《创新设计》2017届高考英语二轮复习（全国通用）训练：第四部分 专题一 短文改错第1课时 WORD版含解析.doc

1、高考资源网（） 您身边的高考专家题组一体验真题Passage 1假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。(2016全国卷)My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live.Though n

2、ot very big，but the Restaurant is popular in our area .It is always crowded with customers at meal times.Some People even had to wait outside.My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest.Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking.My uncle says

3、that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time.Instead，he hopes that our business will grow steady.答案My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to I live.Though not very big， the Restaurant is popular in our area.It is always crowded with customers at meal times.Some people even to

4、wait outside.My uncle tells me that the key to his success is .Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables high quality oil are for cooking.My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in short period of time.Instead，he hopes that business will grow .1.thatwhere考查宾语从句的连词用法。由句子结构可知，介词to之后为宾语从句。

5、从句谓语是不及物动词live。故用where引导。2.去掉but考查从属连词与并列连词。从属连词though不可与并列连词but连用。3.had have考查语境中的时态运用。根据上下文语境可知此处要用一般现在时。4.honest honesty考查名词作表语。由句意“他成功的关键是诚信”可知应当用名词形式。5.orand考查并列连词的用法。根据句意可知二者之间为并列关系而非选择关系。6.usingused考查固定短语的用法。be used for“用来做”，为固定短语。7.在dreams之后加上of或about考查短语动词。固定短语dream of/about (doing) sth.的意思

6、是“梦想做某事”。8.thea考查代词的用法。in a short period of time为固定词组，意思是“短时间内”。9.ourhis考查冠词的用法。短文介绍了my uncle诚信经营餐馆的事情，故将our改为his。10.steadysteadily考查副词的用法。修饰谓语动词用副词。Passage 2假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写

7、出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。(2015全国卷)When I was a child，I hoped to live in the city.I think I would be happy there.Now I am living in a city，but I miss my home in countryside.There the air is clean or the mountains are green.Unfortunately，on the development of industrializatio

8、n，the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem.The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier.Much rare animals are dying out.We must found ways to protect your environment.If we fail to do so，well live to re

9、gret it.答案When I was a child，I hoped to live in the city.I I would be happy there.Now I am living in a city，but I miss my home in countryside.There the air is clean the mountains are green.Unfortunately， the development of industrialization，the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies have show

10、n that global warming has already become a very problem.The we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. rare animals are dying out.We must ways to protect environment.If we fail to do so，well live to regret it.题组二尝试模拟假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在

11、缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Passage 1(2016河北唐山模拟)It was a year ago when Joshua got a bike for Christmas，but he rode it every day.One morning，he suddenly found the bike gone.Ran to his front yard，he saw a man loading

12、it into his car.He shouted，but the man drive off.As a devoted Christian，he told his dad he real forgave the thief.Whats more，he wanted the thief know he was forgiven.So the next day，he posted the message on a posterboard and put it in the front yard.“To the person who stole my bike：You hurt my feeli

13、ng.But I am a Christian and I forgive him！” When he left for home the next morning，at the end of the driveway，the bike was back with new brakes.答案It was a year ago Joshua got a bike for Christmas， he rode it every day.One morning，he suddenly found the bike gone. to his front yard，he saw a man loadin

14、g it into his car.He shouted，but the man off.As a devoted Christian，he told his dad he forgave the thief.Whats more，he wanted the thief know he was forgiven.So the next day，he posted message on a posterboard and put it in the front yard.“To the person who stole my bike：You hurt my .But I am a Christ

15、ian and I forgive ！” When he left home the next morning，at the end of the driveway，the bike was back with new brakes.Passage 2(2016黑龙江哈三中测试)Dear Li Hua，Im familiar to your situation.As computers become more and more popular，some students cannot help play online games and chatting.It is not only a pr

16、oblem of wasting time，but serious problem for their future！What you should do at first is to find out what make her addicted to computer games.Lack of love from parents？Poor score？Then having a hearttoheart talk with her.Secondly，you should help herself with her study to build up her confidence and

17、make her interesting in it.Thirdly，find something else for her to do instead computer games.Your efforts will surely help change her life.Yours，Jack答案Dear Li Hua，Im familiar your situation.As computers become more and more popular，some students cannot help online games and chatting.It is not only a

18、problem of wasting time，but serious problem for their future！What you should do first is to find out what her addicted to computer games.Lack of love from parents？Poor ？Then a hearttoheart talk with her.Secondly，you should help with her study to build up her confidence and make her in it.Thirdly，fin

19、d something else for her to do instead computer games.Your efforts will surely help change her life.Yours，JackPassage 3(2016吉林长春调研)Mr.Zhang is sixty years old and had retired.He taught our biology when we were in Grade One.He taught very good.He tried his best to make his classes lively.He usually m

20、ade good preparations for the lessons and was strict in us.Each time when we made mistakes in our homework，he would ask us to correct it.I was poor in biology.He often helps me with my study patiently.With his help I made great progresses.He was very kind to his students.As experienced teacher，he wa

21、s respected or loved by all the students.答案Mr.Zhang is sixty years old and retired.He taught biology when we were in Grade One.He taught very .He tried his best to make his classes lively.He usually made good preparations for the lessons and was strict us.Each time we made mistakes in our homework，h

22、e would ask us to correct .I was poor in biology.He often me with my study patiently.With his help I made great .He was very kind to his students.As experienced teacher，he was respected loved by all the students.Passage 4(2016宁夏银川一中月考)Dear Peter，Im very glad to receive your email asking for informat

23、ion about the host family we have arranged you to stay with.Locating in a beautiful and quiet neighborhood，the house was big enough to enable you to have a room of your own.Apart from the convenient public transportation，our private car will make your visits difficult.Because all the family members

24、can speak fluently English and have outgoing personalities，Im sure you will have no trouble to communicating with them.Above all，they hosted the American student last year，through that they gained lots of experience.In addition，the hostess cooking will guarantee you a wonderful chance of tasting del

25、icious Chinese food.Hope you enjoy your stay here.Yours，Li Hua答案Dear Peter，Im very glad to receive your email asking for information about the host family we have arranged you to stay with. in a beautiful and quiet neighborhood，the house big enough to enable you to have a room of your own.Apart from

26、 the convenient public transportation， private car will make your visits .Because all the family members can speak English and have outgoing personalities，Im sure you will have no trouble communicating with them.Above all，they hosted American student last year，through they gained lots of experience.

27、In addition，the cooking will guarantee you a wonderful chance of tasting delicious Chinese food.Hope you enjoy your stay here.Yours，Li HuaPassage 5(2016陕西五校一模)Dear Friend，As you got up this morning，I watched you and hoped you would talk to me，asked my opinion or thanking me something good that happe

28、ned in your life yesterday.But I noticed you were too busily.I waited again.When you ran around the house getting ready I knew it would be a few minutes for you to stop and say a hello，but you were too busy.At one point you have to wait fifteen minutes with nothing to do except sitting in a chair.Th

29、en I saw you jump to your foot.I thought you wanted to talk to me and you ran to the phone and calling a friend.Love always.Your Friend，Jesus答案Dear Friend，As you got up this morning，I watched you and hoped you would talk to me， my opinion or thanking me something good that happened in your life yest

30、erday.But I noticed you were too .I waited again.When you ran around the house getting ready I knew would be a few minutes for you to stop and say hello，but you were too busy.At one point you to wait fifteen minutes with nothing to do except in a chair.Then I saw you jump to your .I thought you wanted to talk to me you ran to the phone and a friend.Love always.Your Friend，Jesus高考资源网版权所有，侵权必究！