Unit 1 What’s the matter？-2021-2022学年八年级英语下学期单元话题满分写作（人教版）.docx

1、2021-2022八年级英语下学期单元话题满分写作 Unit 1：Whats the matter？单元话题：talk about health problems “讨论健康问题并给建议”范文11由于新型冠状病毒肺炎(COVID-19)的爆发，几个月来我们不得不待在家里。正因如此，这次疫情教会了我们重新审视自己的习惯，更好地生活。请根据下列提示写一篇80词左右的英语短文，谈谈保持健康的秘诀。短文的开头已给出，但不计入总词数。提示：1. 多锻炼，多喝水，均衡膳食(have a balanced diet)；2. 早睡早起，保持充足的睡眠；3. 多吃蔬菜和水果，健康饮食；4. Because of

2、 the COVID-19, we had to stay at home for months. It taught us to take a second look at our habits and to live better. _【答案】参考范文Because of the COVID-19, we had to stay at home for months. It taught us to take a second look at our habits and to live better. Here are some tips to keep healthy.First, w

3、e should do more exercise and have a balanced diet. Drink more water every day. Second, wed better go to bed early and get up early to keep enough sleep. Third, why not eat more vegetables and fruit every day? As we know, they are good for our health. Whats more, to be healthy, we cant play too much

4、 computer games. We can read more books about health.In a word, there are many ways to make us healthy. You can find some and try them.【详解】题干解读：题目要求写一篇关于保持健康的秘诀的英语短文；要求包含所有提示内容。写作指导：时态以一般现在时为主；采用第一人称。文章可使用3段落格式，第一段：开门见山，引出下文；第二段：描述保持健康的秘诀；第三段：总结全文，保持健康的秘诀很多。范文22你的朋友Jack由于长时间玩电脑游戏，现在头痛、眼睛不舒服、腰背酸痛，并且睡

5、不好觉。请根据上述材料，写一篇80词左右的短文介绍一下他的情况，并给出你对他的建议。_【答案】参考范文Jack is my friend. He likes playing computer games very much. He often sits in the same way for too long without moving. Now he has a headache, sore eyes and a sore back. He doesnt sleep well at night, so he feels tired every day.I think he should t

6、ake breaks away from the computer. He shouldnt use the computer for a long time. He should do eye exercises to relax his eyes and go to bed early at night.I think if he has a good rest, he will feel well soon.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示内容介绍Jack的情况，并针对他的问题给出建议。注意要点要齐全，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：写作时要以第三和第一人称来行文，时态用

7、一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段叙述问题；第二段给出建议；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。范文33Mike昨晚头疼，没睡好觉。今天早上去了医院，医生量过他的体温后发现他并没有发烧，只是有点儿感冒。医生给他开了一些药，让他每天吃两次，多喝热水，好好休息。最后，医生建议他每天锻炼身体。请你根据以上信息及下面提示，写一篇不少于80词的短文。提示：1. What is the matter with Mike? 2. How many times does Mike should take the medicine?3. What did the doctor advise him t

8、o do?要求：1. 包含所有提示，可适当发挥；2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。Mike didnt sleep well last night _【答案】范文Mike didnt sleep well last night because he had a headache. His father took him to the hospital this morning. After taking his temperature, the doctor told him that there was nothing serious. He didnt have a fever, but h

9、ad a little cold. Then the doctor gave him some medicine and asked him to take it twice a day. The doctor also told him that he should drink more hot water and have a good rest.At last, the doctor advised him to do more exercise every day because exercising will help him stay healthy. I hope he will

10、 be better soon.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。题目要求是根据所给信息和提示，写一篇不少于80词的短文。要包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥；短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。2.写作指导：本文人称主要以第三人称为主，时态主要是一般过去时。首先要认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点，围绕主题展开作文；根据提示要点，列出本文的写作提纲，提纲包括所有提示要点。然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意时态、主谓一致等问题，不要出现语法错误；最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。范文44假如你是王朋，你在美国的笔友杰克(Jack)来信告诉你说他总是觉得很疲惫，导致上课不能集中精力听讲。请根

11、据参考词汇写一封不少于80词的回信，向他提一些建议。信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：should, help, exercise, keep healthy, sleep, tryDear Jack, I am sorry to hear that you often feel tired. Let me give you some advice. _Yours, Wang Peng【答案】参考范文Dear Jack, I am sorry to hear that you often feel tired. Let me give you some advice. First

12、you should eat breakfast every morning. Eating breakfast can help you study well. Then you should do more exercise after school. Doing exercise can make you keep healthy. It is also very important to sleep eight or nine hours a night. Good sleep can make you feel good and study well in the day. Try

13、to have a healthy lifestyle and then you can study well.Yours, Wang Peng【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于书信作文。题目要求是假如你是王朋，请你根据参考词汇，给在美国的笔友杰克(Jack) 写一封不少于80词的回信，关于他总是觉得很疲惫，导致上课不能集中精力听讲的问题，向他提一些建议。信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。2.写法指导：这是一篇应用文，注意信件的格式。本文给出了一些参考词汇，并给出了作文的开头和结尾。我们要做的就是根据要求列出写作要点，用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。然后紧扣要点，动笔

14、写作，在写作过程中，要注意主谓一致等问题，不要出现语法错误；最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。范文55书面表达假如你是Kate，你的朋友Mary病了。请根据下面表格中的提示写一封信，告诉她该做什么，不该做什么。要求：1. 注意书信格式。 2. 70词左右。ShouldShouldntdrink a lot of watergo to bed latehave a good restwork too hardsee a doctorget tired _【答案】Dear Mary,Im sorry to hear youre not feeling well. First, I thing yo

15、u should drink a lot of hot water with honey. Second, dont get tired, and try to relax yourself. Third, you shouldnt go to bed too late or work too hard. You should have a good rest. If you dont get better, you should see a doctor and do as the doctor tells you. I hope you feel better soon.Yours，Kat

16、e【详解】这是一篇给材料作文，要以书信的形式来完成写作，首先要注意书信的格式，其次要根据所提供的要点，选择恰当的句式去组织材料，注意情态动词should, shouldnt后跟动词原形，因为列举的建议较多，为了条理更清晰，可以使用 first，second，third条目来介绍。高分句型一：Im sorry to hear youre not feeling well. 听说你身体不舒服，我很难过。be sorry to do sth很难过做某事，这是不定式表原因。高分句型二：If you dont get better, you should see a doctor and do as t

17、he doctor tells you. 如果你没有好转，你应该去看医生，按照医生告诉你的去做。if引导条件状语从句，时态用一般现在时；see a doctor看医生。范文66书面表达。假如你是Martin，你的笔友Alice在给你的来信中说她经常生病，情绪低落。请你给她写封回信，告诉她应该怎样做。参考词汇: healthy food, do more exercise, enough sleep, keep happy, talk about your problems.要求：1.根据参考词汇，并适当发挥； 2.字数不少于70词，注意字迹工整。Dear Alice,Im sorry to h

18、ear that you are not very well and feel unhappy. _【答案】Dear Alice,Im sorry to hear that you are not very well and feel unhappy. Here is my advice about how to keep healthy. A balanced diet can help you to keep in good health. Youd better eat more healthy food. It is good for you to eat a lot of veget

19、ables, fruit and drink milk every day. And you should do more exercise, such as playing ball games, running, swimming and so on. Good food and exercise will be helpful. You aslo need enough sleep. It is really important. Whats more, keep yourself happy. Try to smile every day. I hope you will be bet

20、ter and enjoy your life.Yours,Martin【详解】根据试题内容可知本文应以一般现在时态为主。文章应灵活采用不同的表达方式将各个要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确，简洁。最后必须认真查验是否有漏写、有无拼写错误及标点误用等。点睛：这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如：keep in good health； such as ；keep yourself happy a lot of,等；而词汇 And，what is more等使文章的表达更富有条理；此外，文章还运用了经典句型： Im sorry to hear.，Youd better.，It is good for sb to do sth.它们使文章增色不少；同时本文语言流畅，内容完整，是一篇不错的范文。