专题04 书面表达加分技巧-2022年江苏中考英语考前最后必看必提分资料（牛津译林版）.docx

1、专题04 2022年江苏中考英语考前最后必看必提分资料（牛津译林版）中考英语作文常见错误分析1.审题不清：依据作文的评分原则，若文章内容不切题，则不管语言如何规范、用词如何准确，都会被严重减分。2.拼写错误：拼写是考生应该具备的最起码的基本功，但在考生的作文中却经常能发现很多拼写错误。有拼写错误的作文肯定会被酌情扣分，而且有大量拼写错误存在的作文不仅体现出语言基本功差，同时也直接影响内容的表达，通常会降低作文的档次。3.名词单复数问题：名词单复数会造成主谓不一致错误，名词前面缺少限定词造成泛指现象。4.缺少动词：在汉语中没有动词的句子是允许的，但英语中每个完整的句子都必须有动词来构成。5.中国

2、式英语的排列：按照汉语表述顺寻罗列单词组句。6.代词的误用：英语中代词的形式很多，包括主格、宾格、物主代词、反身代词等。而汉语中没有主格和宾格、形容词性物主代词和名次性物主代词之分；此外汉语中很多时候不用物主代词，而英语中要体现人与物的关系必须用物主代词。7.句子不完整：因为对句子结构认识模糊，出现只写半句的现象，这也是造成失分的原因之一。尤其体现在（及物动词 / 不及物动词运用）8.时态、人称和数的搭配错误：汉语动词无时态、人称和数的变化，而对英语来说，这些都至关重要。9.综合性错误：综合性错误是指单词的大小写和标点符号的错误等，以及形容词和副词的混淆、连词的误用等等。中考英语作文构思技巧（

3、一）审：审就是仔细审题。看清要求，确定体裁、人称、时态等。（二）列：列就是抓要点。根据要点列出英文短语形式提纲，避免遗漏。（三）扩：扩就是扩展成句。将所列提纲形成“主+谓+宾。”和“主+系+表。”基本句子结构，注意定语和状语修饰成分位置的使用以及避免中国式英语出现。（四）连：连就是连句成篇。使用适当的连词和过渡语将表达要点的句子连接成文。（五）改：改主要从以下几个方面进行自我修改：1.内容是否完整。 2.时态是否正确。 3.拼写和标点是否正确。4.主谓是否一致。 5.格式和字数是否符合要求。 6.层次是否清楚。英语书面表达的写作技巧“结构+要点+逻辑+语法+亮点”：结构：中考最流行的结构就是三

4、段式，“观点要点总结”让人一目了然。要点：要点要齐全（隐藏要点和明面列出的要点）逻辑：这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑关系连词，体现文章的连贯性和行文的流畅性。语法：指句型、句子结构、时态、词汇短语错误。亮点：短文要有体现突出色彩的句型并与从句、状语从句、固定句型 中考英语阅卷老师看写作主要有三个标准：1）结构2）内容要点 3）语言（词组搭配、句型、句式变化、过渡词）看结构和内容要点定分数档，看语言给成绩。这是中考英语阅卷的潜规则。中考英语作文常用句型1. Its important (necessary) for sb. +to do sth.做某事对某人来说2. Its no use/no go

5、od doing sth .做某事没有用处/没有好处。3. There is no need to do sth.没必要做某事。4. There is no point in doing sth.做某事毫无意义5. What about + doing sth？/ How about + doing sth？怎么样？6. The reason why +(表示结果句子) is that + (表示原因句子)。的原因是7. That is why + (表示结果句子)。那就是的原因。8. That is because + (表示原因句子)。那是因为9. It is said/reported

6、that +(事件陈述句子)。据说/据报道10. There is no doubt that +(事件陈述句子)。毫无疑问11. It goes without saying that + (事件陈述句子)。不言而喻，/毫无疑问12. As is known to all，+(事件陈述句子)。众所周知，13. It is generally known that. 众所周知14. As we all know, +(事件陈述句子)。据我们所知，15. Its time to do sth./Its time for sth.是该做某事的时候了。16. Its better/best to d

7、o sth.最好做某事。17. It takes sb. some time to do sth. 某人话多少时间做某事。18. sth. costs. some mony.某物花了某人多少钱。19. sb. spends some time/mony(in)doing sth.某人花多少时间/金钱。20. sb. pays some money for sth.某人为某物付了多少钱。21. In my opinion, +(观点陈述句子)。= As far as I am concerned, +(观点陈述句子)。 就我的看法；我认为 In my opinion, playing video

8、 games not only takes much time but also is harmful to health.就我的看法打电动玩具既花费时间也有害健康。22.With the increase/growth of the population, +(问题陈述句子)。随着人口的增加 With the development of science and technology, +(问题陈述句子)。随着科技的进步23. 状语从句A）如果你不，你就会 If you dont ， youll 例If you dont keep working hard, youll lose the c

9、hance.如果你不坚持努力工作，你就会失去这次机会。B）如此 ，以至于 so that 例：At that moment, I was so upset that I wanted to give up.当时，我非常伤心，最后都想放弃了。C）每当就每当我听到我就忍不住感到兴奋。Whenever I hear ， I cannot but feel excited.24. 宾语从句我认为， / 我认为不 I think / I dont think that +(事件陈述句)。中考英语作文常用功能句型1. 提建议had better (not) do 最好(不)做how about / wha

10、t about doing 怎么样?I think you should do 我认为你应该I suggest that you should do 我建议你做Why not do / why dont you do? 为什么不2. 表示喜欢和感兴趣like / love doing / enjoy doingbe fond of doing 喜欢做 / be keen on doing 喜欢做prefer to do A rather than do B 宁愿做A也不愿做Bbe interested in doing = show/ take a great interest in doin

11、g 感兴趣3. .努力做try to do努力做try ones best to do= do ones best to do 竭尽全力做make efforts to do = make every effort to do 尽力做do what sb can (do ) to do 尽力做 spare no effort to do 不遗余力的做4. 打算做 / 计划做intend / plan to do 打算做 be going to do 打算/计划做decide to do 决定做determine to do决定做 be determined to do决定做make up on

12、es mind to do下定决心做5. 表示想/希望want to do = would like to do 想做hope to do 希望做 expect to do 期待着做wish to do 希望做 consider doing 考虑做6. 只加doing 作宾语的动词finish 完成practice 练习 suggest建议 consider 考虑 mind 介意 enjoy 喜欢doing【提分练习】【1】第二届“一带一路”国际合作高峰论坛将于2019年在中国举办。组委会向社会征集志愿者。假设你是新华中学学生李华，请按上面的要求给组委会写一封应聘信。 要求：1.热情、有礼；

13、2.熟悉中国传统文化； 3.英语口语流利。生词：“一带一路”国际合作高峰论坛 the Belt and Road Forum for international Cooperation注意：1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,Thank you for reading my letter. As the Belt and Road Forum for International Cooperation is coming, Id like very much to be a volunteer.Al

14、l our citizens are looking forward to this special event. First of all, I promise I will, with great passion, try my best to serve our distinguished guests from home and abroad politely. Besides, I have a rich knowledge about Chinese history and especially traditional culture, which enables me to sp

15、read our splendid culture. Whats more, Im good at English and Chinese, which will play an important role in communication during the forum.To sum up, I believe I can be a excellent volunteer. I will try my best if Im accepted.【2】同学们,三年的英语学习就要结束了,你进展如何呢?现在学校男神女神墙上榜人物评选活动正在火热进行中,请你推荐(recommend)一个心目中的人

16、选(可以是同学、老师或自己),用英语写一篇80词左右的短文,介绍一下他/她或你自己的情况。内容要求:1.介绍他/她或你自己的个人信息:姓名、年龄、生日等;2.介绍他/她或你自己的兴趣爱好(至少3个方面)并简要说明理由;3.你推荐他/她或你自己的原因,或者他/她对你产生什么好的影响。注意:短文中不允许出现与考生本人相关的真实姓名和校名等信息。【答案】Hello, everyone, I have a right person for this wall. His name is Tom.He is 14 years old this year.His birthday is on May 1st

17、. He has short hair and wears a pair of glasses.He is tall and a little bit stronger than I am.In my eyes, he is a clever and cool boy. Tom is a basketball star in my class.He plays basketball very well.He often plays it with us after school.His favorite day is Monday and Friday because we have P.E.

18、on Monday and Friday.Its his favorite subject.And we can play basketball.Tom has good eating habits.He loves fruit and vegetables very much.He thinks theyre healthy food.He also likes ice-cream, but he doesnt eat it because he doesnt want to be fat. I recommend him because he is cool and fun; he is

19、good at playing sports.And he is my best friend. 【3】在过去的日子里,我们有过欢笑,也有过泪水照片,或将这些精彩定格,或勾起你对往事的回忆。某英语网站向你发出邀请,请你按要求用英语写一篇80词左右的短文,分享你照片背后的故事。 内容要求:(1)描述你的照片(时间,地点,人物);(2)分享你的故事(起因,经过,结果);(3)谈谈你的感受(感动,怀念,影响)。 注意:故事必须原创;短文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。【答案】This is a photo that is very special to me. In the photo,I was 10

20、 while my dad looked younger. Look, we were playing ping-pong happily. I used to be a ping-pong player. My dad trained me so hard, though he was tired after a days work. Once, I lost a game and I felt so sad that I wanted to give up. My dad said nothing, sitting quietly with me. The next morning, I

21、found a piece of paper. It said, Never give up, dear. I am proud of you! Now, I spend less time playing ping-pong because of my busy study. But I will never forget what my father told me. He is proud of me. How lucky I am to be his daughter! 【4】发明改变了世界,同时也改变了我们的生活。例如,电视给我们的生活带来了许多变化和便利。请你以Inventions

22、为话题,根据提示写一份值日生报告。先介绍电视的用途,再发挥想象,说说你想发明的东西,并说明其用途和理由。注意:1.报告须包括以上所有提示的信息,但不要逐字翻译,可适当发挥,使行文连贯;2.发明的东西可大可小,有用即可;3.词数80个左右。开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。 Good morning, everyone! Today Im going to talk about inventions. Inventions are created every day because people would like to make life easier.There are many fam

23、ous inventions, such as TV, smart phones, computers and so on.【答案】 I think TV is the most important and useful invention in the world.TV provides us with different kinds of information and colorful programs so that we can know more about the world.We watch entertainment programs to relax.Besides, so

24、me learning programs help us with our study. Though there have been many great inventions, I wish to invent a kind of pen which can help us write more quickly and neatly.When we meet problems in doing our homework or taking exams, it will tell us what to do. Thats all.Thank you very much.【5】假设下周是校园环

25、保活动周,你班为响应学校号召,打算出一期以低碳环保为主题的英语黑板报。请你根据下面的内容提示用英语写一份环保倡议书,作为黑板报的一部分。 内容提示:节约用水 节约用电 尽量选择公共交通(public transportation)出行 爱护花草树木 少看电视、少玩电脑游戏,多进行户外活动 注意:(1)内容可适当发挥;(2)80词左右;(3)开头已给出,不计入总词数。 【答案】Do you want to make our city a more beautiful place and then be a green person? If so, here are some ideas. Fir

26、st, dont waste water.We can save water by taking shorter showers or turning off the water when we brush our teeth.Second, we should always turn off the lights when we leave a room to save electricity.Third, we had better take public transportation as much as possible, like taking a bus.Fourth, we sh

27、ould take good care of trees and flowers.They are good for our environment.Last, we should spend more time doing outdoor activities rather than staying at home watching TV or playing computer games.This not only helps save energy, but also helps us to keep fit. These are small things, but they can m

28、ake a difference to our environment.Lets take action now! 【6】假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Jack想学习汉语，你推荐他去孔子学院，请给他写封邮件，内容包括： 1. 推荐理由； 2.相关课程，如中国历史，传统文化等。注意：1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：孔子学院Confucius Institute【答案】Dear Jack,Im more than pleased to know that you are eager to learn Chinese. Confucius Institute may

29、be a good choice, which is intended for the Chinese learners who are not native.Confucius Institute provides various interesting subjects. You will learn Chinese history and traditional culture as well as Chinese writing. Also, you have more chances to talk with classmates in Chinese. Besides, teach

30、ers will introduce some Chinese traditional festivals, such as the Spring Festival, Dragon Boat Day and Mid-Autumn Day. Some relevant activities will be held during different festivals, such as making dumplings or eating zongzi, where you can not only enjoy delicious meals but also have a good knowledge of Chinese life.I am looking forward to hearing from Yours, Li Hua