专题06 书面表达（应用文）-十年（2013-2022）高考真题英语试题研究.docx

1、专题06 书面表达（应用文）命题分析2022年语言书面表达变化不大，都是贴近学生生活实际的应用文写作，有的沿用了之前的考题，如全国甲卷的投稿信以及新高考全国卷I的邀请信。也有创新的形式，如浙江卷的的叙旧类的应用文。但是不管写作如何变化，学生掌握一定的写作句型和词汇，根据文本适当构思，都是可以得到高分的。近十年（2013-2022）年高考英语书面表达（应用文）考查情况一览表卷别 项目体裁命题形式话题2022年全国甲卷应用文（投稿信）提纲式以六月八日世界海洋日为主题投稿全国乙卷应用文（投稿信）图表式以Learning English Beyond the Classroom为题新高考全国I卷应用文

2、（邀请信）提纲式邀请参加广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”新高考全国II卷应用文（邀请信）提纲式邀请参加广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”浙江卷6月应用文（叙旧）提纲式回忆参加的“中国-爱尔兰文化节”活动2021年全国甲卷应用文（咨询信）提纲式介绍中国传统文化的主题班会全国乙卷应用文（发言稿）提纲式Be smart online learners为题的发言稿新高考全国I卷应用文（投稿信）提纲式庆祝Youth正在庆祝创刊十周年浙江卷6月应用文（宣传稿）提纲式参观了学校举办的学生国画作品展浙江卷1月应用文（发言稿）提纲式新西兰学生访问你校致辞2020年全国卷I应用文（短文）提纲

3、式边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛全国卷II应用文（短文）提纲式为班级英语角写一篇短文，介绍这次采摘活动全国卷III应用文（电子邮件）提纲式给外教Miss Evans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导短剧。2019年全国卷I应用文（申请信）提纲式当地美术馆要剧版中国画展。写一封信申请做志愿者全国卷II应用文（电子邮件）提纲式写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛全国卷III应用文（电子邮件）提纲式你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加2018全国卷I应用文（电子邮件）提纲式给外国朋友回复邮件，内容为合适礼物及餐桌礼仪全国卷II 应用文（通知）提纲式写通知，请大家观看一

4、部英语短片Growing Together全国卷III应用文（回信）提纲式给外国朋友介绍你校体育运动情况2017全国卷I应用文（电子邮件）提纲式告知英国朋友上课计划（时间、地点、学些唐诗、了解唐朝历史）全国卷II 应用文（邀请函）提纲式邀请外教朋友参观中国剪纸艺术展全国卷III应用文（邀请函）提纲式邀请朋友加入校乒乓球队2016全国卷应用文（求助信）提纲式请外教帮你修改求职信全国卷应用文（邀请信）提纲式邀请英国朋友参加国际中学生摄影展全国卷应用文（道歉信）提纲式因故不能赴约给好友写道歉信2015年全国卷I应用文（约稿信）提纲式给栏目“英国文化”投稿介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活全国卷II应用文（

5、邀请信）提纲式邀请陪老人门过重阳节2014年全国卷I应用文（咨询信）图表式咨询英语为期6周的学习情况全国卷II应用文（短文类）话题作文十年后的我2013年全国卷I应用文（求助信）提纲式请朋友帮叔叔接机全国卷II应用文（求助信）提纲式请网友代卖自制中国结题型解读综观近十年高考书面表达题可知，体裁主要为应用文，以考查书信和电子邮件为主，话题贴近考生的生活实际。这种考查方式不仅体现了高考重视对考生英语能力的考查，而且也引导考生关注英美国家的文化和社会生活，关注中国传统文化和社会主义核心价值观，引导学生在传承和发扬中华优秀传统文化和伟大民族精神的同时，坚定理想信念，增强“四个自信”。一、提纲作文提纲作

6、文是近几年高考英语书面表达的热点题型。命题者通常把提纲作文与其他常用文体形式(如书信、电子邮件、报道、通知、日记等)有机结合在一起进行考查，使该类书面表达综合性越来越强。提纲作文的特点为：1. 要点明确，范围具体提纲作文就是把文章的情景和内容要求分成块，以短文提示、要点提示和表格提示三种形式呈现，要求考生据此进行写作，这实际上是对考生思路和文章写作范围所作的明确限定，写作内容贴近学生的生活实际。因此，提纲中所列举的要点要全部涉及，一个也不能遗漏。这类作文主要考查的内容有：说明主题、分析原因或解释做法。作文题目中一般会提供：标题、提纲、起始句。标题限定短文的基本发展方向，提纲规定短文的基本框架，

7、起始句则提供短文的起点。考生应紧扣主题，并根据提纲提示的思路和要点展开段落。2. 思维空间灵活、开放为了提高文章档次，考生应在保证内容要点齐全的同时进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥。因此，该类型的书面表达具有一定的灵活性，能较好地体现考生的英语思维和运用能力。应对提纲式书信作文类型1. 投稿信 (Cover Letter)投稿信的写法没有固定的格式，它可以涉及感谢、祝贺、感悟等话题，覆盖面很广泛，是最近几年比较受青睐的题型之一。投稿信最主要的特点是按照要求写作，如表达感谢，那就写感谢的相关词汇和句式。因此，写投稿信首先确定文本具体是应用文的哪一类，再根其话题具体构思。真题回顾典例一 (2022全国甲

8、卷)52. 你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题，举办英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：1. 海洋的重要性；2. 保护海洋的倡议。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。_【答案】When it comes to ocean, its pollution is becoming more and more serious. World Ocean Day, falling on June 8th, is aimed at raising awareness of ocean conservation.Ocean plays a key role in our wor

9、ld. Not only does ocean offer us sufficient food, but also it maintains the balance of nature. Thus, it is imperative to protect ocean. First of all, what we can do is to place importance on our daily actions. For example, garbage cant be thrown into ocean. Whats more, we can also hand out leaflets

10、to call on more people to protect the ocean. The more people are involved, the better the ocean environment is.All in all, it is high time that we devoted ourselves to protecting ocean. To protect ocean is to protect ourselves.【解析】【导语】本文是一篇应用文，就世界海洋日为主题向英文征文比赛投稿，阐述海洋的重要性并提出一些建议。【详解】1.词汇积累越来越：more an

11、d moreincreasingly重视：place importance onattach importance to重要的：keysignificant此外：whats morefurthermore2句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：World Ocean Day, falling on June 8th, is aimed at raising awareness of ocean conservation.拓展句：World Ocean Day, which falls on June 8th, is aimed at raising awareness of ocean conserva

12、tion.【点睛】高分句型1Not only does ocean offer us sufficient food, but also it maintains the balance of nature.(运用了部分倒装结构)高分句型2When it comes to ocean, its pollution becoming more and more serious.(使用了固定句型)高分句型3First of all, what we can do is to place importance on our daily actions.(使用了主语从句)典例二 (2022全国乙卷)5

13、2. 学校英文报正在开展以Learning English Beyond the Classroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1. 学习活动状况描述：2. 简单评论;3. 你的建议。注意：1. 词数100左右;2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。【答案】 Learning English Beyond the Classroom Nowadays, with the growing popularity of smartphones and computers, an increasing number of students are choosing to l

14、earn English beyond the classroom in various ways. It can easily be seen that the percentage of students who choose listening to English songs and watching English movies is respectively 65% and 50%. However, those choosing reading English books and visiting English learning websites only account fo

15、r 18% and 12%. As far as Im concerned, it is a disturbing trend. For students, what benefits most to their study is reading English books. Because of their lack of self-discipline, theyre more easily addicted to chatting online or playing games. Its urgent for students themselves to improve their se

16、lf-discipline, and its also urgent for parents and teachers to strengthen the guidance. 【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于说明文。要求考生请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文给学校英文报投稿。【详解】1.词汇积累选择：chooseselect提高：improvestrengthen各种各样的：variousdiverse就我而言：as far as Im concernedfrom my perspective2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Nowadays, with the growing popularit

17、y of smartphones and computers, an increasing number of students are choosing to learn English beyond the Classroom in various ways.拓展句：Nowadays, because smartphones and computers are becoming more and more popular, an increasing number of students are choosing to learn English beyond the Classroom

18、in various ways.【点睛】【高分句型1】It can easily be seen that the percentage of students who choose listening to English songs and watching English movies is respectively 65% and 50%.(运用了it作形式主语，that引导主语从句以及who引导的定语从句)【高分句型2】Its urgent for students themselves to improve their self-discipline(运用了it作形式主语，to i

19、mprove their self-discipline为真正的主语)典例二 (2019新高考全国I卷)你校英文报Youth正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1. 读报的经历；2. 喜爱的栏目；3. 期望和祝福。注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；2. 请按如下格式写字答题卡的相应位置作答。Youth and Me_【答案】Youth and MeIt has been 10 years since Youth was founded. In my memory, it is Youth that accompanies me through my whole high scho

20、ol. When feeling depressed, I often choose to enjoy the novel part which includes a lot of imaginative stories. These stories can relieve my stress and broaden my horizon. Besides, I even submitted my own fiction to Youth. Refused as I was, I still received some great encouragement, which gives me c

21、onfidence to be a writer.I do expect Youth can publish more classic works and have a promising future.【解析】【分析】本文是一篇应用文，向校刊Youth表达自己的经历，并送上自己的祝福。【详解】1.词汇积累建立：foundestablish沮丧的：upsetdepressed得到：receiveobtain赏析：enjoyappreciate2.句式拓展同义句改写原句：These stories can relieve my stress and broaden my horizon.拓展句：

22、Not only can these stories relieve my stress, but also they can broaden my horizon.【点睛】高分句型1 When feeling depressed, I often choose to enjoy the novel part which includes a lot of imaginative stories. (运用了which引导的限制性定语从句)高分句型2 Refused as I was, I still received some great encouragement, which gives

23、me confidence to be a writer. (运用了as引导的让步状语从句还运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)2. 宣传稿或新闻报道1. 宣传稿的写法近几年新闻报道或宣传稿也是高考的一大亮点，它也是一篇提纲式作文，可以用书信形式来呈现所要表达的内容。写作的内容是关于活动及其感受，即有感而发地写一篇词数80或100左右的宣传稿。该话题与我们的生活息息相关,因此考生写作起来会有感而发。考生需要从简单的材料罗列到高层次的立意，并进行深度的思考，写作内容具有一定想象的空间。考生必须根据题干中规定的内容加以适当的发挥，并准确地表达活动内容及感受，以凸显考生的语言交际能力以及用英语构

24、建与谋篇布局能力和表达能力。命题方式也体现了对英语学科核心素养中语言能力、文化意识和思维品质方面的考查。真题回顾 典例 (2021浙江卷6月)昨天你参观了学校举办的学生国画作品展。请给校英文报写一篇宣传稀，内容包括：1. 展览时间、地点；2. 观展感受；3. 推荐观展。注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【参考范文】Dear editor,I m writing to tell you something about what I thought and felt after I visited the students Chinese painting exhib

25、ition held by our school yesterday.As far as I know, this exhibition will last for half a month in the school art gallery.What strikes me most is that their gifts for art are extrerrely shocking. I am deeply impressed by their talents for painting.Therefore, I strongly recommend that all the student

26、s in our school should make use of their spare time to enjoy these wanderful works carefully. I believe everyone will be sure to have a good time there.Best wishes.Yours,Li Hua【范文点评】范文首先先告知写信的目的，揭示主题，其次简要地回顾了自己昨天观看学生国画作品展的过程，最后写自己的感受以及自己的建议。3. 道歉信 (Letter of Apology)1. 道歉信的写法 日常生活中难免会出现一些差错，如失约、损坏东西

27、等。遇到这种情形，应及时写信致歉，以消除不必要的误解，维系正常的关系。道歉信除应及时写之外，还必须写得诚恳，歉意应发自内心，决不可敷衍塞责。再则，事情的原委要解释清楚，措辞应当委婉。真题回顾 典例一 (2021北京卷)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：1.表达歉意并说明原因；2.提出建议并给出理由。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。_【参考范文】Dear Jim, Howis everything going? We have planned to go for a wal

28、k in Haidian Park this weekend, where we could enjoy the beautiful scenery of early spring. But I am afraid I couldnt make it. I was severely injured in a soccer game last night. The doctor examined me carefully and toldme that I had to stay in bed for at least one week. I asked him whether there wa

29、sany possibility that I could recover faster, yet the answer was negative. My conditiondoesnt allow me to go anywhere until my legs are fully recovered. It is a pity for me to miss this trip that I have been longing for. Shall we put it off until next weekend if the weather permits? Looking forward

30、to your reply.Yours,Li Hua典例二 (2016新课标全国卷III)假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：1. 表示歉意；2. 说明原因；3. 另约时间。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【参考范文】Dear Bob,Im sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found that I have to attend an important class

31、 meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that well have more time to read and select books. If its convenient for you, lets meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you bes

32、t. I should be available any time after school next week.Yours,Li Hua4. 邀请信 (Letter of Invitation)1. 写作注意事项a. 盛情邀请参加聚会、共度假期或游览某地等；b. 建立密切联系，加强感情交流；c. 拓展相关内容，激发他人兴趣。2. 写作方法 首段：开门见山说明写作目的。 主体：a. 具体交代邀请原因；b. 邀请内容：活动性质、时间、地点、日期；c. 有关要求和希望。 尾段：a. 再次盛情邀请；b. 希望尽快答复。真题回顾典例一 (2022新高考全国卷I)假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk an

33、d Talk”的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括：1. 节目介绍；2. 访谈的时间和话题。注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dear Caroline,Yours sincerely,Li HuaDear Caroline,I am writing to invite you to attend our program “Talk and Talk” in our school broadcasting station at 7:00 p.m. next Friday. The program with the th

34、eme “Culture differences” is intended to arouse students interest in different cultures especially western eating culture.As our distinguished foreign language teacher, your opinion will be of great importance. In the program, you can communicate with our school students, which not only provides a p

35、latform for students to relieve their pressure and add spice to their dull routine, but also inspires their interest in western culture. Id appreciate it if you could spare your time to join us. An early reply about your final decision will be highly appreciated. Yours,Li Hua【分析】Dear Caroline,表达写信目的

36、I am writing to invite you to attend our program “Talk and Talk” in our school broadcasting station at 7:00 p.m. next Friday. 节目话题介绍The program with the theme “Culture differences” is intended to arouse students interest in different cultures especially western eating culture.邀请参加的目的As our distingui

37、shed foreign language teacher, your opinion will be of importance. 参加活动的意义In the program, you can communicate with our school students, which not only provides a platform for students to relieve their pressure and add spice to their dull routine, but also inspires their interest in western culture.

38、再次邀请Id appreciate it if you could spare your time to join us. An early reply about your final decision will be highly appreciated. Yours,Li Hua 典例二 (2019新课标全国卷III)你是李华，你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加，内容包括:1.时间；2.活动安排；3.欢迎他表演节目。注意:1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【写作指导】首先确定提纲。先介绍写作目的，之后介绍音乐节的时间、活动安排等具体信息，最

39、后欢迎他表演节目。第二，根据提纲，确定关键词语，如：How is everything going? a music festival，in the school hall，The opening ceremony等。第三，注意选用合适的连接词将各要点串联起来。【范文】Dear Allen,How is everything going? Our school will hold a music festival next Saturday morning in the school hall to enrich students after-school life. As an organi

40、zer, Im writing to invite you to join us.The opening ceremony will start at 9:00 am, and the schoolmaster will deliver a speech. Following the speech is a one-hour lecture with the title of “A Brief History of Chinese Music” by Professor Guo, after which there will be various fantastic performances

41、played by talented students. You are particularly welcome to show up on stage, which will definitely add color and fun to our festival. Looking forward to your early reply. Best wishes,Li Hua典例三 (2017新课标全国卷II)假定你是李华，想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸（paper-cutting）艺术展。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：1.展览时间、地点；2.展览内容。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以

42、适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【范文】Dear Henry，Im Li Hua, one of your students in your cultural class. I know youre interested in one of Chinese traditional art formspapercutting. So I invite you to attend an exhibition of it. Itll be held from June 10 to July 10 this year and the opening time is from 9：00 am to 7：00

43、 pm from Monday to Saturday and the place of the exhibition is at the City Gallery, which is located at 118, Jian Guo Road, Hai Dian District. Shall we go there together this Friday afternoon? I will meet you at 2：00 pm at the teaching building gate if you like. You know we Chinese have a lot of tra

44、ditional art forms, of which papercutting is one of the most popular. In the exhibition, you will enjoy many special kinds of papercuttings. Maybe you can learn one or two skills of the cutting. Looking forward to your early reply.Regards, Li Hua5. 建议信 (Letter of suggestion)1. 建议信写作注意事项 建议信的写作目的是提出建

45、议或忠告，不是投诉信。观点要合情合理，注意礼貌当先。2. 写作方法 首段：a. 简介自己，不要罗嗦；b. 说明目的，注意语气。 主体：a. 提出具体建议；b. 首先肯定优点，再写改进内容，否则会变成投诉信；c. 经常进行交流，注意对方感受，时时提到你和我，否则容易跑题写成议论文。尾段：总结建议，注意礼貌，使对方易于接受。3. 写作流程图说明写信目的介绍详情、说明原因提出建议提出希望采纳建议，并表示谢意，盼望回复真题回顾典例 (2017北京卷)你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择：“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：1

46、.你建议的线路；2.你的理由；3.你的祝愿。注意：1.词数不少于50；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jim, Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jim, Im happy receive your letter and know youre coming to China.Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai, both are highly recommended. Personally, I prefer the tour along the Yangtze, the longest river an

47、d one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization. You can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people. Moreover, the scenery along the river is amazing, with many well-known sightseeing spots. Thats why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.Hope youll have a good

48、 time in China.YoursLi Hua6. 申请信 (Letter of Application)1. 申请信写作方法 首段：a. 自我介绍；b. 申请原因；c. 说明写信目的。 主体：a. 详述有关背景资料：资历、教育经历、工作经历、兴趣爱好；b. 询问有关学校、课程等具体内容。 尾段：a. 强调上述材料的重要性；b. 希望尽快得到答复；c. 要求手册及申请表；d. 表示感谢。2. 写作流程图说明写信目的介绍自我(包括：学历、工作简历、在学校或工作单位的表现)说明申请该职位或学校的原因恳请招聘单位或所申请的学校考虑自己的申请，并表示谢意，期望回复典例 (2019新课标全国卷I)

49、假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要剧版中国画展。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括：1.写信目的；2.个人优势；3.能做的事情。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.结束语已为你写好。_【写作指导】今年的书面表达要求从写信目的、个人优势和能做的事情这三个方面展开写作。考生在写作时要做到层次分明，应着重掌握个人优势的常用表达，如Im good at ；I have the ability to ；Im experienced in 等等。从语言风格来讲，短文应该是正式的形式，应运用得体的语气及礼貌用语或结构等。内容分析参考范文Dear Sir or Mada

50、m, I am writing to apply to be a volunteer for the Chinese Painting Exhibition which will be held in your art gallery. I think I am qualified for this job, because I have learned Chinese painting since childhood. Equally important, I am fluent in both Chinese and English, so I have no difficulty in

51、communicating with others. If I am lucky enough to be chosen as a volunteer, I can show visitors around the gallery and answer their questions about the paintings, after some proper training. I would be very grateful if you could offer me the opportunity.Im looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li H

52、ua 7. 通知(Notice)口头通知口头通知要注意以下几点：(1) 要有称呼用语。如：在正式场合用的Ladies and gentlemen,对学生用的Boys and girls 等。(2) 要有开头语。常用的开头语有：May I have your attention, please?Be quite. There is something important I have to tell you.You need to know.I have something to tell you.(3) 时态问题。口头通知是要告诉大家即将进行的活动，因此要以一般将来时为主。(4) 人称问题。口

53、头通知常用第二人称表示被通知的对象。(5) 要有结束语。常用的结束语有：Thats all. Thank you.Any questions? Does everyone understand?书面通知书面通知具有以下特点：(1) 书面通知的正文上面的正中有NOTICE或ANNOUNCEMENT 标志。(2) 在正文最后的右下角要写上发通知的单位或组织者的姓名。(3) 在左下角写上发出通知的日期。真题回顾典例 (2018新课标全国卷II)你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知，请大家观看一部英语短片Growing Together，内容包括：(1)短片内容：学校的发展；(2)放映时间、

54、地点；(3)欢迎对短片提出意见。注意：(1)词数100左右；(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【写作点拨】英语书面通知的时态应该以一般将来时为主，多使用被动语态、简单句。在通知中不应当过度的使用较复杂的词语和读起来拗口的句子。第二个注意点：层次一定要清晰，一个层次要表达一件事情，使人看起来一目了然。【满分范文】Boys and girls,May I have your attention, please? Recently, an outstanding movie will be shown in our campus. Welcome to join us end enjoy it

55、! Here are some relevant details about it.To begin with, the name of the movie isGrowing together, which is about the development of our beloved school; as a result, it will be not only meaningful but also interesting. Besides, it will be in the library from 2:00 to 4:00 in the afternoon on June 9th

56、. Whats more, everyone of you will be welcome to take part in it, enjoying the movie, having a heated discussion afterwards and giving your own comments. Hopefully, you would make it to our activity. I have the confidence that you will have a great time.The Student Union8. 感谢信 (Letter of Thanks)感谢信的

57、写法没有固定的格式，目的是为他人给予自己的帮助、安慰、款待以及赠送礼物等而表示感谢。感谢信最主要的特点是真诚。缺乏真挚的感情而答谢他人，收信人将对你的谢意产生怀疑，感谢的目的也就失去了。因此，写感谢信首先得真心诚意。感谢信的另一个特点是具体。写感谢信切忌泛泛而谈，而应着重于具体的感谢事由。真题回顾典例一 (2019浙江应用文写作)（2019浙江应用文写作）假定你是李华，经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括:1.表示感谢；2.回顾Alex对你的帮助；3.临别祝愿。注意：1.词数80左右；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【写作指导】 这是一篇提纲类作文，

58、我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能选漏要点，跑题偏题.本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次.特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化.平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果.【范文】 Dear Chris,I am so regretful to know that you are going to return to your home b

59、efore long. We get along well during your stay in China and you offered me lots of help. I would like to express my gratitude to you for your help with my English. While studying in China, you always spent your free time in helping me polish up my oral English. It is you who shared me with rich knowledge of English and English culture. Never will I forget you and your kindness. It is my hope that you can remember me as often as possible. Yours,Li Hua