2021届高考英语二轮复习好题 专题06 书面表达（第02期）（含解析）.doc

1、书面表达【2021届重庆市巴蜀中学高三高考适应性月考卷（十)】假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Mike所在的华盛顿中学将在7月举行中国文化日活动，他给你来信寻求活动的相关建议，请给他回信，内容包括：1.活动的内容和形式；2.说明推荐理由。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯参考词汇：paper-cutting剪纸 calligraphy书法Dear Mike,_Yours sincerely,Li Hua【答案】Dear Mike,Im more than glad to learn that a Chinese Culture Day activity will be he

2、ld in your school. It is a good opportunity for you to learn more about Chinese culture.First, a paper-cutting exhibition is a good choice. As a traditional Chinese art, paper cutting covers varieties of themes like plants, animals, legends and so on, which is a vivid reflection of Chinese folk cult

3、ure. Besides, holding a Chinese calligraphy competition seems to be another wise option, for it can arouse peoples interest, which is of significance in promoting the communication between Chinese and Americans. Additionally, lectures about Chinese history, architecture, poems, or even food are sure

4、 to arrest the attention of those keen on Chinese culture.I hope my advice will be of great help to you.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【解析】这是一篇提纲类写作。第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Mike所在的华盛顿中学将在7月举行中国文化日活动，他给你来信寻求活动的相关建议，请给他回信，内容包括：1.活动的内容和形式；2.说明推荐理由。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：more than glad，varieties of，a vivid reflecti

5、on，arouse peoples interest，be of significance，be sure to，keen on等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时和一般将来时。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如It is a good opportunity for you to learn more about Chinese culture.是固定句型；As

6、a traditional Chinese art, paper cutting covers varieties of themes like plants, animals, legends and so on, which is a vivid reflection of Chinese folk culture.运用定语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。【2021届宁夏银川一中高三下学期第五次模拟】加拿大及教师史密斯（Smith）教授在你校任教英语一年了。现在他即将离任回国。假如你是你校学生会主席，

7、你代表全体同学致欢送辞，对史密斯教授的工作表示感谢，并预祝它旅途愉快。Dear Professor Smith, boys and girls,_【答案】Dear Professor Smith, boys and girls,Professor Smith is leaving us for his home country. Now we gather here to say goodbye to him, and express our gratitude to him as well.In the past year, Professor Smith has made great co

8、ntributions to the improvement of English teaching quality of our school. He has brought to us not only advanced teaching methods, but also new ideas of teaching and learning. Our English has improved a great deal as a result of Professor Smiths efforts. Thanks to his help, both our written English

9、and oral English have greatly improved. We feel sorry that we have to say good-bye now but Im sure we will remember each other in the days to come.Now please allow me to express our sincere thanks once again to him on behalf of all the students and teachers of our school and wish him a pleasant safe

10、 journey home.【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求以学生会主席的身份写一篇欢送辞对即将离任回国的斯密史教授的工作表示感谢并预祝他旅途愉快。第一步：审题体裁：应用文。时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。结构：总分法。要求：1.对史密斯教授的工作表示感谢。2.预祝它旅途愉快。第二步：列提纲（重点短语）say goodbye to; made great contributions; as a result of ;feel sorry that第三步：连词成句1.Now we gather here to say goodbye to him, and express our gra

11、titude to him as well.2.In the past year, Professor Smith has made great contributions to the improvement of English teaching quality of our school.3.Our English has improved a great deal as a result of Professor Smiths efforts.4.We feel sorry that we have to say good-bye now but Im sure we will rem

12、ember each other in the days to come.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇1.表示文章结构顺序：对斯密史的工作表示感谢；预祝旅途愉快。2. 表示并列补充关系：not onlybut also; as a result of; Thanks to第五步：润色修改范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯。复合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多的高端句式，如宾语从句：We feel sorry that we have to say good-bye now but Im sure we will

13、remember each other in the days to come；同时使用了很多的高级词或短语如：express our gratitude；made great contributions；as a result of；allow me to；on behalf of；a pleasant safe journey home等。文章思路清晰，层次分明，上下句转换自然。为文章增色添彩。【2021届四川省天府名校高三5月教学质量联合测评】假定你是李华，本周末市图书馆有免费的公益书法课程（calligraphy class），请你写信给你的外教Lucy，邀请她和你一起参加这个课程。内

14、容包括：1. 时间和地点；2. 课程内容。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【答案】Dear Lucy,Knowing that you are interested in Chinese culture, Im writing to invite you to attend a calligraphy class with me this weekend.The class will be given at 9 this Saturday morning in the city library and it is free of charge. In thi

15、s class, the teacher will tell us the history and some interesting stories of calligraphy. Whats more, we will appreciate some great calligraphy works written by some famous artists. More importantly, we can learn some basic skills in calligraphy, which must be very interesting. Im sure you will hav

16、e a better understanding of Chinese culture through this class.If you can come with me, please let me know. Im looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】这是一篇应用文。假定你是李华，本周末市图书馆有免费的公益书法课程（calligraphy class），请你写信给你的外教Lucy，邀请她和你一起参加这个课程。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1.时间和地点；2.课程内容。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题対于考生的综

17、合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的开篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。【点睛】本书面表达要点齐全，上下文连贯，使用一定数量的句式结构，让句子更加生动丰满，同时运用了许多高级词汇和固定短语，提高文章的档次，体现了对英语的熟练的驾驭能力。例如：Knowing that you are interested in Chinese culture, Im writing to invite you to attend a call

18、igraphy class with me this weekend运用了非谓语动词做状语；The class will be given at 9 this Saturday morning in the city library and it is free of charge.运用了被动语态More importantly, we can learn some basic skills in calligraphy, which must be very interesting.运用了定语从句。【2021届广西桂林十八中高三第十次适应性月考】假定你是李华，你校即将举办我和我的祖国英语演讲

19、比赛。请给你校外籍教师James 写一封电子邮件，告知他演讲比赛的有关内容，并邀请他当评委。要点包括：1.比赛的时间和地点；2.举办此活动的目的和意义；3.诚挚邀请他担任评委。注意： 1.词数 100 左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【答案】Dear Mr. James,Im writing to tell you that an English speech contest will be held in the lecture hall on September 30 and we would like to invite you to be one of the judges

20、 of the contest.The speech contest with the theme My Motherland and Me is intended to arouse students patriotic enthusiasm. Inspired by the activity, contestants will be motivated to express their love for the country as well as determination to study hard and make contributions to the motherland.Ho

21、pefully, you will accept the invitation and make necessary comments for the contest.Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，告知外籍教师 James 演讲比赛的有关内容，并邀请他当评委。第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。要求：1告知比赛时间和地点2举办活动的目的和意义3邀请他担任评委 第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）hold; invite; judge; be intended t

22、o; arouse; enthusiasm; inspire; be motivated to; express; determination; make contribution to; invitation; comment; look forward to 第三步：连词成句1. Im writing to tell you that an English speech contest will be held in the lecture hall on September 30.2. We would like to invite you to be one of the judges

23、 of the contest.3. The speech contest with the theme My Motherland and Me is intended to arouse students patriotic enthusiasm.4. Inspired by the activity, contestants will be motivated to express their love for the country as well as determination to study hard and make contributions to the motherla

24、nd.5. Hopefully, you will accept the invitation and make necessary comments for the contest.6. Looking forward to your reply.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second And then, Finally, In the end, At last2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreov

25、er, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, Not onlybut (also), Including3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, But, Although + clause(从句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand,on the other hand, Some,while others,As for, Sothat4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的

26、衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，第五步：润色修改【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些地道的表达，如：arouse students patriotic enthusiasm， make contributions to the motherland。还使用了分词结构如 Inspired by the activity, contestants will be motivated to express their love for the country as well as determination to stud

27、y hard and make contributions to the motherland。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。【2021届“皖江名校”高三决战高考最后一卷】假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Leslie写邮件向你了解中医药，并询问中医药在中国治疗新冠肺炎中的作用。请你回复邮件。内容包括：1.简介中医药；2.抗疫作用；3.祝愿。参考词汇：新冠肺炎 COVID-19；针灸 acupuncture；大流行病 pandemic注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【答案】Hi Les

28、lie,Thank you for writing to me! Traditional Chinese medicine (TCM) has been around for thousands of years, and doctors use various practices together with herbal medicine to address health problems. For instance, acupuncture can be used to treat pain and improve overall wellness by inserting thin n

29、eedles into our body. If you want to know more, there is more information available online.In the most recent battle against COVID-19, TCM has proved its effectiveness in boosting peoples immune system, relieving disease symptoms and preventing mild symptoms from getting worse. Overall, it helped to

30、 reduce death rate and improved patients chances of recovery.Best wishes to your family and take care of yourself in the pandemic!Yours,Li Hua【解析】这是一篇应用文。要求以李华的名义，给朋友Leslie写一封关于中医药以及针灸在治疗新冠病毒期间的作用。第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件；假设你是Li Hua，你要给朋友Leslie回复一封邮件，内容包括对中医药的简介、针灸疗法在治疗新冠病毒期间的作用，以及对Leslie的祝愿。题目要点明确，利于学生

31、进行表达。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：herbal medicine（中药），For instance（例如；举例来说），effectiveness（效果；有效性），immune system（免疫系统），disease symptoms（疾病症状）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）连词成句，需注意这是一封与朋友之间的电子邮件，可使用较为口语的语气。本篇电子邮件主要为介绍中医药的内容，以及针灸的作用，因此时态使用一般现在时即可。第4步：连句成文，可使用连词对文章进行润色，如For instance（例如；举例来说），Overall（总而言之）等高频词，全篇书写要清晰、规范、不得

32、有涂改、书写错误等。【点睛】整篇文章要点明确，分段合理，字数适当，文章开篇点题，在介绍了中医药的简单情况后，使用了for instance具体阐述了针灸的作用。第二段则是描写了中医药在抗疫期间所发挥的作用，如可以增强人的免疫力，减缓病情，等。第三段则是表达了作者对朋友在疫情期间希望他保重身体的美好祝愿。综上所述，本文题目中提到的所有信息点，并使用了简洁明了的语言进行阐述，是一篇比较标准的应试作文。【2021届四川省成都市第七中学高三高考热身考试】你居住的社区是个国际化程度很高的地方，为了确保与来自各个国家的外国朋友的有效沟通，社区发起了英语志愿者招募活动。假如你是学生李华，希望能成为其中一员。

33、请按要求用英文给社区写一封申请信，内容包括： 1.个人情况；2.自身优势； 3.服务承诺。 注意：1.词数 100 左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 Dear Sir/Madam,_Yours faithfully,Li Hua【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,My name is Li Hua. And Im writing to apply to be a volunteer for our international community. Now let me give a bit more information about my

34、self.Im a boy of 18 from a high school. My spoken English is so good that I often get prizes in different speech contests, ensuring me to communicate with foreigners fluently. Whats more, Im especially outing-going, familiar with our neighborhood as well as our city, good at communication and always

35、 glad to help others. Im willing to provide the best service for every foreigner in the community. Therefore, I think Im suitable for serving the neighborhood.I would appreciate it if you could offer me the chance to be a volunteer. Thank you!Yours faithfully,Li Hua【解析】本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，要求考生用英文给社区写一封申请信

36、，申请成为社区的一名英语志愿者。第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。结构：三段式：第一段写出写信目的，引出主题；第二段写出具体内容，包括个人情况、自身优势和服务承诺；第三段表达感谢。要求：1. 介绍个人情况，包括年龄，性格等2. 介绍自身优势，包括英语口语程度以及对社区的熟悉程度等。3. 表达服务承诺。第二步:列提纲 （重点单词及词组）apply to do sth. (申请做某事); sothat (如此以至于); communicate with sb. (与某人沟通); fluently (流畅地); be familiar with (对熟悉); as well

37、 as (既又); be willing to do (愿意做某事); provide sth. for sb. (为某人提供某物); be suitable for (适合); appreciate (感激); offer sb. sth. (提供给某人某物); volunteer (志愿者)第三步：连词成句1. Im writing to apply to be a volunteer for our international community. 2. My spoken English is so good that I often get prizes in different s

38、peech contests. 3. Im especially outing-going, familiar with our neighborhood as well as our city.4. Im willing to provide the best service for every foreigner in the community.5. I think Im suitable for serving the neighborhood.6. I would appreciate it if you could offer me the chance to be a volun

39、teer.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1. 表文章结构顺序：first of all; to begin with; firstly/first; secondly/second ; and then; finally; in the end; at last2. 表并列补充关系：Whats more(本篇文章使用过); besides; moreover; furthermore; in addition; additionally; not only but also; as well as; bothand3. 表转折对比关系：b

40、ut; however; on the contrary; instead; although; in spite of; on the one hand, on the other hand; some, while others4. 表因果关系：because; because of; for; so; since; thus; therefore(本篇文章使用过); as a result; why 5. 表总结：in short; in a word; in conclusion; in summary; all in all; generally speaking连句成文，注意使用恰

41、当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。第五步：润色修改根据写作内容需要，加入高级句式，如名词性从句，定语从句，状语从句等。I would appreciate it. 本句用来表达自己的感激之情。可以使用条件状语从句，再次强调希望自己能够有机会成为一名志愿者，并表达自己的感激之情。润色修改为：I would appreciate it if you could offer me the chance to be a volunteer.【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中合理使用了复合句，如：“Therefor

42、e, I think Im suitable for serving the neighborhood.”，这句话含有宾语从句；其次，使用了一些固定句型，如：be willing to do; be familiar with; provide sth. for sb.等，使语言更加丰富；同时使用了一些高级词汇及短语，如fluently; appreciate; volunteer; as well as等，让语言更加地道。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。【2021届河北省衡水中学普通高等学校招生临考模拟（二

43、)】假定你是李华，你的英国好友Jonah发来邮件询问你们班上周末参观西安的情况。 请给他回一封邮件。1. 参观时间及内容；2.发出邀请。注意：1. 词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇:兵马俑 the Terracotta Warriors 皮影戏 shadow play_【答案】Dear Jonah,Im glad you are interested in Xian. Now Id like to tell you something about our visit to Xian last weekend.We set off at 7:00 a.m. on Sat

44、urday. After arriving in Xian, we went to visit the Terracotta Warriors, where we saw the wisdom of ancient Chinese people. The following day we went out to watch some shadow plays, an ancient form of Chinese storytelling. After that, we tasted some delicious local foods. I feel that I have learned

45、a lot from the relaxing and significant experience.Looking forward to your visiting Xian, I would be willing to show you around.Yours,Li Hua【解析】这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生给朋友Jonah写一封邮件，告诉他上周末参西安的情况。体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应以一般过去时为主结构：总分总 要求：1. 参观时间及内容；2.发出邀请。第二步：列提纲（重点词组）be interested in/ would like to do sth./ pay a vi

46、sit to/ arrive in/ look forward to/ be willing to do sth./ have a better understanding of/ show sb. around/ be glad to do sth./ be delighted to do sth第三步：连词成句1. Im delighted to know you are interested in Xian. 2. Now Id like to tell you something about our visit to Xian last weekend.3. We set off at

47、 7:00 a.m. on Saturday. 4. After arriving there, we paid a visit to the Terracotta Warriors, where we saw the wisdom of ancient Chinese people. 5. The following day we went out to watch some shadow plays, which is an ancient form of Chinese storytelling. 6. After that, we tasted some delicious local

48、 foods. 7. I feel I have learned a lot from the relaxing and significant experience.8. Looking forward to your visiting Xian, I would be willing to show you around.第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）【点睛】范文内容完整，

49、要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些主从复合句，例如：After arriving in Xian, we went to visit the Terracotta Warriors, where we saw the wisdom of ancient Chinese people.中where引导非限制性定语从句；I feel that I have learned a lot from the relaxing and significant experience.中that引导宾语从句。【2021届江西省抚州临川第一中学高三6月实

50、战演练冲刺（二)】 假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Jack听说你大学准备攻读“中医药学”专业，发邮件向你询问原由，请你回复邮件。内容包括：1. 中医简介；2. 家庭影响；3. 个人愿望。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：中医药学 Traditional Chinese Medicine(TCM)Dear Jack,_Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jack,Thanks for your letter! Im very glad to share with you my idea about furthering my study in Tradi

51、tional Chinese Medicine at university in reply to your email.With a history of over 2000 years, TCM has formed a unique system to diagnose and cure illness, from which generations and generations of Chinese people benefit. I feel really proud whenever I see patients of my father and grandfather leav

52、e their clinic with satisfaction and hope. So Ive made up my mind to succeed their career and major in TCM to become a doctor. I believe itll turn out an excellent cause for me to pursue.Best wishes.YoursLi Hua【解析】这是一篇应用文，要求考生写一封信向朋友解释自己大学选择中医药学的原因。第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时结构：总分要求：1.回信的目的2

53、. 1）中医简介（中医的历史，中医对国人的或世界的影响）2）家人的影响（祖辈行医，耳濡目染）3）个人愿望（成为出色的中医） 第二步：列提纲（重点词组）be glad to do /diagnose / cure illness / made up ones mind to do/ major in /turn out 第三步：连词成句I am glad to share with you why I choose TCM as my major when I attend university.With a history of over 2000 years, TCM has formed

54、a unique system to diagnose and cure illness.It has left a long-lasting influence on Chinese even people from other countries.As you know, my father, grandfather and great grandfather are all doctors.I am deeply impressed when watching them treating their patient, and feel really happy and proud whe

55、n the patients get well. As if they were cured by myself.Ive made up my mind to succeed their career and major in TCM to become a doctor. I believe after some studying and training, I will turn out a good doctor.第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词和从句）1. 表并列补充关系：whats more,；besides; in addition; as well as；last but not t

56、he least2. 表转折对比关系：however/ on the contrary/ but/ although/ in spite of/ despite/ on the one hand, one the other hand/ as for3. 表文章结构顺序：first of all/ firstly/ second/ and then/ finally/ in the end/ at last4. 表因果关系：because/ so/ as/ thus/ therefore/ as a result第五步：修改润色(加入从句)【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词

57、数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些主从复合句，例如：With a history of over 2000 years, TCM has formed a unique system to diagnose and cure illness, from which generations and generations of Chinese people benefit.中的which引导非限定性定语从句；I feel really proud whenever I see patients of my father and grandfather leave the

58、ir clinic with satisfaction and hope. 中的whenever让步状语从句。范文看似短小，却言简意赅。尤其是第二自然段，总共4句话，但包括了题干要求的内容。几处长句子的使用显示了考生扎实的语言基础和表达能力。【2021届贵州省贵阳市第一中学高三高考适应性月考卷（八)】假定你是李华，于毕业季，代表全体高三学生，感念师恩重似丘山，欲将离别意，写成感谢书。内容包括：1.表示感谢；2.回顾老师们对你的帮助；3.临别祝愿。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【答案】Good morning,dear teachers,Im Li Hua.Today

59、 I am honored to represent us graduates to deliver a speech.Firstly, Id like to extend our heartfelt thanks to the teachers for your help and guidance in the past three years. Without your guidance and encouragement, we couldnt have made such great progress. Now we have not only had a good command o

60、f all the subjects, but also learned how to get along with each other and how to be a responsible person. What a good time! To repay you, we should work harder to serve the people and society better in the future. Next, I want to send you our everlasting feeling of gratefulness. I wish every teacher

61、 could have a sunny smile, a healthy body. Thanks again. And all the best to everyone. 【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生代表全体高三学生，写一封感谢书感念师恩，表达临别祝愿。第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。要求：1表达感谢2回顾老师们的帮助3临别祝愿 第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）be honored to do sth; represent; deliver a speech; extend our heartfelt thanks to; help and guidanc

62、e; make such great progress; not only.but also.; a good command of ; get along with; responsible; repay; serve the people and society; send; everlasting; gratefulness; all the best to everyone; wish第三步：连词成句1.Today I am honored to represent us graduates to deliver a speech.2.Id like to extend our hea

63、rtfelt thanks to the teachers for your help and guidance in the past three years.3.Without your guidance and encouragement, we couldnt have made such great progress.4.Now we have not only had a good command of all the subjects, but also learned how to get along with each other and how to be a respon

64、sible person.5.To repay you, we should work harder to serve the people and society better in the future.6.Next, I want to send you our everlasting feeling of gratefulness.7.I wish every teacher could have a sunny smile, a healthy body.8.Thanks again. And all the best to everyone.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意

65、主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second And then, Finally, In the end, At last2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, Not onlybut (also), Including3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, But, Although + clause(从句), In spite o

66、f + n/doing, On the one hand,on the other hand, Some,while others,As for, Sothat4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰第五步：润色修改【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些地道的表达，如 extend our heartfelt thanks to.以及含蓄虚拟语气Without your guida

67、nce and encouragement,we couldnt have made such great progress. 动词不定式作目的状语To repay you, we should work harder to serve the people and society better in the future. 全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。【2021届湖北省黄冈中学高三六月第三次模拟】假定你是李华，是某国际学校的学生会主席。你校将承办国际中学生交流大会，欲招聘一批志愿者。请你用英语写一则通知

68、，登在校报上，内容包括：1. 招聘人数；2. 应聘条件；3. 报名截止时间。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Volunteers Wanted!_Student Council【答案】 Volunteers Wanted!Were in need of twenty volunteers for an exchange conference for international middle school students which is to take place on July 24, 2020.The volunteers will be in char

69、ge of providing services for foreign representatives, like arranging their accommodation and showing them around. Therefore, applications are welcome from those who are skilled in spoken English and communicating with others. Those who have experience in volunteering are preferred. In addition, the

70、volunteers should be familiar with Chinese culture since foreign representatives are eager to learn more about our culture. If youre interested, please email your application to studentcouncil no later than June 10, 2020.We are looking forward to your participation.Student Council【解析】这是一篇应用文。第1步:根据提

71、示可知,本篇为一封信; 假定你是某国际学校的学生会主席。你校将承办国际中学生交流大会，欲招聘一批志愿者。请你用英语写一则通知，登在校报上，内容包括：1.招聘人数；2.应聘条件；3.报名截止时间第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组) ,如: in need of ;in charge of;are skilled in; In addition, ; be familiar with; are eager to等。第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【

72、点睛】本文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如Were in need of twenty volunteers for an exchange conference for international middle school students which is to take place on July 24, 2020.定语从句的运用；In addition, the volunteers should be familiar with Chinese culture since foreign representatives are eager to learn more about our culture.状语从句的运用，全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。