专题10 单元话题书面表达精练精析15篇-2022-2023学年九年级英语上学期期中考点大串讲（牛津深圳版）.docx

1、专题10 单元话题书面表达精练精析15篇期中真题+名校模拟1梦想引领人生，奋斗成就未来。“感动中国”年度人物江梦南，幼年失聪，生活、求学之路充满艰辛，但学医救人一直是她的梦想，她通过读唇语，学会“听”和“说”，凭借刻苦学习、不懈努力，成为一名药学博士。请以“梦想”为话题，写一篇英语短文，内容须包括以下所有要点：1. 描述江梦南的成长经历（练习读唇语，努力学习，克服困难，实现梦想）；2. 谈谈你的梦想（教师/志愿者）、原因及如何实现。参考词汇：读唇语read lips注意：1. 词数80100，已给出部分不计入总词数；2. 可适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺；3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。A

2、 common girl Jiang Mengnan was presented with Touching China Award. She became deaf at an early age. However, she kept fighting against the fate（命运）. _2假设你是某英语报社的记者，请根据以下表格写一篇英语短文，介绍英国女王伊丽莎白二世（Queen Elizabeth II）.出生地伦敦出生日期1926年4月21日身高大约1.60米结婚时间1947年女王的喜好她不喜欢在饮料里加糖，但在晚饭之后，喜欢吃一小块糖。她每天写日记（diary）。她用钢笔写

3、，而不用电脑。她非常喜欢狗，拥有一群她最喜欢的小狗，而且她经常亲自为狗配制狗食。要求：1. 短文要求包括表格提示的所有内容，可适当发挥；2. 80-100词。_3请根据下面表格中的内容提示，写一篇关于著名喜剧演员卓别林的小故事。故事的开端有一天，卓别林带着一大笔钱走在路上。突然出现了一个拿着枪的强盗要卓别林交出钱款。故事的经过卓别林告诉强盗这笔钱是他的老板的，为了给老板一个交代，他要求强盗在他的帽子、衣服和裤子上分别打两枪。强盗照做了。故事的结局卓别林知道强盗的枪里没有子弹了，便一脚把他绊倒，飞快地跑了。要求：1. 80词以上；可适当发挥。2. 内容合理；要点齐全；句子及篇章结构准确、连贯；书

4、写规范。参考词汇：Chaplin卓别林；comedy actor喜剧演员；robber强盗；gun枪；boss老板；shoot射击；bullet子弹_42022北京冬奥会赛场上，中国天才少女谷爱凌因超人的运动天赋、乐观的个性和不断挑战自我的形象，成功收获了众多粉丝的喜爱。谷爱凌曾直言，天分仅仅是一部分，而大部分是努力以及自律的生活方式。请你根据下面的表格，介绍一下这位人气偶像，并谈谈你从她身上学到了什么。NameEileen GuBirthSeptember 3rd, 2003Familyfather （American）, mother （Chinese）Hobbyhorse riding,

5、 piano, skiingExperience and achievement（成就）3 years oldstart skiing9 years oldbecome a champion （冠军）the 2022 Beijing Winter Olympicstwo gold medals （金牌）提示: 1.What do you know about Eileen Gu?2.What can you learn from her?要求：1. 短文须包括表格中所给的全部信息和提示中的两项要点，可适当发挥。2. 文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名。3. 词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总

6、词数）。参考词汇：talent天赋 self-discipline自律My idol（偶像） is Eileen Gu. _5文彦博是北宋杰出的政治家,他自小聪明过人。“文彦博灌水浮球”的故事在我国人民群众中广为流传,脍炙人口。请你根据以下的内容提示,用英语写一篇短文,介绍“文彦博灌水浮球”的故事。【内容提示】文彦博1. 文彦博与朋友踢球时,球被踢进了树洞里。2. 孩子们尝试取球,可是树洞太深,摸不到底。3. 文彦博想出办法后,叫朋友们提来几桶水。4. 注意:(1)参考词汇:桶 bucket浮foat;(2)词数80左右(3)不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。_6伟人之所以成为伟

7、人，是因为他们创造了时代、影响了世界。那么是什么让他们成为伟人的呢？请结合下列调查问卷，以“What makes a great man great?”为题，谈谈自己的看法。Questionnaire:Who was the greatest person in your mind?How has he or she influenced the world?What good qualities did he or she have?What can we learn from him or her?要求：1. 语言流畅，书写整洁；2. 词数：80100。What makes a great

8、 man great?_7假设你是校报的小记者，想写篇介绍纳尔逊曼德拉（Nelson Mandela）的文章。请根据要点提示写一篇英语短文。要点如下：1. 生于1918年，死于2013年12月5日，享年95岁；2. 一生都在为非洲黑人的权利而斗争，是非洲人民的骄傲，被称为“南非国父”；3. 他的故事传遍了全世界，对很多人的生活产生了巨大影响；4. 他不仅是历史上最伟大的人物之一，而且也是我最崇拜的人。要求：1. 语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；2. 所有提示需全部用上，但不要逐条翻译；3. 词数90左右。_8某英语杂志社正在开展“我心中的奥运之星”的英语征文活动，谷爱凌在本届北京冬奥会

9、勇夺两金，为国人树立了良好的榜样。请结合下面表格提供的信息完成一篇征文稿。Gu Ailings Personal information Birth2003.9Jobfreestyle skier, model and studentPersonalityhard-working, positiveAchievement(成就)learned skiing in 2006won two gold medals for China at theBeijing 2022 Winter Olympics内容包括: 1.谷爱凌个人信息；2.你的个人感悟。注意：1.词数: 80-100词（文章开头已给出

10、，不计入总词数）；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.文中不得出现真实姓名及学校姓名。Have you watched the Beijing 2022 Winter Olympics? Did you notice a beautiful girl with long blond hair? _9灿烂星空，谁是真正的英雄？在你心中，英雄是戍边战士吗？是载人航天寻中国梦的宇航员吗？是为国争光的运动之星吗？还是在平凡岗位上默默奉献的人呢？请你根据下面的提示，以The Hero in My Heart为题，写一篇你心中的英雄的作文。要点提示：1. 简单介绍你心目中的一个英雄。2. 阐述他能成为你

11、心目中英雄的原因。3. 你对英雄的定义是什么？写作要求：1. 词数90左右（开头已经给出，不计入总词数）；2. 根据要点提示，可以适当发挥；3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。The Hero in My HeartAs we know, most people have heroes in their hearts. For me, _10中共中央、国务院印发了关于全面加强新时代大中小学劳动教育的意见，提出了中学生应该树立劳动最光荣、劳动最崇高、劳动最伟大、劳动最美丽的观念。 作为一名中学生，请你就家务劳动发表自己的观点。内容包括：（1）你认为应该培养学生的劳动意识吗？为什么？（2）你打算做

12、些什么来让自己养成主动劳动的好习惯？作文要求：(1)不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和考生的真实姓名。(2)语句连贯，词数80个左右。_11家是什么？是一束温暖的阳光，可以融化掉心上的冰雪寒霜；是一盏明灯，可以照亮夜行人晚归的路。家庭生活对每一个孩子的成长是至关重要的。以下两位同学向大家介绍自己的家庭生活是怎么样的。请你结合自己对家庭生活的看法，写一篇英语短文。名字家庭生活杰克家人相处融洽，经常一起购物或散步玛丽父母对自己很严厉，一家人没有户外活动；家庭成员之间不能互相理解我要求：1.短文必须包含以上表格提示的所有内容，可以适当发挥；2.80词左右，文章开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

13、参考词汇：growth成长As we all know, family life plays an important part in our daily life. Different people have different family life. _12 假如在英语课上你们班开展了一次以“ What can we do to make home a happier place?”为主题的讨论, 同学们把自己的想法都写在了卡片上,下面列举了其中的一部分卡片。现在请你结合下面的卡片信息,并自拟自己的想法,用英语写一篇短文。1.spend more time with family2.sh

14、are happiness and worries3.remember family members birthdays注意(1)文章内容必须包括卡片中所有的相关信息,可适当发挥,并自拟自己的想法(2)词数80左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数);(3)不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。In our English class, we had a discussion about what we can do to make home a happier place. _13在成长过程中，青少年会面临很多的烦恼，尤其是精神压力太大。请以此为话题写一篇90词的英语短文。要点提示：1

15、.导致青少年精神压力大的主要原因：学业；与他人相处。2.减少压力的措施：积极参加课外活动；多与他人交流沟通。3.简要谈谈你对压力利弊的看法(至少一点)。注意：1.文章开头已给出，不计入总词数；2.文章必须包含所给要点提示，要求语句通顺，行文连贯；3.不可逐字翻译，应有自己的见解并适当发挥；4.文章中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。_14假如你是第二中学的一名初三学生Millie，你要写一封信给青少年专家Sigmund Friend，告诉他你遇到的问题，并请求帮助。请根据下列表格中所列的信息，写完这封信。姓 名Millie生肖Rooster最喜爱的颜色因为 (自拟内容)存在问题1、父母对你要求严

16、格，几乎没时间给业余爱好；2、熬夜完成作业，在课堂上感到劳累，没有可以交谈的好友；3、考试后父母只关心分数，看不到你的进步，经常遭受压力目前需求希望得到建议要求：1、表达中必须包含所有要点，可以适当发挥清楚，不要简单翻译；2、词数90左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。Dear Sigmund Friend,My name is Millie. Im a Grade 9 student in No. 2 Middle School. _Best wishes!Yours,Millie15假如你是无锡市某初中一名初三学生，名叫王宁。最近你很不开心，因为你和父母之间起了一些争执。你想告诉你远在英国的

17、笔友Tom。请根据以下内容写一封信，告诉Tom你的成长烦恼。内容要点如下：1. 我的数学和语言学得很好，但是觉得学好英语很难；2. 我已尽力，并在英语上取得了进步，但我的父母只关心我的分数；3. 我喜欢音乐，周末也想看看电视，但父母不允许我做这些；4. 我别无选择只能在日记中写下我的想法。然而，父母不尊重我，经常看我的日记；5. 现在，我不知道注意：1. 书信须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；2. 第5要点的内容须用2至3句话作适当的发挥；3. 词数90左右，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Tom,These days I feel sad, because I thi

18、nk growing up is too hard. And I dont know how to communicate with my parents. _Can you offer me some advice? I hope to hear from you soon.Yours,Wang Ning参考答案：1A common girl Jiang Mengnan was presented with Touching China Award. She became deaf at an early age. However, she kept fighting against the

19、 fate（命运）.Jiang Mengnan has been deaf since she was a child. The road to life and study is full of hardships, but it has always been her dream to study medicine to save people. So she read lips and studied hard to realize her dream of becoming a Doctor of pharmacy.I also have a dream. I want to be a

20、 teacher when I grow up. Its been my dream since I was a kid. Because I like playing with children, and I also like to teach my knowledge to others. In order to realize my dream, I must study hard and stick to my dream.【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇材料作文；时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；提示：要求根据“要点” 描述江梦南的成长经历以及谈谈自己的梦想。写作步骤第一

21、步，首先介绍江梦南的成长经历；第二步，介绍自己的梦想；第三步，介绍为什么有这个梦想以及如何实现它。亮点词汇be full of充满grow up长大in order to为了stick to坚持高分句型Jiang Mengnan has been deaf since she was a child.（since引导的时间状语从句）The road to life and study is full of hardships, but it has always been her dream to study medicine to save people.（并列连词and以及转折连词but的

22、使用）2Here is a report about Queen Elizabeth II of Britain. She was born on April 21, 1926 in London. She is about 1.60 meters high. She got married in 1947. What are Queens preferences? Lets have a look! She doesnt like sugar in her drink, but she likes a piece of it after dinner. She keeps a diary e

23、very day. And she writes with a pen instead of a computer. She is very fond of dogs. She has a group of her favorite puppies, and she often makes dog food for the dogs by herself.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于材料作文。根据表格内容，介绍英国女王伊丽莎白二世。表格中涉及到了出生地女王的出生日期、身高、结婚时间和女王的喜好。需要注意一般现在时和一般过去时的交替使用。2.例文点评：例文采用记者做报道的形式，从出生日期、身

24、高、结婚时间和女王的喜好等方面对伊丽莎白二世做了介绍。介绍女王的出生日期和结婚时间时用到了一般过去时；介绍女王的身高和喜好时正确使用了一般现在时。3.高分亮点：短语：be born（出生）；get married（结婚）；have a look（看一看）；a piece of sugar（一块糖）；after dinner（饭后）；keep a diary（写日记）；instead of （而不是，取而代之的是）；be fond of（喜爱）；by herself（亲自）。句型：And she writes with a pen instead of a computer.（她用钢笔写，而不用

25、电脑。）She has a group of her favorite puppies, and she often makes dog food for the dogs by herself.（她有一群她最喜欢的小狗，而且她经常亲自为狗配制狗食。）3例文Chaplin was a famous comedy actor.One day, he took a lot of money with him on the way. Suddenly, a robber with a gun appeared. The robber asked Chaplin to take out all the

26、 money. Chaplin agreed but he told the robber that the money belonged to his boss. To explain to his boss, he asked the robber to shoot on his hat two times, the robber agreed. Then Chaplin asked him to shoot on his coat, and then his trousers. When Chaplin knew there was no bullet in the robbers gu

27、n, he made the robber fall down with one of his feet and ran away quickly.How clever Chaplin was!【详解】1.题干解读：本文属于记叙文写作，要求根据表格内容写一篇关于卓别林的小故事，需包含故事的开端、经过和结局。2.写作指导：下笔之前应仔细阅读这个故事，然后再分三段进行写作。第一段：简要介绍一下卓别林；第二段：按照中文提示组织语言叙述这个故事。第三段：简单评价一下卓别林。4例文：My idol（偶像） is Eileen Gu. She was born on September 3, 2003.

28、She is 1.75 meters tall. Her father is an American person. Her mother is a Chinese person. She has many hobbies, such as horse riding, piano, skiing and so on. She studied skiing at the age of three and soon showed her talent. When she was 9 years old, she became a champion. In the 2022 Beijing Wint

29、er Olympic Games, she won two gold medals and one silver medal. She will enter Stanford University in the fall of 2022. I think Gu Ailings achievements and talents are only part of it. Most of them are hard training and self-discipline lifestyle. She is self-conscious and self disciplined. Ambition

30、and love are the wings of Gu Ailings success.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，要求根据所给英文提示介绍中国天才少女谷爱凌，包括她的生日、家庭、爱好以及经历和成就。2.写作指导：本文人称以第三人称为主；时态采用一般现在时为主，用过去时描述经历。同时注意文章的连贯性，保证条理清晰。5例文Wen Yanbo lived in ancient China. One day, he was playing a ball with his friends on the grass near a big tree. Suddenly, the ball

31、 was kicked into the hole of the tree. The children tried to get the ball by hand. But the hole was so deep that they couldnt touch the bottom of it. Wen Yanbo thought for a while and said, I have an idea. Lets have a try. ” He asked his friends to carry some buckets of water and fill the tree hole

32、with the water. When some water ran over, the ball floated. They got the ball finally. How clever Wen Yanbo was!【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，文中给出了人物和事件，按照要求写一篇介绍文彦博的短文。内容提示给出了事情的开头，之后的过程及结果，要求作者自己发挥。全文讲述文彦博过去的故事，时态用一般过去时。2.例文点评：本例文以记叙文的方式记录了文彦博的故事，时态是一般过去时，人称是第三人称。讲述故事，注意句与句之间的衔接，使文章流畅、通顺。最后以总结性的语言结束全文。3.高分

33、亮点：Suddenly；被动语态；try to do sth；sothat句型；fill with；run over；感叹句。6例文：What makes a great man great？The greatest person in my mind is Albert Einstein.I think he was great because he devoted all his life to researching the world of science. And he achieved a lot of success. What he did for the world has

34、changed the world a lot. Einstein is a scientist who changed the way we understand the world around us. He loved his work and never gave up easily. And I think he was very modest. He helped a lot of younger scientists. All of these made him the greatest scientist in history.【详解】1.题干解读：题干要求以“What mak

35、es a great man great?”为题写一篇短文，题中给出了提示问题，包括：你认为谁是最伟大的人，他/她是怎样影响世界的，他/她有什么样的品质，以及我们能从他/她身上学到什么。写作时注意结合提示问题，进行适当拓展。2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般过去时为主，以第三人称介绍伟人。第一段开门见山，直接描述是谁，第二段结合提示陈述原因，第三段总结收尾。注意做到无语法和标点错误。7例文Nelson Mandela was born in 1918. He died on December 5, 2013 at the age of 95. He spent all his life fight

36、ing for the rights of black Africans. He is the pride of Africans and is called the Father of South Africa. His story spread all over the world and made a great difference to many peoples life. He was presented the Nobel Peace Prize because of his excellent achievements. He is not only one of the gr

37、eatest people in history but also the man I admire the most.【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求根据所给要点，写一篇短文介绍纳尔逊曼德拉，要做到要点齐全，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：写作时要以第三人称为主，时态以一般过去时为主。可采用一段式写作：在文中要清楚介绍纳尔逊曼德拉的个人信息、对非洲黑人的权利的争取、获得的巨大成就以及我们对他的感受。在写作时要做到无标点符合和语法错误。8参考范文：Have you watched the Beijing 2022 Winter Olympics? Did you notice a beautiful

38、girl with long blond hair? Now let me introduce her to you.Gu Ailing, a freestyle skier, is a model as well as an excellent student. Gu Ailing was born in September, 2003, and she started to learn skiing at the age of only three because she loves the feeling of snow. The 18-year-old girl won two gol

39、d medals for China at the Beijing 2022 Winter Olympics and made history.Gus positive attitude and hard work help her achieve great success. We should learn from her and never give up when we are in trouble. She sets a good example for us, and I want to learn from her and make full use of my time and

40、 make contributions to our country.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据表格提示内容，写一篇征文稿，介绍谷爱凌个人情况及她在北京冬奥会勇夺两金的成就，并表达自己的感悟。2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主；人称以第三人称和第一人称为主。本文分为三段式，第一段引出话题要介绍谷爱凌，第二段介绍她的个人情况及取得的成就，第三段写自己的感悟。写作要确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。9例文：The Hero in My HeartAs we know, most people have heroes in their hearts. For me

41、, Li Lianjie is one of the most famous film stars in China. And he is also a hero in my heart.He played a role in a film when he was a child. Through his hard work he has made a lot of films. He is so brave and careful that he always tries his best to make the action perfect. As a Chinese he promise

42、s to make every foreigner know Chinese kung fu culture well. He gave away much money to help the children in poor villages. From Li Lianjie I can learn a lot, such as the resolution to succeed and the thoughts of helping others. I think a person who can be a role model for us is our hero.【详解】1.题干解读：

43、本文是一篇材料作文。根据提示，以“The Hero in My Heart”为题，写一篇作文介绍你新心中的作文。2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时；人称以第三人称为主。写作内容包括：英雄是谁；为什么他/她是你心目中的英雄；你对英雄的定义。写作时注意语言的连贯性，确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。10范文：I think its necessary for students to help do some labors in their free time. Students can learn something about life by doing so. As for me, I will

44、 help my parents do chores at home. For example, I will help them clean the floor, wash the vegetables and do the dishes actively when Im free. I can learn how to take care of myself by sharing the housework. At school, I will help my classmates clean our classroom and school yard carefully. I will

45、learn how to work with others. Its also beneficial to me to develop a good friendship with my classmates. Besides, I will do some volunteer work on weekends, such as picking up the rubbish in the park or planting trees and so on.In a word, I think we should develop the habit of doing labors to becom

46、e better persons.【详解】1.题干解读：本文属于说明文，主要讲述学生们是否应该培养劳动意识和原因，以及你打算如何培养自主劳动的习惯。本文采取三段式，第一段提出观点，即学生应该帮忙做一些家务；第二段从自身的角度出发，讲述我怎么帮忙做家务；第三段总结，即我们应该培养劳动的习惯。2.写作指导：本文主要以第一人称叙述，时态以一般现在时为主，讲述自己如何帮忙做家务时，应使用一般将来时。写作时保证要点齐全，不要遗漏要点，条理清晰。可以适当使用所学亮点词句，如Its adj for sb to do sth, help sb do, take care of, beneficial以及dev

47、elop the habit of等。11参考范文As we all know, family life plays an important part in our daily life. Different people have different family life. Jack says his family members always get on well with each other. And their family life is great and full of happy things. They often go shopping together or ha

48、ve a walk in a park. But Mary says she isnt happy with her family life because her parents are hard on her. And they have no outdoor activities. Whats more, their family members cant understand each other. In my opinion, family members should understand each other. They should often talk about their

49、 problems and do some things together.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，写作要按记叙文格式写。在写作时开头应介绍不同的人有不同的家庭生活；第二段介绍杰克的家庭生活；第三段介绍玛丽的家庭生活，最后一段表达我对家庭生活的观点。2.写作指导：本文应该用第一、三人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时，在介绍不同人的家庭生活时，列举了杰克和玛丽的不同家庭生活；并且关于杰克的、玛丽的家庭生活以及我的观点等需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。12In our English class, we had a discussion about what we can do t

50、o make home a happier place. We shared different ideas.Some say its better to spend more time with family. The more we get together, the better we understand each other. Some think family members should share happiness and worries. For example, when they have problems, we should try to cheer them up

51、. Others believe its important to remember our family members birthdays. We can give small presents to them.I think showing love for family is necessary. If we help with housework, they may feel warmer. Sometimes, even the smallest thing like walking with family makes them happier. Though were young

52、, we can do much to make a happier home.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于议论文写作。在写作时第一段引出讨论的主题；第二段写出同学们不同的想法；第三段说出自己的想法。2.例文点评：例文采用三段式，时态主要采用一般现在时为主。文中段落过度自然，衔接流畅，句式丰富多彩，避免单一化，增加了文章的亮点，润色了文章的内容。3.高分亮点：短语：get together；cheer them up；giveto；help with。句型：its better to do sth.；the+比较级，the+比较级；its important to do sth.；if引导

53、的条件状语从句；though引导的让步状语从句。13例文：We teenagers have more and more pressure while growing up. Here are two main reasons. One of the reasons is that we often have too much schoolwork. The other reason is that some students have difficulty in getting on well with others. However, too much pressure is not go

54、od for teenagers development. So it is important to know how to deal with the pressure. Taking part in after-school activities is a very useful way. Besides this, more communication with others often works. All in all, we should try our best to deal with our stress and keep healthy in body and mind.

55、【详解】总体分析题材：本文是议论文，为材料作文；时态：时态为“一般现在时”；提示：根据所给要点提示，介绍青少年的精神压力，以及给出自己对于压力利弊的看法。写作步骤第一步，首先介绍青少年压力大的原因；第二步，具体阐述减少压力的方法；第三步，具体谈谈你自己对压力利弊的看法。亮点词汇have difficulty in doing做某事有困难take part in参加All in all总而言之try ones best尽某人最大的努力deal with处理高分句型 The other reason is that some students have difficulty in getting

56、on well with others.（that引导的表语从句）Taking part in after-school activities is a very useful way.（动名词作主语）14例文Dear Sigmund Friend,My name is Millie. Im a Grade 9 student in No. 2 Middle School. I was born in the Year of Rooster. My favourite color is green. Because it stands for nature and peace. I have

57、a big problem and I want to know how to deal with it.My parents are very strict with me. They hardly give me some free time to play. I really hate this. I often stay up late to finish my homework. So I feel sleepy in class. I have no friends to chat with and I feel lonely. After exams, my parents on

58、ly pay attention to my marks. I feel stressed because they think that I make little progress. Can you give me some useful advice? I hope to hear from you soon.Best wishes!Yours,Millie【详解】总体分析 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文。 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； 提示：根据提示材料介绍个人信息以及自己的困扰。写作步骤第一步，开头已给出，介绍自己的个人信息。第二步，根据提示材料介绍自己的困扰是什么，并寻求对方的

59、建议。亮点词汇 be born in生于 stand for代表 deal with处理高分句型 I often stay up late to finish my homework（动词不定式作目的状语） I feel stressed because they think that I make little progress.（because引导原因状语从句）15例文：Dear Tom,These days I feel sad, because I think growing up is too hard. And I dont know how to communicate with

60、 my parents.I am good at Maths and Chinese, but I find it difficult to learn English well. I have tried my best and I have made progress in English. But my parents care only about my marks. I like music very much, and I want to watch TV at weekends. However, my parents dont allow me to do them. I ha

61、ve no choice but to write down my thoughts in my dairy. But my parents dont respect me. They often read my diary/diaries.Now I am not interested in my study. I dont know how to deal with it.Can you offer me some advice? I hope to hear from you soon.Yours,Wang Ning【详解】1. 题干解读：本文属于书信作文。题目要求是请你根据提示内容给英国的笔友Tom写一封信，告诉他，你的成长烦恼。2. 写作指导：根据提示内容可知，本文应用第一人称叙述，时态以一般现在时为主。文中已给出了作文的开头和结尾，我们要做的就是用正确的英语，把文中给出的写作要点表达出来；写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上，提示的要点就是写作的基本方向；然后围绕要点，适当发挥；语言表述要符合语法结构，造句要符合英语表达习惯，不要出现语法错误，同时要保证语句通顺，意思连贯，逻辑合理。