2020年中考英语热点突破训练 书面表达之热点话题类（一）（含解析）.doc

1、书面表达之热点话题类为迎接祖国母亲第70个生日，学校开展了丰寓多彩的活动，如讲故事、制作卡片、参观博物馆等；请围绕该话题写一篇短文，内容包括以下要点：1. 你看到或参加过一次活动（包括时间、地点、经过）；2. 你对该活动的感受以及对祖国的热爱之情；3. 你今后如何为建设祖国贡献力量。注意：1. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名； 2. 词数在80100, 已给出的文字不计入总词数。To celebrate the 70th birthday of our motherland（祖国），_【写作思路】为迎接祖国母亲第70个生日，学校开展了丰寓多彩的活动，如讲故事、制作卡片、参观博物馆等；请围绕

2、该话题写一篇短文。考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。【参考范文】To celebrate the 70th birthday of our motherland, the school has carried out colorful activities, such as telling stories, making cards, visiting museums and so on. Last October,

3、 my parents and I visited the Beijing Museum. Its the greatest museum Ive ever seen. We saw many weapons that used by the old warriors, they protect our country and bring us the new life. There are all kinds of samples that used during the war are presented in front of us. We learn that our new life

4、 is not easy to get and we should cherish. I am proud of my motherland. Now I want to study hard and make contributions to my motherland in the future.【写作亮点】这是一篇优秀的作文，文中用到一些好的句型：Its the greatest museum Ive ever seen. We saw many weapons that used by the old warriors, they protect our country and bri

5、ng us the new life.这些给文章增色不少。中国传统文化源远流长，代代相传。近期各校都在开展学习中国传统文化活动。某网站正在开展以弘扬中国传统文化为题征文，请你用英文写一篇报道，介绍你校上周举办的讲中国成语故事活动并谈谈你的收获与感受。提示词语： Chinese idioms, story, collect, share, learn from, ancient提示问题： What did you do during the activity of Telling Chinese idioms story? What did you learn from the activity

6、? What do you think of it?_【参考范文】The activity of Telling Chinese idioms story was held in our school last week.In order to take part in this activity, I collected lots of Chinese idiom stories in advance. Many students, including me, actively shared the Chinese idiom stories in the activity. After e

7、ach story, the teacher explained the meaning of idioms and how to use it correctly. We learned a lot from our teacher. I did lots of reading in the process of preparation. My reading ability has improved greatly. Whats more, I realized the richness of Chinese ancient culture. I really had a good tim

8、e on the activity.【名师点评】1.题干解读：这是一篇提纲类书面表达，只给了一些要点提示，但都不很明确。学生除了要把所给要点提示都表达出来外，还要进行适当拓展，使文章内容充实。2.例文点评：例文采用三段式；用第一人称来叙述讲成语故事活动；因为活动已经举办，所以时态采用一般过去时；对参加活动的过程描写完整且条理清晰。3.高分亮点：短语：in order to，take part in，lots of，learn from，in the process of，Whats more，have a good time。句型：被动句型。随着手机的普及，越来越多的人痴迷于手机，纷纷加入低头

9、族。请你参考下图反映的现象及内容提示，围绕拒为低头族（stop phubbing），用英语写一篇80词左右短文。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 内容提示：1.我身边也有很多低头族，非常喜欢玩手机。2.他们不停用手机发信息、上网、玩游戏或拍照。3.影响学习和生活。上课或工作时间玩手机极大浪费时间。4.引发健康问题，长时间玩手机引发眼、背、颈痛。 Nowadays, lots of people have their own mobile phones, but more and more people are crazy about their mobile phones. It is common

10、 to see people staring at their mobile phone everywhere all the time, taking no notice of the people around them. _【写作思路】考生首先要认真阅读写作提示并认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。在检查环节，考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。【参考范文】Nowadays, lots of people have their own mobile phones, but more a

11、nd more people are crazy about their mobile phones. It is common to see people staring at their mobile phone everywhere all the time, taking no notice of the people around them. There is a lot of phubbing around me. They like playing with mobile phones very much. They cant stop sending text messages

12、, surfing the Internet, playing mobile games and even taking photos with mobile phones.However, phubbing influences /affects not only our studies, but also our life. Phubbing, whether playing phone games or sending text message, especially in class or at work, is a big waste of time. Whats more, it

13、can lead to health problems. For example, using a mobile phone too much can cause eyes or back and neck pain.In my opinion, it is time for us to throw away our phones and raise our heads. We should do more exercise and take part in real-life activities. When we use phones properly we can live a happ

14、y life.【写作亮点】这篇文章语言规范，叙事清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，能够把提示的内容叙述清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯是一篇不错的文章。随着网络的发展，人们消费观念的转变，购物方式也在悄悄的发生变化。网购已经成为一种时尚，越来越多的学生也正加入到网购群体当中。请你根据以下表格的提示，写一篇有关网上购物的文章。优点1、节约时间； 2、价格通常较便宜； 3、可供选择的范围广，品种多。缺点1、只看到图片，看不到商品本身；2、容易购买大量不太需要的东西，造成浪费。注意：1、文中内容必须包含表格中的所有内容，可适当进行发挥；2、文中不能出现真实姓名和班级名称等相关信息，否则不予评分；3、词数要求80词左

15、右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。提示词汇：网购 shopping online（n.）；商品goods（n.）；导致cause（v.） 【参考范文】Shopping OnlineWith the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping on line. It has become a fashion in our daily life. Some of us students also join the group.Shopping on line has many advantages. Just by a

16、 click of the mouse, you can buy what youre interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowded people and cars and save time. When shopping online, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower.Every coin has two sides.

17、Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On one hand, its very easy for you to buy goods different from the pictures you see on the Internet. On the other hand, shopping on line may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed.Thats a waste of money.All in all, I love shopping online. With the dev

18、elopment of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online.【写作亮点】1. 本文文章要求，对网购的优点和缺点都做了详细描述，内容完整，用了表格中的信息。2. 句式丰富。有Every coin has two sides. 表达事物具有两面性。 On one handOn the other hand表达不同的的观点。All in all用来总结。近年来，科技的进步正在逐步影响着人们的日常生活。2017年5月，来自一带一路沿线的20国青年评选出了中国的新四大发明：高铁、支付宝、共享单车和网购。 假如你是李华，你的朋友Lis

19、a是英国的一名初中生，她对我们的新四大发明很感 兴趣。请你给她写一封电子邮件，具体内容如下：1.介绍共享单车和网购的基本情况并谈谈你的看法和评价 2. 邀请她下个月参加你校科技节，将展出学生制作的各类材质的小模型。注意：1. 词数80词左右，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数 2. 可适当增加细节，使行文流畅。参考词汇：共享单车: shared bikes Dear Lisa,Im glad to hear that youre so interested in our Four NewInventions_Yours,Li Hua【写作思路】这篇作文要求我们根据提示来介绍中国的新四大发明，题目中

20、给出了具体的写作的内容，我们应将这些内容用正确的英语表达出来。首先应注意在短文中要包括题目中给出的所有信息，不能遗漏要点，并注意表达的层次和条理。其次要注意使用正确的时态和人称，通过分析可知，这篇短文应使用一般现在时态，谓语动词用原形，特别要注意谓语动词形式要变化，这是一个写作的难点。最后要注意英语的表达习惯，英语句式与汉语在语序和词性上的使用是不同的，要注意不能逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语。应从句子整体考虑，使用恰当的词汇和句型来表达，语法规范。还应使用一些较好的句型或者短语，增强文章的表现力。【参考范文】Dear Lisa,Im glad to hear that youre so inter

21、ested in our Four New Inventions Let me tell you about them. They are high-speed railways, electronic payments, shared bicycles and online shopping. We travel by high-speed railways. They are very quick. We use electronic payments when we use online shopping. When we want to go somewhere by bike, we

22、 use shared bicycles. We use our mobile phone to unlock the shared bicycle. It is convenient and cheap. There is no pollution and oil cost. We can also keep healthy when we ride it. There will be the Science Festival in our school. It will show all kinds of models that students make. I hope you will

23、 come to visit them.Yours,Li Hua时下，全国上下都在努力实现中国梦，强国梦。作为新时代的学生，你有什么样的想？结合自己的兴趣爱好或者生活背景，以My dream为题，写一篇80个词左右的文，谈谈你的梦想以及如何实现你的梦想。My dream_【写作思路】这是一篇材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细但很简单，要求以my dream为题谈谈你的梦想以及如何实现你梦想，重点应放在你为什么会有这样的梦想上。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要仔细考虑，不可遗漏要点，也可适当发挥。要注意要求，严格按照要求去写作。根据材料内容可知，本文以一般现在时态为主，主语是第

24、一人称。英语作文一般分为三段式：第一段：开篇点题每个人都有梦想，但我的梦想是成为老师。第二段：正文部分为什么会有这个梦想老师教会了我知识和如何做人，他们是最伟大的人第三段：再次点题我会努力实现自己的教师梦【参考范文】My dreamEveryone has his own dream. Some want to be doctors. Others hope to be scientists. My dream is to become a teacher. Teachers cannot teach us many things at school, but they do their be

25、st to teach us how to learn. Thanks to them, we learn knowledge. And at the same time, we learn how to live a happy life. They spend most time on their students. They are great in my eyes. I hope to be a teacher because I admire teachers. I know it is not easy to make my dream come true. But I decide to try my best to study harder from now on. I am sure my dream will come true.