专题21书面表达之图表图画类--五年（2018—2022）高考英语真题精选分类训练.docx

1、 21 书面表达之图表图画类Writing1（2022年全国乙卷）学校英文报正在开展以Learning English Beyond the Classroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1. 学习活动状况描述：2. 简单评论;3. 你的建议。注意：1. 词数100左右;2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。【答案】Learning English Beyond the ClassroomNowadays, with the growing popularity of smartphones and computers, an increasing number o

2、f students are choosing to learn English beyond the classroom in various ways.It can easily be seen that the percentage of students who choose listening to English songs and watching English movies is respectively 65% and 50%. However, those choosing reading English books and visiting English learni

3、ng websites only account for 18% and 12%.As far as Im concerned, it is a disturbing trend. For students, what benefits most to their study is reading English books. Because of their lack of self-discipline, theyre more easily addicted to chatting online or playing games. Its urgent for students them

4、selves to improve their self-discipline, and its also urgent for parents and teachers to strengthen the guidance.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于说明文。要求考生请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文给学校英文报投稿。【详解】1.词汇积累选择：choose select提高：improve strengthen各种各样的：various diverse就我而言：as far as Im concerned from my perspective2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Nowaday

5、s, with the growing popularity of smartphones and computers, an increasing number of students are choosing to learn English beyond the Classroom in various ways.拓展句：Nowadays, because smartphones and computers are becoming more and more popular, an increasing number of students are choosing to learn

6、English beyond the Classroom in various ways.【点睛】【高分句型1】It can easily be seen that the percentage of students who choose listening to English songs and watching English movies is respectively 65% and 50%. (运用了it作形式主语，that引导主语从句以及who引导的定语从句)【高分句型2】Its urgent for students themselves to improve their s

7、elf-discipline (运用了it作形式主语，to improve their self-discipline为真正的主语)Writing2（2020年北京卷）假设你是红星中学高三（1）班班长李华。居家学习期间，你们班开展了一次以“自律”为主题的调研活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文稿件，给你们学校英文网站投稿，记述你在本次活动中发现问题并解决问题的过程。注意：词数不少于60。提示词：自律 self-discipline_【答案】One possible version:While studying at home, I surveyed my class on “self-

8、discipline”. The findings worried me a lot. To solve the problem, I asked my parents for help, and they offered some practical advice. Then I held an online discussion with my classmates on how to well discipline ourselves. After that, we all knew better what to do. Three months later, I did a secon

9、d survey, which showed great improvements in self-discipline. I phoned my teacher about it, and we both felt very pleased.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。这是一篇图画作文，要求考生按以下四幅图的先后顺序，就你开展“自律”调研活动中发现问题并解决问题的过程写一篇英文稿件，向学校英文网站投稿。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般过去时人称：第一人称为主结构：总分法 总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1.

10、表明写作主题“自律”2. 根据图片描写事件过程：第一幅图片描写自己对“自律”调研结果很担忧；第二幅图片描写自己向父母求助解决方法/建议；第三幅图片描写自己和同学们在网上讨论如何自律；第四幅图片描写三个月后，大家自律能力有了很大提高，我和老师很高兴。第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）ask sb. for help；practical advice；an online discussion；do a second survey第三步：连词成句1. I asked my parents for help, and they offered some practical advice.2. Then I

11、held an online discussion with my classmates on how to well discipline ourselves.3. I did a second survey, which showed great improvements in self-discipline.(根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。）第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second And then, Finally, In the end, At last, La

12、st but not least2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not onlybut (also), including, also3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause (从句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand,On the other hand Some,while others,as for, sothat 4.表因果关系：Becau

13、se, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result 5表换一种方式表达：In other words, that is to say,6.表进行举例说明：For example; For instance; such as + n/doing 7.表陈述事实：In fact, frankly speaking8.表选择：eitheror，or连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。第五步：润色修改【点睛】范文内容完整，结构严谨，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句，如w

14、hich showed great improvements in self-discipline这句话中用了which引导的非限制性定语从句；使用了非常好的短语，如ask sb. for help，an online discussion，do a second survey等，为文章增色不少。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。Writing3（2019北京卷）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们班上周组织了一次以“劳动最光荣”为主题社会实践活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记述整个过程。注意：

15、词数不少于60。提示词：西瓜watermelon_【答案】Last week I took part in a farmwork programme in the suburbs.At the class meeting, our teacher told us about the programme with the theme “Working is most beautiful”. And he stressed the importance of working with our own hands. When I got home, I packed up my luggage fo

16、r the trip.On the farm, we helped pick watermelons. While working, I realised how hard it was to work in the fields under a hot sun.When I came back home, I shared my experiences with my parents. And they were very proud of me.【写作指导】本文属于图画作文，要求根据图画内容写一篇英文周记。【解析】假如你是红星中学高三学生李华，你们班上周组织了一次以“劳动最光荣”为主题的社

17、会实践活动。要求根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记述整个过程。图画作文内容要点比较清晰，其中包括：老师宣布活动内容和意义，我为活动准备，在农场的劳动过程，介绍活动感受。这样有利于学生写作时发挥与扩展。全文可分成三部分，开头段概括活动，中间段描述图画，结尾段总结收获和意义。文章用第一人称来写，使用一般过去时。Writing4（2018北京卷）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记述你们上周接待外国学生，带领他们体验中国茶文化的全过程。注意：词数不少于60。(请务必将作文写在答题卡指定区域内)【答案】Last week, we took the fo

18、reign students in our school to experience the authentic tea culture, which turned out be to extremely rewarding.On arriving at the tea house, the foreign students were impressed by the unique tea pots and tea cups. I gave them a vivid and informative introduction of tea culture, including its profo

19、und history, its rich variety, and the exquisite craftsmanship of making tea with their interest greatly sparked, I then began to teach them how to make tea.In order to deliver a clear presentation, I slowly explained the traditional procedure of making tea in detail. Absorbed in every move of mine,

20、 the foreign students were once again amazed by this unique culture and they couldnt help taking pictures from time to time.Next came the moment when I asked them to have a try themselves. Washing the tea pots, adding tea leaves, and pouring water into the cups, they followed my instructions and wer

21、e really immersed in charming tea culture. The tea house witnessed a really enjoyable time for all of us.At the end of the activity, holding the tea bags in our hands, we took a picture to memorize the unforgettable day. It suddenly hit me that traditional culture like tea culture was of great charm

22、 and huge value. And I swelled with pride to spread our own culture to people all over the world.【解析】本文为图片介绍类作文，这类作文是根据给出的一幅或几幅图画所提供的信息写短文。此类题的体裁较广泛，可以是记叙文、说明文，也可以是议论文。按照本文的要求可知，是写一篇记叙文。1. 认真读图，把握中心。根据提示可知，内容是带领外国学生体验中国茶文化的全过程，介绍了茶具，泡茶，沏茶，品茶的过程，所以这是这组图画所要表达的中心。2. 初步构思，考虑用词、短语、句型和时态。在把握了文章的中心后，应在内心构思

23、一个基本的框架，并考虑使用恰当的词语、短语和句型，以充分地表达文章的内容。本文是讲述上周发生的事情，故时态要以过去时为主，人称是第一人称，尽可能地充分利用所学的短语或句型来表述具体的内容。这是体现自身能力的重要一环。3. 连词成句，然后再连句成文。运用适当单词或短语正确表达各图的意思。然后再将各图的单个句子串连起来。串连时，要注意使用适当的连接词语或过渡性语句，不至于让读者觉得文章中出现跳跃现象，更使上下文更为紧凑、自然。4. 反复审核，修改错误。一篇文章写好后，应进行检查，看短文中是否有错，如拼写、用词、时态、语态及表达方面的错误。5. 宜详则详，该略则略。对于一些细节方面的内容，如果是文章

24、必不可少的，在写作过程中是不可将其忽略的。如果是可有可无的细节，则可视具体情况进行增删。据此，我们在读图时一定要注意阅读各图中的一些细节内容，看其是否影响文章的内容。亮点说明：巧妙使用定语从句，提升了文章档次：Last week, we took the foreign students in our school to experience the authentic tea culture, which turned out be to extremely rewarding. 使用非谓语动词，使句子表达更简洁：On arriving at the tea houseI gave them

25、 a vivid and informative introduction of tea culture, including its profound history, its rich variety,Absorbed in every move of mine, the foreign students were once again amazed by this unique cultureholding the tea bags in our hands, we took a picture to memorize the unforgettable day.使用倒装句突出重点。Ne

26、xt came the moment when I asked them to have a try themselves.使用it做形式主语，使表达更地道。It suddenly hit me that traditional culture like tea culture was of great charm and huge value.Writing5（2017全国高考真题）假设你最近就安全意识方面的问题在班级范围内进行了调查，学校英语报刊栏目有意刊登你的调查报告请根据下面的调查结果写一篇简短的报告。注：自里圈起，数值越大，了解该项目的人越多。注意：1.词数100左右；2.无需逐一说

27、明数值；3.对突出的问题进行适当阐述。_【答案】Recently I conducted a survey on safety awareness in the class. The results are as follows:A largest number of the students are aware of traffic security, while the students who know about preventing theft are smaller than that. Meanwhile, students who know natural disasters

28、and fire prevention are the same. Next to them is the number of students who learn first aid knowledge. The least of students are conscious of online safety, which worries me a lot.【分析】本篇书面表达属于图表类书面表达，要求考生对你最近就安全意识方面的问题在班级范围内进行的调查，给学校英语报刊栏目，写一篇简短的报告。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：图表类作文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。结构：总分法总分法指把主题

29、句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1. 看懂图表所表示的内容；2. 无需逐一说明数值;3. 对突出的问题进行适当阐述。第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）conducted a survey；on safety awareness；as follows；a largest number of；be aware of；be conscious of第三步：连词成句1. A largest number of the students are aware of traffic security, while the students who know about prevent

30、ing theft are smaller than that2. Meanwhile, students who know natural disasters and fire prevention are the same3. Next to them is the number of students who learn first aid knowledge.4. The least of students are conscious of online safety, which worries me a lot根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句

31、成篇（衔接词）表文章结构顺序：Meanwhile 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。【点睛】高分句型1 The majority of the students are aware of traffic security, while the students who know about preventing theft are smaller than that.（who引导定语从句）高分句型2 Next to them is the number of students who learn first aid knowledge.（使用了倒装句Wr

32、iting6（2015江苏高考真题）请阅读下面文字及图表,并按照要求用英语写一篇 150 词左右的文章.写作内容1. 用约 30 个单词概述上述信息的主要内容;2. 结合上述信息,简要分析导致交通问题的主要原因;3. 根据你的分析,从社会规范(rules and regulations)和个人行为两方面谈谈你得到的启示(不少于两点)。写作要求1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;3. 不必写标题。评分标准内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。【答案】The traffic issue is a hard nut to crack. It not onl

33、y affects our everyday life, but may also threaten peoples lives. The three selections presented above are typical examples. Quite a few things give rise to the traffic problem. In spite of the large-scale construction of roads and highways, there is still much room for improvement, because of the e

34、ver increasing number of cars these years. What s worse, some drivers, cyclists and pedestrians do not think it vital to obey traffic rules.In fact, traffic rules are part of the rules and regulations closely related to public order. Without them, people could not enjoy harmony or the country would

35、be in chaos. But rules alone dont secure an orderly society. It is the people who obey the rules that matter. It is everybodys duty to observe them to keep our society in order and going on the right track. 【导语】本文是一篇图表类作文，就社会上车辆激增这一现象进行分析。【详解】1. 词汇积累尽管：in spite ofdespite重要的：vitalessential混乱：in chaos

36、in mess遵守：observeobey2. 句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：It not only affects our everyday life, but may also threaten peoples lives.拓展句：Not only does it affect our everyday life, but it may also threaten peoples lives.【点睛】【高分句型1】Without them, people could not enjoy harmony or the country would be in chaos.(隐含条件的虚拟语气)【

37、高分句型2】It is the people who obey the rules that matter.(运用了强调句)Writing7（2017北京高考真题）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记录毕业前夕你们制作以“感恩母校”为主题的毕业纪念视频的全过程。注意：词数不少于60。提示词：视频 video【答案】Graduation finally came. My classmates and I decided to do something. After a heated discussion, we agreed on making a vid

38、eo to record our experiences at school.Material collecting took us a whole week, during which we interviewed our teachers and took pictures of every aspect of school life. The editing part after that was tough. We debated over what to put into the video. Some compromises were unavoidable, but the vi

39、deo turned out perfect. Several days later, when the video was played on the graduation ceremony, it was well received. The students and teachers shared a great time. That surely gave us a great sense of achievement.【导语】本篇书面表达属于图画作文，要求考生根据四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记录毕业前夕你们制作以“感恩母校”为主题的毕业纪念视频的全过程。【详解】1.词汇积累最终

40、：finallyeventually困难的：toughdifficult不可避免的：unavoidableinevitable当然；无疑：surelycertainly2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：We debated over what to put into the video.拓展句：We debated over what we should put into the video.【点睛】高分句型1 Material collecting took us a whole week, during which we interviewed our teachers and took pic

41、tures of every aspect of school life. (运用了介词+which引导的非限制性定语从句)高分句型2 Several days later, when the video was played on the graduation ceremony, it was well received.(运用了when引导的状语从句)Writing8（2014北京高考真题）假设你是红星中学高三（1）班的学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，用校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文，记述你和同学们向学校提建议，解决自行车存放问题的过程。注意：1. 词数不少于 60。 2. 短文的开头已

42、给出，不计入总词数。 There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school.【答案】There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school. I noticed the entrance was small and almost blocked. So my classmates and I had a discussion and wrote a report. Then we went to meet the schoolmaster

43、 in his office and gave the report to him. He accepted our suggestions. Soon afterwards, a second entrance was opened to the parking place. Now it is easy to park our bikes there.【导语】本篇书面表达属于图画作文。要求考生根据四幅图的先后顺序，用校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文，记述你和同学们向学校提建议，解决自行车存放问题的过程。【详解】1.词汇积累注意：notice take note of堵塞的：blocked con

44、gested讨论：have a discussion discuss建议：suggestions advice2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：Then we went to meet the schoolmaster in his office and gave the report to him. He accepted our suggestions.拓展句：Then we went to meet the schoolmaster in his office and gave the report to him, who accepted our suggestions.【点睛】【高分句型1】I noticed the entrance was small and almost blocked.（运用了宾语从句）【高分句型2】Now it is easy to park our bikes there.（运用了it作形式主语，不定式为真正的主语）