2022版高考英语一轮复习 专题二十三 概要写作专题检测（含解析）.docx

1、专题二十三 概要写作【3年模拟】Writing1阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Didyouknowthat60.2%ofUSfamiliesowndogs?Thatsover75millionfamilies.Besidesbeingafaithfulcompanion,thesefriendsalsoprovidemanyhealthbenefitsthatcanbetrulylife-changingforyourfitnessandwellness.Mostdogsneedtodotheirbusinessoutsideseveraltimesperday,soyo

2、uareupandmovingmoreoftenthannon-petowners.Theaveragedogownerspends300minutesperweekwalking,comparedtoanon-petowners168minutes.Frequentdailyexerciselowersyourbloodpressureandreducesyourchancesofsufferingfromheartdisease.Yourphysicalhealthisnttheonlythingthatgetsbetterwithacompaniondog.Youcanalsoimpro

3、veyourmentalwell-being.Peoplesufferingfromanxietyfindithelpfultohaveadogonhandthatshappytoprovideassistance.Youcanfindmanydogsoperatingasemotionalsupportanimals,andhelppeopleinstressfulsituationsfeelbetter.Ifyourdogisamoreactivetype,youcouldfindyourselftakingyourfriendallovertheplace.Ifyoutakeyourdo

4、gtotheforest,youactuallyloweryourtendencytosuffernegative(消极的)feelings.Astudydiscoveredthatthepartofthebrainthatismostactivewhenyoudealwithnegativethingscalmsdownwhenyouspendtimeamongthetrees.Thedogownershiproutineallowsyoutobuildhealthyhabitsanditalsogivesyoutheopportunitytomakesocialconnections.Do

5、gparksarefilledwithpeopleyoushareacommoninterestwith,andthereareplentyofpeoplewholovetogivedogsafriendlypat(轻拍)duringwalks.Alloftheseareopportunitiestohavenewgreatfriendshipsandotheremotionalconnections.答案写作提示本文是一篇议论文。主要论述了养狗可以使人身心健康。1.文章第一段提出论点。2.第二段至第四段分别就论点从三个方面进行阐述。注意把握各段的核心词。Onepossibleversion:

6、ManyUSfamilieshavedogsandthesecompanionanimalshelpimprovepeopleshealthinmanyways.(要点1)Takingthedogforawalkeverydaycontributestophysicalhealth.(要点2)Besides,dogs,whichcanofferpeopleemotionalsupportorgetthemclosetonature,bringpsychologicalbenefits.(要点3)Theyalsoprovidemorechancesofpositivesocialinteract

7、ionwithpeople.(要点4)精彩语句精美词汇contributeto促成emotionalsupport情感支持psychologicalbenefits心理好处positivesocialinteraction积极的社会沟通Writing2阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Nowadays,itismostprobablethatyouhaveanelectronicdeviceloadedwithhundredsoreventhousandsofyourfavouritesongs.Atanymoment,youcanfillyourheadphoneswith

8、thesoundsofaparticularsongthatsuitsyourmoodatthatexacttime.Musicissocommon.Buthaveyourealizedthepowerofit?Areyougettingreadyforabigsoccermatchordoyouneedtogetexcited?Maybesomehiphopwithastrongbeatwilldothetrick!Besides,youmightbereadytostudyforabigexamthenextday.Tohelpyoustudybetter,alittlebitofMoza

9、rtmightmakeyourememberthingsbetter.Wemayallhavebeenmovedbyparticularsongsthatspoketousinsomesituations.Butisthereanyscientificevidenceshowingthatmusicreallyhassucheffectonpeople?Ofcourse,thereis!Scientistshavelongrecognizedthepowerofmusic.Overtheyears,manystudieshavebeendonetoexamineingreaterdepthth

10、enatureandextentoftheeffectsmusichasonpeople.ScientistsattheUniversityofMissourihavefoundthatlisteningtomusiccanhavepositiveeffectsonyourmood.Theirresearchgivesscientificcredibility(可靠性)tothebehaviorthatmanypeoplehavealreadyexperiencedontheirown:listeningtoupbeatmusiccanbrightenyourdayandboostyourmo

11、od.Otherstudieshaveshownthatupbeatmusicisnttheonlytypeofmusicthatcanbehelpful,however.Whenpeoplearesadorhavesufferedasenseofloss,sadmusiccanbehelpfulbecausethetoneandlyricsofthemusiccanresonate(引起共鸣)withthelisteners.Likewise,peopleunderalotofstressorexperiencingupsettingsituationscanbenefitfromliste

12、ningtoangrymusic.Althoughangrymusicmightnothelpyouifyoureinanormalmood,itstonecanbenefityouwhenyouaredealingwithstressfulandupsettingsituations.答案写作提示本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍了音乐对人们的益处。文章段落清楚,要点明确。概要写作时以自然段为基础概括。Onepossibleversion:Nowadays,withmoderndevices,musictoyourtasteiseasilyaccessible.(要点1)Withitspower,m

13、usicmightbenefityouinmanyways.(要点2)Scientistshaveresearchedintothenatureandextentofmusicseffectsonhumans.(要点3)ScientistsattheUniversityofMissourihaveprovenupbeatmusiccancheeryouup.(要点4)Besides,sadmusicandangrymusichavealsobeenfoundtobehelpful.(要点5)精彩语句精美词汇accessibleadj.可以接近的,容易理解的,可使用的extentn.程度Writ

14、ing3阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Formanyhighschoolstudents,givinganin-classpresentationisanapproachtotheirgrowth.Teacherswillcallupstudents,onebyone,topresenttheirworkinfrontoftheclass,and,thoughitisoftentense,manypeoplesayithashelpedturnthemintomoreconfidentpublicspeakers.Someeducatorsalsocredititwith

15、buildingleadershipskillsandincreasingstudentsconfidenceandunderstandingofmaterials.Butinthepastfewyears,studentshavestartedcallingforanendtoin-classpresentationsastheyshowdiscriminationagainstthosewithanxiety.Thisweek,atweetpostedbya15-year-oldhighschoolstudentdeclaring “Stopforcingstudentstopresent

16、infrontoftheclassandgivethemachoicenotto” receivedmorethan130,000retweetsandnearlyhalfamillionlikes.Infact,beingahighschoolernowadaysismorestressfulthanever.Studentsareburdenedwithextrahoursofhomework.Theystayupeverynighttill1:00a.m.finishinghomeworkontheirthirdRedBull.Anxietyisincreasingatafasterra

17、tethandepression(抑郁)astheleadingmental-healthissueaffectingteenagers,arecentstudyintheJournalofDevelopmentalandBehavioralPediatricsfound.Thesestudentswantmoreoptions.Theysaythateverystudenthasuniquestrengthsandthattheyshouldbeallowedtopresenttheirworkinwaysthataredifferenttothosestrengths.Thismightm

18、eanpresentingaloneinfrontoftheteacher,orchoosingbetweenseveralalternativeslikeproducingapieceofartoranessayforprivatejudgmentinsteadofpresentingtheirworkorally.Educatorshavebeguntotakeitseriously.Theyagreeteachersshouldlistentostudentsandheartheirvoicesandrespond.Ifstudentsfeelingsareignored,theymig

19、htjustwalkaway.However,noteveryoneisconvinced.Someholdtheviewthatpushingstudentsoutofcomfortzonesisabigpartofwhattheyshoulddoassomestudentsaredeathlyafraidtodoit.答案写作提示本文为议论文。文章讨论了课堂展示是否有益的问题。概要以自然段为基础,注意摄取重点信息。Onepossibleversion:Givinganin-classpresentationisgenerallyconsideredanapproachbeneficialt

20、ostudentsdevelopment.(要点1)However,inthepastfewyears,studentshavestartedcallingforanendtoitduetothepossiblediscriminationagainstthosewithanxiety,whichputsgreatpressureonthestudents.(要点2)Theysaythateverystudenthasuniquestrengthsandthattheyshouldbeallowedtopresenttheirworkintheirways.(要点3)Theirideahasd

21、rawneducatorsseriousattention.(要点4)精彩语句精美词汇presentationn.展示approachn.方法beneficialadj.有益的discriminationn.歧视uniqueadj.独特的Writing4阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Asisknown,ifweareunitednoonecandefeatus.Butifweconstantlyhaveconflictsormisunderstandings,wemayattractoutsiderstohaveanadvantageoverus,whichmayulti

22、matelyresultinourfailure.Unityisthesourceofstrengthandpeoplewhoareunitedhavethecapabilitytotackleanykindofsituationastheyshareeachothersburdensandhardships.Inoldendays,manlivedalone.Hetravelledandhuntedallbyhimself,whichsometimesgaveopportunitiestofierceanimalstoattackandkillhim.Thenherealizedthatif

23、hejoinedhandswithotherhunters,hewouldbeabletofacesomecommondangerandchallenges.Thisishowvillagesgotformed,whichlatergotdevelopedintotownsandcities.Inthesportsground,beitcricket,football,baseball,basketballoranyotherkindsofsport,aunitedteamandanappropriatestrategymayresultinthesuccessoftheteam;butift

24、hereisaconflictoranunhealthycompetitionorunnecessarymisunderstandingamongtheteammembers,theymayinvitetheopponentstotakeadvantageoftheirshortcomingsandwinthegame.Likewise,ifthemembersofafamilystaytogetherandsupporteachotherineveryphaseoflife,nooutsidercanharmthefamily.Therewasonceanoldmanwholivedinav

25、illagewithhisthreesons.Thesonsalwaysfoughtwitheachotherandwouldnotpayanyattentiontotheirfather.Themanfellsickandassumedthathewoulddiesoon;hewasveryworriedabouttheideathatoncehedied,peoplewouldtakeadvantageofhissonsconflicts.Hecalledallhissonsandaskedthemtobreakabundleofsticks,onebyone.Noneofthemcoul

26、ddoit.Hethenuntiedthebundleandgaveeachsticktoeachoneofthemaskingthemtobreakit,whichtheycouldveryeasilyaccomplish.Hethentoldhissonsthattheyshouldstaylikethebundleofstickssothatnoonecanbreakthem,butiftheykeeponfighting,theywillbebrokenbytheoutsiderseasily.答案写作提示本文是一篇议论文。文章认为,合作就能成功。注意把握要点,可以参考部分段落中的中心

27、句。Onepossibleversion:Itiswellknownthatunitedwestandanddividedwefall.(要点1)Inancienttimes,huntersmadejointeffortstocopewithdangerandchallenges,thusvillagesformedandlaterdevelopedintotownsandcities.(要点2)Surely,unityhasagreatsignificanceinpeoplesliveswhetherinthesportsgroundorinafamily.(要点3)Thedyingmans

28、storyofsticksalsoshowstheimportanceofunity.(要点4)Writing5阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Onceuponatime,eatingalonewasjustthat:sittingdowninarestaurantononesownandeatingameal.Everyonediditsometimes,andwhentheydidsotheymightbealittleembarrassed.Eatingalonemightsuggestthatyoudidnthaveanyfamilyorfriends,ordidn

29、tlikepeople.Therewasakindofshameattachedtoit.Nowadays,however,thereismoreandmoresolitary(独自的)eating.Peoplechoosetoeataloneforvariousreasons. “Foodies”peoplewhohaveapassionateinterestindifferentcuisines(饭菜)doitbecausealltheyneedfortheirpleasureisthechancetoeatgoodfood.Theydontwantcompanyorconversatio

30、n,butonlythejoyofeatingsomespecialdishes.Somepeopleeatalonebecauseitssimplypracticalforthemtodoso.Forinstance,itsestimatedthatnearlyathirdofallthecustomersoffast-foodrestaurantseatalone.Theyareservedwiththeirfoodfast,eatitfastandthenleavefastbecausetheyhaveameetingtomakeorachildtopickupfromschool.Bu

31、tforothers,theappealofeatingaloneisquitedifferent.Itsanexperienceoffreedom.Forthehourthatittakestohaveameal,theycanforgetallthepressuresoftheirlives.Forabriefwindow,theydonthavetodealwiththeirfamilyorjob.Theycanrelaxandlettheirmindwander.Maybetheywillbringabook,anewspaperorperhapstheywillshylyspyont

32、hepeoplearoundthem.Partoftheappealofthisnewtrendissurelythatamealtakenaloneislikealittleholidayfromthebusynessofmodernlife,inwhichwehavesomuchtodoallthetime.答案写作提示本文是一篇议论文。文章主要讨论了独自进餐的人越来越多的原因。文章结构清晰,第一段提出主题。后面三段分别指出了原因。用合适优美的句子分别将各段的要点概括出来并组合在一起即可。Onepossibleversion:Nowadays,moreandmorepeoplegooutt

33、oeatontheirownandtheyfeelcomfortable.(要点1)Foodieseatalonebecausewhattheyenjoyisthepleasureofeatinggoodfood.(要点2)Besides,somepeopledoitbecauseitsconvenientforthemtoeatalone(要点3).Lastly,forothers,theappealofeatingaloneliesinthefreedomitcanprovide.(要点4)Writing6阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Anoldsayinggoest

34、hatanearneighborisbetterthanadistantcousin.Thissayinghasfullyprovedthatneighborsaresosignificantinourlife.Inthepast,neighborshelpedoneanotherbuildhousesandclearfields.Theycouldoffertimelyhelpwhensomeonewasintrouble.Familiesdependedononeanotherforfriendshipandentertainment.Theysharedjoysandsorrowsfro

35、mtimetotime,whichbroughtaharmoniousatmosphere.However,nowadays,lackofcommunicationandinteractionbetweenneighborsisanorm.Closerelationshipsbetweenneighborsarenotcommoninourcities.Afamilymaynotevenknowtheotherfamiliesthatlivenextdoortothem.WeliveinanageofmachinesandtheInternet,andalmosteachfamilyhavei

36、tsowncar,TVset,andwashingmachine.Peoplenolongerdependonneighborsasmuchastheyoncedid.MachinesandtheInternetkeeppeopleapart.Inourgrandparentstime,womenmetwhiletheyhungoutthewashing,andmenstoppedandtalkedwhiletheymowedtheirlawns.Today,theycanthearanythingabovethenoiseoftheirpowerlawnmowers.Andwomenstay

37、insidewiththeirelectricaldryers.ChildrenareinsidewatchingtheirfavoriteTVshowsorplayingcomputergames.Istheideaofbeingagoodneighborold-fashioned?In1965,apowercuthitNewYorkCity,andmanythousandsofpeoplewerelefthelpless.Suddenlyeveryonesharedthesameproblem,andthelargestcitybecameagroupofeightmillionneigh

38、bors.Peoplewithcarsofferedridestothosewalking.Otherpeoplehelpeddirecttraffic.Trappedinelevators,peopleplayedwordgamesandhelpedkeepeachotheringoodspirits.Intimesoftrouble,peoplestilldependononeanother.Astimegoeson,peoplemayonceagainfeelthatbeingagoodneighborisimportant.答案写作提示本文介绍了过去和现在的邻居关系。文章第一段整体介绍

39、了邻居的重要性。第二段介绍了过去的美好邻里关系。第三段介绍了现在的邻里关系。最后一段,通过纽约市的一次停电事故,展示了好邻居的重要性。写作时,依据自然段概括要点。Onepossibleversion:Neighborsplayanimportantroleinourlife.(要点1)Formerly,neighborshelpedeachotherandlivedaharmoniouslife.(要点2)Admittedly,owingtodevicesandtheInternet,neighborsdriftapart,resultinginlittlecontactbetweeneach

40、othernow.(要点3)Nevertheless,undergoingapowerfailureenabledresidentsinNewYorkCitytobecomeneighbors,andtheyassistedandencouragedoneanother,whichillustratesthesignificanceandpopularityofbeingagoodneighbor.(要点4)精彩语句精美词汇playanimportantrole起着重要的作用owingto由于resultin造成Writing7阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Workaho

41、licslivefortheirwork,oftenspendingmanyextrahoursatwork,andoftentakingworkhometocompleteit.Itsfinetoliveinawork-hardculture,butwhenworkbecomestheonlyreasonforapersonsexistenceabovemoreimportantthings(suchasfamilyandfriends),theissuebecomescritical.ThatstheproblemmoreandmoreAmericansarefacedwith.Ameri

42、cansareworkingmorehoursperweekthaninyearspast,andwithmanycompaniesreducingemployees,moreandmoreworkersareworriedabouttheirownjobs.Somestudiesshowthatasmanyas40percentofAmericanworkersdontevenbothertotakevacations,partlybecauseoffearsthattheymaynothaveajobtocomebacktoiftheydo.Besides,itisobviousthatp

43、artofthematterisfinancial.Moreandmorepeoplebegintodefinesuccessintermsoffinancialmeasures.Thehigheronesincomeis,themorerespectonegets.Finally,peoplenowadaysliveandworkinaconnectedenvironmente-mails,instantmessaging,faxmachines,andcellphonesmakingithardforthemtotrulygettimeawayfromtheirwork,evenwhent

44、heyareonholiday.Whenworkbecomestheonlythingpeoplethinkaboutandtheonlythingthattrulymakespeoplehappy,manyAmericansfindthattheyarenolongerclosetotheirkids.Thedivorceratejumpsandseriousstress-relatedhealthproblemscomeup.Undoubtedly,itistimetodosomething.Toreduceworkaholism,youmuststayawayfromworkoncein

45、awhile.Therearemanywaystodothat:spendtimewithfamilyandfriends;callhomeoftentostayconnected;learntosaynotonewassignments;considerexercisestogetyourbodybacktoahealthyshape;fighttheurgethateverythingyoudomustbeperfect.Itwilltakesomeeffort,butforyourselfandthoseyoulove,youreallyshouldmaketheeffort.Havea

46、tryandyouwontregretit.答案写作提示1.本文是说明文,文章的核心词是“workaholics(工作狂)”,概要时要以此为中心。2.各段基本自成要点,概要以自然段为基础。3.注意各要点之间的有效连接。Onepossibleversion:AnincreasingnumberofAmericansarebecomingworkaholics.(要点1)Theyworkextrahourstomaintaintheirjobsandbecomefinanciallysuccessful.Evenonholiday,moderncommunicationtechnologiesal

47、waysconnectthemtowork.(要点2)Consequently,itdamagestheirfamiliesaswellastheirhealth.Luckily,thereisalotonecandotopreventitfromgettingworse,whichmaytakesomeeffort,butitsworthwhiletohaveatry.(要点3)精彩语句精美词汇extraadj.额外的maintainv.保持consequentlyadv.因此,结果Writing8阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Anewstudyofmicesugges

48、tsbacteriamayhelptocauseanxietyanddepressioninoverweightpeople.Theresearchraisesquestionsaboutwhetherchangingorganismslivinginsideourbodiesorchangesindietcouldhelptreattheseconditions.A2017studyfoundthatone-thirdoftheworldspopulationisoverweightorconsideredobese.Whenpeoplebecomeobese,thischangesthep

49、rocessesbywhichthebodyusesfoodtomakeenergy,buildtissueandremovewastematerial.Leftuntreated,thesechangescanleadtodiabetes.Diabetesisaseriouscondition.Itaffectshowyourbodyusesbloodsugar.Obesepeoplealsohavehigherratesofanxietyanddepressionthanotherindividuals.RonaldKahnstudiesdiabetesatHarvardMedicalSc

50、hoolinMassachusetts.Hesaysresearchershavewonderedifpeoplesufferfromdepressionbecausetheyareobeseorbecauseoftheirmetabolism(新陈代谢).“Andweaskedthequestion,Maybethemetaboliclinkisatleastpartlyfueledbythemicrobiome(微生物组),” Kahnsaid.Themicrobiomeisthecommunityofbacteria,fungiandothermicroorganismslivingin

51、yourstomach.Itchangeswithyourdiet.AndKahnsaidthosechangesmightaffectboththebodyandmind.Totestthetheory,heandhisresearchteamfedmiceahigh-fatdietandstudiedtheirbehaviorastheanimalsbecameobese.Inonetest,theyputmiceinaboxdividedintoadarkenedareaononesideandalightareaontheotherside.Theyfoundthatthemorene

52、rvous,anxiousmicelikedtospendtimeonthedarkside.“Andamouseonahigh-fatdietwillspendmoretimeinthedarkthanamouseonanormaldiet.So,theyhavemoresignofanxiety,” Khansaid.Theanxietywentawaywhenthemiceweregivenantibiotics(抗生素).Theresearcherssaidthissuggestedthatthebacteriawerehelpingmakethemicenervous.Therese

53、archersthenwantedtoseeiftheycouldproducethesameeffectbygivingthesamebacteriatoanimalsraisedinabacteria-freeenvironment,withnomicrobesoftheirown.Theyfoundthatitdid.Microbesfromobesemicemadethebacteria-freemiceanxious.Microbesfromobesemicegivenantibioticsdidnot.答案写作提示文章是说明文。结构比较清晰。概要时注意把握文章的核心词汇。Onepo

54、ssibleversion:AccordingtoanewstudybyRonaldKahn,bacteriamayberesponsibleforoverweightpeoplesanxietyanddepression.(要点1)Withtheattempttohelptreatdepressionintheoverweight,researchersassumedthatmetabolisminthebodyoftheoverweightmayleadtotheirdepression.(要点2)Afteraseriesoftests,researchersprovedthatbacte

55、riadidmakemicenervousandantibioticsreleasetheiranxiety,asexpected.(要点3)Writing9阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Lookinsideanyfamilyhomeintheevening,andyoumightseeatypicalenoughscene:MomandDad,eachontheirownlaptoportablet,streamingmovies,catchinguponworkormaybeansweringemailsontheirsmartphones.Meanwhile,one

56、childischattingonlinewithoneschoolfriendwhiletextinganother.Theotherisplayingavideogamewithafriendontheothersideofthecityatthesametime.Eachmemberofthefamilyistotallyabsorbedinhisorherownpieceoftechnologies.Accordingtosomeexperts,theeffectoftechnologyonhumanrelationshipsisworryingastechnologybecomesa

57、substituteforface-to-facehumanrelationships.Itappearstobethecasethatmanypeoplewouldmuchratherspendtimewiththeirelectronicgadgets(电子产品)thanwithoneanother.Youngpeoplesayitisdifficulttogettheirparentsattentionandtheyhavetocompetewithsmartphones,tabletsandothertechnologies.However,areportfromthePewInter

58、netandAmericanLifeProjectoffersamorehelpfulandencouragingview,suggestingthatfarfromreplacinghumancontact,technologycanactuallybetterfamilyrelationships.Justoverhalfofthe2,253peoplesurveyedagreedthattechnologyhadenabledthemtoincreasetheircontactwithdistantfamilymembersand47percentsaidithadimprovedthe

59、communicationwiththepeopletheylivedwith.Moreover,eventheclosestmembersoffamiliesneedtimeawayfromeachotheratsomepointtoseektheirowninterests.Familymemberswhomightotherwisehavesatinseparateroomscannowbeinthesameonewhilestilloccupyingadifferentmentalspace.Lookbackatourtypicalfamilysceneabove.Isitanydif

60、ferentfromfourpeoplereadingtheirownbooks?Orisitdrivingfamilyapart?Wheretechnologywillleadusremainstobeseen.Yetthereisnoneedtoworry.Asamatteroffact,howitaffectsourfamilyrelationshipsdependsonourattitudetowardtechnology.答案写作提示本文结构清楚,但是概括要点时要注意文章的观点在前后有很大的转折,而且其观点和我们平时对电子产品的社会主流观点并不一致,因此在写概要前一定要读懂原文,不要

61、受固有观点的影响。Onepossibleversion:Nowadaysfamilymembersareoftenfoundlostintheirownelectronicproducts.(要点1)Someexpertsfearthattechnologycanaffectfamilyrelationshipsforlackofface-to-facecommunication.(要点2)However,areporthasfoundtechnologybenefitsfamilybondsinthatitmakesmemberscloserandprovidesprivatementals

62、paceaswell.(要点3)Actually,nottechnologyitselfbutpeoplesattitudetowardsitinfluencesfamilyrelations.(要点4)精彩语句精美词汇belostin 沉迷于inthat 因为;由于attitudetowards对的态度Writing10阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Punishingchildrenisacontroversial(有争议的)topic.Everybodyhasdifferentopinionsabouthowtoacttocorrectachildsbehavior.

63、Peoplehavedisagreementsaboutwhetheritisgoodforachildseducationtopunishhim.Theword “punish” meansdifferentthingstodifferentpeople.Punishmentcanbephysicaloremotional.Physicalpunishmentiswhentheparenthitsthechild.Ontheotherhand,emotionalpunishmentiswhentheparent,inordertoeducatethechild,doesntlethimwat

64、chTV,gotoplaywithhisfriends,ordothingslikethat.Althoughmanysurveysandstudieshaveshowedwhatthecorrectwayistoraiseachild,nobodyhastheanswerorthetruth.Thereisnosuchthingasagreedstandardsaboutraisingachild,soIthinkitwillbeverydifficulttogeteveryonetoagree.Ithinkparentsshouldlovetheirchildandgivehimthebe

65、steducation,butatthesametime,theyshouldpunishthechildproperlyifhedeservesit.Theparentsgoalistohaveagoodmanorwomaninsocietyinthefuture,sosometimesheshoulddowhatisnecessarytogethischildtobehavewell.答案写作提示文章为议论文,讨论了体罚孩子的优缺点。概要时以自然段为基础。注意第一段有中心句,但是需要进行改写。Onepossibleversion:Peoplehavemixedopinionstowards

66、punishmentforchildren.(要点1)Therearemainlyphysicalandemotionalpunishments.(要点2)Asamatteroffact,itisdifficulttofindagreedstandardstoraiseachild.(要点3)Properpunishmentcanbeinstructiveandnecessarytochildrenwhileloveandeducationarethemostimportantforparentstomaketheirkidsbehavewell.(要点4)Writing11阅读下面短文,根据

67、其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Doeswritingcomehardtoyou?Areyoudiscouragedtofindyourselfpooratwriting?Nobodyisbornknowinghowtowrite.Goodwritinghabits,whichhelpmakeyouwriteonaregularbasis,arenecessaryforyoutoimproveyourwriting.Firstly,youaresupposedtoreadawiderangeofbooks.Whenawriterisnotwell-readlackofreadingwillb

68、eobviousineverysentenceonewrites.Readingpreparesyouwithnecessaryknowledgetobeagoodwriter.Whatsmore,itprovidesyouwithbasicskillsforwriting.Theimportanceofreadingcannotbestressedtoomuch:readasmuchandasoftenasyoucan.Secondly,itsimportanttomakeawritingscheduleandwritedailyifitispossible.Whetheryouwritef

69、ortwohoursadayorfifteenminutesaday,dailywritingisthekeytodevelopinggoodwritinghabits.Itsbettertowriteforfifteenortwentyminuteseverydaythantositforfiveorsixhourstowriteovertheweekend.However,ifyoucanmakeadailywritingschedulewithlongerhoursonyourwritingonweekends,thenitsmuchbetter.Oneoftheworsthabitsi

70、snevertogethelpfromotherstoimproveyourwriting.Itisadvisedthatyoushareyourworkwithothers.Forexample,youcansendyourwritingtoafewfriends,roundupsomereadersandletthemcommentonyourwriting.Thatway,youllfindyourwritinggraduallyimproved.答案写作提示文章主要讲述好的写作习惯对提高写作水平的帮助。文章结构比较清晰,以自然段为基础概括要点即可。其中第一段是主旨段,而后面的三段为具体

71、的做法。Onepossibleversion:Goodwritinghabitscontributealottoimprovingyourwriting.(要点1)First,youshouldreadasmuchaspossibletogettheknowledgeandskillsforwriting.(要点2)Youshouldalsomakeawritingplanandkeepupyourdailywriting.(要点3)Besides,youdbetterturntoothersforhelptoimproveyourwriting.(要点4)Writing12阅读下面短文,根据

72、其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。ThefamiliaryellowschoolbusisthelargestsystemofmasstransportationintheUSandeveryschooldaytransportsroughly25millionyoungpeopletoschoolandhomeagainaftertheschooldayends.Meanwhile,itisthesafestmethodforgettingkidstoandfromschool,accordingtotheNationalHighwayTrafficSafetyAdministration(

73、NHTSA).Childrenare70timesmorelikelytoarriveatschoolsafelyontheschoolbusthaniftheyhadtraveledtoschooldrivingthemselvesorridingwithfriends.Theseschoolbusesmeetmoreofthenationsmotorvehiclesafetystandardsthananyothervehiclesontheroad.Also,severalnewtechnologiesavailabletodayaremakingschoolbusesevensafer

74、,suchasvideocamerasontheinsideandoutside,stoparmcameras,GPStrackingandcollisionlesseningsystems.Anothersafetytoolonschoolbusesishighseatbacks,closely-spacedseatsandenergy-absorbingseats.Buteventhesafenessofschoolbuseswouldnotcompletelysumupwhychildrenaresaferwhenridingthebig,yellowbus.Thebusisonlyas

75、safeastheprofessionalmenandwomenwhodrivethem.AlldriversmustobtainaClassBorCCommercialDriversLicense(CDL).Theyarerandomlytestedforalcoholanddrugs,usuallyhavetheirdrivingrecordchecked,andaregiventhesamereviewofcriminalhistoryasteachersandotheremployeeswhohavecontactwithstudents.Inordertoserveasaschool

76、busdriver,mostapplicantsarerequiredtosuccessfullycompleteatrainingcourse,alongwithinstructionintheclassroomandbehindthewheel.Schoolbusesaresafefortheenvironment,notonlybecauseeachbusreplaces36passengercarsthatwould,butforthebuses,beontheroadtakingandpickingupschoolchildren.Additionallyschoolbusesuse

77、alternativegreenfuelslikenaturalgasandelectricpower.ToddMonteferrario,PresidentoftheNationalSchoolTransportationAssociation,saidparentsshouldrememberthatthesafestandsmartestchoiceistoputtheirchildrenonthebigyellowbuswhentheycan.答案写作提示本文是议论文。文章主要论述校车的好处。文章的结构为“总分总”模式。第一段是主题段,提出了主要观点。第二至第四段分别是具体的论据。最后

78、一段得出结论。Onepossibleversion:TheschoolbusisthesafestandwisestchoicetogotoschoolintheUS.(要点1)Firstly,schoolbusesnotonlymeethighvehiclesafetystandardsbutalsoaretechnologicallyequipped.(要点2)Secondly,thebusdrivershavetopassstrictqualificationtestsandsuccessfullyfinishsafetydrivingtraining.(要点3)Thirdly,schoolbusespoweredbygreenfuelsareenvironmentallysafebyreducingthenumberofprivatecarsontheroad.(要点4)Thereforechildrenareencouragedtogotoschoolonaschoolbus.(要点5)