高二第一学期英语（牛津上海版S2A）课件：：UNIT2 《CONTINUOUS LEARNING》-WRITING WORD版含解析.ppt

1、Unit2 Continuous learningArgumentative Writing(议论文)评分标准v 高考(25分制)v Structure 3v Content 10v Language 12Step 1 审题v 2001年高考作文：v 请你谈谈汽车进入家庭后,对家庭,环境和经济可能产生的影响.v Nowadays private cars have entered quite a lot of families,and more and more people are considering buying themselves private cars.What impact

2、will private cars make on families,environment and economy?1.提炼中心话题2.Brainstorming3.初步确定中心观点Practice:v 2003年高考题:v 你的好友因家境一般买不起名牌而闷闷不乐,给他写封信,谈谈你的看法和建议.v 收信人:徐海青v 寄信人:黄平v 写信日期:2003年6月8日Step 2 列提纲中心句v 1.Private cars enable people to enjoy more flexible transportation.v 2.Private cars promote the develo

3、pment of economy in many fields.v 3.Too many private cars make the pollution problems worse.Step3:动笔结构1.Introduction paragraph;2.Supporting part;3.Conclusion paragraph132Introduction paragraphv To write one or two sentences to explain the background of the topic,then give the topic sentence.Practice

4、:Whats your view on keeping unusual animals as pets,like a snake,a crocodile(鳄鱼),etc.?Sample beginningv(Most people will agree that pets make peoples lives fuller and more beautiful.It is true that keeping pets benefits people a lot.)But I dont think keeping unusual pets is also good to people.There

5、 are three reasons for that.topic sentencebackground of the topicUseful phrases for this partv First,firstly,first of all,at first,above all;v Second,secondly,then,besides,furthermore,in addition,in addition to;v At last,last but not least.v Topic for thought:v 当前，越来越多的人参加夜校学习，不同的人有不同的目的，请谈谈你的看法。Sam

6、ple writing for the supporting partFirstly,more practical knowledge,such as a god command of a foreign language or computer skills,will provide people with better and wider job opportunities.For adults,especially for those who are at present laid down from their work,will be well prepared when retur

7、n to the job market.Secondly,attending evening school can help people kill their spare time.Many people choose to go to evening school simply because they seem have nothing to do.In the evening school,they can make friends with others.general reasonssupporting detailsConclusion paragraphuseful phras

8、es for this paragraph:in a word,to conclude,to sum up,in short,etc.In this part,you should restate your topic and give a short summary.revisionintroduction(topic sentence)reason 1reason 2reason 3detailsdetailsdetailsconclusionexamples,data facts,reasoningPractice:v 根据下列表格提示写一篇题为“The Life Expectancy

9、of Chinese People is Getting Higher and Higher”，文章共为三段：a.简单说明表格内容 b.说出产生这种现象的原因 c.得出结论。Year1949196319802002Life Span(人的寿命)35627075 According to the table,we can see that the Chinese average life expectancy has been getting higher and higher these years.It was 35 before liberation,62 in 1963,70 in 19

10、92 and about 75 in 2002.There are three main reasons for the rises.First of all,food which we eat has been more nutritious than ever before.People pay more attention to a well-balanced diet.Fruits and vegetables are in great need by people to get more vitamins,so their health has been improved a lot

11、.Secondly,people now take an active part in sports.They find that sports activities help them to be stronger and healthier.This also makes them live longer.Last but not least,great progress has been made in the field of science.Scientists have found a lot of methods to treat diseases.Cancer is no lo

12、nger a difficult problem in the world.More people can be cured of serious diseases which were fatal before.To conclude,with the development of the modern science and technology,our life is sure to become better and better.The average life span will keep on rising.From the table,we can see that peopl

13、e are living longer and longer.The average life expectancy was 35 in 1949 and it has been more than doubled by 2002.There are several reasons which can account for the rises.First of all,better diet helps people to live longer.With the development of economy,people are getting richer,which enables t

14、hem not just to have enough food to live on but to choose what does good to their health.Besides,peoples awareness of the importance of doing exercise keeps people healthy and strong,which leads to longer life span.We often see people,old or young,taking part in activities such as Taiji,Fan Dance an

15、d jogging.In addition to health food and exercise,the development of medical science also contributes a lot to peoples longer life.It is reported many times that diseases which were fatal in the past can be cured without any difficulties.To sum up,with better diet,growing awareness of the importance

16、 of doing exercise and advanced medical treatment,no one can deny the fact that peoples life expectancy is sure to continue to rise in the future.Step 4 检查v 语法错误主谓一致、时态、数等v 拼写错误Homeworkv2002高考作文题：v阅读下面两则短讯，谈谈你对网吧（Internet Bar）现象的看法。（不必把短讯译成英文。）北京市关闭了许多网吧，但仍有学生周末一早乘车去郊区上网。辽宁省锦州市6,000余名学生举行集体签名仪式，保证远离网吧。