2016年高考英语短文改错集训营课件：高考英语短文改错2——记叙文1.ppt

1、高考英语短文改错2记叙文（一）(一)Dear Lucy,I would like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for Double Ninth Festival.It was the day for the elder people in our culture.elderlyistheWe will go and make dumplings and cake with the elderly people here.We will also spend some

2、fun time together play games,which we hope will make they happy.We should be back around 4:00 on the afternoon.inthemplayingtherecakes If you are able to come to with us,please let us know so we will wait for you at the school gate at 9:00 in the morning.Looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li

3、Huaand(一)本文是李华写给露西的邀请信，邀请她一同前往敬老院陪老人们过重阳节。1.在Double Ninth Festival前加the 专有名词前须加定冠词the，特指重阳节(the Double Ninth Festival)。2.was is 客观陈述规律性或习惯性的事情用一般现在时。3.elder elderly 修饰名词people要用形容词，elderly意为“上了年纪的”，符合文意；而elder意为“年纪较大的”，不符合文意；下文也有相同的表达。4.cake cakes 因cake是可数名词，要与dumplings并列，故要用复数。5.here there 根据上下文语境，

4、此处应该是指“敬老院那儿”，而不是“这儿”。6.play playing 由固定结构spend time(in)doing sth.意为“花费时间做某事”可知。7.they them 作宾语要用宾格。8.on in 表“在下午/上午”用in the afternoon/morning；而表“在具体的某天上/下午”用介词on。9.去掉come后的to 此处come后并无宾语，故不需要介词to。10.so and 表顺承关系用并列连词and。around adj.大约reply n.答复nursing home 敬老院invite sb.to do sth.邀请某人做某事(二)Ill spend

5、this summer holiday in the countryside.Although the city is modern and convenience,therere still some problems,such as airs pollution,crowdedness and noise.In the countryside I can enjoy comfortable and quiet life.aairconvenientThere,the air is fresh but the water is clean.Trees are green and birds

6、is singing.I can go to boating,fishing and swimming in the lake.Whats worse,I can climb the hills.moreareandAll this will be interesting and good for your health.Above all,I can learn more about nature.So I wanted to go to the countryside for a change.Im looking forward to the come of my summer ingw

7、antmy(二)本文讲述作者想去乡村度假的原因。1.convenience convenient 作表语要用形容词形式。2.airs air 因air是不可数名词。3.在enjoy后加a 由固定结构enjoy/live/lead alife意为“享受/过着的生活”可知。4.but and 表顺承关系用并列连词and。5.is are 因主语birds是复数，故谓语也要用复数形式。6.去掉go后的to 由固定搭配go boating意为“(去)划船”可知。7.worse more 根据上下文语境可知，此处理应表“此外”，故要用what more。(注意：whats worse意为“更糟糕的是”)

8、8.your my 根据上下文语境可知，应当是对作者的健康有利，应用第一人称物主代词my。9.wanted want 因全文主体时态是一般现在时。e coming 固定短语look forward to的to为介词，其后要接名词或动名词。crowdedness n.拥挤above all 尤其重要的是learn more about 更多地了解for a change 换换环境(三)What should you do when your parents become angrily?If your parents got mad,try to have a conversation with

9、 them about it.Remembering not to shout at them.RemembergetangryThey usually will try to change.But they will take some times to change because they always get angry,and that is all they know.You might have to change for your method a couple of times.timeitDo any nice things for your parents that th

10、ey dont expectlike cooking,doing the dishes,washing clothes,or clean the floors.If this doesnt work,bring in friend that you feel comfortable with,or have him or her help you.andacleaningsome(三)本文讲述父母生气的时候，你应该怎么做。1.angrily angry 作表语要用形容词形式。2.got get 因本文的主体时态是一般现在时。3.Remembering Remember 祈使句要用动词原形开头。

11、4.they it 因it在此作形式主语，后面的不定式才是真正的主语。5.times time 因time作“时间”理解时，是不可数名词。6.去掉change后的for 因change是及物动词，其后可直接接宾语。7.any some 肯定句中用some，意为“一些”。8.clean cleaning 和前面的doing,washing并列。9.在bring in后加a 因friend是可数名词，此处意为“一个朋友”，表泛指。10.or and 表顺承关系用并列连词and。expect vt.预料shout at 对大喊a couple of times 好几次do the dishes 洗碗

12、bring in 带来have a conversation with 和谈一谈(四)One of my favorite hobbies are backcountry hiking.However,after I go hiking,I make sure to have all of the proper necessities.First,I wore proper clothing and hiking shoes.wearbeforeisThis may include taking water shoes if I have plans for hiking through st

13、reams and rivers or a reliable jacket to keep warmly.Next,I get my family and friends to know I will be going and when I would return.wherewarmwillIn addition to these item,I take plenty of the food and water.Finally,I always pack emergency supplies include a lighter.You never know when you will be

14、in need for these things.ofincludingitems(四)本文讲述作者徒步旅行前要做的准备。1.are is 因主语是one，故谓语动词用单数。2.after before 根据上下文意思可知是“在我去徒步旅行前”。3.wore wear 全文的主体时态是一般现在时。4.warmly warm 作系动词keep的表语，用形容词。5.在to know后加where 引导宾语从句。句意：让家人和朋友知道我去哪里。6.would will 根据上下文语境和前面的I will be going可知此处是指“我将什么时候回来”，故用一般将来时。7.item items 由前

15、面的these可知要用复数。8.去掉plenty of后的the 此处并没有表特指，无需定冠词。9.include including 因including是介词，介词并无形式变化。10.for of 由固定短语in need of意为“需要”可知。backcountry n.边远地区stream n.小溪item n.项目；条款lighter n.打火机pack vt.装；打包proper necessities 适当的必需品in addition to 除了之外emergency supplies 应急物资plenty of 许多go hiking 去远足；去徒步旅行(五)My homet

16、own is Brighton where isnt a very big town.Its in the coast about 50 miles from London and has a population of 300,000.Certainly it isnt as interested as London.So the air is a lot of cleaner because theres little pollution here.Butinterestingonwhich/thatTherere few factories in Brighton,but not man

17、y.So,it isnt easy to find a job there.My father used to working in a factory which shuts down a year ago and my father lost his job.shutworkhereaTherere many hotels and languages schools in the town.In summer the town is full of travelers.My father has decided to open a small gift shop.language(五)本文

18、作者介绍了自己的家乡Brighton。1.where which/that 引导定语从句，并在从句中充当主语。2.in on 由固定短语on the coast意为“在海岸线上”可知。3.interested interesting 主语是it，故用interesting。4.So But 根据上下文逻辑关系可知此处显然存在转折关系，故用But。5.去掉a lot后的of 此处并不是表“很多”，而a lot放在比较级前表“得多”的意思，故去掉of。6.在few前加a 根据后面的but not many可知此处应该是指“有一些”，而不是“few(几乎没有)”，故在few前加a。7.there h

19、ere 作者是介绍自己的家乡，要用here才符合逻辑。8.working work 由固定词组used to do意为“过去曾经”可知。9.shuts shut 由后面的a year ago可知要用过去时。10.languages language 通常名词作定语不用复数形式。coast n.海岸used to 过去曾经shut down 倒闭gift shop 礼品店lose ones job 失业has a population of 有人口(六)Dear dad and mum,I have been very happy in the school.I work hardly in t

20、he school every day.After class,I play with my classmates.I spend a lot time doing my homework.ofhardAfter lunch,I play the ping-pong with my friends.Then,I spend some time read my English note.At six oclock,I have my evening class.After that,I had some spare time.At eight oclock,I go to bed.havenot

21、esreadingThis is a day in the school.Mum,you always tell us “Happiness is vital of our life.”And I want to be happy every day.If you are not happy,call me please or if I am not happy,I will call you either.Yours,LauratooSoinme(六)Laura给自己的父母写信，谈到在学校的学习和生活情况。1.hardly hard 根据语境可知，此处理应是指“努力学习”，hard本身就是副

22、词，意为“努力地”，而hardly意为“几乎不”，显然不符合上下文逻辑。2.在a lot后加of 由固定短语a lot of意为“很多”可知。3.去掉ping-pong前的the 在表示“打球”时，在球类名词前不加任何冠词。4.read reading 由固定结构spend time(in)doing sth.意为“花费时间做某事”可知。5.note notes 因note是可数名词，此处应用复数，意为“笔记”。6.had have 因此处讲的是“规律性的动作”，故用一般现在时。7.us me 根据上下文逻辑可知，此处应该是指“你经常告诉我”，故用me。8.of in 因表“在生活当中”常用介

23、词in。9.And So 根据两句间的逻辑关系可知，此处显然存在因果关系，故用So。10.either too 在肯定句中用too，表“我也”。vital adj.至关重要的after that 之后spare time 空闲时间spend time(in)doing sth.花费时间做某事(七)Tommy has a little dog.Her name is Goldier.She is pretty and interested.Tommy loved her very much.The other day,Goldier was out walking with Tommy.love

24、sinterestingShe cut her paw on a piece of glasses.When they arrived at home,Tommys mother thought that the cut was deeply.He asked Tommy to take Goldier the vet.toShedeepglassThe vet was very kind,but he gave her a injection.Then he stitched up(缝合)the cut and put on a bandage.Goldier looks so funny

25、as she walks on three legs,holds her paw as if she has been to war!holdinganand(七)本文介绍了Tommy的一只可爱的小狗(Goldier)。1.interested interesting 形容小狗(是物)有趣，用interesting。2.loved loves 主语是Tommy，谓语要用第三人称单数。3.glasses glass 因glass作“玻璃”理解时是不可数名词。4.去掉arrived后的at 此处home是副词，arrived后面不加at。5.deeply deep 作表语要用形容词。6.He Sh

26、e 此处指Tommys mother，故要用she。7.在the vet前加to 由固定搭配taketo意为“把带去”可知。8.but and 表顺承关系用并列连词and。9.a an 句中injection以元音音素开头，前面的不定冠词要用an。10.holds holding 分析句子成分可知，此处hold是非谓语，与逻辑主语Goldier存在主动关系，故要用现在分词，作伴随状语。paw n.爪子cut n.伤口vet n.兽医injection n.注射；打针put on a bandage 绑上绷带has been to war 参加过战争(八)Long ago people used

27、 bells more than they did today.The postmen was used to ring a hand bell when they delivered letters.Fire engines had bells instead sirens(警笛).ofdoPeople which sold things came past houses,rang a bell and shouting what was for sale.In many country,bells were hung around thenecks of animals.The bells

28、 helped owners find lost cows or sheep.countriesringingwhoToday,at India,animals still wear bells.Now bells are used less because various modern sound-makers have taken its place.Now people try to keep the old bells in schools and churches but that they wont lose their beautifully sounds forever.bea

29、utifulsotheirin(八)本文介绍了铃在生活中的使用。1.did do 由后面的today可知用一般现在时。2.去掉used to前的was 由固定短语used to do意为“过去常常”可知。3.在instead后加of 由固定短语instead of意为“而不是”可知。4.which who 先行词是people(指人)，故要用关系代词who。5.rang ringing 分析句子成分可知，此处ring作非谓语，且与逻辑主语People存在主动关系，故要用现在分词，与后面的shouting构成并列的伴随状语。6.country countries 由前面的many可知要用复数。7.at in 表“在某个国家”要用介词in。8.its their 根据前面的bells可知此处指的是“bells的”，故要用their。9.but so 根据上下文意思可知，此处理应是指“以至于、以便(他们不会)”，故把but改为so，so that引导目的状语从句。10.beautifully beautiful 修饰名词要用形容词。postman n.邮递员；邮差various adj.各种各样的hand bell 手摇铃deliver letters 送信fire engines 消防车for sale 出售take ones place 取代某人come past 从一旁经过