专题09 书面表达-2023年中考英语逆袭冲刺名校模拟真题特快专递（广州专用）.docx

1、2023广州市中考英语逆袭冲刺名校模拟真题速递第二期专题09 书面表达一、电子邮件1（2022广东广州广州大学附属中学校考二模）假设你是李华，你的外国朋友Jack想学习汉语，希望你能给他一些建议，请以下列提示信息，写一封电子邮件。1.汉语使用范围广，占全球1/4，汉语难学，但要有信心2.大胆交流，不要怕犯错；多听中文歌曲，多读中文报纸杂志3.其他建议（请你补充）注意：1.词数：不低于80（文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息。Dear Jack,Its so exciting to know that you are interested in learn

2、ing Chinese._YoursLi Hua【答案】例文Dear Jack,Its so exciting to know that you are interested in learning Chinese. Chinese is the most widely used language in the word, and almost 25% of the population in the world speak it. Although it is not easy to learn it well in a short time, try to be confident all

3、 the time. Here are some suggestions.First, it is a good idea to listen to Chinese songs. Second, reading Chinese newspaper and chatting with your Chinese friends in Chinese are also effective ways. Above all, dont beafraid of making mistakes. Try to speak it bravely. I hope you can have fun in lear

4、ning Chinese.In my opinion, I think practice is the most important. Practice makes perfect. Try to practise more and you can speak Chinese better and better.Yours,Li Hua【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于邮件写作，写作时要按邮件格式写，主要是根据提示内容给他一些学习汉语的建议，可适当增加细节。2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时为主，中心内容按照提示要求分层次来写，需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。在最后还需要给出来除表格提示之外的自己

5、的建议。二、材料作文2（2022广东广州校考三模）学校英语报举行“未来之城”征文活动。请你用英文写一篇短文投稿，介绍你心目中的未来城市，并分享你在未来之城生活的想法。短文需包括下图所以提示内容。注意：1. 词数不少于80词；2. 文中不得出现考生真实的姓名、地点和所在的学校名词。Our City of the FutureWhat will our city be like in 2050? _【答案】Our City of the FutureWhat will our city be like in 2050? I think it will be quite different from

6、 now. The living environment will be greatly improved in the following ways. The houses will be both green and smart. Everything will be made by environmental-friendly materials. Whats more, the house will be connected to the shops and hospitals so that you can order all kinds of services without go

7、ing out. Most of the time people will work at home and they will have fewer working hours because of new technologies. If you want to go travelling, there will be no traffic jam at all. You can take different kinds of transportations, such as the flying buses: and the driverless cars. The most excit

8、ing thing for students will be the widely use of E-books and VR technology at school. As a result, there will be paperless exams and more fun in learning. Our city in 2050 will be full of hope and we should work hard to realize it.【详解】总体分析 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； 提示：根据所给提示介绍你心目中的未来

9、城市，并分享你在未来之城生活的想法。写作步骤第一步，介绍未来城市的房子；第二步，介绍未来城市的工作和交通情况；第三步，最后介绍未来的学校。亮点词汇Whats more而且such as比如As a result结果be full of 充满高分句型the house will be connected to the shops and hospitals so that you can order all kinds of services without going out.（so that引导的目的状语从句）If you want to go travelling, there will

10、be no traffic jam at all.（if引导的条件状语从句）3（2022广东广州校考二模）你根据如表提示，用英语写一篇短文向校刊投稿，阐述书写的重要性。你的观点在电脑普及时代，书写依然重要你的理由(1)书写是中国传统文化的一个重要组成部分，所以练习书写有助于传承文化；(2)每个人的字迹都有个人意义，例如手写信更能表达情感；(3)(再自拟至少一个理由加以阐述)参考词汇 handwriting 书法；字迹；书写(不可数名词)；inherit 传承(及物动词)The importance of handwritingNowadays many Chinese students no

11、longer pay much attention to their handwriting._【答案】One possible version:The importance of handwritingNowadays many Chinese students no longer pay much attention to handwriting. They believe their keyboards can do the work. However, I think that handwriting is still important.First of all, handwriti

12、ng is an important part in traditional Chinese culture. Its important to pass on the traditional culture to practice writing Chinese characters. Good handwriting can make us proud as a Chinese and make us love our country further. Next, theres a certain meaning in ones handwriting. For example, some

13、 ways of writing can show feelings in writing letters. Also, writing Chinese characters carefully can help you form a habit of learning Chinese well. At last, a good handwriting can help you get good grades in exams from your excellent look of papers. All in all, its everyones duty to write characte

14、rs well and take action to be good at writing.【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；时态：时态为“一般现在时”；提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。写作步骤第一步，表明自己的观点；第二步，介绍自己认为书写仍然重要的理由。亮点词汇first of all 首先pass on 传递at last 最后高分句型I think that handwriting is still important（that引导宾语从句）Its important to pass on the traditional cultu

15、re to practice writing Chinese characters（动词不定式作主语）4（2022广东广州校考二模）百年古树，是岁月的见证，更是文化传承的载体。近日，你所在的学校发现一棵有着三百余年历史的古树，饱经沧桑，部分树干已枯萎。作为学校英语校刊的负责人，你向全校师生发出一封英文倡议书，请根据下面表格的提示内容，呼吁大家采取行动保护古树。现状树龄大，易受天气影响、易患病；人类活动，如人类迁徙、砍伐等。意义古树是重要的自然资源，也是历史和文化的标志。保护措施1. 合理浇灌，保持土壤湿润；2. 请你补充；3. 请你补充。注意：1. 词数80词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入词数）

16、；2. 内容必须包括表格的所有要点；3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。参考词汇：迁徙migrate资源resourceDear students and teachers,Today Im going to talk about the protection of ancient trees. _【答案】例文：Dear students and teachers,Today Im going to talk about the protection of ancient trees.This is an ancient tree with a history of more

17、 than 300 years. After many vicissitudes, part of its trunk has withered. There are two reasons. On the one hand, this ancient tree is old. It is susceptible to the weather. It is easy to get sick. On the other hand, due to human activities, such as human migration, logging, etc. Ancient trees are o

18、f great significance. It is an important natural resource and a symbol of history and culture.I think we should protect it now. First, water reasonably to keep the soil moist. Second, carry out the prevention and control of diseases and pests of ancient trees. Third, strengthen publicity and educati

19、on to raise the awareness of the whole people to protect. Finally, I hope all of us can take action to protect ancient trees.【详解】总体分析 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； 提示：本题给出了部分提示，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中“现状，意义”要点，适当添加细节，并对“保护措施”部分进行补充，突出写作重点。写作步骤第一步，表面写作意图，指出古树的悠久历史；第二步，具体阐述写作内容，重点讲述造成古树现状的原因，古树的意义以及对古树要采取的保护措施；第三

20、步，总结，呼吁同学们积极的保护古树。亮点词汇on the one hand一方面on the other hand另一方面a symbol of 一种的象征take action采取行动高分句型 This is an ancient tree with a history of more than 300 years. (with+名词短语，作后置定语) On the other hand, due to human activities, such as human migration, logging, etc. (用such as举例)5（2023春广东广州九年级广州市骏景中学校考一模）

21、请根据表格所给的信息，写出Mary的梦想之路并谈谈你的梦想，写一篇80词左右的短文，开头已给出，不计入总词数。Mary的梦想之路1. 出生于一个贫穷的家庭。2. 有写作方面的才能。3. 18岁有机会上大学。4. 英语成绩不好，但不灰心，一直努力。5. 最后实现了梦想，成为了作家。我的梦想我将如何实现梦想1. 努力学习2. Mary was born in_【答案】例文：Mary was born in a poor family. She likes writing because she has a talent for it. She had a chance to go to colle

22、ge at 18. She did not get good grades in English, but she never lost heart and kept trying to get into a good university. With her mothers encouragement, she finally realized her dream and became a writer.My dream is to be a teacher. I hope to help the children in the poor areas. Im going to study h

23、ard to get into college. I plan to learn how to get along with children. I believe I will be a good teacher.【详解】总体分析 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文。 时态：时态为“一般过去时和一般将来时”； 提示：根据提示材料分别介绍Mary的梦想和我的梦想。写作步骤第一步，介绍Mary的梦想之路。第二步，介绍我的梦想。第三步，介绍实现梦想的方法。亮点词汇 have a talent for 对有天赋 keep doing sth 持续做某事 get along with 与和睦相处高分句

24、型 She likes writing because she has a talent for it.（because引导原因状语从句） My dream is to be a teacher（动词不定式作表语）6（2022广东广州广东广雅中学校考二模）劳动教育培养全面发展的人。假如你是学生会的主席Li Hua，你将在校园广播English Today中号召全校同学加入劳动实践活动。请根据以下思维导图，写一篇英语演讲稿。注意:1. 短文应包含所有要点，可以适当发挥，使文章连贯；2. 词数80左右，不包含所给的单词；3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。Dear schoolm

25、ates,Do you think labor education is a necessary skill for everyone?_Chairman of the Student UnionLi Hua【答案】例文：Dear schoolmates,Do you think labor education is a necessary skill for everyone? We can find the only thing we need to do at home is studying. We even dont need to do any housework. This is

26、 because of our lack of this sense. We are used to being lazy in our free time.In fact, doing some housework or other labor practice is really good for us. It can help us build stronger bodies and make us healthier. Whats more, we will also be independent through labor practice. So, we can benefit a

27、 lot from it. Why not do it?At last, what I want to say is that we should offer help to our parents actively. Maybe they are tired from work, but they still have to look after us. We can help them do housework. Last but not least, we should take part in some courses like this. We are supposed to kno

28、w how hard our parents work. Besides, when we are free, we can take part in sports activities. Lets take part in labor education together! Chairman of the Student UnionLi Hua【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于材料作文写作，要求按照所给的要点提示写一篇演讲稿，介绍劳动教育的意义。注意写作时要点要齐全，同时也可进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥。2.写作指导：本文应该用第一、三人称来叙述；时态采用一般现在时；文章开头已给出，写作时，注意

29、承接上文，根据要点提示具体介绍劳动教育的原因，意义以及建议；文中一定要包含题干中列出的所有要点；可以运用一些短语和常用句型为文章增添色彩；注意单词书写的准确度，语法运用的准确度，上下文注意连接的流畅度，以及逻辑合理。7（2022广东广州执信中学校考三模）在过去五年，广州持续推进黑臭水体治理、污水厂建设、碧道建设等工作，水污染防治取得历史性成就，被评为 “国家黑臭水体治理示范城市”。假如你是中学生李华，在端午期间收到外国网友Max的邮件,他对有龙舟民俗的猎德河（The Liede River）很感兴趣，请你根据以下表格提示，介绍猎德河的今昔变化。状况原因看法过去脏、臭工厂污染、倾倒垃圾请你补充现

30、在水清岸绿，可举办龙舟比赛政府、居民的努力注意:1.词数: 80字左右（文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数） 2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。Dear Max,Great changes have taken place to the Liede River which lies in my hometown, Guangzhou. Im glad to tell you something about it._Yours,Li Hua【答案】例文：Dear Max,Great changes have taken place to the Liede River whic

31、h lies in my hometown, Guangzhou. Im glad to tell you something about it. In the past, the water in the river was very dirty because of the factory pollution and the rubbish from the factories. Many living things in the river died. People could not live happily. So the government took measures to st

32、op the factories from pouring the dirty water into the river. People also realized the danger. They worked together to do something for the environment. Now the water in the river is very clear. There are many trees around the bank of the river. They are very beautiful. Even some birds fly there fre

33、ely. Can you believe? We can have a dragon boat race here. Would you come to my hometown? Im sure you will like it.At last, I want to say its everyones duty to protect the environment. If everyone does something for it , the whole world will be a more beautiful place.Hope to come here.Yours,Li Hua【详

34、解】题干解读：该文是一封邮件，写作时按照已给邮件格式补充完整。写作时应承接短文开头；按汉语提示用英语叙述猎德河的今昔对比及发生变化的原因；最后陈述自己对环保的一点看法。写作指导：本文应该用第三人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般过去时叙述过去，一般现在时叙述现在的状况；描述今昔对比变化要叙述原因，以此引出作者的观点；可适当补充内容，使文章更流畅。三、书信作文8（2023春广东广州九年级校考一模）初三学生Sandy面临中考，面对父母和老师的期望，以及每天堆积如山的作业感到非常苦恼。昨天她因为看了一小时的电视和妈妈吵架，最后摔门而去。于是她写信给老师倾诉烦恼，请你根据下列提示，以老师Nancy的身份用英语

35、给她写一封回信。要求：不少于100词。提示：1. 如何舒缓目前的压力；2. 如何安排好每天的学习和休息；3. 如何处理与父母的关系。Dear Sandy,I am really glad that you can share your problems and feelings with me. _Yours,Nancy【答案】例文Dear Sandy,I am really glad that you can share your problems and feelings with me. Here is my advice. First, its a good choice to tak

36、e up a hobby to help you relax and reduce your pressure. Second, you can make plans for your everyday life. After you study for about two hours, you can take a walk outside and try to relax. Besides, dont stay up late. Its not good for your health. Third, never argue with your parents. You should le

37、arn to understand them and spend some time communicating with them. Discuss your problems with them and tell them your ideas. They will help you find better ways to solve them. In a word, you will have a happier life with less pressure as long as you study hard and often talk with your parents. Your

38、s,Nancy【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；时态：时态综合使用“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；提示：写作要点已给出，要结合提示问题，针对Sandy的问题给出建议，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。写作步骤第一步，表明写作意图。借用“给出建议”来引出重点介绍的内容；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“如何舒缓目前的压力、如何安排好每天的学习和休息、如何处理与父母的关系”三个方面重点介绍；第三步，书写结语。表达“希望对方有一个更快乐、压力更小的生活”的愿望。亮点词汇share.with.和分享take up a hobby养成一种兴趣爱好make plans for为制定计划stay

39、up late熬夜高分句型You should learn to understand them and spend some time communicating with them.（and连接并列结构）In a word, you will have a happier life with less pressure as long as you study hard and often talk with your parents.（as long as引导的条件状语从句）9（2023广州九年级一模）中国传统文化深受世界各国人们的喜爱，而广东则以岭南文化而出名，假如你是李华，你们学校将

40、要举办岭南文化节（Lingnan Cultural Festival）活动，你美国的笔友Mike想了解本次活动的细节。请你给他回信，内容包括：（1）时间：下周六上午；地点：学校操场；参加人员：全体师生；（2）介绍岭南文化节的活动（至少两项），注意事项（至少一点）；（3）邀请他通过网络观看和体验本次活动。作文要求：（1）不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和考生的真实姓名。（2）语句连贯，字数80词以上，作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数也不必抄写在答题卡上。Dear Mike,How are you?Im glad to hear from you. Its known that

41、Guangdong is a birthplace of Lingnan Culture in China._Hope youll enjoy the festival online.Yours,Li Hua【答案】例文Its known that Guangdong is a birthplace of Lingnan Culture in China. Our school is going to hold the Lingnan Culture Festival on Jun. 12, 2022, which will be held on the playground of the s

42、chool. All teachers and students will take part in the activity, and some social groups will be invited to perform folk customs.There are two major programs to hold this cultural festival: “music appreciation” and “Cantonese opera appreciation”. It is worth noting that after the wonderful Cantonese

43、opera performance, the actors will turn over to the stage wearing opera costurmes. We should pay attention to safety when participating in activities.You can watch and experience this activity through 5G network.【详解】总体分析 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，需写为书信格式； 时态：时态为一般现在时和一般将来时； 提示：写作主题已给出，写作时主要包含提示要点写清楚举办信息，在介绍活动时注意围

44、绕文化主题自己展开描写，写作时注意不需抄写开头和结尾内容。写作步骤第一步，介绍文化节举办的时间、地点和参加人员；第二步，具体描写文化节上的活动和注意事项；第三步，邀请Mike通过网络观看。亮点词汇 take part in参加 participate in参加 pay attention to注意高分句型 Our school is going to hold the Lingnan Culture Festival on Jun. 12, 2022, which will be held on the playground of the school. （定语从句） It is worth

45、noting that after the wonderful Cantonese opera performance, the actors will turn over to the stage wearing opera costurmes. （主语从句+时间状语从句）四、日记10（2023春广东广州九年级校考一模）北大校友李华回到母校做了一次题为为了理想，努力奋斗吧！的演讲，作为九年级学生，即将初中毕业的你，听了校友的演讲后受到了极大的鼓舞。请写一篇英文日记，为自己制定些学习计划，包括以下要点：1.远离手机和电脑游戏，全身心放在学习上；2.学习计划（请补充2点）；3.业余活动（请补充1

46、点）；4.听了演讲后，你的收获和感受。注意：1.不得透露学校，学生姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。2.字数不少于80字。October 10thSundayDear Diary,Today, my alumnus Li Hua who studies in Peking University gave a lecture called “Fight for your dreams” in our school. _【答案】高分范文October 10thSundayDear Diary,Today, my alumnus Li Hua who studies in Peking Univer

47、sity gave a lecture called “Fight for your dreams” in our school. As a ninth grade student, I was greatly encouraged after listening to the alumni speech. I am determined to study hard, and I hope to enter a good university. I make some study plans for myself. First of all, I want to stay away from

48、mobile phones and computer games. I want to concentrate on my studies. Second, I listen to the teacher carefully in class and take notes. I will finish my homework carefully after class. I made a weekly plan and a monthly plan. Also, I need to exercise more after class. I will play basketball with m

49、y classmates after school.After listening to the speech, I learned that as long as you work hard, you will get good results. I feel that this speech is very instructive to me.【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇日记；时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主，“一般过去时”和“一般将来时”为辅；提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏“听完演讲后的收获和感受”的写作，可适当发挥，使行文连贯。写作步骤第一步，承接开头，引出话题；第二步，详细介绍自己的学习计划。从“学习，业余活动”等方面介绍；第三步，书写结语，表达自己的收获与感受。亮点词汇concentrate on专注于stay away from远离be determined to do sth下定决心做某事高分句型I am determined to study hard, and I hope to enter a good university.（and连接的并列句）I learned that as long as you work hard, you will get good results.（that引导的宾语从句，as long as引导的条件句）