m. to 8 p. m. next Sunday. Add

    217、itionally, sitting on the grass and enjoying the tasty food and drinks provided by sponsors, we will be fully absorbed in the attractive and fascinating performances. Furthermore, we also expect to see you on the stage then.Id be more than delighted if you could come and share this joyful moment wit

    218、h me. Looking forward to your early reply.Best wishes,Li Hua【解析】今年的书面表达要求考生写邮件,告知英国朋友音乐节的情况。【详解】首先确定提纲。先介绍写作目的,之后介绍音乐节的时间、活动安排等具体信息,最后欢迎他表演节目。第二,根据提纲,确定关键词语,如:How is everything going? a music festival,in the school hall,The opening ceremony等。第三,注意选用合适的连接词将各要点串联起来。【点睛】本文内容完整,详略得当。并使用了高级句式。如:You are d

    219、efinitely welcome to show up on stage, which will add color and fun to our festival.定语从句。提升了文章档次。 Its a pleasure for me to invite you to attend我很荣幸能邀请你参加 I think it will be a good idea/more beneficial if you could 我认为是个好主意/有利的。 Thank you for your attention. 感谢你对此事的关注。 If you, you will 如果你,你将会.。 I wo

    220、uld appreciate it if you could give me an early reply. 希望尽早得到答复。(三十八) 2019.6北京卷1第一节 (15分)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim打算暑假期间来北京、天津和上海旅游,发来邮件询问相关信息。请你给他回复邮件,内容包括:1.交通出行;2.必备衣物。注意:1.词数不少于50;2.开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。Dear Jim,_Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jim,Im pleased that youre coming to tour in China.I suggest that yo

    221、u begin from Beijing, and Ill show you around. Tianjin will be your next stop. After that, you can go to Shanghai, where you can stay for a week. You can take high-speed trains to both cities. Summer in these cities is hot and rainy, so take summer wear plus an umbrella with you.Looking forward to y

    222、our arrival.Yours,Li Hua 【写作指导】本文是一篇应用文,要求给朋友写回信。【详解】红星中学高三学生李华的英国好友Jim打算暑假期间来北京、天津和上海旅游,发来邮件询问相关信息。要求给他回复邮件,内容包括: 1.交通出行; 2.必备衣物。本文时态应采用一般现在时和一般将来时,用第一人称和第二人称来写。文章可以分为三部分来写:首先表达欢迎Jim来中国;然后交代交通出行和必备衣物;最后盼望朋友的到来。注意使用高级词汇和句式,为文章增添色彩;注意使用连接词、衔接词,使文章自然、流畅。【点睛】本文内容完整,语言表述流畅。文章使用了几个高分句型。that youre coming

    223、to tour in China.和that you begin from Beijing, and Ill show you around.是宾语从句。 where you can stay for a week.是非限制性定语从句。解析1. show you around 带你参观;2. take high-speed trains to both cities 坐高铁到这两个城市;3. take summer wear plus an umbrella with you 带上夏季服装和雨伞;4. Looking forward to your arrival 期待你的到来。(三十九) 2

    224、019年6月北京卷(2)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们班上周组织了一次以 劳动最光荣 为主题的社会实践活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,写一篇英文周记,记述整个过程。注意:词数不少于60。提示词:西瓜 watermelon_【答案】Last week I took part in a farm work programme in the suburbs.At the class meeting, our teacher told us about the programme with the theme Working is most beautiful. And he stressed

    225、the importance of working with our own hands.When I got home, I packed up my luggage for the trip.On the farm, we helped pick watermelons. While working, I realized how hard it was to work in the fields under a hot sun.When I came back home, I shared my experiences with my parents. And they were ver

    226、y proud of me.【解析】1. Working is most beautiful 劳动最光荣;2. stressed the importance of working with our own hands 强调了用自己双手工作的重要性;3. packed up my luggage 打包我的行李;4. I realised how hard it was to work in the fields under a hot sun我意识到在烈日下在田野里工作是多么辛苦。(四十) 2019.6天津卷假设你是晨光中学的李津,英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间,

    227、英方教师Chris 将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座、现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件:(1)你喜欢的讲座话题(从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一);(2)选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容;(3)希望从中有何收获。注意:(1)词数不少于100:(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;(3)开头和结尾已给出、不计入总词数。Dear Chris,Im Li Jim,a student at Chenguang High School._Thank you for your time.Yours,Li Jin【答案】1Dear Chris,Im Li Jin

    228、, a student at Chenguang High school.Hearing that you will be sent to our school to participate in a one-week communication activity on behalf of our partner-school, I feel excited to give some advice on the speech about western art, which will be given by you. Here are some of my suggestions.From m

    229、y perspective, among all the themes on western culture like music, drawing and dancing, I would like to have a better understanding of music, for a great number of my classmates are fond of music. To enhance our knowledge, I would appreciate it if you add some information about the history and devel

    230、opment of western music. In addition, some excellent works of music and the introduction of several distinguished musicians would be a good way to broaden our horizon.Anyway, I cant wait to meet you from the bottom of my heart!Thank you for your time!Yours,Li Jin【答案】2Dear Chris,Im Li Jin, a student

    231、at Chenguang High School. I got the news that your school will send teachers to my school for a week-long summer exchange. During the activity,you will give a lecture on Western art. You want to seek for advice on what topic the lecture will be about. From my personal note,music is my priority.I am

    232、interested in all kinds of music,among which Jazz is my favorite. I want to know about the history of jazz,and some famous jazz singers. I would appreciate it if you can add some sessions of enjoying jazz.Thank you for your time.Yours,Li Jin【写作指导】这是一篇提纲类作文,我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的

    233、含义,不能遗漏要点,跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累,写作联系以外,还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文,这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果.本篇写作为应用文体,书信类的建议信。第一步:审题。(1)判断时态与写作主语:时态为一般现在时为主,人称第一人称。(2)根据细节判断文章段落:三段式:开头寒喧说明理由(需要补充),中间发展说明具体事项,结束表达感谢或祝福(已给出)。第二步:细节补充:第一段:

    234、说明写信目的:根据题目提示,说明写信背景(友好校活动以及老师讲座),点名主题(关于讲座给出建议)。第二段:针对写作细节详细介绍:从三个话题中做出选择,并说明选择的理由。补充想要了解的内容(建议1-2点)。第三段:表达见面的期望并感谢阅信。(由于最后一段文章已给提示为感谢,可考虑将期望放到第二段结尾)。最后,整洁的卷面是写作获得良好印象分的关键,记得用心誊抄哦。评分原则1. 本题总分为25分,按5个档次给分。2. 评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量,确定或调整档次,最后综合给分。3. 词数少于100的,从总分中减去2分。4. 评分时,应注意的主要内容为:内

    235、容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。5. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。每错误书写3个单词从总分中减去1分,原则上不超过3分,重复的不计。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。标点符号错误,将视其对交际的影响程度的情减分。6. 如书写较差,以至影响交际,将分数降低一个档次。内容要点1. 你喜欢的讲座话题(从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一);2. 选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容;3. 希望从中有何收获。各档次的给分范围和要求分数档内容语法结构和词汇衔接和连贯整体效果第五档21-25分(很好)覆盖所有内容要点,并有适当发挥。应用了较丰富的语法结构和词汇;

    236、表达准确、地道;有个别错误,但不影响对写作内容的理解。有效使用衔接手段,内容连贯,结构紧凑具备较强的语言运用能力;完全达到了预期的写作目的。第四档16-20分(好)覆盖所有内容要点。应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务要求;表达基本准确,些许错误对写作内容的理解影响不大。应用了简单的连接成分,全文结构较紧凑。达到了预期的写作目的第三档1115分(一般)漏掉一些内容,覆盖部分内容要点。应用的语法结构和词汇能基本满足任务要求;有一些错误,对写作内容的理解造成了一定影响。应用了简单的连接成分,内容基本连贯。基本达到了预期的写作目的。第二档6-10分(较差)漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容,有一些无关内容。语法

    237、结构单调,词汇项目有限;错误较多,且在很大程度上影响了对写作内容的理解。较少使用语句间的连接成分,内容缺少连贯性。信息未能清楚地传达给读者。第一档15分(差)明显遗漏主要内容,写了一些无关的内容,可能未理解试题要求语法结构单调,词汇项目有限;错误较多,严重影响了对写作内容的理解。缺乏语句间的连接成分,内容不连贯。基本信息未能传达给读者。0分未能传达给读者任何信息;内容太少,无法评判;写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。(四十一) 2019年3月天津卷假设你是晨光中学的李津。为配合学校的 读书月 活动,你校英语社团的微信公众号开展以 Lets Read 为题的征文活动。要求同学根据个人

    238、的阅读体会,从所读过的书籍中选定一种类型,推荐给其他同学。现请你投稿,文章内容应包括:(1)推荐书籍的类型及特点;(2)推荐的理由。参考词汇:科幻小说 science fiction 侦探小说 detective novel 魔幻小说 fantasy传记文学 biography 科普读物 popular science注意:(1)词数不少于100;(2)所选书籍类型不限于参考词汇给出的范围;(3)内容充实,行文连贯;(4)题目已给出,不计入总词数。Lets ReadMarch 22, 2019_By Li Jin【答案】Lets ReadKnowing that during “Reading

    239、 Month” in our school English Society will hold an activity named “Lets Read” on Wechat, Id like to share something about my own experience and feeling with all the students.I have been crazy about reading since I was a child. My favorite type of book is always science fictions. Science fiction is b

    240、ased on the latest technology and discovery and telling us a fantasy story that will possibly happen in the future. In the past decades, science fiction has been more and more popular with teenagers. Therefore, it has come into a new style and even a culture. While reading science fictions, I not on

    241、ly feel shocked and amazed about the unknown future made up by the author but also know more knowledge and information about the development of science. Im sure every teenager will like science fiction and benefit from it! Looking forward to getting you to take part in “Lets Read”!(四十二) 2019.6浙江卷第一节

    242、 应用文写作(满分15分)假定你是李华,经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件,内容包括:1.表示感谢;2.回顾Alex对你的帮助;3.临别祝愿。注意:1.词数80左右;2可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。_【答案】1Dear Alex,Learning that youre leaving for the United States soon, Im eagerly writing to express my heartfelt gratitude to you for your help.Honestly speaking,its so nice of you t

    243、o offer me a class of practical learning skills.Under your professional guidance,I have made such unbelievable progress in English.Its indeed a pleasant surprise for me to even rank first in a recent English speech contest. WheneverI encounter difficulties, you always cheer me up and help me out, wh

    244、ich fuels my enthusiasm for English and promotes me to regain tremendous confidence.No words are strong enough to convey how grateful l am.Thanks again and wish you a pleasant journey home. Yours,【答案】2Dear Chris,I am so regretful to know that you are going to return to your home before long. We get

    245、along well during your stay in China and you offered me lots of help. I would like to express my gratitude to you for your help with my English. While studying in China, you always spent your free time in helping me polish up my oral English. It is you who shared me with rich knowledge of English an

    246、d English culture. Never will I forget you and your kindness. It is my hope that you can remember me as often as possible. Yours,Li Hua【写作指导】 这是一篇提纲类作文,我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的含义,不能选漏要点,跑题偏题.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达,写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次.

    247、特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化.平时除了加强词汇积累,写作联系以外,还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文,这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。(四十三) 2019年1月广东卷(春考)告知你是李华,就读于国同学校。你写信给英文早报的编辑Bob,希望结识一位来自英语国家的笔友(pen pal),以便相互学习对方的语言和文化:你容易相处,熟悉中国历史,喜欢中国传统音乐。内容要点:1. 写信目的;2. 自我介绍;3. 表示感谢。注意 : 1. 词数80左右;2. 开头和结尾已经给出,不算词数;3. 可以适当增加细节,并将开头型结尾抄写在答题卡上,以使行文连贯。Dear bob,_Looking forward

    248、 to your reply.Yours,Li Hua答案Dear Bob,My name is Li Hua, an international school student. I am writing the letter to you to help me to find a pen pal.Im an outgoing and easy-going boy, so I am fond of making friends. Now I want to make a pen pal from English-speaking country, from whom I can make a

    249、good command of English language and culture. At the same time, I would like to share my favorite history and Chinese traditional music with him.I would appreciate it if you can recommend a pen pal to me. Looking forward to your early reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua解析考查提纲类写作。本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求写一封信。 第1步:根据提

    250、示可知,本文为一封书信:你是李华,就读于、国同学校。你写信给英文早报的编辑Bob,希望结识一位来自英语国家的笔友(pen pal),以便相互学习对方的语言和文化:你容易相处,熟悉中国历史,喜欢中国传统音乐。内容要点:1. 写信目的;2. 自我介绍;3. 表示感谢。第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),如:an international school student(一名国际学校的学生);to help me to find a pen pal(帮助我找一个笔友);outgoing and easy-going boy(外向且容易相处的男孩);fond of making friends(喜爱交朋友);make a good command of English language and culture(精通英语语言和文化)等。第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

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