山东省淄博市淄川中学2017-2018学年高一下学期第一次月考英语试题 WORD版含解析.doc

1、淄川中学高一阶段性检测英语试卷(时间：90分钟 分值：100分 )第卷第一部分 听力(共两节, 每小题1分，满分20分)第一节（共5小题；每小题1分，满分5分）听下面5段对话。每段对话后有一个小题，从每题所给的A、B、C三个选项中选出最佳选项，并标在试卷的相应位置。听完每段对话后，你都有10秒钟的时间来回答有关小题和阅读下一小题。每段对话仅读一遍。1. Where are the two speakers probably?A. In a store B. In a supermarket C. In a post office【答案】C【解析】此题为听力题，解析略。2. Whom did T

2、om spend two days playing with?A. His kids B. Homeless kids C. Kids of his neighbors【答案】B【解析】此题为听力题，解析略。3. What is the womans grandmas birthday gift?A. A dress B. A ring C. A jacket【答案】B【解析】此题为听力题，解析略。4. Where does the woman want to have dinner?A. At the Blue Moon RestaurantB. At the Red Rose Restau

3、rantC. At the mans house【答案】A【解析】此题为听力题，解析略。5. How much is the furniture?A. $1,305 B. $1,450 C. $1,595【答案】A【解析】此题为听力题，解析略。第二节（共15小题；每小题1分，满分15分）听下面5段对话或独白。每段对话或独白后有几个小题，从题中所给的A、B、C三个选项中选出最佳选项，并标在试卷的相应位置。听每段对话或独白前，你将有时间阅读各个小题，每小题5秒钟；听完后，各小题给出5秒钟的作答时间。每段对话或独白读两遍。听下面一段较长对话，回答以下小题。6. What day is it toda

4、y?A. Tuesday B. Wednesday C. Friday7. What will Mike do the day after tomorrow?A. Deal with his work B. Go to a move C. Have supper with the woman【答案】6. B 7. A6. 此题为听力题，解析略。7. 此题为听力题，解析略。听下面一段较长对话，回答以下小题。 8. What did the man do last night?A. Watch a new play B. Read an interesting book C. Attend a s

5、ocial event9. How does the woman feel like the football game?A. Boring B. Exciting C. Just so-so【答案】8. A 9. B【解析】此题为听力题，解析略。8. 此题为听力题，解析略。9. 此题为听力题，解析略。听下面一段较长对话，回答以下小题。 10. What are the speaker going to do?A. Have a jog B. Play badminton C. Go to work11. What did the speakers buy yesterday?A. Sport

6、swear B. Jogging shoes C. Caps12. Whats the probable relationship between the speakers?A. Coach and sportswoman B. Teacher and student C. Husband and wife【答案】10. A 11. B 12. C【解析】此题为听力题，解析略。10. 此题为听力题，解析略。11. 此题为听力题，解析略。12. 此题为听力题，解析略。听下面一段较长对话，回答以下小题。 13. What should a parent do if he misses the ap

7、plication deadline?A. He can apply as a “late”B. He can only apply next yearC. He can contact the headmaster14. What kind of students can get transportation?A. Those living I mile awayB. Those living 2 miles awayC. Those living 3 miles away15. Whats the directors telephone number?A. 310-218-1452 B.

8、310-280-1452 C. 310-280-150116. What does the womans child like?A. Music B. Sports C. Reading【答案】13. A 14. C 15. B 16. A【解析】此题为听力题，解析略。13. 此题为听力题，解析略。14. 此题为听力题，解析略。15. 此题为听力题，解析略。16. 此题为听力题，解析略。听下面一段独白，回答以下小题。 17. What did the speaker want to buy?A. Some postcards B. Some envelopes C. Some stamps18

9、. Who was in front of the speaker when she was in the first line?A. An old woman B. A businessman C. A schoolboy19. How was the second line?A. It moved without any stop B. It was three times longer C. It moved faster at first20. What happened in the end?A. The post office was closedB. The clerk clos

10、ed his windowC. The speaker missed her lunch【答案】17. C 18. A 19. C 20. B【解析】此题为听力题，解析略。17. 此题为听力题，解析略。18. 此题为听力题，解析略。19. 此题为听力题，解析略。20. 此题为听力题，解析略。第二部分 阅读理解（共两节，满分40分）第一节 （共15小题；每小题2分，满分30分）阅读下列短文，从每题所给的四个选项（A、B、C和D）中，选出最佳选项，并在答题卡上将该项涂黑。ARecently we made a survey and asked a large number of people to

11、 tell us about their teachers. Here is what they remembered about their teachers:“What teachers do I remember? Well, I remember my first teacher. She was so kind and pretty, and she told us many interesting stories.”“I remember an English teacher he always had colored socks: red, green, even orange.

12、”“I remember a math teacher. She always dressed very well. I couldnt stop looking at her. I wanted to be like her.”“Our chemistry teacher. He was so strict. We were afraid of him. I dont think he liked us.”“The physics teacher was so boring. He could make us fall asleep very quickly!”“One year we ha

13、d a really good Chinese language teacher. He was very patient and told very funny stories. He was popular with all the class. We always worked hard for him. We are his friends.”“The PE teacher always said I was stupid. I thought teachers should give us encouragement. I am not interested in sports be

14、cause of him.”“I had one history teacher who always wore clothes of the same color. During the three years, I never saw him change.”“I remember two teachers well. One was my music teacher who was very active, and usually had a loud voice. The other was my computer teacher who was very serious, but h

15、e really helped me when I had problems at any time.”21. _teachers are mentioned in the passage.A. 7 B. 8 C. 9 D. 1022. Whats the math teacher like?A. She was very boring. B. She always had colored socks.C. She was so kind and pretty. D. She always dressed very well.23. Which of the following is NOT

16、TRUE according to the passage?A. Students didnt like the physics teachers class.B. The PE teacher didnt know the importance of the encouragement.C. The music teacher was very quiet.D. The Chinese language teacher was loved by his students.【答案】21. D 22. D 23. C【解析】本文是一次调查，让人们回忆他们的老师。21. 计算题。通过数数，可知文中

17、一共提到了十位老师，选D。22. 细节理解题。由“I remember a math teacher. She always dressed very well. I couldnt stop looking at her. I wanted to be like her.”可知文中提到的这位数学老师总是穿得很好，选D。23. 细节理解题。由One was my music teacher who was very active, and usually had a loud voice.可知文中提到的这位音乐老师非常活跃，所以说这位音乐老师很安静的表述是错误的，选C。BI drove to

18、a local supermarket one day. My shopping list was long and my wallet was light. Still, I needed to get a weeks worth of groceries for my family. I parked my car, looked down at my list, and hoped I could afford it all.As I approached the door, I saw an old man with kind eyes and a gentle smile. He s

19、aid he was collecting for a local food bank. He handed me a second shopping list and asked if I could help them. I smiled back, took the list and walked into the store. I really wanted to help but wasnt sure whether I could this time.I walked through the store, getting what I needed. When I looked d

20、own at my full cart I wondered again if I even had enough to pay for it all. Then as I put my own list back into my pocket I remembered the food bank list under it. I smiled. I went over and picked up two of the biggest boxes of rice for the food bank. It took another six dollars out of my wallet, b

21、ut my heart felt six times larger when I did it. And when everything was totaled, I had just enough to pay.It takes so little to make our world a better place. A few dollars can help to fill a childs hungry belly. A smile and hug can help to heal a hurting heart. An encouraging word can inspire some

22、one else to live and to love. A random（偶然的）act of kindness can change anothers day and life. It is up to you, though. You can think only of yourself and those close to you while saving a few bucks on rice.24. We can learn from the first two paragraphs that_.A. the author drove to the local supermark

23、et every dayB. the old man was actually begging for food for himselfC. the author didnt take much money with him that dayD. the author had no interest in the old man25. When the author took the list given by the old man, he_ .A. thought highly of the old mans behaviorB. refused to take the shopping

24、list to the storeC. wasnt sure if he could help himD. decided to give him a hand at once26. Which of the following statements does the author probably agree with?A. Nothing but smiles can help heal a hurting heart.B. It actually takes so little for us to make a difference to others.C. Our world woul

25、d be poor without kindness and help.D. It is important for us to think of those who are in great need of rice.27. What would be the best title for this passage?A. A Pleasant Shopping ExperienceB. An Old BeggarC. A Long Shopping ListD. A Small Act of Kindness【答案】24. C 25. C 26. B 27. D【解析】这篇文章通过作者的亲身

26、经历说明了这样一个道理：我们小小的一个善举，就会让我们的世界变得更美好。24. 细节理解题。由I parked my car, looked down at my list, and hoped I could afford it all.可知那天，作者身上带的钱不多，选C。25. 细节理解题。由I really wanted to help but wasnt sure whether I could this time.可知当作者拿着那位老人给的购物清单时，他不确定他是否能够提供帮助，选C。26. 细节理解题。由It takes so little to make our world a

27、better place.可知作者会同意这样的观点：我们只需要付出一小点，就可以让别人有所不同，选B。27. 主旨大意题。这篇文章通过作者的亲身经历说明了这样一个道理：我们小小的一个善举，就会让我们的世界变得更美好，选D。CIt doesnt matter when or how much a person sleeps, but everyone needs some rest to stay alive. Thats what all doctors thought, until they heard about Al Herpin. Al Herpin, it was said, nev

28、er slept. Could this be true? The doctors decided to see this strange man themselves.Al Herpin was 90 years old when the doctors came to his home in New Jersey. They thought for sure that he got some sleep of some kind. So they stayed with him and watched every movement he made. But they were surpri

29、sed. Though they watched him hour after hour and day after day, they never saw Herpin sleeping. In fact, he did not even own a bed. He never needed one.The only rest that Herpin sometimes got was sitting in a comfortable chair and reading newspapers. The doctors were puzzled by this strange continuo

30、us sleeplessness. They found only one answer that might explain his condition. Herpin remembered some talk about his mother having been injured several days before he was born. But that was all. Was this the real reason? No one could be sure. Herpin died at the age of 94.28. The main idea of this pa

31、ssage is that_A. a person was found who actually didnt need any sleepB. large numbers of people do not need sleepC. everyone needs some sleep to stay aliveD. people can live longer by trying not to sleep29. The doctors came to visit Herpin, expecting to_A. cure him of his sleeplessnessB. find a way

32、to free people from the need of sleepingC. find that his sleeplessness was not really trueD. find out why some old people didnt need any sleep30. After watching him closely, the doctors came to believe that Al Herpin_A. was too old to need any sleep B. needed no sleep at allC. often slept in a chair

33、 D. needed some kind of sleep31. One reason that might explain Herpins sleeplessness was _A. that he hadnt got a bedB. that he had gradually got tired of the sleeping habitC. his mothers injury before he was bornD. his magnificent physical condition【答案】28. A 29. C 30. B 31. C【解析】试题分析：28. A 主旨大意题。本文讨

34、论的是一个不睡觉的人Herpin。故A正确。29. C 细节题。根据第一段最后一句Could this be true ? The doctors decided to see this strange man themselves.说明他们来看他，是想知道他是不是真的一直不睡觉。故C正确。30. B 细节题。根据第二段3,4行But they were surprised. Though they watched him hour after hour and day after day. They never saw Herpin sleeping.说明B正确。他真的不睡觉。31. C 细

35、节题。根据文章最后一段3,4,5行They found only one answer that might explain his condition. Herpin remembered some talk about his mother having been injured several days before he was born.说明C是唯一的解释。考点：考查新闻类短文阅读点评：本文讨论的是一个不睡觉的人Herpin，并分析了原因。文章内容比较简单，集中考查细节题，要求考生在阅读的时候关键点上做好标志与符号，减少做题时的找读的次数，提高阅读的效率。DWhen you come

36、 to London for a trip, its best to plan a day out so as to maximize（最大化）the number of things yon can see. Time permitting，we can offer advice by e-mail if theres anything you particularly want to see.If you are only in London for a day, a weekend or a week, use our SHORT STAY pages where we show you

37、 how to fill as much into your days as possible.The best season to come is late Summer or Autumn recently we have been having Indian Summers （秋季的小阳春天气）from mid-September to the end of October with clear blue skies and 20 degree temperatures. Finally the weather breaks as the storm fronts move in off

38、 the Atlantic, then clears up for Christmas. February to April can be terrible, and the weather is very unpredictable. Ask the Meteorological office here for facts and figures but they are so often wrong.When its raining there are plenty of museums and galleries to visit and the tube（地铁）system is ge

39、nerally very good outside of rush hour.Its best for you to be near a tube station when choosing a hotel, because buses can be slow and unreliable（不可靠的）and taxis expensive. The yellow circle line on the tube map marks the division（分界线）between central and not-so-central London. Outside of that area yo

40、ur transport bill will rise. The best restaurants are in Islington and the southwest of London which is where the life is.32. The Meteorological office in the third paragraph is a place where_A. people can know what London is likeB. people can get information about tourismC. people can know what the

41、 weather is likeD. people can get information about transportation33. When considering where to live, visitors need to pay more attention to_in London.A. the traffic B. the living conditionC. the food D. the price34. Which of the following statements is NOT TRUE?A. There are many museums and galleri

42、es in London.B. The tube system in London is very good at any time.C. One can get more information by sending e mail.D. Autumn is the best season for visiting London.35. The passage is mainly written for those who_ .A. are going to serve as tour guidesB. are planning to live in LondonC. are going to

43、 visit LondonD. are going to work in London【答案】32. C 33. A 34. B 35. C【解析】这篇文章主要讲了去伦敦旅行时，游客们有哪些需要注意和准备的事情。32. 词义猜测题。第三自然段主要讲了伦敦的天气状况，所以可猜出Meteorological office指的是气象局办公室，选C。33. 细节理解题。由Its best for you to be near a tube station when choosing a hotel, because buses can be slow and unreliable（不可靠的）and t

44、axis expensive.可知当游客们选择住处的时候，需要更加关注伦敦的交通，选A。34. 细节理解题。由and the tube（地铁）system is generally very good outside of rush hour.可知除去上下班高峰期，伦敦的地铁系统非常好，所以B的表述是错误的。35. 推理判断题。由When you come to London for a trip, its best to plan a day out so as to maximize（最大化）the number of things yon can see. Time permitting

45、，we can offer advice by e-mail if theres anything you particularly want to see.可推断出这篇文章主要是写给即将去伦敦旅行的游客的，选C。【名师点睛】直接信息题，对于此类题型，考生可以首先从问题中找到关键词，然后以此为线索，运用略读及查阅的技巧在文中迅速寻找这一细节，找到后再把这一部分内容仔细阅读一遍，仔细比较所给选项与文中细节的细微区别，在准确理解细节的前提下，最后确定最佳答案。例如：小题3细节理解题。由and the tube（地铁）system is generally very good outside of

46、rush hour.可知除去上下班高峰期，伦敦的地铁系统非常好，所以B的表述是错误的。第二节（共5小题；每小题2分，满分10 分）根据短文内容，从短文后的选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项。选项中有两项为多余选项。You cannot choose your childs friends for him, but you can help him learn to choose friends wisely. _36_ Here are a few ways to help your child make friends.Build your childs selfconfidence.When

47、 he succeed or has made a great choice, tell him youre proud of him. _37_ Your middle school student is going through many changes and may feel like he isnt “good enough”. Building his selfconfidence will help him feel more confident and will make it easier for him to form healthy friendships._38_Gi

48、ve him your full attention when he talks, and really listen to what he has to say.Discuss the qualities in a friend with your child.Discuss with your child the qualities that matter most, such as being reliable and kind, and making good choices when it comes to avoiding alcohol and tobacco.Get to kn

49、ow your childs friends._39_ Its more important to talk with them and find out what they like to do. Allow your child to invite his friends over and get to know them better._40_Afterschool clubs and sports programs are good places for meeting new people. Be open to exploring different activities with

50、 your child to find something that he enjoys.AFriends are very important for us.BIntroduce your child to new groups of people.CTalk with your child every day and listen to his concerns.DTry not to judge your childs friends based on how they dress.EWhen he does not succeed, help him feel better and k

51、eep trying.FYou can teach him ways to find friends who will have a positive influence on him.GThere are many types of friends and we should be careful when making our choices.【答案】36. F 37. E 38. C 39. D 40. B【解析】本文针对如何帮助自己的孩子选择朋友这一问题，给家长们提出了一些建议。36. 考查语义理解。这篇文章是总分结构，文章第一段是全文的总结。第一句中提到你可以帮助孩子学会明智地选择朋

52、友，该空则应当点明你可以教给孩子一些方法以帮助他找到对他有积极影响的朋友(即F项)，从而引出下文中的具体建议和方法。故选F。37. 考查语义理解。上一句中讲到了当孩子取得了成功或做出了明智的选择时家长应该怎么做，该句应当顺承上文，介绍当孩子没有取得成功时家长应当怎么做，故选E项。38. 考查语义理解。根据该小标题下的一句可知，本段中给出的建议是要多跟孩子交谈，注意倾听孩子的心声。C项(每天都要和孩子交谈并倾听他所关心的事)符合本段的主旨。39. 考查语义理解。本段的标题是多了解孩子的朋友。D项(不要从孩子朋友们的穿着来判断他们)符合本段的主旨。40. 考查语义理解。最后一段中提到要让孩子多参加

53、课外俱乐部和体育活动，使孩子通过参加不同的活动认识新的朋友。所以这一段的标题应该是介绍你的孩子去新的人群，故选B。第三部分 完形填空（共20小题；每小题1分，满分20分）阅读下面短文，从短文后各题所给的四个选项（A、B、C和D）中，选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项，并在答题卡上将该项涂黑。An eightyearold child heard her parents talking about her little brother. All she knew was that he was very sick and they had no money left. When she heard h

54、er daddy say to her _41_mother with desperation(绝望)，“_42_ a miracle(奇迹) can save him now.” the little girl went to her bedroom and took out her piggy bank. She _43_all the change out on the floor and counted it carefully. Then she _44_her way six blocks to the local drugstore(药店).“And what do you wa

55、nt？” asked the chemist.“Its _45_ my little brother，” the girl answered back. “Hes really, really sick and I want to buy a _46_. His name is Andrew and he has something _47_ growing inside his head and my daddy says only a miracle can save him.”“We dont _48_miracles here, child. Im sorry，” the chemis

56、t said, smiling _49_ at the little girl. In the shop was a _50_ customer. He stooped(弯腰) down and asked the little girl, “What kind of miracle does your brother _51_？”“I dont know，” she replied. “Hes really sick and daddy says he needs a(n) _52_. But my daddy cant pay for it, so I have brought my _5

57、3_”“How much do you have？” asked the man.“One dollar and eleven cents，_54_I can try and get some more，” she answered quietly.“Well, what a coincidence(巧合)，” smiled the man. “A dollar and eleven centsthe _55_price of a miracle for your little brother. _56_me to where you live. I want to see your brot

58、her and _57_ your parents.”That welldressed man was Dr. Carlton Armstrong, a surgeon. The operation in the hospital was completed without _58_ and it wasnt long before Andrew was _59_again and doing well.The little girl was happy. She knew exactly how much the miracle costone dollar and eleven cents

59、 plus the _60_of a little child.41. A. helpful B. hopeful C. tearful D. kind42. A. Simple B. Just C. More than D. Only43. A. pulled B. put C. poured D. drew44. A. followed B. made C. took D. found45. A. to B. for C. as D. on46. A. hope B. doctor C. favor D. miracle47. A. bad B. small C. extra D. imp

60、ossible48. A. have B. offer C. store D. sell49. A. gently B. coldly C. sadly D. strangely50. A. well-behaved B. good-lookingC. kindhearted D. well-dressed51. A. have B. need C. care D. like52. A. doctor B. surgeon C. kindness D. operation53. A. savings B. wishes C. ideas D. suggestions54. A. since B

61、. as C. but D. after55. A. same B. proper C. exact D. necessary56. A. Show B. Follow C. Help D. Take57. A. persuade B. encourage C. meet D. help58. A. difficulty B. doubt C. charge D. result59. A. well B. home C. happy D. strong60. A. courage B. cleverness C. devotion D. faith【答案】41. C 42. D 43. C 4

62、4. B 45. B 46. D 47. A 48. D 49. C 50. D 51. B 52. D 53. A 54. C 55. C 56. D 57. C 58. C 59. B 60. D【解析】这篇文章讲述了一个小女孩的弟弟病得很严重，而家里支付不起治疗的手术费。当她听说只有奇迹才能救弟弟时，她拿着自己所有的钱到要点去买奇迹。她说不管多少钱只要能救弟弟就行。她的行为感动了一位著名的医生，他帮小女孩的弟弟免费做了手术，创造了奇迹。41. C考查形容词。由with whispered desperation（绝望），可判断出她的母亲一定是泪眼婆娑的。helpful 有帮助的，hope

63、ful 有希望的，tearful流泪的， kind和蔼的。42. D考查语境理解。现在只有奇迹能救他。Simple 简单的，Just 刚刚，More than 超出，only只有。43. C考查动词。由all the change out on the floor and counted it carefully. 可判断出这个小女孩把小猪存钱罐里的所有钱，都倒出来。pulled 拉， put 放，poured 倾倒， drew描绘。44. B考查固定短语。然后她走了六个街区，到达当地的一家药店。make ones way前进，行进, 是固定短语。45. B考查介词。这个女孩回答：“为了我弟弟

64、。” 表示“为了”，用for。46. D考查名词。由His name is Andrew and he has something_7_growing inside his head and my daddy says only a miracle can save him.” 判断出这个女孩想要买奇迹。hope 希望doctor医生，favour 偏爱， miracle奇迹。47. A考查形容词。他有一些不好的东西长在他的头里。bad 不好的， small 小的， extra 额外的， impossible不可能的。48. D考查动词。孩子，我们这里不卖奇迹。get 获得， offer 提供

65、， store 储存， sell卖。49. C考查副词。由“We dont_8_miracles here, child. Im sorry,” the chemist said, 判断出这名药剂师虽然在微笑，但是却很悲伤。gently 温柔地， coldly 不友好地， sadly 悲哀地，strangely奇怪地。50. D 考查形容词。由下文内容That well dressed man was Dr Carlton Armstrong, a surgeon. 可知这名顾客是一位非常有名的外科医生，所以他的穿着打扮一定是比较好。wellbehaved 循规蹈矩的，goodlooking

66、好看的， kindhearted 心地善良的，welldressed打扮得很漂亮。51. B考查动词。你的弟弟需要什么样的奇迹？have 有，need 需要， care关心， like喜欢。52. D 考查名词。由The operation in the hospital was completed without_18_判断出她弟弟病得很厉害，并且妈妈说他需要做一个手术。doctor 医生， surgeon 外科医生， kindness仁慈， operation手术。53. A 考查名词。由But my daddy cant pay for it, 可知这句话意思是所以我把自己的积蓄拿出来。

67、savings 积蓄， wishes 愿望，ideas 观点， suggestions建议。54. C考查连词。“1美元11美分，但是我可以尝试获得更多。” 这个小女孩平静地回答。since 自从， as 因为，but 但是， after在之后。55. C考查形容词。由“Well, what a coincidence（巧合）,” smiled the man.可判断出这里意思是，“1美元11美分正是为你弟弟购买奇迹的准确价格。” 这位男士微笑的说。same 相同的， proper适当的， exact 准确的，necessary必要的。56. D考查固定用法。带我到你住的地方。take sb.

68、 to some place带某人去某地，是固定用法。57. C考查动词。我想看你的弟弟并且见你的父母。persuade 劝说， encourage 鼓励， meet 见面， help帮助。58. C考查名词。医院的这台手术完全免费。difficulty 困难，doubt 怀疑，charge 费用， result结果。59. B考查形容词。没过多久，Andrew就回家了。well 好的， home 回家， happy 高兴的，strong强壮的。60. D考查名词。她知道这个奇迹的价格是1美元11美分，外加一个小孩儿的信念。courage 勇气，cleverness 聪明， devotion

69、奉献， faith信念。名师点睛：完形填空题的设置，经常会考查学生捕捉关键词的能力。解答完型填空题时，有时候单独看一句话是找不到正确答案的，需要阅读下句或者若干句才能明白。所谓上下对照，即在上文和下文中找到与正确答案相同的关键词。因此，在做题时要边读边在大脑中储存上下文信息的能力，捕捉关键词。比如小题6，联系上下文的内容，可知这个小女孩想要买奇迹，所以选D。第四部分 写作（满分20分）61. 假定你是李华，你的朋友彼得热衷于追求新款手机并经常更换。请你给他写一封信进行劝导，内容如下：1. 新产品价格较高；2. 占用太多时间；3. 合理对待手机。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节

70、，以使行文连贯；3. 开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。Dear Peter,Being one of your best friends, Id like to share some ideas on cellphones with you._Yours.Li Hua【答案】Dear Peter,Being one of your best friends, Id like to share some ideas on cellphones with you. As far as I know, you are always showing great interest in the fashi

71、onable cellphones and changing them frequently.In my opinion, the latest style cellphones are expensive and changing them too often can cause a large expense for your family. Whats more, new cellphones will take you too much time. In that case, you wont focus on your study. Some teenagers think its

72、cool to own a latest style cellphone. However, you cant benefit more from it because its just a tool of communication or amusement. So I think you should pay more attention to your study and life.I hope will adopt my advice.Yours,Li Hua 【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的短语，为文章增色不少，如: As far as I know据我所知，In my opinion依我看来。还使用了宾语从句Some teenagers think its cool to own a latest style cellphone.和宾语从句So I think you should pay more attention to your study and life.等多种句式结构，增加了文章的可读性。