2015-2016学年高一人教版英语必修一课件：UNIT 3 TRAVEL JOURNAL第五学时　WRITING .ppt

1、第五学 时Writing 话题微写作旅游与交通游记【句型搭桥】提示：黑体部分用本单元词汇表达。1邻居老王说服我们和他一起去旅游。_2他很靠得住，关注准备工作的每个细节。_3他选择了路线，找了交通工具并且制定了日程表。_4这次旅游让我们发现老王很好相处。_句型搭桥1Our neighbor Mr.Wang tried to persuade us to travel together.2He is quite reliable and cares about details of the preparation work.3He chose the route,found the transpo

2、rt and made the schedule.4From the journey we realize that Mr.Wang is good to get along with.【连句成篇】可选用when，because，then等将以上句子连成一篇短文。_连句成篇When our neighbor Mr.Wang tried to persuade us to join in his journey，we agreed because we know he was quite reliable and cared about details of the preparation wo

3、rk.Then he chose the route，found the transport and made the schedule.From the journey we realize that Mr.Wang is good to get along with.【短文改错】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词

4、。2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。On the early evening we always stop to make camp.We put up ours tent and then we eat.After supper Wang Wei putted her head down on her pillow and gone to sleep but I was stayed awake.At midnight the sky became clear and the stars grew brighter.It was so quietly.There is almo

5、st no windonly the flames of our fire for company.As I lay beneath the stars I thought about what far we had already been travelled.how 写作探究如何写电子邮件技巧点拨首先，必须在收件人(To)框中输入收信人的电子邮件地址，如：X。主题(Subject)框最好不要空着，它应简明地概括信的内容，可以是一个单词、一个短语，也可以是一个完整的句子。其次，正文前的称呼通常按实际情况而定。在同辈的亲朋好友或同事间可以直呼其名，如：Dear Joe。但对长辈最好用头衔加上姓

6、，如：Dear Mr.Wang。最后，要视邮件的正式与否选择合适的结尾。与书面信函不同的是，邮件的结尾可不署名，尤其是给朋友、同学等熟人的电子邮件；同时无需写出时间；信尾客套语通常也只需一个词，如：Thanks,Best 等。常用句型How are you doing?I was so pleased to hear from you and I am writing to tell you something about.Please let me know if you have any questions.If you agree with me,please write a lette

7、r to me or phone me.My telephone number/My address/My email address is.Thanks for the information.Thanks for your attention!I expect to hear from you soon.书面表达假如你是小华，在暑假和朋友外出活动回来后发了一封电子邮件给你的外国朋友汤姆，告诉他你的活动。请根据下表完成电子邮件。注意：1.词数100左右。2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3开头语和结束语已为你写好。Dear Tom，How is your holiday?Do you go

8、out with your friends?Last Sunday I went picnicking with my good friends._【参考范文】DearTom，How is your holiday？Do you go out with your friends?Last Sunday I went picnicking with my good friends.At 7 am,we met at the school gate and set off after 15 minutes.After half an hours ride,we got to the foot of Yangming Mountain and then we began to climb.It took us one hour to reach the top of the mountain.With the beautiful scenery there and all kinds of activities such as singing,playing chess and so on,we had a good time.Though I was exhausted after it,I enjoyed myself very much.Best wishes!