专题07 书面表达(名校模拟 地区真题)-冲刺2023年中考英语必考题型终极预测（广州专用）.docx

1、冲刺2023年中考英语必考题型终极预测（广州专用）专题07 书面表达1广州正在开展创建“文明广州”活动。作为广州人，你深刻地意识到：文明广州，需要大家共同努力。但是上周六你和家人去白云山游玩，一路上你见到了一些不文明的现象。为此你给报社投稿倡议大家共同建设文明广州。携手共建广州文明所见所闻有人乱扔垃圾，有人在公共场合吸烟，你的倡议1. 保护环境人人有责；2. 公共场合注意言行；3. 要求：1、字迹工整，书写规范，包含全部要点，适当发挥；2、文中不得出现真实的学校、班级名称；3、80 词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。供选用词汇： 不文明的 uncivilized 行为 behaviorLast

2、 Sunday, I went to the Baiyun Mountain with my family. _2为培养学生对科技的兴趣，你的学校上周举办了科技节。假定你是你校英语报的小记者，请你编写一篇新闻报道，介绍这次活动。报道需包括以下要点：1、活动目的；2、活动项目：模型制作比赛；.；3、活动亮点：学生发明的机器人服务于校园(外表，功能）；4、学生感受。注意：1.参考词汇：科技节(science festival)，亮点(highlight)；2.词数：80词左右(开头已给出，不计入词数)；3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。Last week, students in

3、 ourschool workedhard to make the science festival a big success._3“双减”政策实施以后，学生周末的动态成为了热议话题。你们学校上周对全校学生进行了一次关于“学生双休日活动”的情况调查，了解同学们周末的活动。请你根据下表中的调查数据，写一篇英语调查报告，并发表你的感受（至少两点）。要求：1. 必须包含图中所有内容，可适当增加细节。2. 词数：80100字。3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。Last week we did a survey about weekend activities under the

4、Double Reduction(双减) policy in our school and here is the report. _4某英语报社就“青少年与父母关系”这一话题展开调查和征文活动，希望帮助缓解青少年与父母的关系。假设你是花都中学的一名学生，请你根据以下调查结果并结合实际写一篇英文短文投稿，谈一谈当代青少年的焦虑和希望，并表达你的看法。Teenagers worriesTeenagers wishestoo many rulespay much attention to the scoreslittle communicationmore personal spacebetter

5、 understanding.注意事项：（1）适当发挥，并谈谈自己的想法；（2）词数80左右（文章开头已给出，不计入词数）；（3）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。As we grow older day by day, we find there are more problems between our parents and us._5高尔基说过：“书籍是人类进步的阶梯。”为提高学生阅读兴趣，你校英语社将组织一场读书分享会。请你根据以下信息，用英文写一篇读书心得与同学分享。心得需包括以下要点：Hello, everyone. The great writer Gorky o

6、nce said, “Books are the ladder of human progress.” 6假如你是小明，你的笔友Sam给你发了一封电子邮件。他将策划学校的中国文化周，就该定什么主题和活动，他想咨询你的建议。请根据邮件内容和所给提示进行回复。主题中国春节活动1. 举办中国春节为主题的讲座2. 写对联、猜谜、包饺子3. .要求：1、内容完整，可适当发挥。2、词数80左右，邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。3、参考词汇：对联：couplet谜语：riddleDear Sam,_Xiao Ming7最近，初三学生李华写了一封邮件给心理咨询老师Anna，以下是邮件的内容：Dear A

7、nna,My name is Li Hua. I am a Grade 9 student in Zhixin High School. Recently, I feel really upset. School work is too much and I have no time to relax myself. But every day when I go back home feeling tired, my parents keep nagging (唠叨) about everything, cellphone, homework, exams . It seems that t

8、hey dont understand me at all. I feel so breathless that I just avoid talking to them. But this makes our relationship even worse. I dont know what to do. Can you give me some advice?假如你是 Anna，请从提高学习效率 (efficiency)、劳逸结合、多与父母沟通这几个方面，给李华提一些建议。注意：1. 词数 80-100 词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入词数）；2. 内容完整，语法正确，语篇连贯；3. 考生

9、不得透露个人信息，否则不予评分。Dear Li Hua,Im sorry to learn about your problems. ._8假如你是李华，学校的心理咨询老师。最近，你收到Kate的邮件，来信说她跟父母沟通有困难。请你给她回一封邮件，就如何与父母沟通相处提出建议。内容如下：要求：1.包含以上全部要点。2.词数80左右，文章开头及结尾已经给出，不计入总词数内。3.文章文中不得透露学校、姓名等任何信息，否则不予评分。参考词汇：argue with 与争吵Dear Kate,I am sorry to hear that you have trouble communicating w

10、ith your parents. _I hope my suggestions can help you.Yours,Li Hua9假如你叫李华，你的美国朋友Tim下学期将以交换生的身份来广州生活学习，为了帮助他更好地了解广州的文化，你打算邀请他暑假来广州并寄宿到你家。请根据以下内容提示写一封信向他介绍一下你的家庭生活，可进行适当发挥。（注意：字数80词左右，信的开头已给出，不计入总词数。）family members爸爸、妈妈、我的弟弟和我family rules1. 早睡早起，锻炼身体；2. 我要分担家务，比如：洗碗、烫衣服；3. 周一至周五不能使用电子产品，周末玩电脑游戏不能超过1小时

11、；（请补充12点）family activities（请补充2点）feelings相亲相爱、互相支持；（请补充）Dear Tim,I am so glad that you will visit Guangzhou as an exchange student next term. To help you get used to the life in Guangzhou, I want to invite you to come to my home during summer vacation. Now _Yours,Li Hua10假设你是英语校报编辑李华。校报收到初一新生Ben的来信，

12、他提出了所面临的两个问题。请你根据以下提示写一封回信，说明Ben的问题，提出你的建议并陈述理由。Bens problemsYour advice and reasons朋友少，感觉孤独1. 参加学校社团（club）结识更多朋友2. ？（请你补充）英语单词难记，学习英语有困难1. 多阅读英语故事、新闻在运用中学单词2. ？（请你补充至少两点）词数80左右（信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入词数）。Dear Ben,I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to life in middle school._ _ Good

13、luck in everything!Li Hua参考答案：1例文：Last Sunday, I went to the Baiyun Mountain with my family. Some people behaved badly in public. For example, some people threw rubbish and some people smoked in non-smoking areas in public places.As we all know, Guangzhou is aiming at building a civilized city. Ever

14、ybody should make an effort to protect the environment and say no to the uncivilized behavior. To make our city a better one, I think we should pay attention to what we say and what we do in public places. Whats more, wed better be friendly to each other and help each other.Lets try our best to take

15、 an active part in building a civilized city.【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇记叙文，属于材料作文写作；时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。写作步骤第一步，承接短文开头，叙述上周六在白云山的所见所闻，指出那些不文明的做法；第二步，先根据提示的要点提出建议文明城市的建议，再补充其他建议；第三步，总结全文并书写结语。亮点词汇as we know众所周知aim at doing目标是做某事make an effort to do sth努力做某事say no

16、to sth拒绝某事高分句型To make our city a better one, I think we should pay attention to what we say and what we do in public places.（动词不定式作目的状语；省略引导词that引导的宾语从句；and连接两个并列的宾语从句；what引导宾语从句）2例文Last week, students in our school worked hard to make the science festival a big success. It aims to develop students

17、interest in science and technology and broaden their horizons.At the festival, some students took an active part in themodel-making competition. Many of their robots, which were the highlight of the festival, drew peoples attention. These robots were in the shape oflovely animals, such as rabbits, m

18、onkeys and dogs. They were doing some simple tasks like sweeping the floor and throwing away rubbish. Besides, some other students carried out science experiments. The students present at the festival were all surprised at the exhibits and gave them a big around of applause. Our school hopes that mo

19、re and more students can learn science and technology better to serve our country.【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇材料作文；时态：时态为“一般过去时”；提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中这次“科技节”活动的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。写作步骤 第一步，承接短文开头，引出活动目的；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“活动项目、活动两点、学生感受”几个方面重点介绍该活动；第三步，书写结语。表达希望。亮点词汇broaden their horizons开阔眼界take an active pa

20、rt in积极参加draw ones attention引起某人的注意 carry out science experiments进行科学实验高分句型Last week, students in our school worked hard to make the science festival a big success. （动词不定式作目的状语）Many of their robots, which were the highlight of the festival, drew peoples attention.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）Our school hopes t

21、hat more and more students can learn science and technology better to serve our country.（that引导的宾语从句）3例文Last week we did a survey about weekend activities under the Double Reduction(双减) policy in our school and here is the report.Sixty-five percent of the students prefer to study at home by themselv

22、es. They think learning something can help them to improve their independent learning ability. Forty percent of students watch TV, play games on mobile phone or computers, and listen to music because they want to relax themselves. Thirty percent of the students choose to help their parents with hous

23、ework. They think doing housework with parents can keep the family together. Fifteen percent of the students like to join the volunteer activities or do exercise. They want to help others and keep healthy.I believe the Double Reduction policy really brings us many benefits. I hope we can experience

24、different kinds of activities on weekends to make our life more colorful.【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇应用文，为调查报告；时态：时态为“一般现在时”；提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏图表中的内容，适当添加细节，并突出重点。写作步骤第一步，表明写作意图。以“以下是报告内容”来引出下文；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。分别从“图表内容以及我的感受”两个方面进行描述；第三步，书写结语。表达“希望大家体验不同的活动丰富自己的生活”的愿望。亮点词汇independent learning ability自主学习能力keep t

25、he family together使家人团结在一起bring us many benefits给我们带来很多好处高分句型They think learning something can help them to improve their independent learning ability.（动名词作主语）I believe the Double Reduction policy really brings us many benefits.（省略引导词that的宾语从句）4例文：As we grow older day by day, we find there are more

26、problems between our parents and us.The first problem is that there are too many rules at home. Our parents dont allow us to go out with our friends at night and they dont allow us to choose our own clothes. Whats more, they pay much attention to the scores. If we have bad grades, they will get mad.

27、 Besides, we have little communication and I think parents dont understand us.Most of our teenagers hope that we can have more personal space so that we can do what we like. We also hope that there will be better understanding between us and our parents. Whats important, we are desired to have the c

28、hance to make decisions by ourselves.As far as I am concerned, both we and our parents should work together to have a good relationship. Its no good requiring everything to go our way. Remember to be a little more patient when meeting problems. Try spend more time talking with each other, and we all

29、 can learn how to get on well with each other. Part of growing up is to learn to live with trouble and try to deal with it. I believe we can overcome all the difficulties and live a happy life.【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；时态：时态为“一般现在时”；提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中的内容，结合实际写短文谈谈当代青少年的焦虑和希望，并发表自己的看法。写作步骤第一步，开篇

30、点明与父母之间有很多问题；第二步，介绍青少年的焦虑；第三步，介绍青少年的愿望；第四步，发表自己的看法。亮点词汇day by day 一天天，逐日between . and . 在和之间allow sb. to do sth. 允许某人做某事whats more 更重要的是as far as I am concerned 就我个人而言高分句型The first problem is that there are too many rules at home.（that引导表语从句；there be句型）If we have bad grades, they will get mad.（if引导条

31、件状语从从句）Most of our teenagers hope that we can have more personal space so that we can do what we like.（that引导的宾语从句；so that引导目的状语从句）5例文Hello, everyone. The great writer Gorky once said, “Books are the ladder of human progress.” I think reading books is good for us. Reading is wonderful. We can get kn

32、owledge by reading. Reading can open our minds. It can improve memory. Reading makes us confident and happy. Of the books I have read, I like Journey to the West best. Its author is Wu Chengen. The Monkey King or Sun Wukong is the main character in the traditional Chinese book Journey to the West. I

33、 am interested in reading the book because the clever Monkey King keeps fighting to help the weak and never gives up. A book that suits you is a better choice. You should read in a right way. Try to think about more while reading.【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；时态：本文以“一般现在时”为主；提示：写作要点已给出，写作时根据题干中的提示信息分享自己

34、的读书心得，可适当增加细节，突出写作要点。写作步骤第一步，详细介绍读书的好处；第二步，具体介绍自己喜欢的一本书，包括书名、作者、内容简介以及喜欢这本书的原因；第三步，提出读书时的一些建议。亮点词汇be interested in对感兴趣give up放弃高分句型I am interested in reading the book because the clever Monkey King keeps fighting to help the weak and never gives up. (because引导的原因状语从句)A book that suits you is a bette

35、r choice. (that引导的定语从句)6例文Dear Sam,Its a good idea to have Chinese Culture Week in your school. I think its helpful not only to improve your Chinese but also to have a better understanding of China. However, a successful activity depends on how students feel. Thus, a good theme will be absolutely ne

36、cessary. In my opinion, you may consider “Chinese Spring Festival” as your theme. For example, giving a lecture about the Spring Festival may make students get a general idea of it, writing couplets, guessing riddle and making dumplings are all the activities that are really interesting and attracti

37、ve. And a Chinese painting show is always attractive. In this way, students who are involved in the activities will surely experience Chinese culture. I hope my suggestions will be of great help to you.Yours,Xiao Ming【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；时态：时态为“一般现在时”；提示：注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上

38、下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。写作步骤第一步：表明写作意图。内容是根据Sam的电子邮件内容，就他所策划的中国文化周，该定什么主题和活动，给他提一些建议。第二步：具体阐述写作内容。首先要开篇点题；其次确定中国文化周的主题；接着介绍要举办的活动等。第三步：书写结语。表示“我希望我的建议对你有很大帮助。”亮点词汇Its a good idea to have.有是很好的主意 not only.but also.不仅而且have a better understanding of对很好的了解 be of great help有很大帮助 高分句型I think its helpful not only

39、to improve your Chinese but also to have a better understanding of China.（省略that的宾语从句）In this way, students who are involved in the activities will surely experience Chinese culture.（who引导的定语从句）7例文Dear Li Hua,Im sorry to learn about your problems. Dont worry about your study too much.First, you shou

40、ld learn how to relax yourself. Doing more sports such as running and playing table tennis is good for your health and listening to music is also a good way to relax. These ways can help you reduce your pressure. Second, I think its necessary to have healthy eating habits. Please remember to have br

41、eakfast on time every morning. It can give you enough energy to study for the whole day. Third, youd better go to bed early and have enough sleep. It will keep you active during the day. Besides, I think you should talk with your friends, parents or teachers often. Sharing your thoughts and feelings

42、 with them will be helpful to get on well with others. Finally, I advise you to read more books. Reading can not only give you knowledge but also open your eyes to the world.I hope you can stay in good spirits, and study better.Yours,Anna【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；时态：时态为“一般现在时”；提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适

43、当增加细节完整表述内容。写作步骤第一步，安慰对方不要担心；第二步，分别从提高学习效率、劳逸结合、多与父母沟通这几个方面给出建议。亮点词汇worry about 担心such as 例如be good for 对有好处on time 按时高分句型First, you should learn how to relax yourself（“疑问词+动词不定式”结构）I think its necessary to have healthy eating habits.（宾语从句）8例文Dear Kate,I am sorry to hear that you have trouble commun

44、icating with your parents. Nowadays, arguments between teenagers and parents have been a serious problem, which is mainly because of the lack of communication. Besides, many rules are set by parents like forbidding their kids from going out or watching TV. Whats worse, it is the generation gap that

45、leads to lots of misunderstandings between each other. In order to solve this problem, first of all, its necessary for both of you and your parents to listen to each other carefully when you are about to argue with each other. Second, you need to join some activities with your parents together. It c

46、an help you know more about their lives and thoughts.I hope my suggestions can help you.Yours,Li Hua【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；时态：时态为“一般现在时”；提示：写作内容已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“内容”中的要点，务必写全，在适当的地方使用参考词汇。可适当添加细节，突出写作重点。写作步骤第一步，写出青少年与父母争吵的现象。第二步，针对这一现象进行原因分析，注意要补充一个理由；第三步，写出针对这些问题的解决办法，注意要补充一个建议；亮点词汇 a serious problem 一个严

47、重的问题 the lack of communication 缺少沟通 forbid sb. from doing sth. 禁止某人做某事 lead to 导致 generation gap 代沟高分句型 Nowadays, arguments between teenagers and parents have been a serious problem, which is mainly because of the lack of communication. （which引导非限定性定语从句。） Whats worse, it is the generation gap that l

48、eads to lots of misunderstandings between each other.（“it is . that .”是强调句结构）9例文：Dear Tim,I am so glad that you will visit Guangzhou as an exchange student next term. To help you get used to the life in Guangzhou, I want to invite you to come to my home during summer vacation. Now I would like to in

49、troduce my family to you.There are four people in my family, my parents, my brother and I. In my family, we should follow some rules. First, we must go to bed and get up early, do exercise. I have to share the housework, such as washing dishes and ironing clothes. I cant use electronic products duri

50、ng weekdays or play computer games for more than one hour at weekends. Besides, I can not go out after 8 oclock. There are some activities in my family. We have a family game every Friday night. I think my family members love each other and support each other. So be sure to come to my house.Yours,Li

51、 Hua【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封信；时态：时态为“一般现在时”；提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中家庭成员，家庭规则，家庭活动，感受这些要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。写作步骤第一步，表明写作意图，讲述写信是为了介绍家庭生活；第二步，具体阐述写作内容，重点讲述家庭成员，家庭规则，家庭活动，感受；第三步，书信结语，表达“希望对方来我家寄宿”的愿望。亮点词汇would like to do sth.想做某事follow some rules遵循一些规则share the housework分担家务be sure to do一定要做某事高分句型There

52、 are some activities in my family.（there be句型）I think my family members love each other and support each other.（“I think”引导的宾语从句）10例文：Dear Ben,I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to life in middle school. In your letter you said that you always felt lonely because of having f

53、ew friends. I think it is a good choice to join some clubs in your school. In this way, you can make more friends who share the same interest with you. Besides, youd better be friendly to others. Smile at others and you are sure to get a smile in return. On the other hand, you found it difficult to

54、remember English words. Reading more English stories and news can help you learn English words in a practical way. In addition, if you can develop a habit of keeping an English diary everyday, it will be easier for you to remember more words. I hope you will find these suggestions useful.Good luck w

55、ith everything!Li Hua【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封信；时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中的提示内容，适当添加细节，并突出重点。写作步骤第一步，表明写作意图。以“很抱歉听说你无法适应中学生活”来引出下文；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。分别从“朋友、学习”两个方面进行描述；第三步，书写结语。祝福对方好运。亮点词汇be friendly to对友好in return作为回报On the other hand另一方面In addition另外高分句型In this way, you can make more friends who share the same interest with you.（who引导定语从句）Reading more English stories and news can help you learn English words in a practical way.（动名词作主语）In addition, if you can develop a habit of keeping an English diary everyday, it will be easier for you to remember more words.（if引导条件状语从句）