专题06 书面表达-8年（2014-2021）苏州中考英语真题分析.docx

1、2014-2021年苏州中考英语书面表达真题分析【近几年考情分析】年份题量分值考点题型2014120以书面形式完成80/90词左右的英文写作图表信息提示类作文2015120以书面形式完成80/90词左右的英文写作图表信息提示类作文2016120以书面形式完成80/90词左右的英文写作图表信息提示类作文2017120以书面形式完成80/90词左右的英文写作回复邮件回答邮件中问题2018120以书面形式完成80/90词左右的英文写作回复邮件回答邮件中问题2019120以书面形式完成80/90词左右的英文写作回复邮件回答邮件中问题2020120以书面形式完成80/90词左右的英文写作介绍垃圾分类海报

2、的发言稿2021120以书面形式完成80/90词左右的英文写作半命题作文写个人故事型【考点分析】2014年 假设你校为了配合创建文化校园高效课堂活动，最近以学生做作业时是否应该在网上找答案?为题做了一个调查。调查发现一些学生赞成,但许多学生反对这种做法。请你根据调查情况和下列表格中的要点提不，以“Think before you search online”为题用英语写一篇短文。 2015年 为了配合“足球进校园”活动，你们班开展了一次主题班会请你以足球迷的身份，根据下列表格中的要点提示，用英语向同学们介绍足球这项运动并谈谈自己的梦想 2016年 上海迪斯尼乐园于今年6月16日正式开放，许多孩

3、子打算前往游玩假如你是一名乐园的志愿者，请你根据下列表格中的要点提示，用英语向孩子们介绍乐园并提醒他们文明游园2017年 假定你是苏华，你最近认识的英国笔友David给你发了一封电子邮件，想了解你初中三年来在学习和生活方而的一些收获、困惑和感受请认真阅读下面的邮件，根据信中的内容及你的实际用英语回复.2018年 现在，越来越多的外国友人开始关注中国文化。假定你是苏华，你的加拿大笔友Ryan是一个中国迷，他想在中秋期间来中国看看。请认真阅读他写给你的邮件，根据邮件内容及你的了解用英语回复。2019年 假定你是苏华，最近你的澳大利亚笔友Nathan犯了一些错误，倍感懊恼，写了一封邮件向你诉说，为帮

4、助他排解困感，请你根据他的邮件内容并结合自身经历用英语回信开导他2020年 下周一些英国学生将来你校交流学习，他们想了解你校各个俱乐部的情况。假定你是林涛，是学校绿色星球俱乐部的负责人，请你根据你们俱乐部的海报内容，用英语写一篇发言稿来作介绍。2021年 在日常生活中, 冲突难免发生。请以 “A conflict with”为题。用英语写下你与他人（如：家人, 老师, 同学等）或自己内心发生过的冲突故事。故事需包括冲突的发生和解决。【真题详解】2014年苏州中考英语书面表达假设你校为了配合创建文化校园高效课堂活动，最近以学生做作业时是否应该在网上找答案?为题做了一个调查。调查发现一些学生赞成,

5、但许多学生反对这种做法。请你根据调查情况和下列表格中的要点提不，以“Think before you search online”为题用英语写一篇短文。注意：1.词数90左右。短文的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数；2.短文须包括所有要点，不要遂词翻译,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺；3.短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。Think before you search onlineSome students now have a new use for the Internet helping them with their homework. But different people ha

6、ve different ideas about it._【答案】Think before you search onlineSome students now have a new use for the Internet helping them with their homework. But different people have different ideas about it.Some students agree with it. They sometimes dont know the answers to the problems, so they have to tur

7、n to the Internet, They think they can learn from other people. At the same time, its easy and it saves time.However, not all the students welcome this. Many students think simply copying the answers wont improve their abilities and it may make students stop thinking.I think students should first th

8、ink over the problems by themselves. If we use the Internet properly, it could be a good way to study.【解析】本文属于观点型表达的议论文，主体时态为一般现在时，写作时要用正确的句式表达出赞成者和反对者的观点，最后用自己的观点结束全文。可以使用到的高级句式有： 状语从句“If we use the Internet properly, it could be a good way to study.” 转折句“However, not all the students welcome this.

9、”学生写作时要注意最后表达自己的观点时要至少写两点内容出来，观点可以是支持的也可以是反对的，但是一定有言之有理。2015年苏州中考英语书面表达为了配合“足球进校园”活动，你们班开展了一次主题班会请你以足球迷的身份，根据下列表格中的要点提示，用英语向同学们介绍足球这项运动并谈谈自己的梦想常识历史悠久，深受喜爱世界杯4年举行一次好处男生女生皆可参加利于培养团队精神考生自拟（至少1点）偶像梅西，有足球天赋梦想考生自拟（至少1点）注意：（1）词数90左右短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；（2）短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；（3）短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信

10、息参考词汇：梅西 MessiDear classmates，_ 【答案】Dear classmates，Im very excited to hear that China will build 20，000 footballthemed schools by 2020Football has a very long historyIt is liked by people all over the worldThe World Cup takes place every four yearsPlaying football has lots of advantagesFirst，both b

11、oys and girls can take part in itSecond，it helps develop team spiritWhats more，playing football is good for our healthIm a football fanMessi is my heroHe has a gift for playing footballMy dream is to become a famous football player like MessiI hope China will hold the World Cup some dayThank you for

12、 your attention【解析】这是一篇发言稿，发言的主题是“足球进校园”根据图表可知此篇书面表达的内容包括：对足球这样运动的了解；包括足球常识和踢足球的好处，至少要有一条自己的观点；描述自己的偶像梅西；谈论自己的梦想在描述足球和偶像时可用一般现在时态；描述自己的梦想可以用一般将来时态和第一人称。书面表达不同于翻译遇到生词、难句要善于换个角度思考，比如范文中的My dream is to become a famous football player like Messi也可写成：I want to be a famous football player like Messi2016年苏

13、州中考英语书面表达上海迪斯尼乐园于今年6月16日正式开放，许多孩子打算前往游玩假如你是一名乐园的志愿者，请你根据下列表格中的要点提示，用英语向孩子们介绍乐园并提醒他们文明游园上海东部，地铁可达由6个主题公园组成参加活动，欣赏表演购买礼物，观看烟火文明游园不扔垃圾，保持整洁考试自拟（至少2点）注意：1词数90左右短文的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；2短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词解释，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；3短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息参考词汇：theme n主题； firework n烟火Good morning，children!As a volunteer from

14、 Shanghai Disneyland，Id like to say something about the park and tell you how to behave well in itThe park is worth your visitI hope you will have fun【答案】Good morning，children!As a volunteer from Shanghai Disneyland，Id like to say something about the park and tell you how to behave well in it The Di

15、sneyland is in the east of ShanghaiYou can get there by undergroundIts made up of six theme parksYou can join in different kinds of activities there，such as enjoying wonderful musical or plays Also，therere lots of nice presents in the shopping area for you to chooseAt night，you can watch fireworks H

16、owever，its important to behave well in the parkLittering isnt allowedYou should keep the park cleanRemember to wait for your turn anytimeMoreover，its impolite to shout loudly in publicThe park is worth your visitI hope you will have fun【解析】这是一篇图表作文内容是向孩子们介绍乐园并提醒他们文明游园时态主要为一般现在时人称主要为第二、三人称可从以下几个方面展开作

17、文，即本文的写作要点：1乐园介绍；上海东部，地铁可达由6个主题公园组成参加活动，欣赏表演购买礼物，观看烟火2文明游园；不扔垃圾，保持整洁常用到的重点短语：be made up of 由组成 join in 参加 such as 例如remember to do sth 记得去做某事 in public 公共场所【高分句型】1You can join in different kinds of activities there，such as enjoying wonderful musical or playssuch as表示例如，给出事例2However，its important to

18、behave well in the parkhowever然后，表转折its+adj+to do sth 做某事是怎样的，it是形式主语，动词不定式是真正主语3Litteringisnt allowed动名词做主语谓语动词用单数一般现在时的被动语态am/is/are+过去分词2017年苏州中考英语书面表达假定你是苏华，你最近认识的英国笔友David给你发了一封电子邮件，想了解你初中三年来在学习和生活方而的一些收获、困惑和感受请认真阅读下而的邮件，根据信中的内容及你的实际用英语回复To：suhuachinacomFrom：davidsmithbritaincomSubject：School l

19、ifeDear Su Hua，Glad to hear youre graduating from junior highIm interested in how you feel about those three years of school lifeWould you please tell me the following things？What do you like best about your school life？Whats the biggest problem as a junior student？Who has helped you most？And why？Do

20、 you enjoy your school life？Why or why not？I look forward to hcaring from you soonAll the best，David洼意：1词数90左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数；2回复须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使全文连贯、通顺；3文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息Dear David，Thank you so much for your emailIm very happy to tell you about my school life How about your school life？Write to

21、me soonBest wishes，Su Hua【答案】Dear David，Thank you so much for your emailIm very happy to tell you about my school life. I like the Football Club best because Ive made quite a few friends by joining the clubMoreover，its an excellent chance to learn team spirit However，Ive also met some problems over

22、the three yearsThe biggest one is how to achieve a balance between my schoolwork and my hobbiesWhenever I am in great need，my English teacher always comes to help meShe is the person who has helped me most in the junior high school In short，I enjoy my school life because its colourful and meaningful

23、 How about your school life？Write to me soon Best wishes， Su Hua【解析】考生需根据所提供的信息提炼文章的写作主题，需了解写作要点及写作意图，仔细构思写作结构，平时注意积累词汇及语法知识高分句型一：Whenever I am in great need，my English teacher always comes to help me句中Whenever I am in great need为时间状语从句，句中短语有be in great need 最需要这句话意为：无论任何我需要的时候，我的英语老师总会来帮助我高分句型二：She

24、 is the person who has helped me most in the junior high school句中who has helped me most为定语从句，修饰the person这句话意为：她是初中里帮助我最多的人2018年苏州中考英语书面表达 现在，越来越多的外国友人开始关注中国文化。假定你是苏华，你的加拿大笔友Ryan是一个中国迷，他想在中秋期间来中国看看。请认真阅读他写给你的邮件，根据邮件内容及你的了解用英语回复。To:suhuaFrom:ryan2003Subject: Chinese cultureDear Su Hua， How are you? I

25、 hope you are well. As a fan of Chinese culture，Im thinking about going to China during the Mid-autumn Festival. Would you please tell me the following things? How do you usually celebrate the Mid-autumn Festival Which city in China is most worth visiting? Why? What is the best way to travel between

26、 cities in China? What gift can I buy for my friends? Please write back and tell me everything.Best wishes，Ryan注意:1.词数90左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数; 2.回复须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺; 3.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。Dear Ryan， Im glad to hear youre coming to China. China is a country with a long history and rich culture.I h

27、ope my reply is of some help to you. Looking forward to seeing you in China.All the best，Su Hua【答案】Dear Ryan， Im glad to hear youre coming to China. China is a country with a long history and rich culture.The Mid-Autumn Festival is a traditional festival in China. On that day, families get together

28、and have a big dinner. We eat moon cakes and enjoy the full moon. Its great.There are many beautiful cities in China. Beijing is one of the best choices. Its the capital of China and it has many famous sights like the Great Wall., the Summer Palace and the Palace Museum.After visiting Beijing, you c

29、an take a high-speed train to visit other cities. And you can buy Chinese knots or chopsticks for your friends. I hope my reply is of some help to you. Looking forward to seeing you in China.All the best，Su Hua【解析】考生需根据所邮件所提供的信息提炼文章的写作主题，需了解写作要点及写作意图，仔细构思写作结构，平时注意积累词汇及语法知识。对于提问型的作文需要每个问题展开回答，不能遗漏要点。

30、2019年苏州中考英语书面表达假定你是苏华，最近你的澳大利亚笔友Nathan犯了一些错误，倍感懊恼，写了一封邮件向你诉说，为帮助他排解困感，请你根据他的邮件内容并结合自身经历用英语回信开导他To：subuachinacomFrom：nathanaustraliacomSubjects： Learning from mistakes Dear Su Hue，Im unhappy that Ive made some mistakes recently Theyre troubling me a lot these days I really need your help Would you pl

31、ease share your experience with me？ Do you agree that everyone makes mistakes？ Can you tell me one of your mistakes？ How did you deal with your problem？ What have you learned from the mistake？Im looking forward to hearing from you soonAll the best，Nathan注意： l词数90左右开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词量；2回复须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使

32、短文连贯、通顺；3文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息Dear Nathan， Im sorry to know that you are not happy these days I hope my experience can help you outBest wishesSu Hua【答案】Dear Nathan， Im sorry to know that you are not happy these days You neednt worry too much Its true that everyone makes mistakes【高分句型一】（人人都会犯错） Take me

33、， for example One day， I spent so much time playing football with my friends that I forgot to do my homework【高分句型二】 I said sorry to my teacher and finished it the next day I found it important to achieve a balance between schoolwork and hobbies（我的例子） It doesnt matter whether or not you make mistakes

34、 What matters most is to correct and learn from them In this way， others will understand you Then you will feel much better（如何面对错误） I hope my experience can help you out（希望）Best wishesSu Hua【解析】【高分句型一】Its true that everyone makes mistakes每个人都会犯错是事实Its true that是真的【高分句型二】I spent so much time playing

35、football with my friends that I forgot to do my homework我花了很多时间和我的朋友踢足球，我忘了做作业spenddoing sth花费做某事；sothat引导结果状语从句2020年苏州中考英语书面表达下周一些英国学生将来你校交流学习，他们想了解你校各个俱乐部的情况。假定你是林涛，是学校绿色星球俱乐部的负责人，请你根据你们俱乐部的海报内容，用英语写一篇发言稿来作介绍。注意: 1.词数90左右。开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；2.文中须包括所有要点，每个要点可适当发挥，使文章连贯、通顺；3.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。参考词汇:

36、 workshop n. 工作坊Welcome to our school. Im Lin Tao. Im glad to introduce our Green Planet Club to you._Lets work together for a green planet. Thank you!【答案】Welcome to our school. Im Lin Tao. Im glad to introduce our Green Planet Club to you.All our club members meet every Friday afternoon to do somet

37、hing meaningful.We have DIY workshops. Here, old clothes can be made into handbags. Its also fun to use recycled bottles and used wood to make furniture like chairs and desks.Working as volunteers is our task as well. We hand out leaflets and tell people the importance of living a green life. Someti

38、mes, we teach people how to separate waste in communities and help clean up parks and streets. Besides, we look after flowers and trees in our school.Lets work together for a green planet. Thank you!【解析】本题为材料作文，要求就所给提示介绍学校的绿色星球俱乐部，写一篇发言稿。文章时态用现在时，人称用第一人称。例文开头结尾都已给出，需要写作的部分只是画报上的关于俱乐部的简介。例文已包含题目所给全部要

39、点，并进行了适当发挥，文章词句连贯、通顺，符合题目要求，是一篇合格的作文。高分亮点：短语：be made into，work as，hand out，clean up，look after。句型：（1）Here, old clothes can be made into handbags.（被动语态）（2）Its also fun to use recycled bottles and used wood to make furniture like chairs and desks.（it作形式主语）（3）Working as volunteers is our task as well.（

40、动名词作主语）2021年苏州中考英语书面表达在日常生活中, 冲突难免发生。请以 “A conflict with”为题。用英语写下你与他人（如：家人, 老师, 同学等）或自己内心发生过的冲突故事。故事需包括冲突的发生和解决。注意：1. 词数：100左右;2. 请先将标题填写完整，再写文章；3文中不得出现与考生相关的真实姓名， 校名等信息;照抄阅读语篇不得分。参考词汇：conflict 冲突A conflict with _【答案】例文1：A conflict with my motherIn daily life, conflicts often occur. I sometimes have

41、 conflicts with my mother. When I got home, she always said a lot. She would ask me about my performance in class, how I got along with my classmates and so on. I felt really bored sometimes. I was very tired after a days class. When I got home, I just wanted to rest and didnt want to talk. So whene

42、ver my mother asked me something, we always had some conflicts. Later, I told my good friend what I thought, and she suggested that I talk to my mother about what I really thought. I did as she suggested. I had a heart-to-heart talk with my mother. I explained my thoughts in detail to my mother. Ins

43、tead of talking about it endlessly, my mother gave me more space and made me more independent. In the end, my relationship with my mother became very harmonious. We all became happier and more relaxed.例文2：A conflict with my parentsLooking back on my junior high school life, a conflict with my parent

44、s impressed me a lot. Last year, I tried my best to study hard at every subject and I got the fifth place in my class. I was so happy to share the good news with my parents. To my surprise, they didnt even praise me a word but said that my cousin got the first place in class this time. “Why are you

45、always comparing me with others? Why are you never satisfied with me?” “We just want to push you to do better!” Though I struggled to control my feelings, I slammed the door and burst into tears. The next few days, our home was full of cold silences. Finally, we had a talk during which we expressed

46、our love for each other and tried to understand each other. From then on, they never compared me with others and I had more motivation to study harder. I believe that communication with love can solve any problem. 【解析】题目要求根据提示词语，写出自己和谁发生了冲突，包括冲突的发生和解决，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。写作时要紧扣主题，用第一人称和其他人称相结合来写作，时态以一般过去时为主，要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。