专题17 书面表达 2020-2021学年【教育机构专用教材 寒假作业】七年级英语提分方案（外研版）【学科网名师堂】.docx

1、专题17 书面表达 2020-2021学年【教育机构专用教材+寒假作业】七年级英语提分方案（外研版）序号内容第一部分书面表达题型介绍第二部分书面表达题型做题技巧第三部分寒假作业：书面表达题型考点精准把关练一、书面表达题型介绍英语书面表达试题属综合性运用试题，是考查学生运用各项语法知识、正确进行书面表达的能力以及善于理解情景提示的内容，抓住要点和中心思想的能力，是“压轴题”，属中考英语重大题型。能否把书面表达题型做好对于英语成绩总成绩能否考好非常重要。二、书面表达题型做题技巧 书面表达要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己

2、熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。语言要规范，时态运用要正确，叙述清楚条里，学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。写作六步法：1.审题：文体，时态，人称。2.抓住要点：要点是否齐全，适当补充。3.扩充句子：通过增加状语，定语，连词，使句子意思饱满充实。4.连句成文，合理使用连词。5.改正错误：拼写是否错误，语法时态是否正确，连词是否恰当等。6.誊写作文：注意书写工整美观整洁.三、寒假作业：书

3、面表达题型考点精准把关练一、书信作文1 假设你叫李津，是一名中学生，想结识应该中学生Jack。请你根据下面的表格内容，写一封电子邮件向他介绍你的情况。字数至少60词，可适当发挥。注意：信的开头和结尾已经帮你写好，你只需要接着写。1、姓名：李津；2、年龄：13；3、学校：尚礼中学；4、爸爸：剧院经理；5、妈妈：护士；6、最喜欢的体育运动：足球；7、最喜欢的饮食：蔬菜、水果、牛肉面；8、周一到周五上课，最喜欢英语课；9、我的愿望Dear Jack,Nice to meet you! _Yours,Li Jin【答案】例文：Dear Jack,Nice to meet you! Im Li Jin,

4、 a 13-year-old boy, studying in Shang Li Middle School. Please allow me to make a self-introduction to you. In my family, there are three members. My father is a manager of a theatre and my mother is a nurse at a hospital. In my free time, I usually spend my time playing basketball. As for food, I l

5、ike vegetables, fruit as well as beef noodles best. I have classes from Monday to Friday. Among all the subjects, English is my favourite subject. In the future, I dream to be an English teacher. What about you? Im looking forward to hearing from you!Yours,Li Jin【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于信件写作。在写作时应紧接开头继续写作，根据

6、题目要求介绍李津的个人信息，他的年龄、家人信息、喜欢的运动、喜欢的食物、学校的课程及愿望。2.写作指导：本文用第一人称来写作，时态采用一般现在时为主，介绍李津的个人信息叙述完整，条理清晰。2 假如你是艾伦(Alan)，下面是你周四一天的学校生活。请用英语写一封信将你忙碌的一天告诉你的朋友辛迪(Cindy)。Alans Thursday8: 00Chinese9: 00science10: 00geography11: 00music12: 001: 30lunch2: 30English3: 50Classes finish要求：1.可适当对某一学科发表自己的看法；2.60词左右，开头和结尾已

7、给出，不计入总词数。Dear Cindy,I am busy on Thursday. _Your friend,Alan【答案】例文：Dear Cindy,I am busy on Thursday. At 8:30, I have Chinese. Its my favorite subject. Then at 9:00, I have science. I think its boring. At 10:00, I have geography. Its difficulty but fun. I have music at 11:00. Its interesting. Lunch

8、is from 12:00 to 1:30. At 2:30, I have English. I like English because I like my English teacher. My classes finish at 3:50.Your friend,Alan【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于书信作文写作，要求按照所给的要点提示写一篇短文，Alan写信给辛迪介绍她周四一天的学校生活。注意写作时要点要齐全，同时也可进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥。2.写作指导：本文应该用第一、三人称来叙述；时态采用一般现在时；文章开头已给出，写作时，注意承接上文，根据要点提示具体介绍她在周四这天在学

9、校的活动；文中一定要包含题干中列出的所有要点；可以运用一些短语和常用句型为文章增添色彩；注意单词书写的准确度，语法运用的准确度，上下文注意连接的流畅度，以及逻辑合理。3 Tony你学校的一名来自美国的交换生，想了解你学校的情况，假设你是Daming，请你给他写一封邮件，谈谈你学校及你的校园生活。提示词：in front of；between and；behind；in the middle of；there be；classes；different activities(活动)；colourful。写作要求：1. 提示词仅供参考, 可适当发挥；2. 文中不得出现真实姓名；3. 词数80个单词左

10、右。（首句已给出，不记入总词数）Dear Tony,Im very glad you are an exchange student in our school. _【答案】例文Dear Tony,Im very glad you are an exchange student in our school. My school is big and beautiful. There are many trees and flowers here. It has a big playground and we like playing on the playground. We have a b

11、ig library. There are many kinds of books in it. And I love reading books in it. There are thirty-six classrooms and six teachers offices. The teachers are so kind though there is always too much homework. My classmates are all very friendly to each other. I think my school life is busy but happy. I

12、 hope you can join us.Yours,Daming【详解】1.题干解读：本题是书信作文，写作时应注意书信标准格式。题目要求谈谈你学校及你的校园生活，所给的提示单词仅供参考，可以不在文中使用，写作时要注意不要透露自己的真实姓名以及学校名称。2.写作指导：写作时人称应用第一人称，因为是一般校园及校园生活情况介绍，故应用一般现在时。写作时要思路清晰，条理清楚，注意文章书信格式是否正确。4 假如你是赵成，你的英国笔友Jim想了解你的饮食和运动情况。请你写一封电子邮件，告诉他你的相关情况。内容包括：1.你的生活方式是很健康的；2.你的饮食习惯（喜欢吃的食物和少吃的食物）；3.你的运动习

13、惯（最喜欢的运动及平时运动的情况）作文要求：1.不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。2.语句连贯，词数60左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jim,How are you?My lifestyle is _ _What about you? I am looking forward to your reply. Yours, Zhao Cheng【答案】例文Dear Jim,How are you? My lifestyle is very healthy. I like eating fish and drinking milk. They a

14、re good for my teeth. I like ice cream and cola, too. But I dont have them too much. I like playing sports. My favourite sport is basketball. I often play basketball with my friends after school. What about you? I am looking forward to your reply. YoursZhao Cheng【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。向笔友Jim介绍自己的饮食和运动

15、情况。2.写作指导：本文采用第一人称，时态采用一般现在时，需要分别介绍自己的运动和饮食习惯。写作时要注意保持主谓一致，逻辑性要强，句子要通顺，无标点和语法错误。二、话题作文5 请根据提示，以“My school life”为题写一篇70词左右的短文。要求包含所列全部要点，并作适当发挥；语句通顺,语法正确。School Sunshine Middle School, clean and beautifulTeachers be nice toStudents study hard and help each otherLessons Chinese, Maths and English ever

16、y day, good atfour in the morning, two in the afternoonActivities morning exercises first, chat withat noon, in the afternoon (至少两个活动)Feeling (感想) ?_【答案】例文My school lifeI study at Sunshine Middle School. It is clean and beautiful. The teachers are nice to us. The students study hard and help each ot

17、her. I have Chinese, Maths and English every day. I am good at English. I have four lessons in the morning and two lessons in the afternoon. I do morning exercises first every day. I often chat with my friends at noon. In the afternoon, I often play basketball with my classmates, sometimes I read bo

18、oks in the library. I love my school very much.【详解】1.题干解读：文章属于话题作文，主要是以“My school life”为主题展开描写，按照题目中的要求描写，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。2.写作指导：文章主要用一般现在时，人称用第一人称展开描述。主要是介绍自己的学校生活的情况，包括学校、课程以及学校活动等。写作时语言要简单易懂，文章结构要完整，多使用简单词语表达，意思要通俗易懂。6 请你根据下面的内容提示，以“The Mid-Autumn Festival”为题，写一篇关于中秋节的文章。60词左右，可以适当发挥。提示

19、：1. 中秋节(Mid-AutumnFestival)在秋天，那时天气不太热也不太冷，非常凉爽；2. 中秋节那天我们全家一起吃月饼(mooncake)和水果，晚上赏月；3. 玩花灯(playlanterns)是非常有趣的；4. 小孩子最开心，可以玩游戏，提着漂亮的灯笼到处(hereandthere)跑。The Mid-Autumn Festival _【答案】例文：The Mid-Autumn FestivalThe Mid-Autumn Festival is one of the most important traditional festivals in China which is

20、in autumn. At that time, the weather is not too hot or too cold. It is very cool. On that day our family have mooncakes and fruit together. And we often enjoy the moonlight at night. It is interesting for us to play lanterns. The children are the happiest. They can play games and run here and there

21、with the beautiful lanterns.【详解】题干解读：该题目属于介绍类文章，以“The Mid-Autumn Festival”为题，写一篇关于中秋节的文章。题干中已经给出了具体要点，切记要写出所有要点，但是不能逐句翻译，可以恰当的使用一些句型和连词使上下文逻辑清楚，条理分明。写作指导：本文应该以一般现在时为主，注意动词三单形式。采用两段式写作：第一段简单介绍中秋节的重要性；第二段根据要点提示重点写中秋节的相关事项。7 学校是我们成长的摇篮，是我们放飞梦想的地方。请你以“My School”为题写一篇短文介绍你的新学校。内容包括：1. 学校大小以及建筑的数量；2. 学校的布

22、局和环境；3. 对学校的感受。_【答案】例文My School This is my new school. There are six buildings in my school:an office building,a classroom building,a science lab，a library，a dining hall and a playground. The classroom building is in front of the library. The science lab is on the right of the classroom building.The

23、 office building is on the left of the classroom building and in front of the dining hall. Behind the library is the playground. My new school is big and beautiful. I like it.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作，介绍学校建筑的具体方位。首先要总体介绍学校及学校建筑的数量。其次详细介绍各种建筑的地理位置。最后总结全文，说出自己对学校的感受。2.写作指导：本文使用第一人称介绍，时态采用一般现在时，介绍时，语句要连贯,要

24、注意分段。总体介绍学校及学校建筑的数量时，可以使用句型：This is my new school. There are building in my school. 详细介绍各种建筑的地理位置时，可用词汇：in front of, on the left / right of, behind. 写自己对学校的感受时，可使用句型: My school is big/beautiful/small. I like my school.8 写一篇介绍你的一个朋友的短文。内容可以包括(仅供参考)：性别，名字，姓氏，年龄，家庭成员及他们的职业，电话号码，喜欢和不喜欢的颜色，以及喜欢的学科、运动，或者他

25、（她）的体育收藏等等。要求词数： 40个词以上。_【答案】例文：Eric Green is my best friend. He is eleven years old. He is studying in Xiya Middle School now. His father is a doctor, and his mother is a nurse. His parents are working in No.1 Hospital. His phone member is 576-4672. His favorite color is white. But he doesnt like b

26、lack. He likes maths best. He is good at playing basketball. He has got one football and two basketballs. I like playing basketball with him after school.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时应根据题目要求介绍朋友的个人信息，他的姓名、年龄，家庭成员及他们的职业，电话号码，喜欢和不喜欢的颜色，以及喜欢的学科、运动，和体育收藏。2.写作指导：本文用第三人称来写作，时态采用一般现在为主，介绍朋友的个人信息叙述完整，条理清晰。三、材料

27、作文9 某英文网站正在举办以 “My School Day”为主题的征文活动，假设你是来自Park School的李华，请你根据表格提供的内容，用英语写一篇短文介绍自己在学校一天的校园生活。Key points (内容要点)Reference words (参考词汇)things to doget up, have breakfast/lunch/dinner, have a break, do homework, go to sleep .subjectsChinese, maths, English, science, geography .school activities (活动)pl

28、ay basketball .注意：1. 文中必须包括表格中全部内容要点，可适当发挥，参考词汇仅供选择使用；2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；3. 词数：80-100；4. 短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。短文首句：I am Li Hua from Park School. Id like to share my school day with you. _【答案】例文：My School DayI am Li Hua from Park School. Id like to share my school day with you.I always get up at 6:30 eve

29、ry morning and have breakfast at 6:50. At 7:15, I go to school by bus. I have four lessons in the morning and three lessons in the afternoon. Between two lessons, I can have a short break. There are many subjects in my school, such as Chinese, maths, English, science, geography and so on. I like Eng

30、lish best, because its easy and interesting. I have lunch at 12 oclock with my friends at school. Then I have more than one hour to take a nap. The class is over at 4:45. After class, I always play basketball for an hour. I have dinner at 6:30 and do my homework at 7 oclock. I go to bed at 10 oclock

31、.All in all, my school day is really busy!【详解】1.题干解读：该题属于材料作文，作文已经给出首句，写作时注意内容的承接。题目给出的表格为写作要点，主要包括每天要做的事，学校要上的课和学校的活动。注意文章字数限制在80-100词。2.写作指导：由于作文主要描述自己一天的校园生活，所以作文时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。作文可以采用“三段式”结构，第一段是题干给出的首句，第二段描述一天的活动，第三段表达自己的观点。作文完成后注意检查语法、单词拼写和标点。10 如今人们越来越重视健康饮食，21世纪英语报向中学生发起征文活动，主题是健康饮食习惯，请结合下列

32、内容要求和表格，写一篇文章进行投稿。内容要求：1. 你父母的饮食习惯是否健康，请简述理由。2. 你的饮食习惯是否健康，请简述理由。3. 请你提出健康饮食的建议。Family membersEating habits（饮食习惯）Healthy/Unhealthy Reason（理由）Your advice（你的建议）My fatherHe likesEat lots of fruit and vegetables.My motherI注意：（1）文中不得出现真实人名校名；（2）词数：不少于60词；（3）短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。There are three people in my

33、family. We have different eating habits. _【答案】例文：There are three people in my family. We have different eating habits.My parents have healthy eating habits. My father likes eating vegetables because they are healthy. My mother wants to lose weight to keep fit, so she eats a lot of chicken and fruit.

34、 They never eat junk food, because its bad for health. My eating habit is not healthy because I dont like to eat vegetables. I always eat a lot of meat. Sometimes I eat junk food. So I need to change my eating habits.I want to share some ideas about how to eat in a healthy way. First, dont eat fried

35、 food or food with lots of sugar, because they are bad for our health. Second, try to eat lots of fruit and vegetables because they can make us become healthy.I hope everyone can live in a healthy way and develop some good eating habits.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求按照题目中的要点阐述家人的饮食习惯；内容包括：父母的饮食习惯及是否健康、自己的饮食习惯及是否健康、给出健康饮食的建议，以上三点缺一不可。2.写作指导：本文时态为一般现在时，以第一人称和第三人称为主，注意主谓一致问题；写作时应注意分段叙述，第一段开门见山，点明主题；第二段介绍父母及自己的饮食习惯；第三段介绍关于健康饮食的建议；最后一段总结全文。写作时注意要点齐全，语句通顺有条理。