专题八　短文改错（试题word）.docx

1、专题八短文改错 五年高考 Proofreading 1(2021全国乙)学生用书 P122I love doing housework. I always assist my parents in doing the dish after meals. I also water the flowers in the yard and tidying up my own bedroom whatever necessary. In my opinion, students can benefit a lot doing some housework. Firstly, doing housewo

2、rk was helpful for us to be a responsible person. Also, it gives our parents more time to do what they are like and it improves the family relationship. Whats most, doing housework can be a form of mentally relaxation from study. Thats our view on housework. And hopes this can inspire more thinking

3、on the topic!答案I love doing housework. I always assist my parents in doing the dishdishes after meals. I also water the flowers in the yard and tidyingtidy up my own bedroom whateverwhenever/when necessary. In my opinion, students can benefit a lot from/by doing some housework. Firstly, doing housew

4、ork wasis helpful for us to be a responsible person. Also, it gives our parents more time to do what they are like and it improves the family relationship. Whats mostmore, doing housework can be a form of mentallymental relaxation from study. Thats ourmy view on housework. And hopeshope this can ins

5、pire more thinking on the topic!Proofreading 2(2021全国甲)学生用书 P122Last week our teacher asked us to fill in a questionnaire. One of the questions are:Who will you go in times of trouble?Here are the results. Many students say they will talk to their friend or classmates because theyre of the same age

6、and can understand each other. Some will turn out to their parents or teachers for help. Only a little choose to deal with the problems on our own. Their answers also show that they dislike talk to others. They kept very much to themselves. In my opinion, where in trouble, we should seek help from t

7、hose we trust mostly.答案Last week our teacher asked us to fill in a questionnaire. One of the questions areis:Who will you go to in times of trouble? Here are the results. Many students say they will talk to their friendfriends or classmates because theyre of the same age and can understand each othe

8、r. Some will turn out to their parents or teachers for help. Only a littlefew choose to deal with the problems on ourtheir own. Their answers also show that they dislike talktalking to others. They keptkeep very much to themselves. In my opinion, wherewhen in trouble, we should seek help from those

9、we trust mostlymost .Proofreading 3(2020课标全国)学生用书 P122Today I tried cooking a simply dish myself. I like eating frying tomatoes with eggs, and I thought it must to be easy to cook. My mom told me how to preparing it. First I cut the tomatoes into pieces but put them aside. Next I broke the eggs into

10、 a bowl and beat them quickly with chopstick. After that I poured oil into a pan and turned off the stove. I waited patiently unless the oil was hot. Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into pan together. “Not that way,” my mom tried to stop us but failed. She was right. It didnt turn out as

11、 I had wished.答案Today I tried cooking a simplysimple dish myself. I like eating fryingfried tomatoes with eggs, and I thought it must to be easy to cook. My mom told me how to preparingprepare it. First I cut the tomatoes into pieces butand put them aside. Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat

12、them quickly with chopstickchopsticks. After that I poured oil into a pan and turned offon the stove. I waited patiently unlessuntil/till the oil was hot. Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into the pan together.“Not that way,”my mom tried to stop usme but failed. She was right. It didnt tu

13、rn out as I had wished.Proofreading 4(2020课标全国)学生用书 P122Thank you for your letter, what really made me happy. Im glad to know that youve come China to learn kung fu in a school in my hometown. Im surely youll have a good time. Actually, I start to learn kung fu when I was seven years old, for I have

14、 long been out of practice. Luckily, I will go home in two weeks for summer vacations. Then I can spare some time to learn it again, such that we can practice together on every day. Best of luck with yours learning kung fu in China. See you sooner.答案Thank you for your letter, whatwhich really made m

15、e happy. Im glad to know that youve come to China to learn kung fu in a school in my hometown. Im surelysure youll have a good time. Actually, I startstarted to learn kung fu when I was seven years old, forbut/yet I have long been out of practice. Luckily, I will go home in two weeks for summer vaca

16、tionsvacation. Then I can spare some time to learn it again, suchso that we can practice together on every day. Best of luck with yoursyour/you learning kung fu in China. See you soonersoon.Proofreading 5(2020课标全国)学生用书 P122My mom is really concerning with the health of everyone in our families. In o

17、rder to make surely all of us are in good health, and she makes specific plans for us. For example, every morning, my dad has to have the bowl of egg soup while I had to eat an apple. My dad dont like the soup and I dont enjoy apples. I tell my mom that if were forced eat things, we may become ill.

18、But he insists on us eating healthy food. Understanding her good intentions, I eat all the food what is provided by Mom with appreciation.答案My mom is really concerningconcerned with the health of everyone in our familiesfamily. In order to make surelysure all of us are in good health, and she makes

19、specific plans for us. For example, every morning, my dad has to have thea bowl of egg soup while I hadhave to eat an apple. My dad dontdoesnt like the soup and I dont enjoy apples. I tell my mom that if were forced to eat things, we may become ill. But heshe insists on us eating healthy food. Under

20、standing her good intentions, I eat all the food whatthat is provided by Mom with appreciation.Proofreading 6(2019课标全国)学生用书 P123I became interesting in playing football thanks to a small accident. One afternoon where I was in primary school, I was walking by the school playground. Suddenly football

21、fell just in front of me but almost hit me. I stopped the ball and kicked it hardly back to the playground. To everyones surprising, the ball went into the net. All the football player on the playground cheered loudly, say that I had a talent for football. From now on, I started to play my football

22、with classmates after school. I am a good player now.答案I became interestinginterested in playing football thanks to a small accident. One afternoon wherewhen I was in primary school, I was walking by the school playground. Suddenly a football fell just in front of me butand almost hit me. I stopped

23、the ball and kicked it hardlyhard back to the playground. To everyones surprisingsurprise, the ball went into the net. All the football playerplayers on the playground cheered loudly, saysaying that I had a talent for football. From nowthenon, I started to play my football with classmates after scho

24、ol. I am a good player now.Proofreading 7(2019课标全国)学生用书 P123Since I was a kid, Ive considered different job I would like to do. First, I wanted to be a fireman, whose uniform looked so coolly. Then, when I was in the five grade, I wanted to be a teacher because I liked my English teacher too much. W

25、hen I studied chemistry high school, I reconsidered my goal or decided to be a doctor. They were two reasons for the decision. One was that I was amazing at the fact that a sick person could feel much more better after seeing a doctor. And the other is that I wanted to help people in need.答案Since I

26、was a kid,Ive considered different jobjobs I would like to do.First, I wanted to be a fireman, whose uniform looked so coollycool. Then, when I was in the fivefifth grade, I wanted to be a teacher because I liked my English teacher toovery/so much.When I studied chemistry in/at high school, I recons

27、idered my goal orand decided to be a doctor. TheyThere were two reasons for the decision. One was that I was amazingamazed at the fact that a sick person could feel much more better after seeing a doctor. And the other iswas that I wanted to help people in need.Proofreading 8(2019课标全国)学生用书 P123Ive h

28、ad many dreams since I was a child. Now my dream is to opens a cafe. Though it may appear simple, it required a lot of ideas and efforts. What I want is not just an ordinarily cafe but a very special one. I want my cafe have a special theme such as like “Tang Dynasty”. In the cafe, customers will en

29、joy yourselves in the historical environment what is created for them. If I succeed in manage one, I will open more. I wish to have a chain of cafes in many different city. Each of my cafes will have a different theme and an unique style.答案Ive had many dreams since I was a child. Now my dream is to

30、opensopen a cafe. Though it may appear simple, it requiredrequires a lot of ideas and efforts. What I want is not just an ordinarilyordinary cafe but a very special one.I want my cafe to have a special theme such as like “Tang Dynasty”. In the cafe,customers will enjoy yourselvesthemselves in the hi

31、storical environment whatthat/which is created for them. If I succeed in managemanaging one,I will open more. I wish to have a chain of cafes in many different citycities. Each of my cafes will have a different theme and ana unique style.Proofreading 9(2018课标全国)学生用书 P123During my last winter holiday

32、, I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents. I find a big change there. The first time I went there, they were living in a small house with dogs, ducks, and another animals. Last winter when I went here again, they had a big separate house to raise dozens of chicken. They also ha

33、d a small pond which they raised fish. My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by sell the fish. I felt happily that their life had improved. At the end of our trip, I told my father that I planned to return for every two years, but he agreed.答案During my last winter holiday, I went to th

34、e countryside with my father to visit my grandparents. I findfound a big change there. The first time I went there, they were living in a small house with dogs, ducks, and anotherother animals. Last winter when I wentherethere again, they had a big separate house to raise dozens ofchickenchickens. T

35、hey also had a small pond inwhichwhere they raised fish. My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot bysellselling the fish. I felt happilyhappy that their life had improved. At the end of our trip, I told my father that I planned to returnfor every two years, butand he agreed.Proofreading 1

36、0(2018课标全国)学生用书 P123When I was little, Fridays night was our family game night. After supper, we would play card games of all sort in the sitting room. As the kid, I loved to watch cartoons, but no matter how many times I asked to watching them, my parents would not to let me. They would say to us t

37、hat playing card games would help my brain. Still I unwilling to play the games for them sometimes. I didnt realize how right my parents are until I entered high school. The games my parents taught me where I was a child turned out to be very useful later in my life.答案When I was little, FridaysFrida

38、y night was our family game night. After supper, we would play card games of all sortsorts in the sitting room. As thea kid, I loved to watch cartoons, but no matter how many times I asked to watchingwatch them, my parents would not to let me. They would say to usme that playing card games would hel

39、p my brain. Still I was unwilling to play the games forwith them sometimes. I didnt realize how right my parents arewere until I entered high school. The games my parents taught me wherewhen I was a child turned out to be very useful later in my life.Proofreading 11(2018课标全国)学生用书 P124It was Monday m

40、orning, and the writing class had just begin. Everyone was silent, wait to see who would be called upon to read his and her paragraph aloud. Some of us were confident and eager take part in the class activity; others were nervous and anxious. I had done myself homework, but I was shy. I was afraid t

41、hat to speak in front of a larger group of people. At that moment, I remembered that my father once said,“The classroom is a place for learning and that include learning from textbooks, and mistake as well.”Immediate, I raised my hand.答案It was Monday morning, and the writing class had justbeginbegun

42、. Everyone was silent, waitwaiting to see who would be called upon to read his andor her paragraph aloud. Some of us were confident and eager to take part in the class activity; others were nervous and anxious. I had done myselfmy/the homework, but I was shy. I was afraid that to speak in front of a

43、 largerlarge group of people. At that moment, I remembered that my father once said,“The classroom is a place for learning and that includeincludes learning from textbooks, and mistakemistakes as well.”ImmediateImmediately, I raised my hand.Proofreading 12(2017课标全国)学生用书 P124In the summer holiday fol

44、lowing my eighteen birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard first day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructors orders, so once I started the car, my mind goes blank. I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the word

45、,“Speed up!”“Slow down!”“Turning left!”I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes late, the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle on the road.答案In the summer holiday following my eighteeneight

46、eenth birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard the/my first day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructors orders, sobut/yet once I started the car, my mind goeswent blank. I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the

47、 wordwords,“Speed up!”“Slow down!”“TurningTurn left!”I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes latelater, the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a suddenlysudden stop just in the middle onof the road.Proofreading 13(2017课标全

48、国)学生用书 P124Mr. and Mrs. Zhang all work in our school. They live far from the school, and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden, that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier a

49、nd water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools. Beside, they often get some useful informations from the Internet. When summer came, they will invite their students pick the fresh vegetables!答案Mr. and Mrs. Zhang allboth/all work in our school. They live far from the

50、 school, and it takes them about aan/one hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interestinginterested in planting vegetables in their garden, thatwhich is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlierearly and water the vegetables together. They have also b

51、ought for some gardening tools. BesideBesides, they often get some usefulinformationsinformation from the Internet. When summer camecomes, they will invite their students to pick the fresh vegetables!Proofreading 14(2017课标全国)学生用书 P124When I look at this picture of myself, I realize of how fast time

52、flies. I had grown not only physically, and also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was took, I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club. Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time:c

53、ar magazines and musical instruments. I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes, playing pop music, and collecting the late music albums. This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days.答案When I look at this picture of myself, I realize of how fast time

54、 flies. I hadhave grown not only physically, andbut also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was tooktaken, I entered my second year of high school and becomebecame a new member of the school music club. Around me in the/this picture are the thingstheythat/which were ver

55、y important in my life at that time:car magazines and musical instruments. I enjoyed studying differencedifferent kinds of cars and planes, playing pop music, and collecting the latelatest music albums. This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of yourmy high school days.C组教师专用题组 Proo

56、freading 1(2016课标全国)My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live. Though not very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area. It is always crowded with customers at meal times. Some people even had to wait outside. My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day

57、he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.答案My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to thatwhere I live. Though not very big, bu

58、t the restaurant is popular in our area. It is always crowded with customers at meal times. Some people even hadhave to wait outside. My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honesthonesty. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables orand high quality oil are usingused for cooking. My unc

59、le says that he never dreams of becoming rich in thea short period of time. Instead, he hopes that ourhis business will grow steadysteadily.解析考查宾语从句。where引导宾语从句且在从句中作状语。考查连词。though和but不能连用。though引导的让步状语从句是一个省略句,不能再省略,故只能去掉but。考查动词的时态。文章通篇叙述的是客观事实,采用的是一般现在时,且句子的主语some people为复数,故需将had改为have。考查名词作表语。宾

60、语从句中的主语为名词短语the key to his success,故从逻辑上看应该用名词作表语,来解释名词短语的含义,即“什么是什么”结构。考查并列连词。此处表示并列关系,故用并列连词and。考查动词的被动语态。主语fresh vegetables and high quality oil和use之间为被动关系,故需用被动语态。考查介词。从dreams后的动名词becoming可知此处应加一个介词of。dream of梦想。考查冠词。in a short period of time“在短时间内”。考查形容词性物主代词。由句子的主语he可知,他希望他的(his)生意稳步增长。考查副词。此处

61、用副词作状语修饰动词grow。steadily意为“(发展、增长等)稳步地,持续地”。Proofreading 2(2016课标全国)The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in

62、 that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden your view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.答案The

63、summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about howwhat to do during the holiday. We can chosechoose between staying at home and taketaking a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable butand there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about the world. If

64、 we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden yourour view and gain knowledgesknowledge we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we canshould/ can go to places of interest nearby. I thoughtthink that it is a good idea. It does not cost manymuch, yet we can still learn a lot.解析考查“特殊疑问词+不定式”。do后边缺少

65、宾语,故用what。情态动词后应该用动词原形。和staying并列,故用taking。根据句意“如果我们待在家里,舒服而且没有必要花钱”可知前后不是转折关系。world前需要加定冠词 the。此处为“我们能开阔我们的视野”,故把your 改为our。knowledge 是不可数名词。本题考查虚拟语气。suggest“建议”后的从句的谓语动词应用“should+动词原形”,should可以省略。本句表示的是作者现在的看法而不是过去的看法。此处表示“不需要花费很多钱”,故用much。Proofreading 3(2016课标全国)The teenage year from 13 to 19 wer

66、e the most difficult time for me. They were also the best and worse years in my life. At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself. However, my parents didnt seem to think such. They always tell me what to do and how to do it. At one time, I even felt my parents cou

67、ldnt understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home to college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.答案The teenage yearyears from 13 to 19 were the most di

68、fficult time for me. They were also the best and worseworst years in my life. At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourselfmyself. However, my parents didnt seem to think suchso. They always telltold me what to do and how to do it. At one time, I even felt my parents

69、 couldnt understand me so I hoped I could be freelyfree from them. I showed them I was independent by wearwearing strange clothes. Now I am leaving home tofor college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever I need help.解析考查名词。由from 13 to 19可知year应改为year

70、s。考查形容词最高级。由并列连词and前的the best可知此处应用形容词的最高级形式。考查固定结构。at first“起初”为固定结构。考查反身代词。表示“我自己”用反身代词myself。考查副词。so在此处替代前边出现的“I knew everything and could make decisions by myself”。考查动词的时态。前后文语境告诉我们应使用一般过去时,故需用该动词的过去式told。考查形容词。be free from“从释放/解脱”为固定短语。考查动名词。by为介词,其后要接动名词。考查固定结构。leave.for.“离开去”为固定结构。考查代词。whenev

71、er引导的时间状语从句缺主语,由句意可知答案。Proofreading 4(2016浙江)When I was a very young children, my father created a regular practice I remember well years late. Every time he arrived home at end of the day, wed greet her at the door. He would ask who we was and pretend not to knowing us. Then he and my mother would

72、have had a drink while she prepared dinner and they would talk about his day and hers. While they chat, my father would lift my sister and me up to sit in the top of the fridge. It was both excited and frightening to be up there!My sister and I thought he was so cool for putting us there.答案When I wa

73、s a very young childrenchild, my father created a regular practice I remember well years latelater. Every time he arrived home at theend of the day, wed greet herhim at the door. He would ask who we waswere and pretend not to knowingknow us. Then he and my mother would have had a drink while she pre

74、pared dinner and they would talk about his day and hers. While they chatchatted, my father would lift my sister and me up to sit inon the top of the fridge. It was both excitedexciting and frightening to be up there!My sister and I thought he was so cool for putting us there.解析考查名词单复数。句中主语是I,为单数,故应用

75、child。考查副词。late adj.迟到的,晚的;later adv.后来,以后。考查冠词。at the end of.是固定短语,意为“在结束的时候”,故at后应加上冠词the。考查代词。此处指的是“我的父亲”,故应用him。考查主谓一致。主语是we,为复数, 故应该是were。考查非谓语动词。pretend not to do sth.假装不做某事,所以应该用动词原形。考查时态。根据上文Every time和句中would 可知父母经常这么做,would 后加上动词原形,表示过去经常做某事。考查时态。此句是时间状语从句,讲述的是父母过去的事情,故应用一般过去时,chat 应改为它的过去

76、式chatted。考查介词。on the top of.为固定短语,意为“在顶部,在上面”,此处指在冰箱的顶部。考查形容词。此句主语是it,指孩子们被父亲放在冰箱顶部这件事是令人兴奋的,exciting 常修饰事物,故用exciting。excited 常用来修饰人。Proofreading 5(2016四川)It is Mothers Day today. Though its a western festival, its popular in China now.Mom has a full-time job, so she has to do most of the housework

77、s. She is a great mother. Both Dad or I planned to do something on Mothers Day. We get up early in the morning. Dad cleaned the house, and then went on shopping. When he came back, I found a bunch of flowers in her hand. I asked Mom to stay in the sitting room and I cooked in kitchen. The dishes wha

78、t I cooked were Moms favoritest. At dinner, we said to her, “Happy Mothers Day!” Mom was grateful and moving.答案It is Mothers Day today. Though its a western festival, its popular in China now.Mom has a full-time job, sobut she has to do most of the houseworkshousework. She is a great mother. Both Da

79、d orand I planned to do something on Mothers Day. We getgot up early in the morning. Dad cleaned the house, and then went on shopping. When he came back, I found a bunch of flowers in herhis hand. I asked Mom to stay in the sitting room and I cooked in the kitchen. The dishes whatthat/which/ what I

80、cooked were Moms favoritestfavorite. At dinner, we said to her, “Happy Mothers Day!” Mom was grateful and movingmoved.解析考查并列连词。两个分句之间为转折关系,并非因果关系,故用but。句意:妈妈有一份全职工作,但是她还得承担大部分家务活儿。考查名词。housework家务,为不可数名词。考查并列连词。both.and.为固定搭配,意为“和都”。考查动词时态。根据上下文以及in the morning可知本句是在叙述过去的事情,故用一般过去时。考查固定搭配。句意:爸爸打扫完房子

81、,然后就去购物了。go shopping去购物。考查物主代词。根据句中的he可知此处为his。考查冠词。此处特指家里的厨房,故在kitchen前加定冠词the。考查定语从句。先行词为the dishes,且定语从句中cooked后缺少宾语,故用关系代词that/which引导定语从句,因其在从句中作宾语,故也可以省略关系代词。考查名词。favorite最喜欢的事物。考查形容词。此处作表语,主语为Mom,故用moved(感动的)。moving感人的;动人的。Proofreading 6(2015课标全国)When I was a child,I hoped to live in the city

82、.I think I would be happy there.Now I am living in a city,but I miss my home in countryside.There the air is clean or the mountains are green.Unfortunately,on the development of industrialization,the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become

83、 a very seriously problem.The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier.Much rare animals are dying out.We must found ways to protect your environment.If we fail to do so,well live to regret it.答案When I was a child,I hoped to live in the city.I thinkthought I would be happy there.Now I am li

84、ving in a city,but I miss my home in the countryside.There the air is clean orand the mountains are green.Unfortunately, onwith the development of industrialization,the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriouslyserious proble

85、m.The airsair we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. MuchMany rare animals are dying out.We must foundfind ways to protect yourour/the environment.If we fail to do so,well live to regret it.解析考查动词的时态。由was、hoped和would be可知,此处叙述的是过去的事情,故用一般过去时。考查冠词。in the countryside“在农村/乡下”为固定表达。考查并列连词。由本句句意可知

86、,此处表示并列关系,故须用并列连词and。考查介词。表示“随着”用介词with。考查动词的语态。主语studies和动词show之间为主动关系,故须用主动语态。考查形容词。修饰名词须用形容词。考查名词的数。air为物质名词,是不可数名词。考查代词。many修饰可数名词复数,much修饰不可数名词。此处修饰复数名词animals,故用many。考查情态动词。情态动词后的动词须用原形。考查代词或冠词。此处为形容词性物主代词作定语,句子的主语为we,故须用our与之相呼应。也可用定冠词the来限定。Proofreading 7(2015课标全国)One day,little Tony went to

87、 a shopping center with his parent.It was very crowded.Tony saw a toy on a shop window.He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop.After looks at the toy for some time,he turned around and found where his parents were missing.Tony was scared and begun to cry.A woman saw him crying

88、and telling him to wait outside a shop.Five minutes later,Tony saw parents.Mom said,“How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried.”Tony promised her that this would never happen again.答案One day,little Tony went to a shopping center with his parentparents.It was very crowded.Tony saw a

89、toy onin a shop window.He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop.After lookslooking at the toy for some time,he turned around and found wherethat /where his parents were missing.Tony was scared and begunbegan to cry.A woman saw him crying andtellingtold him to wait outside athe s

90、hop.Five minutes later,Tony saw his parents.Mom said,“How nice to see you again!Dad and I were terribleterribly worried.” Tony promised her that this would never happen again.解析由第五句和第八句可知Tony是和“parents”一起去了购物中心,故parent改为parents。Tony是“在商店橱窗(shop window)里”看到了玩具,故用in。此句为so.that.句型,so用来修饰much,very为多余词,故

91、去掉。此句中After为介词,其后应用动名词作宾语,故looks改为looking。考查宾语从句。此处宾语从句中不缺成分且意思完整,故用that引导(that也可以省略)。考查时态。and连接两个并列谓语,时态应一致。begin的过去式应为began。此处and连接的是两个并列的谓语动词,前文用的是saw,故telling改为told。考查冠词。此处提到的shop与上文提到的是同一个,故用定冠词the。此处提到的父母是主人公Tony的父母,故加上代词his。形容词worried应用副词修饰,故terrible改为terribly。Proofreading 8(2015四川)Hi,Janice,

92、Its been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.As I tell you last time,I made three new friend here.We hang out together during lunch and after school.Weve been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars.Its been three

93、 Saturdays now and it really costs me many.And I started to see this as a time-wasting activity!In fact,I dont like to go anymore,so Im afraid Ill lose their friendship.How do you think I should do?If you are me,would you talk to him?Please help with me and give me some advice.Grace答案Hi,Janice,Its b

94、een a month since I came to this new school and I really want to share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.As I telltold you last time,I made three new friendfriends here.We hang out together during lunch and after school.Weve been spending a lot of time singsinging in karaoke bar

95、s.Its been three Saturdays now and it really costs me manymuch.And I started to see this as a time-wasting activity!In fact,I dont like to go anymore,sobut Im afraid Ill lose their friendship.HowWhat do you think I should do?If you arewere me,would you talk to himthem?Please help with me and give me

96、 some advice.Grace解析want to do为固定搭配,故在want后加to。根据时间状语last time可知,本句时态应为一般过去时,故将tell改为told。句中three表示复数概念,后面的名词应为复数形式,故将friend改为friends。spend some time (in) doing sth.为固定搭配,故将sing改为singing。much在此处为代词,表示花的钱,故将many改为much。根据“我不想再去了”和“我害怕失去他们的友谊”可知,此处应为转折关系,故将so改为but。在此句中,特殊疑问词充当第二个do的宾语,故将How改为What。条件从句与

97、现在事实相反,谓语动词使用虚拟语气,故将are改为were。根据上文可知,这里指作者的三个新朋友,此处代词指代错误,故将him改为them。help为及物动词,与me构成动宾结构,因此,with在此处多余,故去掉with。Proofreading 9(2015浙江)My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass.I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view.On the left-hand s

98、ide of the class,I could easy see the football field.In the mornings,it was full of students exercising.The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid.Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them.Farther in the distance,I could not enjoy the view of snowy moun

99、tains.On the right side of the class was the road.I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning.The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming.If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom,I will never forget it.答案My old classroom was inter

100、esting because three sidesides of the classroom were made fromof glass.I enjoyed sitsitting close to the windows and looking at the view.On the left-hand side of the class,I could easyeasily see the football field.In the mornings,it was full of students exercising.The view from the back of the class

101、room iswas also splendid.Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around themit.Farther in the distance,I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains.On the right side of the class was the road.I was always interested to see the drivers in a hurry in the morning.The position of

102、 the classroom with its view made me feltfeel like I was dreaming.IfAlthough/Though I was only a child when I studied in that classroom,I will never forget it.解析side是可数名词,前面有three修饰,side要改为sides。be made from由制成,看不出原材料;be made of由制成/组成,看得出原材料,所以from要改为of。enjoy 后加动名词形式,所以sit要改为sitting。修饰动词see应用副词,所以ea

103、sy改为easily。时态误用。全文用的都是过去时,所以要把is改为was。代词误用。这里指代的是park,所以要把them改为it。根据上下文可知这里表肯定,所以把not删掉。固定短语 in a hurry仓促;匆忙。make sb.do sth.使某人做某事,所以felt要改为feel。句意:虽然我在那个教室学习时还是个孩子,但是我永远都忘不了它。根据句意可知要把If改为Although或Though。Proofreading 10(2014课标全国)Nearly five years before,and with the help by our father,my sister and

104、 I planted some cherry tomatoes(圣女果)in our back garden.Since thenfor all these yearwe had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please.As result,the plants are growing somewhere.The fruits are small in size,but juicy and taste.There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors.Al

105、though we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year,but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems.We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!答案Nearly five years beforeago,and with the help byof our father,my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes(圣女果)in our b

106、ack garden.Since thenfor all these yearyearswehadhave been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please.As a result,the plants are growing somewhereeverywhere.The fruits are small in size,but juicy and tastetasty.There are so muchmany that we often share them with our neighbors.Although we allow

107、 tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year,but/butyet we have never had any disease or insect attack problems.We are growing wonderfullywonderful tomatoes at no cost!解析此处讲述的是过去发生的事情,和一般过去时连用的应是ago,before常和完成时连用。with the help of.在的帮助下,为固定短语。句中year是可数名词,前面的these应修饰复数形式的名词。时间状语since then

108、通常和现在完成时连用,而不是过去完成时。as a result 结果,为固定短语。根据句意可知此处表示“圣女果到处生长”,所以用everywhere。本句中small,juicy和tasty是并列的表语,所以要用形容词。根据前面的be动词are和后面的them可知应是代替可数名词复数的many。引导让步状语从句的although不能和连词but连用,但是可以和副词yet连用。所以可以删掉but,也可以把but改为yet。修饰名词时应用形容词。Proofreading 11(2014课标全国)My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30

109、 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didnt need to do so many homework. Therefore, we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day.My dream school look like a big garden.

110、 There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.答案My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m.and ends at 3:30 p.

111、m.TheyThere are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon.We didntdont need to do so manymuch homework.Therefore,we have more time withfor after-school activities.For example,we can do reading for one and a half hourhours and play sports for one hour every day.My dream school looklooks l

112、ike a big garden.There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings.We can lie on the grass for a rest,or satsit by the lake listening to music.The teachers here are kind andhelpfullyhelpful.They are not only our teachers but also our friends.解析表示“上午有三节课,下午有两节课”应使用there be句型

113、。全文时态是以一般现在时为主,故应将didnt改为dont。homework是不可数名词,故应用much修饰。表示时间、金钱、空间等足够/足以(用于)时,应使用介词for。“一个半小时”要说one and a half hours。主语My dream school(我梦想中的学校)是单数,谓语动词也应使用第三人称单数形式。all kinds of(各种各样的)后直接加可数名词复数或不可数名词,不用再加冠词。We can lie.,or (can) sit.listen是不及物动词,接宾语时要加介词to。and连接两个形容词作表语,故应将副词helpfully改为形容词helpful。Proo

114、freading 12(2014浙江)I was taking a train to Londons Victoria Station.I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people.Before long,a train inspector comes to check our tickets.A passenger realized he couldnt find his ticket but became quite upset.Then everyone in the carriage began sea

115、rching the ticket,which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner.The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success.No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner before.Yet they had so quickly offered the strangers their help.If we

116、 could show concern to others on need,the world would be a better place to live in.答案I was taking a train to Londons Victoria Station.I had noticed that the carriage was noisenoisy and filled with people.Before long,a train inspector comescame to check our tickets.A passenger realized he couldnt fin

117、d his ticket butand became quite upset.Then everyone in the carriage began searching forthe ticket,which was eventually found under a seat several rows from hisits/the owner.The person who found athe ticket smiled with pleasure at his success.No one in the carriage had previouspreviously spoken to o

118、r even noticed the ticket-owner before.Yet they had so quickly offered the strangersstranger their help.If we could show concern to othersonin need,the world would be a better place to live in.解析此处指过去发生的事情,应用一般过去时。此处作表语,应该是形容词。此处是过去发生的事情,应用一般过去时。此处是顺承关系。搜寻某个东西应该用search for。此处指票的主人。此处特指在找的那张票。此处应该用副词

119、形式。此处指的是票的主人,只有一个人,所以用单数。此处是固定词组in need。Proofreading 13(2014辽宁)Dear Jeremy and Alice,Although weve been delighted to have you as neighbors,were hoping to settle something that bothers to us.In a word,your dogCleo.Weve called several time about Cleos early morning barking.It is difficult to understan

120、ding why she barks every minute shes outside.The early morning barking have been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby.Beside,Cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a day.This morning she starts barking even before 5 oclock.That is too much for us,considering how closely the ho

121、uses are.We appreciate our apologies and goodwill,but we hope that you can figure a good way of settling the matter.Sincerely,Jack and Rose答案Dear Jeremy and Alice,Although weve been delighted to have you as neighbors,were hoping to settle something that bothers to us.In a word,your dogCleo.Weve call

122、ed several timetimes about Cleos early morning barking.It is difficult to understandingunderstand why she barks every minute shes outside.The early morning barking havehas been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby.BesideBesides,Cleo tends to bark aan average of six hours a day.Th

123、is morning she startsstarted barking even before 5 oclock.That is too much for us,considering how closelyclose the houses are.We appreciate ouryour apologies and goodwill,but we hope that you can figure outa good way of settling the matter.Sincerely,Jack and Rose解析bother sb.打扰某人。考查名词复数。several times

124、好几次。根据its difficult to do sth.句型可知。考查主谓一致。the early morning barking为单数,所以谓语动词也应为单数形式。此处应为副词besides(此外)而不是介词beside(在旁边)。考查冠词。average为以元音音素开头的单词,所以应用冠词an。考查时态。因为是今天早晨发生的事情,所以用一般过去时。考查形容词。形容词close作表语。考查物主代词。根据动词短语figure out(想出)可知答案。Proofreading 14(2014四川)Hello,boys and girls!Today,I am going to talk wi

125、th what you should do when a fire alarm go off.If you hear the alarm,stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside.Stay close to your teacher and classmate.Dont panic or get out of line,and trying to remain quiet and calmly.Soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire.If

126、its a false alarm and there is no fire,your teacher will lead us back to the classroom.If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt,tell your teacher immediately.答案Hello,boys and girls! Today,I am going to talk withabout what you should do when a fire alarm gogoes off.If you hear the alarm,st

127、and in line at the door and wait for your teacher to lead you outside.Stay close to your teacher andclassmateclassmates.Dont panic or get out of line,and tryingtry to remain quiet and calmlycalm.Soon the firefighters will come and put out athe fire.If its a false alarm and there is no fire,your teac

128、her will lead usyou back to the classroom.If you notice that when someone is missing andor hurt,tell your teacher immediately.解析talk with sb.和某人交谈;talk about sth.谈论某事。主语是a fire alarm,谓语动词要用单数形式。wait for sb.to do sth.等待某人做某事。classmate是可数名词,根据语境可知不止有一个同学,所以要用复数形式。and连接的是并列的两个祈使句,前面是表示否定的祈使句,后面应是肯定的祈使句

129、,所以要用动词原形。此处作系动词remain的表语,所以应用形容词,和quiet并列。此处应该是特指上文提到的火灾。人称代词错误。前文用的是人称代词you,所以此处也应该是you。引导词使用重复,that已经引导宾语从句,所以when多余,而且不符合语境。此处应该是选择关系而不是顺承关系。Proofreading 15(2013课标)I hardly remember my grandmother.She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs.I was only four when she passes away.She is

130、just a distant memory for me now.I remember my grandfather very much.He was tall,with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years.He had a deep voice,which set himself apart from others in our small town,he was strong and powerful.In a fact,he even scared my classmat

131、es away during they came over to play or do homework with me.However,he was the gentlest man I have never known.答案I hardly remember my grandmother.She used to holdinghold me on her knees and sing old songs.I was only four when she passespassed away.She is just a distant memory for me now. I remember

132、 my grandfather very muchwell/clearly.He was tall,with broad shouldershoulders and a beard that turned from black towardto/into gray over the years.He had a deep voice,which set himselfhim apart from others in our small town,and he was strong and powerful.In a fact,he even scared my classmates away

133、duringwhen they came over to play or do homework with me.However,he was the gentlest man I have neverever known.解析此处用used to表示“过去常常”,后面接动词原形。根据句中的I was only four可知,此处讲的是过去的事情,故用一般过去时。根据下文的描述可知,作者对自己的祖父记忆犹新。所以把much改为well/clearly。shoulder是可数名词,人有双肩,所以用复数形式。turn from A to/into B表示“由一种状态转为另一种状态”。此处指深沉的声

134、音使他和其他人不同。he was strong and powerful和He had a deep voice是并列关系。in fact是固定短语,表示“事实上”。during是介词,不能引导状语从句,when是连词,可以引导状语从句,从句中的动词既可以是短暂性动词也可以是延续性动词。此处需要表示时间的连词,所以用when。此处表示他是我曾经认识的最温和的人。由此可知用ever。Proofreading 16(2013课标)The book Im reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain.It is said to have starte

135、d in the early 1800s.Have tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner,that might not be served until 8 oclock at night.This custom soon becomes another meal of day.Interesting,it had a connection by the British porcelain(瓷器)industry.Tea in China was traditionally drank from

136、cups without handles.When tea got popular in Britain,there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits.This made for the grow in the porcelain industry.答案The book Im reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain.It is said to have started in the early 1800s.HaveHaving tea in

137、 the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner,thatwhich might not be served until 8 oclock at night.This custom soon becomesbecame another meal of the day.InterestingInterestingly,it had a connection bywith/to the British porcelain(瓷器) industry.Tea in China was traditionally drankdr

138、unk from cups without handles.When tea got popular in Britain,there was a crying need for good cupcups with handles to suit British habits.This made for the growgrowth in the porcelain industry.解析read是一个及物动词,后面可直接接宾语,不需要加介词。Im reading是定语从句,修饰先行词the book。此处应该用动名词短语充当句子的主语,动词原形不能作主语。that不能引导非限制性定语从句。此

139、处叙述的是过去的事情,时态用一般过去时。句意:这一习俗很快成为了一天中的另一顿饭。此处修饰后面整个句子,故应该用副词形式。此处为固定搭配have a connection with/to与有关。此处表被动,应该用drink的过去分词drunk。cup是可数名词,与第六句中的cups without handles一样要用其复数形式。由该词前的定冠词the可知此处需用其名词形式growth。Proofreading 17(2013浙江)Dear Diary,Here I am in the middle of a city,350 miles far away from our farmhous

140、e.Do you want to know why we move last week?Dad lost his job,and as Mom explained,“He was lucky to find other one.”His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmate,my school or just everything else I love in the world.To make matters bad,now I have to share a room with my younger sister,Maggie

141、.Tomorrow is first day of school.I am awfully tiring,but I know Ill never fall sleep.Good night and remember,you,dear diary,is my only souvenir from my past life and my only friend.Yours,Rosemary答案Dear Diary,Here I am in the middle of a city,350 miles far away from our farmhouse.Do you want to know

142、why we movemoved last week?Dad lost his job,and as Mom explained,“He was lucky to find otheranother one.”His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmateclassmates,my school orand just everything else I love in the world.To make matters badworse,now I have to share a room with my younger siste

143、r,Maggie.Tomorrow is the/my first day of school.I am awfully tiringtired,but I know Ill never fall sleepasleep.Good night and remember,you,dear diary,isare my only souvenir from my past life and my only friend.Yours,Rosemary解析表示距离时,如果前面已经有具体的数词,就不用副词far。有时间状语last week,故该句陈述的是过去的事情。此处指另一份工作。此处指我的同学们,

144、应该是复数形式。此处my classmates,my school和everything else I love in the world是并列关系,而非选择关系,故用and。此处意思是“更糟糕的是”,所用的固定表达应该是to make matters worse。此处需要加上限定词,特指上学的第一天。此处指人很累,应该使用tired。fall asleep入睡。此处主语是you,故用are。Proofreading 18(2013辽宁)Mr.Johnson is a hardworking teacher.Every day,he spends too much time with his

145、work.With little sleep and hardly any break,so he works from morning till night.Hard work have made him very ill.“He has ruined his healthy.We are worried about him.”That is which other teachers say.Yesterday afternoon,I paid visit to Mr.Johnson.I was eager to see him,but outside her room I stopped.

146、I had to calm myself down.Quietly I step into the room.I saw him lying in bed,looking at some of the picture we had taken together.I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.答案Mr.Johnson is a hardworking teacher.Every day,he spends too much timewithon his work.With little sleep and

147、 hardly any break,so he works from morning till night.Hard work havehas made him very ill.“He has ruined his healthyhealth.We are worried about him.” That is whichwhat other teachers say.Yesterday afternoon,I paid a visit to Mr.Johnson.I was eager to see him,but outside herhis room I stopped.I had t

148、o calm myself down.Quietly I stepstepped into the room.I saw him lying in bed,looking at some of the picturepictures we had taken together.I understood that he missed us just as manymuch as we missed him.解析spend.on sth.(在某事上花费)是固定搭配。本句是一个简单句,with little sleep and hardly any break作状语,所以要去掉并列连词so。句子的主

149、语hard work是第三人称单数形式,所以have要改为has。此处该用名词health(健康)。healthy是形容词(健康的)。say后面少宾语,而且又没有范围,所以应该是what。pay a visit to拜访,看望,是固定短语。人称代词的逻辑错误。前文是Mr.Johnson,所以此处应该是“他的”而不是“她的”。时态误用。此处应该用一般过去时态。picture为可数名词,此处表示“一些照片”,故要用其复数形式。此处修饰动词miss,所以应该用副词much。Proofreading 19(2013四川)Today we had a chemistry test.I found the

150、 test difficulty,but I tried hardly to do it.Suddenly Mary,my best friend,asking me to let her to copy my answers.After think for some time,I let her copy my answers.But after the test,all of us were called to the teachers office.The teacher was angry because we had same answers in the tests.We were

151、 warned not to cheat again so she would need to see our parents.I was very upset.I didnt cheat.I was just helping a friend.Why does she punish me?答案Today we had a chemistry test.I found the test difficultydifficult,but I tried hardlyhard to do it.Suddenly Mary,my best friend,askingasked me to let he

152、r to copy my answers.After thinkthinking for some time,I let her copy my answers.But after the test,allboth of us were called to the teachers office.The teacher was angry because we had the same answers in the teststest.We were warned not to cheat again soor she would need to see our parents.I was v

153、ery upset.I didnt cheat.I was just helping a friend.Why doesdid she punish me?解析此处意为:我发现这次测试很难。本处需用形容词作宾补,以说明the test的特征。hardly副词,几乎不;hard副词,努力地。本处需用asked作谓语,而asking为非谓语动词,不能作谓语。let后用不定式作宾补时,需省略不定式符号to。after为介词,其后需用动名词作宾语。本句用both指I与Mary。the same为固定用法。本句指的是这一次测试,不必用复数形式。老师警告我们下次不能再作弊,否则她就要见家长。or否则。本句

154、说的是过去的事情,需用一般过去时态。Proofreading 20(2013陕西)My grandfather and I enjoy fishing. One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake.We took ours fishing poles and headed for the lake.As soon as we arrived,so we dropped the lines into the water.Before waiting for about half an hour,I was beginning to get impatie

155、ntly.I wanted to give up,and my grandfather told me to wait a little longer.Finally,there were a sudden pull at the pole and fish was caught.Within the next few minute,my grandfather also caught a fish.Felt hungry,we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish.It was delicious.答案My grandfather a

156、nd I enjoy fishing.One Sunday morning wegowent fishing at a lake.We took oursour fishing poles and headed for the lake.As soon as we arrived,so we dropped the lines into the water.BeforeAfter waiting for about half an hour,I was beginning to getimpatientlyimpatient.I wanted to give up,andbut my gran

157、dfather told me to wait a little longer.Finally,there werewas a sudden pull at the pole anda fish was caught.Within the next few minuteminutes,my grandfather also caught a fish. FeltFeeling hungry,we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish.It was delicious.解析根据One Sunday morning可判定用一般过去时。充当定

158、语修饰名词时必需用形容词性物主代词。前面是从句,此处是主句,不用连词。根据上下文判断,应是等了大约半小时后。此处get是系动词,后跟形容词作表语。根据上下文判断,此处应该表示转折。there be句型的主语是a sudden pull,故be动词用单数形式。此处指一条鱼,表泛指,故用a。在接下来的几分钟里,few修饰可数名词复数。现在分词作原因状语。Proofreading 21(2012课标)I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive.From the time I was about

159、 four until I was about six,I destroyed each of my toy.I was happy when the toys worked,but when things did wrong,I got angry and broke it.For a while parents bought me new toys.But before long they began to see which was happening.When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train,my father said,“Thats

160、it.No more toys to you.”My punishment lasted a year.Meanwhile,I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last.My attitude changed from then on.答案I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and littleless aggressive.From the time I was about four until I was about six,I dest

161、royed each of my toytoys.I was happy when the toys worked,but when things didwent/didto wrong,I got angry and broke itthem.For a while my parents bought me new toys.But before long they began to see whichwhat was happening.When I teartore apart my fifth birthday toy train,my father said,“Thats it.No

162、 more toys tofor you.”My punishment lasted a year.Meanwhile,I found out that with more patience I mustcould/might make my toys to last.My attitude changed from then on.解析根据more patient可知此处也应该用比较级。each of后应该接名词复数形式,表示“每一”。go为系动词,意为“变得”,且此处应该用过去时态;go前面加did的话表示强调。根据上文的toys可知此处为复数形式。根据句意可知此处指“我的父母”。see后

163、为宾语从句,从句中缺少主语,故用what。根据上下文可知,此处应该为过去时态。表示“为某人买东西”,介词为for而不是to。句意:与此同时,我发现再耐心些,我也许就能使玩具持续久些。must意为“必须”,不符合句意。make为使役动词,不定式作宾补时应该省去to。 三年模拟 A组考点基础题组Proofreading 1(2021山西一模)My hometown, Wanning, Hainan, which is a lively city within a 90-minute drive from Sanya.It enjoys a warm climate with an annual a

164、verage temperatures of 20. It is the better surfing spot with many international competitions hold there each year. Riyue Bay, located 25km south of Wanning, is my favourite place. With its strong waves, Riyue Bay is a ideal beach for surfing, what always offers an incredible surfing experience. Tax

165、is at Wanning Station are plentiful.Ignore others vehicles and head directly to the taxi line. Your totally travel time to Riyue Bay should be 40 minutes or so. It is a long but slightly expensive road, but it worth a visit!答案My hometown, Wanning, Hainan, which is a lively city within a 90-minute dr

166、ive from Sanya.It enjoys a warm climate with an annual average temperaturestemperature of 20. It is the betterbest surfing spot with many international competitions holdheld there each year. Riyue Bay, located 25km south of Wanning, is my favourite place. With its strong waves, Riyue Bay is aan idea

167、l beach for surfing, whatwhich always offers an incredible surfing experience. Taxis at Wanning Station are plentiful.Ignore othersother vehicles and head directly to the taxi line. Your totallytotal travel time to Riyue Bay should be 40 minutes or so. It is a long butand slightly expensive road, bu

168、t it is worth a visit!Proofreading 2(2021黑龙江齐齐哈尔一模)I was riding my bike down to the corner shop in a Saturday morning when I attracted by a cute boy who was walking his dog. Suddenly my neighbour drives past and honked(按喇叭)at me. I was so surprising that I crashed into an old lady walk down the stre

169、et! Lucky, the old lady wasnt hurt, but I fell off my bike and landed in the hole. My neighbour saw me to fall so she stopped her car and rushed out to help her. The worst part was that the cute boy stopped to watch all happen. What an embarrassing but dangerous day! 答案I was riding my bike down to t

170、he corner shop inon a Saturday morning when I was attracted by a cute boy who was walking his dog. Suddenly my neighbour drivesdrove past and honked(按喇叭)at me. I was so surprisingsurprised that I crashed into an old lady walkwalking down the street! LuckyLuckily, the old lady wasnt hurt, but I fell

171、off my bike and landed in thea hole. My neighbour saw me to fall so she stopped her car and rushed out to help herme. The worst part was that the cute boy stopped to watch all happen. What an embarrassing butand dangerous day! Proofreading 3(2021河南3月适应性测试)Among so much proverbs, I like “The early bi

172、rd catches the worm.”best.This proverb means that to being successful, one needs to start early or before anyone else. It advises us seize the day and take every opportunity. That is why I liked it so much.Looking back, I have come to realize that success is never goes to those who are lazy! Often t

173、he mostly successful people are those who do something before anyone else do. Success takes hard work and time. The early one wakes up, the more work time you will have and the more one will get.Are you a early bird?答案Among so muchmany proverbs, I like “The early bird catches the worm.”best.This pro

174、verb means that to beingbe successful, one needs to start early or before anyone else. It advises ustoseize the day and take every opportunity. That is why I likedlike it so much.Looking back, I have come to realize that success is never goes to those who are lazy! Often the mostlymost successful pe

175、ople are those who do something before anyone else dodoes . Success takes hard work and time. The earlyearlier one wakes up, the more work time youone will have and the more one will get. Are you aan early bird?Proofreading 4(2021云南昆明一中仿真模拟)I grew up in a small town about a hour outside of Chicago.

176、There were only a handful of local shops and cafes, and everyone know their neighbors as there were only twenty thousands people in the whole town! My parents used to let my brother and me walking to and from the kindergarten every day, and we were allowed to do whichever we liked before dark. The o

177、nly thing we had to worry about was getting bite by insects or getting sunburned from staying outdoor for too long! After high school, I went to college in the city. Taking the subway was much faster than riding my bike. People from all over the world spoke languages I never heard before. There were

178、 huge department stores, where sold everything. The entertainment at all hours was my most favorite thing about the city.答案I grew up in a small town about aan hour outside of Chicago. There were only a handful of local shops and cafes, and everyone knowknew their neighbors as there were only twenty

179、thousandsthousand people in the whole town! My parents used to let my brother and me walkingwalk to and from the kindergarten every day, and we were allowed to do whicheverwhatever we liked before dark. The only thing we had to worry about was getting bitebitten by insects or getting sunburned from

180、staying outdooroutdoors for too long! After high school, I went to college in the city. Taking the subway was much faster than riding my bike. People from all over the world spoke languages Ihadnever heard before. There were huge department stores,wherewhich sold everything. The entertainment at all

181、 hours was my most favorite thing about the city.Proofreading 5(2021四川成都二次诊断)Today I went out with my friend Ann for lunch at a restaurant. It is a pretty specially one, what is called“Signs Restaurant”. In order to make the order for food, you have to use sign language. All the waiters and waitress

182、es are without hearing. The waitress who served us was amazed. She taught we a bunch of signs while we had waited for our food. She was patient for me as I tried. My friends helped me out a little, either. The waitress said I did a good job. I feel inspired now take an ASL course and will do so next

183、 year.I will do some learning online before the course starts. I just cant wait.答案Today I went out with my friend Ann for lunch at a restaurant. It is a pretty speciallyspecial one, whatwhich is called“Signs Restaurant”. In order to make thean order for food, you have to use sign language. All the w

184、aiters and waitresses are without hearing. The waitress who served us was amazedamazing. She taught weus a bunch of signs while we had waited for our food. She was patient forwith me as I tried. My friendsfriend helped me out a little, eithertoo. The waitress said I did a good job. I feel inspired n

185、ow to take an ASL course and will do so next year.I will do some learning online before the course starts. I just cant wait.Proofreading 6(2020四省八校上学期二次质检)Last summer vacation I travelled to America and I met a lot of foreigner. I found a tour guide which spoke both English and Chinese because of I

186、was not confident of my English. Interesting, some native English speakers joined me in the trip. When we are in the Grand Canyon, we lost contact with our guide but everyone was worried. All of sudden, my phone rang and it was from the guide, said that he would wait for us at the gate of the Canyon

187、. He asked I to inform the other members. I collected my courage to tell them in English, and then I was praising by them. I felt more confident afterwards. 答案Last summer vacation I travelled to America and I met a lot of foreignerforeigners. I found a tour guide whichwho/that spoke both English and

188、 Chinese because of I was not confident of my English. InterestingInterestingly, some native English speakers joined me in the trip. When we arewere in the Grand Canyon, we lost contact with our guide butso/and everyone was worried. All of asudden, my phone rang and it was from the guide, saidsaying

189、 that he would wait for us at the gate of the Canyon. He asked Ime to inform the other members. I collected my courage to tell them in English, and then I was praisingpraised by them. I felt more confident afterwards. Proofreading 7(2020河南名校线上联考)I think teenagers in China should have a specially fes

190、tival that I would call it Teenager Volunteer Day. As is known to all, most teenagers in China are brought up as a only child in the family. They usually given too many care and attention.Through volunteering, teenagers may learn to think of others and many other important life lesson. In Teenager V

191、olunteer Day, teenagers are encouraged to volunteer wherever you are needed. They may help to raise money for people which suffer from a serious disease. They may go to a home for the aged to do what is good for old people, or collecting books for children in poor areas.答案I think teenagers in China

192、should have a speciallyspecial festival that I would call it Teenager Volunteer Day. As is known to all, most teenagers in China are brought up as aan only child in the family. They are usually given too manymuch care and attention. Through volunteering, teenagers may learn to think of others and ma

193、ny other important life lessonlessons. InOn Teenager Volunteer Day, teenagers are encouraged to volunteer wherever youthey are needed. They may help to raise money for people whichwho suffer from a serious disease. They may go to a home for the aged to do what is good for old people, or collectingco

194、llect books for children in poor areas.Proofreading 8(2020河南顶级名校1月质量测评)My friend Frank is one of the most amazing peoples I have ever met. He just never seemed to suffer from any kind of stress, even when he faces unexpected difficulties. To everyones surprised, he has never failed an exam. Frank be

195、lieves that exams are just exams but that its unnecessary worry about them all the time. He is an optimistic person by nature and I real admire his way of thinking. That makes me ashamed is that I am always nervous facing the exams. For an example, I cant concentrate to my studies before the exams.

196、Its time for me to learn from her now.答案My friend Frank is one of the most amazing peoplespeople I have ever met. He just never seemedseems to suffer from any kind of stress, even when he faces unexpected difficulties. To everyones surprisedsurprise, he has never failed an exam. Frank believes that

197、exams are just exams butand that its unnecessary to worry about them all the time. He is an optimistic person by nature and I realreally admire his way of thinking. ThatWhat makes me ashamed is that I am always nervous facing the exams. For an example, I cant concentrate toon my studies before the e

198、xams. Its time for me to learn from herhim now.Proofreading 9(2019陕西汉中联考一)Last Friday, our class was invited an old craftsman to teach us how to making dough figurines(面人). When the craftsman came into the classroom, we gave him warm welcome and two boys helped him with the tool box. First, he shows

199、 us the basic steps and skills of making dough figurines. We stood around him or watched attentively. Then we started to have a try itself. The old man walked around and helped us patient. Finally, we put the figurines we made on the table and took pictures with the old craftsman. Looking on the fig

200、urines, we were all very exciting. We hope we can have more activity of this kind!答案Last Friday, our class was invited an old craftsman to teach us how to makingmake dough figurines(面人).When the craftsman came into the classroom, we gave him awarm welcome and two boys helped him with the tool box. F

201、irst, he showsshowed us the basic steps and skills of making dough figurines. We stood around him orand watched attentively. Then we started to have a try itselfourselves. The old man walked around and helped us patientpatiently. Finally, we put the figurines we made on the table and took pictures w

202、ith the old craftsman. Looking onat the figurines, we were all very excitingexcited. We hope we can have more activityactivities of this kind!Proofreading 10(2019江西八所重点中学联考)It was raining hardly outside, which made it difficult for me to go home for lunch. Just as I was wondering what I should eat a

203、t noon, I saw a familiar figure passed by our classroom. I rushed out and found it was my mother, already in fifties, which brought me lunch in spite of the heavy rain. In China, many parents make great sacrifices for our children. But what had the children done in return? All too often, most childr

204、en just take it for granted that their parent should serve for them unconditionally. My dear mum or dad, thank you very much for bringing me up. How shall I do for you?答案It was raining hardlyhard outside, which made it difficult for me to go home for lunch. Just as I was wondering what I should eat

205、at noon, I saw a familiar figure passedpassing by our classroom. I rushed out and found it was my mother, already inherfifties, whichthat/who brought me lunch in spite of the heavy rain. In China, many parents make great sacrifices for ourtheir children. But what hadhave the children done in return?

206、 All too often, most children just take it for granted that their parentparents should serve for them unconditionally. My dear mum orand dad, thank you very much for bringing me up. HowWhat shall I do for you?B组综合应用题组Proofreading 1(2021贵州天之王教育三模)My friends made a plan go to the seaside last week. I

207、was very excited and asked for my parents permission. To my delight, they agree. We gathered at 6:30 but set off at once. Honest speaking, it took us more than an hour to arrive there by bike. When we arrived, there was plenty of visitors. Some were playing in the sand, playing the volleyball happil

208、y while others were walking along the seaside. On addition, some even sat on their chair, enjoying the beautiful sight. What made us happy was whether we could swim safely. We enjoyed us that day and returned home at about three oclock.答案My friends made a planto go to the seaside last week. I was ve

209、ry excited and asked for my parents permission. To my delight, they agreeagreed. We gathered at 6:30 butand set off at once. HonestHonestly speaking, it took us more than an hour to arrive there by bike. When we arrived, there waswere plenty of visitors. Some were playing in the sand, playing the vo

210、lleyball happily while others were walking along the seaside. OnIn addition, some even sat on their chairchairs, enjoying the beautiful sight. What made us happy was whetherthat we could swim safely. We enjoyed usourselves that day and returned home at about three oclock.Proofreading 2(2021安徽合肥二模)Il

211、l never forget the last winter holiday in my hometown. On the way to my grandpa, my father drove very carefully or slowly all the way, for it was snowing heavily.When we arrived, my cousin Maomao grabbed my arm at once, inviting me collect snow with our grandpa.We felt not a little excitedly. After

212、a while, in the yard was some snowmen, all look funny. “Look, heres another snowman,”shouted Maomao, joyfully clapping his hand. It was our grandpa who grey hair was blowing in the wind. We laughed, which made our grandpa a kind of awkward. How I wish I can go back there next year!答案Ill never forget

213、 the last winter holiday in my hometown. On the way to my grandpagrandpas, my father drove very carefully orand slowly all the way, for it was snowing heavily.When we arrived, my cousin Maomao grabbed my arm at once, inviting meto collect snow with our grandpa.We felt not a little excitedlyexcited.

214、After a while, in the yard waswere some snowmen, all looklooking funny.“Look, heres another snowman,”shouted Maomao, joyfully clapping his handhands. It was our grandpa whowhose grey hair was blowing in the wind. We laughed, which made our grandpa a kind of awkward. How I wish I cancould go back the

215、re next year!Proofreading 3(2021广西柳州三次模拟)I still remember my first presentation in front of my entire class. When it comes to my turn, I was very much nervous! My head went blank and I had no idea that to say. Then I took deep breath and slowly breathed out. I kept do so for some times. That helped

216、me feel less terribly. After a while, I calmed down but began my speech. I did a good job in the end. It was deep breathing that helped me out of anxious. So remember to breathe deeply when you feel nervous in a presentation. Focus on your speech and dont worry with not making my presentation perfec

217、t. The world wont end even if you mess up.答案I still remember my first presentation in front of my entire class. When it comescame to my turn, I was very much nervous! My head went blank and I had no idea thatwhat to say. Then I tooka deep breath and slowly breathed out. I kept dodoing so for some ti

218、mes. That helped me feel less terriblyterrible. After a while,I calmed down butand began my speech. I did a good job in the end. It was deep breathing that helped me out of anxiousanxiety. So remember to breathe deeply when you feel nervous in a presentation. Focus on your speech and dont worry with

219、about not making myyour presentation perfect. The world wont end even if you mess up.Proofreading 4(2021江西九江3月二次模拟)I had a very special winter vacation this year. A terrible disease calling COVID-19 struck Wuhan on January 2020.The whole nation is under the shadow of the outbreak in a short time. Te

220、ns of thousand of people were infected with the virus. Thankful, the government took timely measures and called on ourselves to stay at home to avoid close personal contact. In the meantime, a plenty of medical experts and nursing professionals went to Wuhan voluntarily, who showed that Chinese coul

221、d unite firmly in the face of difficulties. The disaster did bring huge pain to China and it pushed the country overcome difficulties and come out much stronger.答案I had a very special winter vacation this year. A terrible disease callingcalled COVID-19 struck Wuhan onin January 2020.The whole nation

222、 iswas under the shadow of the outbreak in a short time. Tens of thousandthousands of people were infected with the virus. ThankfulThankfully, the government took timely measures and called on ourselvesus to stay at home to avoid close personal contact. In the meantime, a plenty of medical experts a

223、nd nursing professionals went to Wuhan voluntarily, whowhich showed that Chinese could unite firmly in the face of difficulties. The disaster did bring huge pain to China andbut it pushed the countryto overcome difficulties and come out much stronger.Proofreading 5(2021山西临汾3月考前适应性训练)Im a Senior Thre

224、e student. I like making friends with like-minded fellow and usually they get on well with each other. However, I overheard one of my friends speaking ill me yesterday, say she didnt want to play with me. As the matter of fact, she plays tricks on me occasional because Im fat. I am just cant underst

225、and how she cant be friendly to me while Im kind to her. It was hard for me to pretend to know nothing but even hard to let go of our friendship.答案Im a Senior Three student. I like making friends with like-minded fellowfellows and usually theywe get on well with each other. However, I overheard one

226、of my friends speaking illofme yesterday, saysaying she didnt want to play with me. As thea matter of fact, she plays tricks on me occasionaloccasionally because Im fat. I am just cant understand howwhy she cant be friendly to me while Im kind to her. It wasis hard for me to pretend to know nothing

227、but even hardharder to let go of our friendship.Proofreading 6(2020山西1月适应性调研)During my last summer holiday, I visited to my primary school. Arrived at the school gate, I am amazed at the great changes. Two modern teaching buildings came into my view. Behind the buildings was a new library which chil

228、dren could read their favorite books to broaden our horizons. There were many more trees in the school yard. Entering my familiar classroom, I found the old tables and chairs replaced by new ones but the walls beautifully decorated. In front of the classroom was a computer screen, which could make t

229、eachers lesson interesting and lively. Sitting in the classroom, I remembered the good old days spent here with my classmates. I felt proudly that my school was becoming better and better.答案During my last summer holiday, I visited to my primary school. ArrivedArriving at the school gate, I amwas ama

230、zed at the great changes. Two modern teaching buildings came into my view. Behind the buildings was a new library inwhich /whichwhere children could read their favorite books to broaden ourtheir horizons. There were many more trees in the school yard. Entering my familiar classroom, I found the old

231、tables and chairs replaced by new ones butand the walls beautifully decorated. In the front of the classroom was a computer screen, which could make teacherslessonlessons interesting and lively. Sitting in the classroom, I remembered the good old days spent herethere with my classmates. I felt proud

232、lyproud that my school was becoming better and better.Proofreading 7(2020陕西铜川二模)About how to keep healthy, Id like to offer my advices. As we know, we teenagers are going through a rapid growth which needs to be support by a healthy and balanced diet. Thus, we need a variety of food but cut out the

233、food rich in sugar or fat. However, we should take physical exercise regular. For example, we can play basketball or take walk after school. Have enough sleep is of great importance. Therefore, you should have at least eight hours of sleep every day and not stayed up too late. Only in this way that

234、can we keep fit.答案About how to keep healthy, Id like to offer my advicesadvice. As we know, we teenagers are going through a rapid growth which needs to be supportsupported by a healthy and balanced diet. Thus, we need a variety of food but cut outdown the food rich in sugar or fat. HoweverBesides/M

235、oreover/Furthermore, we should take physical exercise regularregularly. For example, we can play basketball or take a walk after school. HaveHaving enough sleep is of great importance. Therefore, youwe should have at least eight hours of sleep every day and not stayedstay up too late. Only in this w

236、ay that can we keep fit.Proofreading 8(2020山西大同一中模拟VI)My friend Tom likes shopping online. He always spends much money buying different clothes and decoration. Yesterday, he received the coat he has ordered online. He felt happy after opening the box. He thought he must look handsome in them. Howeve

237、r, at the sight of the coat, he felt disappointed and angrily. The coat was too large and it didnt look the same as describing online. He contacted the salesgirl and told her that she should exchange it free of the charge. The salesgirl didnt think that she had made a mistake, but she agreed change

238、the coat if he paid the fee. Tom did so but he decided that he should think twice before he did something from now on.答案My friend Tom likes shopping online. He always spends much money buying different clothes and decorationdecorations. Yesterday, he received the coat he hashad ordered online. He fe

239、lt happy afterbefore opening the box. He thought he must look handsome in themit. However, at the sight of the coat, he felt disappointed and angrilyangry. The coat was too large and it didnt look the same as describingdescribed online. He contacted the salesgirl and told her that she should exchang

240、e it free of the charge. The salesgirl didnt think that she had made a mistake, but she agreed to change the coat if he paid the fee. Tom did so butand he decided that he should think twice before he did something from nowthen on.Proofreading 9(2019四川攀枝花统考)I am a third-grade student in China. I hope

241、 to go to your university to learn English after finish my high school. English played an important part in our daily life but I like it so much that I want to be a teacher of English. I have a little difficult in English. But I will study hardly to improve it if I have an opportunity go to your uni

242、versity. Besides, I like your city because it has an environment which differs with my city. And I will make many friend and communicate frequently with him. Id appreciate it if you could take my application into the consideration.答案I am a third-grade student in China. I hope to go to your universit

243、y to learn English after finishfinishing my high school. English playedplays an important part in our daily life butand I like it so much that I want to be a teacher of English. I have a little difficultdifficulty in English. But I will study hardlyhard to improve it if I have an opportunity to go t

244、o your university. Besides, I like your city because it has an environment which differs withfrom my city. And I will make many friendfriends and communicate frequently with himthem. Id appreciate it if you could take my application into theconsideration.Proofreading 10(2019贵州遵义航天高中七模)I was about to

245、 go back home after school while I heard someone crying nearby. I looked around and found the boy sitting on the ground.I went up to him and asking gently what had happened. The boy looked at me, still crying, pointed out to a ball in a deep hole and told me everything. I decided lend him a hand, an

246、d the ball was out of my reach. Where could I get the ball? I thought it over and then had an idea.I quickly fetched some bottles of water and poured them into the hole. With the water rising, the ball floated up. The boy got the ball happy and expressed his thank for my offer. 答案I was about to go b

247、ack home after school whilewhen I heard someone crying nearby. I looked around and found thea boy sitting on the ground.I went up to him and askingasked gently what had happened. The boy looked at me, still crying, pointed out to a ball in a deep hole and told me everything. I decided to lend him a

248、hand, andbut the ball was out of my reach. WhereHow could I get the ball? I thought it over and then had an idea. I quickly fetched some bottles of water and poured themit into the hole. With the water rising, the ball floated up. The boy got the ball happyhappily and expressed his thankthanks for m

249、y offer. 一年原创 Proofreading 1(2021 53原创题)Looking up in the sky,you may to see many types of clouds.A cloud is a group of tiny ice crystals or water droplets floated in the air. When millions of these droplets or crystals come together, it form a cloud.The wind moves clouds along in the sky. Unless it

250、 is windy day, youll see the clouds move very fast. In calm days, the clouds hardly seem to move at all.Clouds form at different height in the sky:high, middle, and low. Cirrus clouds are highly clouds, looked thin and long, like streamers.Cirrus clouds are fair-weather clouds. They dont make rain.

251、Stratus clouds are low clouds.They are usually gray or cover up the whole sky. Rain can fall from these clouds.答案Looking up in the sky,you may to see many types of clouds. A cloud is a group of tiny ice crystals or water droplets floatedfloatingin the air. When millions of these droplets or crystals

252、 come together,itthey form a cloud.The wind moves clouds along in the sky. UnlessIf it is a windy day, youll see the clouds move very fast. InOn calm days, the clouds hardly seem to move at all.Clouds form at different heightheights in the sky:high, middle, and low. Cirrus clouds are highlyhigh clou

253、ds, lookedlooking thin and long, like streamers.Cirrus clouds are fair-weather clouds. They dont make rain. Stratus clouds are low clouds.They are usually gray orand cover up the whole sky. Rain can fall from these clouds.Proofreading 2(2021 53原创题)Of the four skill, I think listening is the hardest.

254、 I like watching English films and I cant understand it without the Chinese subtitles.I am not satisfying with this situation. So recent I had a talk with my friend Wang Ting. She told me some good ways improving listening. She suggested that using CDs to listen to English songs and learned English

255、expressions. “Trying to listen to native speakers are also helpful,” she added.I will do as she advises. Im sure I will gradually make progress. 答案Of the four skillskills, I think listening is the hardest. I like watching English films andbut I cant understand itthem without the Chinese subtitles.I

256、am not satisfyingsatisfied with this situation. So recentrecently I had a talk with my friend Wang Ting. She told me some good ways of improving listening. She suggested that using CDs to listen to English songs and learnedlearn English expressions. “Trying to listen to native speakers areis also helpful,”she added.I will do as she advisesadvised. Im sure I will gradually make progress.