专题06 书面表达（名校模拟 地区真题）-冲刺2023年中考英语必考题型终极预测（杭州专用）.docx

1、冲刺2023年中考英语必考题型终极预测（杭州专用）专题06 书面表达1（2022浙江杭州市保俶塔实验学校二模）假设你叫李华，是一个国际学校的九年级学生。你在浏览学校的学习论坛时发现了一个求助帖，请阅读这份求助帖并针对提出的问题，以A Kind Schoolmate的名义写一份回帖提供帮助。要求：1.回帖必须包含所提问题的回复，可适当发挥；2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；3.词数80词左右。Sad and WorriedPosted:(2 days ago)My problemIve been very sad these days. As a Grade 9 student, Ill hav

2、e the high school entrance examinations (中考) soon. But yesterday, I failed my math test again although I tried my best. Can you provide at least two great ways to improve my math grades quickly? And because of my poor math grades, some of my best friends even laughed at me.That made me really angry,

3、 but I dont want to lose our friendship. What should I do?Your ReplyRe: Sad and Worried_2（2022浙江杭州市十三中教育集团（总校）二模）假如你是李平，请阅读以下邮件并给美国好友Mike回复一封80词左右的邮件，开头和结尾要得体。To: Li PingFrom: Mike Hi Li Ping,How are you? We havent seen each other for a long time because of COVID-19. I know you might have to stay at

4、 home this summer vacation for the same reason. Is there anything that you plan to relax yourself? By the way, you mentioned one of your favorite Chinese traditional festivals last time we met, but I just forget about it! What is it? How do you celebrate it? And why do you like it?Hope to hear from

5、you soon! To: MikeFrom: Li PingHi Mike, _Yours, Li Ping 3（2022浙江杭州市风帆中学二模）假如你是李平，请阅读以下邮件后回复，词数80词左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear classmates, We are going to graduate from our school. In the past three years, our lovely teachers have helped us a lot, so I think maybe we should do something to express our than

6、ks. Do you have any suggestions?What activities can we do? Do we need to prepare any gifts? Would you like to help with the preparations? Hope to hear from you soon.Yours, Han MeiDear Han Mei,_Yours,Li Ping4（2022浙江杭州一模）假设你是李平，最近收到意大利朋友 Linda 的邮件，以下是邮件的一部分，请你阅读后回复。注意：(1)词数80左右；(2)回信需包括所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使

7、行文连贯；(3)文中不得提及真实的人名，校名等相关信息。Dear Li Ping,Last month, our school called on us to be helpers in our life. Some of my classmates do chores at home every day during this month. They think its good to improve their life ability. Some of my classmates volunteer in the community. What do Chinese students d

8、o for their families and communities as helpers? What do they learn from doing these activities? Hope to hear from you soon.Love,LindaDear Linda,_Yours,Li Ping5（2022浙江杭州二模）假如你是李平，收到英语口语俱乐部负责人Peter的邮件，请接受邀请并根据该邮件内容作回复。要求：1.邮件中不能出现真实姓名，学校等相关信息；2.词数80左右；3.可适当发挥。Dear Li Ping,Were going to have a forum(论

9、坛) this Saturday evening. The topic is “Sports make me a better person”. I hear youre really good at sports and hope you can join us. By the way, what sport do you often play and how often do you do it? How does the sport change you?Looking forward to hearing from you!Peter Smith,President of Englis

10、h-speaking Club_Yours,Li Ping6（2022浙江杭州二模）假定你是李平，最近收到来自意大利的交换生Tony的电子邮件。请你阅读后回复。注意：1.词数80左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数：2.回复须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使全文连贯、通顺：3.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。Dear Li Ping,How are you these days? Im so excited to go to Hangzhou as an exchange student soon and we can meet again! And I want to know mor

11、e about the city. Could you please tell me something about Hangzhou? What do you think of Hangzhou? Is there anywhere interesting or anything delicious? By the way, what can I bring back as gifts when Im leaving?Looking forward to your reply.Yours,TonyDear Tony,_Yours,Li Ping7（2022浙江杭州一模）假定你是张华，收到加拿

12、大笔友Harry的来信，获悉他在废物利用制作比赛中获奖。请根据邮件给他回复。词数：80左右。Hi Zhang Hua,How is everything going with you? I am glad to tell you that Ive just won the first prize from the Help Save Our Planet Society! I love recycling. What do you think of recycling? Do people in China recycle things?Can you share any examples w

13、ith me?Looking forward to hearing from you.All the best.Yours,HarryDear Harry,_Zhang Hua8（2022浙江杭州一模）假定你是李平，请阅读你的笔友Lucy的邮件并回复。词数80词左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Li Ping,Hows it going these days? Im having a great time in Shanghai for the two-month exchange program. Its a great place to visit and theres jus

14、t so much to see and do here.Last night I went to a Chinese music concert. I prefer quiet and traditional music, so the concert suited me just fine. Do you like music? What kind of music do you like best?Tomorrow evening my host family is taking me to their little daughters birthday party, but I am

15、not sure what I am expected to do before the party. Should I prepare a gift or anything? If so, what can I choose as the gift? What else could I do to make the party more interesting?I am looking forward to your reply.All the best,Lucy_9（2022浙江杭州一模）假如你是李华，请阅读以下来自交换生Sam的邮件，并根据问题给出回复。词数80词左右。From: Sam

16、Hi Li Hua,How are you? Im very excited because its nearly time for my visit to your country. My bag is ready, so Ill see you soon!Whats the weather like in your country at the moment? Its very cold and wet here.Id like to bring a present for your family, to thank them for being my host family. Do yo

17、u have any ideas? It cant be too big because it has to go in my bag.See you soon.SamTo: SamHi Sam,_Yours,Li Hua10（2022浙江杭州二模）假定你是王华，在英语学习交流活动中，你收到上海笔友John的来信，请你根据来信进行回复。Dear Wang Hua,I have stayed at home for about 50 days because of COVID-19（新冠）. Its so boring to have classes online every day. And

18、I find it difficult to understand online classes. Also, relations between my parents and I have become difficult. We argue a lot. I always feel bored and nervous. What should I do? Please write to me soon. Yours,John Lee注意：1.词数80左右；2.不能透露个人真实信息；3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear John,_Yours,Wang Hua参考答案：1例文I kno

19、w from the letter that you are worried about your math grades. Now let me tell you what to do.First, you should like it. Interest is the best teacher. Whatever you do, you should like it. Secondly, if you have any questions but you dont ask your teachers or friends, I think you are wrong. You should

20、 always ask questions. If you do this, you will make great progress. In addition, you and your classmates form a study group to discuss together. In this way, I think you will improve math scores quickly. As for what you said that the students laughed at you, it may be your own feeling of great psyc

21、hological pressure. You should communicate with your classmates and ask them more questions. Throw away your sadness and worry, and be happy. I think they will help you. I hope these suggestions are helpful to you.【详解】总体分析 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； 提示：根据所给求助帖的内容，针对其问题，以A Kind Schoolmate的名义写一份回帖提供

22、帮助。写作步骤第一步，说明自己会帮助对方解决问题；第二步，具体阐述如何帮助对方解决问题。第三步，最后表达自己的希望。亮点词汇be worried about担心In addition此外As for至于高分句型If you do this, you will make great progress.（if引导的条件状语从句）I think you will improve math scores quickly.（省略that的宾语从句）2例文Hi Mike,I am going well these days. I have to stay at home because of COVID-

23、19. I usually watch news on TV to learn more about the situation. Moreover, I form a healthy eating habit and do exercise regularly. Sometimes I play computer games to relax myself.I mentioned that I like Spring Festival last time. Now let me introduce it to you. It usually falls on January or Febru

24、ary. People always have a big dinner together. They watch TV programs until midnight. Dumplings are their favourite food. At midnight, people can let off fireworks. I like it very much because I can get red pockets from relatives. Whats your favorite festival?I am looking forward to your reply.Yours

25、,Li Ping【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一封邮件作文。向Mike介绍自己疫情期间的生活以及最喜欢的节日。2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。分为三段式：第一段介绍自己疫情期间的生活以及放松方式；第二段介绍自己喜欢的节日以及原因；最后一段期待对方的回信。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。3例文Dear Han Mei,Thanks a lot for planning this! The teachers did help me a lot with my study, so I think its necessary to do something

26、 to show our gratitude.In my opinion, a graduation party might be a great idea. We can decorate our classroom and invite all our teachers there. As for the gifts, I dont think it needs to be too expensive as long as we put true heart in it. What about presenting them flowers with thank-you cards? Be

27、sides, we can shoot a video to tell the teachers how grateful we are. And I would love to help with the video shooting and editing.Please tell me if you need further help.Yours,Li Ping【详解】1.题干解读：本文主要是围绕邮件中的问题展开，给出相关的建议，可适当增加细节。2.写作指导：本文以一般现在时和第一人称为主。第一段引入话题；第二段重点描述为了感谢老师应该举办什么样的活动以及应买什么样的礼物，并表明自己愿意帮

28、忙；第三段进行总结。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。4例文Dear Linda,I am very glad to hear from your letter. Now let me tell you about what Chinese students do housework for their families and why they do volunteer work.Most Chinese students often help their parents with housework. As students, they thin

29、k doing housework can not only cultivate their independence, but also let them learn how to take care of themselves. By doing housework, they can understand the meaning of fairness. They learn that living together means sharing chores. It also shows their love for their families. Whats more, some of

30、 my classmates volunteer in the community. They not only learn how to help them, but also get the satisfaction of helping others. I hope to hear from you soon.Yours,Li Ping【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇邮件作文。要求根据邮件的内容，给Linda写一封回信；注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：写作时要以第三人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为四段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍学生们做家务的情况；第三段介绍做志愿活动的情

31、况；第四段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。5例文Dear Peter Smith,I am glad to receive your invitation and I would like to join you. I like different kinds of sports and I am good at playing basketball. I often play basketball with my friends after school or at weekends. I usually play it three or four times a week. Pla

32、ying basketball changed me a lot. I used to be shy and short and I often got the flu. My parents advised me to play basketball and I decided to have a try. Half a year later, I was healthier and taller than before. I am more outgoing now and I make a lot of friends.I am looking forward to the forum.

33、Yours,Li Ping【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇邮件作文。要求根据Peter Smith的邮件问题进行回复。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态综合使用一般现在时和一般过去时。作文可分为三段，第一段就对方的邀请表示感谢并说明自己是否会去参加；第二段介绍自己做什么运动以及运动的频率，讲述运动如何改变了自己；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。6例文Dear Tony,Thanks for your mail. How are you? Im glad to hear that you will come to my hometown. Id

34、like to introduce my hometown to you. My hometown is in Hangzhou, Zhejiang Province. It is located in the southeast of China. Youd better take a camera so that you can take some photos. Hangzhou is very beautiful. West Lake is the most famous place. It attracts many visitors every year. When you com

35、e, Ill show you around it. And I will take you to taste the specials in Hangzhou, such as West Lake Fish, Dongpo Pork and so on. Hangzhou is famous for silk. You can buy it for your parents when you go back home. I think you will have a good time here. Im looking forward to your coming.Yours,Li Ping

36、【详解】1. 题干解读：本文要求以李平的名义写一封邮件，针对Tony提出的几个问题需要一一回答，不要遗漏要点，可适当拓展细节。2. 写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称叙述；时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主；文章主要介绍杭州的位置、风景、美食以及特产。在写作时要保持主谓一致性，做到无标点符号和语法错误。7例文Dear Harry,Congratulations! How glad I am to share your good news!I think recycling is helpful in our society. And in the future it will play an mor

37、e important role in our daily life. People in China also recycle things. We always use some useless plastic bottles to plant flowers. Its really beautiful and funny. Some people will sell the useless textbooks for recycling. By doing this, they can not only get some money, but play a role in protect

38、ing environment.Hoping youll make greater progress.YoursZhang Hua【详解】1.题干解读：本文属于应用文写作，写作时要按照邮件格式书写。在写作的开头首先要祝贺他获奖；第二段介绍对废物利用的看法，以及在中国人们是怎么进行废物利用的；第三段希望他取得更大的进步。2.写作指导：写作时态采用一般现在时和一般将来时；人称上以第一人称和第三人称为主。文章叙述要条理清晰，语言完整，无语法和书写错误。8例文:Dear Lucy,Its good to hear from you. Everything goes well with me here.

39、 Im so glad to hear that you are having a great time in Shanghai, and have already enjoyed a wonderful Chinese music concert there. I like music, too. I like classical music best because it can make me happy and relaxed.As for the birthday gift, I think some home-made snacks or a piece of art work m

40、ade by yourself will be a good choice. Also, if you can perform a talent show like singing a song or playing a magic trick during the party, I think your host family will appreciate it. Im sure you and your host family will have a really unforgettable birthday party.Write to me soon.All the best,Li

41、Ping【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于应用文电子邮件的写作。在写作时应根据笔友Lucy邮件内容进行回复，回复内容包括：自己的近况如何；简述露西在上海听音乐会的事情；自己喜欢的音乐；最重要的对露西要送的生日礼物提出建议；最后是祝愿。2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称为主来叙述内容，时态采用一般现在时为主。在叙述内容时，力求语句通顺，语法正确，保证内容叙述完整，条理清晰，行文连贯。9例文：To: SamHi Sam,Im very happy to hear that youre coming to china next week. I hope to see you soon.Nowadays,

42、 the weather in my country is pretty nice. Its quite warm in spring and we have a mild climate. I believe youll enjoy it. Speaking of the gift, all of family members are interested in your country, and we really hope to know it better from the point of you. Really anything that is connected with you

43、r country and a bit special should be good, such as the collection of coins from your state or a large book of scene photography of the most places of interest in your country.Hope to see you soon.Yours,Li Hua【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求以李华的名义，阅读交换生Sam的邮件，并根据问题给出回复。2.写作指导：阅读交换生Sam的邮件，写作时，首先对Sam马上要来中国表示欢迎，接着介绍中国目

44、前天气的情况，介绍的时候用一般现在时态；最后谈到礼物的问题。写作时，句子书写要符合英文表达习惯，做到语句通顺、上下文连贯。10One possible version:Dear John,Its not easy to stay at home for such a long time, and its quite normal to have these feelings. Online classes which are lack of interaction, probably are not so easy to be understood as normal ones. Youd b

45、etter spend more time practising before and after classes. As for the relations between you and your parents, why dont you sit down and communicate with them? Or you could do more chores at home to make them happy. I hope we can successfully fight off COVID-19 in the near future. Things will be better for you soon. Yours,Wang Hua【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。针对John信中的问题进行解答。2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称以第二人称为主。分为三段式：第一段先安慰对方；第二段提出相应的建议；最后一段表达自己的祝愿。写作时保持主谓一致，做到无语法和标点错误。