2020版高考英语二轮复习35分写作规范练五2019121147.doc

1、35分写作规范练(五)写作(共两节，满分35分)第一节短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。2019豫南九校联考My grandmother is 73 year old. She is a great r

2、eader, but she reads only newspapers. He has a very good habit of reading the newspaper daily. After her morning housework, she sat down to read the newspaper for at least an hour. She doesnt like to be disturbing at that time. In fact she is so much updated that everyone else in the house relies he

3、r for the daily important news, national or international. My grandmothers habit of reading newspapers are a great help for other members of my house, especial my parents. As they both are working very hardly, they have very few time to read the news.答案与解析：My grandmother is 73 old. She is a great re

4、ader, but she reads only newspapers. has a very good habit of reading the newspaper daily. After her morning housework, she down to read the newspaper for at least an hour. She doesnt like to be at that time. In fact she is so updated that everyone else in the house relies her for the daily importan

5、t news, national or international. My grandmothers habit of reading newspapers a great help for other members of my house, my parents. As they both are working very , they have very time to read the news.year改为yearsyear作“岁”讲时为可数名词，此前有数词73修饰，应用复数形式，故将year改为years。He改为She此处代指grandmother，应用代词She，故将He改为S

6、he。sat改为sits综观全文可知，本文主要介绍的是一般情况，应用一般现在时，故将sat改为sits。disturbing改为disturbeddisturb与其逻辑主语She之间为被动关系，应用被动形式，故将disturbing改为disturbed。删除much“soadj./adv.that.”为固定搭配，意为“如此以至于”，且much常用于修饰形容词的比较级或不可数名词，此处much多余，故删除much。在relies后加onrely是不及物动词，其后常接on后再接宾语，rely on表示“依赖；依靠”，故在relies后加on。are改为is分析句子成分可知，本句中My grand

7、mothers habit of reading newspapers作主语，其核心词为habit，为单数概念，谓语动词应用单数形式，故将are改为is。especial改为especially根据语境可知，此处表示“尤其是；特别是”，作状语，应用副词especially，故将especial改为especially。hardly改为hard根据语境可知，此处表示“因为他们都努力工作，没有时间读报纸”。hardly意为“几乎不”；hard意为“努力地”，故将hardly改为hard。few改为littletime作“时间”讲时，为不可数名词，应用little修饰；few修饰可数名词，故将few

8、改为little。第二节书面表达(满分25分)2019昆明市诊断假定你是李华，你的好友Peter在你校上周举办的“美丽校园”摄影比赛中获奖了。请根据以下要点给他写一封邮件：1表示祝贺；2你对获奖作品的看法；3希望他分享摄影经验。注意：1词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Peter，_Yours，Li Hua参考范文：Dear_Peter，Congratulations on your winning the prize in the photo taking competition with the title of Charming School which was

9、 held last week.Your work stands out in the competition, which is quite representative of all works and close to the theme reflecting our school culture. Besides, skills of taking photos are also in the prior position. In a word, youve done well in all the required aspects. So youve got the prize and I feel proud of you. Congratulations to you again from the bottom of my heart!I hope you can share your skills of taking pictures with me.Yours，Li_Hua