专题11 书面表达精练精析15篇(期中真题 名校模拟)-2022-2023学年七年级英语上学期期中考点大串讲（牛津深圳版）.docx

1、专题11 书面表达精练精析15篇期中真题+名校模拟1 七年级上学期的学习生活已过大半了。在这半年的初中生活中，你一定结识了很多新朋友吧！那么谁是你最好的朋友呢？请根据下面的提示，以My best friend为题写一篇英语短文，向大家介绍一下你最好的朋友。 内容包括：1）介绍你朋友的个人情况(包括姓名、年龄、班级和联系电话)。2）说说他或她的爱好和会做的事(至少两点)。3）你喜欢跟他或她做朋友的原因。作文要求：1）不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。2）语句连贯，词数60个左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。My best friendHi, Im Li Jun.

2、 Im in Grade Seven now. This term, I make some new friends. _2朋友在每个人的生活中都不可或缺。假如你校英文报正在征集有关“朋友”的文章，请你根据下面的要点提示，以“My friend”为题写一篇英语短文，给校英文报投稿。要点：1. Why are friends important?2. What kind of friends do you want?3. Can you give an example?要求：1. 须包含以上所给要点，并可适当发挥；2. 条理清楚，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；3. 70词左右。My friend

3、_3友情，是一叶扁舟的纤纤双桨；友情，是一袋沙漠中行走的水囊； 友情，是一道黎明前的曙光!请写篇文章介绍你的朋友。内容包括：1、朋友的外貌、性格。2、你最欣赏他(她)的一个性格并举例说明。3、祝愿你们能够友谊长存。作文要求：1、不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称、老师和同学的真实姓名。2、语言连贯，词数70个左右。My friend_4假设你是李华，你新注册了一个博客账号。你打算在上面用英文来简单地介绍自己以结交到来自世界不同地方的朋友。请根据以下内容提示，写一篇不少于7句话的自我介绍。短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总句数。内容提示：1. How old are you?2. Which city

4、do you come from?3. Who do you live with?4. How do you go to school?5. What subject do you like?6. What is your dream?7. What is your hobby?Hello everyone! Welcome to my blog. My name is Li Hua. _That is all about me. Do you want to be my friend? Email me. Please！5你羡慕上文中Simon的学校生活吗？请写一篇短文介绍你的学校生活情况。

5、内容包括：（1）你就读班级和最喜欢的科目及原因。（2）常做的课后活动及原因。（3）评价自己学校生活：呼吁学生们能努力学习，多做运动。作文要求：（1）不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。（2）语句连贯，词数60个左右。作文的开头已经给出My school lifeHi!My name is Jack.Im 13 years old. _6请根据以下内容提示及要求以“My Day”为题写一篇英语短文介绍自己。提示：1.每天几点起床、吃早饭、上学；2.下午几点钟放学、回家；3.晚上几点吃晚餐、看电视、睡觉。要求：1.词数不少于 60个；2.语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁。文中不得使用你的真

6、实姓名、校名，否则以零分记。_7假如你是初一新生Anne，请根据提示，给你的笔友Peter写封70词左右的邮件，介绍你的校园生活。提示：（1）在七年级四班学习，家离学校很近，每天步行上学；（2）最喜欢的科目是英语和地理。很喜欢校园生活，有许多好朋友，老师们都很友好；（3）擅长唱歌和游泳，课后经常参加各种各样的活动；（4）努力学习，梦想当一名老师。Dear Peter, Im writing to tell you something about my school life._Yours, Anne8请根据下面的提示，介绍王磊一天的生活。要求：（1）70词左右，要包括所有提示要点；（2）文中不

7、得出现真实姓名和校名；（3）可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；（4）标点正确，书面整洁。姓名王磊年龄12岁日常生活和爷爷奶奶住；每天早早起床；吃完早餐步行到学校；学习刻苦，喜欢英语；中午在学校吃饭；下午5：30放学，回到家给爷爷奶奶做饭；晚上8：00做完家务，然后做作业；晚上10：00睡觉。你的评价：Wang Leis daily life_9环境污染问题越来越严重，你打算给广州日报投一篇英语短文，描述污染现象，给予改进建议，呼吁人们爱护环境，保护地球。请根据表格内容，完成这篇短文。现象1每天捕捞很多鱼、往河里倒垃圾2砍伐树木、为了获得能量燃烧东西措施1停止往河流里排放污水2请你补充注意

8、：1.词数： 70 词左右（文章的开头已给出，不计入词数）2.不得透露学校、姓名等个人信息，否则不予评分。Protect the EarthThe environment in our city is becoming worse. _10现在，人类造成的污染越来越多，如何减少污染,，保护地球，请你根据提示写一篇不少于80个词的作文，并阐述个人的建议。题目是 “Save the Earth”。1）人们焚烧东西来获得能量，越来越多汽车排出废气，造成空气污染。2）人们每天捕很多鱼，砍伐大量树木，造成鱼和树木越来越少。3）人们乱扔垃圾，造成土地污染。4）个人观点和建议Save the EarthTo

9、day, there is a lot of pollution on the Earth. _11树木是非常宝贵的自然资源，人类与动物的生活都离不开树木。请你根据下面的内容提示，写一篇关于树的文章。要求：70词以上，可以适当发挥。（开头已经给出，不计入总词数）提示：树木的用处树木的现状我们应该做的1. 树木可以为人类提供氧气，吸收有害气体，美化环境；2. （再写出至少2条）人类滥砍滥伐，树木越来越少保护树木Trees are valuable natural resources. Neither people nor animals can live without them. _126月5

10、日是世界环境保护日，你校英语报打算举行“保护环境，从我做起”的英文征文比赛。假如你是学生李华，请以“Going Green”为题，针对目前存在的严重环境问题写一份关于环保的倡议书向校报投稿。写作内容：环境问题砍伐树木；水污染，居民用水浪费，用电浪费措施多种树，节约用纸，节约用水，节约用电写作要求：1.表达清楚、语句通顺、意思连贯；2.应用表格中的所有信息，并适当发挥；3.80词左右。文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。Going GreenOur environment is becoming worse. _13树木对人类来说非常重要，请以“Trees are important”为题，写一篇

11、演讲稿，号召全体同学保护和爱护树木。请你根据以下的内容提示完成作文。要求80词左右，请适当发挥。开头已给出，不计入总词数。树木的用途1. 树木吸收有害气体，释放氧气供我们呼吸。2. 树木给我们提供很多有用的东西，如木材和药品等。3. ？（补充1点）保护树木的措施？（自由发挥2 点）Trees are importantHello, everyone. Today my topic is “Trees are important”. _Thats all. Thanks for your listening!14 假如你是 Jenny,你将要参加学校英文报举办的以“ My Favourite S

12、eason”为题的征文活动,请根据下面的提示,写一篇英语短文,介绍你喜欢的季节春天。天气：气候温暖,树叶变绿,鲜花盛开活动:1.野餐、聚会2.其他活动?(请你补充) 作文要求：1. 词数60左右(文章的开头已给出,不计入词数);2.在作文中不得出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。My Favourite SeasonDifferent people like different seasons. For me, spring is my favourite season _15深圳是一座美丽的大都市，请你根据下面的提示信息，以The weather in Shenzhen为题，写一篇60词左右

13、的短文，简单介绍一下深圳的气候。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。提示：深圳是一座温暖的城市；夏季时间长，天气很热，有时会有暴风雨（storm）；冬季时间短，不冷，而且通常不会下雪。The weather in ShenzhenShenzhen is a beautiful city. I like this city and I like living here too. _参考答案：1例文：My best friendHi, Im Li Jun. Im in Grade Seven now. This term, I make some new friends.His name is Lin

14、 Tao. He is a 13-year-old boy. Now He studies in Yangjing Middle School. He is in Class 2, Grade 7. His telephone number is 568-8628.At school, He studies hard. He likes playing basketball and running. He can draw pictures. He also can play guitar.He is very friendly to classmate. He often helps me

15、study. So I like to make friends with him very much.【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇记叙文；时态：时态为“一般现在时”；提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的要点，再适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。写作步骤第一步：表明写作意图。借用“自我介绍”来引出重点介绍的内容；第二步：具体阐述写作内容。从“个人情况、爱好和会做的事、喜欢跟他或她做朋友的原因等”几个方面进行介绍。第三步：书写结语。表达“作者自己的感受”。亮点词汇make friends 交朋友play guitar 弹吉他is very friendly to 对某人友好高

16、分句型At school, He studies hard.（副词修饰动词）He often helps me study.（省略了to的动词不定式作宾语补足语）2例文My friendFriends are very important in our life. Why? Because we need friends to share our happiness and worries. If we are in trouble, we can ask our friends for help. If we feel sad, staying with friends can make u

17、s happy.I want to make friends with people who are cheerful and outgoing. I have such a friend and her name is Lydia. She is very helpful. She often encourages me and gives me support when Im sad. I hope we can remain friends forever.【详解】题目解读：本文是一篇材料作文，文中需介绍朋友重要的原因，你想要哪类朋友，举例说明。注意要点齐全，语句通顺。写作指导：本文以第

18、一人称书写，时态是一般现在时。可分为两段，第一段介绍原因，第二段介绍需要的朋友，并举例，注意介绍朋友时的主谓一致。可以多使用并列句和从句。3例文：My best friend, Connie, is two years older than me. We spend a lot of time together.Connie has long dark brown hair and her eyes are big and round. People say she is beautiful and looks like a doll. When we go out, people often

19、 say that I am older than her, because she is shorter and slimmer.Connie is optimistic even when things go wrong. Last week, she got exam results, which were not very good. I thought she was going to be sad. Instead, she simply decided to do better the next time. Then, every day after class, when te

20、achers were free in their offices, she would ask them for help.Connie gets on well with others. Everyone in my family likes her, even my younger brother. I hope we will be always best friends.【详解】1、题干解读：该题目属于材料作文写作，写作时应先介绍朋友的个人情况，然后介绍你欣赏的她的性格，最后表达祝愿，可适当发挥。2、写作指导：本文应该以第三人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时为主；介绍好朋

21、友时，应详细具体，语句通顺，逻辑性强，保证条理清晰。4例文：Hello everyone! Welcome to my blog. My name is Li Hua. I am twelve years old. I come from Guang Zhou. Now I live with my parents. And I go to school by bike. My favorite subject is math, because I think it is useful. I want to be a math teacher when I grow up.After clas

22、s, I like playing basketball with my friends and listening to music.That is all about me. Do you want to be my friend? Email me. Please！【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，写作时要记叙文的格式写。在写作时开头欢迎大家来看我的博客；接下来介绍我的个人信息；最后表示想要和我交朋友，可以给我发电子邮件。2.例文点评：例文采用三段式；用第一人称来介绍自己的情况；时态采用一般现在时；介绍自己的姓名，来自的地方，喜好，叙述完整且条理清晰。3.高分亮点：短语：com

23、e from，go to school，want to do sth，grow up，like doing sth。句型：祈使句Welcome to my blog；原因状语从句because I think it is useful；时间状语从句when I grow up。5例文：My school lifeHi! My name is Jack. Im 13 years old. My school lifeis interesting. School life is rich and colorful. Let me tell you something about it. Im in

24、 Class 2, I love it very much. we always play games on the playground. We usually play outdoor activities, such as football and volleyball. I like my school life. We should study hard and do more exercise.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求介绍你的学校生活情况，要求要点覆盖全面，可适当扩充，注意写作时内容要紧扣主题。2. 写作指导：本文使用一般现在时态，人称用第一人称。文章开头已给

25、出，写作时，注意承接上文，写作中注意一些常用句式和一些连词的使用，内容上应注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。6例文Every morning I get up at six oclock. I have breakfast at about seven. After that, I go to school. I get to school at about seven fifty. Classes begin at ten past eight. We have four lessons in the morning. I have lunch at

26、 school. In the afternoon we have two lessons. I go home at half past four. I have supper at about six oclock. After supper, I watch TV. Sometimes I do my homework. At about nine oclock I go to bed.【详解】1.题干解读：本题为话题作文，要求根据题目提供的思路写一篇题为“My Day”的短文，介绍自己一天的日常生活。2.写作指导：写作时人称应用第一人称，时态应用现在时。文章按照题目所给提示，根据上午、

27、下午、晚上的时间线对一天的日常生活展开叙述即可。文章应做到思路清晰，叙述流畅，不要出现单词拼写及语法时态方面的错误。7例文DearPeter, Im writing to tell you something about my school life. I study in Class Three, Grade Seven. I live close to my school, so I often go to school on foot.My favourite subjects are English and Geography. I enjoy my school life very

28、much and I have many good friends. All my teachers are very friendly. Im good at singing and swimming. I often take part in different kinds of activities after class. Im hard-working. My dream is to be a teacher.I hope to hear from you soon.Best wishes.Yours,Anne【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一封电子邮件。向笔友Peter介绍自己的校园生

29、活。2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称以第一人称为主。从年级，上学的交通方式，最喜欢的学科以及学校人员等方面介绍。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。8One possible version:Wang Leis daily lifeWang Lei is 12 years old and he lives with his grandparents. He gets up early and makes breakfast for his grandparents every day. It takes him forty minutes to walk to school. W

30、ang Lei studies hard at school and he likes English. He usually has lunch in the school dining hall. School ends at 5:30 p.m. After walking home, Wang Lei makes dinner for his grandparents at once. Wang Lei finishes housework at 8:00 p.m. And he goes to bed at 10:00 p.m. He is a kind boy.【详解】1.题干解读：

31、题目要求根据提示要点，介绍王磊的日常生活的情况，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。2.写作指导：写作时要紧扣主题，本文应该用第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。9例文：Protect the EarthThe environment in our city is becoming worse. People catch a lot of fish every day. They also throw rubbish into rivers. This pollutes the water. As a resul

32、t, there are fewer and fewer fish in the rivers. Whats more, people cut down many trees in the forest. They burn things to make energy. This pollutes the air. Its time for us to do something to save our city. We must stop putting waste water into rivers. When we go shopping, we can take our own shop

33、ping bags. Whats more, we can ask people to plant more trees every year.Its important for us to protect our city. Lets take action now.【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇说明文；时态：时态为“一般现在时”；提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏给出的要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。写作步骤第一步，先介绍环境变得越来越糟糕；第二步，介绍环境变得糟糕的原因；第三步，提出环境改进的建议，呼吁人们爱护地球。亮点词汇become worse变得更糟throw rubb

34、ish into rivers把垃圾扔进河里as a result结果cut down砍伐Whatmore而且高分句型Its time for us to do something to save our city.(it作形式主语)When we go shopping, we can take our own shopping bags.(when引导时间状语从句)10例文：Save the EarthToday, there is a lot of pollution on the Earth. As we all know, people always burn many things

35、 to gain energy and as more and more cars discharge waste gas. Besides, there are many fish that are caught by us which has made fish and trees fewer and fewer. Finally, everyone is making rubbish which pollted the earth. So it is the best time to do something to save the environment. First, we shou

36、ld stop polluting the earth. Then we need more green energy like wind and sun. Last but not least, we also need to teach students in right ways.【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求以“Save the Earth”为题根据提示内容写作文，并阐述自己的建议。2.写作指导：写作时要以第一、三人称为主，时态采用一般现在时，提建议时可使用适当的连接词和情态动词。可分为两段式写作：第一段讲地球被污染的现状；第二段给出自己的建议。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。11例文：T

37、rees are valuable natural resources. Neither people nor animals can live without them.Trees help us in many ways. First, they can produce oxygen and take in harmful gases. Because of trees, our environment is getting more and more beautiful. Second, we can use trees to make many useful things, such

38、as furniture, paper, and pencils. These things are really useful in our daily life. Lastly, trees can also provide tea, oil and fruit for people and animals. As a result, people and animals can survive on Earth.Trees play an important role in our daily life, but we cut down so many of them that they

39、 are becoming fewer and fewer. It is necessary for us to protect them from now on.【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求根据表格提示写一篇关于树的文章，介绍树木的用处及现状。2.写作指导：写作时要以第三人称为主，时态采用一般现在时。文章可分为三段式：第一段点题；第二段介绍树木的用处；第三段介绍树木面临的现状，呼吁人们保护树木。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。12例文Going GreenOur environment is becoming worse. We need to take action to protect i

40、t.First, because of a great demand for paper, people cut down millions of trees every year. To keep our environment green, we should call on people to stop cutting down trees. Besides, we are supposed to save paper. Second, a huge waste of water together with water pollution are serious matters, too

41、. In order to solve these problems, we can start with small things. For example, remember to turn off the tap after use and never throw rubbish into rivers. Whats more, we can plant more trees. Third, a waste of electricity is a major problem. It is necessary for us to turn off the electricity after

42、 we use it so as to save electricity as much as possible.Every little effort counts. Lets go green!【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“Going Green”为题，描述目前存在的环境问题以及解决办法。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段描述目前存在的环境问题以及解决措施；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。13例文Trees are importantHello, everyone. Tod

43、ay my topic is “Trees are important”. Trees are very useful. First, trees can keep the air cool and clean, they can make our environment more beautiful and keep us healthy. Second, trees can take in harmful gases and produce oxygen for us to breathe. Third, the trunk and branches provide us with woo

44、d so we can use wood to make many things. For example, much furniture is made of wood. We can also use some trees in Chinese medicine to fight against diseases. Finally, trees can provide us with some food.In short, trees are really helpful to us in many different ways. So its important for us to pr

45、otect trees. First, we should stop cutting down so many trees and do our best to plant more trees. Second, we had better use both sides of the paper so that we can save wood. Thats all. Thanks for your listening!【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇演讲稿，文章需从树木用途和保护树木措施两方面介绍，除给出内容，需要考生合理发挥补充。要求要点齐全。2.写作指导：本文主要以第三人称书写，时态是一

46、般现在时。开头结尾已给出，第一段引出主题，第二段介绍树木用途，第三段介绍保护树木建议，第四段结束语。可使用First、Secondly、Third和Finally等分条介绍，使短文条理清晰。可以多使用固定句型，增加文章层次。14例文My Favourite SeasonDifferent people like different seasons. For me, spring is my favourite season. I like it because the weather is usually warm. Its not too cold or too hot. The leave

47、s turn green and the flowers come out, so the air in spring is fresh. Spring is also a good time for picnics and parties.In spring, I usually go hiking with my family or friends. And I also enjoy flying kites in the park. Spring makes me feel happy and relaxed. I really like it!【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇记叙文，假

48、如你是Jenny，将要参加学校英文报举办的以“My Favourite Season”为题的征文活动，要求根据提示内容介绍自己最喜欢的季节春天。写作时，要根据提示内容，紧扣主题，写出春天的特点；要注意主谓一致、时态呼应、用词贴切等。2.例文分析：本文时态为一般现在时，人称主要为第一、第三人称。开篇首先点明主题，然后阐述了喜欢春天的原因，以及在春天自己喜欢的活动，最后再次与开头呼应，表明自己喜欢春天。3.高分亮点：短语：turn green，come out，go hiking。句型：I like it because the weather is usually warm. 我喜欢它，因为天气

49、通常是温暖的。这里是because引导的原因状语从句。Its not too cold or too hot. 它既不太热也不太冷。tooto太而不能。And I also enjoy flying kites in the park. 我也喜欢在公园里放风筝。enjoy doing sth. 喜欢做某事。15例文The weather in ShenzhenShenzhen is a beautiful city. Its usually warm all year round. The day is long in summer and short in winter. The weath

50、er in Shenzhen is very hot in summer. Sometimes there are storms and strong winds. Many people like going swimming in this season. Its not very cold in winter. You cant make snowmen here because there is usually no snow. I like this city and I like living here too.【详解】1、题干解读：这是一篇提示性作文，要求介绍深圳的气候，提示中已

51、经详细提示了深圳的气候状况，所以必须围绕提示组织句子。2、例文点评：本文主要采用一般现在时；根据提示详细地介绍了深圳的天气情况。同时根据不同的季节适当增添了一些活动，内容充实全面。3、高分亮点：短语：all year round ；make snowmen；like doing sth。句型：You cant make snowmen here because there is usually no snow；Sometimes there are storms and strong winds。【点睛】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如all year round ；make snowmen；like doing sth等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。