2022-2023学年新教材高中英语 Unit 5 Into the Wild 写作指导 如何写动物介绍课件 外研版必修第一册.pptx

1、U n i t 5写作指导 如何写动物介绍英 语感知文体常识动物介绍属于描述性说明文,这类文章主要描写某种动物的名称、外貌、栖息地、饮食习惯、迁徙或者生活习惯和其他有关信息等。时态以一般现在时为主,人称以第三人称为主。牢记写作素材(一)增色词汇1.in size/weight/height 在尺寸/重量/高度上2.feed on 以为食3.a small population 数量不多4.die out 灭绝5.give birth 出生6.in recent years 近年来7.take effective measures 采取有效措施8.be aware of 意识到(二)精彩句型1.

2、The Siberian crane is also known as the snow crane.西伯利亚鹤也以雪鹤著称。2.It is about 140 cm in height,generally shorter than the red-crowned crane.它身高约140厘米,一般比丹顶鹤矮。3.In fact,the animal may travel 50 miles a day to search for food.实际上,这种动物一天可以行走50英里去寻找食物。4.Every spring,migratory birds flood back to where th

3、ey breed.每年春天,候鸟都会飞回到它们繁殖的地方。5.They usually have green,yellow or black skins,which make it difficult for their enemies to find them.它们通常拥有绿色、黄色或黑色的外皮,这使得它们的天敌很难发现它们。6.The snake is a long and thin animal that lives in dark places.蛇是一种生活在阴暗地方的瘦长形的动物。7.Many trees are being cut down and more and more fo

4、rests are lost,making animals lose their homes to live in.许多树木被砍伐,越来越多的森林消失,使得动物失去了居住的家园。8.Many fields are being turned into desert,which makes the animals living there have no place to find food to eat.许多土地正在变成沙漠,这使得生活在那里的动物没有地方找食物吃。9.In a word,we must take some measures to prevent rare animals fro

5、m extinction.总之,我们必须采取一些措施来防止珍稀动物灭绝。10.Finally,we should let people know the importance of protecting endangered animals.最后,我们应该让人们知道保护濒危动物的重要性。示例写作步骤【写作要求】根据要求写一篇有关濒危动物金丝猴的短文。1.栖息地:中国西南部。2.外貌:金黄色,有点灰;尾巴和身体一样长。3.生活环境:海拔1500-3000米的森林。4.生活习性:群居,吃水果、干果,在树上活动。5.金丝猴的数量不断减少,呼吁人们保护金丝猴。【审题谋篇】体裁 说明文人称 第三人称时态

6、 一般现在时话题 介绍金丝猴框架第一段 引出话题:开门见山说明介绍对象;第二段 主体部分:具体介绍金丝猴的情况;第三段 总结提升:归纳总结并呼吁保护金丝猴。【遣词造句】1.词汇(1)濒危的(2)和一样(3)群居(4)以为食(5)自然保护区(6)海拔(7)保护endangered as.aslive in family groups feed on nature reservesea levelprotect2.句式(1)要点翻译金丝猴是一种生活在中国西南部的珍稀濒危动物。The golden monkey is living in south-western China.它们的皮毛是金色的,有

7、点灰,尾巴和身体一样长。Their fur is golden and a bit grey,and their tails are.雄性金丝猴又大又壮,而雌性的要小得多。The male golden monkeys are big and strong,the female ones are much smaller.an endangered animal as long as their bodieswhile金丝猴生活在海拔1500至3000米的森林里,它们喜欢群居,以水果、坚果、树叶等为食。Golden monkeys live in forests which are 1,500

8、3,000 metres and they like and fruit,nuts,tree leaves and so on.它们的数量越来越少,我们的政府已经建立了一些自然保护区来保护它们。Because their number is getting smaller and smaller,our government has built some nature reserves.我们希望越来越多的人了解保护金丝猴的重要性。We hope more and more people will understand.above the sea levelliving in family gr

9、oupsfeed onto protect themthe importance of protecting golden monkeys(2)句式升级用定语从句升级句用with复合结构作状语升级句The golden monkey is an endangered animal that lives in south-western China.With their number getting smaller and smaller,our government has built some nature reserves to protect them.【妙笔成篇】The golden

10、monkey is an endangered animal that lives in south-western China.Their fur is golden and a bit grey.Their tails are as long as their bodies.The male golden monkeys are big and strong while the female ones are much smaller.Golden monkeys live in forests which are 1,5003,000 metres above the sea level

11、 and they like living in family groups and feed on fruit,nuts,tree leaves and so on.With their number getting smaller and smaller,our government has built some nature reserves to protect them.We hope more and more people will understand the importance of protecting golden monkeys.针对训练你校英文报正在举行以“人类与动

12、物和谐相处”为主题的英语征文活动,请你以“My Favourite Animal”为题目写一篇文章参加活动。内容包括:1.介绍你最喜欢的动物;2.喜欢它的原因。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。My Favourite AnimalMy favourite animal is the dog who is mankinds best friend.Dogs can do many helpful jobs for us.For example,dogs can help and lead blind people as well as save peoples lives in time of great danger.They are their ownersguiders.It is the dog that brings a lot of fun and delight to us.They are clever,cute and friendly.Whenever we are bored and unhappy,they will keep us company.I have a dream that one day I can own a lovely dog!