专题09 应用文慰问信（隔离密接者） 续写（个人成长）-2022年新高考英语书面表达终极押题（应用文 读后续写）.docx

1、2022年新高考英语书面表达终极押题（应用文+书面表达）应用文慰问信（隔离密接者）+续写（个人成长）第一节 应用文慰问信写作三步走慰问信是向失败者、生病者、不幸者、愁苦者或遇到天灾人祸的人表示安慰或同情的信件。此类信要写得及时、简明扼要，感情要真诚，措辞要贴切，尽量以乐观的口吻减轻亲友的烦恼和痛苦，并鼓励对方对日后烦人生活、学习、工作充满信心。1.表示安慰；2. 提出建议或措施；3. 表达愿望或祝福。慰问信模板Dear ,Iamverysorryto hearthat ./Iamshockedatthenews about _ (引出具体实情，表示惋惜和同情). Im writing to c

2、onvey our concern to you on behalf of _(组织/社团名字)How are you feeling now? Dont worry about _(对方的困难). Ihopeyouwillmakeeffortstoovercomeallkindsofdifficulty,nomatterhowharditis.If possible , youd better _(提出建议). If you _,youaresuretomakeit.(进一步安慰并鼓励对方)Please dont hesitate to let us know if there is any

3、thing else we can do to help you. We all miss you very much and hope you will .(表达愿望与祝福) Yourssincerely, XX慰问信常用句型1.I was (awfully/extremely/excessively) sorry to hear/learn thatyoure trapped in bad mood, which is because you didnt make it inthe driving test.2.I just cant tell you howsorryI was when

4、 I was informed ofyour sudden illness in your new school.3.Im sorry to learn youre having difficultylearning ancient Chinese poems. However, theres no need to feel upset about it. Id like to offer you some suggestions.4.Having known thatyou are under painful state and great pressure now,Im writing t

5、o express my great comfort to you.5. Upon/On hearing the bad news that ., I felt seized by a burst of sadness/worry/sorrow/grief.6. My sorrow is beyond words for hearingyou have trouble getting along with your classmates.7. Words fail me to convey my worrywhen I heard thatyour left leg got badly inj

6、ured in an car accident.8.Its normal that you feel it challenging tofit in with the new school due tocultural difference and new surroundings.9.It cant be better if you canshare your experiences with others,thus helping thembecome familiar with you in a short period of time.10.Actually, theres no ne

7、ed to worry about it. Such problem is not uncommon amongChinese language learners.11.If there is anything you need me to do, dont hesitate to let me know/dont hesitate to contact me.12.Remember, Iwont be far away/I will always be hereif you need any help!13.I hope you can find my encouragement helpf

8、ul. Best wishes.14. If I can be of any assistance to you, I hope youll let me know immediately/instantly.15. Hope you can have yours troubles removed soon.16. Were hoping for your quick return to health./Were looking forward to your speedy and full recovery.押题实战演练你刚刚得知你的英国笔友Jim因为密切接触奥密克戎感染者需隔离2周，情绪低

9、落。请你请给他写一封电子邮件，要点如下：1. 表示安慰。2. 向其提供建议。注意：1. 词数100左右：2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：奥密克戎Omicron感染 infection隔离 quarantine_第二节 读后续写成长故事构建三步走第一步：成长前的苦恼（负面情绪塑造）1、孤独Inever made friends easily(从不容易交朋友), and for a time I did little more than get on speaking terms with some boys.（2021年4月宁波二模）2、伤心1.我在口袋里什么也没发现，这个事实就

10、像一把长矛刺进我的心脏，立刻开始流血。I found nothing in my pocket,a fact that seemed like a spear piercing into my heartwhich started to bleed immediately.（2021年4月宁波二模）2.看了看周围，我焦急地几乎哭了起来。（2021年4月宁波二模）Looking around anxiously,I almost burst into crying.3.就在我崩溃的时候，克劳利带领的一群男孩从我身边走过（2021年4月宁波二模）Justat the time I broke do

11、wn, a group of boys led by Crawley passed me.3、惭愧1. Shewas overwhelmed / overcome/ consumed with guilt and shame(被内疚和羞愧淹没).（2020.11月潍坊高三英语期中考试）2. Suddenly shecame alive（精神就为之一振）,waving her arthritic(关节炎的) hands.（2021广二模）3.A wave of guilt swept over me(一阵恐惧向我袭来)and I had to admit the fact that I had

12、gone to the movies and that was the real reason why I was late.（2020届山东省滨州市高三第二次模拟英语试题）4、嘲笑他们大声地笑着，像是在尖叫“多漂亮的破表啊！”（2021年4月宁波二模）Theylaughed loudlywith Crawley screaming words like “What a finest broken watch!”5、绝望我妈妈不让我带，”我撒谎，绝望在我心中沸腾。（2021年4月宁波二模）“My mother wouldnt let me bring it,” I lied,desperati

13、on boiling inside me.6、紧张1. Meanwhile, Karie sat restlessly in her seatwith her fingers crossed(她的手指交叉着).（2020.11月潍坊高三英语期中考试）2.She told the teacher the truth ,with her heart thumping / pounding/ pumping like a drum(她的心跳得像打鼓一样).（2020.11月潍坊高三英语期中考试）3.Having paced up and down restlessly(不安地来回走动)in fron

14、t of the the teachers office, she finally gathered courage and plodded in.（2020.11月潍坊高三英语期中考试）7、害怕I unknowingly (不知不觉地) avoided interacting (interact) with anyone becauseI was afraid theyd laugh in my face(我很害怕他们会当面取笑我) .（2021沈阳市一模）第二步：成长中（蜕变塑造）1、惊讶Raising her eyebrows in surprise, Mrs Rossi froze,a

15、s if rooted on the ground（仿佛定格在那里）.（2021广二模）2、希望Jayce looked up to him, his eyessparkling with hope and determination（闪烁着希望和决心）.（2021年汕头一模）3、教育与成长1. “Thats not the right way. Patience, Will. Patience,”a voice echoed in my ears(一个声音在我耳边回响)after the boys left.（2021年4月宁波二模）2. “What was done was done,”

16、thought I to myself. “What is important now is to do correct things next(现在重要的是下一步要做正确的事情).” （2021年4月宁波二模）3.尽管愤怒、尴尬和悲伤重重地笼罩在空气中，但这个声音还是让我意识到我在试图给同学留下深刻印象时犯下的错误。（2021年4月宁波二模）Though anger, embarrassment and sadness hung heavily in the air, the voicedrew me to the awareness of the mistakes I had madewh

17、en I attempted to impress the boys.第三步：成长后的升华（喜悦+感激+升华）1、喜悦1. Kariegrinned(grin) as she read the label on the box.（潍坊高三英语期中考试）2.Dad looked at the paper, withhis lips curving into a smile（他的嘴唇弯成了微笑）.（潍坊高三英语期中考试）3.Hearing that, Karie grinned from ear to ear,a wave of happiness flooding over her（幸福的浪潮涌

18、上她的心头）.（潍坊高三英语期中考试）2、感激I looked at her,tears of love and gratitude(感动和爱的泪水)welling up in my eyes.（2021沈阳市一模）3、升华句1.我确信，将来每当我失去耐心时，我都会记住祖父的话。（2021年4月宁波二模）I knew for sure that every time I lost patience in the future Iwould remember my grandfathers words.2.这是我第一次真正体会到这份礼物的意义耐心。（2021年4月宁波二模）It was the

19、first time that Ihad truly realized the meaning of the gift- patience.然而，从那时起，我保证这只破表会一直提醒我耐心等待，直到真相出现。（2021年4月宁波二模）3、Aram said, “Thanks, Mrs Rossi, for teaching me how to make a cake torealize my dream（实现我的梦想）.” Mrs Rossi held his hands, saying, “ It is you who teach me how tostick to my dream(坚持我的

20、梦想).”（2021广二模）4、It dawned on Aram that（Aram突然想到） “One should stick to his/her dream no matter what happens.”（2021广二模）押题实战演练阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Miss Baugh taught seventh-grade social studies. She was the kind of teacher that just about everyone has had at least once: Scary. Her reput

21、ation was not unlike that of Dracula. Miss Baugh allowed no nonsense (胡言乱语). She drilled us and taught us to take school seriously. She also introduced to us the concept of “extra credit” for a correct response to a random question and a frown for an incorrect one. Miss Baugh had been teaching for a

22、 long time and knew how to frighten even the naughty boys in the back row, including me. She managed to scare us all.But I also had a life outside of school and had just discovered cheap prank (恶作剧) pieces an ink bottle painted to look as though it had overturned, and a piece of shiny black metal sh

23、aped like a puddle of ink.Of all the people I could have pranked, I chose Miss Baugh somehow. At the beginning of the class, before shed returned to her classroom, I dared to approach her desk. I opened her grade book and placed the bottle and the black metal on one of the pages, proudly noting that

24、 it truly did look like spilled ink! Then I went to my desk and waited for the fun.I wasnt disappointed. When Miss Baugh saw the items, she let out a little cry and looked for something to wipe up the ink with. The prank had succeeded the way beyond my expectations. But immediately she discovered th

25、at it was just a piece of black metal. She picked up the “puddle”, then the bottle, and examined them. She looked up with eyes sweeping the classroom with a deadly stare. Some of my classmates who had seen me set up the fake spill carefully avoided looking at me, so as not to give me away. Then came

26、 the unavoidable question: “Who did this?”注意：1续写词数应为150左右；2请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。After a few violent beats in my heart, I slowly raised my hand._Miss Baugh was as strict as before, but something changed in me._参考答案：1Dear Jim,I am sorry to know that you are very distressed, for you need to be quarantined

27、 for two weeks because of the epidemic. Honestly speaking, it is not rare during the epidemic period, but we should make efforts to adapt to the change because we may suffer the epidemic for a long time. My advice is as follows. To start with, you should devote your time to your study instead of kil

28、ling time in playing virtual games or something useless. Progress in study will improve your mood. Equally importantly, you should develop a good habit of living. After all, early to bed and early to rise makes a person healthy, wealthy and wise. If possible, youd better have a good rest, which is o

29、f great benefit to your health.Hope my suggestions will be of help for you.Yours,Li Hua【解析】本篇书面表达属于劝慰信。英国笔友Jim因为密切接触奥密克戎感染者需隔离2周，情绪低落。要求考生给其写信表示安慰。【详解】1.词汇积累失落的：down distressed首先：at first to start with而不是：rather than instead of益处：beneficial of benefit2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：To start with, you should devote yo

30、ur time to your study instead of killing time in playing virtual games or something useless. Progress in study will improve your mood.拓展句：To start with, you should devote your time to your study instead of killing time in playing virtual games or something useless because progress in study will impr

31、ove your mood.【点睛】【高分句型1】I am sorry to know that you are very distressed, for you need to be quarantined for two weeks because of the epidemic. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)【高分句型2】If possible, youd better have a good rest, which is of great benefit to your health. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)2After a few violent beats

32、in my heart, I slowly raised my hand. Miss Baugh fixed me with a stare that struck terror in my heart. The whole classroom fell into a dead silence. I thought a storm of criticism was coming, but unexpectedly, she just laughed. “Well, it certainly fooled me!” she said, with a satisfied expression sp

33、reading across her face. She returned the prank pieces to me, and for a few seconds a sweet little old lady appeared right where Miss Baugh stood.Miss Baugh was as strict as before, but something changed in me. She continued to lead us in our social studies with her serious attitude. I didnt prank o

34、thers any longer and was more focused on my study. And she became a good teacher worthy of respect in my heart just because I glimpsed that Miss Baugh had a warm human being beneath her stern face. That may have been the most enduring “extra credit” I received in seventh-grade social studies.【解析】本文以

35、人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在七年级的时候，因为Baugh老师非常严厉，所以作者想出一个恶作剧来捉弄Baugh老师的故事。【详解】1.段落续写：第一段首句内容“我的心剧烈地跳动了几下，我慢慢地举起了手。”可知，第一段可描写作者承认是自己捉弄了Baugh老师后发生的事情。由第二段首句内容“Baugh老师还是像以前一样严厉，但我有些改变了。”可知，第二段可描写Baugh老师对作者的影响和作者自己的改变。2.续写线索：承认错误老师的反应继续严格要求学生作者的改变个人感悟3.词汇激活行为类归还：return/give back 出现：appear/turn up继续：continue/go on/kee

36、p情绪类出乎意料地：unexpectedly/cap the climax满意的：satisfied/pleasant【点睛】高分句型1.I thought a storm of criticism was coming, but unexpectedly, she just laughed.(运用了省略that的宾语从句)高分句型2 And she became a good teacher worthy of respect in my heart just because I glimpsed that Miss Baugh had a warm human being beneath her stern face. (运用了because引导原因状语从句及that引导的宾语从句)高分句型3 That may have been the most enduring “extra credit” I received in seventh-grade social studies.(运用了省略关系代词的定语从句)