专题06 书面表达（第三期）-2022中考英语逆袭冲刺 好题特快专递（浙江专用）.docx

1、2022中考英语逆袭冲刺 好题特快专（浙江专用）第三期专题06 书面表达1（2022浙江宁波二模）近几年来，我们国家在经济社会各方面发生了翻天覆地的变化，取得了举世瞩目的成绩。请围绕“进步”这一主题，结合三年初中生活，谈谈你自己在学习生活方面取得的进步，以及对自己未来的展望。注意：(1)短文必须包括所有要点，并适当发挥：(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；(3)词数：80一100；标题已给出，不计入总词数。Progress in my life_2（2022浙江绍兴二模）现如今学生学习压力大，每天长时间看书写字。有的盯着屏幕时间长达数小时。你认为学生该如何科学用眼，缓解视疲劳？请写一篇短文谈谈

2、你的想法。How to Protect our eyesight (视力)SituationSolutionLong time of reading and homeworkSmart phones and computer screensNo time to relaxlTake a break every 20 minuteslControl the screen timel.要求：（1）短文必须包含上表所有信息，可适当增加细节；（2）解决方案再补充至少一条。（3）短文首句仅提供使用，不计入总词数。参考词汇：short-sighted(近视的), outdoor activities短文首

3、句：A large number of children and young adults have the poor eyesight. _3（2022浙江台州一模）李明是初三学生，自愿参加了学校的晚间托管班，但在中考前两个月，他想在家晚自习。他不知道自己的想法是否正确，于是在英语论坛上发帖求助，请根据贴子的内容，用英语回帖，提出你的建议和理由（理由至少两点）。词数：80-100（帖子开头已给出，不计入总词数）。Topic: Should I continue attending the school evening self-study class?Li MingHello! Im Li

4、Ming, a student of Grade Nine. The entrance exams are coming in about two months. To get better grades, I plan not to attend the school evening self-study class any more. I prefer to study at home. I wonder whether my idea is proper.Could you give me some advice? Many thanks!I understand how you fee

5、l. Here is my advice. _4（2022浙江杭州模拟预测）2022年美术，音乐即将拉入中考考核范围，教育部the Ministry of Education要求各学校“不仅要培养学生欣赏艺术美的能力，而且对学生的心理健康非常重要。”确实，生活不仅仅是学习和工作，发展一项良好的兴趣爱好可以对我们的生活质量和精神健康起到重要的作用。作为一名新时代的中学生，你拥有什么样的兴趣爱好呢？或者你想发展一项什么爱好？请你就此写一篇短文，谈谈自己的情况。提示：1. 你的兴趣爱好是什么？或者你想拥有一项什么样的爱好？2. 你觉得发展兴趣爱好的必要性是什么？3. 你为什么喜欢这项爱好？开头已给出

6、：The Ministry of Education made a plan to draw art education into the high school entrance exams. The plan said, “Its about the ability to appreciate artistic beauty, which is very important for students mental（心理的） health.” Indeed, interest is the best teacher_5（2022浙江丽水一模）假如你是李华，你的外国朋友 Eric观看了2022

7、年北京冬奥会开幕式，对开幕式倒计时中出现的24节气(24 Solar Terms) 非常感兴趣。请你结合下面的内容要点，给 Eric写一封信并详细介绍夏至(Summer Solstice) 这个节气。内容要点参考词汇NameSummer Solstice (the 10th solar term)TimeFrom June 21 and to July 6th this yearActivitiesIn ancient China: a one-day holiday; women made colorful fansToday: eat noodles; hold the Dragon Bo

8、at race in Shaoxing;.Meaningsan important part of Chinese culture;.注意：1. 文中必须包含所给的内容要点，可适当发挥；参考词汇仅供选择；2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；3.词数：80-100；开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Eric,Hows everything going?_Yours, Li Hu6（2022浙江金华一模）三年初中生活很快就要结束，崭新的高中生活即将到来。假设你是Li Hua，你的美国好友David想了解你的暑假安排，请根据下表给David写一封Email。内容要点参考词汇Study*get

9、 ready for*do some reading*.Life*do some sports*take a part-time job*get close to the natureWishes*.注意：1.文中必须包括表格中全部内容要点，可适当发挥，参考词汇仅供选择使用；2.文中不得出现真实的校名和人名；3.词数：80100词；4.短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。Dear David,How are you? The summer holiday is coming soon. _Yours,Li Hua7（2022浙江杭州一模）假定你是张华，收到加拿大笔友Harry的来信，获悉他在废物利

10、用制作比赛中获奖。请根据邮件给他回复。词数：80左右。Hi Zhang Hua,How is everything going with you? I am glad to tell you that Ive just won the first prize from the Help Save Our Planet Society! I love recycling. What do you think of recycling? Do people in China recycle things?Can you share any examples with me?Looking forw

11、ard to hearing from you.All the best.Yours,HarryDear Harry,_Zhang Hua8（2022浙江杭州一模）假定你是李平，请阅读你的笔友Lucy的邮件并回复。词数80词左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Li Ping,Hows it going these days? Im having a great time in Shanghai for the two-month exchange program. Its a great place to visit and theres just so much to see an

12、d do here.Last night I went to a Chinese music concert. I prefer quiet and traditional music, so the concert suited me just fine. Do you like music? What kind of music do you like best?Tomorrow evening my host family is taking me to their little daughters birthday party, but I am not sure what I am

13、expected to do before the party. Should I prepare a gift or anything? If so, what can I choose as the gift? What else could I do to make the party more interesting?I am looking forward to your reply.All the best,Lucy_9（2022浙江杭州模拟预测）假定你是初三毕业生李华。在毕业典礼上你要以“How to lead a better life in the 21st century”

14、为话题做一次毕业演讲。请根据提供的要点以及你的补充完成这份发言稿。1.广泛地阅读群书，增加对世界的了解；2. 培养良好的兴趣爱好；3. 保持身心的健康；4. 学会理解和尊重他人，帮助弱小群体；5. 你的补充：（至少2点）要求：1. 词数80-100词左右，文章开头已经给出，不计入总词数；2. 必须包括全部要点，可适当展开，但不能逐词翻译；3. 在文中不要提及真实的校名和人名。How to lead a better life in 21st centuryHello, everyone. My name is Li Hua. Today I will make a speech about “

15、How to lead a better life in the 21st century”._ _10（2022浙江丽水二模）假如你们学校要开设一档有关安全教育的英语广播栏目，面向同学们征稿，请根据以下提示内容，写一份英文演讲稿。注意：1. 文中必须包含所给的内容要点；参考词汇供选择使用； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；3. 词数：80100； 4. 演讲的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。内容要点参考词汇What happened?What should we do?At school1. Go up and down the stairswalk slowly, right si

16、de,.2. Find someone getting hurtnot lift him up, cover.with.On the way home1. Go across the roadobey the traffic rules,.2. Ride a bikenot listen to music.Dear teachers and students, Im glad to give a speech about safety. As is known to us all, safety is the most important in our life. _All in all, I

17、 hope my speech can be helpful to you.参考答案：1例文：Progress in my lifeLooking back the last three years, I have made great progress.First of all, I have overcome shyness and made friends with many of my classmates. Though we have a little in common, we share our feelings with each other and join in the

18、after-school activities together. Thanks to school activities and social practice, I have learned a lot, especially some life skills. With the help of kind and patient teachers, I have developed good learning habits, and done better in study as well.I will go on making an extra effort to achieve gre

19、ater success in the future!【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求围绕“进步”这一主题，结合三年的初中生活，谈谈自己在学习生活方面取得的进步，以及对自己未来的展望。短文写作必须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，行文中不得出现真实人名和校名。2.写作指导：因为本文是谈谈自己在学习生活方面取得的进步，是已经完成的事情，所以用到了现在完成时态；谈自己的生活和学习中取得进步的现状时，时态主要以一般现在时为主；在对未来展望时，要用到一般将来时。写作中，句子书写要符合英文表达习惯，做到句子通顺、上下文连贯。2例文：How to Protect our eyesightA large nu

20、mber of children and young adults have the poor eyesight. Nowadays, students have developed bad habits of using eyes, resulting in short sight. For example, many of us spend long time reading and doing homework without a rest. We have little time to relax. When we are in our free time, most of us pr

21、efer to play smart phones or computer games. Watching the screens of electronic products is very bad for our eyes.Now something must be done to protect our eyes. First, take a break every 20 minutes while reading. Second, control the screen time. To relax ourselves, wed better take part in outdoor a

22、ctivities instead of playing computer games. Last but not least, its also helpful to relax our eyes by seeing some green trees or doing eye exercises.In a word, lets take care of our eyes so that we can see our bright future.【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求以“怎样保护我们的视力”为题写一篇短文。内容包括：分析青少年的用眼现状；对现存的问题提出相应解决

23、办法。2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般现在时，人称使用第一人称。文章开头已给出，接着描述现存的具体问题，第二段介绍如何保护视力；最后一段总结收尾。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。3参考范文：I understand how you feel. Here is my advice.I dont think its a good idea to study at home in the evening. One of the main reasons is that you cant get any immediate help from your teachers or classma

24、tes when you have problems with schoolwork. Also, youll find no friends to play or chat with during the break time. After all, to relax yourself is important as well before the entrance exams. There is another advantage of attending the evening self-study class. When you are being lazy, you might be

25、 encouraged by the hard-working spirit from your classmates. So youd better not change your learning place.【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。对于李明存在的问题提出自己的看法。2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称以第二人称为主。分为两段式：第一段开头已给出；第二段就李明的问题提出相应的建议。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。4例文：The Ministry of Education made a plan to draw art education into t

26、he high school entrance exams. The plan said, “Its about the ability to appreciate artistic beauty, which is very important for students mental（心理的） health.” Indeed interest is the best teacher. Its important to have interests. We can learn from them and develop them.My interest is writing. When lif

27、e makes me feel something, I will write about my feelings and emotions. When I am hurt by something in my life, writing about it helps me comfort myself. When someone does something that is touching to me, Ill write about it so I can learn from it. When I miss someone I love, I might write about my

28、feelings toward them. Writing is a way of communicating with yourself. It can help you get to know yourself better. You can figure out what you want and need in life. Its a good way to self-reflect（反省）. It helps me feel more calm and mature（成熟）.If you dont have some kind of interest, why not try wri

29、ting about your mood（心境）?【解析】【详解】1. 题干解读：本文属于材料作文写作，写作时按说明文来写。根据题干要点提示，写作时承接短文开头，说明发展兴趣的必要性；第二段写自己的兴趣爱好以及喜欢这项爱好的原因；第三段提建议并结尾。2. 写作指导：本文应用第三人称来叙述教育部关于兴趣培养的规定，用第一人称来说明自己的兴趣爱好以及喜欢这项爱好的原因。叙述教育部规定时，时态采用一般过去时；描述自己的兴趣爱好部分，时态采用一般现在时。在说明喜欢这项爱好的原因时，可适当举例说明。5A possible version:Dear Eric,Hows everything going?

30、Here is something about Summer Solstice.As the tenth solar term, Summer Solstice begins on June 21 and ends on July 6 this year. In fact, its the longest day of the year. In ancient China people had a one-day off and women made colorful fans to cool themselves down. Today, people celebrate it by eat

31、ing noodles. And people in Shaoxing hold the Dragon Boat Race! In my hometown, we have rice mixed with beans and meat.As one of the 24 terms, Summer Solstice is an important part of Chinese culture. It guides peoples farming and teaches people to live healthily.Sounds interesting, doesnt it?Yours,Li

32、 Hua【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：阅读题干可知，要求我们根据要点提示向外国朋友详细地介绍夏至。写作时必须包含所给的内容要点：节气名、节气的时间、活动和意义，同时可适当地添加合理的内容，使文章内容更加丰富。2.写作指导：这是一篇介绍型作文，时态为一般现在时，人称以第三人称为主。例文开段就点明介绍的对象夏至；然后介绍夏至的时间，以自己家乡绍兴为例，介绍节日的活动；接着开段介绍夏至节在中国文化中的地位及意义；最后简短结尾。6例文Dear Mike,How are you? The summer holiday is coming soon. Im looking forward to makin

33、g it meaningful. Now Id like to share my ideas with you.I plan to do plenty of interesting and colorful things. First, I will keep learning to get ready for my high school. And I will read many books. We know reading makes a full man. In my daily life, I would like to do some sports, and I want to t

34、ake a part-time job. In addition, I hope to go hiking and get close to the nature.In short, I hope I can have a happy and meaningful summer holiday. Best wishes to you!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：本文主要是根据题干表格中给出的提示描述自己的暑假安排，可适当增加细节。2.写作指导：本文以一般将来时和第一人称为主。第一段引入话题；第二段从学习、生活等方面具体介绍自己的暑期安排；第三段表达希望。写作时运用不同

35、的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。7例文Dear Harry,Congratulations! How glad I am to share your good news!I think recycling is helpful in our society. And in the future it will play an more important role in our daily life. People in China also recycle things. We always use some useless plastic bottles t

36、o plant flowers. Its really beautiful and funny. Some people will sell the useless textbooks for recycling. By doing this, they can not only get some money, but play a role in protecting environment.Hoping youll make greater progress.YoursZhang Hua【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：本文属于应用文写作，写作时要按照邮件格式书写。在写作的开头首先要祝贺他获奖

37、；第二段介绍对废物利用的看法，以及在中国人们是怎么进行废物利用的；第三段希望他取得更大的进步。2.写作指导：写作时态采用一般现在时和一般将来时；人称上以第一人称和第三人称为主。文章叙述要条理清晰，语言完整，无语法和书写错误。8例文:Dear Lucy,Its good to hear from you. Everything goes well with me here. Im so glad to hear that you are having a great time in Shanghai, and have already enjoyed a wonderful Chinese mu

38、sic concert there. I like music, too. I like classical music best because it can make me happy and relaxed.As for the birthday gift, I think some home-made snacks or a piece of art work made by yourself will be a good choice. Also, if you can perform a talent show like singing a song or playing a ma

39、gic trick during the party, I think your host family will appreciate it. Im sure you and your host family will have a really unforgettable birthday party.Write to me soon.All the best,Li Ping【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于应用文电子邮件的写作。在写作时应根据笔友Lucy邮件内容进行回复，回复内容包括：自己的近况如何；简述露西在上海听音乐会的事情；自己喜欢的音乐；最重要的对露西要送的生日礼物提出建议

40、；最后是祝愿。2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称为主来叙述内容，时态采用一般现在时为主。在叙述内容时，力求语句通顺，语法正确，保证内容叙述完整，条理清晰，行文连贯。9范文How to lead a better life in 21st centuryHello, everyone. My name is Li Hua. Today I will make a speech about “How to lead a better life in the 21st century”. In my point of view, its important to form some good habi

41、ts. First of all, knowledge is power. We can learn all kinds of knowledge by reading. Reading can broaden our views and help us understand the world. Second, its necessary for us to have some hobbies. For example, we can learn to play the piano or violin. Third, we should have healthy bodies and min

42、ds. Try to relax and keep away from pressure. Whats more, we should help people in need. Its polite to respect others. Finally, try to get on well with your classmates and families and try your best to study hard. If we can follow these suggestions, I believe we can enjoy our lives better and make t

43、he world more and more beautiful.【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇发言稿，以“How to lead a better life in the 21st century”为话题做一次毕业演讲。2.写作指导：本文以第一人称为主，时态为一般现在时；写作时注意分段叙述，第一段开门见山，引入话题，并描述提纲中给的四点内容；第二段补充并结尾，注意补充的相关性和合理性。写作时需包括题中所有要点，并适当拓展。最后检查并保证文章条理清晰，语句通顺。10例文：Dear teachers and students,Im glad to give a speech about

44、 safety. As is known to us all, safety is the most important in our life.When we are at school, we should protect ourselves. For example, when we go up and down the stairs, we should walk slowly on the right side instead of rushing. If we find someone hurt, we must tell the teacher first. And rememb

45、er not to lift him up. We can cover him with a coat and make him comfortable before help arrives. In addition, on our way home, we should obey the traffic rules. When we ride a bike, we mustnt listen to music or just use one hand. Its very dangerous.All in all, I hope my speech can be helpful to you.【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇演讲稿。要求根据表格提示内容介绍如何在学校和回家路上保证自己的安全，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍在学校和在回家的路上的时候，我们可以怎么做来保护自己；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。